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Hello hello /gd/.

One year ago, I started a huge project called D3C1B3L B0T, it's a Twitter and Facebook bot that posts every 30mn a electronic music track (covering nearly every style), I'll put all my efforts again on it after finals.

Anyway, I changed the logo of this bot (old one was a shitty creation with gimp), any thoughts on it? It represents a D (for D3C1B3L) and I used the negative space to make it look like a play button.

If you like to check the bot just search D3C1B3L B0T on Google (can't post the link without making it looking like spam)

Thanks in advance.
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>>269384
you could play with DB/dB since it stands for deciBel or for decibel Bot, make one or all the holes a play button.
Maybe make a few versions and post them
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>>269385

I'll give it a try, working on it right now
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Here's a first try, kept the play in negative space and added a b. The left arrow represents the fact it covers a great part of electronic music. Gonna work on others try today.
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Tryout number 2
Looks a lot like some YT channels logo (DSG, DTB,...) but I like it
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>>269384

This one looks cool, I love this.

>>269396

NOPE, this is ugly as shit.

>>269401

I like the idea too, pretty cool.
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For this one I kept the circle style but the letters are more geometrical? Do you like it?
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>>269384
>>269401

Noice dude
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>>269417

Which one do you prefer?
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>>269384
This one man, really loving the simple look. It's a clear design, would work well on various types of media, easy to print, etc.

Only thing I would try is to sharpen the edges of the "play" button.
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>>269419
Thanks for advice
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>>269462
With pleasure
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The play button is everywhere. I made something distinct for you.
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>>269505
I can almost smell the bait
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>>269384
although probably op isn't here anymore. i think the robot concept could work pic is some quick design i just made based on op original idea.
>>269511
not him but i actually like that one even if no one recognize vinyls anymore.
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>>269523
OP here

Wow! This design is epic anon! This is pure awesomness, can you make it green, like the background of the first post? I'll try making a banner using this, oh and also, are the grey bars normal on image?

I'll think about if I take yours or keep mine, I'll ask some friends also
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>>269523

I'll take the green version of the bot if possible. I'll stick the logo on original post on the sixteen head instead although.. Thanks a lot anon
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>>269523
Thats very good work anon.
I hope those grey lines are only there to avoid sm1 stealing it tho, otherwise they are retarded.

Anyway, keep it up.
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>>269505

OP Here

I don't really like this one, I mean, it's cool but as >>269523 said, no one recognizes vinyl anymore I'm afraid.
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>>269602
here's with the green bg. the black bars as for what >>269578 said. maybe post some contact info and i'll send you the project files there. if you like it maybe we can make a deal or something i can even change a few things to make it better and a banner too. also what's "sixteen head"?
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>>269619
you can even play around with ps filters to make it look more organic or change it's 'artstyle'.
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>>269619
OP here

Yes, send this to my pro email : [email protected]

I'll think about the banner,
And by 'sixteen head' I meant Screen Head
I'll (or you) replace the play button on screen head by the logo I've made first, in order to combine both of our ideas

Many thanks
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>>269629
>>269384
hey man, i actually really like the logo and color choice
>nothing much to add, well done
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>>269629
>pro email
>gmail
pick one
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>>269619
>>269625
This scales so terribly. It's a nice little drawing but it's a very, very poor choice for an actual logo.

It seems like a mascot more an any kind of actual identity or brand.
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>>269835
it's just a fast sketch tho. and yeah i was thinking more like a mascot of sorts. since it' was for a twitter profile i didn't put much effort onto it. pic is without the strokes.
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>>269841
>>269835
here's the style i was going for. maybe wth more time the results could have been better.
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>>269828
i think that was the joke anon.
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>>269841
>>269843
Yeah, I can't criticize you for the drawing since I like it overall, but assuming OP wants to actually create a visual identity for his dealio, it's weak as far as its capacity for a memorable wordmark or scalable logo that can be used in multiple contexts (like Facebook, Twitter, and Youtube, for example).
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>>269408
Looks like a nuclear warhead. If the name of the brand was "Da Bomb" it would be awesome.
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