The "ThisIsMyFirstTimeDoingThisGodIHopeIDon'tFuckUpI'mOnlyDoingThisBecauseNoOneElseWould" Edition.
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>Share your website/portfolio
>Ask for critique, information, or advice on writing or drawing
Weekly task:
>Get comfy for x-mas!
>Draw a /hyw/ related character celebrating the holidays - Bonus points if it's in the southern hemisphere.
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>>78335341
Scrub Authors GOODIE Bag
Here’s a short list of sites that any new webcomic artist or writer will find handy:
>*-Struggling to find that perfect FONT? Create your own using this link;
http://www.myscriptfont.com/
>*-Don’t forget to brush up on that ANATOMY:
http://artists.pixelovely.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/
http://www.quickposes.com/pages/timed
>*-What’s a list without some reference STOCK IMAGES?
People: http://senshistock.deviantart.com/gallery/
Scenery: http://www.shutterstock.com/
>*-Here's a big fat compilation of CHARACTER DESIGN REFERENCE:
http://www.pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
>*-Finally, here are some links to get a rough WEBSITE started up:
Easy to use tumblr webcomic theme: https://www.tumblr.com/theme/39018
Do’s and Don’ts for starting a site: http://pastebin.com/kNR2W5mV (embed)
>*-Here’s the contact sheet if anyone wants to put information down, like their site and webcomic:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwfOSHXfrgvcf--PkPz9jXL6p5RqIsrYvXYwgQpgT3k/edit#
>*-We also got a SKYPE CHAT room going on,
To join the chat, seek out 'scribblehatch' or 'starlinemike' and they'll add you in.
>Wise words from John Cleese:
[YouTube] John Cleese on Creativity (embed) [Embed] [Embed]
>Invisible Ink:
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_1.pdf
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_2.pdf
http://courses.cs.washington.edu/courses/cse456/07su/administrative/invisible_ink_part_3.pdf
>Paper Wings
http://chrisoatley.com/category/podcasts/
https://web.archive.org/web/20140625035030/http://paperwingspodcast.com/
>(NEW!) Fonts for your webcomic on Blambot:
http://www.blambot.com/
>Writing Resources:
http://www.cienciasecognicao.org/rotas/wp-content/uploads/2013/12/Robert-McKee-Story.pdf
>Webcomic Thread #224
N..nailed it.
>>78389758
good job
>>78389817
>>78389758
maybe add this stuff:
*webcomic host sites:
comic fury
the duck webcomics
smack jeeves
tumblr
deviantart
blogspot
*ad support for your webcomics:
project wonderful
*webcomic hub site:
hiveworks
>>78389978
I'm just copying and pasting from the old thread.
>>78389978
>*hub sites:*
hiveworks was the only one i could think of
*web comic archive sites:
belfrys webcomics list
comics rocket
top webcomics
>>78389978
oh shit i forgot taptastic and line webtoons for webcomic host sites :/
>>78390039
good ol belfry. i'm on there!
>>78390007
thats cool
>>78390095
although top webcomics has a link to every webcomic that submited it to it, does it still count as an archive site?
it doesnt go out of its way to archive and link every webcomic in existence, but there all pretty much there anyway....
>>78389758
fan art of the logo
>>78390007
You've done a bad thing.
>>78390160
dont start.... what i think your trying to start
its about to be a new year, lets just start over, start new
>>78389758
>Get comfy for x-mas!
I can't when I'm this behind on my page.
>>78389758
You probably ought to take off the name when you do this shit. Also title and subject fields.
Probably.
I'll just delete this one and let whoever usually does it do it.
Peace all.
>Error: You Cannot Delete a Post This Old
Wehlp.
>>78390513
its here forever now!
>>78390148
Wow Bones it's fucking atrocious as always
>>78390148
That's actually pretty cool. if the lines immediately above and below the letters weren't red that wouldve been perfect.
Will post christmas artwork of the cutest nazi waifu Lisa Himmler from my webcomic Urban Tales later.
Here's a link to it.
http://tapastic.com/episode/235287
>>78390491
yeah don't do that. ever. that's not how that works.
and don't never make a thread again, just learn from your mistakes and do better next time
belongingtonobody.tumblr.com
>>78391036
i think her eye is a tad high in the second panel.
also interesting he's actually properly in troubs. i wasnt sure what would happen there.. but i like that they didn't just abandon him
>>78390513
heres a quick sketch of your character, feel better now will draw for food guy
>>78390762
i know
>>78390837
fell free to edit it in anyway you want
>>78391215
I would but I'd have to go behind the 25cent part
here's a holiday thingy
http://supercelestialcomics.tumblr.com/
>>78391326
>>78391326
No.
>>78391215
shaded and painted
>>78391469
so I was thinking either like this
>>78392024
or better like this
>>78392024
>>78392036
Stop.
>>78392049
oh for god's sake he hasnt done anything in the last few threads. dont encourage him to.
>>78392049
Just report him as spam.
>>78392084
a) that isn't bones, that's me.
b) you know the worst way to handle a spammer? when he starts being good again, you treat it like it's still spam.
>>78392269
>good again
>spamming, samefagging, and posting god-awful eye-sores
>>78392627
not happening, not happening, and yes that qualifies as good
>>78389758
I blame you for this thread so far.
>>78393601
jeez mr judgy, do you want coal in your stocking? you're attacking everyone trying their best instead of looking at yourself
Great start guys.
Feeling super tired today but I managed to do a little work. I have 7 out of the 10 comics I wanted to make a book(they are in various stages of done but at least 7 are penciled). No idea where to print it though.
Do you guys know how to do Web-comic layout in tumblr?
I'm on break for christmas but it doesn't stop me from shitting out a christmas animation.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-AJCrU2ZluI
Hopefully this will be the last time I use flash, and I am able to fully transition to ToonBoom where drawing isn't fucked
>>78395617
(best viewed on actual youtube)
>>78395617
mcloudness warning
>>78392036
I was thinking of something like this, too
But I'd get rid of that gradient first, myself
>>78395840
the only reason I made it blue was to preserve the gradient, i don't like covering up anything someone worked on like that when modifying their work
otherwise i'd just make them black bars.
Here is my main character's first and final design. He was originally going to be a side character but as I reworked the story I ended up making him the protagonist.
Do you think it was a good idea to redesign him? Does he look better now?
>>78397332
cute little bugger
i'm not sure, there are things i liked about the old design too. at least keep it as a plush he has of himself, as an easter egg.
>>78397356
Oooh nice idea, I'll definetly do that, it even fits his story
Welp, finally finished this. I'll have a new one done in two days.
Any feedback will be appreciated!
>>78391615
Who are you and what have you done to bones?
>>78389758
Oh, the Southern Hemisphere stuck, ha ha. I'll try making an Aussie Xmas later if I can. Bet you yanks never seen Xmas on 40ºC
>>78395326
Are these gonna be online someday, or are they only for a book?
>>78397856
ducked?ahem. once again, making a big deal out of a person changing their ways is a great way to drive them right back to the old ways, out of spite or embarrassment or stubbornness
>>78397856
I feel like this conversation has been going on forever.
>>78397943
Oh shoot, can't believe I missed that one. Thanks for the feedback!
>>78397961
Maybe it's because I've been showing the un-coloured version as well, and I've been slow with the updates, so it's like it's not going anywhere.
But on the other hand, I admit I'm having troubles wrapping this up. I think in two more strips, the conversation topic will change, and goes with something different. The one that follows the fake teeth I showed before is the last one before moving on.
Then I won't be able to show anything because it's gonna be nsfw for a while.
>>78397856
>>78397943
>>78397965
>you betta not be ready to projectile vomit, boy. i'll suck your dick but I don't wanna duck your sick
>I feel like making a comic today
>I guess I should just start
>Wait how should I arrange panels
Repeat
WIP of an upcoming page.
drawing the action sequence is fun. it's also kinda hard.
>>78398006
Be sure to post in the aco thread.
>>78390846
Fuck, man. This art is fantastic. The racist stuff is going to make me uncomfortable though.
I have been waiting so long to use this premise. every time I see someone dramatically finish someone else's sentence from above a skylight or something it NAGS at me to tear it apart
y'know I've been thinking about pacing and panels like that one anon advised, and I think I get more across with word bubble placement.
but once again I feel like the punchline here is weak, so any suggests would be a pair of breasts. That is, crits would be tits.
Is this looking alright?
>>78391461
I fucking love this art.
>>78398249
funny how similar this is to depression. same basic advice: try to stop caring. obviously you're getting stuck on this one thing, and while it DOES matter, caring about it disproportionately is worse than not caring at all.
just do some drawings and put them in order. you can move it around later
>>78398548
nazis make you uncomfortable? they don't, yknow, make you laugh?
>>78395617
Um. I suppose it's well made but I feel like it would suit the Happiness and Cyanide crowd more than me personally.
>>78398607
Not when the main characters are Nazis. It has to not feel like a Nazi made it. I doesn't really with your comic but I'm not really sure where it's going.
>>78398597
I'll take this advice, Anon. And give it another go.
>>78398525
I thought about it, but problem is, that my comic is not strictly XXX. So anyone outside the regulars here in HYW might get the wrong impression of what to expect from my work because it's in a XXX thread.
I'm not sure that's what I'd like. I'll take this chance to practice on other works, and bother y'all with feedback here as always.
>>78398661
not that guy, I just think nazis are hilarious
that's been basically the point of most of their depictions outside of the used-to-be-about-history-channel. i think mel brooks once said he took pleasure in making hitler look so ridiculous that nobody could possibly take his ideas seriously again
>>78399000
I have that worry sometimes too
just post that fact in the thread, if you're concerned. "here's the porn pages. if you care about the plot go to (site)"
>>78398577
this is really neat to me, the sort of.. geometrically consistent strange cartoony animals.. as if drawings come to life.
just 2 things mate:
-in the first panel her eyes should be higher. everything else is in the right place.
-that's a hell of an awkward size to read, at least on my browser. i have to switch from fit-on-screen which is illegible to full-size which is too massive to see even a single panel at once. it would be appreciated if you resized somewhat smaller before sharing your WIPs in the future. which I hope you'll do!
>>78399211
Thanks, man!
>in the first panel her eyes should be higher
Alright
>it would be appreciated if you resized
Sorry about that. I didn't think it would be so big. Is opening the image in a new tab not easier? That's what I usually do.
Thanks for the input. I rarely ever come to these threads and when I do I never post anything of my own. I've only ever posted something once before.
Getting my comic moving again, got the whole story planned out, roughing out quick layouts and general ideas now.
>>78399277
That looks great as always, man. Do you have a website?
>>78399277
>>78399300
And here's the new stuff, just rough quick layouts. HOPEFULLY the dialogue is funnier than the quick placeholder dialogue. Funny dialogue is hard.
>>78399297
Thanks! I do have an art Tumblr!
http://dustinscrazywackydoodles.tumblr.com/
>>78399319
>>78399326
>>78399335
And that's all I've got so far. I DO have the rest of the story outline planned out, so just gotta flesh it out.
>>78398577
Not really, at least not in my opinion. The first panel would be neat if not for the horrible chicken scratch on the girl. The second panel doesn't read all that well. The third should take more place on the page at the expense of second, fourth and fifth. Is this an explosion? Are they being blown away? Because if anything, it looks like they're running down a hill instead. Why are the last two panels so big? There's so much unused space in them that could be used for more important things on the page. Same goes for the Manga Studio Margins © you are using.
Now, the general level of your art is not good. The creatures are passable when they aren't drawn like a cardbard cutout. In this regard panel 1 is fine, panel 4 is not. The human is drawn badly, but I'm a bit biased towards proper anatomy, so maybe others would not agree with me.
If this is a sketch and not the finished version, either wait with posting until you have it ready or be more specific with your questions. While I'm at it, your page looks kinda Pokemon-inspired, what is it about?
>>78399410
>horrible chicken scratch on the girl
I guess I should have said that it's just in the sketch phase.
>2nd panel
Noted
>it looks like they're running down a hill instead
A little of both but it should be more clear.
>Why are the last two panels so big? There's so much unused space in them that could be used for more important things on the page
Noted. I didn't really put much into the paneling because it's just a one off test. I definitely should have though.
>when they aren't drawn like a cardbard cutout.
That was kinda the intent?
>anatomy
Where does the anatomy stick out as especially bad?
>what it is about
Nothing really. It's just a page I did on a whim with no real context. I guess they're trying to catch that big monster? I was thinking about Cencoroll when I drew it.
>>78399343
This comic gives me a rayman vibe.
>>78399522
Rayman as a whole (but DEFINITELY Origins) is actually a HUGE inspiration to me. I fucking ADORE the art in Rayman Origins, especially the characters. It's probably what I'd say is closest to how I want my art to look.
WIP of the next page!
Having fun with this low pressure setting.
>>78399539
Same guy here
I really liked legends alot more, but they're both really good. Legends is really inspiring me to make my game happen.
>>78399569
Oh I love both Origins AND Legends a ton. I think Legends is the better game (though some things about it bother me), but Origins is just closer to how I want my own stuff to look. I prefer the characters with outlines and solid cel shading over the painted look. Both look WONDERFUL, though.
More importantly, comic page is looking good, I like the expressions!
>>78399603
Thanks! That means a lot coming from you!
bombombom
Whoo, just finished the latest page. Now I gotta get 3 more done by Monday so the comic updates as normal during my trip.
Oh, and if folks wanna check out the previous pages, they're all up on www.comixscape.net
>>78398667
If you're working digitally, I heartily recommend making sketches of a bunch of panels on separate layers and playing around with them.
You can even do something similar in trad by cutting out panels and attaching them to a blank page.
>>78397856
Some will be online and some will be book only.
>>78399569
This page leads me to believe that Jack and Angel are gonna sniff glue together.
I have a 48 page webcomic ready to go, but It's in spanish and I need someone to help me with the translation :/
>>78402370
I don't speak Spanish very well and I'm not a native Anglophone, but if you translate it as best you can I'd be happy to look over the script and try to fix any errors.
>>78391461
Hey anon, I really like your art. I'm considering getting a tumblr so I can follow you on there.
Up.
Merry Christmas Eve, guys.
>>78399263
that's what we're here for
>>78399326
nice to see new stuff after so long (what has it been, 18 months?) that stone snake mouth thing is cooool and it looks like this comic's going to continue to have lots of energy
>>78403849
Looking good and merry Christmas Eve to you too
drawancrowds.jpg
>>78399539
That explains a lot actually
>>78399569
interpaneletary jawbonks! he samson'd himself!
i like this comic. though he is overreacting to a cheek kiss
>>78399539
I agree with you, man. The art in Rayman Origins is beautiful.
>>78399569
That epic visual gag on the last two panels though. Keep up the great work Dewd.
I expect great things from you.
I just had this idea and ran with it.
Probably just gonna go on the video game section of WT:LGR
The shirt Chara is wearing right now is the same one i'm wearing right now, which gave me inspiration to make this comic in the first place.
>>78404441
That's Jack for you, a big nervous nelly when it comes to romance.
>>78404589
Thanks man! and same with you!
>>78404808
No prob man!
Another great comic too! This girl I like actually just got me Undertale for Christmas.I totally wasn't up until 5:00 in the morning playing it or anthing.
Page 044 WIP
A prime example of why I don't letter my pages by hand.
>>78403849
sexist pig
you mean christmas adam, right?hey i like this picture
>>78404808
my sentiments exactly. pretty well drawn too. Good stuff man. it's clear when you feel inspired and interested, good shit comes out. and you're getting better control.
Merry Christmas you nerds :^)
>>78405408
>sexist pig
>Christmas Adam
Go back tomytumblr,and follow me.
>>78405520
well this robot just got a lot hotter
>>78400430
hey you! share those gret screen tones! they look grrrrrrrrrrrrrreat!
>>78399100
If you really think nazis are anything but immensely repulsive I don't know what to even say to you. But you thinking the suffering of tens of millions of innocent people is "hilarious" sure makes you a cool dude, uh-huh.
>>78400430
>Now I gotta get 3 more done by Monday so the comic updates as normal during my trip.
Congrats on being more competent than most webcomic artists! And great page as usual.
>>78406071
get a load of the sensitivity here. You must get alll the chicks
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dnj62cbu4jc have a laugh on me, it's nearly ecksmas, mate
Finished drawing this one finally. Ended up changing what she said at the end so I could get a bit more variety out of her emotions.
>>78406916
I don't know why, but I feel like it would fit better as "Aw, I really liked that one, too."
>>78406975
It probably would. Either way I think its more interesting than the original draft where she was happy at the end.
>>78406071
Shut the fuck up.
>>78406916
Oh that is a much better punchline. wish I'd thought of it
>>78406975
yeah 'too' helps there.
happy holidays!
>>78407403
this is a lot funnier than it has any right to be
Comics that normally dont update today update...updated. How important is updating on holidays and special events?
>>78408729
Not very important to me personally. It's nice, but I don't really care if they do, because it's just gonna be a pinup or an omake.
>>78408729
if it's a daily comic, it's a major waste not to
otherwise? i reccommend against doing it every single year. you get this thing where these characters celebrate halloween and then immediately christmas.. many many times.. while the rest of the comic indicates very little time has passed
>>78408729
For a gag strip, probably not very. For a story comic, I'd say having consistent updates no matter what is pretty good. I'd also recommend having a buffer so you don't have to work oh holidays.
>>78406071
You just made yourself look like a complete idiot, congrats.
>>78408729
Not a holiday update, but we ought to update tonight or tomorrow. Back with Beatrice. About to do something rash.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2gmiSPMHrWQ
Vince Guaraldi is always appropriate.
Artist and I had a nice Christmas meal at a Denny's in New Jersey, in which we ate horrific food and talked about lasers and movies and how we'll be done with this first story arc by May at the latest.
So happy holidays and such to y'all.
>>78406916
Mimi's too cute, chief.
>>78407403
Working on a review, ought t have it up by New Year's alongside some other stuff I read six months ago that has improved in quality.
>>78410053
you've read off of http://luckyhazard.thecomicstrip.org/
and not tapastic, right? i stopped updating tapastic a while back.
>>78404398
yeah~
>>78411368
those locker locks look like you cropped another picture and pasted them on.
>>78411394
Sure did. I've had to draw the damn things enough. Still need to make some of them open.
>>78411520
Don't worry it'll be our little secret.
Happy Holidays.
I did small doodle. (This is probably last thing, I going to draw with a mouse)
Now, I need to practice on using a tablet.
>>78409046
>>78408729
Ohh you meant updating ON the holiday
yeah i appreciate having something to read.. but i GUESS some people are too busy on holidays to read comics or whatever.
>>78410053
never has that song been more appropriate
wooo Denny's christmas. that's a classic. Wait, your denny's is bad? that's a shame, ours is fantastic.
man that red rain looks so dramatical. i've seen nice reddish skies during snowfalls but never rain. that's fantastic.
>>78410523
fyi, hitting 'latest comic' takes you to the second latest comic
also did not realize this, i'll delete your annoying-to-read tapastic site i had bookmarked and replace it witht his
>>78411368
>Staa warbs
hehe
>>78411520
you'd have done better to draw one from an angle and paste that. oh well
>>78412612
>>78412656
>>78412678
JUST WRITE IT IN ONE POST.
>>78412722
sorry dude, i'm catching up. it's a slow thread. did someone run over your puppy?
>>78412714
Wrong. That would look even worse.
>>78411520
This is smart, but it looks cheap. Make the locker layer a little less opaque, then draw over it with the rulers/line tools so it looks more natural. Looks a lot better that way, I promise. Nice crowd btw.
>>78411368
Also, just noticed: fix the perspective on that poster on the right. Bring the bottom down a bit more.
>>78412840
why would that look worse? each one would look roughly the same.
![949883f6862112e61cd946e9948a844e[1].gif](https://i.imgur.com/n9FFafP.gif "949883f6862112e61cd946e9948a844e[1].gif")
>>78404398
>that filename
>>78408729
Well, let's put it this way:
Ghost Kiss just updated an entire 12-page chapter today. I think we can all agree that was a retarded thing to do. Everyone visiting the site just saw the last page first.
>>78412840
Guys. It's not done. Do you think all the characters are solid orange?
>>78405750
Haha thanks! To be honest aside from the time I use to color skin I tend to just make up a bunch of other ones arbitrarily and then not save them after applying it...though I'll see about going back and replicating the other 2 ones used here when I get home.
>>78406297
Thank you sir, these pages have been a blast to put together. I'm gonna start working on next week's pages tonight.
>>78412656
I've had good Denny's before, mostly because it was terrible but the waiter liked me and gave me some Bailey's. Helluva tip. Good dude.
Anyway!
Update: The Sisters
thesisters-comic.com
Tapastic is having issues, but tapastic.com/series/The-Sisters for later.
4 Pages. Beatrice lets the rage out of the cage. But she sees something that puts things into perspective.
Almost done with "The Monster" next issue up is "the Secrets."
>>78413707
so theyre just there as a guide for drawing the real locks?
>>78414189
he just had some bailey's? top waiter.
.. he wasn't green and covered in seaweed was he?
>>78414189
Dammit, another cliffhanger!! I can't pretive to alive it! Or whatever. Good shit there. Fucking ouch. human bites are like, the worst, I'm told. Something about neurocytes in our saliva
Finished this page!
I'm debating wether or not if this should be the end of the chapter
>>78414901
It should.
>>78398577
I love the monster designs. They really shine in that first panel. In the fourth panel, the monster looks too flat but it could work if your going for humor. Also, in the third panel the hostile monster looks much farther away than in the first panel. Did it get thrown back by rebound or is that a different monster?
Hard to judge the whole thing at this stage but I think it's going in the right direction.
>>78414901
what's coming next? because this seems like a fine ending
>>78414953
Yeah, I think that's a wrap.
>>78415059
Pretty much them thinking about what to do to get the money, and then Sora telling them that they should just train to win the tournement.
But I can just transition that into the next chapter, where things get a little crazy.
>three days ago
>"time to be productive"
>day 1 - hang out with friends
>day 2 - hang out with friends
>day 3 - get swindled by dad to watch little brother all day
On the one hand I don't have crippling depression and loneliness. On the other hand I pretty much just missed out on a ton of productive time.
>>78415186
yeah that can be a little interlude minichapter. possibly with a gimmick if you feel like doing one
>>78415390
replace friends with wiki articles and little brother with puppy and dad with mom and that's me. i never have time for videogames anymore
>>78415534
I spend all my time at my computer in my room. I need to get a second monitor up so I can game and still use my computer for other things.
I have suddenly lost all motivation to make a webcomic. I still love drawing, especially drawing my own characters (although commissions are always a blast, too), but I really just woke up today and my first thought was "I don't want to make a webcomic anymore." What went wrong? Has anyone been in a similar situation?
>>78415625
yeah dude, i did that and life has never been better. all my videogame dreams now involve me checking my computer for hints and stuff
>>78415017
Thanks
>in the third panel the hostile monster looks much farther away than in the first panel.
I see it now. I'll fix it.
>>78415847
Do something else. If you had started the comic you just would have dropped it in the middle which would be worse than deciding you don't want to do it.
>>78415847
there's other ways you can put out cool drawings than make a comic.
>>78412678
yeah i should change it to "latest update" bc i have 2 page updates
>>78416157
Ohhhh I get it. in that case that's fine
... and I guess that means I shouldn't bookmark the /comics/ page which DOES show the latest one, because then I'll miss the first part of multipage updates?
>>78416531
yeah hahah. sorry for the inconvenience.
Feeling really sad so I thumbed a stupid comic.
>>78417271
decided ill probably separate the 3rd panel into 3 reaction panels but you get the idea.
>>78414342
He was a cool hispanic dude with a samurai tattoo on his arm. And he had it in his car. It was pretty baller. I had frozen half to death out walking, so I stopped in for coffee. Nice guy. Coffee was shit, so he said to wait five minutes and then meet him in the parking lot. We talked about movies and shit.
>>78414380
>can't pretive to alive it.
What?
Anyway, yeah another cliff-hanger. Next update should explain away some things. Conrad's motivations should be almost fully clear by the end of the issue, as well as how Beatrice fits into it.
>>78417271
I laughed.
>>78417299
oh yeah like horizontal bars. that works.
that last panel is freaking adorable. and it's nice that she isn't completely oblivious to all the crazy weird things about her. Just thescaleof them.
>>78417336
I win
>>78417337
It's kinda like realizing your a weirdo in real life. In order to not get sad about it, you ignore it but you know its there. At least thats my experience with being weird to the general population.
>>78417336
You and your damn amazing life experiences. It's like that very last episode of The Storyteller.
>>78417443
I was always proud of it. Then again I was raised on a healthy dose of Animaniacs. And before that, Gonzo was my favorite muppet. In retrospect I was probably pretty annoying, but I'll take that anyday over boringsauce regulars.
>>78417507
My family never much cared about weirdness (my grandpa is the king of weird) but kids at school are another matter. I live in a tough city. Eat or be eaten kind of deal and if you stick out its kinda a problem depending on where you go.
How many webcomics do you know that seem like they're intentionally being dragged out too long? .
I mean story based webcomics. Not slice of life comics, where the point is to kind of keep it going a while.
>>78417684
This is a relic of a different era, and I know I'm being part of the problem by still staying updated, but MegaTokyo. The 12th chapter just started, but the 11th lated over 5 years for what ended up not really moving the story in as significant a way as I would've hoped. Most of this slowness is exacerbated by the fact that Fred always misses his updates, and the site can go months without a comic.
>>78418199
yeah I check it every day too but I can't remember the last time it ever had a new comic. i literally remember nothing about the story whatsoever, that's how long it's been. it's just various random art.
>>78418199
That comic is so behind in so many different ways. It's amazing he still draws in that blobby faux animu style that hasn't been popular since the early to mid 2000s.
That also reminds me of No Pink Ponies. Eisu is shit with schedules and that comic apparently still takes place way back in the past.
Maybe webcomics need to adopt a sliding timescale like Marvel.
>>78418386
hey some of us still like that style.. it's hardly blobby. and as i recall, it was never a popular style. I'm not even sure how to describe it
in any case the flaw is in the writing. it's like what if egoraptor never replaced jontron and just tried to be the singular game grump. It would have been a lot like megatokyo
>>78418428
The rounded heads were practically just circles. Weird half-animu style done in pencil. To me it's just a relic of the 00s. I stopped reading a long long long time ago and remembered nothing really happening and they managed to drag out drama for chapters.
Murray Chrissmus /co/!
I've made it to 100 comics!
And on Christmas!
>>78419090
hate comments make me feel great and often make me laugh
>>78419090
Your comic is usually funny
that wasnt
>>78419090
shit now i want a mountdewrita too
>>78419122
yeah sometimes he goes for kinda nonjokes. this one is at least kind of a joke. I dunno, they're cranked out quickly enough
>>78419122
I kind of feel like the Mountain dew Dorito-tini thing has been done before too.
>>78411368
When is it safe to spoil Star Wars.
Merry Christmas folks.
>>78399277
Your stuff's awesome, man. I remember seeing designs and stuff of this way back. Definitely checking out that Tumblr.
![j9uPv[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/tUmFGKc.jpg "j9uPv[1].jpg")
>>78419090
What's that, bitch? So you're using me in your comics now? If I find you I'm gonna kick your ass!
>>78419184
My sides.
![240_F_65077195_mQgmjCq1ee2lKpO4hdCoXFizi2w1zu1c[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/Zk1y2zN.jpg "240_F_65077195_mQgmjCq1ee2lKpO4hdCoXFizi2w1zu1c[1].jpg")
>>78419184
Yeah! What he said! Fuck off!
>>78419243
This is all too real oh my god. Pfthahaha
>>78419090
Merry Chrismas Jim! Have a good one <3
>>78419287
Thanks! You too!
I can't sleep, so here's the WIP of the next comic!
I'm pretty proud of how this page is turning out!
>>78419170
god dammit why did i hover over that. i'm seeing it tomorrow
oh well it's possibly better to have it broken to me this way
and at least now i know what that one thing being left out in the spoiler-free reviews was referring to
>>78419548
aw yeah freckled buttcheeks
>censorsoft
my foamy sides
btw it's 'dastardly' and you want a comma after dildos
>>78419548
Is this a tranny comic? Why is this girl so hairy?
>>78419584
Thanks for the heads up.
>>78419586
Some girls have a bush down there anon, it's natural.
Unless you're talking about her freckles.
If you had to rank the webcomics posted in these threads, how would you rank them?
Ranked by art, writing, and over all quality.
You can do top 5 or 10, or just one for each category. Or you can rank all of them if you have that much free time.
I'm just curious.
>>78419548
wat is?
>>78420186
West Tree Academy of Heroes!
>>78420196
Youdabess
Happy assorted holidays, everyone!
http://amonguscomic.com/comic/christmas-morning-fun/
http://amonguscomic.tumblr.com/post/135903916715/merry-intergalactic-christmas-earthlings
I've already posted it, but today it's timely! Merry Christmas, /hyw/!
>>78415534
>i never have time for videogames anymore
Me neither.
I feel bad bc my wife just got me a 3DS with A Link Between World; it'll take me FOREVER to finish it
>enable google analytics on my comic's site
>think I'm going to see my friends checking my page often, supporting my comic
>all of my views are spambots from russia
The truth hurts
>>78410053
where will these reviews be available?
>>78424133
Speaking of weird stuff, can someone explain these huge spikes in page views?
Managed to pencil a page. Mom is out and plans fell though so nothing but comics for me haha.
>>78425851
Happens when someone posts your stuff and link somewhere and some people check it out. It also depends on how many pages you have because each person will likely look at every page. So even though your numbers dropped you seem to have a higher number of usual visitors at the end.
>>78426455
>Happens when someone posts your stuff and link somewhere and some people check it out.
But it doesn't match the amount of visitors... or maybe I just don't understand what pageviews mean. I haven't seen my comic featured anywhere when I got the spikes, those weren't even update days.
>>78426576
Doesn't matter. All it takes for someone to link you in some way and a lot of people check it out. Those views are the entire site. That's how mine are. And I have breakdowns of what pages got what views. It could also count for someone clicking on a page, going to another, and then coming back to that page.
>>78426576
A lot of pageviews usually means the same person read your whole comic.
Finished this page!
>>78428896
Why does she have a pig tail?
>>78426321
Decided to change the last panel to something like this. Need to redraw it one more time to fix the proportions though.
>>78429321
Now I wonder what happens when she gets split ends.
>>78429215
her dad is a pig i think
Merry Christmas, fellow anons.
>>78430155
Please put a comma before Demon Lord.
>>78431241
Alright, thanks. I saw a few things I'll have to fix, so I'll put it on the list.
>>78431271
What is your comic about?
>>78431328
An otaku kid ends up in a fantasy world with elves and shit, but with modern technology.
He's forced to fight the demon lord, but instead, he teams up with him against the empire.
Simple concept, but it works well enough for a comedy story with only 4 panels.
>>78431241
I would advise against that. It's not necessary and that'd give that sentence three commas. Only if the kid pauses after saying "hey." Otherwise it's perfectly fine for him to say "Hey Demon Lord,".
>>78431469
I actually had a comma in it at first, but deleted it because it felt weird.
English isn't my native language, though, so I wasn't sure about it.
>>78431462
>>78431497
You don't need it. Commas are for pauses and to keep clauses separate. Yes you can have a comma after "hey" but it's not necessary and works better without it.
>>78431469
Personally I'd suggest going full minimalist and just
"Can we buy this, please?"
There's no need to specify that he's talking to the demon lord - he's the only other guy in the comic. Cut everything you don't need, y'know?
>>78431626
I think the first bit is nice and comes across as childish. He's a kid that's casually talking to a demon lord. It fits.
>>78431626
I want the "Demon Lord" in it, because it sounds weird.
He has a real name (Falk), but Kevin always calls him Demon Lord, for some reason. I guess I just think it's cute.
>>78431696
Well guess what, fuckboy?It is cute.
>>78431469
>It's not necessary
I want people like you to fucking die. Fuck you. It is absolutely necessary.
>>78431696
In that case I'd go with "Demon Lord, can we please buy this?" to keep the number of commas down.
>>78431771
That's also good. Also, what about "Mr. Demon Lord"?
>>78431819
That's awfully close to "Demon Lord-senpai," brother.
>>78431951
Without is just as good but I feel the first part comes across as a little plain. I like the extra flavor of a "hey" or adding "Mr."
>>78431771
I might change it to "Uhm... Demon Lord? Can we buy this, please?", or something like that.
>>78421187
alien caaats alien cats.
>>78422880
eh that game isnt too long, and it's great for playing in small bits
>>78426321
I feel like they should be more wildly wiggly like in the sketch
>>78429321
Hahahaha, okay that's really funny but I think it's going overboard.. the original reaction is more in line with 'i was lazy but ughh'
>>78431469
This. Grammar is still accounting for this, but the way people speak nowadays we don't pause after all salutations or interjections.
>>78431696Does Falk's peter have a lazy eye?
>>78430155
hey look, it's Leo and Satan.
how original.
>>78432650
>Leo and Satan.
Someone in these threads actually told me about that before.
I watched one episode andthought it's really bad.
Then again, it has over 11,000,000 views on youtube.
>>78432606
It never represented a pause. Not all commas are pauses.
>>78432764
They are both ostensibly and subjectively. When you read a comma, you pause. That's how it works. That's why we have started leaving them out, because we have stopped pausing after the word 'hey'. That word has had a long history and metamorphosis and in its current form it does not require a comma afterwards.
>>78432700
It was nearly an adult swim cartoon even.
The only reason it wasn't was because the owner didn't want to lose all rights to it
>>78432650
sause
>>78432864
It still fucking requires a comma. It's fucking grammer. It has not fucking changed.
>>78432981
grammAr changes, son. Go look it up
>>78432936
mine
>>78433001
The grammar has not changed, idiot. It still requires a comma.
