Wrong board friendo
>>2468614
Needs more loomis, face looks too Asian, unless that was what you were going for.
Perspective is fucked, no one stands around like that, completely boring pose in contrast with the background. Looks like you just dragged a guy in front of a photo.
The water waves look weird and have too much detail so they draw too much attention.
You should've gone for one boat instead of many, right now it looks like a clusterfuck, but one or two boats would've been a better atmosphere
>>2468657
Better than 90% of /ic/
