I'm trying to make a child-like version of Finn from The Force Awakens.
I don't think it's good, there's something in the head proportions that aren't alright. You guys mind lending me a hand on this? Would love some critique and suggestions
>>2385869
it's good, proportions are somewhere between chibi and child-like. Not sure what you're going for...
but realistically, the legs are short, kind of more babyish/toddler.
As a stylized thing it's good, like a preschool toy.
>>2385890
I'm not 100% sure either, anon.
Maybe i'm stuck in this chibi-childlike-limbo indeed.
I don't really care, as long as it looks cute. Probably it will look better with texture on it.
I'm just exploring, it just fels like the head isn't as good as it should or could be. Thanks for the insight.
The arms are too long and the legs are too short. But it kinda almost works. It's not bad at all
>>2385869
jaw too narrow, chin not pronounced enough. hairline too straight. nose too sharp. lips too narrow. lose the animu proportions and you might approach a likeness.
>>2386028
I...don't think OP's trying a likeness, anon
Without the clothes I would barley read that as Finn/Boyega. I would widen and flatten the nose, and lower the chin like >>2386028 said.
imo the over stylized eyes are throwing the style off a bit.
>>2385869
you made a black kid. it's not john boyega, but it's definitely a black kid. so good job i guess?
>>2386042
pretty sure he wants it to look like finn
>>2386113
He wants it to look like Finn as a kid, which isn't quite the same thing as simply getting a likeness of adult Boyega.
The nose definitely needs to be flatter and rounder but if you go adding a big jawline and stuff you're gonna lose the childlike appeal.
By the way, this is pretty fucking racist.
You just made a black kid and think that it can be any black guy ever?
What the fuck
Done
>>2386277
What am I reading?
Are the SJW's finally invading /ic/?
>>2386277
why are you a little bitch ?
>>2386277
He is both Jamal AND Tyrone. Tyral. Jamon. Lmao.
>>2386366
this is always funny because chimps are the whitest looking apes
they dont even have lips boy
>>2386277
nigger
The arms are really long compared to the legs. The fingertips should reach approximately mid-thigh even when the legs are shortened. Especially when tne legs are shortened, because anything longer gives a monkeylike appearance, and anything shorter just looks stunted.
Personally I would suggest lengthening the legs, you've gotten really babylike proportions, which is good for cute but also adds to the helpless image. If you want it to be a kid but look more preteen than baby, you should go for longer limbs. At it is you need to adjust it to even out the arm proportions, so might as well make the legs match and leave it at that.
>>2386099
>>2386028
I would suggest against adding more chin if you want to keep a childlike appearance. The jawline doesn't start growing until adolescence, and too big of a chin will lose the childlike look. You can try it, but be aware that it will immediately make the model look a good deal older.
The rest are good suggestions, though.
>>2385869
You're too afraid to niggerfy him. Give him the wide flat nose, negro eyebrows and thick lips with shrunken cranium.
Don't forget his child bearing hips.
>>2386823
>>Don't forget his child bearing hips.
explain to me how the arms would work.... in the legs the knees are at least pronounced, but the elbows really arent. i'm having a hard time trying to imagine him using objects and bending his arms. super cool tho
i do agree with others in you're leaning towards a caricature/blank generalization rather than a likeness. that doesn't need to sound sjw. it's critique along the lines of "you're symbol drawing"
This might help
>>2385869
OP.
3D modeler here as well.
How did you get the form so smooth and well shaped witout it looking wibbley wobbley or odd smoothing.
>>2385949
>>2386028
>>2386099
>>2386123
Those are pretty good suggestions, thank you very much for your time, anons.
>>2386277
The a chill pill, son.
>>2386777
Great insight, thanks a lot for your time, anon!
>>2386784
I'll certainly try that.
>>2387115
The elbows arent pronouced because he's wearing a jacket, and I figured the jacket should be thicker than the trousers. But I believe you're correct, anon - I should make the elbows more pronouced, making a better read of the character. Thanks!
>>2387788
Sup, bro!
Well, I try to have a good edge restraint to keep the polygons "hard" and "smooth". It's not as easy as it seems, but you just have to keep modeling and adding those hard edge restraints. If anything, hit me up at [email protected] and I can help you out
>>2389060
Cool.
I'll send you a message soon to help me out. I am currently trying to make a concept and pilot for a children's show. So creating 3D models for it and want to make it look cute and smooth looking. Since you're obviously better than me in chibi's, I'll ask you for critic. I try to base my models from real anatomy since I started and shit like this seems almost impossible.
Still not a great sculptor though.
>>2389288
>Do you use polish brush or something?
from your words, you're just going from low too high too fast and that's why you get wibblywobbly shapes.
Get a clean low topology and slowly build up the shapes from there.
OP, just go and look at Disney infinity's Finn design and take some cues from them.
>>2385869
OP, you need to niggerify that shit brah. Watch them gangsta proportions as well senpai.
>>2389572
You're an horrible person.
>>2389751
thanks for dropping by, tumblr. Make sure to untwist your panties and check your privileges before leavig.
How has nobody mentioned
>>>/3/
>>2389751
it has a better likeness DESU
>>2389485
>from your words, you're just going from low too high too fast and that's why you get wibblywobbly shapes.
Yeah. I was half asleep when I wrote that.
>Get a clean low topology and slowly build up the shapes from there.
You mean retopo in max?
>>2390021
Hey dude, Op here.
Not sure what >>2389485 meant neither. He gave some good suggestions, although I'm not sure how that would help with your specific doubt.
But yeah, I pretty much just use Claybuild Up, Trim Dynamic, Smooth and Move Brushes. Dam Standard might be cool sometimes aswell. Other brushes are pretty much flavor only.
>>2390230
Do you have any of your sculpting process on youtube? speed sculpts etc?
>>2390467
Sure :D
Totally forgot about that, dude, sorry
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3ZL4CZKI7w
>>2390021
>Yeah. I was half asleep when I wrote that.
i meant *low to high
>You mean retopo in max?
YOu might do it in Max, or if you're not using an ancient version of Zbrush you can use Zremesher/Topology brush with a dash of Zmodeller to retopo your dynamesh draft into a clen low-poly shape, and then just do clean sibdivides from there.
The only way to get a real polished surface is too use Planar brush or a Clip brush, hPolish and the like will leave some bumps and irregularities that will just make you sculpt look sloppy.
Also note that OP broke up lots of stuff as separate subtools, this will help you a lot get clean shapes, especially combining it with clip/trim brushes.
ClayPolish might also help, but it's a crutch, and you're better off doing things the right way.
>>2390643
>that design
You're going to make it, brah
>>2390973
>>2390973
:3333
The biggest trouble is to make it "animationable", thou
This is how it's turning out.
I'm not 100% satisfied, but I have to move on or I'll be stuck in this project forever.
>>2392554
are you fucking stupid and blind or do you have issues following what people have been telling you. You need to make him look more a like a nigger, and I'm not saying this in a racist way. He still doesn't look like Finn at all. Look at his fucking perked up nose, that's the most obvious mistake.
>>2389060
damn whered you find that pic?
>>2396142
I made it :)
I'm a Godzilla fan.
Technical Boloney almost over with :3
>>2395965
>make him look more like a nigger
>I'm not saying this in a racist way
huh
