Any feedback for me /ic/? I am trying to go for a comic book/manga

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2015-12-17 20:50:46 Post No. 2318872
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Anonymous 2015-12-17 20:50:46 Post No. 2318872 [Report]

Any feedback for me /ic/? I am trying to go for a comic book/manga style but am struggling.

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Anonymous 2015-12-17 20:55:40 Post No.2318880
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Anonymous 2015-12-18 02:35:00 Post No.2319216
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Anonymous 2015-12-18 02:35:00 Post No.2319216 [Report]

>>2318880
awful tutorial

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Anonymous 2015-12-18 02:58:49 Post No.2319248
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Anonymous 2015-12-18 02:58:49 Post No.2319248 [Report]

>>2319216
this tbqh

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Anonymous 2015-12-18 11:36:39 Post No.2319505
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Anonymous 2015-12-18 11:36:39 Post No.2319505 [Report]

>>2318872
Torso too short hips too flat. She should have way more rump to sit on if you are going for hops that wide. I'm on mobile so I'm not gonna go into detail.

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Anonymous 2015-12-18 16:30:35 Post No.2319665
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Anonymous 2015-12-18 16:30:35 Post No.2319665 [Report]

The left arm needs to be lower. Your elbow should be right above the belly button. Also it needs to be thicker. That's what's drawing the most attention. Also the hand. Don't try so hard on getting the details before you have proper anatomy. For instance the middle of your leg doesn't bend. unless you're meaning for it to look that way. Then make it more pronounced
>muh foot