How perfect is the English in pic related? Also, spot grammatical error if any.
>>8150758
>revert
i am guessing this was written by an Indian
>>8150762
You guess bad, pal.
>>8150764
i'm not your pal and you need to learn what an adverb is
if it wasn't written by an indian, it was written by someone who writes like an indian. indians commonly say "revert" when they mean "reply" or "respond".
Also the third sentence in the picture is completely hopeless
>>8150772
Hopeless? As in? What it should have been?
>>8150777
>What it should have been?
that's the point, it's impossible to tell.
>Last time when I asked WD, the person denied for not having rights to do so.
just look at it anon. just look at it.
>>8150788
Impossible to tell what anon?
>>8150758
The English is awkward and terrible. Do you really need all the errors pointed out?
>>8150788
It says when the person asked another person for the kits, it refused for not having rights to hand over the kits. It's that simple Anon.
>>8150807
>Do you really need all the errors pointed out?
Sure.
This is just a guess at what I think you're trying to express:
Can you please tell me who hands out kits in Mabel's absence? I need one, and the last time I asked WD, he/she (depending on who the fuck "WD" is) would not give me one, and told me I did not have the right to receive one. Please reply ASAP.
>>8150808
it clearly doesn't say that though
please read how to correctly use the verb "deny"
your post is better english than that in the original picture. but generally a person is not an "it".
>>8150818
>it clearly doesn't say that though
It does. Grow a fucking brain.
>>8150817
You sound like a third grade kid lol
>>8150831
>Grow a fucking brain.
bit unnecessarily aggressive there anon
and you still can't use "deny" correctly
>>8150842
>and you still can't use "deny" correctly
I'm pretty sure the person used "deny" correctly but you lack the depth of perception.
>>8150807
>The English is awkward and terrible.
You can't be serious. Tell me you're not serious.
>>8150869
He's right.
>>8150893
How? Can you rectify?
>>8150863
jesus holy fuck
look at the original sentence
look at the meanings in your picture
the word is not being used correctly
"refused" is more appropriate in this context
if english is your first language you should be ashamed
>>8150831
>Grow a fucking brain.
Insult: The Post (EFL Edition)
>>8150910
>"refused" is more appropriate in this context
Similar meaning anon.
>>8150918
SWEET FUCKING BABY CHRISTMAS CRACKERS
SIMILAR
BUT NOT THE SAME
>>8150922
>SIMILAR
>BUT NOT THE SAME
It doesn't have to be same, bub.
>You must feel ashame about it.
>You must feel abashe about it.
Both means the same. Just that you quite don't see a lot of people use the second sentence pretty often.
>>8150901
Is English your native language?
Some Anons here say the English in the pic is awkward and terrible but seem not to rectify the who thing. What happening, damn.
>>8150954
>me a kit
>because
>didn't have
That sounds pretty kiddish, Anon.
>>8150965
>I will tell you why it's what's wrong
>I will tell you what's wrong
I haven't slept at all.
>>8150758
>Last time when I asked WD,
What in the fuck.
>>8150758
Who hands over the kits in the case of Mabel's absence? I'm in need of one. When I asked Wd , he refused to (hand them over), stating he didn't have the rights to do so. Please reply as soon as you read this
ETL here
>>8150984
Much better than OP's
>>8150984
but then, if WD refused to do not do something for lack of rights, it means his/her hands were tied., which would mean refused or denied couldn't be even be used
>>8150984
I'm pretty sure the person's grammar in the pic is perfect or similar to what you typed but he/she is being direct and quick compared to yours skipping
>"in the case of"
>I need one (is also correct)
Don't forget the person using "Last time" anon.
>Implies the person has asked the unauthorized person before getting a negative feedback.
>Stating
Do we actually need such words in Business?
>>8150986
Much better but OP isn't incorrect either.
>>8151004
OPs last sentence is nonsensical.
>>8150979
What fuck?
>>8151000
Not him, but
>Don't forget the person using "Last time" anon.
Unnecessary, the rest of the sentence expresses this already.
>>8151009
No, it makes sense. He/she is just being quick that is it.
>1) Last time when I asked WD,
>2) the person denied/refused for not having rights to do so
Implies the person went through the situation before(first phrase) where he got negative feedback (second phrase)
>>8151024
>the rest of the sentence expresses this already.
No.
>>8151033
No, OP's Last sentence.
>Please revert asa you read this
Native English speakers do not use the word revert in that manner.
Also, you're using feedback wrong.
>>8151040
Yes.
>>8151042
>Native English speakers do not use the word revert in that manner.
You need to understand that It's business English and not native English. There's a difference.
>>8151045
No, idiot.
>>8151056
even so, no native english speaker uses revert in business english like that either. respond or reply are used.
also, this is not business english. in business english it is not appropriate to use abbreviations such as "asa" in that way.
>>8151059
>no native english speaker uses revert in business english like that either
They do.
>in business english it is not appropriate to use abbreviations such as "asa" in that way.
Lolfag I'm done talking to you.
>>8151062
Fuck out my face retard.
>>8151072
i get the feeling you have no work experience whatsoever
shitposting doesn't count as work
>>8151137
Watch me pretend to care, nigger.
>>8151137
Ignore him, he's a gigantic faggot. Just let this thread die.
>>8151148
Your dad's a gigantic faggot goddamn burn
