Create a short 13 word peom regarding shadows and existence.
Not gonna do your homework
>>7736086
Were I not in
the dark with you
making love
I'd be gone
>>7736086
sitting in barn cooked beans
down the alley grows
a bag of potatoes
"Create a short 13 word poem regarding shadows and existence,"
They said.
No.
nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga
black lives matter
nigga nigga nigga nigga nigga
- t. Lewd a. Criss
I thought accepting BBC in my porn viewing would open me up to a new world. Turns out it's just a bunch of vanilla garbage labeled "hardcore" with a climax of muffled cannons.
>>7736086
Homework of yours
Shall not be done
For I am bored
Anon anon
It draped me
Like ivies from a tree
Fawning my feet; recieving me.
I want to colonize her with my privileged white cock.
Black woman
casts shadows on my wall
dripping heaving wet cunt
Mouth waters
Shadows, shadows
On the wall
I see them with my eyes
Shadows
Feverish desire
For the jungle woman
Great lust for seminal
Conquest of niggers
>>7736136
Beautiful
Lingering, were we, in the umbrage of a waving tree; we were free.
>>7736184
I was about to call you a retard for not knowing what umbrage meant, then I looked up alternate definitions and found out you're a few hundred years old.
My darling rasta cocoa bean,
split open, posed,
keeps quiet whilst I unsheathe.
Without shadows,
There can be no light,
Without me,
There is no right.
>>7736193
May I bother you to determine the quality of the micropoem, with respect to both context and limitations?
>>7736224
Rolling under arbored umbrage,
Winds caressing naked cheeks
Foreshortened sudden climax crawling attack!
If you're going for play on words go full hog.
arboured = arbored = trees / docked (hehe penis docked)
umbrage = annoyed / shaded
cheeks = buttcheeks tehe!
foreshortened sudden climax = HNGHNGH = climax crawling attack = ant's chaaaargeeeeeeeeeeee the butthole
lul.
You can get a full vibrant scene in 13 words, why do you have your guys just sitting under a tree? "were we", "we were", "waving" just wasted words.
>>7736270
The theme of the poem was to express the transience of time (lingering and waving) and portray a lackadaisical aspect in the actions of the two supposed beings. They are responsible, as per their free-will, ("Lingering,.., in the umbrage of a tree; we were free.") doing anything in their time of existence. Sort of to create the image the passing of shadows that may appear to be waving with the swaying shade but more to emphasize that they are sharing the, nigh-idylic, brief respite of the tree's serenity. It was more symbolic than prosaic, in my intention. The note you made of your reaction and the archaic usage of umbrage both, in a sense, add to the effect which I wished to inmbue in the poem. Though, I admit, it wasn't so intricately expounded upon until now.
i thank you for the advice and, in the future, I will take more care with the precision of my wording as to provide my literature with vibrancy.
Shadow behind,
rising.
I will show you fear in a handful of dust.
>>7736332
Frisch weht der Wind
Der Heimat zu
Mein Irisch Kind
Wo weilest du
>>7736313
What better way to convey freedom and existence that to make it with a cutie rolling naked in the woods (boy or girl ;3)
and be challenged by the ants whose nest you have disturbed in your destructive passions. They are mounting a fierce defense of
their existence while you obliviously engage in prolonging your own.
The real meaning of shadows here is not lost. Fucking giants cast dangerous looming shadows over all of us, together, united
we can overcome, or at least make them prematurely come. trolololo. The trees cast an ambivalent shadow, watching vaguely
disinterested from above. The pervy wind brings in the clouds, whose shadows mean rain and ruin for both ants and lovers.
And then the very rolling itself. Rolling, the motion of the stars and universe, forever spinning together and further apart,
a mystery to us still.
> note you made of
I wasn't the anon who didn't understand umbrage, just wanted to chime in.
Remember the theme of the poem is existence and shadows. We have differing views it seems. I want existence to be violent and passionate but ultimately doomed by biting ants or rainy clouds or galactic catastrophes, proverbial shadows stacked upon literal ones. You want your existence to be waiting, the passage of time. Can't be waiting forever anon, you have to act one day, life is about living not waiting, you're not a tree or a cloud :3
>>7736351
I was answering your question and the meaning of your example was not lost upon me. I do not wait; all I am is now. I feel as though this is a personal attack and not a response to my text, but a response to a perception of it.
To us all, our own. And to you, I wish a pleasant night, anon.
One, Two, Three, Four
Off and on
Neurons
Build memories
This is MY life.
>>7736398
Slammin.
>>7736086
hnnnnnnn gn I have a massive hardon for chocolate goddesses what is her name pls
>>7736407
Terry Crews.
Life,
Passes into,
A void,
That is just ending,
Inhibition is lost.
Life in darkness, light saves our days
Even if we walk separate ways
>>7736104
Haha good one! Screencapping that for /b/ xD
Diamonds come forward. When we stop noticing them, you shine brighter. For awhile.
Oh golly, what is that? Oh, it's just a bird, not that lady.
the shadow of the sash appeared on the curtains between seven and eight
my twin is shy
he loves the sun
at night he stretches
seeping full
>>7736201
Beautiful. Do go on.
Another behind him,
one passes by,
but where has gone
me I my?
In the shadow of our dreams,
I'm on my own.
I'm so confused.
the shadows consulted;
cage light -
propagate -
reasoning doing less would amount to suicide
If that is the white man's burden,
it's not a burden at all
OP's pic unrelated.
Pic of shadow people provided.
My supplicant, obsequious shadow
With out me no thing; light of shining day
WE
WUZ
KANGZ
Cocoa butter thighs
Ethiopian coffee eyes
Femininity lies
A big black dong surprise
>>7736501
Haha thanks family! I will enjoy such an honour.
There,
I imagine me
(and world) in light
Here I am
in shadow
[13 words is an insanely tight constraint]
Life: a thing short and niggerish
like a noon shadow
in Equatorial Guinea
me wanna coon poon
me wanna spoon spoon
me want it soon soon
What light bursts there
(but makes all darker!?)
this thing is not?
named
>>7736086
Les ombres se confondent,
L’être est confus. Le trait d'union
Rattache les consciences.
Everlastingly so,
the oak tree's shadow
receives none of its tall noble fruits
pls no bully
Who is she?
>>7736086
echoes of you around here,
whispers, muffled, noise,
your shadow was the longest.
>>7736193
>not knowing that umbra refers to shadow
it's like you never played pokemon
S
Ha Who After all
Dow 'S to say
S on t What's real We're all . . .
He wall
light from the sun travels thousands of miles unhindered, blocked by you: shadow
From the void, i saw
Cautions from past
Darkness of tomorrow
I fell
Create a short
13 word peom
regarding shadows
and existence?
Go fuck yourself
>>7736086
Existence is but cognizance in darkness
As your own shadow falls over
You
that's some fine piece of chocolate
would like her for me to mate
>lets shit post
>300+ replies
>lets create
>61 post, page 5
/lit/ shows its true colors
>>7736086
dick in butt
and nigger down town
sometimes it hurts
inside my heart
I stare at her
Fawning my feet,
A lifeless void
Reflecting me,
>>7736086
>shadows
>posts a black chick
FUCK OFF WITH YOURE FUCKING RASISM! O MAI GOSH.
Now in the dark
Neon fingers
A shadow of me
From flames to dark
Life flows and ebbs
Out, out, brief candle!
bitch nigga
where u at doe
gettin that pussy nigga
its fine af
A shadow is a space where
light
is blocked by
an object
Existence -
Take it in the ass
In your ass
Take it in your ass
My life is my own
Made manifest, my choices
But were they mine
Or the shadow of others,
as smoke billows with the wind
I'm cumming regardless
Here's a towel
words on screen: shadows
Rats scurrying through them
Venomous fangs
Dragging testicles
Rats
There is no word in the english language for absence of light and shadow
I met my shadow once
or maybe not
I dunno
magick is hard
Hide it careful
the lusted over sex
Using the universal
property of reflex
>>7736086
now i understand the scramble for africa
This imageboard is a joke. -- Create a short 13 word peom[sic] regarding shadows and existence.
That's only 13 words since peom isn't a fucking word, you /pol/ tier poop head.
>>7736086
I am piss drunk
and reflect on death
and life shadowed by it
Shadow smoking
because of my cigarette
the streets are quiet
so am I
calling me is a dark window
escaping sleep
not going to school tomorrow
>>7736086
big shadow booty on dark bitches
feels too heavy on my lusty existence
espace mitoyen
entre mort et vie
accueille-moi en ton sein
doyen existentiel
Ombre des oiseaux
traversant prés de jeunesse
Ombre du vent
sur visage d'antan
>>7744893
best one yet
>>7744904
this
Forsake this empty cosmic chiaroscuro
Come away;
We'll make shadowpuppets by the hearth.
>>7744893
It feels good to know I am not alone.
>>7736201
My darling rasta cocoa bean,
split open, roasted, posed,
keeps quiet whilst I keep unsheathed,
this seed of lust I know.
My darling rasta cocoa bean,
whose little pod caressed,
who shies too quick from yearning flick,
who curls at her toes.
Petit' little cocoa bean,
I wonder if you've been.
To be with me, and feel with deep
the stretching from within.
Too shelled inside, your pride unwind
so I should hardly know.
My darling rasta cocoa bean,
split open, roasted, posed.
***
I stole your poem, and I truly am sorry about it. You seem like you actually know what the fuck you're doing, and then I just kind of came along and took your content for my own purposes.
So yeah...Sorry.
>>7736407
That's a strange poem, anon.
Up against the unending black
God asked the devil:
"What ar my options?"
