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Please im making a logo for a kids clothes dept store.
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>>271727
dafaque is the middle one dawg?
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>>271727
looks like clip art for some shitty telephone start-up

you need to do a mood board.

nothing about it says 'kids clothes'.
none of it is engaging.
terrible colors and choice of type
graphics are boring/bland
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>>271727
i liked it but make it a little more fun like pic related and the kids face look a little awkward.
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>>271727
>Somo

khe?
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>>271727
only having a boy in the design will make people think they don't sell girl's clothes
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>>271765
Es de la costa.
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>>271727
Fucking awesome man! Love it. Target market specific. Like the colours, like the inverted, maybe not the hosting dotted one
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>>271727

Overall not a fan, pero no es demasiado feo....
Here's my two cents:

>drop that dotted one in the middle, it looks like a used band aid or worse

>make the puzzle piece(?) shape less sharp, more concave ---> softer friendlier, less of a bite

>*do not* let the shape cut the C and the S (and the P) in that weird manner'
>Yes, it's still readable, but it subconsciously worsen the design by drawing away attention towards the uneven space

>try different color schema (away from plutonium green)

>the kids' icons seem fine to me and PB here

>also, I assume the middle one should read quatro a seis anos, si? attention to details much?
>if so, shouldn't it have a different icon?
>if not, may I ask why there ain't no such age range? and why is it repeated in the blue quadrant?


Best of luck,
-VT
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>>271727
[spoiler]Esto necesita colores algo mas vibrantes, parece salido de un funeral o algo de deporte. Also, el niño de ahi me parece feo.[/spoiler]
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>>271727
I think it's great OP.
Don't listen to the fuckers who hate on the color, they probably never learned about color theory.

It's a great combination and fits well with a kids brand.
Not sure if these are just mockups or all definite logo's, but bottom right stands out to me. Because of the face I immediately recognise it with a kids brand, one on top of that doesn't really do that.
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>>271727
>somo
>cuída
l2spanish
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