I'm 21 and applying to undergrad. I'd love some feedback on my essay (incoming).
Motherfucker nobody here is going to read it let alone give you good advice
Prompt:
“Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve. You can type directly into the box, or you can paste text from another source. (250-650 words)”
When I was a child, I questioned my surroundings incessantly. Whichever adult was nearest me got a never-ending earful of “how does this work?” “why is that there?” “what does it do?”.
I wanted to understand everything, and still do. The human body has always been very interesting to me. I’ve often wondered how the molecules come together to make a person who breathes and has a unique, individual consciousness. After taking neurophysiology and pharmacokinetics in high school, I decided I might like to be a pharmacist and started university courses in pre-pharm. A couple weeks in, I spoke to my professors and read online about what it’s like to be a pharmacist. I was so disappointed to learn that most of the knowledge obtained in pharmacy school is never applied, and being a pharmacist is mostly paperwork and counting pills. That realization shook me; I fear graduating with a degree I’ll eventually regret, or changing my mind 50 credits in. I elected to withdraw and take time to be certain of my choice before investing so much time and equity into a degree. Over the past three years, I’ve been cooking, painting houses, landscaping, working as a contractor, housekeeping, coaching people in fitness, and doing odd jobs. I’ve spent a large portion of my free time looking into different career paths, and after much consideration and meeting with professionals in the field, I’ve decided to become an M.D. and attend [SCHOOL]. Thank you for your consideration.
>>16997333
If it's a course with relatively low grade requirements, you could write fuck all and it not matter.
The fact you didn't include a tl;dr for your wall of text means I ain't reading shit.
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>>16997339
samefag
bumping for actual replies
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ur 3 years fucking around doesnt look good
>>16997518
i dont have a time machine sooooo
bumping for advice