Hi! I'm working on my video production. I'm an amateur. I made this simple video and I want some feedback, what do you guys think?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LsJZIzSGXsM
ps. thug madoka just for you.
Anyone? :( or am I simple irrelevant pure shit? :'(
>>2419434
What is this supposed to represent?
I think /ic/ is not the place for that. This is more a board for the graphic things more than audiovisual, i guess.
Few people here actually like contemporary art and even less have something to say. (I don't feel anyone is superior either way)
Did I think you work was shit? No, I can see some potential in there.
To me, it felt a bit mundane.
I like the visuals, the music didn't add much more to what you already have.
Maybe if it was in a series of videos or in combination with other things, that it would make more of a whole.
>>2419408
Hey I actually really like this. The music paired with you drawing the air in and smoke pluming out from the pipe is really memorable.
>>2419408
It feel's like you didn't even put a small amount of effort into it.
>boring front view
>same view throughout the whole video
>bad licht
>boring background
>looks into the camera multiple times
>actor is plain as well, there is nothing that catches the viewers attention besides perhaps the messy hair.
>quality isnt great either
What is it exacly you wanted to show with the video?
