How can I make this better?
by posting in the respective threads and not making your own
I would separate the teeth by adding detail only to the base of them, and add darker values to the sides to make it look more 3d
>>2521660
Looks muddy. You may need to go the beginner thread & stay there for a bit.
Where is the lightsource?
Right side of the forehead is light but the lower right jaw is darker than the left jaw?
The mouth is not a mouth-shaped outline that you just fill in with 2 colors. Dont be lazy, work out the shape with pic related.
Neck/collarbone area is even worse
If it wasnt for the face you would have no idea that it is part of a person.
Youre giving lots of mixed/false visual cues with your shading. The eyes are almost exactly the same but the jaw and forehead indicate light coming from an angle.
