What's decent/what's horrible? I need to build a portfolio for my graphic design college application, thought i'd make a few mockup posters. It's [m]y first time.
>>269336
research olly moss try to copy his style (learn from it) and don't use those ugly gradients/colors.
>>269361
Thanks. What colors would fit better?
>>269345
Ironically grainy effects are becoming really popular in the young illustrators scene (they break the now-cliche "dribble flat" style). You need to actually be good though
>>269336
>>269337
Is this a joke?… It looks like a half-finished Flash animation created in 2002. I wish I was kidding, this is exaclty what I see. So there was too little time to even draw Iron Man's eyes and mouth. And this is apparently a poster?… For a comic book movie?…
Please don't embarass yourself any further. Learn vector art first. It's as amateur as it gets.
>>269336
The type is not matching AT ALL. Try something flatter which matches the artwork
>>269432
also which is more readable from a further distance after all its a poster
>Get rid of the gradients
>Get rid of the texture
>Make the text a flatter graphic font
>Get rid of Captain America's mouth and that little bit of speck behind the nose
>Get rid of the lines on the star of the shield behind Captain America
>Make the shield either brighter or get rid of it entirely (perhaps also add IronMans chest thing on the IronMan poster to match
