in this itt thread post stuff you made and other people judge you
You made this thread, and this thread is shit.
talented
BUT THAT'S NOT IT
nigger what are you doing?
Here's a wip I'm about to dial in and throw some copy on
>>257733
whats it for?
>>257734
Homage to that "visions of the future" poster set released by NASA. Wording will be something about kepler 186f.
>>257715
Nice work mate. You put a swoosh where it doesn't even make sense on brush script.
eh?
Sorry for below average quality, had to download it from my Adobe creative cloud on my phone
>>257715
I don't like how the lines do not have anything connecting them at the bottom, which makes it look like they are sticks/needles holding up the logo rather than a three-dimensional shape (as you probably intended.) Maybe closing the shape at the bottom could help?
>>257722
I dislike how the inner, white font and the outer black one do not seemingly have any kind of geometrical relationship that makes sense. The black doesn't seem to add "meaning" to the white font, it's just a visual tangent. I can understand that you probably thought just centering the white text inside the black one was looking too boring, but I don't think this is the way to go.
>>257733
Nice work. I kinda dislike the dark outline on the space station, have you tried getting rid of it and/or replacing it with a bright outline (simulating a fresnel effect)?
I'm also not too sure about the shadow completely crunching all the details inside it (like the "connecting lines" on the waist), have you tried just multiplying the shadow over instead of making it overlap? Maybe also give the shadow a but of a blue-ish hue or sth.
>>258014
meh...
>>258118
yikes, what even
a logo I made for a dj for wedding events
>>258014
what is this supposed to be for?
and this is a pattern I made for a dj for wedding receptions thats supposed to go on brochures and business card
>>257733
And updated.
>>258158
Thanks for the input, I'll keep tweaking in during my down time.
excuse me but I had fun
>>257715
>>257722
>>258014
This is a graphic design board. This might impress your friends but it doesn't belong here.
>>257997
If you want the grungy overlay you should get a higher quality one or make one yourself. also you should remove the white glow around the outside of the heads at the bottom.
>>258186
This isn't bad but you should try to create something that repeats more naturally like pic
>>258253
And...done, maybe? Thoughts?
For the 903rd Marauders "Archage - Aranzeb" division.
>>258405
Pretty cool, m8. Biggest concern is that the overall look & feel is very dated. Look towards today's design trends.
>>258419
>papyrus
>hail hydra
Absolute topkek
>>258405
It greatly triggers me that in the word KEPLER the things wrapping around the letters are not spaced enough apart vertically, which gives it an amateurish look.
IE, the K and E are off by just a millimeter or so it looks as if the designer made a mistake in not lining them up even though they are not supposed to be lined up. You get me? It just looks wrong.
![12227725_1060578980642541_3046760876452256993_n[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/OoreXpU.jpg "12227725_1060578980642541_3046760876452256993_n[1].jpg")
>>258463
like it very much.the type could be more playful and textured. did you handpaint the textures or got templates or just multiplied some aquarell textures?
>>258445
Its a crest for an online guild in a video game. It fits the setting really well. Trust me when I say, this was a very long project. and none of the elements in here were just looked at once and said YUP LOOKS FINE TO ME. their entire community was involved and this is what they wanted.
Papyrus is only shit when used wrong. pic related.
>>258488
No, u trust me. I give a fuck if a community likes it. ITS UGLY AS HELL. Now, u can still defend it represent this or that blablabla. Truth is it looks amateur, retarded, and ugly. Also, it has like 10 elements, trees skull, triangles shit, why? Its a fucking logo not an illustration. Stop with your "everything is well thought" and do something that actually looks good and fits the project.
>sorry for bad englando not my language.
>>258464
Thanks! and I agree about the font
Got lazy and stole some texture-scans from deviantart and applyed different layer modes in photoshop. Next time I'll also will be more aware of the palette
>>258405
I get more of a retro 20s lounge bar-wibe then casino. Still tho. Really nice work
>>258488
There is no excuse for using Papyrus.
>>258185
too christmasy
