Well /co/ as much as i love comics, i can't make comics worth a shit.
so i've decided to share my crap once again, so i may be mocked by my fellow anons.
here's my latest "comic" probably my last.
i realised that as my as love my idea, it's just going to be treated as edgy cringey shit, like my last one. i've decided to make this a little more dumb, cause i just do care anymore.
enjoy rumble town
>>81757587
it sucks dude
>>81757741
of course it sucks, i know it sucks.
maybe draw something to anything else
>>81757860
what you mean to anything else?
>>81757915
use your imagination.
a midget with huge eyebrows
batman with a plumber crack
a crippled version of superman
two fat guys trying to get on the same swing
a bald guy using a raccoon for a hat
jesus on a unicycle
a hat made out of an afro
an elvis impersonator pie eating contest
hitler as a nazi barber
whatever the hell you want
>>81757587
5/10, but would read more.
>>81758112
that just sounds like shit you can request at the /co/ general draw thread bro.
okay lets see
Self-deprecating humor really doesn't do you any favors at all. you would have done better to take 60 seconds and arrange the panels more horizontally instead of awkwardly making a joke out of how much extra space wasted in this format. The subject matter is comprised of making fun of a universally mocked strawman. It isn't anything we haven't seen 1000 times and that's incredibly important. If you had drawn ANYTHING else than a meme fedora guy the quality would have doubled.
>>81757587
Story wise, it went nowhere, but your drawing has promise (assuming you did that with a mouse in paint) so you should really get back to it. While it's not perfect I wont say that you don't have potential. The most important thing to do when it comes to anything art related, literature or otherwise, is practice constantly. Try stuff that you never thought of and do things different; you'll see improvement eventually.
>>81758112
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>>81758716
here are some other things
>>81758866
>>81758912
>>81758934
>>81758112
>use your imagination.
i did use my imagination, i made it what it was not
>>81758234
>>81758912
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>>81757587
it's like I'm watching 'Hobo With a Shotgun' all over again
>>81759021
i don't even know if that's a good thing.
look, the idea was this.
there was a rumor that someone was working on a phone app that was basically tinder for people who want to fight, turns out it was a hoax.
i loved the idea that i thought to myself why not make something out of that.
and so i did.
>>81758866
>>81758912
>>81758934
>>81758959
If you're interested in working on your art you should check out the /ic/ beginner guide. Trust me, I only started yesterday and it really helped me realize what I was doing wrong and how to fix it. Keep up the hard work, anon.
>>81759299
the main character is this super serious kid, accompanied by his happy go lucky best friend, and they pretty much just want to get into fights to prove they're the toughest in town.
and so tinder for fighting popped up making everyone and anyone beat the crap out of each other, without consequences (like the shitty purge movies) but also the app had thing like ranks stats and win loss ratios.
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>>81759724
oh i get it, it's like if aids took the form of a comic
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>>81759898
oh yeah... i forgot about aids.
i just want to make something fun and deep and interesting, with out it trying to be overly edgy to the point of cringe, which it already is.
but i just to make a comic, cause it just depresses me being here in /co/ around so much great talent, and i'm just making saying to myself "damn i wish i could draw as good as them" " i wish i could make my own web comics" and when i do draw or make a shitty comic, it just makes me more depressed that it's chris chan tier work
>>81760355
it's not chris chan tier, but you should really lurk /ic/ and /i/ and work on stuff if you want to get good. move forwards.
>>81760355
so yeah, it's shit, it's fucking garbage, but i don't want to give up on the idea of rumble town, or at least my OC's.
>>81760585
and when it comes to /i/ or /ic/ i don't even know where to begin or where to go. i've even wasted money on a how to draw books and right at the moment i get to the part that either it mentions fancy ass pencils and whatever things i don't have or even just an exercise that just fucks with your brain i give up, and i just draw out of depression.
>>81761257
look dude you don't need expensive shit to draw, especially on a computer. what's important is being able to understand depth, weight, anatomy, etc. and guides are what can help you with that. There's more than enough free stuff on the internet for this, and there's a webcomic thread on /co/ if you want to continue this discussion with people who actually draw instead of someone who just makes shit edits and caricatures. Don't make excuses to me, you're only making excuses to yourself, just practice in areas you're not comfortable in.
>>81761657
you think i like drawing on my computer?
i don't.
i've been making excuses both related and unrelated including even lying to myself for quite a while now.
i'm fucking lost and hopeless dude
>>81762451
you should really talk to someone about that in person, art and everything else. don't force yourself, it seems like you're putting a lot of unnecessary pressure on this skill. You can't get the feedback and encouragement you need just online, I really think you should talk to someone about it. Hang in there, you're not hopeless.
>>81762954
i not going to tell anything to anybody in person.
they can go fuck themselves
