Anyone got any thoughts so far? It's got a few pages, though it's just barely getting to the story right now. The comic is on tumblr, if that isn't obvious enough.
>>78421316
Go to bed, Pan
>>78421319
ayyyy porqueeee
>>78421316
I forgot this shit existed.
Really fucking boring. Hire better writers, Pan!
>>78421316
What does it say viral at the bottom and why is it in jap speech?
Also, what is it and why should we care?
>>78421600
Some dude's first webcomics that he does in spare time.
Hey Pan. I dunno if you're gonna read this but please hear me out.
I love your channel and you produce some great content on there. But you really need to realize that you lack skill in both drawing and writing stories. I know it must be hard to hear criticism, but I don't think anyone around you is telling you what they really think about your webcomic.
You need to take a step back. Look at your work objectively. You really really need to actually learn how to draw. There's just a basic lack of aesthetics in your work. And I KNOW that you have a good sense of aesthetics. I've seen your reviews. However, when you work on something yourself, objectivity usually takes a back seat. You HAVE to spend hours each day practicing your drawing (even if the only thing you want to draw is stylized cartoons.) Go to /ic/ and they might help you out if you're sincere in your efforts.
Things you should focus on right off the bat:
1. ANATOMY
2. Composition
3. Colour Theory
4. Lighting/Values
I don't know how you'd work on your writing because I'm not much of a writer.
Btw dafuq happened with Nolan and Ken?
I like Pan's art.
But the story is taking a while to really get me invested.
>>78422362
I miss ken, I never see him on the podcast anymore.
>>78423537
Some ~*~*drama*~*~ went down between Nolan and Ken over some other podcast
>>78421316
Are those supposed to be Germanic runes? Why are they using a lambda?
>>78422185
I don't think he actually lurks in threads mentioning him. Or, as of recent, at all.
>>78421316
Pan, go home.
>>78421316
We know it's you pan.