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Post your nsfw, critique work and so on.
Furry is allowed, however do not over indulge on the subject of furries or their culture. Unnecessarily reporting these anons are strongly discouraged. This thread is dedicated to helping anons improve their erotic drawings and paintings.

Do not start flame wars.
Do not reply to funposters.
Please stay on topic.

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Also, thank you mods and janitors for keeping this thread running well.

Questions about references for drawing porn will be answered.

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>>2246459
is this the "arguing about vagina realism versus stylization" thread?
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Is that...
We'll always miss you bro
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>>2246496
im always here
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>>2246474
Don't worry Arkomeda will save you all, there should be a real in deph vagina tutorial soon, until then use doxy's
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>>2246507
Dont joke around like that faggot.
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>>2246512
>faggot
bye again
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>>2246459
Can you guys please start containing your shit here:>>>/aco/? /ic/ is filled with porn and I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants it to decrease.
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>>2246517
There's a reason why there's a containment thread for this shit.

Quit whining, get some common sense, and just hide the thread if it bothers you. It takes less than two seconds.
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>>2246507
Where did his blog go? what happened to him
did he get sacked?
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how am I doing so far? dunno how to do ass and legs, ass is over left shoulder and tits are mostly hidding knees, only left one is showing, I'm going to ink this so please I really need feedback for this shit, obviously out of confort zone as I'm not copying
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>>2246547
>>2246569
your arms are a bit too long, try mending that
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>>2246517
theres a reason why /ic/ is a nsfw board shithead
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>>2246517
what? we're discussing porn WE are drawing here, so no!
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>>2246517
>I'm not the only one who wants it to decrease.
Why are you even posting this? i hope you understand that it just doesn't matter what you want.
But sure, once you move all concept art on /v/ drawthreads i'll post on /aco/.
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>>2246459
>Furry is allowed
No mention of loli though, or any response from the mods or janitors about the last opening image, which was definitely against the global rules.

Keep drinking the kool-aid from mikufag, guys.
Fill this board with illegal content by all means, do that for 4chan, get it banned in my country why don't you.

>>2246569
hands, bro
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Look, I draw my porn on paper!
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>>2246459
Is that who I think it is? Has he finally returned?
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>>2246649
>illegal content
There is nothing illegal about it where 4chan is hosted, and 4chan does host lolicon content on /b/, demanding not to post it because it's illegal in your country is pretty selfish, you wouldn't go on pixiv to demand to take down all
lolicon content would you? then why do it here?
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>>2246662
>on paper!
At least scan it properly, it's my fetish, buy the paper gets in the way of my suspension of desbilife.
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Why don't you post a link in the old thread If you decide to create a new one?
Anyway, reposting. If possible I'd like you to tear it apart, thx.
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>>2246735
I don't know what gotten into you but you finally drew a cute face, keep doing it.
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>>2246739
I don't think this is the first time I draw a cute face lol. Anyway, you can post opinions, but posts like this don't really help me in any way.
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>>2246743
If they stop you from drawing girls with balloon lips and concave faces they most certainly do help.
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>>2246735
Those gorilla arms though.
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how am doin sempais?
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>>2246750
you fucked up the forshortening ,her right lower arm is way to big,pay atention to weigth distribution becose your caracters pose looks unnatural as fuck.Study perspective,obligatory get yorself references.ceep on going man
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>>2246746
Nah, they don't, since they are poster's opinions about what they think is cute. This kind of posts can't help me in any kind of way.
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>>2246748
I don't see it, but I am sure you are correct on this one. I wanted to put her upper body closer to the viewer and emphasized the perspective too much. Thanks.
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You ever get aroused by your own drawing? How do you stay focused?
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>>2246815
I am used to edging pretty much all day, so i have no problem having a boner all the time.
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>>2246662
*grandma walks in*
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>>2246815

Yes. I often have to go to the bathroom mid drawing to rub one out. Not joking.
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>>2246649
>No mention of loli though, or any response from the mods or janitors about the last opening image, which was definitely against the global rules.

You don't seem to understand how this site is run. This isn't the kind of place where you can run to mods for clear rulings because they don't want community lawyers running back to these precedents.

If it's too much, it'll be erased, if it's not, it will stay. The only thing rules do is set the board culture. After that, it's up to the adults here to read the mood and know what's acceptable. [spoiler] Notice how everyone but you can do that? [/spoiler]

There won't be a slippery slope because this is an 18+ website that isn't full of children. Nobody is going to dump an whole issue of Comic LO because someone drew a little girl, and ponyfags won't start RPing because an MLP gets posted. That's not how things work here. You're supposed to know whats okay and what's not. That's why the phrase "lurk more" exists, and why we have the privilege of light-handed moderators.

You--and we all know this is a singular "you" going back months--need to get with the program.
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>>2246832
>you're the voice of many
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Again, you can take a dump on my art.
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>>2246848
The foreshortening on the girls right forearm (the forearm in the center) seems a little off. And the hand seems a little small.
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>>2246857
How the hell do I manage to miss stuff like this lol. Thanks!
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>>2246848
The cock on the left is kind of high.
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ended up finishing. Line work feels...dead, I dunno. I preferred my initial sketched.
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>>2246901
nope your inked work looks way better than your sketched stuff, just get used to it
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>>2246776
They can inform you of how your art is received by an audience. I agree with anon, this is the first time I've seen you draw an appealing face.

Keep going by the same principles and you could be able to cater to a new audience.
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>>2246848
Cant find anything.bad on this.
Great job as ever bro. Dont listen to that anime tracer faggot and his cocksuckers.
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>>2246901
after your thin lines use thicker brush
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>>2246906
fair enough

>>2246921
that actually looks great to me, I'll keep that in mind.
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>>2246735
your girls would be really cute if you stopped drawing nigger lips
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my friends liked this, but i drew it without consciously appreciating basic shapes before i finalized it. the left leg is where i started adding shading, but i know fuckall about shading so i stopped. it's based on a bailey jay picture, but i made her look russian. the hands are badly formed because my anatomy is either non existent or amateur. it's still kinda better than some of the drawn futa shit i see. oh, and i totally forgot about considering perspective, although your eye is viewing her dead on, so it hurts the pic only a little.

one day at a time.
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>>2246459

guys how much money is there in porn really ? is this something that if you invest into it for a while you can actually make a living with? and by living i mean not just get by each month but have a little bit of a quality of life without working 80 hours a week ?

i need to decide wether to pursue porn to temporarily solve the money issue or if i am better off getting a dayjob and spending free hours working on my actual conceptart skills.

please help
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>>2247007
there are only people who starve who THINK they're artists. that's what they tell me anyway.

if i do get into the porn biz i hope my sexuality stays as narrow as it is now.
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>>2247005
why would you show anyone this
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>>2247016
what's the harm in showing your work?
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>>2247015

I don't know what you mean by that
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>>2247037
Your statement is a mystery too, my friend. I think you're just being an asshole
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>>2247045

what part of

'is this something that if you invest into it for a while you can actually make a living with? and by living i mean not just get by each month but have a little bit of a quality of life without working 80 hours a week ?

i need to decide wether to pursue porn to temporarily solve the money issue or if i am better off getting a dayjob and spending free hours working on my actual conceptart skills'

is unclear?
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>>2247007

Just check out popular artist patreons.

Doxy makes $1,367.03 a week from his patreon, thats $65,617.44 annually.
The average Canadian make 30,000 - 50,000 yearly, so he's doing alright.
And that mother fucker started with MLP porn.

anyway, you should do it for money, you'll just run out of drive and crash and burn, do it cuz you love it.
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>buh doxy makes 60k a year off patreon
yeah, but his art is also very generic and boring, he draws attractive women, but its nothing special in conceptm he has great overly rendered bodies with large titties but he doesnt push any boundries and all ive seen of his work in regards to themes is generic fantasy bullshit thats just mediocre, with as much skill as he has he could be doing a lot of interesting porn but a lot of it is just not very daring and i guess thats why he makes so much money.
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>>2247070

But isn't that just a superstar? Sort of the Mullins of porn art? What is the average porn artists life like?

I know it's extremely hard to talk about 'averages' in art ... but maybey some anons here have some first hand experience, I was hoping.
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>>2247070
I wouldnt look up to doxy, a better artist would be Inoue Kiyoshirou, he is an absolute master. And its more honorable to strive to create something of value, like a story or a large comic book rather than shitting out 4 page colored comics and illustrations for easy patreon dosh.
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>>2246918
>my audience is the only audience worth catering to

Do everyone a favor. Shut up and fucking draw. It's not his job to cater to your weeb tastes. Learn to draw worth a shit so you can make shit you want to see. Why the fuck else are you on /ic/? Comments like yours, >>2246746 and >>2246999 ARE worthless.
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>>2247107
Calm down bbc lol
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I started trying to learn to draw this past July, and I'm not really sure if there's any specific exercise or resource material I should be focusing on right now. I've just been drawing from reference for the past couple weeks, and while I'm happy that I've managed to keep practicing, I feel kind of weird just doing that without dedicating more time to studying materials, and I don't want to stagnate. I tried drawing this from imagination last night/this morning. I know it's really basic but feel free to tell me if there's anything specific that I should be trying to study right now.
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>>2246459
can i get that image without the caption?
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>>2246528
I remember browsing through his blog, but I don't think I ever followed it. Do you have a link or does it not exist anymore or what?
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>>2247140
Can you open it in MSPaint and put white over it?
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>>2247107
>>2247107
different anon, but
>It's not his job to cater to your weeb tastes
You're absolutely right. If theres more money to be made to pander to weeb cucks, Chances are bbcakes might hop onto the wagon. Thats only if bbchuck's audience suddenly drops dead and everyone decides weeb shit is godlike.

From a business standpoint cootiechan's audience likes his/her nigger shit; or his nigger-like features. So in your business notes, make sure to write, "nigger lovers like nigger stuff." Dont mock what he/she does when, s/he actually gets paid.

>Comments like yours, >>2246746 and >>2246999 ARE worthless.
No, these are considerations. bbcc's drawings have nigger features, plus trips dont lie.
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>>2247142
mysteriously vanished
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>>2247151
I miss him. I really really detest every one of you we could of had something good for once and we could of had been given lots of wisdom but of course not we had to have that one or two or several autists ruin everything.
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>>2247176
>I really really detest every one of you
Hey bro, I don't mind loli drawings. It's a real shame /ic/ is full of tumblrcucks who shit their diapers whenever someone draws a loli
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>>2247176
Any advice he gave could be found in the several artbooks we have on here for free (mainly Michael Hampton's book but also a lot of stuff from Successful Drawing). And in all honestly he wasn't that good to begin with.
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>>2247144
>You're absolutely right
No shit, I'm right. All the flavor text you added afterward is irrelevant shit.

>No, these are considerations
And they are worthless.
"I think you should make her hair pink instead of blue" is a suggestions. That doesn't mean it's worth anything or has to be respected because it's dealing with stylistic choices and has nothing to do with technical skill.

Shut up and draw.
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ass

lick

>>2247076
It is a modest life and I wouldn't rather do anything else.
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>>2247145
>mfw you still won't share your gallery

Not even best sailor scout. But I like it.
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>>2247227
>flavor of text irrelevant
explain

i think lip size and head structure is something to mess around with. Im unsure if its bbcs formula, or lack of knowledge. Also the hair color analogy was pretty bad. whats the criteria for "technical skill"
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>>2247070
doxy didn't start with mlp (well, he kinda did, but that was yeaaaaaaaaaaaaars back before anybody at all really knew him)
drawing gay furry femboys under the name of onta was where he first got well known

>>2247075
he draw what sales m8, follow da munny$$$
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>>2247251
>explain
What is there that needs to be explained? It's not his job to cater to you or this thread's dominantly weeb centered stylistic tastes. The faggots here should be learning fundamentals and how to draw shit they like, not pushing their meaningless stylistic preferences onto others who have different stylistic inspirations. That's all there is to it. He's already employeed and has a commission base who enjoy his work. The end.

>I'm going to play dumb and pretend to not understand where technical fundamentals end and stylization beings
Ayy fuck off, you moron.
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>>2247243

Roughly how good are you right now? Are you near Doxy in skill or is his fame really a result of him being super awesome? Because I do think his work is incredibly sexy... but there's other equally awesome artists who make 300-400 on patreon and obviously nowhere near as succesful...
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>>2247261
isnt it his job to cater to an audience? i understand his fanbase already likes his works, but you're implying he shouldnt cater to a larger audience. chances are, he doesnt need to. Isnt it best to grow? when does stylization become a crutch anon?
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>>2247243
that torso is really long kep, didn't you guys just get a polynian, you shouldn't be making these anatomy mistakes anymore

actually polynian proportions probably aren't good to go off of either download design doll and Brek too but he probably doesn't need it.
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>>2247269
>isnt it his job to cater to an audience?

Yeah, and you aren't a part of it. Now shut up and learn to draw shit you want to see. Stop pestering other artists to do the work for you. You're on fucking /ic/. Grind your fundamentals, you lazy piece of shit.
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>>2247276
>pestering artists
Just asking a few questions. Also, when does stylization become a crutch anon
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>>2247280
>Just asking a few questions.

>>1579290
>>2245493
>>2240001
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>>2247285
anon, i want your opinion. I'll hop into the question thread later. Do YOU think theres a point when stylization becomes a crutch?
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>>2247260
>he draw what sales m8, follow da munny$$$
I'd rather make bank off niche demographics than draw boring shit for plebs.
To me artwork is a passion first, and a money making opportunity second, I could care less if im getting paid or not as long as i can draw what i want.
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>>2247295
>make bank off niche demographics

Elaborate on that? I have no idea what this would look like practically. Fetish porn?
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>>2247295
he already made his money off a niche demographic with femboy furries, he actually kinda grew that into one of the main markets of furry porn, and then when he tried to draw more women cause he earnestly just wanted to draw women, then segments of his fanbase started bitching, saying he "sold out" cause he drew women, without thinking that maybe he just like tits, hahahaha
kinda like you're doing now, now that i think of it
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>>2247271
holy shit where do I buy a polynian.
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>>2247353
they're like 50$ or so off amiami
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stumbled over to /ic/. never drawn a penis before. pls help
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>>2247446
get reference
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>>2247450
Have you been doing some anatomy studies? Not bad m8.
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>>2247450
can i have a redline? i fucked up the first post.
i'm >>2247446
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>>2247450
AHHH, i SEE YOU ARE AFTER THEM HARDBLUSH BUCKS AS WELL
HELLO, NEW CHALLENGER
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>>2247452
Only the furthest right was ref, which looks the strongest imo.

>>2247467
sure fam,I was actually already doing it when you asked.

>>2247471
Can't a man draw boipussy FOR THE LOVE?
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>>2247480
ty fam. also yay you at least knew who i was drawing. your boy butts are nice btw.
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>>2247482
Thanks, only recently started drawing gay stuff though.

The biggest problem I saw on your piece was perspective. Mabel and Dip looked like they were on different planes. Draw a horizon and establish a vanishing point to keep their perspective consistent until you can eyeball it.
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>>2247480
WHY CAN'T iT BE BOTH
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Hey! I'm new to drawing porn and digital art. Any critiques on this would be helpful. Also I'm not sure I'm happy with the head design - if anyone could recommend some artists that draw attractive male furry heads I'd appreciate it greatly.
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>>2247534
the head's a bit wonk, the hand's placement on the ground is out of perspective, and that penis head needs some work, but otherwise you seem to know what you're doing

as far as attractive male-ish furry faces, what do you like, more feminine or more masculine headshapes?

i'll come back in a bit with a tutorial kinna thing with how to construct fur heads the ez pz way
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>>2247539
Not the guy but I'd like to see what you have on more feminine ones
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>>2247534
I just save ones from fur threads and tumblr that I like. There are all tipes of males, species, build, feminity.
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I simply hate that the same porn thread mix hetero with homo stuff :(
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>>2247565
dicks is dicks, vajabls is jables
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>>2247565
Good for you, buddy. Just hide the posts if it triggers you so much.
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>>2246848
Left cock seems too high and the length of her legs looks a bit short compared to her long torso. Other then that... I like it!
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>>2246735

http://bbc-chan.tumblr.com/post/130939895168/stretching-process-video

Process video. I guess it explains why the gorilla arms and hands.
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>>2247571
All true. I arched her spine way too much and thus her behind is positioned badly and the legs look short because of that. Another thing I'll fix if I'll decide to ink this one. Thanks.
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>>2247521
I like the way you think.
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>>2247250
he understands he's not good enough yet. that's an admirable thing tbh.
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more of a lewd drawing. Before I go into detail I kept looking at the legs alot but I can't nail what it is that's off.
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>>2247450
>>2247480
Just a little thing I'm noticing.
It seems that you make the ribcage a perfect ellipsoid. In reality, the ribcage's widest point is actually around the lower 3rd...kind of like an egg.

(This problem is very evident in your middle drawing in >>2247450, and the boy's ricage seems to be widest near his armpit >>2247480, which isn't true in reality)
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>>2247648
This is nitpicking combined with bad knowledge of musculature, which makes for a really bad critique.
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I really dont feel like im utilizing SAI as much as i could. Is manga studio better? Also can someone spot check the Lahmians face, im just not....entirely thrilled with it but it still looks decent. I dunno, first time trying out constricter fetish porn
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>>2247648
dog, you forgot about lats...
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C-can I try posting again, /ic/?
I want to think I've improved
Pls no bully ;_;

Oh and also, if you don't understand this pic, she's a dullahan. Her head pops off.
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>>2247693
the cock is great everything else is poop

the weirdest things are (in this order):


the yo-landi hairline
the missing shoulder
the shitty face
the deformed fingers
the lazy lips
your whole concept of foreshortening
meme nose
default anime eyes
meme chin
and last of all the thighs are incorrect but the right one could be considered ok stylistically


git gud
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>>2247655
>>2247682
Nope, sorry.
You guys are either terrible or retarded.
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>>2247724
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>>2247724
Haha, you are shit, and you know it.
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>>2247693
>"blue his wife, with a blue little window, and a blue corvette," kek.

I dig this image. I drew the same perspective a month ago, and like you ifucked it up.
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>>2247693
The head looks good, the hands look good, the rendering looks good, the dick is sweet, but what on earth is going on with that anatomy?
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>>2247176
He's still drawing stuff. He has a stream and a patreon that he regularly posts to.

You can find them if you're determined and resourceful enough.
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>>2247829
but his dick is not blue

>Da Ba Dee Da Ba Die
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>>2247693
the framing is the worst of it, the close up shows so little of the body it's not easy to catch what is going on
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>>2247730
>>2247799
Look, guys
His ribcages are a little off and I'm pointing it out. Yes, it's a nitpicky thing, but I point it out because he's at a level where understanding this little detail will make his figures look and feel so much better.

I would say give him a better critique, but this thread is so hug-boxy that you would probably just struggle to say something and end up saying something dumb like, "A-anatomy?"

/ic/ is so conditioned to do exactly the opposite of the WHOLE intention of this board, essentially rendering /ic/ useless
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>>2247886
>I would say give him a better critique,

Hey, I'm the anon you were critiquing. If you had some more in depth feedback I'd like to hear it. I can evaluate criticism for myself and whether or not it's applicable.
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>>2247661
I like this a lot.
Do you have a blog?
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>>2247976
I have a tumblr but its mostly just a picture dump
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>>2247851
detached head girl from monster musume
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Can someone please tell me how to go about building a fanbase? What websites should I upload to if I'm just starting out? I was also thinking of opening up free nsfw requests, not sure if that would help. Would really appreciate some help.
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>>2247143
no, i want the unresized picture without the text
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>>2246662
whats your blog?
also how did you do that vaginashading? any method to it?
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>>2248056
I'd like to see it
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>>2248244
grouchybadger.tumblr
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Fuck these fucking faggots.

fuck your smh, fuck your tbh, and fuck your fam.

Fuck all-a you fucking fucksticks.
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>>2248399
Shut up and draw
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>>2248399
tbh you need to calm down fam, smh
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current thing I'm working on.
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>>2248401
>he did the thing i dont like x'DDDDDDDDDDD
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>>2248515
any tips on lineart, construction, or shading?
you use reference?
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>>2248515
This one doesn't seem over refereced at all. Great job!
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>>2248515
notice me senpai
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>>2248515
Great pic. Love every aspect of it. The only thing that seems a bit off is the blonde's right hand. Even though the succubus isn't holding her she acts like she's forced into that position. I think you should put that hand in a more natural position, where she's struggling to get free or something along these lines. If she's tied up or in chains you should make it more clear imo.
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>>2248515
nice. but mind the background. the perspective is way off. don't cram the hallway into your composition.
the other thing which doesn't work yet is the vicitim's right arm, but a fellow anon already pointed that out to you.
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>>2248657
>>2248663
Thank for the feedback. Guy guy who commissioned me wanted Botha arms up though. The perspective is definity off on the background. Gotta work on that.
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>>2248731
A quick fix, still keeping in terms with your clients wishes would be the succubus holding both her arms crossed together.
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>>2248657
I cant actually agree with this criticism
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>>2248800
If you don't agree at least let people know why. Right now your post has no weight apart of reflecting your subjective opinion.
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>>2248804
I just don't see the problem with the hand to be honest. Seems like it's something you personally would do differently but I cant see how it would change the aesthetic value of the image.
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>>2248552
I used reference the background and the wings. What kind of tips are you looking for more specifically? For shading at least I've being trying to have more hard edges and visable brush strokes. It looks better then a super airbrushed look Imo.
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>>2248807
The hand being in a more natural pose would make much more sense and would add to the overall storytelling of the illustration. Right now it doesn't look thought through and thus sloppy. With just a little alteration the piece would look much better, plus it would make the story behind it more believable. Touches like this are what make good porn illustrations really good and above the average.
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>>2248812
Isn't this just a tl;dr for
>muh taste
What's a more natural pose here?
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>>2248813
I gave an explanation why that hand seems off (and I wasn't the only one thinking that). I understand this might seem nitpicking but as I said these are details that can only make the illustration better. Even if he doesn't make any adjustments to that hand, the piece will still be above average and good, but it's still an issue worth mentioning.
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>>2246459
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Thoughts?
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>>2247005
Ch-check the top stub.
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>>2247572
Man, that is a lot of corrections (pose and otherwise). But the end result is really good, so I guess that works for you. What is the point of tracing the lines so many times though? I usually just have a sketch, rough version with volume/anatomy, and the final lines.

Either way, looks good.
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>>2248890
That's because I start drawing without a final image in mind so I just try different poses until I get something that inspires me to keep going until I have the final image. It's different when I exactly know what I'm going to draw. Well, I am pretty fast when it comes to lineart, so I don't care about the amount of corrections and revisions I make.
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>>2248900
Thats cool. I guess that frees you up and makes things more spontaneous. I gotta try that one of these days.
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>>2247572
Are you a chick?
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>>2247645
what kind of pen is that that you put your stylus in? i have mine in a pilot G2
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>>2248871
I would say make the core of the shadows on her a warmer tone or change the background. The legs still need to be resolved, the one on our left should be more in line with her thigh, and the one on our right should be more foreshortened
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>>2248916
Nope.
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>>2247878
i have no idea who he is but i'm intrigued could somebody drop a link?
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>>2246517
Art is art, whether it's erotic or not. A shit ton of ero artists have their works on high class art museums and in universities. So don't be one of those faggots anon
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>>2248515
Looks very good, I am just unsure about the pose altogether
If she's pinning her arms up, while also slamming down on dick, wouldn't everything become awkward real quick? Since she's applying forces in two opposite directions, more or less
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>>2246459

guys how do i find a fetish i can conquer?
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As usual, it's been a while.
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>>2249018
>Sexualizing Ajna
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>>2249018
Do a quick crash course on how to draw knees. This hurts to look at.
Excluding this and other small anatomy blunders, the coloring and line-art are pretty neat.
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>>2246818
"But in my day, we only had one vagina."
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>>2248905
I like to think about it the same way, but maybe it's just that I am bad at visualizing stuff in my mind before putting it on paper.

Here's another one:
http://bbc-chan.tumblr.com/post/131043662828/swimming-club-manager-process-video
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>>2248931
I think it might be a pilot, I was looking at some alternative s-pens with erasers online and this diy was what I found in one of the user reviews. I heard too many people complain about offset so I was scared away from them all. This diy was actually satisfying especially the triangular sleeve.
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>>2246901
have a page you post on?
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