Does this sentence sound weird, or is it fluent?
Nobody goes there anymore after they opened the new Walmart recently.
"Goes there"
It's a fragmented sentence. Where is there?
Also you could either remove the word "recently" or put it before the word "opened" although I think that is just personal preference.
Nobody goes there anymore, since they opened the new Walmart recently.
^ sounds better to me.
>>17281422
What if it were "Nobody goes to Walgreens anymore after..."?
>>17281402
You do realize there are entire websites devoted to grammarwhoring? They're free, too.
Do your homework somewhere else.
>>17281402
Nobody has gone there since the new Walmart opened.
Plebeians.
>>17281402
Alas, no persons have ventured thither sence the Asian conglomerate opened its doors.
After nobody recently goes there anymore they new Walmart the opened
>>17281585
hallways*
>>17281590
Rip. This is why I didn't go for an English degree.
>>17281402
"With that new Walmart open, nobody goes there anymore."
>>17281402
After the new Walmart opened recently, nobody goes there anymore.
>>17281441
After the new Walmart opened recently, nobody goes to Walgreen's anymore.
