Is this pure butthole? Are there any redeeming qualities?
>>258396
no that is only half butthole
>>258397
Is the primary font shit? Or is it that the logo doesn't fit the fonts?
>>258398
The logo gets lost in the text, I wasn't sure what it was until I looked at the bottom left image of it by itself.
This is the primary font done with a custom nib shape rather than outlines traced from the sketch....Still feels like shit, kinda? Maybe? I don't know but feels like yes.
>>258399
I was trying to hide the shit quality of the logo by conjoining it with the text...
Too much detail on the fish I feel. Just having a simple silhouette might be better and would also communicate faster. Right now it's a bit unclear.
It reads disjointed to me... The font makes me think surfer shop in Hawaii or California and the fish makes me think of Tsimshian animal representation (pic related).
>>258434
Disagree with this, I think the fish looks great. Makes it unique and not so boring. Especially with such shitty typography.
>>258444
So I should take another swing at the primary font and keep the logo?
I'm making it worse, aren't I...
>>258612
I cannot seem to develop a font that fits with the aesthetics of the logo... But I've drawn like 30 logos and this is the only one that's not garbage...
What do I need to do font construction wise?
>>258614
this is pretty decent, it's ok, it works, but i'd play with proportions and spacing of the logo elements.
>>258612
It's fine. Stop overthinking.
>>258634
But I want it seamless and sweet, not fine. It's wrinkled, how do I iron it.
>>258637
Did you even worked face to face with a client asking for a logo ?
Because usually "seamless and sweet" doesn't mean shit to their eyes, so don't waste your time. They will got for whatever, usually the shittiest on.
>>258638
This is a facade, just doing it to practice. That's how fucked I am, I can't make it nice even when there's no external influence.
>>258612
I actually like this pretty well.
>>258740
That's kind of you.
I made a few tweaks, I'm going to consider this one done, thanks for the input guys.
