I started a comic, does anyone else tries this year?
Reads more like a storyboard than a comic
>otherwise your not half bad. I
>>2347281
It is true. I have no very clear as to take advantage of smaller vignettes. I am a scientific illustrator and I know just a little comic.
>>2347254
That's captivating, I'd love to see more.
>>2347254
are you going to ink it? it feels unfinished. Also your speech bubbles feel amateurish
>>2347254
suerte con ello
>anyone else tries this year
I don't normally do comics, but I got excited for the next season of Daredevil. Respect to legit comicbook artists, was a lot of trouble for me.
I'm going to draw my 2nd hentai comic this year and maybe couple more. Last year was really lazy
>anyone else tries this year
My bf is writing this comic and i'm illustrating it. It's about animals.
>>2347703
>Respect to legit comicbook artists, was a lot of trouble for me.
Pretty much this.
Also, I like that style there.
Im drawing a Pokemon Doujin. I feel like if I finish it and nobody reads it ill have to just quit art. My following is too small to withstand another financial flop.
>>2347721
Was this meant for the cringe thread?
>>2347706
I want to see the first hentai :(
>>2347326
Yes, I want. But as I know myself, I know that first I must do all the work first in pencil
>>2347721
My lettering is terrible. But I dont know how to fix it. I think I need a little help.
>>2347721
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>>2347836
Use different font and center text. Adjust speech bubbles as needed
>>2347836
That skirt needs to be tighter pokejin
I TRIED. And then I gave up cause I was afraid my story was dumb and corny. .__.
>>2347254
tried making one but dropped it like a fly.
>>2347842
Thank you. Do you have any recommendations for an easy to read font? >No ComicSans please
>>2347846
Redline please.
>>2347869
tekton pro
i tries all the time m8
>>2347715
this is really appealing to look at
>>2347869
anime ace
Here is the start of mine
>>2347715
Gay.
>>2348011
kek. This is great man.
working on it..
>>2348011
wow, thats awesome.
how are you planning on finishing it, in another media or digitally?
After I'm done writing the story, I'll begin to draw it up. Been writing it for close to a year now.
>>2348011
That's not how shadows work
If I keep going down this road and produce a longer comic will it be unreadable? This is an isolated nonsense page, but I'm working on a longer story and I'm not sure how much I have to dial it back.
>>2347836
Is this a vore comic? If so pls link wherever you are posting it
>>2348080
Yea I'm looking at it now, this is work I did almost half a year ago, and I see that everyone in the panel would have to be shadowed like the middle guy and in the third panel all the shadows would go to the same direction
>>2348112
Bottom panel*
I've tried to make a one-page gag after not drawing for 2 years.
Found out that I need to learn a lot of tools.
>>2348084
some people enjoy utter nonsense, you just gotta decide what your target audience is.
>>2348162
Heh, nice idea though, made me smirk.
>>2348162
Your thumbnail looked interesting.
>>2348211
fucking hell
>>2348162
I like it, but it doesn't read very well with all the bright magenta. It took me a minute to stare at it and distinguish what was what. Maybe throw something else in to give some contrast between elements, desaturate it a little. If the background elements were more desaturated, I think that would go a long way.
>>2348211
That's what I saw at first glance too.
>>2348011
Great use of perspective, catch up in your other skills.
>>2348011
actually this is pretty sweet
looks like it could be real good
>>2348086
Its not vore. But if I had to give it a genre I would say impregnation. Ive already drawn every page. I just need to ink them.
>>2348084
Cool e_e
>>2347856
I want see more m8
>>2347254
>hijo
>not mijo
>>2348011
teach me how to do perspective like you sempai
I can't bring myself to design more than 3 characters, much less a single page of story.
How do you all do it?
>>2348658
sorry man, that's all there is.
>>2348725
Sticky.
>>2348011
what's up with the shadows?
Me and buddies (who own a comic book shop) released one a few months back.
I already don't like it because all I see is mistakes but i'm still proud of it.
here's the cover....
...and an interior page
>>2349281
Looks like a piece of shit. You tried too hard to be edgy. You should quit.
>>2349285
That's really constructive, I appreciate that, you're right. Maybe I should quit, it all seems so clear now.
>>2349281
>released one a few months back.
That's very impressive!
It takes a lot of hard work to do something like this, it's great that you had enough passion to make it.
>>2349281
>white male protagonists
Die cis scum
I've started doing pages for a webcomic that I plan to launch soon, want to build up a few pages first so i can have a good cushion of time to put out more pages.
>>2347869
komika text
My very first attempt. There's no serious stories involved. Just short mindless events. Found out that making comics is not easy thing. rather, fucking tedious and time consuming.
>>2349283
great. Gj m8
>>2349896
I really like the composition in this comic. The shots are well-framed.
I'm trying this year. Literally everything about comics (lettering, paneling, thumbnailing, bubbling to composition) makes me feel like dying a little. Here's a page I just finished.
>>2349896
why did you color in the badass lensflare?
>>2349729
>decide to draw first comic
>doesn't matter if it turns out shit, it's just practice
>try to think of the most basic short story so I can focus on the art: A guy enters a bar and grabs a drink
>start drawing a sketches with no details
>realize I don't know how to show a character sitting down on at a bar stool
>attempt to draw it multiple times, can't get anything decent
>research it a bit but can't really find anything that helps
>ask on /ic/, get no reply
>ask someone IRL, he doesn't know
>give up and draw other things
Thinking about it now makes me a bit sad.
>>2351771
>google "man on bar stool"
problem solved.
References. Every "pro" comic artist does it and with much more frequency than amateurs.
>>2351776
I mean the action of sitting down on a bar stool. A static guy on a bar stool is no problem.
It felt weird going from the frame above to the guy instantly sitting. When I tried to draw a frame of him sitting down it looked a bit like he's floating. I also tried adding things like speed lines as a crutch, but it just ended up very awkward.
>>2351778
You could download a movie where there's a scene where tired-of-life man after all those failures that happened to him goes to a bar and asks for whiskey.
AFAIK basic mechanism is putting your right foot on the front of a ring that goes around the stool, leaning a bit forward, putting your hand on the stool or on the bar and pulling (more like pushing) yourself up both with the hand muscles and straightening your leg while other leg lifts itself from the ground.
Tricky part is that you basically twist your body 90 degrees unless you pick up the "pull yourself from bar" variant where you already have your body oriented properly to sitting.
If I had to draw it, I'd draw a pose at the beginning of the motion with leg and hand prepared for pulling yourself up and another frame just before the end of a motion or after it when character "adjusts" himself on a stool.
Frankly you should research movies where there's quite a bit bar scenes.
>>2351797
That's a good idea, thanks!
I'll give that a go sometimes.
>>2351771
its because its a compound movement that happens in several stages, its like trying to draw a journey in one image.
one frame of the motion may well look strange, just watch people and try to understand how it works.
>>2348011
Man no one would've said anything if you just made all the shadows in the last panel flow together.
>>2349281
Your cover artist sucks. Every pane element is just oddly stacked together.
>The foreground:
where are the zombies coming from?
What are the 2 guys standing on?
>The background:
The perspective of the castle building thing is odd.
The Nosferatu and witch are alright, but what is the idea for the blood oozing from the sky?
As a brand design and motif, that blood could work as a recurring theme.
>>2349283
This is great. You need to get this artist to draw your covers
>>2353036
"The perspective of the castle building thing is odd."
You are going to looove mine...
This my first try. Any suggestions on how to make it better? Is it too.. repetitive?
>>2347836
Your pencil lines are far more appealing than these computer ones. I'd just rise the contrast in computer, set it to multiply and color under it.
>>2349281
It's technically great but seems very uninspired.
>>2351769
I cant tell if you've done this because you like it or because its crap?
ive been wanting to make a comic but im not very good at coming up with character designs
>>2348338
post pls
Started a project near the end of the summer vacations, but aside from the full scenario and the characters designs didn't end up doing much in 2015.
Fell more motivated to do it now, It'll probably take me forever though but I need to begin getting some experience with drawing stories anyway.
>>2348011
>This is pretty much exactly what I want to create once I git gudder
Thanks for inspiration.
>>2347254
That's really neat OP
>>2349896
Hey... you're that dude with the bunny girl mask right? Concept design for one of your characters?
A page of some comic excercise I started this years. Basically all drawn by memory and tried to finally include some kind of narrative into it (cause all I have done has been plotless)
Will post more if someones interested
>>2347254
I thought a Comic would be a good project to work on for practice but couldn't settle on one story so instead i'm going to do some short one shot stories. I don't really have an aspiration to be a comic artist so trying different settings will give me an opportunity to design different things and try different art styles.
Problem is I've hit a brick wall when it comes to digital art, I've always been a paper and pencil person so making the leap has been hard. The sketches come out ok-ish but I can't ink for shit, really struggle to get smooth curves and lack the precision needed.Any tips on technique or tool settings worth knowing? or is it a case of 'Git Gud' and just keep practicing?
>>2351755
>Literally everything about comics (lettering, paneling, thumbnailing, bubbling to composition) makes me feel like dying a little.
I do comics professionally. It doesn't get better. The worst thing about it is that your drawing is always significantly worse than when creating single illustrations, for various reasons.
Comics are a logistical nightmare and a twisted bastard of a medium. It's like trying to make an entire film single-handed, and everything about comics basically works against you.
You have to be a real obsessive piece of shit to even get as far as I have (not very).
"Cartooning will destroy you, it will ruin your life." - Charles Schulz
>>2351778
Welcome to comics. These are the nightmares I have to deal with every single day.
I've been making this and posting somewhat regularly on here, glad this thread isn't entirely trolls like the last (n) comic threads.
>>2355150
I really like this. I think I've seen your stuff on here before. Simple, but very effective, kind of how I'd like to draw, instead of over-complicating things and everything ending up looking like shit.
Are you building up to a larger story here?
>>2354841
Best looking thing in the thread. Blog?
>>2355162
Thanks! Yeah, it's getting to something bigger, I've just been having problems with motivation to draw lately.
>>2349281
Make a story time thread and share please?
>>2355150
Your comic is just rambling hot garbage though :(
>>2355150
I like this! I'm not sure if its just because it seems nostalgic of the age of emoticons but... I'd love to see the rest of this, do you have a blog?
The panelling is much better than I could ever hope to achieve as an amateur. It seems like you've got some experience in this field.
I've gotta wonder though, why's the little dude so sweaty? I assumed that it would be because he's nervous, especially since the panels seemed to zoom in at one point... Maybe it's contextual.
>>2347836
Same girl. Just made this.
>>2348072
any tips for writing ? I want to take my time before I start drawing the actual pages but I'm still very early in the writing process, I can't figure it out. But I've decided to draw at the same time either to inspire my writing or to prepare the designs / scenes, otherwise I'd feel too disconnected from the story
>>2356498
>why is the little dude so sweaty?
He's made of vomit. All of the comics so far can be found at http://tapastic.com/series/CROWFACE . Also thanks!
>>2356548
This right here.
I want it done correctly. My store is a mash up of steven universe inspired/lilo and stitch concepts that I'm painstakingly trying to make amazing. I just hope I can draw it that way. :o
>>2354625
It's a very strange kind of face. Do you normally walk around with that sort of serine satisfaction? The mouth is smiling, but the eyes are cold; cover her mouth and see what emotion she has...
>>2353381
Rider and a horse feel very flat, especially last three panels seem like you just pasted them on the background. I think what stands the most is second to last panel, there's just no climbing motion in a horse figure. Rider also should lean forward and not just sit as he is glued at 90 degrees.
>>2347836
holy shit
Just started this week. Tablet and scanner are broken so it looks like crap. my hope is to make it funny so its decent.
a recent image i've been working on. i don't really intend to go further with the plot.
>>2347254
First decent panels I've seen on ic.
>>2355150
This is some good shit anon. Keep it up! Might subscribe later tonight when I get off from work.
I'm working on a few small projects at the moment. More importantly I'm starting a six-month apprenticeship tomorrow with an artist currently working on an Image ongoing with previous experience in Marvel.
Here's one of the more recent pages I drew. It was rushed as fuck and suffers from serious line consistency and perspective issues but I've learned a lot since. Mostly not to fucking leave things last minute
>>2358012
The drawing is pretty nice but I have no clue as to what the fuck is going on. Also resize your images in the future for posting.
>>2356513
More?
still trying to perfect the cross hatch with a mouse but its looking better.
>>2358227
Disagree, I think the image size is perfect
I have been doing a webcomic for a few years now. Due to circumstances I was forced to upload stuff directly from sketchbooks with minimal clean up and comic sansing the dialogue. It's a challenge to get a strip up every other week or so,and someday I will return to a more produced strip. But I try to pour real effort into what I do create. At least I am adding to the Lore and Canon with what I do.
>>2361281
And this is what I meant by "more produced",elements drawn in pencil and cobbled together in Photosshop.
>>2361281
Holy shit, so much dialogue. Also, the comic is way too busy.
Any comic or webcomic artists that you admire or that inspire you? For me, it's Minna Sundberg, she made two webcomics, Stand Still, Stay Silent and A Redtail's Dream (pic related)
Jesus help me this whole thread has shittier art than a bowl of shit
>>2362264
If they were better, they woulnt be posting here.
>>2355150
Not too thrilled with this page, but it's better than not making anything. Onwards and upwards I guess.
>>2363935
I think it looks better than the last two pages, keep it up mang.
>>2363940
Thanks. Made some minor changes and fixed some stuff.
>>2357144
I guess i should have posted the whole page. She's looking up at an ancient temple she's about to enter.
>>2363964
when are you uploading the next few pages to your DA?
>>2364526
The only one not posted is this one, I'll upload when I finish the other page that goes with it. They're also up on tapastic and tumbly.
>>2361281
One anon said it was too busy and too much dialogue. I'll add that it's too much furry, but I reallllly liked the style and dialogue! Moar?
>>2347836
Some practical advice: flip panel two around, so Bianca's on the left, and ekans on the right. This helps the flow of the comic, so where she's facing is in the same direction as the reading direction. It helps to make it less choppy, and improves clarity, it's "in front" of her.
>>2361281
The amount of shading and detail, coupled with the large dialogue boxes makes it king of hard to understand what's going on in the panels. Prague Race is a good example of how to do a black and white comic. Check that out.
i draw dumb comics all the time
they're trash but i enjoy it
>>2363964
this is cool
>>2354841
gorgeous
>>2349896
my fav in the thread, your lines are sexy man
do you have a blog or anything
>>2349283
looks pretty sick, i'd read it
though as that other anon said, does look a bit uninspired, generic zombie apoc setting
also there's something with the cover that i can't quite put my finger on, might be the perspective and the posing on the two guys
other than that, looks nice
>>2348011
drop a name niggy, this looks great
>>2354841
this looks great
>>2349896
you're great, post blog or something similar
>>2364737
One more.
Real old,but what I "should" be doing,not these strips drawn directly from sketchbooks with minimal cleaning. It's from the graphic novel I was working to produce 20 pages at a time so I could sell them as comics then collate them as collections like Cerebus the Aardvark. If you want to understand this stuff...go here...
www.jeremeyprickles.com
>>2365631
oo now we getting somewhere
>>2366756
Is it?
I'm sitting on 48 pages of a comic and don't know what to do with it. Where do I put this /ic/?
>>2348084
if you're confident and consistent with what you are making, people will follow you, don't worry about weather it makes sense or not. some people like bizarre.
>tfw tapastic just show 1K after your viewers got to 1000
the hundreds matter to me goddam fix your site
>>2348011
>giving them masks so you don't have to draw faces
>flat generic design with no creativity
comics are not for lazy people anon, and you are clearly not even trying.
>>2368359
>>2367469
how did you get 1k views? mine still stuck at 300ish
>>2367469
Not sure what I'm supposed to be looking at here.
>>2367469
it looks like they round up too
it shows 1.1m when it's really at 1.09m for me
im v excited for 2016
here's a textless draft page since everyone showing their WIPs
>>2368481
>claiming other people's shit
you're below trash
Well I did a few pages so that's a start.
>>2368528
I LIKE IT ! i also like your style , can you clean the sketch up and make it more .. understandable
>>2369769
thank you!
>can you clean the sketch up and make it more .. understandable
just for you bud, ill finish up this page and add text, brb
>>2354841
i'm guessing you're a murata fan
>>2369902
>dat shading
>nani? am i being punched in the face?
>huge detailed explosions of battle debris™
>a1 thighs, tiddies
gotta be murata influence
>>2369902
>>2369966
Well, not like he's my only influence for those stuffs, but yeah, totally.
>>2356513
what is going on with the girl in the second panel
wow this takes forever holy shit
this is just a "cleaned up" sketch
i still have line art color and shading left obviously
this is my first comic idk if my body is ready
>>2358012
>>2358227
Working on one for class.
It's a super rough, slapped together thumbnail rn.
The story is basically Zeus talking to Hermes about all the times he got game because Zeus does some wacky shit and Hermes was cool with it at first but then he's like nah brah.
I'm generally aiming for this fucky clip art style, so the final would just be a cleaner version of this, maybe fix up the dialogue.
What do you guys think?
>>2370298
Also, does it look too autistic?
it's supposed to be shitty but I feel like as of now, it looks bad shitty instead of good shitty. I'm thinking of dropping the idea but then I'd need a new one because by the end of the class, we have to have a physical copy of the comic and I can't draw so yea.
>>2370104
Original artist here, fucking excellent
>>2368258
shitters gonna talk shit
>>2370298
Yes.
This is classic. Give it to your teacher just like that.
>>2347254
>create 12 pages of manuscript
>almost finished and start ink
>notice its not perfect
>scrap the manuscript
>create 12 pages of manuscript
>almost finished and start ink
>notice its not perfect
>scrap the manuscript
>repeat at infinitum
>>2370971
It will never be perfect. Ink it and finish, then analyze what's wrong and move on.
you all have inspired me to make a comic, my first and i think it feels empty. not enough stuff on the street or in the store, but i would like some criticism!
>>2347836
This looked so much better as a sketch
>>2366891
Why not start a website? Register a domain name,find somewhere to host it,and profit! I don't know how to do html,but I use a program that allows you to drag n drop elements and graphics,hit a button,and Web pages are stitched together ready to upload. Get the program here.
http://www.webstudio.com/
>>2371714
perspective!
even if you're going for a weird style that isn't super realistic, I think you'd benefit greatly from working through some perspective manuals
>>2356548
Not much I can really give tips on. You'll probably come to realize most of this on your own but some revelations I've had is be prepared for lots of back and forth editing especially if you're writing a serious story. What I mean by this is that something you write in the beginning shouldn't be set in stone and you shouldn't intend for that either. Because further down the line you're going to get the hang of writing, and really be into it where ideas naturally come together and as a result, you'll find there'll be some discrepancies between what you started with and what you have at the present moment. So you'll have to edit the beginning to match what you like and so on. Basically don't limit yourself to what you have in the beginning because lots of great ideas will come about later on.
Do lots of research. I did a whole year of researching the history of my setting, bought tons and tons of books and read quite a number of them all to help me get a feeling for how things will look when writing.
For coming up with ideas, be very open minded. Always have your story on your mind at all times especially when watching a movie or reading a book or whatever. Sometimes you'll see a cool scene and want something similar. Sometimes a scene will trigger a train of thought that leads to a great dialogue scene and so on.
>>2372019
grazi
>>2347254
GTFO of here OP and learn from this anon
>>2373925
>>2347254
When I see work like this compared to work like >>2373925
It makes me think that you're all pussies. Damn. That anon really posted some shit you guys wish you had. Quality, raw and original content.
First time ever trying to do something related to comic, it's really random and hard to understand, but it was just a test, I dont actually real think about starting a comic, what u guys think?
>>2371714
If this is the front page, it's okay for now, but try not to waste panels. Big panels are more important than small panels.
>>2349896
Really cool, reminds me of dorohedoro
>>2373970
Really good man, i like that left one better personally tho
Sketched some bullshit for my friends earlier this year... dunno, I enjoyed the experience but from an objective standpoint it didn't turn out good.
just came to say that I'll furiously fap to any non-furry doujin you guys create
I hope this encourages you
also, Biancafag, please fix her head
>>2373961
i like that guy too but come on dude, no need to be a dick
You >>2373957,
and you >>2373961
knock that shit off, so transparent lol
>>2365631
finally got another page done
>>2347869
Make your own, there are templates online that you can use to make them with your own handwriting. Gives a unique feel without the hassle of handwriting everything,
>>2377950
I really like the theme of this, if i'm following correctly, that third eye cat can possess corpses? of was that skeleton its original body?
>>2377950
That giant creature he killed looks awesome. Doesn't crowface have a gun though? Couldnt he just shoot the guy shooting arrows?
I hope you make more.
>>2377982
Yeah, he's a shapeshifter, prefers being a human though. Now that I'm making some of it color I love it even more. I think I'm going to go back and colorize all the old pages even though that's a shitload of work for me right now.
>>2377998
Thanks! it's basically the colossus Gaius from SoC.
>>2378000
that looks so much better
>>2378000
the dead thing looks like those hopping statues in wind waker
>>2349283
Is that Tony Stark?
>>2378000
Thoughts on color?
>who tried a comic this year?
I did. 60k views and counting. some mone in the patty
http://gijinka.blogspot.my/
https://www.patreon.com/christchan?ty=h
>>2373970
that is fucking beautiful, if you make one stick to that art style.
>>2347254
This was just practice. Focusing on the art. I probably should have put the dialogue first
Any thoughts?
>>2383329
It's better without color...
>>2383341
Desaturated? I'm really on the fence with color on this.
>>2383329
Hey, link to whole comic? I love this shit.
>>2383371
http://tapastic.com/series/CROWFACE
>>2383373
Thanks senpai
>>2383366
I think it doesn't looks as good as without colors, it's just personal taste tbqh, I don't know, I think it fits the comic better
You could paint the first page really detailed, or the cover
I don't know man just keep doing your thing, I'm loving the story
>>2347836
MORE! Please anon
I want to, but I'm torn between two ideas I have, maybe you guys can help me decide?
The first one is about a kid falling into the underground world of knife fighting and him trying to legitimize it as a sport.
The other is a man losing everything and befriending an alcoholic wizard, and the wizard taking him through various journeys just to convince the guy to kill himself.
Which sounds more appealing as a read?
>>2383615
Second one sounds fucking awesome if it's well written. Good luck!
>>2383615
the second one. The first one souds weird. try not to make it cheesy faggot , you have a good idea
>>2347836
It looks pretty interesting composition-wise, keep it up anon
>>2348084
I-Is that Chykka from metroid prime 2?
>>2383615
>convince the guy to kill himself.
Is there a missing "not" here?
If so, it could be quite good if the writing is sincere (from your own experiences could work wonders).
I'm trying. But failing. I have a hard time drawing even a single piece decently, a comic is too much for me. I tried but just wasn't good enough
Ive only made small storyboards of this, about 40+ pages. I guess I'll upload more of theres a demand for them
http://yellowmatsumoto.tumblr.com/post/138944978927/witch-hunt-chapter-1-storyboards
>>2383366
Is that you Reginald?
Seriously, this is really neat.
>>2388885
Thanks! new pages soon hopefully
>>2383615
The second one sounds similar to Rick and Morty. Alcoholic scientist takes kid on adventures, after which kid probably want to kill himself. I guess just be aware of ways that your characters could be samey. Also should watch Ralph Bakshi's Wizards if you want some good material to parody.
>>2370971
>>2356513
Back dat ass up.
>>2383615
The second one is Spawn
>Making a comic doesn't seem too hard, Ill give it a shot
>Immediately realise how well you need to know your characters and sets to maintain consistency
>Realise how much time you actually need to put it
I have a whole new level of respect for comic makers.
>>2391864
i'm making a webcomic as a pet project for sometime now, reading on sources and other materials on the fundamentals of drawing, story writing, character development, lettering, paneling and so on...it doesn't help that i'm just one man doing this but hey like i said, pet project
>>2391963
Link to all those sources pls
>>2383329
Looks nicer in full colour IMO
>>2347254
me gusta le dibujo de la bota :3
>>2392356
it's alot of sources and it's mostly video tutorials and books from the local library
>>2392922
What're you looking at in regards to lettering and paneling?
>>2392932
for me it's the 'art of cartooning', 'drawing cartoons and comics for dummies' and 'comic book design' by gary spencer
>>2347836
do you have a blog?
>>2347254
Mine was supposed to be released in January, but the site is taking forever to be finished... Should I shamelessly promote it here when it's ready?
>>2349281
Are you the guys who got Ryan Ottley to do an alt-cover?
Still the same fag as >>2382312
Years and years just thinking about it but this year I'm going to make it.
Walking through a snowstorm at night around my neighborhood
>>2399597
I can't make out a single thing.
>>2399402
The panels are weird. Can't tell what's going on in half of them and the amount of veins on the dick makes it look weird.
>>2399346
Your art could be better.
>>2396479
1st panel looks cool but it looks like he's smiling in it. Improve your expressions. The second-last and third-last panels look cool as well, but the rest looks off.
You should learn how to panel and write dialogue to begin with... don't get me wrong, your art is shit too.
I was joking about the art, but fix your panels and learn to write.
>>2400827
>Can't tell what's going on in half of them
By this, I meant the second and fourth.
>>2400828
Who was this intended for?
>>2399346
Have you been reading Murata's One Punch Man recently by any chance?
>>2354658
I want to make a comic too but really suck at coming up with anything that isn't just a character. Like what do they do, for what, and where are they going... Fucking baffling.
>>2400829
There's bleed count in. Makes it look weird indeed.
Here's something I've been working on
>>2400876
Hell yea, Garou rules.
Nice eye.
>>2361287
Nononono. Forget about the "production" and do all by hand, text rotulation too. Will look way better.
>>2349285
Could have been constructive, decided to be a useless prick. Well done, friend. I bet you're a real fun person to be around.
>>2389397
>Also loitering.
Kek'd
