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OR alternativley, this one?

>>273375
>>273376
Its unoriginal, simple to make , ugly and doesn't mean anything.

If you want to know what to do, you should start by working on any of the flaws mentioned above.

WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS

>>273375
i-it looks nice anon

Lots of unbalanced white space gives me a sense of unfinished work. But your elements look interesting

>>273387

this

white space is supposed to have a meaning to work properly

the colour scheme is nice and the concept isn't too shallow.

shadows on triangles = no
composition = no

the spacing between the shapes is pretty uncomfortable. the distance between each is varying and the two in the corner are far too low on the image.

Well, was painting part of you process or did you just take someone else's work and turn it into triangles?