Post em now.
Rules:
-Do not rate or give critiques unless if the artist specifically requests it.
-If someone is RUDE tell them to not expect much from an hour's work.
-Posting WIP's, studies, "doodles", and random sketches are highly encouraged.
-The art must be fresh. Like you just drew it in the past hour.
>>2264169
>goes to critique board
>p-please don't crit me
>>2264169
this looks like shit.
going by the rules I would say this is a /i/ thread
>>2264169
>Rules
good one m8
You the calarts thread OP as well?
>>2264169
Symbol drawing
Poor anatomy
Horrible line control
Animushit when you don't even grasp the basics
But hey you did lighting effects on the eyes that fixes everything!
WHY IS EVERYONE SO RUDE
>>2264200
Because you're oppressed, naturally
>>2264200
Because the art that gets posted on here is shit enough with it being a hugbox. People need to learn when their work belongs in the beginner threads.
i support this thread, heres some stuff i drawed on my phone
>>2264200
Essentially, becuause you're a faggot.
>>2264209
WEED
E
E
D
some drawpile cyberdeamons
help with bg ideas. another anon suggested i change up the red in the back since she fades in a lil bit.
>>2264221
Painted glass
Detailed stone columns
>>2264221
pretty badass, you could make the background sort of glow, like the sun is shining through the window thing ,maybe sunset, since you have the red rim lighting going on
>>2264229
stfu memester
>>2264230
RUDE not welcome
pls evacuate
>>2264169
>n-no bully
Get your ass to tumblr.
I think I'm getting the hang of this weeaboo trash
>>2264250
protip, you're not lul
>>2264254
how do I into qt anime grill, /ic/-senpai?
>>2264250
This looks more like The Boondocks than actual anime
>>2264250
Literally get loomis into your life, this is painful.
I got a bit creative while practicing boxes and perspective so I made a really badly proportioned MAC-10
>>2264280
>ejection port on wrong side
>handle not in the middle of the receiver
>barrel not even a cylinder, looks like a bent straw
>no rear sight
>charging handle in wrong position/stuck in place
>wtf trigger and trigger guard
>no saftey
Either copy from ref or just make your own gun
>>2264280
You drew it too big relative to the vanishing points, making it look distorted as if we're viewing it really up close or with a fish-eye lens. Also the bottom of the magazine doesn't seem to converge to the vanishing point.
The ellipse is also incorrect for the barrel, its minor axis should be parrallel to the direction of the barrel, tracing over a picture of a real gun will show you that.
Also listen to /k/ over here >>2264307
stuff
I don´t even know.
>>2264599
Hey guys I know so much about art, let me tell you how shit your artwork is, those lines are shit, that shape is shit. Learn the basics faggots, do you even art bro? It makes my dick hard to tell you what art is
>>2264609
Did someone give you a harsh critique? Stop projecting.
>>2264615
Nah that's just all I see on this board
>be good at drawing
>all I want to do is draw realistic graphic sexual images
>>2264617
Nobody will tell you what you want to hear, unless someone's being sarcastic just to fuck with you.
>>2264618
And this haha
>>2264618
follow your dreams
>>2264609
>everyone sucks including mullins, bbc and mikufag
relaxin' and sketchin'
>>2264639
>implying mikufag is any good
>>2264639
fuck off mikufag
>>2264643
>>2264811
Mikufag is amazing
you just jelly
And i know youre samefaggimg
>>2264642
no idea what half of those are supposed to be
>>2264818
where can i get this framed
>>2264319
cool stuff
Still filling this page with stuff, don't know if I should go full berserk though.
>>2264642
really liking your shading, keep it up.
Hi, I'm suck, please gentle
>>2264169
Arts gay fam
>>2264898
Hi Suck, try to work on your lines and avoid symbol drawing. Work on your english too btw
>>2264898
Hi suck-chan, I'd let you suck me.
>>2264898
The facial proportions aren't bad, she's quite attractive. The most distracting thing about your drawing is the chicken scratching.
>>2264906
Thank you, can you point where is symbol? I know of this.
I use photo for face, hair and neck/body no photo.
Sorry for english, draw American girl, live American dream
Some utter shit.
>>2264915
the eyes specially. I'd say the lips too but I dont know. Post the reference and lets see
>>2264920
You don't need to make it look worse by the horrendous presentation though. The muddy photo that looks like it was taken with a cellphone in 2003 makes it appear that much more amateur. Could probably look somewhat decent with some solid inkinga actually
>>2264920
loomis
>>2264925
I try to make lip bite instead of smile
I must fix lines, always trouble since child unfortunately
Thank you
>>2264169
I'm going to ignore your rules. You are literally tumblr
>>2264200
Kill yourself Zamii
>>2264642
wait.... is this a skinny jontron and his sick bird
Still trying to figure out hands and how stuff works
>>2264937
The lips on your drawing dont look like they are biten, search for references for it. And yes, the eyes are quite symbol. Also, the colours of the eyes dont match, or it was in purpose?
i'm trying to do quick 45 second figure sketches and have been for a year and a few months and i don't feel like it's yielding any progress
what am i doing wrong?
Wip city thing
>>2265693
Fucking dropped image
>>2265696
Well, if you've dropped it, you should pick it up, don't you think?
>>2265687
If you draw everey two weeks for an hour for a year that doesn't really count as a year of practice
>>2265687
I don't know i can only see 1 page. if u drew only 1 page in a year time it isnt that much
>>2265736
I know it's you by your typing habits, Malaysia.
literally just made a design change to a myself in a comic today
>>2266159
jesus man.
>>2266159
15 year old who wants to make the next big webcomic detected
Critiques definitely welcome. Crossposted from the draw thread. Trying to give it a melty look but am having trouble would love some tips about doing that.
>>2265811
im Poland leave me alone u bully
Concept art for a poster I have to do.
Rough draft.
Please do your worst /ic/
My boipussy can take it.
rate my spaceship lads
>>2266262
Dank/10
Well, my first drawing from this year. Last time I picked up a pencil almost a year ago.
Found a cool pen.
>>2266705
Sorry, resize
>>2266302
I call bs.
>>2266705
How do you get shading like that? Did you draw it from reference?
now that i'm single, i can draw again
Feedback pls.
>>2266249
Edgy demonic katana/10
>>2267355
>katana
That's clearly a scythe.
>>2264250
Well, I like it.
Some of them, at least.
>>2267308
way too much musculature on arms, she looks like transvestite.
U dont shade the part under the jaw at this angle with hard shadows, skin gets tenser and there is subtle change in values.
Her gloves are too short it looks dumb wearing too smal gloves the blood will stop circulating in her fingers.
her mouth at this angle would be more like " :( " rather than " :) "
give her longer feet those are really small
U need to break that line between her forearm and arm on her right arm.
>>2267308
Woman's face on a man's body mate.
>>2267359
Then I recommend you to use better references, because that scythe looks pretty useless with that blade curved inwards
>>2267987
Don't tell me what to do I didn't draw that shit. You're just mad that you can't recognize archaic farming tools.
>>2264280
please
please sharpen your pencil
>>2266615
Joel?
>>2267626
>Her gloves are too short
Bro do you even fashion?
>>2266718
good moose
warm up stuff from today
shit picture but this turned out way better than expected
shitting around in my sketchbook
Shitting around 2
>>2268301
Nice, I really like the use of yarn as hairbands
>>2264213
digging big ones, bottom ones look like copy paste tumblr autism though
>>2265425
cant tell if i like this or not
lighten up your room
I've been working on this for a few days, but just finished the second arm 10 minutes ago
Here's some of my crappy art.
>>2268515
((Sorry about the orientation I took the pics vertically)).
>>2268517
>>2264169
earlier today, didnt draw anything in the last hour lol
Do I have a future in dumb gag comics?
[not final art obviously]
>>2268761
I like the dumb gag, but your going to have to finish this or show an example of a finished work for a proper critique.
>>2268697
reported.
I drew my dick
working on my first real painting. started 2 weeks ago with some practising. no drawing experience so this is my first work that id like to be good. btw its my son. working on atm
Kinda new to working without blacklines and very new to colour, any tips on what I can do better? From my perspective doing any kind of definition seems really difficult but I'm just there's a lot more than that wrong with this as I'm just doodling really
>>2269443
Sorry for bad englando - shows me for trying to make a post at 3am
>>2269443
>iscribble
this kills the aesthete.
>>2269448
?
Sorry I dunno what iscribble is?
>>2268697
how do you get a flat value with traditional
it's not perfect, but I drew it pretty quickly so eh
>>2269457
i right now for that flat value i'm using a Prismacolor marker.
the number is is Pb-156. should say F 20% on the side. also felt tip pens so the ink doesnt bleed when you start applying the marker.
>>2268332
thanks, I didn't draw the small stuff in the bottom right corner. Drawpile is like flockmod, where a bunch of people can draw on the same canvas at once
idk sketch, i'll make a painting from this
not very good but I felt like doodling
sorry I'm eva trash
>>2269559
size down your image
>>2269520
me again, nother sketch
I'm sorry
>>2269075
Very small anon
>>2269708
T-thanks
>>2269561
i was on mobile, whoops
The past few hours actually. Coming to a close now.
>>2270023
its not bad but i wouldn't draw each hair strand. would be easier to do the volumes of hair and color appropriately,and the hatching on the dress doesn't give us much depth to the image. look into a marker for some values possibly. keep at it anon
I was tired
>>2270042
tried to use your crit
from days of heaven of malick
>>2270219
another
Idk dudes I feel like a lot of you need to try a bit harder.
>>2270200
i do like it more than the first.
work on some of the anatomy issues like neck size and placement of the shoulders etc.
Two small very crap self portraits from a mirror
Wanted to draw kankers and stylize them to my liking a little was pretty fun.
critique please
Any tips?
Is that you?
>>2270666
stop symbol drawing
>>2270666
Not bad at all.
How small is the drawing? It looks like you're losing some detail by using big lines condensed into a small space.
>>2270281
They're both good. The shading on the left one is particularly effective.
Tone and shadow is so hard for me. I like what you've done.
R8?
based character.
>>2270703
You have a wonderful shading technique that is making me jealous as fuck.
Dont really like the outlines though.
Shit all over me.
>>2270708
I'd like to know how to drawn without outlines
>>2270712
You dont need to get rid of them obviously, just soften the outline. Its jarring.
>>2270710
looks like you already shit over the canvas
>>2265655
i really like that picture
>>2266740
Now that im getting in a relationship i can draw again
>>2264603
I love the cat expression!
>>2270037
new ghost is shit. Drawing is pretty good but the text doesn't quite fit the subject matter in my opinion.
Horse.
Head is little wrong, but...
Just a small drawing i did the other day while it was raining. Open to criticism.
>>2271280
Horses aren't built like racing dogs. Use ref.
here goes nothiiiiiiiiiiing
I'm having a rough time with lips. Feel free to shit/crit/rate.
>>2271435
drawing looks good, but shit camera angle lmao.
>>2271445
how do you draw those thin lines with ballpoints pen
>>2271466
It's a fountain pen. Extra fine lamy safari.
>>2269610
Her face being profile totally kills the depth, totally flatsville broham.
>>2271090
I dont mind it, Meliora definitley wasnt as fun to listen to or i guess as catchy as infestissumam, but there were still a few good jams on the album, far as the costime change I think I like the new direction aside from papa.
Oh and the text yes, I dont have a very strong library of fonts, im workin on it though.
Please enjoy this cooler papa drawing.
>>2271511
huh whoops
>>2271403
I dont get it. It look doggy in the head not the body.
All I could come up with in the last remaining 30 minutes of this shitty short day.
I want to be good at lineart or however its called, hows this?
>>2270666
>mfw
I wanna know what you think about this, made it ten minutes ago
here, took about an hour.
>>2273681
ye, yeah, I fucked up, didn't rotate this shit.
Filename says it all.
>>2270671
look up how mechanics work, stuff like hydraulics and ball joints and shit like that. Also, construction, son! Your pic looks flat af, so study form and perspective, aka, draw boxes.. lots of them.
>>2273683
nice. do you use a pen for the watercolour? thinking about getting one.
>>2273681
You could try incorporating a more dynamic line of action into your sketches, most of them look very rigid with only one exception.
>>2273686
Omg, you are so frikken talented, did your really make that in just 30 min?
>>2273696
I did, but it took me four, maybe five years of practice to get to that level. There are many others out there better than me.
>>2273694
I use a pen, Pilot hi-tec C, nice, tiny lines, though watercolor is pretty fun too.
Sorry it didn't come out very good, my camera sucks.
Any pointers?
>>2273705
yeah, git gud instead of posting something not yours :^)
>>2273706
lol you got me
I was hoping to play a merry little jest on my /ic/ friends
Can I get the R8?
>>2272633
Came around to add legs today, they took as long as the uper body.
Still want some Critique, the way I keep drawing hair and clothing is bothering me (more than the rest of it).
>>2265655
More pls
>>2267307
dank
Xmen
Morrigan dark stalkers
Warmin up
>>2273947
If what you're drawing is an adult, head's too big. Because of the bone structure of the face, can't really tell if man or woman. Hair isn't too bad, probably the only part I wouldn't change actually. T-shirt is ok except for the bit around her(?) right boob, unless she purposely tucked the fabric under her tit, it shouldn't form the shape like that. Legs could use better definition instead of being straight cylinders, feet are too small. That about sums up my gripes with it.
>>2268502
a few days?!
>>2268502
Hands are too small, especially for the arm in the middle of the paper.
been practicing expressions
>>2270707
good shit man. your stuff seems to get ignored an awful lot for its quality. No complaints except the aura seems a little lazy. You should really get to working on your coloring and rendering, you're at the point where it wouldn't be polishing a turd, but legitimately improving the quality of the picture.
Experiment with dynamic pose
Sure, i'll bite.
>>2274811
I want critique. Be harsh, I'm not some little shit who can't detach themselves from their work like op.
The only thing I've done digitally is pixel art and I have a hard time grasping shading and light. As you can see even in greyscale I'm having issues defining forms. Ignore the fact that the creature looks like it has downs syndrom, any advice on how to handle lights better and make objects look less flat?
>>2274908
Objects look flat when there isn't any contrast. So make more liberal use of the extreme ends of the spectrum. Other than that you seem to have a solid grasp of the fundamentals.
I draw chubby pokemans for fun
>>2274142
Thanks, to be honest I always draw female heads like that, so I gota figure that out now.
I didn't expected the hair to be actualy ok, since its the first time I drew it that way instead just outlining the whole haircut, so thats good news.
I will try to force myself to use reference that should help with most problems I hope but drawing clothes is still my biggest problem, even with reference.
>>2274927
Will do and thanks. Looks like it's just a matter of practice then. I still feel like my images feel forced when it comes to shading, but I guess I'll just have to keep working and observing till it stops being so.
crappy sketch
>>2275002
Just had a quick fap before I started on this redline.
>1
Proportions. For a regular sized female, total body length should be between 6-7 heads. Short no less than 5, mostly around 5.5, supermodel tall around 7.5
>2
Do more studies on anatomy before drawing clothes. Your grasp on anatomy is still quite weak, with placement of limbs being off and using basic cylinders to construct them.
>3
Same with the legs, too linear. Also this may be a bit advanced but the pose is a bit masculine from the way she spreads her feet and is slightly confrontational, at odds with her cowering upper body. Buckle the knees inwards to make her body language more submissive. Also, pants usually have a slight break before they end at the feet.
>4
Ties in with 2, try drawing a naked figure with all the musculature before adding on clothes and erasing. It seems counterintuitive and a waste of time, but it helps you with placement and makes sure that perspective is more correct.
Last but not least, keep practicing. Your lines aren't chicken scratches, so that's something. Try drawing with more curves as the human body isn't as rigid as one might think.
>>2275009
Calves are a bit too short, tits seem to be toblerones filled with helium.
>>2275027
Forgot pic
>>2275027
I think you quoted the wrong person pal.
>>2275029
I suggest you refrain from redlining.
>>2275040
Care to help the anon out in my stead then?
so what do you guys think
>>2275061
Epitome of the finest of arts/10
>>2275044
Hey thanks alot I realy appreciate your critique and the aford you put into it.
Everything, including the redline, is very helpful.
People here usualy refer to books when I ask for advice, but I always strugle with anything book related, so this here is exactly what I needed.
>>2275061
belongs in the trash
>>2275069
They're usually right though. It is still worth your while to look up Loomis' tutorials because they are that good. Again, look for the parts where he elaborates on the different parts of human anatomy and do studies on each part before trying to put them together. Good luck and have fun.
>>2269443
Woah. Weird, I actually kinda like this. It looks like the guy in the picture was taken from from a low resolution video.
quick doodle/ face study. Took 15 min and absolutely didn't focused on the eyes and proper lines. with this I wanted to look more at the shading (lost edges/hard edges/soft edges). Best that helped me understand the face and how to shade it was andrew loomis.
so, keep'em coming if u want
Did this at random while in Japanese class
>>2275214
Looks cartoony
Not bad though
What do you think?
>>2275737
>First panel
Contour the skull more, particularly the brow and the cheekbone. Chin's jutting out too much. Shirt has way too many folds, looks more like the guy up and wrapped himself in duct tape or something
>2nd panel
Face is better proportioned but what the fuck is going on? Is that supposed to be shading? Learn light values. Use a larger brush or charcoal and not a pen for shading. If you did this digitally, why the fuck didn't you just enlarge the brush?
>>2275061
>didn't change the filename to "bold and brash"
2/10 belongs in trash
>>2266262
8/10 would defeat reapers in
>>2274098
The tumblr is strong with this one
>>2275741
Alright...Alright. I dindu nuffing because i'am lazy. Crap along if you feel your lazyness through yo ass.
Butt thanks.
>>2264642
What type of paper?
>>2264182
(/artwork/critique/)
>>2264209
EDGE
D
G
E
>>2271514
edgy Prison art
Just finished this. Critiques, please?
halp
tips
>>2274165
I worked on the two arms for a total of 3 to 4 hours working about an hour or so a day
>>2275832
There's something funny about the legs. The way it cuts off at the feet, with them sort of twisting down. I dunno.
>>2271280
I know the struggle
I always want to post in these threads but I never just doodle usually. I did this just now though, but it was 1hr20. I'll take a crit on it if anyone has one, I'm just glad I finally got to participate.
>>2276723
>generic as fuck
>dat hulk neck
>eyes dont match
>floating eyebrows
>>2274785
Sry a little late, but appreciate the feedback ty, I just discovered the crayon/pencil tool on Ms and am literally having a blast drawing with it, so I think ill keep doing stuff with it for a little while. But yeah, coloring my stuff is the next step.
