what do ya think /co ?
www.mikejc.com
thats all, what do ya guys think?
Wait a minute, what?
>>77496915
I would have said something like "Check the perspective and the anatomy of Squirrel Grill on the first left panel (especially the legs) and you should try that mirror trick to see if it looks alright"
But you know what?
With Erica Henderson art you realize they don't give a fuck about that.
Instead, check the places where Kate Leth is going to be and offer her to suck her feminine dick. You will increase the chances of getting a job.
>>77496960
aww got ya on the anatomy bit, anything else you notice?
>>77496977
Well, the Squirrel Grill leg on the second panel here >>77496905
Also, it seems you re-did the Henderson pages, but did you leave the space for the captions and the dialogs?
>>77496990
aww crap i see it now, thanks man. also yea i did, or at least i imagine i did. it was something i kept aware of as i worked
Well, are you gonna finish it, niggah?
>>77496900
>>77496990
Not him, but eh?
>>77497201
Loll thats it, just the 4 sample pages
>>77496900
>>77496905
>>77496915
>>77496925
This is good, too bad the writing would still be shit.
>>77496900
>>77496905
>>77496915
>>77496925
Squirrel Girl isn't supposed to be sexy, Squirrel Girl does not fight on-panel. She just wins, off-panel. You have fundamentally misunderstood the concept of the character. No, the fact that Marvel have also failed to understand her in recent years is not significant, you are still in the wrong. You just have company.
>>77496900
Better than the one they printed.
>>77497374
Her first apperance had her fight and in on panel.
So did her GLA run.
It seems the only time this happens was when she was used to defeat big hitters as a joke.
>>77497374
You have autism.
>>77497374
>Squirrel Girl isn't supposed to be sexy
Debatable and subjective.
>Squirrel Girl does not fight on-panel
Has done so plenty of times.
>She just wins, off-panel
This statement is overplayed, she's won with on-panel reasoning many times.
>>77496925
rather dull
>>77496900
you realize that sonichu guy would do a better job than Henderson?
>>77497472
Thanks for your honesty
>>77498767
my grandma would do a better job than Henderson and she studied at CalArts
>>77497374
Are you retarded?
>>77496900
He really needs to learn how to draw people walking/running. That's like amateur hour pose-wise. Her face is cute but other than that the art is just kinda all over the place, I'm not surprised this guy didn't get hired.
>>77496925
Is this porn ?
>>77500467
I don't know, the website I would use to make that call is down due to high operating costs.
Eh, looks good to me, OP. At the very least, it looks better than about 50% of what I see out of the big two, art-wise. The only thing I noticed that was kinda wonk was >>77496915 where her eyes are looking past the squirrel, not at the squirrel.
>>77500355
This
It's okay as far as general features go
but it looks like he started out drawing shitty black-white porn that's you'd find on the slums of and porn booru
>>77496925
Add the eye makeup and you are 10/Henderson
OH SHIT IT'S CUTE
>>77500355
Op. Sweet got it, thanks,
Yeah these werent for anyone jusy for myself
>>77497374