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Remember to Watch, Read, Listen, Embrace and Recomend JoJo

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Threadly reminder to read Jojo's Bizarre Adventure if you haven't already.

It'll give you a better grasp on the concept of stands, their powers and the plot line in general.

Coming out of the shadows after a long fucking while to remind you to believe in yourself, /co/
I know you can do this

>>81916702
danke anon.

Time to get Writing boys,

We are not letting this project [BITE THE DUST]!

>>81917331
i would like to write but i'm too tired to do so right now.

maybe sandcastles or that one pastebin guy can help out a bit.

So I'm thinking the Gadget Noir material can be used when the PPG are asking Gadget about his body, at the "Gadget's accident" section in the doc, and also when talk to Scrooge when the assassin strikes, being able to show off what Scrooge helped pay for.

>"You, weirdo!"
>Pyg looks behind Gadget as he's fighting J&SB
>Pyg just looks at him
>Human After All floats behind Gadget
>Pyg walks towards Gadget.
>Gadget runs towards Pyg
>Pyg brings out his stand, which surprises Gadget
>Transforms Gadget a bit.
>[HUMAN AFTER ALL] repairs Gadget to where not much is done
>Gadget punches Professor Pyg in the gut.
>Pyg retaliates by punching him in the face, knocking Gadget onto the ground
>Pyg uses his stand again, transforming Gadget
>[HUMAN AFTER ALL] comes from behind Pyg, cutting him a bit.
>Pyg gets out of the stand's way
>[HUMAN AFTER ALL] repairs Gadget
>"Look, bozo. No one's perfect, and neither are you, Pyg."
>Pyg begins to look worried a bit
>"This whole transformation thing is despicable, and I'm not gonna let it stand any longer."
>Pyg runs at Gadget out of anger, transforming him once again
>[HUMAN AFTER ALL] repairs Gadget, reversing the effects
>"My stand directly counters your stand, you stand no chance, Pyg."
>Pyg slowly backs away
>"GO GO [HUMAN AFTER ALL!]"
>[HUMAN AFTER ALL] appears behind Gadget.
>Gadget runs at Pyg
>Gadget delivers a super hard punch to Pyg's face.
>Pyg falls down.
>PROFESSOR PYG [PERFECTION] RETIRED!

>>81918438
I take it Gadget realized this is what a stand is after hearing so much about them.

After the fight Gadget should touch some of the places where his ribs are and note that it feels as if they were his actual ribs and not the metal he's made of, then dismisses it as phantom syndrome.

Fred after fighting Gadget.

>"My name is Fred."
>"I say, I said my name is Fred."
>"That Gadget hit me like a hatchet."
>"Gadget injured me, which will be hindering me on my adventures throughout this town..."
>"Thankfully now that Gadget is gone, there will be no one to act on that case, and I will go on as normally."
>"Hopefully this... Conman Coalition won't notice. Right now, I'm in really bad condition."
>"Hopefully..."

Epilogue.

>Cut to panorama of the Old Country
>Birds chirping
>Slow pan over desolate town
>Zoom in to small house
>It's old and abandoned
>Someone pulls out a book
>"Being Yourself, by M.E. LeTerally, eh?"
>"That's exactly what I needed."
>Cue to silhouette of person
>Silhouette slowly reveals
>It's Plucky Duck
>Literally, who is this guy?
>Cut to black
>THE END

all right, that's all for me from tonight.

i'll read up on the doc again tomorrow and see what i can do.

in the mean time, good luck /co/.

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this is bad meme

so what character development can we get for the conmen coalition and detective group?

>>81920936
Scrooge and Gadget get along just fine, they share stories about taking care of nieces/nephews. Scrooge finds Gadget pleasant enough to be around and is glad the money he contributed to the Strickland foundation went to good use.

Stan meets Gadget when he shows up and starts telling the Recess kids off about attacking the elderly. Takes a liking to Gadget since he's not an asshole and spared him the trouble of beating up a bunch of kids.

Gadget and the Eds have the least (meaningful) interaction so far, so to make up for that we'll need to make sure they have a number of scenes together during the Kevin chase. They need to grow to like the guy during it.

This is all so his death pisses them off enough to put a hold on their competition and take down the son of a bitch who killed him.

Someone propose some questions the PPG might ask Gadget about being a cyborg.

I'm going to try to integrate some of the old Gadget Noir stuff into part 4 when I'm more awake.

Is The Beast (OTGW) scrapped from the storyline? Seeing as his stand was too similar to Justice/Fun Fun Fun and he wasn't found on the part 4 doc.

>>81852558
>>81910154
She emits a purplish stand glow and when she focuses her power on something, it will send out purple waves of energy. She can do this with one hand or both.

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For Waifu Ocean. Can we do a handcuffed together arc between two characters like pic related?

>>81923857
Speaking of waifus, do you think the Warden bribes people outside the prison to arrest the waifus that he wants on dubious charges?

>>81918438
>"Go go" followed by stand name
I can get behind this

Decided to make a minor tweak to 「City Never Sleeps」

It's still bound in shadows and does not maninfest in the user's own shadow, but nor is it explicitly bound to shadows cast on buildings anymore.

After all it's only added in because "City" Never Sleeps, and isn't really that important.
I figured the stand'll find it easier to move around in an urban environment anyways, given that more crowded and compact areas would end up making more shadows.

>>81923997
Probably. Who knows how many people that sick bastard has bribed

>>81923857
I'm thinking Creepy Suze and Giffany might have some tension they need to work out

>>81924125
>>81923857
Mayne Suze and one of the spies from Interpol. Clover/Sam/Alex.

Either way I like this idea. Could give them a reason to team up.

>>81916286
>Fighting game doc link STILL isn't the new one
Jesus Christ this is like the third time

https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B0lqXHlZXEFTaFppZV96ejU5b2s&usp=sharing

>>81924598
>fighting game

Probably going to end up with shit programming and sprites, let alone balancing, anyway.

>>81924553
Maybe she gets handcuffed to Lacey Shadows, and discovers her true identity.

>>81924598
Should have posted it in the last thread then.

>>81924694
>>81924553
Either works. Will this be early or late game? And how should they get handcuffed together? Although if this does become a minor plot point we'll have to decide between interpol agents or Lacey.

>>81924712
ahem
>>81861059

>>81924733
I'll try to remember to put it in next time.

>>81924723
>>81924553
Personally I think people are focusing a bit too much on gangs and groups rather than the MCs in part 6, but I guess this idea is alright.

So, what power do you think [Big & Loud] would have?

>>81924826
Well Suzie being one of the main characters, thus could give her some development

>>81925012
>>81924826
Refresh me on what Lacey's spiel was.

>>81924079
Oh and could someone help remove Scripted Connection from the stand google doc? I'm not going to resubmit it until I've figured out a new set of abilities anyways.

I would have done it myself, but I don't want to look like I'm vandalizing on the doc or anything.

Has anyone considered for the storylines for the finished parts to be peer-reviewed in the writefag thread here and on the infinte cripple's place, just so others can give their thoughts on what needs fixing, whether there are any plotholes, or if the characters needed a bit more fleshing out?

>>81925620
>the spoiler
Wait what
I thought we're only keeping our autism in these threads here?
When did we expand to over there?

>>81917331
Last thread became a glorified shitpost near the end.

Most of these suggestions have really sidetracked out story.

Parts 1-3 worked because we kept a tight control over who got in and kept the cast small.

I have no fucking idea as to why we're adding even more allies to Part 4, or why Part 8 has thrown out the webcomics angles.

>>81918438
its a nice attempt.

But having a motion of the fight be:

X does something.
Y undoes it.
X punches Y
Y punches back.

Isn't very JoJo. Maybe you should decide WHERE they're fighting? How Pyg is going to get the upper hand?

He knows Gadget just got a Stand. And KNOWS that Standless Ggadget is a fucking beast.

>>81918914
He's already fought Stand Users without the use of a stand by this point. Also he's been hanging out with Jay and Silent Bob.

This is his first "real" fight with his Stand.

>>81920936
Jay and Silent Bob compete against Scooby and Shaggy to get the "mentor" role from Penny.

This ends up backfiring on both of them because Penny points out Stoners and Moochers are no suitable rolemodels.

>>81924723
Would the Warden's stand be able to do that? Or maybe Vicky does it as a sick joke?

>>81924826
You didnt notice until now?

That shit became apparent when they started making up Stands and Groups to accomodate every waifu faggot on the site willy nilly.

What even is the plot progression at this point?

They get to the point where they enter Pure Imagination, but we were approaching the need to have Strickland itself be villanous at first.

At this point I'd argue against it. As getting Stand Users for Strickland would be even more of a bitch at this point.

>>81923997
He's arresting hundreds of Stand Users on dubious charges. That's the point of the jail, and why Strickland Foundation is supporting him.

>>81925620
Part 2 isnt done yet.
But if someone wants to do Part 1,,,, do it?

Other people already consider us cringey. So I dont know why you'd want to.

>>81926085
>>81926065
I had a few name ideas for Strickland's Stand awhile back. But I'm ass at coming up with abilities. So if you guys want we can collab on that part. The name I had in mind were Chump Chance, I'll Give You Something to Cry About, or Grounds for Divorce.

I am also cool with the handcuffed together thing because that feels like something we should have in a prison story. Also it's more than just waifu pandering and seems it an interesting fight could come out of it or plot point.

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>>81926181
Another I had for a possible Strickland member whose all about big business and shitting in waifus is Eric Raymond from Jem with his Stand The Misfits. I was thinking it could be a humanoid with 4 heads. Each head being a different member of the Misfits from the show. Pizaz is one, Stormer is another, etc.

>>81926109
>Other people already consider us cringey

Grow some balls.

>>81925876
Some guy posted pics from the booru there (while crediting us) and one of the stand artists (PipSQK) is a regular.

Just saying this because they have a writefag thread up, and they know more about JoJo than 95% of us here.

>>81924125

Giffany and Gaz could have some tense interaction to work in as well. In one side we have a psychotic vidya waifu that has mood swings issue and in the other we have a psychotic gamer girl who wants the world to leave her alone.

>>81922380
I haven't seen the Beast be scrapped yet. His stand power is still up in the air though and that makes the Scrooge assassination attempt hard to do.

>>81925987
Which means we need to make his fight against the Beast really utilize his nature as a cyborg and really show case what he can do even before getting a stand.

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>>81921229

>Gadget and the Eds have the least (meaningful) interaction so far, so to make up for that we'll need to make sure they have a number of scenes together during the Kevin chase. They need to grow to like the guy during it.

I wonder if Ed or Double D would see Gadget as a role model of sorts since he has traits that fancies both of them (Ed would be admired to see a cyborg detective in real life, while Double D would get interested for the technologic and investigator aspect of Gadget) and thus they would get inspired by him to become better people. Meanwhile, Eddy would be much indifferent to Gadget until Gadget dies trying to stop Fred and then would he start to develop sympathy toward Penny and the others who Gadget had befriended during his mission in the town.

>>81926485
Go fuck yourself.

Its not being scared about the reaction. Its knowing when other people probably dont want to see it.

I didnt say not to do it. If you want to. Just said that I didnt think it was a great idea.

>>81928046
So Eddy develops a "I didn't really like the guy, but no one deserves THIS!" sort've outlook after the fact? Or maybe he feels some guilt since Gadget died in a stand battle and Eddy was the one who sold him the jawbreaker that gave Gadget his stand.

Later on they could find out they actually sold Gadget a fighting chance rather than a death sentence.

I saw that the person who posted the animal gang's Sagwa stand was not well recieved. How about we just limit it to causing minor tremors, and have it work in tandem with Dongwa's stand? Like, it helps to keep people distracted and disoriented enough so Dongwa can actually get in close enough to kick at Squidward.

>>81924829
Compression.
Whatever Big and Loud touches will have 500pounds of force slowly applied onto it's too, crushing it at a snails pace.

>>81924553
>>81924694
Maybe she could get handcuffed to one of the guards, like Dominator or Vexus?

>>81924826
The worst p art about people adding more gang members is that we already decided that gangs would only have their leaders be stand users, and as minor fights only. The most important gang leader story wise is Gaz.

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I want to write the battle between Stan and the Recess gang, but i have 2 questions:

Why does the recess gang attack Stan and what does he get when he wins?
As far as i know they attack him because he broke into madam fosters mansion, and when he wins the recess gang points to kevin selling the jawbreakers, tell me if i am correct on this.
What are the Stands for the recess gang?
As far as i know it was like this
TJ → 「TWO HEADED BOY」
Spinelli → 「DON’T BRING ME DOWN」
Vince → 「BASKETBALL」 → on 「HOTEL CALIFORNIA」
Gretchen → ???
Mickey → 「GREEN TAMBOURIN」
Gus → [I GOT SOUL BUT I'M NOT A SOLIDER]

I don't even know now man, i can try and give gretchen a stand from the unused Stand list or make one myself but i need your guises aprobal, also i think TJs Stand was used for something else im not sure

>>81930153
>Stan lee is with a reporter
>He claims that Stands aren't real (just like capes)
>He then proceeds to rip his shirt
>"I am a STAND!"
>makes a bad impression of Star Platinum while the reporter slowly backs away

>>81930299
kek.

>Carolina in the Morning segment
>Daffy jumps into a book
>He accidentally jumped into the actual Stardust Crusaders manga.

>>81918438
I tried a crack at the Pyg fight a little while back, but this was all I really got out

>Prof Pyg reaches for a scalpel, but as he touches it, it explodes into a burst of fire. he squeals and recoils, scalded by the blast
>Gadget looks confused towards the blast as someone yells from the entrance
>"Yo, bacon bits!"
>Jay and Bob pose by the entrance. "Get your greasy manboobs off our meal ticket!"
>Gadget: "Jay... I've never been so glad to hear that motor mouth."

>>81930786
You should go on with it.

We need all we can get right now.

>>81930285
Wasn't it discussed that not all the Recess gang would have Stands? And tha list on the doc needs to be upstaged since Two Headed Boy was given to Xero.

>>81931069
Yes but who of the recess gang should not have Stand?
i say that Vince and Gretchen can have their stands on Hotel California, maybe even Spinelli's, but i still need o know what TJ stand should do or be

Maybe give 「DON’T BRING ME DOWN」 to TJ?

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>>81930840
fair enough. I'll take a crack at that and Dale's beatdown soon, before I get to Yzma's boss fight

I've been sort of sitting back on part 3 and 4 for a while so the dust can settle on any changes

I'm thinking Gadget doesn't have a self-destruct option, but with his new sense of touch in the arm HUMAN AFTER ALL reattached, he's able to feel out his pillar propane tank while Fred is shaving his body away, then use his gripping power and lighter thumb to detonate it.

>>81930285
The Recess gang used to hang out at Madam Fosters (until she had to close her doors) and find out through their information network that Stan broke into her house and wasn't arrested, so they want they to pay for whatever he broke.

He tries using his Stan bucks to throw money at them to make them leave him alone, but the kids are stand users (so they can tell the money is fake) and a fight breaks out.

The fight does not conclude as Gadget steps in seeing a bunch of kids ganging up on an old man (it looks to him like they're posing threateningly at each other and throwing punches) and puts a stop to it with his badge. Stan thanks him for the save and says he owes him one.

Gadget then questions the Recess kids about stuff happening in town and finds out there might be someone giving out these powers from them, but he doesn't know who.

The Recess kids don't point anyone to Kevin, that was nixed since Gumball is pointing the Eds to Kevin.

another thing i want to see done are the kevin fights.

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>tfw this place is already dead
fuckin great

>>81932185
It's Sunday, people have shit to do. Expect the threads to speed up later in the day

>>81928219

I think guilt works better. A will for redemption would give Eddy motivation to help the others in tracking down Fred.

>>81931141
I was planning to scraping my LoK suggestions in favor of having Varrick with Handlebars be the only LoK represinitive, so that should be cool.
I'd say TJ and Spinelli could have Stands, and maybe Mikey since he's already got Green Tambourine.

Did anyone update the stand docs?

Is anyone updating the stand docs anymore?

>>81932368
It also helps they didn't know there was a stand using serial killer on the lose when they sold Gadget the jawbreakers.

>>81932380
Right now only Mikey and Gus have solid stand ideas out of the Recess gang.

It's annoying that when we have a character who is in the story that we have this much trouble coming up with a stand for them when there are so many other random stand ideas for characters who haven't been placed anywhere in any of the parts.

>>81932882
Gretchen is, right now, the only one everyone thinks shouldn't have a stand it seems (though I personally think she should have an alchemy based one)

Vince is suggested to have had Basketball, but lost it to Hotel California.

We just need to come up with ideas for TJ or Spinelli, unless we decide Spinelli had Coconut Woman or Better Than You.

>>81933057
Maybe we should just have them all have Stand, the "figth" will be a clusterfuck yeah, but then again this is not a figth that Stan should "win" but one he should "survive" until gadget comes.

>Gadget just sees an old man with a helpless expresion trowing money at a gang of angry 6° graders runing around

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>>81931404
The pillar propane has already been synthesized after about 20 years of study.

Maybe it could work like that and he jury rigged the explosion. But idk. Having it be a "feature" is also important in his design.


What does come to mind, however. Is having Robo-Dale come back for Part 6.

If in Part 5 we establish that Hank has died of old age. Having Dale outlive pretty much all his friends and be used as a glorified weapon would be interesting to have.

>>81933802
maybe when Strickland closes down Superjail in the end, he's there overseeing things or talking to the Totally Spies?

>>81933181
>>81933057
If they all have stands then maybe none of them should be humanoid stands.

TJ's is a can with a string attached that he can set up anywhere that he's been within a 10 mile radius. He can use it in a fight like a bolas.

Gretchen's manifests in her glasses, it lets he see thing really far away as well as what things are made of. Her natural intelligence is what makes it actually useful since it doesn't give her understanding of what she sees like Nigel's AFRICA does.

Vince's could be wrapping tape where it enhances his body wherever he wraps it.

Mikey has his tambourine.

Spinelli has a jacket that lets her plow through anything.

Gus has that flying wasp soldier thing suggested last thread.

They used to work with Coraline bringing in kids with dangerous stands who misuse them.
They're left out of the loop about what's going on at Foster's and think Stan might be the one who caused whatever is currently troubling Madam Foster.

>>81933802
I don't think a self-destruct would be a feature for humanitarian reasons.

There'd be a kill switch on the off chance Gadget ever went out of control, but it wouldn't make him explode.

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I got one.

Minmax
Stand: Dare to be stupid

>>81934146
Excellent choice. I think he might work as someone in Part 8...when we finally get to it.

>>81934101
The design was originally conceived with Dale in mind.

An explosive kill switch would be one of the first things he would think of.


Hank visitin what's left of Dale in the hospital.

"We gotta have it Hank!"

"H-have what exactly Dale?"

"The Kill switch, in case the government ever turns against us! I bet they're in there right now. Scheming to take over corporations and use all this available power for evil!"

"Who would go around doing a fool thing like that Dale?"

"THE RED PEOPLE FROM UNDERGROUND!!!"

"Dale I think all those painkillers are gettin' to your head."

"Just promise me hank. Promise me you'll give me the option of blowin' myself up if I go to the bad side! Give me that right like a red blooded american!"

"Dale you don't HAVE blood anymore. That's liquid propane running through your bo-"

"PROMISE ME"

"Ok, ok Dale. Just calm down. Your heart will stop beating if you get too excited."

>>81934300
Maybe I should do Kin too. Her stand could be Holding out for a hero

>>81930028
>>81927712
Its fine for whoever at this point.

>>81934548
>>81927712
>>81930028
>>81924553
>>81924694
Or we could just do Suzie and Gaz handcuffed together against one of the guards.

>>81934435
Just something to note, Gadget still has his blood even if Dale does not.

All that's left of Gadget from before he became a cyborg is his brain, digestive system, and circulatory system.
All his bones, muscles, and other organs were replaced.

We'll cover anything we need to about this when he's telling J&SB about it, it make them sympathize with him, especially Jay if he thinks Gadget didn't even get to keep his dick.

>>81933987
I think this will work, but i have a few suggestions:
Vince wrapping have the ability to enlongate whatever it is wrapped into
Spinelli's stand should be her boots
TJ's stand could be his hat, his hat works as a bag of holding that can store countles items inside of it, he usually just fills it with candies and trinkets for his tricks like firecrackers and marbles, he maybe even be able to hide himself on the hat

Their names should be something like:
TJ's 「JOURNEY」
Gretchen's (You)「Found Me」
Vinces's 「Pumped up Kicks」
Spinelli's 「If I Were a Boy」
Gus's 「I GOT A SOUL BUT IM NOT A SOULDIER」
Mikey's 「GREEN TAMBOURINE」

If we can reach an agreement i will go and make the Stan vs RG figth

>>81934870
Well yeah, but they had different damage done to them.

Dale got his shit fucked when Hank discovered his Propane Powers.

Gadget lost most of his body on the job.

Note also that the tech on both of them is different.

Dale's is a predecessor to Gadget's. That aspect of Gadget's robotics is probably changed.

However. Since Dale lived longer. By the time he's fought in Part 6. He's going to be a fucking beast.

Strickland Foundation will notice the difference to Gadget's eyes and cerebral functions and sorta make software that can replicate how a Stand looks like.... but it would have to be implanted on Dale only. He's going to get the Stroheim-like monocle for that.

That means that he has a leg up from Gadget in that he can see stands. He can't touch them though.

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>>81925171
When I suggested her way back when, my idea is that she would go under cover at Superjail and join the goth gang as "Lacey Shadows". At some point she'd reveal her true identity of Agent Xero to Dora and friends. Her Stand lets her hear everything someone else is hearing or saying as long as she touches an object belonging to that person.
But that was only my idea, so ignore it if you want.

>>81933057
I like >>81931404 idea personally.

>>81933987
I diunno about Gretchen's. Vince's is fine, I was gonna suggest he get Don't Bring me Down, but that works. I like Spinelli's and TJ's.

>>81935017
As long as at least two of them have stands that are useful in gathering information, I'm fine with it.

>>81935054
Hank didn't discover his propane powers during part 1, he used technology (I don't think Hank ever developed an actual stand). How he fucked up Dale remains to be seen.

I don't disagree with the rest of what you're saying.

>>81935240
OK, here's another idea for Gretchen's stand, it could be an abacus that lets her calculate the odds of an action succeeding. She can then adjust the odds based on the information available.

It's kind of a weak suggestion, but maybe it'll give someone else some ideas if the glasses idea doesn't jive well enough.

>>81935435
A stand like that was suggested for an Order of the Stick character I think? I dunno, not really feeling it.

The two things aren't bad concepts on their own, they just feel "lacking". The glasses are like Africa, but not as powerful.

>>81935099
>>81934829
OR here. Was Xero on the Warden's side or what?

>>81935617
I had the idea she'd be sent in to secretly help Dora or something. Didn't give it to much thought at the time, but I guess she could be on the Warden's side if it works for the story.

>>81919467

>Plucky Duck becoming more and more like M.E. LeTerally.
>Dear lord, this isn't going to end well.

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>>81920577

Check yourself, before you wreck yourself, anon.

>>81935307
We implied it during Hank's fight against Jack.

>>81935782
Well its depends on what people seem to like the best. Everyone seems to be suggesting 'X' gets handcuffed to Suzie for a while. We sorta need to decide on who and how it could happen.

>>81935557
Wanted to add to that a bit. Perhaps make the stand a magnifying glass that can allow the user to see things very close up? It can zoom in on things at far enough distances. May be able to adjust size to view even microscopic things possibly?

It has offensive capabilities by amplifying light shot through the glass, creating lasers or setting fires.

That's just my idea though.

>>81936009
Good point. We should probably decide on that once more work on Part 4 is done.

>>81935928
I only see visions of Peggy and Boggy listed during Hank's encounter with Jack the pumpkin king.

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Hey there, people! Fixed the drawing of Taffy and his 「STAND」 I did last thread. How is it now?

>>81936046
I'm fine for Xero overall, maybe her and Suzie do get handcuffed and she's an ally as Lacey, but an enemy as Xero which could sorta be like the whole Doppio/Diavolo from Part 5. Suzie could get handcuffed to her by Dominator as they're escaping so the party is forced to drag her along and Suzie gets another bff, but is forced to fight her close ranged upon getting unmasked.

Then either Xero joins them or is defeated. Although if she does join them I don't see Suzie being the type to let a bff get too far away from her.

>>81936160
Could Xero gets "two" stands like with KC/Epitaph, or does Lacey pretend she doesn't have one?

>>81936311
That's up to Jorge.

>>81936311
>>81936362
Well, her Stand is called "Two Headed Boy" so I could see it somehow having forms, but I should add I didn't come up with the Stand itself, just attached it to a user. I could see a KC/Epitaph thing working if I can think of a good ability.

>>81936581
Wasn't it suggested THB have the ability to fuse two people who were listening with it in an earlier thread?

>>81936643
>>81936581
That's kind of cool actually. One of the abilities can be the listening ability, the other when Xero is in control can be the fuse ability.

So should someone add her to the Part 6 docs then along with her 'fight' against Suzie during the breakout? It sounds like we have a solid idea.

Have we got Darkwing Duck in here somewhere? Just asking.

>>81937078
i think not. not sure tho

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>>81937342
Pretty sure he isn't.

Also, noticed some of muh drawfaggotry wasn't in the booru. Gon' go ahead and repost it real quick.

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>>81937905
This one isn't the best but at least it's a start for Strangers in the Night.

Oh yeah, last one was Night Prowler.

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>>81937948
Last one.

Anyone think we need more killers for part 4's second half? Seems alright from what I immediately recall but I'm not sure if it's still good considering recent developments.

>>81938028
It is nice! What do you think of My drawfaggotry, anon?

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Also, completely unrelated, but saw a comment reviewfag made >>81910154
And this abomination happened.

>「TAKE ME OUT」
>When the opponent 「pitches」a ball at the same time an alternate version of themselves pitches one, the speed, momentum, and power of the ball increases by the number of balls currently being thrown by other selves. The user can see and control themselves in other universes.
>The ball's strength can break the sound barrier, or even hit so hard the opponent is knocked back in time and space.
>The effects of the ball hitting someone through space-time is felt. A person may even suffer the pain of death before a ball hits them, due to time displacement of that pain.
>The person's 「history」in any universe where the ball kills them is erased. It will be like they never even existed, except to the stand user and people who have formed strong enough bonds with that person. However, it doesn't alter events outside of that. History unfolds the same way without them, simply "retconning" events to end up the same without their involvement.
>It takes quite some energy to pitch like this, thus the user must cooldown a bit first before pitching another one. Typically about three minutes.
>The user may activate the sub-ability 「BALLS TO THE WALL」, which can allow them to summon the balls being pitched by alternate selves to hit the foe. Balls summoned by the stand aren't as powerful as Take Me Out's effect. The sub-ability is used as a defensive measure when the user needs to cooldown.

"Silly old bear, if it wasn't for you, I would've never discovered the power of my stand. But at the same time, it is you who is stopping me from taking the world for my own. We're alike in this world of ours... Thus, I have no choice but to take the body of the only one in the world I can call a friend, make it my own, and live forever and ever with it. This is my destiny. I will cause you no pain. This is my final pitch to you, silly old bear."

>>81938578

Oh damn, Christopher Robin is a straight cold-blooded motherfucker.

>>81938578
For some reason I want him to fight Ethan

>>81938578
"Bastard... Do you remember how many pitches you have made to dispose of your foes?"
>"Do you remember how many jars of honey you have eaten?"

>>81938578
What part would he be in?

>>81939347
Chapter 5 or 6, I guess.

>>81939028
Ethan is going to be in for a ride.

Christopher Robin is just barely smaller as a meme than Loss is.

>>81939347
Part 9: Steel Baseball run.

>>81939664
Part 9: /Co//Co/lion's Unbreakable Phantom Vento Tendency Run Cruzaders

>>81939646
I dont know if part 8 has a plot already but Christopher could be fake Antagonist like akira in part 4, just to be one of Ethan victims

>>81939347
He could be part of a side-story maybe?

>>81939797
>>81939876

I like this. Him, plus the "Stone Men" of old animation.

At first the protags just go ahead and fight them.. It makes sense to fight them right?

But then Ethan mkes his appearance and breaks the meta.

>>81940013
So, the sorta Yotsuyu Yagiyama of part 8?

I'd be ok with this.

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>>81938578
damn son

>>81936107
If he turns someone's skin into cheese, will they be in agonizing pain?

Or does it not work on living things?

>>81940343
It works on living beings. Yes, it brings agonizing pain. Fear Taffy, the cheesy musketeer.

Last question, what should Mikey Stand do?
「GREEN TAMBOURINE」releases pollen in the air when it shakes it's tambourines. The pollen causes plants to grow on virtually any surface, regardless of the conditions. or When a living creature breaths the pollen they are forced to dance to the rhythm of the tambourins. This includes all living things, from humans to plants and animals.

>>81940767
I think that's fine since Mikey is a pacifist.

He has the spirit to manifest a stand, but it makes sense it would be anything that causes harm to others.

>>81940931
Yes but what can he do, make plans or make people dance

WICH ONE IS FUNNIER?!?
I say that the dance one and make gadget inmune to it

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Did we ever come to a consensus about what to do with Scott? He doesn't really fit the LHC's general aesthetic either in character or ability but could be interesting as a spurned hopeful.

>>81941418
We should probably save him for later. I want to see him in, but I can't think of a way to put him into part 4 at the moment that isn't just jamming him into the scam section.

>>81941295
... Squidward kinda already got the "Make People Dance" ability... So that's that.

>>81941295
What if it grew plants on people and the plants are what make people dance? Like they physically move the person's body?

It'd make it different from Squidward's >>81941508 since his power puts people into a trance and then they have no recollection afterwards.

Stan should be using his money to keep the pollen from landing on his body and it makes the money dance.

>>81941804
I dig it, the pollen makes dancing flowers and if there are enough flowers around something they will try to make it dance by pushing it

>>81940013
Question, what story do we have for Ethan so far?

I wanted to know if he was searching for the Rokakaka equivalent or just doing something else.

>>81942159
What we have so far is that He wants to spread the concept of LOSS, which once it becomes widespread will cause reality to collapse, leaving a white canvas to begin anew

>>81942351
It just seems weird for him to come out of left field after introducing Stone Men of Old Cartoons and the magic fruit thing in my opinion.

I was thinking the Rokakaka equivalent could boost a stand's abilities in exchange for something. He could be trying to get it for that, but I don't know.

>>81942159
Part 8 until now doesn't have too many similarities to the real Part 8 as far as we know.

Considering the fact that the Stone Men are a pretty neat idea, and that very few. if any. people have WRYYYD the manga, it's been its own thing.

Ethan's stand, Loss, is his way of trying to take back from the world, as it was awakened when he lost his son in a miscarriage. His agony from that moment streteched through time and space.

In Part 1 during Courage and Eustace's fight. His Stand appears.
Kuzco's army divides into Loss as well. First there's Pacha, standing alone. Kida and the "slightly" inferior to her animal Pillarmen. Chel and Kronk, who are about the same height. And Kuzco and Yzma. Kuzco kills Yzma, completing Loss when she collapses dead into the floor, and thus seals the end of the Pillarmen.

Part 3 has subtle Losses during the Daffy fight. Bookworld even takes on a hospital setting for a few moments, but gets tossed aside when the fight continues.

Part 4, the debris after Gadget kills himself forms a subtle Loss.

Part 5 has Loss reflected when HIM emerges from the painting in the wall.

Not sure where it goes in Part 6 ,and 7 tho.


The point is. Loss is entropy. Fallout from Pure Imagination's explosion. In his grief, Ethan;s Stand became an avatar to the eventual death of the universe itself. And he hurries it along because he wants the universe itself to feel his grief.

He wants to END the /Co/Co/ universe.

And in a way? he does.

No other stories will come out after Part 8 for us.

He manipulates events with the
>>81942538
Stone Men equivalents. Quite literally him forcing a plot that resolves quickly in a bid to make the universe end. Chris Chan follows him in a bid to make the universe appeal to him more. Hoping he can strike down Ethan at an opportune time and remake the universe in his image.

That plan is retarded, and has been done before. Much like most everything else Chris Chan does. since he's tough, ethan keeps him around.

>>81942629
>>81942538
The heroes at first want to beat the Stone Men, who are mad that "their" time is up. Much like the Stone Men can no longer survive truly in human society, old cartoons and their tricks to make utter shit marketable are slowly being phased out thanks to webmedia.

Ethan uses their rage in an attempt to make Part 8 end quickly. Thus ending the universe.

The heroes try to stop that

Ethan coming out is vital to this. Because it ends the series by bringing everthing full circle.

he ends up winning because Part 8 invariably has to end.

>>81942629
Except we've agreed every single time that we don't want an overarching villain. Loss isn't going to be everywhere, it's its own thing in its own part. Quit trying to force a "OVERARCHING ALMIGHTY EVIL" onto a project which is based on a series that doesn't have that.

>>81942775
im all up for the stone men taking more of a >>81942713
role.

to be honest.

The 70's were a fucking nightmare in animation.
Scooby doo ripoffs
repeated animation

We could make an entire villain list using only Ripoff Scooby Doo Hanna Barbera characters.

>>81942775
It's not like he was planing every single part or that he is the keikaku master behinde everything, its just that his presence is being broatcasted everywhere
atleast thats what i got from that guys description

>>81942159
>>81942351
>>81942538
>>81942629
Maybe a fruit that's sort of an equivalent to a Deus Ex Machina. I'm a sucker for incorporating concepts that reflect the medium. A seemingly prefect fruit that somehow erases one 「CONFLICT」 at the cost of a person's 「QUALITY」. The people who manufacture the fruit are some minuscule race of people called 「SUES」 as they are a seemingly perfect civilization as a result of their fruit.

I'm just spit balling. Not even sure if it would tie in with Ethan's goal well. Probably not.

>>81942629
>>81942713
See >>81942775

I'd prefer it if the series didn't have an ALMIGHTY EVIL thing presiding over all of it. Making LOSS that thing just feels even worse. It just isn't enjoyable.

Besides, I liked the idea of Ethan hunting fruits to empower his stand, "losing" things important to him in the process.

>>81942930
I like that idea for our version of the Rokaka and about Ethan's plot, i think that could be for like the end-game of part 8, like he seemingle is not conected to anything yet he is there

Or maybe something like he wants to try and give the DEM fruit to the UNIVERSE, once the universe is out of 「CONFLICT」 he will know peace

>>81942902
I'm still not a fan of shoehorning Loss everywhere. Seems like it's trying to point to Ethan being THE BIG EVIL NYEH HEH HEH too hard, I guess? I'm afraid I can't quite find the words for it at the moment.

I don't have an issue with the stone men thing if we can make it work, I just don't want us to have to force Loss everywhere, like >>81942986 said. It's cliche and not as much fun.

>>81942986

He's not in charge of anything though. All that happened is that he wants all of this to end. Making the series end when a villains main goal and sole purpose in life is for it to end... well that's just a neat way of ending a story as long as this one isn't it?

>>81943044
>>81942930
Although this could work too.

>>81943080
There is no bukkake mastering here.

The Loss reflecting into the past is more it's influence existing whenever「CONFLICT」exists.

Up untl this point, the stakes have been getting raised consistently.

How else would you raise them?

>>81943080
Don't get me wrong anon, i agree with you, but when the first persones on the /co/co/ train made part 8, they made Ethan the villain and gave him that kind of Stand, im just trying to agree whit it

>>81943080
I don't know familia. Ethan doesn't look to be in charge here. He isn't really too much of a big guy.

>>81943080
Maybe Ethan starts claiming all of that ultimate evil bullshit later on after he starts losing his sanity, but in reality he's just an average guy with a stand.

It feels to edgy to be good. Maybe characters call him out on his pretentious, "presiding over everything" shit. Everything is just a lot of coincidences and there is no such thing as "loss", but the start of something new. Or something.

>>81943234
Loss in real life is never fucking intentional. Retards on the internet will point to anything and proclaim it as Loss.

The man has fucking Chris Chan as a sidekick and "develops a universe killing stand" out of a miscarriage.

how much of that post did you think was serious?

The fact that the comics end when his part ends is also another coincidence.

>>81943115
Have they?
>part 1 is basically just an old man having a pissy fit
>part 2 is the king of a race of super beings trying to block out the sun to party forever
>part 3 is a madman trying to force everyone to become LITERALLY him
>part 4 is just some dude shaving people to death that happens to lead into a serial killer club that, when you think about it, is fairly small in the scheme of things
>part 5 is fucking demons everywhere but their end goal is just to pants everybody
>part 6 is a guy wanting to jail the world as an end game, but during most of the story he's just focused on stand users
>part 7 is admittedly pretty nuts with Nobody trying to erase the concept of heroism
The stakes fluctuate from small to big depending on the part. We don't need to raise the stakes, necessarily, we just need to make the main conflict interesting.
>>81943147
Yeah, some of the early stands were pretty nuts. May or may not need to give 'em a Scrooge treatment, depending on how things go.
>>81943210
In charge or not I'm still firmly against forcing Loss into the various parts. It would spoil what could be a neat reveal.
>>81943234
Ethan claiming to be a bukkake master after the fact could be fine since he's such a dick. Like, they question him about his plans or whatever, and he makes shit up using oversimplified synopses of each part before the heroes call him out on his bullshit.

>>81942629
I was thinking something similar: Ethan's inner circle is composed of his most loyal followers, the ones that really knows his plan to wipe out the universe, unlike the normal members of the church of gaming. Every one of this henchmen meet Ethan at one point in their lives and become enamoured of his vision, each one of them having their own idea of a post-LOSS universe: from a simple nihilist that gets a boner because the universe dies, to the idealist that wants to create a better new universe. They keep their projects to themselves and support Ethan, believing He will reward them for their loyalty. Chris-chan could start as an independent antagonist, remaking stuff and randomly fusing people to match his fantasy world and after getting beaten the first time decides to ally with the church of gaming for protection, secretly plotting to hijack Ethan's project.

>>81942986
LOSS is not a villain, not even a sentient being, is a force of nature that Ethan is tampering to hasten the end of reality.

>>81943458
That is one of the stupidest things I've read from you so far.

>>81943458
This sounds good, it atleast gives something to work with for part 8

>>81943405
>Ethan starts claiming his stand is some overarching force of nature after getting doped up on Rokaka fruits.
>Makes a cult dedicated to that idea.
>The more people who believe him, the stronger the stand gets.
>It's all lies. After the heroes figure this out, the stand doesn't effect them. Ethan gets beaten to a pulp after nearly collapsing reality.
>Everyone jokes about how the part is ending like Ethan claims. Beartato makes a comment that is really isn't, because there will be more /co/ group projects and they never really die anyway.
>Everyone laughs.

Good/stupid enough ending?

>>81943405
Part 1 is a dude who caused paranormal disturbances and required the personification of fear to train a dog to take him down using a nearly forgotten form of combat. The Old man having put on a mask that had come to Humanity's hands thorugh the Devil's direct intervention.

Part 2 is a race of super people who took their future conquest of humanity as a given to the point they kill each other over who will be the faction who'll get to be on top when they inevitably do it.

Part 3 is a man using spiritual energy to try and turn everyone on earth into himself. That's a pretty big deal man.

Part 4 is a group of serial killers. But yeah, pretty minor.

Part 5 is fucking demons trying to copyright imagination as a concept similar to the wheelchair site's (Meme Magic), Sure its to pants everyone on earth. But they still do it.

Part 6 is a guy creating his own reality in his own twisted fashion.

Part 7 you admitted is pretty big.

>>81943458
That's sorta the idea. Even if the other anon's idea that it's all a delusion works through. they are all still highly dangerous delusional maniacs. Like the LHC but with larger delusions of grandeur.

>>81943667
That ends up being questionable. As this project itself is the closest /co/ has ever gotten to making a completed work.

>>81943730
>>81943458

Holy shit tho.

Part 8 reflecting Part 4 in that manner goes along with original Part 8's reflection of Part 4 too.

>>81943816
ITS LIKE POTTERY

>>81943730
Maybe time loops could be involved so, technically, it doesn't end. A character goes back to ensure [x] happens. It goes full circle.

Dunno how it could be done though.

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So what was the consensus on the handcuffed together thing?

>>81943667
Besides the last two lines, I like this the most.

>>81943957
She gets fused to Xero by her stand, or something.

I really don't know.

Going to interrupt the LOSS debates for a second here to talk about part 4.

I know we've stuck to the Beast being the assassin that goes after Scrooge, but based off what's already in that section and the unused characters in the stand doc I think Mandark would make a better assassin. He's geeky enough no one would suspect him, his power's long range so Gadget could still suspect a prototype weapon, and it's crazy enough that Gadget would still have doubts on the weapon theory and want to look further into it. If he doesn't fit LHC close enough we could always say Flintheart hired him via a third party since the club refused to get involved in his vendetta.

One more thing, when does Gadget get documents from the police about the murders? I didn't catch it when I was scanning through. Would be good to add that in, maybe with Bonkers taking the lead in "helping" Gadget since Loeb would naturally raise suspicions for anyone who knows about him.

>>81943993
I like that idea a lot actually.

>>81943993
Bonkers "helps" gadget. Separates him from Jay and Silent Bob. Hoping this would take away any edge Gadget had until that point.

Siccs Mandark on him.

>>81943991
>>81943957
>Dominator or Vicky handcuffs Suzie to Lacey
>They escape with Lacey during the prison break onto Strickland
>Along the way attacked by Strickland, both Lacey and Suzie are handicapped by being tied together
>Lacey reveals herself to be Agent Zero and working for the Warden Ala Doppio/Diavolo and reveals her true stands power while the other is in use on Dora/Giffany/and co.
>Suzie must fight her "friend" at close range or tries to convince her to switch sides

It's what I got so far. What do you guys think?

>>81943993
I'm actually working on Gadget goes to the Mayor right now.

I'll work in him getting a report from the Mayor's secretary before he leaves.

>>81944268
Ms. Bellum

Just because the nuCartoon forgot about her doesnt mean you should

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Ok, I got another one.

Dick Wilson (mother up)

Stand(s) mother/lover

>>81944360
I was going to only describe her as being the mayor's secretary with HUGE... red hair.

I already have Gadget breaking up the fight and talking with the girls all written out, now I've gone back and I'm working on the "fight" between the Eds and the PPG.

I'm not too confident with the set up I have before that where they're trying to scam the mayor though, so once I get it all done and posted I'd like some feedback and revisions if needed.

>>81944244
I would just have it be a straight fight with Susie killing/retiring Xero. We really need to avoid having characters switch sides so much in 5 and 6. Other then that, I like the idea.

>>81945269
This. I'd rather not we have a bunch of people questioning their alignment 24/7 and supporting the good guys. I like seeing assholes get out-clevered and have their shit pushed in. A really satisfying detail of Jojo. People get punished.

>>81945269
Now that I think about it, will Dora be getting any help from outside the prison? I know the doc lists Penny, but maybe the original idea of Xero sneaking in on a mission to help Dora would work better.

>>81945534
I think Dora and the gang should be a solo act.

>>81945269
>>81945452

They're shackled together. But as soon as Suzie is SURE that she's not going to be shackled to a corpse.

She ices the fucker.

In Part 5 I think only Squidward and Max!Powerline switch sides.

Everyone else, including Jan Mouse, fucking die.

Remember that Max sold his father's soul. Jan sold her own.

>>81944586
I gotta go do some stuff, so I've put what I've done so far into the doc.

Didn't get to the part where Bellum gives Gadget the documents before he leaves or Jay talking about how they're not allowed inside of the Mayor's office anymore because of how he kept hitting on that "fine ass red haired bitch with the huge titties".

>>81945534
>>81945557

Penny sets a tiny amount of events in motion. The sort of thing that would be coincidence in a weaker story.

Beyond that? Xero is the outside help. But even then she doesnt really care about Dora. Shes just help.

>>81945558
That's cool, I'm only making sure cuz some people like reserving an inkling of mercy for characters they like.

>>81945658
I liked Gadget and outright forced him into Part 4 at first.

Now his death is as canon as Hank having a robot and not a stand.

>no RoadRunner BEEP BEEP'ing an anvil on top of Wile E.

>>81945738
The Courage vs. Wile E. fight has a couple of Road Runner references. Courage even meep meeps at one point.

How about Thrift Shop? A Stand that degrades whatever OBJECT it touches and lowers the quality of the materials it's comprised of. Ex: A car automatically becomes an inferior model of what it was before breaking down, a bomb becomes a dud,

>>81945850
WRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYd the docs

>>81945738
>「BEEP BEEP」
>Causes attempts to catch the user to fail 99% of the time. Additionally, attempts to catch them will backfire, hurting the opponent.
>Racks up "karma" on enemies, the more determined they are to catch it, the more damage they take.
>It induces an addictive effect in enemies as well. Foes will get an adrenaline rush the more they hunt down the user.
>There is still a 1% chance of catching the user. The user then gets inflicted with damage equivalent to that of the opponents they made suffer, possibly killing them.

It's probably stupid.

>>81945639
I could see Xero being more professional then Lacey.
In that scenario would she be from the Strickland Foundation, or just someone sent in by Penny?

>>81945639
>>81946160
>Xero gets sent in to help
>unfortunately for her, Susie is one of the prisoners tat deserves to be in Superjail
>a fight eventually ensues, Xero/Lacey gets killed by Susie
>Xero had a vital piece of information that was lost when she was retired
>Dredd or Vexus finds it on her corpse after Susie breaks the handcuffs, and uses it against the party

>>81946346
>>81946160
I can do you one better.

she was a close friend of Penny's who Penny trusted to carry out the mission in the SuperJail.

Her drying also makes it so Penny stops wanting to help.

Making Dora be truly on her own.

>>81945558

Oh yeah, about Goofy...

In the docs it says he is going to be an ally in Part 7. How that will work out?

>>81947181
Nobody has really talked about Goofy at all (while everyone else has gotten some kind of discussion) so I think it's safe to say Goofy has been freed up for other purposes.

>>81943730
>>81943967

How does this sound for a good "plot flow"?

>Ethan's stand can do anything as long as people think it can.
>Ethan creates a cult dedicated to his stand and the concept of "loss"
>"Loss" isn't real, or at least not how he describes it.
>He claims he's going to use the stand to create a new universe when enough people believe him, by destroying the old one and making "paradise".
>Ethan learns about "animation cels" (called so for lack of another term so far), which can dramatically increase a person's abilities at the cost of something.
>Unfortunately, the cels are guarded by Stone People of Bygone Animation, who hate modern cartoons with a passion.
>Ethan manipulates things so that the heroes and stone men fight each other, rather than fighting them himself, all so he can attain a cel.
>He gets it, Lose Yourself becomes Lose Yourself in Heaven and starts warping reality to his desires, but Ethan loses his sanity in exchange.
>He starts believing the shit he was saying about "Loss", and now just wants to destroy everything, period.
>His followers turn against him, but Lose Yourself just destroys them before they can do anything.
>Heroes realize they've been played by Ethan, go to attack him.
>Ethan nearly kills and erases them, along with reality. Then the heroes figure out Lose Yourself's trick, and realize "Loss" is just bullshit.
>Suddenly, Lose Yourself can't hurt them.
>Ethan can't do anything now that there are people who don't believe in "loss".
>Ethan is beaten to a pulp. Lose Yourself never bothers anyone again. Eventually, Ethan becomes a homeless, delusional man still preaching about "loss" to a bunch of cats.
>The heroes walk off into the sunset or whatever, [TO BE CONTINUED -->] appearing behind them.
>Fin. Now we can work on Puella Magi /co/doka /co/gica.

This sound any better or nah?

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OKAY. SO. The fourth (and final) part of Gumball's fight is here! I wanted to make this fight longer, but if we want to get past Part 4, desperate times call for desperate measures! I'll probably come back to this at some point and do the Director's Cut of this.

What I'm going to be doing now is working on the 1st and 2nd Kevin fights. Since the 1st is really more of a quick encounter and demonstration of Kevin's stand, it's probably going to only be 1 or 2 chapters at most.

Once that' done, I'll write "Gadget vs EEnE", which doesn't look like a real fight, as much as it is Gadget interrogating the Eds.

THEN I'll head to Kevin fight 2, which will hopefully be longer than 4 fucking parts because HOLY FUCK WHY DO I KEEP ENDING ON THAT NUMBER?!

After that...I dunno, whatever's left, I guess?

>>81947368
>Puella Magi /co/doka /co/gica.
Should be Dra/co/n Ball desu senpai

>>81947368
I quite like this.

>>81947368
Sounds far better then before.

>>81947368
I don't like the "Animation cels" part but the rest is good, or atleas better than what we have, which is nothing

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Is there too much Billy and Mandy, or can we throw pic related in too?

Uh, whatever his name is. I forgot.

>>81947964
If you don't give a part nor a reason why the character you want should be included then don't expect it to be included

As we said last thread, less character and stand suggesting more writting

>>81947964
King Rustybottom?

>>81948035
No, I just wanted to know if there was room for another Billy and Mandy character before I gave anything.

>>81948070
No, no. It was something LIKE that though...

It's on the tip of my tongue, too.

>>81947931
Its a continuation from CELS in part 2 and 1.

>>81948148
Burning wax cylinder John?

>>81948155
Yes but that has nothing to do whit the Rokaka fruit

I mean, i prefer >>81942930 take on the thing

>>81948301
Did we bury Superman underneath a tree? Because Im pretty sure that the fruit in Part 8 is because of the corpse.

>>81948394
Didn't the fruit originate in like, fucking Australia or something, though?

>>81948625
>Jesus wanted to save australia
>It didnt go well

That sure is a forsaken place

>>81948625
I think is from Papua New Guinea.

>>81948625
huh.

I thought it was because Johnny planted the corpse with the tree.

im probably off. I forgot which translation I read at the time, but it was Duwang-tier.

>>81943957
well... couldn't Suzie just turn the cuffs into organic material and tear it off?

>>81947465
I like it. We still need to establish Coraline in the earlier segment where Stan breaks into Foster's.

What do you think of the stuff on the doc right now about Gadget at the mayor's office?

I don't know if you guys know this already but that M. E. LeTerally's Over Heaven link in the OP's dead.

>>81949847
Thanks! Maybe I'll look over that scene in the doc and add a little somethin' somethin'.

Is that referring to Gadget interrupting the Eds vs PPG and him talking to the mayor, and the scene where J & SB try to get him out of the office quickly?

I think they're fine! What I really like about Part 4 is that everything feels bigger than the original Part 4.

It really gives the vibe that everyone knows each other/gets acquainted with each other, as opposed to Josuke making friends with most of the villains he beats and then they fuck off for the rest of the series. Stuff like Gadget talking about his cyborg stuff to the PPG is gold and I love it. Jay and Silent Bob constantly trying to get Gadget out of Stand fights is still hilarious, too!

I don't really have a critique that comes to mind.

>>81950177
Alright. I'm still not quite done with that part yet, but I'll finish it up soon.

Just added the last portion of the Gumball fight to the doc, now I'm going to update the Stan VS Recess gang part with more of the outline we have for that fight now.

>>81950237
Niceu, niceu.

I might have to go to sleep soon, but this week is nice and easy for me so I'll have plenty of time to get to work as well.

I'm brand new here, how is Boy George a character in Part 3? That's a real dude.

>>81951108
it's curios George renamed as Boy George for the music reference.

>>81951210
Oh, that's pretty good actually.

>>81950770
Sounds good.

I've just expanded the Gadget's accident part of the doc to include more of the stuff from the old Gadget Noir project. It shows the contrast between him showing off for the PPG and talking seriously about it with J&SB.

His talk with Scrooge when Mandark tries to assassinate him should include more of the stuff about Strickland and the technology that led up to him.

>>81951677
>>81951677
Mandark is the kind of guy who would read up on Gadget. Hoping to get an edge using Science.

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>>81951921
Mandark is aiming to assassinate Scrooge, contracted by Flintheart.

Gadget being with Scrooge when Mandark makes his attempt was entirely coincidence.

Gadget needs to make use of his helicopter during that encounter.

And something like pic related needs to happen during the Kevin chase.

>>81952242

Kevin does a Dio and kidnaps a taxi driver after using his Stand to damage Gadget's rollerblades.

"Glad we got away from that dork!"

>Helicopter sounds.

"HE CAN FLY? I read up on his file! They said adding in the helicopter blades was too much clutter! They said he was dumb enough as he was without taking out parts of his head."

Gadget with megaphone "I GOT AN UPGRADE LAST MONTH, ASSHOLE!"

>>81952399
>Inspector Gadget theme is playing when he's flying after him.

>>81952399
In this version it comes out of his back from the shoulder blades.

Can I get into this if I don't have much interest in the anime/Manga itself? I just find it a burden to read Manga or watch anime in general, but maybe the plot and characters are really interesting? Because if so I would gladly do research from there and keep up with these threads.

>>81952399
Oh, and GoGo's bike gets damaged during the chase, so she takes over the Gadget Mobile and turns it into the ultimate road monster using her stand.

Like an actual friggen monster, with teeth and saw blades at the end of metal tentacles.

We need to remember that GoGo and Hiro are FUCKING PISSED since Kevin was the one who gave Tadashi the jawbreakers.

>>81952908
Really depends on what you like and are entertained by
If you are into CURAIZE stuff then you might like it

>>81952949
Thanks for your response.

>>81952908
Sure.

Although to be honest, most of the music videos on youtube from the original soundtrack can give you a sorta understanding of the plot and themes of the original.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mjcVMaBbzvY

This sums up the first half of Part 3. For eample

>>81953352
Thanks. Seems cool

>>81953390
Wrong thread bud
Roy is worst lord

>>81953390
Wrong board you dip

>>81945452
>>81945269
Yeah I'm cool with having Suzie kill her then in that case.

Part 9 planning when?

That is, if we're ever going to MAKE a Part 9.

If we do, it has to be a finale of sorts; the big finish.

In fact...


PART 9: /co/co/'s Big Finish

(OR)

PART 9: /co/co/'s Curtain Call

>>81953426
you spelled Alm wrong.

>>81953765
part 9 ain't happening until araki makes a part 9.

>>81953656
>>81945269
>>81945452
>>81945558
>>81946346
Now imagine if it was Dora Vexxus or Dredd was supposed to shackle Lacey too, but they fucked up and got Suzie instead during the break-out.

>>81952399
>>81952692
I'm loving this

>>81945452
Speaking of people getting punished, I'd like to bring up Penny and how she behaves after her uncle is killed.

She goes through anger when trashing the office before finding the note with the jawbreaker, then she should go into a "no more tears mode" and become methodical in her hunt for the person who killer her uncle, literally taking apart piece-by-piece that stands in her way. Jay and Silent Bob would not be good influences on her at this point since they're also out for revenge, they'd try to do right by Gadget by protecting her the best they can, but they're still going head first into dangerous situations.

When they meet Shaggy and Scooby and then by extension Scrooge and the rest of the Conman Coalition, they should be like an intervention for her. They reassure her that they're going to take this guy down and she starts to be a bit more like herself. She's still ruthless in a fight as the Disney princesses at Foster's find out.

When Fred is dead or gets a fate worse than death by Danny the Street, she should finally regain all of the emotions she's been suppressing. Like being able to "feel" again to parallel it with Gadget before he died.

The exact punishment Fred gets still needs to be determined.

>>81954055
Kira was killed by hands, thus Fred should be killed by shaved hair.

I don't know how that'd be possible, however.

>>81954134
Thanks for spoiling me a 30 year old manga that im currently reading.

>>81954134
So... Danny the Street uses a wig shop to strangle Fred in a hanged man kind of way after the heroes beat him in a fight?

>>81954228
Fuck that.
Motherfucker gets force fed the hair he loved so much until he chokes on it. Strapped in his own chair, of course.

>>81954305
Did Danny take over the street Fred's shop was located on?

I was under the impression that Danny the Street was a street that moves and the buildings and roads around it simply move out of the way to make room for him.

I'm still unclear on how we're playing Danny in this.
Is he in a fixed location? Does he move, with the street itself staying the same? Or does he move from street to street?

>>81954228
I kind of want to see him die in a way that's random and comes out of nowhere, like Kira.

>>81954055
If Jay and Silent Bob play to accomodate her anger and lust for revenge.

Shaggy and Scoobs should be written to counteract those same feelings.

>>81954759
I'm just not sure how to do that though.

In my mind, part 5 Shaggy is this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PLVnx9R7LrA

>>81955017
He has to become that.

Remember the whole theme we have of raising stakes. Shaggy himself rises to the challenge in Part 5.

Part 4 Shaggy has to just survive the adventure.