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Post em now.

Rules:
-Do not rate or give critiques unless if the artist specifically requests it.
-If someone is RUDE tell them to not expect much from an hour's work.
-Posting WIP's, studies, "doodles", and random sketches are highly encouraged.
-The art must be fresh. Like you just drew it in the past hour.
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Hey Mike! Looks kinda stiff but doesn't matter, you did it quickly after all!
Best of luck.

Ps. Please make the pol drawthreads soon please. I need to see you on it.
Lots of love.
Kyrie.
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>>2300986
What a salty bitch
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>>2300984
Ah man, this thread always makes me feel like sketching. I love Chun Li.
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>>2300989
I'm fascinated by you! Jo!
MIKE San,you're so kawaii. You also saved the picture I posted! That gives me jope! His name is chromatsu by the way, he's really great and a huge Otaku jo!
I'll post with you in a few hours jo! Please, look forward to it jo!
Good night jo!
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trying out a brush pen. and i know the horns are fucked up aha.
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>>2300993
its good to have a thread where people dump whatever they just drew.
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practice
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>>2301020
I agree, but I don't think some people get the idea of having a "no pressure" thread. It's good for people to be able to post some stuff without worrying about it being torn apart, just to get people drawing and sharing. There's value in talking about and looking at gesture drawings and doodles too, but the draw thread is more for things you want to take to finish. I like the lower key atmosphere, or idea of it, these threads have, for a reprieve.
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>>2301032
artists work better without pressure
thats why doodles and studies drawn by Mucha are about 10 times better than his actual works
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>>2301036
It really is true, isn't it? I only know one person who seems at his best under pressure, he's one of those kinds of people who would get antsy if they went on vacation. Other than that, it's a plague on us artists. I'm trying to force myself to treat even free time pieces seriously and finish them though. I want to get myself into the habit of finishing things when I'm not under fire so I can get a job and actually do it.
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>>2301029
Nice dude
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>>2301036
but muchas works are better than his shit studies cunt
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>>2300984
isnt this an /i/ kind of thread?
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>>2301184
pretty much. These would be fine if not for the idiotic "don't say anything mean ;;_;_" part
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>>2300984
>shit
>bad anatomy
>hairy lines
>what is line weight for 40 shekels
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It's impossible for me to spend more than an hour on landscape attempts because they all come out looking fucking horrible.
Help.
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>>2301190
Hey assenabler, post what you drew in the past hour.
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>>2301193
Your palette is a little too monochromatic and needs to go a bit blue-r because of atmospheric perspective, like the little shade of blue you had going on in the shadows of the wooden bar in the left.
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>>2301199
>/i/
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I'm biting off more than I can chew, shit.
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>>2301206
at least you are aware of it
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>>2301190
you just know when people cherry picks your work in /ic/ you're on the upper scale of the artists here.
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>>2301218
At the very least, I'm trying.
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>>2300984
>retarded mess of overlapping images

why is it suddenly a trend amongst artists to spew endless dribble of intersecting anatomical garbage studies?
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>>2301444
since the dawn of the sketchbook. just look at davinci

Also you're a faggot. Stop shitposting
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Doodling at work. Postan.

Also is anyone else getting this weird game ad popping up when visiting 4chan?
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>>2301583
>Also is anyone else getting this weird game ad popping up when visiting 4chan?
no
get noscript and block it
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so like, this is what I have been working on in the last hour. WIPS count right? It's why its so cropped, lolollo
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>>2300984
I drew this character from this game.

Fuck, so many things are wrong. I just wanted to make that certain choppy but yet pleasing look. What went right?
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>>2301713
undercancer please go and stay go
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>>2301705
the border of the shadow shape along the neck and clavicles looks really strange
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>>2301705
full pic pls
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>>2301713
pic related desu. learn to draw realistically and you will begin to understand how to do styles well (that certain choppy yet pleasing look). practice practice desu

>>2301722
fuck this guy desu. I usually am distasteful of pixel-art games but undertale was pretty neato
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>>2301731
the game was good, the fanbase is more cancerous than horse fuckers tho
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>>2301732
ok yeah I'd totally agree there. the fanbase is way too tumblr-ish.
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>>2301440
Cool but forhead is too short
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>>2301727
was gonna do a gaussian blur on it but forgots. I usually do my shadows as harsh sorta cell shaded and then blur them out later. When I do cast shadows at least.

thanks, Ill fix that tonightttttttt
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Hour and thirty but still counts right? It's just a block in. I just want feedback mostly on the scale and position of the horse before I take it further.
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>>2301759
the horse's neck is just confusing to look at. the shadow and lines make it so you can't tell how thick it is or how it attaches to the head
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>>2301767
I know, I haven't defined much in that area because I'm not sure where the head needs to go. If I could get it in the right spot and size, I can use some reference to tighten up the anatomy, but I don't have much experience drawing horses so I just need someone to help me get a ballpark.
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>used to do a lot of graffiti
>don't have pics of painted work
>havent drawn in years
>will post a couple sketches in old book I just found
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>>2301785
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>>2301785
K, just finished drawing this lil one
Feels good to draw after so many years
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>>2301730
if i musstttt
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>>2300984
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>>2301798
wrong pic sry
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C&C welcome. Rate my art between 0 and 11. Does it suck, and if so how to improve within the style that I chose?
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wip
>"Ah, let's make a 5 minutes doodle"
>turns into a five hours Saw puzzle
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>>2301785
>>2301787
>>2301791
Don't post old work, post stuff you just drew.
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>>2300984
just a little doodle, and some others
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>>2301793
This is lovely. But what's with the rasterization on her hips?
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>>2301870
you either need to push the form of those figures a lot more or learn and apply proper anatomy
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Knight Study
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got my tablet today
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bus stop sketch. Im having trouble with perspective and identify a horizon and an objects vanishing point.
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>>2302327
Maybe a silly question but what exactly did you study?
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>>2302263
the leggings and things were white and I just used the magic wand tool + selection size+1 to paint em black.

Created a bunch of weird artifacts but im way too lazy.
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>>2302338
a knight.
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none of these took more than 30 seconds and I know it's crap
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>>2301731
>learn to draw realistically and you will begin to understand how to do styles well
lies.
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>>2301731
>>2302395

anatomy and realism are different things

you can be good at one and shit at the other - quite often realism is a lot easier to learn than proper anatomy (at least it was for me)
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>>2302395
Post your arguments.
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>>2302411
not art can achieve 1:1 replication of reality. becuase select information is translated to the substrate of the art realism is interpreted. realism is its own style with all it own nuances just as what comes with any other style. so to say "learn realism before x" is stooopiiid
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>>2300984
I'm doing this request for a friend with a hand fetish. He wanted like this but it feels off to me. Might be the hand honestly
Critique I guess.
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what do you think ?
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This thread is excellent. Keep up the good work, OP.
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>>2302439
nice composing
a "Z" line is always a solid way to track the viewers eye, but you should have put something more eye-catchy in the top left corner
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>>2302448
thank, that's a good advise, i didn't think of it
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1/2
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>>2302460
2/2
5-10 mins each
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>>2302429
-Hand is too small.Should be propostioned to her face
-Thumb is missing
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>>2300984

OH MY FUCKING GOD PLEASE HELP ME.

How do I fix the anatomy?
There are probably more stuff to fix but my biggest beef is with the legs/waist.

The left leg is killing me. No matter how much I re-draw it seems that is dislocated or simply poorly drawed/connected with the waist.

I really need to learn a shit ton about anatomy and perspective.

Please help
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>>2302505
You're best off the scrapping the entire picture and just starting something easier, the worst thing you can do while learning how to draw is over extending yourself.
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>>2302505

First of all, no need to post a wallpaper sized picture for a simple sketch.

Second, the left leg is broken. Legs arent usually banana shaped.
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For some reason I got really nostalgic and decided to draw Karnov.

I know he's abit wonky in areas, but critiques and advice is appreciated anyways.
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>>2302514

Sorry for the gigantic file
And yes, that lower leg, I already know it needs sum fixing. But it's the rest that is killing me.
The left cheek, how it connects with the waist, how it connects with the right cheek.

It's all messed up, I know it but I don't know how to fix it
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>>2302429

You sort of drew a mitt hand, if his fetish is for hands he might want more detail. Have her spreading her fingers a bit or something, and also don't make them pointy.
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>>2302505

her ass should be farther to the left, its totally out of line with her lower back. Her right leg is attached to her side
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>>2302540

yes, I can see that now.. It looks like her back/waist is all twisted/broken.

Going to try to fix it.
Thanks for the help.
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>>2302505
I'm hardly better than you so take it with a grain of salt but hopefully you can glean something
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>>2302555
Also I would move her tit down a bit on the ribcage as well as fix the left foot and leg foreshortening
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>>2302555

Yes, the left leg is all messed up. I was going to fix it but I was focusing too much on the waist and the cheeks/thighs.

Again thanks for the help.
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>>2302331
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>>2302472
Yeah I kinda figured that its too small but he likes small hands so worried he'll would pay if they are too big. Also there is a thumb if you look closely. I know its hard since it a rough sketch which is why I'm taking criticism now before I go back and adjust. But thank you anon
>>2302538
He request a hand puppet and gave me this shit as ref
>pic related
But thank you so much
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Straight from photoshop.

Would like some crit on the girl or the style, please.
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>>2302555
>>2302556
>>2302540


Better?
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>>2302584
I'd fug her
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>>2302591

yes, although her right buttock might curve in too far now
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>>2302604
Guess that qualifies as "ok".

I had to fix the perspective of that bike. No idea how I missed that.
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>>2302579

I'd try to find a high res picture of a real woman doing the same gesture, it would make it a lot easier
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>>2302617

I see what you are saying going to fix it. Again thanks for the tips.
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>>2302620
bike looks cool desu. I like your style
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>>2302591
A bit better overall

Also take a look at the backside of her left knee. Again, a grain of salt.

If I were you I would close down the image for 10 minutes and do something else, and come back with fresh eyes.
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>>2300984
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>>2302439
I love it
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>>2302635

That is a good tip.
I'm just so frustrated. It's such a simple and basic pose.

It pisses me off that I'm having such an issue with it.
I thought I was better than this. Apparently I'm so, so wrong.

I need to practice... A lot
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>>2302633
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>>2300984
:^)
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>>2302645
In my noob opinion her torso and arms are alright.

Since it's just a basic lineart, if you feel it's completely fucked you could just scrap it and draw the same thing from scratch. (I think it could turn out alright with some successful adjustments. Just don't waste hours polishing a turd when you could spit out a few more drawings and gain extra insight is what I mean, this is not a competition).
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Fucking around in Photoshop.
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>>2302659
>got an image open in Photoshop.
>takes an photo of the screen.

If you are using Photoshop CC then got to File/Export/Save-for-web(legacy)

That's a nice easy tool with a preview for saving images.
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>>2301892
Seems like a useless comment. I was clearly comparing.
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>>2302665
>Elements
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>>2302521

Here is a sketch with some simplified anatomy, hopefully it will help you understand how everything fits together a bit better.
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>>2302728
Not that guy, but how'd you get your lines to be so good, anon?
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Here's an image of me saving a screenshot of the process as a PNG-24 file in the web tool.
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>>2302734

Practice. I recently switched to holding the pencil/stylus in the "correct way" with the tip of the thumb and index finger on the pencil instead of the weird death grip I see alot of artist do and it actually helps alot. You want to have as little tension in your hand as possible, and draw from your shoulder aswell.

With that said though, I don't think those lines are particulary good but thanks anyway!
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>>2302739
>>2302727
nm. Didn't know there was a photoshop elements version. Anyway, the old versions of photoshop also had that feature so you might still have it in elements.
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>>2302464
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>>2302373
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>>2302659
neat
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>>2301888

>those spiky shoulders and belts all over the place.

reminds me of 80s / 90s stuff, me like.
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>>2303461
I wish paper had an undo button.
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Second time around is definitely better.
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>>2303871
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its bad I know but I'm proud
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>>2303883
use tools you can control.
that brush pen is doin you no favours until you learn how to use it.
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>>2303898
tips on the brush pen? I just really like using it. I feel like I'm doing better than where I started off a few weeks ago. pic relate
I've been doing line exercises that another anon suggested but nothing other than that
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>>2303906
your line weight is explaining all the wrong things in the wrong places as in >>2303883 you have used a heavy pressure line to describe where his tank top meets his shoulders, but this makes it look as if the shirt has a large black boarder to it or deep dark as fuck shadows surrounding it, that or deep gashes directly into his arms.
line weight is everything when using a brush to draw, all im saying is perhaps use a pen untill you know how shadows fall, like the way you have his right leg in total shadow and the top remains pure white makes no sense.

>pic related, one of my own brush pen jobs, and even i think that the brush pen is still too far away skill wise to justify using it.
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>>2303921
>makes it look as if the shirt has a large black boarder to it
it does lol, I used a reference
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>>2303921
the part I agree with is the shading on the shirt I thought about shading it with pencil. kind of hard to lightly shade white with a brush pen after all.
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>>2303927
>kind of hard to lightly shade white with a brush pen after all.

thats why gray markers are brush pens best friend
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>>2303926
watch the proportions also
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Sorry for shadows, but this is my work :P
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>>2303895
Blog?
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>>2304201
fuck off
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I decided to try charcoal again
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>>2304238
Interesting blog
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Help guys...
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>>2302395
to make picture on the right you need to learn construction, if you learn construction then you can then play with the proportions of the figure to make whatever the fuck you want to.
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>>2304683
1. It's shit, and you really should read sticky.
2. For now stay with a pencil - charcoal is a difficult medium.

If you insist on using it then, as an exercise, draw some grayscales (like ones mentioned here: http://drawsketch.about.com/od/learntodraw/ss/shadingsteps.htm ). Try to make it look clean.
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>>2304732

Some of the flaws im very aware of

There is no vanishing point and I didn't try to make to make it straight
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>>2304736
>Some of the flaws im very aware of
Then why you didn't fixed them?
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Made this earlier today, put about 1.5-2 hours into it. Learning to draw faster but still with a lot of detail. Need tips though - What can I do better? How the fuck do I draw hair well? I can never get the roots down...
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>>2304769
Wasn't flipped when I posted it, sorry!

Also , I want to become a Concept artist, draw characters and what not for vidya games. What in this picture would I have to do better to make it proffessional?
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I started to draw something but when I 'm too fucking retarded to draw folding clothes without a reference picture on my side I ragequitted and deleted everything.
fuck you and everything
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Attempting porn.


{porn.exe_has_failed}
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Same guy as the last two posts.

Thought I'd attempt a different style.
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>>2304201
got a tumblr?
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>>2302439
very solid piece, just keep working on the style

try adding more definition
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>>2304801
So we have a swefag in the thread?
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Looking back at the top row makes me mad
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i really need to adjust my scanner...

it's a pencil drawing. yes.
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>>2305367
What's going on with the lips? They all look in desperate need of some chapstick
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>>2305429

this one is even worse
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>>2300984
0-10 how cute ?
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good thread
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>>2305440
Trying to go for a more subtle way to draw lips, most of these didn't work out to well though
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>>2305367
what brush(es) are you using? i like the dry look of it
for the lips, it's usually best left as the bottom and optionally upper lip line, with none of the crease thing you've got going on. look at some comics or manga
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rate an critique /ic/
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>>2305556
Default "Bit Husky" under the india ink tab in manga studio, the brush speed = opacity option gives it that look.

Could someone point out what i'm doing wrong with the perspective on this guy's head? It seems a bit wonky when I do these kind of angles from memory.
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>>2301793
>>2302340

Enable anti-aliasing on your magic wand tool.
You're welcome.
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>>2303646
Cool design bro, it pleases my dick.
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>>2305586
there's a lot of lines that make it hard to tell the perspective of some of the features. the nose especially isn't too clear + makes it look off. the mouth doesn't line up witth how the jaw/chin is either. + calm down with the lines around the jaw. i'm not sure what you're going for with them but ease up
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>>2305509
Flat
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seems like today is one of those days where i forget how to draw/paint
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>>2306214
Looks good to me.
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>>2304773
you can start by not drawing goblins, so you wont not end up like that other faggot, who only draws goblins.
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>>2306214
Lower lip might be a tad small? Or is this some lip biting in action? Not enough teeth action then
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>>2306320
thats really cute
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>>2306320
super crude, but surprisingly not bad
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>>2300984
Did it capture the feeling of nigga?
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cartoon "studies"
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>>2304729
exactly this
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>>2307592

didnt learn much.
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>>2303654
nice
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>>2306255
push your values, the darkest points should be nearly 2-3 tones darker at least
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>>2303646
on the right side (her right) her clothes cover her nipple. on the left the lightning pattern is reversed and doesnt cover her left nipple exactly
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Did this in 30 min. Tried to use variation on line weight. First time posting. Critiques are welcome and recomended.
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Still learning the basics of drawing and photoshop. My lines needs a lot of improvement compared to paper. I think it's because of the lack of resistance on the tablet.
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>>2308275
I like that shadow. It just screams for some realistic rendering and contrast for then to be placed on a table under a glass plate.
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No idea what I'm doing here. should I go on or start something else?
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>>2308469
Is that Mereum?
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>>2308469
Nice body and hands, not a fan of the face or hair/horns/bark.
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>>2308493
Nah
>>2308494
it should be hair that closes like bat wings. it should.
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critique and opinion apprreciated C :
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>>2308617
follow this>>2308415
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>>2308334
>blah blah
no one gives a fuck
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>>2308623
You sound butthurt. If you didn't care then you wouldn't had replied.
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>>2308617
You seem more concerned with the patches of value rather than the edges and form that you should pay attention to.
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>>2308619
thanks, looks interesting : )
>>2308632
i tried to follow the form with the patches of value. could you explain your statement in more detail, i'm not sure if i fully understand it.
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Doodles in class.
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>>2308639
It seems like you're achieving what your goal was, you'll probably get to edges and blending on your own time. http://www.ctrlpaint.com/videos/hard-and-soft-shadow-edges
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The guides seems to suggest one starts with half tones but just shading from light to darkest makes more sense.
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>>2308647
you must be 18 to post here
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>>2308653
and that's an issue because the age limit for being a student at any university is 18
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>>2308651
great video, thank you : )
yeah, i'm kind of testing some stuff before i go to blending.
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Defaulting to fan art again. rough block in.
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>>2302461
I like it on an emotional level, but technically displeases me.
I'd like to see a fully finished piece that still has the feeling of barebones.
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>>2308655
Upper division only then.
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tablet broke and I dont own decent art materials. Or even a decent camera :T
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A study doodle, perhaps could be a detailed illustration
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>>2308865
proportions are kinda fucked, and your perspective of your clavicles to pelvis is kind of flawed, also your lines are very wobbly, but pretty nice anatomy wise
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>>2308869
yeah anatomy perspective its kind of hard to get used to (at least for me) I will try to improve more on those flaws
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critiques are welcome...
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>>2308885
Face proportions are bad, it looks like a flat and dull expression. Body proportions are fine, but for being a detailed piece maybe you should've tried a more interesting pose.
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>>2308885
if you want to have giant eyes then don't aim for a realistically proportioned skull. Anime faces are not just about single features out of place. Their entire skulls are warped. So go practice drawing a 100 skulls and learn the muscles on top of it. Then you can warp it into having a tiny pointy jaw and giant eye sockets and still have some structure and have it read well. Then you will be closer to those perfect female link porn faces that I bet you are just craving to draw.
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mornin'
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>>2309246
Nice, dude.
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>>2308885
>female link
>looks just like regular link

The original character design is already rather feminin, so i would push that even more. Bigger an rounder eyes, bigger lips, hips and breasts
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this is a better thread for this one. scott robertson's book is going to wreck me
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>>2308885
>linkle
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anatomy and perspective is a mystery to me
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trying out the airbrush
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30 min down, might continue, might not
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>>2309551
not bad
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>>2308655
What about seniors in high school? They're 18 or turning 18.
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>>2309567
Have you considered that the obvious conflict you are pointing out might be a clue that it was sarcasm?
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Been working on this for an hour or two. I suck at shadow. But I'm getting the hang of it.
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>>2309568
True
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>>2301793
>no pubic hair
I hope you aren't losing your fetish, this is worrysome.
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gumjob
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>>2301735
>>2301732
>Implying the game isn't as cancerous as the fans
It is subtle, but the game is obviously taylor made for tumblr faggots, if it weren't, their fans wouldn't be cookie cutter lookalikes with the same shit behavior and ideas.

Implying flies do not gather around shit is the same retarded meme that came from pretending steven universe wasn't made by subversive idiots shoving their progressive agendas in children's media, and that insane leftists "simply chose", by pure coincidence, the show as "theirs".
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>>2309570
neat for what it is,
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>>2300984
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>>2309648
Noice
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>>2309592
LOOMIS!
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Drew this on an envelope and left it on the table for my dad
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Calling it finished I guess.
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making some adoptables
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>>2310566

love you desu senpai
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>>2310563

Why the pierced horn? Makes no sense at all, living horns are not something you can pierce because that would bleed and hurt like a motherfucker, and a ring of this relative shape and size through it is bullshit.
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>>2310018

This is pretty great, even for a silly doodle. Do you have a place where I can see more of your stuff?
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First draft of a tattoo to do
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How do I keep my drawings from getting this gross muddy look when I paint them?

I think there are too many strokes so it looks chunky.

I basically just gave up on this one it was a study cause I am rusty
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Just finished this.

Haven't done digital drawing in a few months so I'm fairly rusty, but I'm still thinking it's decent. Got the image in my head listening to 'How You Like Me Now' by the heavy, got an image in mah head similar to my LSD trips.

Thoughts?
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it actually took a couple hours, but I finished less than 30min ago, so...
C&C are welcome
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>>2310627
Ja didn't attach, buddy.
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>>2310627
sorry, I forgot the pic
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>>2310018
I'm baked as man and this is exactly what I want to see.
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