Hi /ic/
please help me make this a great Gigery Steampunky octopus. Looking for crits and help with finishing touches, redlines, paintovers welcome!
>>2373258
and you just couldn't post it in the critique thread with everyone else because you're just that special and better than everyone else?
back of the line kid
>>2373258
where is the steam?
where is the punk?
i see neither
I like it OP, but it took me awhile to figure out it was popping out of water. Maybe it looks a bit too much like smoke?
water should have reflections
>>2373258
Warm up the submerged bits. Submerged things still don't have a darker value (usually) than things above surface.
You might consider clearly identify a light source to make it easier to read.
If it were me, I would of changed the entire angle. So you could see more of the face of the octopus popping out of the water. It's a pretty boring angle in my opinion.