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MAIN TOPIC: Part 5 Development, Stand Suggestions are open.
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(ALSO, try not to suggest 1:1 copies of characters and events in JJBA)
>Canon Stand Info for the Ignorant and Forgetful
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/Stand
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Stands
>Plot summaries and character list
http://pastebin.com/vbD28iMx (this is out of date, fix it)
>Abilities and Stands
http://pastebin.com/vYTvZPFP
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QycIbBT6L7Ny5elmmnhI4OdQYk-yJ-mGJC6TrdwBii8
>Every part, in order
1 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IdBYK9zXpJrDc4vAIHnRLmZpPiKyxiIkj25oOTaaeF0
2 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KA0-Y_HnU_m6V5pwZ7fEtqGMnwm43NrshzANTcCxr34
3 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hDbP7BA0XBP3_3GW0uphroYjQdcW1EW5b37w-r_lsaI
4 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zn-D4aD-cBBfpBtfTLmVM_D9C1cGPYgDYRl_CCGbnsw
5 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UNm7KLXgWF0LMxCCq3VZ3O_VJ8vEqj7d22RjnDqVIEg/edit?usp=sharing
6 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l9034tpMm4EdF1NGzisA2bCXBDvUbx_vTR69hXjp_iY/edit?usp=sharing
7 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SDhmnLrv5dtVAZx2ewx1JKTsZVoXkE8LRw-8rK2gyhQ/edit?usp=sharing
8 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/10wx78PDHPNMygoTbFvihjTjPF-DwP1Ced8XKT3YNzUQ/edit?usp=sharing
>Phantom Scare: Chapter 1
http://pastebin.com/bsmui6f7
>Images
http://ccba.booru.org/
>Fighting Game
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B0lqXHlZXEFTaFppZV96ejU5b2s&usp=sharing
>Voice Impressions
http://pastebin.com/DcZUTVx1
>/Co/Co/ playlist:「THE SHOW MUST GO ON」
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLLWEiXuZ9FOaYfU_0hIoo6qadB1yEO_Km
>>82693003
Thanks OP.
Isn't it called a runabout, not a roundabout?
I'LL STEAL IT !
>>82693075
His Stand is Roundabout.
Alright, so I've been updating part 5's doc with the new stuff from last thread.
Anyone want to check for things I missed?
Stand suggestions from last thread
>>82606086
>>82606608
>>82606741
>>82606661
>>82610917
>>82611158
>>82611423 (Revision)
>>82613716
>>82630145
>>82638061
>>82638083
>>82668562
>>82673781
>>82597518
>>82598131
Let me know if I missed any.
>>82693195
Question, which name are we using for Dr. Facilier's stand?
>「THE PARASITE」
>「SYMPATHY FOR THE DEVIL」
and I think
>SOUL'd OUT
Was also a suggestion.
>>82693380
「WELCOME TO THE MACHINE」was another suggestion.
>>82693481
So which one are we using?
Dr. Facilier and Cartman's stands are something I think we need to get sorted.
>>82694090
We wait for Stand Reviewfag to say yay or nay to [AMERIKA], Cartman's STand.
I summon thee, Stand Reviewfag, with my plate full of fresh squid jerky!
Stand User: Yumi Yoshimura
Stand: 「PERFUME」
Appearance: A thickly built purple suit akin to hazmat gear, the helmet adorned with a single large pink eye like jewel as its sight point
Ability: 「PERFUME」 is a suit type Stand that is constantly emitting a stream of opaque purple cumulus clouds. Whenever the clouds come into contact with a surface, that point is 「STAINED」. When 「PERFUME」 itself comes into contact with a stained point, it and and the user are allowed to assume gaseous form and pass through the area as if it were a membrane and reach whatever is considered the 「INSIDE」 of what was passed through and shrink to fit if necessary.
Power: B
Speed: D
Range: E
Durability: C
Precision: A
Development: B
User: Ami Onuki
Stand: 「RAINBOW IN THE DARK」
Appearance: An ornate gauntlet/sleeve combination made of an extremely lustrous metal
Ability: When 「RAINBOW IN THE DARK」 activates, it carries the ability of manipulating the 「SHADOWS」 of anything within a 5 meter sphere of the user's hand so long as the gauntlet is under a light source. The shadows are collected into a central mass and then split into a number of monster-like 「SPECTERS」 dependent on the size of the shadows first absorbed. 「SPECTERS」 carry physical mass and carry the ability to damage things either directly or via attacks on the target's shadow if it still has one.
Power: C
Speed: D
Range: E
Durability: C
Precision: B
Development: B
>>82694322
Reviewfag is sleeping. Let the poor man rest, he just got done with finals.
I don't know if he'll still come when there's enough posts, or if he'll appear earlier today because he went to sleep last night.He might not be coming at all.
Whatever the case, please be patient and don't rush him. He works hard to review our autism.
But until he comes, the topic is on part 5. What do we have on the agenda for it?
From what I can think of, there's
>Looniversity fights. Are we using Bitters and Goodvibes? Do the Strays appear?
>Movie studios. Who runs it, Jew Producer or Mok? Who is the full cast on set?
>Law Offices. What goes down there? Does Demongo run it?
>Market. Azazel + Captain's body runs it? What else?
>Department Store. Besides Chernobog, what else goes on with it?
>Where are the celebrities fought and who are they? (Currently, they are Jem, Jan, Max, Pinky, and Sunny/Lil' D)
>Who else do we need for the assassins? (Roger, Mandark, Thief, LeQuack, CatDog, who else?)
>Four Businessmen of the Apocalypse, who are they? (Gideon is our only set member so far, the others must fit with the theme of Liquidation, Outsourcing, Competition, and Acquisition.)
>Who do we have for the Fireside Girls?
>Where do Red Herring and Chuckie show up?
>Who dies?
I probably have missed a few things. These are what might need to be covered.
>>82694762
For the Looniversity, I think it goes from the Faculty to the Loonatics to the Strays.
>>82693003
One of the members of Ethans Cult needs to have [True Faith], It'sCount Count
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zzeNAUOp17c
>>82694762
Yes, we're using Bitters, Goodvives, the strays (who are their members again?), and CatDog at the Looniversity.
Jew Producer runs the movie studios, he's the guy in charge of the talent agency using the movie studios as a shell company.
I'm pretty sure the law offices are part of the WB tower now. Demongo and Varrick(?) are the top dogs there until the Rangers reach the top floor where Patrick is.
You mean the Farmer's Market? That's pretty much bare bones right now.
The department store has the perfume department.
Celebrities are sent in after Gideon is defeated, this leads the UR to the talent agency at the movie lot where the bulk of the celebrities are fought since they've been cast in the movie adaptation of the events of part 3.
We might be good on assassins unless we want to put more in the tower.
The Four Business Men are Gideon Graves, Monorail Guy, Doug "Speedwagon" Dimmadome, and Toffee.
Fang and Cindy Vortex are confirmed for Fireside Girls, there's a whole list to pick the remaining 3 we need, personally I'd go with Malika (Fillmore!), Gretchen (Camp Lazlo), and Portia Gibbons (Mighty B!).
Red Herring and Chuckie (he's in this part?) could show up at the market. Are they even supposed to have stands?
A lot of people die, I don't know all of them. I know Toph dies to Roger the assassins, Dexter dies fighting HIM, Max dies and I don't know how, Donald rages himself into hell and then hell spits him back out because he was too much for hell, Rolf is presumed dead, but actually survived and is trying to climb his way out of the hell pit he tackled TA into.
This is all horribly out of order for where these things actually happen in the narrative.
>>82694743
>RAINBOW IN THE DARK
Please tell me this is a reference to who I think it's a reference to.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qcWKZTI9OC4
>>82695041
I think it should be re-iterated that Ms Bitters isn't a Demon, a Picture Man (They show up in Old Country Aural history, which cites that they are allergic to paint thinner) or a Stand user.
>>82694813
Are the Loonatics imperfect clones created at the Looniversity?
>>82695169
Possibly. Danger Duck isn't appearing here. But I think he's supposed to in the AU?
They were supposed to be security for the Looniversity. May have been genetically engineered.
>>82695167
She is, in fact an avatar ofYeshmiyek.
>>82695169
Tech, Rev, and Lexi are descendants of the originals [Wile, Roadrunner, and Lola.]
Ace and Slam were modified as children.
>>82695264
Danger's got Holly Kujo syndrome due to a Stand that would normally allow him to gain aspects of any material in recent memory is acting out of his control. He's currently comatose in a form similar to the chimera from Duck Amuck.
>>82695321
This. I like this.
>>82695041
Both Red and Chuckie have stands and were some of the first characters suggested for the part.
Red's stand makes him the center of attention. Chuckie's kills people when they step on cracks.
>>82695376
I was wondering where that could show up. I don't think they could be descendents though. There was a suggestion for Road Runner in part 6, with a stand that inflicted damage when people tried to touch him.
>>82695167
I have an idea.
Squidward is still a double agent at this point, he reports to the WB that the Urban Rangers are going to raid the Looniversity, a demon is sent there to pass this information along, then this bit from last thread can happen
>As he is standing around, his shadow elongates into the shape of Ms Bitters and [Slams] out into the real world.
>"Guah! Where did you come from?"
Bitters is informed intruders are coming, so they stage a trap, the trap fails because they (the Looniversity non-stand users) didn't know about Rolf's power to make doors.
>>82695376
>aspects of any material in recent memory
>He's currently comatose in a form similar to the chimera from Duck Amuck.
Carolina in the Morning, clearly had SOME impact on the collective memory then. And when Irised through the stand of someone who was a magic clone of the Duck himself...this happened.
c-c-come on guys... /sug/ gets unbanned today, season 3 starts in 5 hours, cant we just maybe be invited to the club?
>>82695587
He could mutate into WIZARD Daffy, but I'll entertain that line of thought later.
The Looniversity should be researching not only stands, but also Melody, Styles, and whatever other bullshit powers we've had up til now.
It's a minor thing we see on old, mostly desolate and boarded off areas of the research buildings the Rangers make their entrance through.
>>82695376
I don't think they should be decedents, clones made using the leftover Atomic Super Men research they still have seems more right.
It was already established the ASM were clones, just not clones of any one person in particular.
>>82695490
I like Red Herring and Chuckie more for the market now.
Red is like a stock broker, Chuckie could just be a lost child who forces the Rangers to help him find his parents.
>>82695629
Dude, we understand that you were butthurt about not being included in this, but here's some advice...get the fuck over it you massive crybaby.
>>82695737
>>82695490
Never thought about the ASM angle. That could actually be kind of brilliant.
>>82695740
But crying is all we know, crying and singing is how all plot happens over there
>>82695629
Never.
Ever.
>>82695769
I think the original idea for Red was that the UR think he's some high ranking demon but it turns out he's just an average criminal. Maybe he's a shadowed figure with only his hair visible and demon lie features up until they catch him.
>>82695321
The Looniversity was merely built around her, she was always there.
Cartman should get some pain during this arc if he's tagging along.
>>82695629
Nope but thanks for keeping tabs.
>>82695769
So we good to go on that angle?
>>82696023
Maybe Red is a local business man who is trying to buy out the farmer's market, but he's unrelated to the WB.
Are Chuckie's parents supposed to be his parents from the show,, or will he be related to Red Herring?
>>82696735
Chuckie's parents are the same. His mom's soul has been captured by demons so he's trying to reclaim it. Might have a better place as a side story though? His teen self is supposed to be in the Jorge Joestar AU though.
I could see Red being his older cousin.
>>82693003
I haven't been here in a while, any update on the fighting game?
>>82696837
there was a suggestion for the eds moveset in the last thread
>>82696735
I'd say we're good to write that as set.
>>82696820
I was going to propose that Red Herring is Chuckie's current guardian and he drops trying to buy out the Farmer's Market (for now) since the Urban Rangers helped him.
Having his mother's soul be in the demon's possession reveals the demons too early in the story if this is taking place at the market. I was thinking he'd just be contained to the one arc at the market, but if we're keeping the soul thing, he'd have to show up again later.
>Name: Kitty "Little Miss Kitten" Cheshire (Ever After High)
>Stand: [Cheshire Cat] a cat-like stand that has been passed down the Cheshire bloodline, the most noticeble features are it's smile and eyes. It unleashes a fury of slashes that could tear apart the reality around Kitty.
>Abilities:
>[Cheshire] the inherited ability of teleportation or disappear parts of her body. combine this with her cat like relexes and her enemies will hate cats.
>[My Wonderland] If little miss kitten grabs ahold of her enemy, she can teleport the both of them into the "in between world" that she uses to travel between space and time, this world is under her control
>likes: dog ears
>Home: [Writer's Block?] technically she is a stray cat, as she is often found in a box in an alley way next to [Writer's Block] though often times the tenants will make the mistake about feelings bad for her and end up feeding her - which causes her to stay with them in their apartment for a week or so.
>can be a little too affectionate. as she can be found trying to paw at the tenant she stays with.
>can be a little too much of a bitch, as she knocks breakable shit over.
>Back story, as a person from Wonderland, she was taken out of her world by [Insert villain here] and she is trying to find the rabbit hole that will allow her to return to her family...at least that what she says...she just likes to fuck shit up.
better?
>>82696999
His mother is dead and he travels through cracks to bring her back, after the fight he resumes his search for her soul. Demons aren't mentioned, but is an early hint.
>>82695108
Of course. Wanted to play around with their motifs a bit so Ami got the Metal Stand and Yumi got the J-POP.
>>82697250
>>82696999
He could say something like "the boogeymen" have her soul. Or just not mention she's dead at all. The Rangers simply assume he's looking for his lost mother.
>>82697269
I think you got the names mixed up.
Stand User: Craig Charles
Stand: MASTER OF MAYHEM
Appearance: A modern knight with guns.
Ability: Extreme Warriors. It unleashes a army of manifestations of the most deranged criminals psychological maps and kills the stand without killing the user. MAYHEM MODE increases the speed of the punches and bullets at the cost of the self control and should be used as a last resort. ULTIMATE MAYHEM allows MASTER OF MAYHEM to be sentient and crosses the borders of reality and time and bring anyone involved in a riot and they still riot unknowingly that they are killing the Stand and it's user.
>>82697462
Ami's pink
Yumi's purple
>>82697250
>>82697345
So they think he's a lost child and he's with the party for most of their time at the market?
Does Cartman rag on him about being ginger and how if his mother is also ginger then it's a lost cause? Does Rolf punish Cartman for this by making him be the one to help Chuckie so the rest of them can go about their business?
>>82697534
No, it need to look like a mix of the re-appearing House Robots, but mainly, the master metal monstrosity SIR KILLALOT
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xclzUDeziAY
>>82697660
Can't argue with that.
>>82697534
Dude, what.
>>82695041
Varrick was just an office jockey who got force fed a jawbreaker before the protags fight patrick.
He wasnt anything big.
>>82695737
Wizard duck was a guy who was REALLY into Daffy even before he became M.E. Leterally
His desperation to be back under [CUCARACHA] made him manifest a STand,
Here's a stand suggestion for Azrael, since he's apparently going to be the demon head of finance/farmers market.
>「MOVE YOUR DEAD BONES」
>Appearance: A large swarm of insects, similar to flies or mosquitoes, that have needle-like protrusions on their heads.
>Ability: A single insect can inject opponents with 0.5 mls of a stimulant that raises both energy level and heart rate by about 0.05%. It seems weak, but the more the opponent is bitten, the more it raises. With enough injections, it can be very, very dangerous. Eventually, it will cause cardiac arrest, but even worse than that, the victim still moves after death. The stimulant, if there is enough in their body, will place them entirely under the user's control. Of course, injections must happen frequently. 0.5 mls of the liquid wears off in about 5 minutes.
>Along with "reanimating" the dead, the user may control living people if there's enough fluid in their body and they still haven't died yet. After a certain (non-lethal) amount of it is in the system the user can start influencing the victim's thoughts. It isn't true control, however the user can try and convince them to do their bidding. The victim's will deteriorates the more liquid is inside, before they just flat out die and can be controlled completely.
>Insects will replicate if it detects any are lost. Additionally, insects die if they inject their liquid into something.
>The liquid can also be consumed as well. The user can hide the liquid inside drinks or inject it into foods.
Power: E
Speed: A
Range: C
Durability: E
Precision: B
Potential: C
He's controlling either Amelia or Knuckles body (I don't know which captain we're going for) with the stand. He sits on their lap and pretends he's not really the true user, while the massive horde of flies swarms around them. Are they wearing a mask though? To disguise who they are, also, depending on how long they've been dead, to hide any rotting flesh (unless the liquid prevents this).
>>82698226
I realized that there is no robot wars themed stands. So I did it. Considering that there is a robot wars comic that /co/ never knew existed, I think that will raise awareness, not a awful lot, but some will be fans.
>>82698349
you got both wrong, it's Azazel from the Little Vampire and "The Captain" is a skeletal ghost from the same series, pic related
>>82698479
Didn't know that actually. The ability is still way too OP though.
>>82698479
Was Craig actually in the comic, as himself?Do you have scans?
>>82698272
He feels like he should've been someone who comes up with new ideas, like an imagination battery powering a whole floor of the tower.
>>82698333
Why can't that guy be a clone who's stand caused him to remember Daffy's stand and have that happen to him?
This is off-topic, so as to not derails the thread, I'm putting it behind spoilers. Part 7 idea.It was mentioned last thread that there could be a circus group/freak show that guards a corpse art in 7. I've been thinking about it, but I'm having trouble on who the ringleader should be. I figured it could be either Zombozo (Ben 10), or Freakshow (Danny Phantom), but are there any other ideas? By the way, here are some character ideas for it.
Jojo (Jojo's Circus. Suggested for a part.)
Glob Herman (X-Men)
Herman the Human Mole (Resident's Freakshow comic. Suggested(?) for a part.)
Stitch Sisters (Courage the Cowardly Dog)
Ragdoll (DC Comics)
Wonder Twins (Justice League)
Lydia (Danny Phantom. Possible alternative for Freakshow).
Now, back on topic.
>>82700133
The Wizard's suggested stand is supposed to make him bounce around like he was made of rubber.
>>82698490
The stand could still work for Azazel though, being that it's insect-based (and Azazel was made of bugs, wasn't he?)
>>82697566
That would be interesting. Maybe an assassin comes after them and they need to work together to beat him.
>>82700783
The assassin for the market section is currently Tad Strange, but that's open to change if anyone comes up with something better.
>>82693075
They're very similar words, the car is a runabout, but Roundabout is not only a song, it's that ending theme from JoJo. It all ties together quite nicely, but people keep asking about it so I guess Dan was right, NO ONE WILL EVER KNOW.
>mods still allow this thread to exist
Wew lad
>>82701108
Anon, /co/ has nurtured much, MUCH worse.
>>82701022
There could be two. Of course, to avoid anything serious, the shouldn't have a stand, or not a very powerful one. It's not like they'd need a stand because Casrtman's only works on the Jewish and Chuckie's only works when a crack is stepped on. The Rangers might not realize (or anyone might not realize) Chuckie has a stand at this point. Of course, I'm worried about having too many characters/fights in, but a battle against a guy and two kids who don't have strong stands might not take too much to write, especially if it ends with Chuckie somehow tricking them into stepping on a crack.
Whoever they are, they'd have to be pretty fucked up to try and kill two children.
Alternatively, neither Chuckie nor Cartman participate in the Farmer's Market part in any significant way, because they're too busy wandering around looking for Chuckie's mom.
Will we be introducing any other Remasters other than Plucky's? Also, what does Fortunate Son Remastered do?
>>82701512
Mandark's stand has been remastered as well.
>>82701332
Maybe the other urban rangers are convinced Red Herring is working for the WB, Chuckie is related to him somehow in the setting and tries to prevent them from attacking him, Cartman gets stuck as the babysitter/tasked with helping him find his mom while Rolf and whoever else (I don't think they should all be at the market, they've already been up since 4am that day and it's probably 4pm by now) go to track down the information broker.
So Rolf and Cartman for sure, probably also Dexter since he has the info they got from HR's computers. It could be just those three with the other rangers not at the market.
I still want to work in Taffy having issues about who Plucky's dad is, but there's just been no opportunity to talk about character interactions between fights.
>>82701512
Plucky, Rolf, Mandark, possibly also Donald.
That's what we have slated for remasters in part 5.
Does anyone have any ideas for Stand designs/redesigns? Personally, I think to many of Stands are just shaped like objects.
>>82697031
Let me take a stab at this.
Stand: 「FRONTIER PSYCHIATRIST」
Appearance: A extremely long fuzzy black muffler that in actuality is a serpentine cat winding about the user's body
Ability: 「FRONTIER PSYCHIATRIST」 gives the user domain over the 「GAPS」 that exist between objects, regardless of their width or depth. When both the user and Stand encounter a gap they are sucked into a 「NEGATIVE SPACE」 which other people and objects are allowed to occupy but can only leave with the user or via the destruction of one of the objects forming the space's boundary. If only the Stand enters however, that which is grabbed by it must remain connected or it becomes bound to the natural physics present in the space.
>>82701512
I dunno why, but I always imagined [I DON'T WANT TO SET THE WORLD ON FIRE REMASTERED] leaving a Combined Musketeer and Indian hat, allowing him to change cheese and telekinesed it at the same time. But not only that, he can now use original cheese or dairy product with self-created cheese to make... Practically anything, de-cheesing the cheese or de-dairing the dairy product into anything. Money, sword, gun, bombs... Oh, and having him a permanent copy, looking like Jerry, who has the same [WOFR] as Taffy does.
>>82701955
Well, it has to fit the ability or at least the user in some way. We need context, man.
>>82700133
A clone that was trying to be its own duck but lost itself in the original when Part 3 hit?
After that it stopped trynig to fight it and lost itself in daffy?
It might work.
Force people to put the pieces together and you can have it APPEAR to just be a guy who wanted to be Daffy, but upon closer inspection actually IS, to some extent, Daffy.
>>82701664
Im loving the fact we're counting the hours on their trip. We can make it into a storytellingthing.
The ever-present timer becomes fucking unreliable in HR, Inner Talent Agency, basically anywhere where demonic prescence is.
At first its not too big. In HR the am-pm is switched.
It culminates to the time just being 6:66 in patrick's building
>>82703246
You mean 06:06:06 yes?
>>82703246
I started putting time markers in the doc yesterday when it became apparent Plucky's couldn't be left without his stand for too long while Gideon is attacking his mind.
It ended up cramming a lot of shit into each day the Urban Rangers face.
They're going to be dead tired a lot of the time, so they might sleep in shifts.
>>82702743
I think some Stands like Eddy and Tophs would work better as more humanoid types. Eddys would be very flashy with money symbols and sunglasses. Something to match his suit. Tophs could have sharp glass edges that let's it do extra damage with punches. I was thinking it would have a row of jagged edges on it's back like a stegosaurus. I don't really like Rolf's Stand just being a staff, but it also works with his character so I'm not really against it.
>>82705094
It can't all be punch ghosts, anon. Some of the most interesting Stands are the weird ones.
>>82705241
I know. But not all human shaped Stands are punch ghosts.
>>82705241
Doug Dimmadome's one of my favorites.
It's a cowboy-hatted, lemonade sippin' Squirrel in a 50's style Raygun Gothic Space Suit
It throws the lemonade it's drinking like Sniper thows his Jarate. It's got shit strength, but can make surfaces super rubbery. This lets him bounce around his chainsaw hat without fear of it becoming embedded in anything.
>>82705766
That sounds weirdly awesome.
Wow, I leave this website for some months and this project is still active? Nice. At least tell me what you've accomplished by now.
>>82707442
Parts 1, 2, 3, and 4 are done.
Part 5 is being worked on.
Parts 6 and 8 are undergoing heavy revision to make them less shitty.
And we have an AU in the works now.
>>82707766
Part 4 could still use some work, but it got "done" enough that we moved on to part 5 since things started getting stale with how stalled we were getting there.
It's not something that can be answered when someone asks "what still needs to be done?" you just have to read through the doc yourself.
>>82707442
A hell of a lot more than some of us thought possible. I'm still surprised that this hasn't collapsed into itself like a dying star given what happens to most of /co/'s projects.
>>82705766
Reviewfag please rate this.
>>82710340
He said he'd be going through the Doc and the threads when he gets a chance.
>>82704901
I think I've figured it out.
Plucky is in his coma for 6 days.
Now the tricky part is, how many days was he with the Urban Rangers before that?
It needs to be enough time for them to get to know each other well enough to consider him a friend.
He needs to have character interactions, like dancing with Squidward, churning butter with Rolf, talking about role models with Taffy, and stuff with the rest of them too.
There could be a few days between their first fight with the Gangreen Gang and the next land grab they know about by the Fireside Girls.
How long does their road trip to the city take and how long are they in the city before Plucky goes tomato? A couple days? More than that?
We need more character interaction between fights is what I'm getting at here.
>>82711442
6 days before going tomato, 6 days in coma, and 6 after that? though the last one could be harder to pull
why is this trash on /co/?
>>82711639
I don't think the demon arc isn't much of an arc, it all happens in the span of maybe an afternoon or night.
The epilogue might not count towards the days though since whoever is left in the Urban Rangers probably join Plucky in taking over the WB to make sure none of them fall to corruption.
>>82710340
No. Okay fine, I'll throw it in with the rest. Again, sorry about the lateness, I'll try to review any more stands that pop up after the usual 400ish posts. Starting with the doc.
>Cartman
Huehuehuehue. It's stupidly petty, which is basically perfect. I would cut the tentacles, but it seems like he won't be used that much so I'll go ahead and pass him.
>ignoring repeats next one is Teddy
I like the general idea. I think maybe instead of using all the bears we use one of the bears and inanimate objects like the Brave Little Toaster and Woody instead just for diversity's sake, but other than that if it's a corpse guardian I like this one.
>Go (Jake) Long!
Didn't think I'd like this one at first, but I thought about it more and I actually dig it. Could do some freaky shit with the morphing into a dragon, I'll pass this one.
>[EQUATION]
Spooky. Part of me thinks it's OP, but I like it a lot so I'll pass it while acknowledging that it possibly may need some tweaking later.
>Bimbo
Like the general idea. Get a feeling it may be OP and needs a weakness, but I guess it's passable. Would like a second opinion from the jury just in case.
>Pincushion Man
Spooky. I like this one.
>Tuffy
I guess we fanfiction of the fanfiction now. This one seems like it could have interesting applications, I'll pass it but keep an eye on it to make sure it doesn't get too OP.
>Tommy
The photograph limit seems arbitrary, but the rest is okay, I guess. Not too crazy on it, I'll leave it to the jury.
>DUCK DOOOODGERS! OF THE 24 1/2TH! CEEEEEEEENTURY!
Heh. I dig it.
>Daria
I have a gut feeling we have a similar stand but I like it enough that I'll pass it unless someone points out that it's already been done.
>Elmyra
Creepy. I dig, although I'm not sure how her being Fred's daughter came about.
>Angelica
It's okay, I guess. Not too big on it but it'll do.
>Weasel
Nice reference with the name. I dig the power too.
>D-Sides
I dig it, but only if it's a corpse guardian's stand.
Does Cartman have a problem with Dexter, or does he not see Dexter as ginger because he lacks freckles?
>>82711652
It's epic. If a cool manga isn't /co/-related why not completely shit it up and make these retarded threads filled with idea men who accomplish nothing?
>>82712206
>>82693195
Aw shit. Okay, here we go.
>Riley
Cut the id, ego, superego bit, but the emotion bit is good.
>World
Honestly the idea of "a stand that does anything" is inherently OP and a bit boring. I'd say just drop it, sorry pal.
>Catch 22
Seems a bit vague but I think I like the general idea. Pass but a hesitant one, keep an eye on this one.
>Ace
Works, I guess. Not too crazy about it, but don't dislike it either.
>Shego
It works. Would like a second opinion from the jury, though.
>Zorak
I can see it working. Maybe add a limitation for if he makes a new head but other than that I'm hip.
>Roger
Seems a bit like Kevin's for some reason. I think it'll work, but I'll leave it to the jury to be safe.
>Rancid
Seems alright... but if it's a gas, how can you hurt it? Is it because it's somewhat solid? My brain hurts thinking about it too hard, I'll blame stand magic and give it a pass even though (or maybe because) it breaks physics. Needs a pseudoscience explanation.
>Lalavava
Anything involving the future I'm going to dislike because the universe is random and who knows what the fuck will happen in five seconds. I like the emp wave thing, but I'm hesitant on this one. Will leave it to the jury because of my anti-future bias but I'm wary of it.
>Woods
I dig it. The plasma grenade thing seems fine to me, I wouldn't worry about it.
>Monkey 1
Eh. Seems boring but it might work if we need a mook. I'll pass it.
>Monkey Do
I have a heavy anti-random bias so I'll leave this one to the jury. For a random stand, I will admit this one's pretty good.
>Monkey See
Eh, seems like too many powers. Pick one and stick with it, my fav's BIG personally.
>Monkey 4
Ha, barrel of monkeys, classic. It works, especially for a throwaway fight. I like.
>Goofy as an MC for some reason
Part of me wants to say no but the idea of an entire fight where (not?)Goofy is yelling squirrel is too hilarious to pass up. You're in ya weirdo.
>>82712846
>>82693195 (again)
>Tech 2.0
Necrosis bit might be too much but I like this one, otherwise.
>AU Ed
Hateboner against random effect says no. Will leave to jury because of bias.
>AU Eddy
Was against it until you mentioned the scam thing. It works, I'll sign off on it.
>>82693380
I kind of like Sympathy for the Devil myself.
>>82694322
You crack me up little buddy.
>>82694743
Yumi's is weird but I like it. Ami's seems slightly OP but I also like it, will leave it to the jury.
>>82694762
I'll let everyone know if I have to bow out, only reason I skipped some threads was so we could finish part 4.
>>82697031
I'm confused by the character and I'm not entirely sure we should use her but if we let Bonkle in guess EAH can squeeze in too. Powers seem eh, not really crazy about 'em. Will leave to jury, though.
>>82697534
I'm just going to say no to this one.
>>82698349
Fuckin' spooky. I love it.
>>82702177
A little vague but I like the general concept. Needs fleshing out but I like the idea.
>>82705766
This sounds stupid and awesome at the same time. I'll pass it, but only if it talks like Doug Dimmadome and the two talk to each other at some point.
I'll be back around the usual 400ish posts. Keep goin' mates, I need to look through the docs but it's looking good so far.
>>82696879
That's good
What characters are next?
>>82714459
Gadget needs moves.
So does Kuzco and Johnny.
Great, we have a troll blanking the docs now. We've finally hit the big leagues where people are acting against us.
>>82714976
goddamn it.
Save everything.
Restore to previous version and try to save as much as you guys can.
Am currently rescuing Part 2. Would prefer if someone else gets it too.
>>82715107
It's easy to restore a google doc.
>>82712846
I only came up with the ego thing because I was doing homework on it recently. I agree the emotions work better. I'll go ahead and put her forward as a potential Fireside Girl
>>82714976
We gotta keep a closer eye on the docs now.
>>82715458
It's super easy to restore a google doc. I already restored all of them. It takes less than a minute.
Anyway, I noticed Fifi's stand on part 5's doc, where is she even in that part?
>>82714976
I said making the docs public edit was a bad idea didn't I?
Fucking hell, should we make them private again?
>>82715497
Looniversity student maybe?
>>82715586
I've been doing at least 70% of the editing and adding to part 5's doc so far, so if you did that I wouldn't be able to keep it up-to-date anymore.
>>82715610
I think we've all forgotten Looniversity's big man on campus, and the protag's leads into the Talent Agency.
>>82715791
I thought Max was their lead into the Talent Agency.
>>82715821
Max is fought after Jan, who is fought after Jem.
This dude and him gloating about his work "giving work" to students at the university is what leads them to the Talent Agency.
>>82715821
While we're talking about Max, I have a question. Is he a Jojolion-stye fusion of himself and Poweline, or was the universe just retconned to have him be Powerline? Or did he just show up and no one bothered to ask why he looked different (or everyone sees him as the original Powerline anyway)?
>>82715882
What? This is all new to me since I haven't seen any of this discussed.
I was under the impression that the day after they defeat Gideon (which is the day after they raid the Looniversity, so 2 days after the Looniversity), the Celebrities begin attacking the Urban Rangers.
All but Jan and Max are beaten/killed/whatever to get them out of the story, they retreat, someone comes from Jan's soul, Max goes back to the Rangers and tells them about the talent agency.
>>82715994
He's Max wearing a Powerline costume like in the movie.
Powerline could be one of the stage names the demons recycle if the person playing the role ever rebels or is disposed of. Like a legacy character.
>>82716051
Does the public know Powerline is replaced or does demon magic just make them accept that there has only ever been one Powerline though?
>>82715996
We sorta talked about how it was this guy who did the transaction that made Max famous.
He doesnt have to be in Looniversity. He can be fought in the Talent agency itself.
Through him we can infer that Goofy can return for his later MC role.
>>82716128
Does anyone know/care about the original Miley Cyrus or Paul McCartney?
>>82716128
Of course the public doesn't know. They can't be allowed to know for the demon's plan to keep on track.
If Max was able to go public with that information, it'd throw more than a few gears out of the machine that is their plan. Demon magic prevents him from revealing this.
>>82716162
Oh, so he's for the movie set.
We could have a line about how he has a score to settle with the rangers for attacking his campus while he was sleeping.
The DO raid the Looniversity at 4am to avoid most of the problems that come with raiding a place since it was supposed to be a snatch and run mission to get Doof out of there.
Of course it takes all morning before they get back to Sector V's base with him.
Worked on this idea earlier, don't know if it will really work or if we have room for anymore Warner Bros characters, but I'll put it out there.
> Hades (Disney's Hercules)
>Stand: 「BABY'S IN BLACK」(Beatles' song) (placeholder name)
>Appearance: A pitch black thin figure with light orange and red highlights. Face is similar to Soft Machine. Has shoulder and chest pads.
>Ability: When「BABY'S IN BLACK」phases inside someone's body, the user gains a portion of the user's Stand ability depending on the distance between the target and the user. The target is unaware they are possessed. The closer the target is to the user, the stronger the effect is. As Hades gains power, the target looses the same amount of power. When the user is directly next to the target, he basically has full control of their Stands abilities. However, since Hades has not used the target's Stand's ability before, he is usually inexperienced and not fully aware of what they can do or what side effects the power has. The max range of this effect is around 10-20 meters.
Destructive Power: E
Speed: D
Range: C
Durability: E
Precision: C
Developmental Potential: B
>Role: Mid-to-High ranking member of Warner Bros. who is above several handlers. His Stand could be a surprise reveal, in which a member of the Urban Ranger's find their abilities slowly decreasing in power.
>Other ideas: Some kind of trigger to begin the effect, similar to Facilier's. Maybe some other way to restrict the amount of power Hades gets.
>>82716051
So they transform Max into a new Powerline incarnation and when he is beaten, Max breaks from the Powerline persona?
>>82716162
>>82716201
I was thinking that the reveal that Max sold his soul could be foreshadowed by the Rangers finding an old poster of Powerline and noting that it looks nothing like him. Meanwhile, someone on he movie set remarks Powerline looks the same as he does in the 60s, and assumes that he just ages well.
I don't know if it's stupid or not though. Thoughts?
>>82716325
But still wears the clothes. To avoid them creating a new one for the time being. Of course the Urban Rangers are doing way too much damage for ventures like that to be made as-is.
>>82716351
I like it.
>>82716293
and this.
>>82716351
Could work, though Max didn't sell his soul, his dad somehow found out what was happening and tricked the demons into taking his soul instead, then Max found out they would've taken his soul and that his dad already gave up his soul to prevent it. That's why he's still able to break his contract.
>>82716325
When he breaks his contract completely, he loses the Powerline powers.
The demons seem to have stands they give out as "loaners" to celebrities which get re-issued when the celebrity is replaced.
>>82716313
Maybe Donald fights him in hell.
I think we've made Sector V into jobbers.
>>82716735
they're kids.
They're not fighting pedophiles here.
Also Father was a rich serial killer in a guild. They're NOT good at their jobs.
>reading part 5 doc
Who is Jan and why is her powers so vicious?
>>82716896
Jan Mouse is from the film The Devil and Daniel Mouse.
She unwittingly sells her soul to the devil for musical stardom.
Her stand is one of the "loaners" the demons give to their celebrity stock.
>>82716896
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Devil_and_Daniel_Mouse
is pretty much what the WB do with their celebrities, except for the "taking your soul at the height of your fame" part.
>>82717030
they do that at the start.
The payment is done almost isntantly.
>>82716896
Jan becomes so vicious because she's the longest running surviving star. She's seen 5 different Powerlines come and go. Like 7 different Jems.
She sees Max has a shot at getting out of his contract. Although her and Max's actions just end up freeing Goofy.
Should we have a celebrity attack them at the farmer's market instead of an assassins, or would a celebrity attract too much attention to get the job done and that's why they've outsourced to an assassin?
The reason why The Thief was sent after them when they took down HR is because they still didn't view them as much more than mall rats who trashed a store, and he was just meant to be a distraction anyway for Wuya to attack Sector V.
When they get in and out of the Looniversity, the WB starts taking them more seriously and sends an assassin.
When they take down the four business men, the WB sends in the celebrities.
When they take down the Talent Agency and Jew Producer, suddenly they have no more talent to send/spare and have to go back to assassins.
>>82717165
By the time the final battle takes place, Red Guy agrees to fight the heroes on somewhat even terms because he knows he's got a fucking uphill run if he wants to rebuild what they fucked up.
By fighting them with Stands and not simply demonic might, he's guaranteeing that he owns their souls and can use them to rebuild if he wins.
HIM killing Dexter is him stating that he doesnt have such reservation. And that they could rebuild with one or two of the protags.
>>82717165
The talent agency should work as an academy/training grounds for the WB celebrities once they sign their contracts, where they hone their artistic and combat skills. With the destruction of the agency the WB can no longer convert people into celebrities and any surviving ones disperse, believing that their obligations with the WB are done.
>>82717249
By fucking up the movie studio, they pretty much fucked over all the new contracts with all the new stand users, so the demons GET NOTHING.
Squidward is still trying to play both sides at this point, he keeps feeding the WB intel, he keeps pulling his friends out of the fires that are too hot for them to handle.
He fucked up since reporting the Cartman is crazy strong and beat Jew Producer was the last thread of patience the WB had with the Urban Rangers and so they hire a professional problem eliminator, Roger (which persona are we going with for him here?), who only manages to kill Toph before Rolf finds him and caves his head in with his staff in a rage educed frenzy over one of his flock being killed.
All the WB has left are their actual employees that they need to maintain the company front, some demons who are on Earth, and whatever assassins they can contract. This is as the UR are making their way to the tower, and they're all pissed.
>>82717448
It's all attached and located on the WB film lots.
The Looniversity isn't for training the celebrities, it might serve as an occasional screening process, but its primary function is research.
>>82717491
They make Toph a MOTHERFUCKING PRIORITY when she speaks to Xavier and he almost blows the lid off their entire operation.
>>82717604
It still takes them like 2 or 3 days after the fact to get around to it. I thought it was like a cosmic death flag she got when talking to him.
What is Xavier's stand anyway?
>>82717555
I said talent agency, but I recall the idea of the Looniversity dispatching promising test subjects for celebrity making
>>82717667
it's been a while since I saw it.
Last I wrote of him was his dialogue with Toph. It works even if he's just spiritual backwash that the void spit out similar to TA.
At best he's a distraction while the rest of the gang is fighitng Gideon.
>>82717775
He was still apparently a big enough deal for the Red Guy to personally confront him after his fight with Toph.
Right now he's stated to be mistaken for another assassin who Toph stays behind to deal with while the others go inside Gideon's hideout to face COAL. By the time they come out, he's already gone.
>>82717667
if memory serves he's an independent Stand, it was on the original pastebin, but on part 4.
>>82717852
>>82717775
Red Guy sees potential in him in a way that TA also has.
See, Xavier may act like he's good natured, but in his show as a hero he's murdered people outright, burned inhabited buildings, put communities out of a job, and eaten babies.
No matter how much he tries to help, he's never going to truly help.
He's a monster. The Red Guy wants him to embrace this.
>>82718004
>>82718034
I think he should actually be an angel for our purposes, a severely messed up angel who doesn't even remember he's an angel, but still feels compelled to intervene when demonic shit is happening.
Red Guy confronts him hoping to corrupt him further, but he's like mush, you can't build it up and your can't break it down.
We're never going to see him again after he walks away from Toph, so it doesn't really matter. Or do we see him again?
So I don't think he should be an independent stand.
>>82718122
He leaves, having thought that revealing everything to Toph makes it all ok. This problem has resolved itself. Time for new adventures.
Also she blew the lid on his "subtle suggestions" and actually said "ohshit they're demons?"
THAT'S what marked her for death,
In a twisted way. It wasn't Xavier's fault.
>>82718321
She never said demons though, she just said "there's someone behind all this?" and I assume she meant behind the WB.
That's on day 3 of Plucky's coma.
She dies saving everyone from Roger's poison gas on day 5 of Plucky's coma.
They took their sweet time getting around to it.
Stand Name: [AFRICA]
User: Gene Edison Simmons
Abilities: [Electricity Manipulation]
[High Frequency sounds]
Range: C
Speed: E
Destructive Power: A
Durability: D
Presicion: B
Potential: C
>>82718480
Africa is already a stand and
and did you just use the jojo stand generator app to do this?
don't do that.
>>82718480
Africa's taken.
>>82718454
She didnt start to pick up on the subtext.
Also the demons are hardly being accomodating to them. They ;are; sending assassins and killers after them.
Patrick should have a "does she know?" chapter or two, talking to the clown portrait in his office.
We never know what "that" is. Well, we do, but not at that moment.
When they fight the stars, that's when she gets the epiphany. THATS when WB starts NEEDiNG the Urban Rangers dead.
>>82699626
Yes.
>>82718553
Nope, Just thought it out
>>82718555
How about [TOTO]
>>82718480
>>82718580
WRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYDDDDDD Part 2.
I rather like it and Nigel does a lot of things with it.
>>82699165
We could make Extreme Warriors a ability used for fights against groups of users.
>>82694743
>「PERFUME」
>not 「SMELLS LIKE TEEN SPIRIT」
>>82718570
I feel like I'm not going to be able to properly sort all this until things are put into a proper order of events.
Back to the Fireside Girls, since that's the earliest part in part 5 that still needs attention, are we going with
-Fang (Dave the Barbarian)
-Cindy Vortex (Jimmy Neutron)
-Malika (Fillmore!)
-Gretchen (Camp Lazlo)
-Portia Gibbons (Mighty B!)
or what?
can you other anons please remember to not drop random characters with random stands?
we needs characters with cannon Jojo aesthetic and reason.
fucking control yourselves.
>>82694743
Look, would you mind changing the name to Smells like Teenage Spirit?
>>82718885
This was already suggested previously. >>82718684 and no one responded.
It should be staying as Perfume, besides it fits the Pop song/Rock song gimmick more than that. If you want a Nirvana stand, make your own.
>>82719041
Sorry about that. Anyway, what is the plot for part 5?
>>82719116
Read the doc. Gang wars against demons.
>>82718769
What about an actual Fireside girl? Or is she doing more important things, outside of the story?
>>82720240
Isabella was killed by Fang so she could become the new leader. Anyone who disagreed was butchered. Fang's stand is quite strong.
>>82720279
Yikes, no wonder the gang are villainous.
>>82716970
>>82717030
>>82717154
So I take it she's the most leathal member of the demons/celeb arc?
Her and Max seem like good friends
>>82712206
>>82712846
>>82713307
You're a good man, Stand Reviewfag.
>>82721970
She sees hope for Max. That's why she's his friend.
Also she had been friends with the previos Powerline. So it sorta carried over.
>>82718684
>>82718885
>Missing a great J-POP reference
>>82722985
>Expecting a J-Pop reference to be recognized
>>82723244
They're a band Araki referenced in Part 7. Still, fair point.
>>82718769
Have any of them been given Stands? The only Stand suggestion for a FG is Riley, who's not on that list.
>>82725205
Fang has a stand, it's just somewhere in a past thread and I don't remember what it was called.
It had something to do with being a pack leader.
>>82726139
[HUNGRY LIKE THE WOLF]
>>82726248
>the ability to make people act under her thrall, but only affects those she's able to kowtow into submission. Basically an "I'm the alpha, as long as there's no one else who can do it" kind of thing. Good for general mayhem and all that.
>>82719165
Gang wars against demons? Basically, this is the Godfather with a dash of Doom?
I'm in.
>>82726350
Well, only part 5.
Part 1 is about an old man who's temper causes bad shit to happen..
Part 2 is about ancient Maya monsters who want to block out the sun with a disco ball .
Part 3 is about a group of people attempting to stop a guy from turning everyone into himself.
Part 4 is about a silly contest that leads to a serial killer investigation.
Part 6's plot is tentative, due to it being rewritten, but the main idea is a crazed security officer attempts to imprison the entire word.
Part 7 is about exhuming Superman's body while also being a contestant on Wacky Races, because the president says so
Part 8 is also being reworked. The current idea is a battle of web animation and classic animation, that leads to a douche developing godly powers and now they gotta stop him.
>>82726548
part 8: Douchebag manipulates modern and ancient cartoons into a total war, while he creates a doomsday scenario with what's basically meme magic.
Is there still a place for Mok, or is his role pretty much taken by Jew Producer?
>>82718480
That reminds me that Tina is in the Stand doc. Would she fit in Part 5 somewhere?
>>82718684
I half expected someone to give Yumi a Japanese punk band name, like Blue Hearts.
>>82727102
Aw man, Part 8 is gonna be a blast to write
>>82726548
Regarding part 6, with the new comic that's been circulating /co/, I sorta want to makeRobertHill the prison's counselor.
>>82727335
Mok might be a director on the movie set? LeQuack was suggested to be impersonating a cooking show host, as he did in an old CN game. If he did that, maybe it'd leave enough room for Mok. But then again, it might become a clusterfuck.
Along with make up, directors, cameramen, sound, props, and celebrities, who do they fight there and in what time frame? The way people speak of it makes it seem like less than a day, but is it just going to be a boss rush of stand users? Will they fight them all at once? Will they be fought one at a time?
>>82727726
Wouldn't Mok be in charge of a recording studio if he was added?
>>82727890
That could work. He fights alongside Ami and Yumi.
>>82727102
Craig Charles is the protagonist of Part 8 and he knows that the world will end after he had a nightmare where he received an cryptic message from someone from the future. He must try to prevent a world ending event, but before that he must fix rifts between the cartoons. You know why I made MASTER OF MAYHEM OP because a guy trying to unite a race at war needs a Stand that can take on both sides as well a godlike being.
>>82727335
I don't really know who Mok is, I assume he's this guy?
He should be one of the talent judges. He's the longest standing celebrity the devils have, and he commands respect even from them since he's so much like a devil himself.
So he's directly above the "big man on campus" and directly below Jew Producer.
>>82727726
The movie lot raid will take them about 12 hours I guess.
They get in, Rolf gets swept up in auditions wanting to preform The Hairless Otter (which is like Shakespeare here), Taffy fucks up the Starduck Crusaders set by turning all their equipment to cheese, LeQuack goes after Dexter who is looking for clues to the next WB shell company after this one, Squidward has to deal with Puffy Amiyumi (maybe they like his look?), they all meet up for the "big man on campus" and Mok, and Cartman realizes the fate of the world is at stake when he sees Jew Producer and that he hasn't been doing camp activities this whole time, making his stand take on its more powerful form and thrashing Jew Producer before some of the other fights can even conclude.
>>82728056
Of course I forger to attack the pic "this guy" was directed to.
>>82728039
Stop this.
Craig Charles isn't /co/, or at least not significantly. Homestar and Tails are the protags.
Read the docs.
If you mention him one more time, he is officially NEVER EVER'd, if he isn't already.
Don't be like BunnyRaven and push an idea too strongly. It comes off as annoying and unlikable and gets banned.
>>82728083
>forger to attack
Whoa whoa whoa, slow down there.
>>82728128
It's like when you get mad the first time you forget something, then you mess up worse trying to add the thing you forgot.
That could probably be a stand power if taken a few steps further.
>>82728202
I believe that is already in the form of Xavier or Johnny 13's stand power; bad luck that gets worse.
>>82728202
>Mok can make fake weapons that look and act like what they are based off of for a short time, before their quality reduces and they cease functioning.
>>82728260
He already has a stand in docs somewhere.
Oh wait...fuck me. That would make a good stand ability for someone.
>>82728260
Did he have a stand suggestion before?
Anyway, thoughts on the UR splitting up inside the WB studios and then mostly reconvening when they have to fight Bradley Uppercrust III and Mok?
Uppercrust feels like a stunt man really.
>>82728411
>Bradley Uppercrust
>Not Dick Daring from The Replacements.
>>82728539
Uppercrust has been suggested for this for over a month now, and I think I've finally found a place in the story where he could actually fit into it.
>>82693003
why aren't you faggots in /lgbt/ where you belong?
>>82729067
>/lgbt/
You spelled /trash/ wrong.
>>82728999
I know that, but stuntman? He's better as a model or something. He and Chad could be better in the department store as guards/mens wear models maybe? Then again, I know nothing about how the department store works except it's in a volcano and filled with ghosts.
Duck Daring would be a better stuntman. Maurecia from Wayside would be a better stuntman. I just don't see Bradley as fitting for the part. He's too handsome and popular in an uncanny sorta way.
>>82729663
Think of some way to fit him into the Looniversity, maybe he gets wack in the back of the head on the UR's way out and swears revenge on them to foreshadow the celebrities. Then they fight him later on the film set as he's leading a posse looking for them.
Part 9: Gauls und Panzer
Synopsis: Asterix gets captured by Romans and get sent to a Britain runned by a PC and corrupt Labour government just moments after they took over Europe and declared war on the United States of America and the Russian Federation. He must kill the ancestor of the Prime Minister before they take over most of the world. The ancestor in question is Jeremy Corbyn. However, the president has ordered attacks on Europe. He must find a way to prevent history from being changed and kill Jeremy Corbyn before the dystopia of Britain happens and the Roman Empire goes global.
NOTE: No stands. They are fuel for the EU's Navy as a clean alternative to nuclear power.
>>82730238
Fucking. No.
No /tv/, only /co/.
No part 9. None of this shit.
You're the asshole who suggested that stupid-ass Top Gear Stig plot for part 7, aren't you.
Look, if /tv/ wants it's own Jojo, do it there. This is /co/. Anything live action automatically goes in the >>>/trash/
>>82730346
I believe this is just some new type of shitposting.
Quick question, but will the Rat and Weasel be showing up in part 5 anywhere? They'd probably just be cameos though, but would they fit into anyplace? Maybe HR?
>>82730959
Leaving the department store, carrying packages to be delivered to unsuspecting buyers.
>>82730346
>/tv/ jojo
>all parts are hijacked by Felicity from Arrow
>>82730959
they could be the chauffeurs of one of the celebrities
So, any Andrew Marchant suggestions are automatically /trash/, right?
>>82732612If he doesn't get with the programyeah I guess so.
>>82731076
>>82731143
>>82730959
Maybe they could be signs of impending doom?
>>82728411
>>82728343
found it near the bottom of the doc:
Mok (Rock and Rule)
「TRIUMPH」
The character's motivation: to keep his fame propped up by any means possible, even though he's getting older and artistically stale. This is a bad guy, to be defeated by our heroes.
His stand's is physically weak, long-range (line-of-sight), not independent. Powers:
- My Name is Mok: All who witness his stand in any direction are stunned in awe, they stop whatever they're doing until the stand and user is out-of-sight (omnidirectional, can reach targets the user is unaware of). They will remain stunned in awe even if the stand user interferes with them (taking items or companions, or even hitting them).
- Pain & Suffering: The stand can focus on one person, whose fascination rises to religious zealotry, and the target immediately offers the first valuable item they can think of to their "god." If they value their own life most of all, they will injure themselves as an offering.
Weakness: the stand must be seen to affect its targets. If Mok isn't the centre of attention, he is powerless. Joseph Joestar would defeat him by covering his eyes, and using the ripple to blindfight while his allies are paralyzed in worship.
>>82734981
Sounds like Toph will be the one to really trounce him.
Cartman, meanwhile, is too fixated on Jew Producer, who he has been following suspecting him of his Jewishness.
Once it is confirmed that he is an enemy, Cartman's stand actually becomes useful for the only time in the entire part.
>>82735254
All throughout the movie set arc, Cartman is trying to find the person who said whatever line sets him off, but he's always out of sight.
He spends the entire time lurking around the lots looking for this guy, when he finally finds Jew Producer, Mok is doing his full on radiance thing, but Cartman's attention is fixated on Jew Producer while Toph has to keep Mok from tricking the other Urban Rangers into signing contracts and then they have to fight Uppercrust.
>>82732695
They're more like a one time gag.
Like as the UR approach the department store, they see that carriage leaving and the weasel hisses at them, then Rolf gives it the death glare in response.
Saw we needed Stands for some of the Fireside Girls so I whipped up one.
>User: Gretchen
>Stand: 「MAYHEM」
>Appearance: A small humanoid with characteristics of a dinosaur and a maw devoid of teeth
>Ability: 「MAYHEM」 holds dominion over 「THAT WHICH OPENS AND CLOSES」 and will slowly convert any instance of such into a 「JAW」 and begin growing 「TEETH」 out of the object so long as it remains within 15 metres of the user. The teeth created will extend in length and sharpness the longer the victim remains within the user's range usually reaching the point where the teeth naturally reach either side of the object within 10 minutes.
Wanted to go for a body horror angle for her.
>>82735254
There is also Mr. Frensky in the stand doc, but we need to rework his role.
>>82734981
That'll make for a good Toph focus.
>>82728056
So Mok is enthralled by Rolf's performance of The Hairless Otter until Uppercrust comes in and sees Rolf, identifying him as a member of the Urban Rangers, and more importantly the guy who hit him in the back of the head at the Looniversity.
>>82737974
And it also works to counter Rolf's REVOLVING DOORS.
>>82738197
I'm not sure who that is.
>>82738983
Thinking I should drop the range, otherwise her team can't do much work with her without jumping in and out of her range every few minutes.
>>82739547
Maybe change it so so she can only maintain so many targets at once.
>>82739736
Yeah, I'd say 4 instances allowed at a time.
>>82739823
Sounds good, that means it can still be effective in stopping Rolf from using his stand to make himself have more heads and arms.
So should the Fireside Girls end up being arrested at the end of the fight?
>>82740293
I'd say so. Plus it could give us a jumping off point for the UR meeting Rex.
>>82740492
Is it a good idea for them to meet Interpol so early in the story?
I guess it makes sense they'd be the ones to take them into custody since they're stand users, and it would give Shaggy and Scooby some extra credibility when they meet in the city.
>>82728039
nah
>>82740760
Rex is in charge of the area post Daffy incident so it'd make sense. Plus, having confirmation of the Stand gangs would lead to him bringing Morocco in and influencing later events.
>>82741488
Right, but let's keep it unconfirmed to him that stand jawbreakers are in the mix until after Dr. Facilier is defeated and a bag of them are recovered by the Urban Rangers (which Rolf destroys after Shaggy and Scooby tell them about what the jawbreakers do).
>>82742000
How is it unknown to him at this point if Shaggy and Scooby already found Farnsworth?
Did they just need to catch someone from the WB with the jawbreakers to confirm it?
>>82738983
The garbage man from Arthur, he is a jew too.
>>82745351
Sounds like someone who just shows up to establish Cartman's dislike of Jews.
Is there anything that needs doing in 1-4 that we forgot?
>>82745689
Part 1 to 3 are getting embellishment, I think, and the doc of part 4 has a list of what is currently missing at the top
>>82745689
You just have to knuckle down and actually read through part 4 to see what still needs to be done, because I just can no longer state what still needs to be done in it in list format.
It's all in the in-between sections. How they got to this place, why they make this decision. Stuff like that.
You fuckfaces need to stop this.
Sincerely, /a/.
>>82747348
nah
>>82747348
kakyoin, the only thing you've stopped is breathing, get outta here
>>82747445
Should Toph try to pass on any information right before the poison gets her?
I know she's busy breaking all the windows to vent the poison gas to save the others, but is there anything she'd know by that point that she should try to tell the others about?
I also think it should be the windows in the Sector V base and not the Urban Rangers' hide out since that's inside Bobo now.
Speaking of Bobo, does Rolf just carry it around with him all the time, pulling it out of nowhere when they need it?
>>82747541
Bobo can teleport to either wherever it's owner is, or within a certain range. Probably the latter.
It goes around by "eating" itself, Pac-Man style. That's also how it can appear inside BOC. Bobo needs to be outside the stand to let people out though.
May also damage people like Cream while it does it's teleporting trick.
>>82747796
That's new.
So when they're inside of Bobo, the giant clam exterior is exposed?
Do their enemies just not know about Bobo and that's why its clam body is never attacked while the Rangers are sleeping inside of it?
I know we discussed them sleeping in shifts since they have super full days after Plucky goes tomato.
>>82747888
I just suggested it. What I was thinking was Bobo could be inside BOC by eating itself cause of stand magic, but it would block off any entrances or exits to the room. Anything already inside would be trapped there.
I guess that'd be a whole thing involving the Mandark fight. Whatever he fuck his new stand is, Bobo can't afford to let it out, so he traps himself and Mandark in BOC.
>>82747992
Well that makes more sense how BOC is a safe heaven for the Urban Rangers, but then why did they go through the trouble of having Sector V watch over Plucky at their base?
Because they need someone to physically watch over him encase his condition worsens?
>>82748137
Maybe it's because Sector V is the more of a "hospital" environment than BOC? Bobo can probably only hold so many things, whatever is needed for Plucky's survival may be overdoing it. And it has a size limit too.
If Bobo "eats" more than X amount of items, he can't hold anymore. Said items must be removed from BOC before more can come in.
The limit might be 10 things at a time. With everything needed for Plucky's survival, it'd just be more conventional to store him at Sector V than juggle everything.
Plus, BOC is cold and damp, being a dungeon. Not really the environment for a coma patient to be in.
Items generated by the stand, like hay and torches, can't be taken outside either.
>>82747992
So, if Bobo gets inside BOC, the clam disappears from the real world? That makes for one hell of a defensive measure.
Also, we need to figure out what a remastered version of Mandark's Stand can do, his normal bubbles are already powerful.
>>82748392
Dexter has a whole damn mini lab inside of Bobo.
I don't think there's an item limit, but there is a space limit.
>>82750277
Well I suggested it loses the reliance on needing an electrical power source and is able to convert any energy into its bubbles.
Beyond that, I don't know.
well I was doing some more dialogue today...
but guys, I noticed that somebody replaced several of the pages with "Jojo sucks." I simply cannot continue to work on something that an anonymous stranger says sucks, you guys
so let's make it awesome, okay?
>>82751109
He actually stuck around and did that more than once?
>>82751109
>I noticed that somebody replaced several of the pages with "Jojo sucks."
That seals it, I fucking quit drawing for this, cya nerdspage 13 soon
>>82751109
Goddammit, that faggot is really triggered, ain't he? thankfully the docs can be restored easily
>>82751109
>>82751134
>>82751152You know restoring docs is pretty easy, right?
Just ignore them. They'll stop after a while.In the meantime, we can speculate on their true identity
Anyway, let's get back to part 5.
Why is Plucky held at Sector V and not Bobo? What does Mandark's stand do?
>>82751209
The KND probably have some medical stuff in their base, the hospitals cannot be trusted since the WB probably owns them, they can't keep him in Bobo because they need someone to watch him encase his condition worsens.
They entrust Plucky to Sector V because they can't spare any of their own members to watch him/their own members are incapable of caring for him (Toph is blind, Dexter is needed on missions, Cartman is Cartman, Taffy can't do it alone, Squidward is also needed on missions).
>>82751301
>"What about Rolf? Maybe his Old Country medicine can-"
>"Rolf? Really? You want Mr. Life's Many Doors to fix him up with THAT."
>"..uh yeah, fair point I guess,"
>>82728126
Just wanna say.
Since I know Part 8 is not gonna be worked for a while, I wanna bring up to whoever is/will be in charge of character design or anyone who attempts drawings honestly, that Homestar better have his Dangeresque Too glasses as part of his design, otherwise it'd be heavily disappointing.
Should Bunnicula (from the cartoon Bunnicula) appear in /co/rge /co/star? His Stand would also be called [Bunnicula] (After the novel Bunnicula) and it could drain the fluid from objects making them collapse in on themselves.
>>82751858
Sure, why not?
If we can find a place for him that is.
/Co/rge /Co/star is still a ways away, anon. Work on the concept a little more and put it in the stand suggestion doc. We'll find a place for him, probably.
>>82751858
Stand needs a song or band name if you want to keep it in theme.
For a power like that, I'd recommend something like 「STILL WATERS RUN DEEP」
>>82752099
you forget that in /co/rge, all the Stands are named after pieces of literature..
>>82752165
Then at least do something interesting instead of naming the character and the stand the same thing. There are literally hundreds of vampire books out there.
>>82752240
I was trying to be funny.
>>82752240
>instead of naming the character and the stand the same thing
yeah jojo's never done that before
>>82752359
JoJo also made a rapist orangutan and had a baby eat its own shit, but we're not going to repeat all of the bad ideas.
>>82752453
Not forgetting the fact that...well, this happens to Hazamada. I mean I know those two prolly just beat the shit out of him, but you never can tellwith cutaways.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e2hbpC7j2fc
>>82752698
He's probably fine.
Probably.
