why isnt there a full translation of Nudist Beach ni Shuugakuryokou de ?
Lurk more.
well i cant complain cause the last chapter was released 5 weeks ago
seems like the translator is busy
>>4021151
lurk THE FUCK more
>>4021125
YOU CUNT
if someone cant post link to translated chapters 7 - 9 i would be very thankful
>>4021237
As would I [different poster].
Also does any-one have a address for any archives w CBR or CBZ files?
Here's 1 -7 http://imgur.com/a/QgIkP#0
and here's 8 and 9 http://imgur.com/a/cYMUI/all
>>4023285
You can download these as .zip files and then just rename the file extension to .cbr
>>4025553
translation of 8 and 9 just uploaded 1 day ago? nice we are first to read the end
>>3995886 is almost at bump limit so we can move here instead of making yet another thread.
>>4029633
...Yeah. Archive for last thread >>3995886: https://archive.moe/h/thread/3995886/ or http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3995886/
IRL workload for the past few weeks is done (sigh) so I'm back to cleaning and filling in the missing sfx/moans for the last 3 parts of >>4025553.
Nogard said he might try decensoring the tank scans and he's already redone a bit of redrawing for them.
Sands, the new ending text for each chapter needs translating, but I suspect it's only "chapter ___ end", etc.
>>4032438
>Sands, the new ending text for each chapter needs translating, but I suspect it's only "chapter ___ end", etc
Correct. The first 8 chapters just say "End of chapter X".
The eighth chapter actually has two ending notes, the first one is "End of chapter 8" at page 220 in tank numbering, and then "The end [conclusion]" at page 224. The final page says "School trip to the yarimoku beach!! / The end".
The extra pages by the guest artists also need translating. I have done most of it. Need help with three things:
I can't make out some of the kanji in the top of the attached image.
秋穂ちゃんはもっと
いい??になれる。。。
??のJKは
みんなちゃんと
「女」でステキッス!
Guessing:
Akiho-chan is better this way, I think...
Nah, just kidding.
All your girls are beautiful!
I'm not sure about the translation of the second sentence in the bottom image.
シャイ娘の頃からお世話になってました!
Guessing:
I owe you for the the time with the shy girl.
I also don't know pronunciation of the two artists names. Several possible. Anyone know?
>>4021125
I'm kinda new in these threads, so i hope no one will mind if I ask, is anyone re-editing text into glorious tank scans?
>>4032705
Yes we still are, we've been working on it already. Either we release it on sadpanda as the entire thing or in parts again, but we might post the tank edits here first.
But we'll still release the magazine version of the last few parts on sadpanda. The delay for that is all my fault.
Right now, only the color part hasn't had its magazine raw released yet, hopefully I finish the last two black-and-white parts before that happens.
Mixing magazine and tankoubon versions is not allowed so we have to. But in the meantime you can read the magazine one here >>4025553.
>>4032504
Seems no one is scanning all of the extras properly, bummer. I'll edit what you and Nogard have translated of them, but most aren't high-quality enough to be included in the tank gallery.
Maybe I'll just post those here and put up a zip or imgur or separate torrent. Not to mention all the twitter sketches/previews.
>>4032871
No problem,i was worried that no one will touch tank scans, now I'm glad I was wrong
>>4032871
Just to make it clear, I don't know much about this project since I have no interest in the book, but a lot of people apparently do.
>Mixing magazine and tankoubon versions is not allowed so we have to.
I'm pretty sure you are allowed to mix sources. I have galleries that mix magazine and tank translations, and I've never had any trouble with that. The only thing that could happen is that once someone reedits the magazine chapters, they could replace your gallery, but since you're going to reedit them yourself, that shouldn't be an issue.
Working on the magazine version when the tank is out seems like a huge waste of everyone's time. If you're halfway done with a magazine chapter, I can understand if you want to finish and release that one, but I would urge against starting any new magazine chapter if the tank is available.
If you insist on not mixing the two, you should just drop whatever magazine chapter remains and make a new gallery for the tank version: one for chapter 1-8 (Magazine), one for chapter 9-10 (tankoubon). Then once you start reediting old chapters, you can either replace everything in the first gallery and delete the second one, or add them to the second one and keep the first around.
Again, I don't care about this title, and maybe I've misunderstood something since I've just read a few posts, but I wanted to point out that you shouldn't feel forced to worked with shitty magazine scans. I think everyone would be happier if you didn't.
>>4033277
I agree with this.
>>4033277
The magazine chapters still not on exhentai are all halfway done since they got the last two raw chapters early.
The imgur links have all of them translated and the last three ones are only missing the sex sounds, labels for sound effects and a bit of redrawing.
>>4032438
>>4032871
Man, this decensoring is harder than I thought. I mean, I can do it, but only if you want the thing next year, ha, ha.
I can do some stuff for really crucial pages, but even copying the old clean jobs in is tough work.
Just let me know if there are any particular pages that really, really need work and I'll work on them.
>>4033681
Well, just leave it to the veteran decensorers then. It's out of my league too. We better just work on our pages.
Maybe I could save up for a commission but not for quite some time, we can just get the tank out first.
We can at least have the tank assessed for decensoring costs through email, like what belldandy100 on blogspot offers (can't post a link because of spam filter). I'll try to get in touch.
>>4033681
>>4034958
Bump, you all right guys?
It's okay, let the veterans handle the decensoring if it comes to that.
We did get this lovely uncensored pussy from the rusemaster himself at the start.
>>4032504
Seconding this
Jesus God stop posting these threads, my dick can't take it
>>4025553
Thanks lots
I don't really care if shiwasunookina is male or female. He or she uploaded this photo, while making a Taiwan trip. Are those male or female fingers? Keep in mind, that those fingers created your favorite hentai manga including Nudist Beach ni Shuugakuryokou de.
https://twitter.com/siwasunookina/status/636128717190774784
>>4043406
it's all fake anyways...
remember that pretty chinese girl singing so well at the beijing olympics?
>>4043406
Who says they're his fingers?
anyone know what the next work will be?
>>4047131
Orgy on a spaceship, lol
>>4047264
I'm okay with this! as long as it includes some version of the big titted teacher from the beach i'll be happy!
>>4047264
This would be new and interesting for okina, I think all his works, especially all his tankoubons have been about highschool, or middle school.
>>4047264
> Space, the final Fucktier. These are the voyages of the Starship Enterpussy. It's five year mission, to explore strange new positions, to seek out new partners and cultures, to boldly go where no orgasm has gone before!
>>4021125
Over here bracing myself for the eventual disappointment of queen bee getting the anime license.
>>4050924
Referring to Pisu Hame
>>4050929
I feel you bro! Still bitter about them skipping over the cheerleader chapter!
>>4050940
And not about them not animating shit but just showing moving stills? O.O
>>4049063
His older works weren't. And that's not really true about his works on idols.
>>4021125
T-theres at least a small chance this will get an animation, right? I need to see sensei getting it.
>>4053181
You honestly believe Queen Bee is gonna do original animation?
>>4025553
Thank you anon!
>>4053181
It would be a novelty to hear voices
>>4053181
Honest, just practice flash for 2 months and you are QueenBeer tier
I'm just hoping someone eventually translates Okina's old stuff. I think I like his older style a bit more. http://exhentai.org/g/136181/e86d596c2c/ comes to mind.
Will this thread just die? Should we continue with frequent shiwasu threads?
>>4057016
still a lot of shiwasu works need a translation if people would do it
>>4057016
Keep this alive until the translator anons quit slowpoking.
>>4025553
just a head's up, the links to 8 and 9 don't work any more. main page opens, but clicking on any file 404's
did someone say nudist beach?
One whole manga of vanilla sex. What a let down.
This series had two moods:
-semi-realistic shyness with forbidden sex
-girls being total sluts as the you hit your whole class
the former really formed with the build-up over the first chapter then. peaked with the nerd girls. It fell apart with the next pair, switching it to the next mood. That peaked with the volleyball girls and was kind of boring by the final "main" girl.
I still want to see the last virgin and the girl who got skipped get banged in the hotel though.
>>4060228
>It fell apart with the next pair
but Machi and Dainose are top tier, anon
And I'm pretty sure the airhead is a virgin too, or was until that night...
Fucking okina; he really owe us that final threesome
>>4060210
The real letdown was everyone boning the class rep in a tent instead of an orgy out on the sand.
Wonder is Okina will use the teacher again for another project. Still such a shame she got so little time. At least she was the only one to get anal.
>>4060332
>>4025553
imgur just updated and the new layout is worse, and you can't change it normally. But here's a way to get the old layout back (for now)
1 to 7: http://imgur.com/a/QgIkP/layout/horizontal/#0
8 to 9: http://imgur.com/a/cYMUI/layout/horizontal/#0
It works with these albums, but not all of them.
I hope SNO goes back to some wacky shounen antics like Shining Musume or Pisu Hame with their next book.
>sensei barely gets 3 pages
Why? Fucking faggot author.
>>4025554
I'm trying to download the first gallery, but it won't work. Maybe it has too many images to generate the zip. I check exhentai regularly so I'll probably find your upload when you finish it
So was there any possibility of the group actually doing the translations working on the other okina works? There are quite a few missing translations still.
>>4067195
which ones?
>>4067199
http://exhentai.org/g/136181/e86d596c2c/
http://exhentai.org/g/5435/96506650cd/
http://exhentai.org/g/94652/bf2dfcf3f3/
http://exhentai.org/g/144225/7d885ea324/
http://exhentai.org/g/811009/8c1c505c89/ last 10 pages of ch6. There are quite a few missing.
Love has to be a personal favorite of mine just because it was one of the first ever hentai manga I read. God 1997 was a long time ago.
>>4064679
It works for me.
>>4032504
It's an old post, but the thread is still fresh, so...
> ??のJKは
先生のJKは
"all of sensei's (=your) high school girls are just great women"
JK in Japanese means "joshi kousei" = "high school girl"
>>4067357
Guess there's little to no interest in Okina's old works, huh?
>>4069397
too old
Someone who speaks Japanese should ask him if he plans to add any extra chapters like he did for pisu. I click on this thread just for the possibility of seeing the last two girls get it
>>4069390
Thanks! That clears it up quite a bit. Looking at it again I see I have read もっと instead of きっと, and the other unknown word is probably 奥さん. So the whole thing would be
秋穂ちゃんはきっと
いい奥さんになれる・・・
先生のJKは
みんなちゃんと
「女」でステキッス!
Akiho-chan will surely make a fine wife.
Your high school girls are all beautiful women.
(I wonder if he's alluding to the adult versions of them, since it's 「女」 and not just 女.)
Any input on the questionable sentence in the bottom picture?
>>4069920
Hey. Sorry for the silence, going through some shit right now. But still alive.
>>4070808
If he's game I'm game, but it'll have to wait until after the beach tank is done. Also I have less time to spare, so maybe less frills.
Have you heard about Kasuga399 work? He's drawn something similar, with a story in a nude college. I'm looking forward for translation and decensoring for this :
http://nhentai.net/g/122148/
http://nhentai.net/g/122149/
There's a following for this on R18 where they do nude Olympics.
>>4070828
If anyone wants to translate I can likely do the editing. Not likely to the standard of yours truly though, but I'd be very happy to help.
How long until this is finished, because I can only see the temporary translation for chapters 8-9.
Or is the project dead
>>4071957
But this frame is from chapter 7, so now I'm confused. Is that just a symbol pic to anounce something completely new? Is it a tease for a sequel? :o
>>4072178
Don't have any patience?
>>4073566
new whatever.
twitter has a different story samples
>>4067357
>>4070808
I can't access sad panda since forever so I don't know which works these are. At the moment I'm swamped but I can check it out if you give names or nhentai links.
>>4070899
No thanks.
>>4072178
There is no planned release date, but it's not abandoned. Other guy gets done when he gets done.
>>4074771
http://nhentai.net/g/33350/
http://nhentai.net/g/1935/
http://nhentai.net/g/24276/
some here http://nhentai.net/g/112919/ http://nhentai.net/g/133466/ and my personal favorite
http://nhentai.net/g/32799/ was some of my first faps ever.
>>4072178
You can't see or download it? Made mirrors:
1-7: http://www35.zippyshare.com/v/lCz8XOuv/file.html
8-9: http://www35.zippyshare.com/v/gVEHWn0f/file.html
This really deserves an OVA.
(Not by Queen Bee though because they're trash)
>>4084052
Queen Bee already mutilated other manga by Shiwasu no Okina. The same thing will happen here, probably.
>>4084098
>this will never be properly animated
>have to settle for that tweening bullshit
life is shit
>>4084098
Dunno if I'd call it mutilated... Maybe I'd call it "Too close to the original: pointless"
>>4084098
Queen Bee was a perfect adaptation. Probably the best of Hentai manga adaptation ever.
>>4084385
>Queen Bee was a perfect adaptation.
26 new pages of beach confirmed, 28/10
Who can read moon?
>>4084944
It says Okina... but not beach...?
>>4084944
I thought the story was already over. Isn't that the reason it got a tankobon release?
>>4084946
No idea.
Begins with "beach vacation" but might as well say "from the author that brought you...*** now his new story...***"
>>4084944
女子中〇生に迫る手は
Nope doesn't look like a continuation.
also looks like a loli is the main character so also fuck okina for only giving us 4 pages of sensei. That beach thing looks like a booklet he'll sell at winter comiket.
>>4084944
It's a different series, but about a school trip again, this time it seems to be set at a ryokan, Japanese style hotel.
"On the evening of the school trip... someone is reaching for middle school girls... first pages in color, a 26 page prologue!"
Shiwasu no Okina
[Noone is going to wake up]
>>4085048
Girl's last name is 来栖, which could be 10 different pronunciations or so, but let's call her Kisai.
>>4085313
is there a set release date? Shiwasu no Okina is literally the only artist I try to follow.
>>4085313
Ever happen to decide if you were going to do another okina tank possibly?
>>4084385
>>4085313
Hey. Went through a bad spell for a while, but situation's improved now so I'll try to speed up. Always laaate...
We're never going to get higher-quality scans of the tank extras, are we? They must be out there.
At least here's one page translated. Going by the previous threads this is from an 8-page booklet.
>>4088088
And the only reason we have it is SnO himself posted it on Twitter
Labels are based on the translation by Sands in http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3995886/#q4020522
>Kotegawa Ayame, 154 cm tall
>Even though she seems obsessed with Suemori, she's actually desperate for a boyfriend.
>She thinks that a serious, gentle guy would fit her, but if she becomes attracted to a brash guy it would just be confusing.
>Actually she has the face of a main heroine.
>(up arrow) From here up, straight hair.
>(down arrow) From here down, perm.
>D cup
>Well-shaped breasts, both the areolas and the nipples are beautiful
>Thick straight pubic hair
Ueda Keika, 163 cm tall
>Part of Suemori's trio, her role is to keep Kotegawa from worrying too much about Suemori.
>She's a cool and philosophical character, but is surprisingly uninhibited when it comes to sex, and likes to sleep around.
>If you get along with her, you might have a shot.
>B cup
>Slender model type body
>Vertically growing pubic hair (?)
>Darkish mons (?)
Adjusted it to make it fit and not cover up the art too much or more than the original. The last two items also confused me but I left them as is.
Proper scans for everything when?
>>4088108
Glad to see your back, and hope everything is ok.
>>4084098
Meant to link to >>4084374 not >>4084385, sorry Nogard.
>>4088108
Here's the rest of what extras we have which don't have a proper scan. Some have translations by Sands but he said they're "pretty bad". The rest still don't, I think?
http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3995886/#q4003078
>Sensei was in a western porno.
>The woman doing the irrumatio with her was very helpful.
- "In porn" or "in a porn film", just one? Oh English.
- Maybe "This woman doing irrumatio with her was very helpful. She showed her the ropes".
- To me the helping bit sounds vague, maybe they got into bi stuff back then? This woman was one of Sensei's old gang and one of them was fondling her boobs. Must investigate further.
Trying this out next. A better translation would be nice despite the quality.
>>4088155
http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3995886/#q4003078
>top: XX-kun, Suomi-sensei (verb in past tense).
>bottom: oh! oooh!
What could this be about? Did the girls find the other beach? There's a thought balloon at bottom. Are the boys reacting to the girls?
>>4088161
These don't have translations yet. Posting them in order they were first posted in here.
Are they part of another booklet, since >>4088108 has character sketches?
This looks like an afterword but it's not in the tank scan on sadpanda: http://exhentai.org/g/838653/812ab0a7e5/.
>>4088168
Now some stuff that takes place between chapters, or maybe just chapter 1.
>>4088170
I for one would have liked more interaction outside the tent, like in the intro.
>>4088173
And of course a proper full class orgy, but we got separate ones, with unequal space at that.
anybody interested in seeing SnO do some yaoi? with the class trip and idol group manga over it seems like recent opportunities have passed.
Okina just posted a poll on twitter. any idea what they're about? machine translation isn't helping.
https://twitter.com/siwasunookina/status/658080583592091648
this one seems like what to draw next.
https://twitter.com/siwasunookina/status/658188441339822080 any chance one of those are sensei?
>>4088339
So the options are translated by google magic to:
44% Katagiri Sanae
56% Kamiya Nao
Those sound kinda familiar. Who are they again?
>>4088168
Top: How did you like the "Class trip to the nudist beach!!" special bonus pamphlet?
At 2015-08-08, I will have a signing session in Akihabara at MOGURA for the release party, so please come and see me!
Also, August 1st I will DJ at Anikura TMA, if you come and check it out I will be really happy!
I announce information like this, indecent pictures, ongoing work with the movie, etc, on Twitter, so please check it out at @siwasunookuna! Later!
Left: Even though the other side was free they decided to put both shafts in the same hole.
Sensei: Mmh, Mh
sfx: streeetch
Bottom:
(Nud)ist beach class trip!! Specially made pamphlet
(??)/Hit publications
>>4088625
>crossing swords
Sasuga fucking retarded japanese.
>>4088155
>- "In porn" or "in a porn film", just one? Oh English.
I don't know. The line is possibly cut off. It does specify that it was western (non-censored) porn.
>- Maybe "This woman doing irrumatio with her was very helpful. She showed her the ropes".
I think helpful is referring to how she helps push sensei down, not in general.
Since it's discussing the porn, and sensei doesn't have her cap from the beach, perhaps it should be "doing the irrumatio scene".
>>4088161
>What could this be about?
This sort of answers your question:
>>4088170
thought: Whahoo!! Awesome!! Taniguchi's crotch! I see it!!
sfx: haa, haa, haaa
Thank you so much for subscribing to Class trip to the nudist beach!!
In this special bonus pamphlet, I extended the part from the first half of the story when the boys in the class are excitedly peeping on the girls.
Then, in the newly added part where Suomi-sensei has sex, the western porno was something I really wanted to draw (?), so I hope you all enjoy it. /Shiwasu no Okina
>>4088648
Someone seems to have transcribed it last thread but it's the same. http://fgts.jp/h/thread/3995886/#q4003145
スオミ先生の
洋ポルノあるある
イマラチオをー緒に
ファックしてる女が
めっちゃ手伝う
Need translations for the speech and SFX again though I guess the speech is just mmh, mmhah, etc.
But thrust doesn't feel quite right here since the man isn't moving, maybe shove or push?
>>4088648
Yeah, they're talking about how she's pushing her. Without the context, the best I can get is:
Sensei was in a western porn!
The other woman she was fucking with was super helpful with the oral stuff!
>>4088971
I would pay quite a bit for that vid. Someone who can speak japanese should ask him on twitter if there's any chance at more sensei. I loved her sluttyness, overall design, and especially the heart pubic hair, heh. The fact that she's a freak doesn't hurt.
>>4088988
No, someone should ask to work with a English Hentai publisher like Fakku to release Nudist Beach uncensored.
>>4088971
What's your take on あるある? I've only seen it as an expression of sympathy when stuff goes bad for someone, like "It happens, don't worry about it". What is the meaning in this context?
>>4088173
thought: Wooooh!! Ueda's cute little butt!! Both her ass and pussy in plain view!! In plain view...
Ueda: Isn't it (????) !
sfx: tee hee! (or possibly: shriek, squeal)
Ayame: Noo! Stop it with your silly antics!
Hina: OOoohh!
thought: My classmates... they are looking at it... my naked dick... they are really staring!!
Machi: It's throbbing a little, must be us.
Maria: So that's what your dick looks like... not like I expected... (?)
>>4088175
thought: Ah! Uncovered at last, Nogi's and Shizuha's bodies are super erotic!!
Nogi sfx: slurp slurp
Shizuha sfx: Aaaah!
guy sfx: thump thump
thought: So awesome!!
>>4088664
>Need translations for the speech and SFX again
sensei: achk, cough, mmph
sfx: shove, push
>>4088990
Aun is not Wani
>>4088971
>The other woman she was fucking with
Does that mean they were in a bisexual threesome, or just a plain one?
How many shit manga
>>4089115
>Aru-aru
You know better than me but after some google-fu, I came up with:
http://www.tanoshiijapanese.com/dictionary/stroke_order_details.cfm?entry_id=109174
Oh yeah
Of course it is so
It happens
It's possible
Don't worry, it happens
Cheer up, that's average
Apparently it's used on niconico and Twitter in the sense of "oh yeah", "uh huh", "totally" ("no kidding" implied, like "totally happened")
Is Shiwasu no Okina the GOAT?
>>4088088
I have both of them but I need to get a chance to scan them. Maybe tomorrow!
>>4090195
Please do, because otherwise no one will
>>4090555
sorry, here are some quickie cam pics
>>4091086
Who's the token blonde nigger?
>>4091093
i think the word you're looking for is ganguro
>>4089115
Well "aru" in general basically just means "it exists," so it's used in a bunch of different teenage girl slang. You pointed out the "shit happens" use, but there's also just the excited teenage girl version of "something exists."
>>4089312
I'd assume bisexual, since the other woman was already helping push her mouth further down on a dick lol
>>4084944
http://book.dmm.co.jp/detail/b120ahit00622/
Is this it?
>>4091438
give us moar!
and in better quality!
sorry bro i don't have anything else i just found this picture on this web http://www.hitpub.com/aun/contents/?page_id=21
>>4091482
>http://www.hitpub.com/aun/contents/?page_id=21
11198b8c2 28767cd7ef820fc5e7 b29dc/M-863679. rar.html#
this seems to be the DL-link, but it's Premium only.
Any kind anon with a premium rapidgator-account willing to check it out?
>>4091512
needs rapidgator and then .net/file/, then the number.
>>4091083
>>4091085
>>4091086
Wow, thanks. I thought we would never see these. I will start translating them.
Like Other guy said, proper scans would be great, if you have a flatbed scanner. If not, perhaps you could take pictures of the pages we already had? Some of them are pretty low quality (cropped, smudgy, with flash).
>>4091086
Huh. I expected sensei to be the tallest because she's white.
And no naked tanlines, boo.
>>4091083
TEGAWA TAEMI
172 cm tall
left face: Her face makes a boyish impression (?)
right shoulder: Muscular
left arm: Rounded breasts, pink in color
right arm: Roughly cut pubes
bottom: Before I draw Tegawa-san, I burn the image of Saorin (?) in my mind.
She is a high school girl, but more than that, she is unaware of the effect her sexual features has on members of the opposite sex, but her body is mature/ripe, and she is aware of her own attraction to boys and thinks that before long she ought to get some experience.
DAINOSE AI
This picture shows my first draft of Ai, when her eyes were still big.
165 cm tall
head: Her face and hairstyle parody the cool-type actress with the same first name. (TL note: This could be either Ai Hidaka or Ai Togo from Idolmaster.)
breasts: Low breasts. Somewhat darkish nipples and areolas.
pussy: Thick pubic hair. Doesn't care (about grooming).
bottom: Close friend of Taniguchi Akiho. They have different types/personalities but are always together.
Also frequently hangs out with Nagahima Hina, which has similar type/personality, but is completely different. (?)
Doesn't smile a lot and doesn't care for small talk.
She behaves this way since she considers her older brother, who is very loud and outgoing, to be someone to not look up to.
>>4091083
NOGI KIINA
hair: Her hair is recklessly voluminous. The pigtail on the side is a reference to Shimamuu. (TL note: Uzuki Shimamura of Idolmaster)
breasts: Ample and chubby body type.
stomach: Tarepanda tits. (TL note: Tarepanda is a comic character, tare means droopy/saggy.)
leg: Shaves since she thinks her thin pubic hair is very unbecoming.
bottom: For masturbation, she uses Boys' Love (TL note: gay porn) as warm-up, and then pretty rough hardcore hentai manga to cum.
For example, being impregnated by older men.
153 cm tall.
Part of the female otaku duo. No experience with boys. Finds Naotatsu-kun agreeable. Can kind of talk with him.
In her friendship with Inui, she is the orekko. (TL note: less timid person)
INUI SHIZUHA
153 cm tall
Part of the female otaku duo. Cheerful, boisterous type who can't keep her distance. (?) Bokukko. Her manner of speaking is pretty intense, like a serious otaku. (?)
head: Shibafu-san style appearance. (? possibly the military illustrator Shibafu?)
pigtail: one layer (? is this line complete?)
shoulder: Does not cut her bangs in shokkaku style on purpose. (Because it would look too refined.)
breasts: Has nice tits. Even though she is an otaku girl, she has a nice body when she gets naked.
bottom: Thick pubic hair, which grows wild all the way back to her ass.
Some of the kanji are really tough guesswork since they are so blurry. Anyone want to help out? Scanning Anon-san?
>>4088088
First, a fix for this: Darkish mons should be Darkish labia.
>>4091085
SUEMORI SANAKA
152 cm tall
hair: Long lower eyelashes
nipple: Oblong areolas. Small and round nipples.
pussy: Pubic hair is thin but grows sparsely towards her ass.
bottom: Has the position of class sweetheart. Everyone thinks she is is pure but she has a masochistic streak.
People idolize her and think she is unattainable, so she is being (??), but she thought losing her virginity whenever was no big deal.
NAGAHAMA HINA
156 cm tall
head: Sparkling smile.
ear: Thick eyebrows.
armpit: Lazily cut armpit hair.
stomach: Oblong tits. Pin-like nipples.
hip: Pubic hair grows wild.
bottom: The family name Nagahama is from Kyuushuu Banchou (???) Banchou. (Does anyone recognize this?)
Natural airhead, her underwear and bra are frequently visible, talks about her period in a loud voice. Gives superb handjobs.
Nice. Still hoping for better, more complete scans of the two booklets.
>>4094547
>Her face makes a boyish impression (?)
Boyish face
>Rounded breasts, pink in color
Just the nipples?
>Roughly cut pubes
Roughly trimmed pubes
>I burn the image of Saorin (?) in my mind.
Beats me too. Maybe one of those Musume singers since he did a series on them?
All these references are going to be tricky for non-Japanese readers.
>Also frequently hangs out with Nagahima Hina, which has similar type/personality, but is completely different. (?)
Same... Huh? The three of them have pretty different personalities as it is.
>>4094548
>recklessly voluminous.
Wildly? But voluminous just means she has big or thick hair.
>Boys' Love
A fair few would know what that is so we didn't TL note that in ch2, but let's see if it fits.
>she is the orekko. (TL note: less timid person)
Much simpler compared to our old ch2 TL note on that and bokukko.
>shokkaku style
Uh?
>>4098017
>Darkish mons should be Darkish labia.
I figured as much.
>class sweetheart.
Better than class darling, which we used.
>Everyone thinks she is is pure but she has a masochistic streak.
But Nogi is the one with a masochistic streak.
>Lazily cut armpit hair.
Lazily trimmed armpit hair
>Gives superb handjobs.
Oh SnO you tease.
>>4098050
>Just the nipples?
I guess. It just says "Rounded (beautiful) breasts. The color is also pink."
>Same... Huh? The three of them have pretty different personalities as it is.
Yeah, I have no idea what he's getting at here.
>Wildly? But voluminous just means she has big or thick hair.
Strike that. It should be "excessively voluminous".
>Much simpler compared to our old ch2 TL note on that and bokukko.
I think those notes were good, but perhaps they don't need to be repeated in full since people probably already read the previous chapters.
>shokkaku style
>Uh?
It's the name of the hair style. I don't know if it has a name in English. Search Google images for 触覚 if you want to see what it looks like.
The word means "tactile" usually, no idea why it is associated with this hairdo.
>But Nogi is the one with a masochistic streak.
I fucked up here, mixed up machismo with masochism. The word マッチョ (maccho) is also used to describe muscular body builders in Japanese. It should be "but she has a thing for buff guys."
New work is a disgusting bald fat old man raping 16yo high-school students on booze.
>>4021170
>autism
What really got me into this was the presence of the male main char. You don't really see that in hentai, the dude is normally just out of the picture, but this one showed a lot of him. Any suggestions on hentai like this? It's pretty hard to find for me.
>>4100010
most of Shiwasus work is like that. and there is a lot.
Sorry anon-kuns, every time I saw this thread I'd felt bad about flaking, finally got my shit together and scanned everything.
>>4100619
Thanks for the scans anon
Man, this manga is full of wasted potential. Sure the girls are hot but the sex is boring
>>4100010
Aibuka by the same author is great
>>4100010
Almost everything by Yamatogawa.Power Play, Tayu Tayu etc.
>>4100883
>the sex is boring
>sno
Really? IMO shiwasu no okina makes the least boring sex scenes.
>>4101426
Yes, they are two separate booklets.
The first one, I'm not sure. I think it may have been a "first print" booklet? I got it from Manga-oh. But other people in other threads said they didn't get theirs in the first print. So I just named it "bonus booklet".
The other, with the sketches and commentary, is from Toranoana.
>>4101681
Gross.
>>4100619
Thank you very much anon.
shiwasu tweet this today
>>4106869
>fat old men
Goddamnit. I'll read it because it's SnO, but I highly doubt I'll enjoy it
>>4107001
It was OK when SnO did the kinda-fat onii-san.
Also, why are old fat men always so mean in eromanga? How come they are almost never nice?
>>4107139
Hey. Done some work on the extras, waiting for Sands to give revisions and additions since he based their translation on the incomplete blurry pics.
Seems he's busy right now (too) so it would be great if you went over the parts without translations yet and checked the ones that do, using the clear scans.
I'll find a way to merge both of yours when he shows up since space is always an issue.
These don't have translations in this thread yet:
>>4100622 - left page
>>4100623 - everything except upper right
>>4100632 - whole page (can guess, but need an exact one for it and the copyright thing after SnO's name)
>>4100633 - right page
>>4100658 - right page
>>4100660 - whole page
>>4106869
>bald fat old bastard raping literal childrens
When did Okina jumped to the shit side of the force?
>>4101268
I believe he meant that the situations involving sex is the same: All girls are trying to "calm down" one guy. It brings down excitement, similar to how Petit Roid did with the whole "oh, gotta have sex with them else they will explode and destroy the whole city" scenario for 3 whole volumes.
>>4106869
when are there going to be scans of it? I thought COMIC AUN released last month?
>>4107217
Sorry for the wait. I still can't quite decipher Imari's bio, so I decided to post what I have as-is. Any help with that or other questionable lines appreciated. Here is all of the bonus content translated:
http://pastebin.com/2Yf4zaNJ
>>4107602
Interested as well
>>4107602
Yes, but sometimes it takes more than a month to the scan to appear.
There is that chinese website, where they scan all magazines very early, but you have to pay. I wanted to check if at least they already scanned the comic, but I can't remember the website...
>>4107610
No. it's I who should apologize for the wait, to everyone.
Some puzzling parts there, will email you about my best guesses in a while. Especially:
>Our gracious fake foreigner character to which I added a fake foreigner component. (?)
Uhhh? Sensei's clearly a foreigner... Like you said, help with those lines would be nice, anyone?
Well, I'll double check the tank or any untranslated bits we missed, then it's all editing...
>>4108043
It's Mikocon.
>>4107337
What I don't understand is why the other boys are left out for most of the story except for one little scene at the end.
Why make a nudist class trip when there's only one guy having sex while the others are standing around with their thumbs in their asses?
>>4107315
Ugh, the only thing missing to make it true shit would be a younger guy that gets NTRed.
Why can't we have nice chubby guys like the guy from Accel World in Hentai?
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/837525/939257b772/
Yeah, it's NTR with a middle aged man. React.
>>4109592
When people stop getting hard over it. I have no idea why, but there are a lot of people who enjoy NTR and are very vocal about that fact
>>4109725
only if the guy harems her boyfriend too
Not sure if the girl will *fall* or resist the whole ordeal.
I think Okina will make her resist, just to make things interesting.
>>4109589
> epitome of vanilla and happy sex
did you ever read Musume? shit like girls being whored around to "save" their friends, girls having orgy tentacle sex with a demon teddy bear.
Hell even their more recent material like "rape my fiance" and the golden shower scene in the idol one. Nudist Beach is pretty tame compared to most of their work.
>>4108065
He comments on how she is from north Europe, but he calls her build American, and her mother tongue is not English (but she uses English in all her dialogue) - perhaps that's what he means is fake? Different parts of foreigner thrown together without making sense.
Awaiting your email.
>>4110952
Sent some stuff.
We're still far from bump limit of 300 but in the future, someone could just make an Okina general for old and new stuff.
ugh, if this is gonna be another old guy rape comic, they could at least make the guy look kinda cute like their k-on doujins
This video was just posted: https://twitter.com/siwasunookina/status/669773919939727360
It seems the pages we've been seeing are from Comic Aun 2016 01...
>>4114028
Are you trolling or just stupid?
>>4114028
Looks like.
No threats no blackmail no alcohol no bf no drugs. Only age difference.
>>4114106
Apparently you can't read facial expressions. In none of the panels is she enjoying it.
>>4114107
Japanese women are supposed to shout and cry on sex unless they are big whores.
>>4114125
The boy looking under the sheets probably has a crush on her, but isn't the bf.
>>4114125
Not even him but I can't read one word of protest coming from her mouth just saying.
>>4114129
So? It's still NTR then. He doesn't have to be her BF for it to be NTR.
netorare depends of the point of view.
if the old guy is the mc and all monologues come from him, the most it could be its netori
>>4114133
Okina doesn't make bad guys the MC.
>>4114125
>wants to die
That's because we only got the first pages before both reach orgasm. The real fun begins after that.
>>4113996
I can't find this chapter, let alone the first one.
You guys are forgetting that most of the times girls end up enjoying being raped in hentai
>>4078152
this is the place, right?
Stop this
He's going to rape her and nothing will happen to him even with all that people awaked.
Hentai logic strikes again...
>>4119533
the age of SnO doing nice vanilla stuff is over, pack it up.
Fuck just 13 pages!
>>4119554
I don't think you can call his work "nice vanilla". It's not crazy mindrape NTR but it's not vanilla too.
took a long dump, lets continue
>>4119545
It is definitely not NTR tho
guys I Need COMMENTS !
>>4119558
more recent materials like pisu hame have been relatively vanilla compared to earlier stuff like 'guy loses his penis in black magic ritual and gets clones", even pochako was consensual sleeping sex.
>>4119567
he think's she's lovely
Sensei won't dare, don't worry
And this is it, unless you fucks want chapter 2.
Dubs decide, trips confirm.
>>4119578
Weren't you warned by Mikocon just now?
That's disgusting shit and it makes zero sense to me why a dozen people don't stop one filthy rapist.
>>4119584
1. who's that? a mod?
2. they are pretending to sleep
>>4119587
It's the admin. You will probably get a ban from them very soon.
Your explanation still makes no sense. No person outside of Hentai logic pretends to sleep when someone's about to be raped next to him, especially if there's a dozen people in the room.
>>4119590
1 So be it.
2 Makes all sense for them.
If i dont post chp2 tonight i wont be home until sunday. Want or not want?
