poem advice
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So i want to write a small poem to a girl that will be my gf, despite long distance.
how does it sound?
>You and me, it should be
>what we have is special
>i think we can agree
>you're in my head 24/7
>i just want you
>that is my heaven
too cheesy?
it just depends, man.
Personally I think it's slightly cheesy in a cute as fuck way. ;_ ; be my sempai
>>16445428
you think so? if thats the case it should be alright.
shes into that stuff
>>16445432
tell me what i can change anon
and why the hell can't i quick reply in /adv/.
>>16445439
>>16445432
>>16445422
atleast contribute instead of samefagging anon
>>16445432
>calling a guy a fag for making poetry
stop feeding into hyper/toxic masculinity then yelling at feminists that there's "too much pressure on men"
>>16445440
Lol its fine, short and to the point.
If i were you, instead of 24/7, id say "all day" to rhyme with "be my bae, what do you say?" but work your own magic with "day", its cool
>>16445450
>>16445404
dude
dont do it. girls laugh at things like this, then show their friends and laugh as a group. the fact that you think this is acceptable/a good idea is indicative of a deeper problem. i think you need to reevaluate your perspective on women
>>16445462
thanks man
>>16445513
go play somewhere else
>>16445513
Some women stay innocent enough throughout life thinking its very cute. Probably only 5% tho, but this man is right. Look at Miley Cyrus. Make sure shes very playful and artsy type.
>>16445404
I would slap your face for writing me such offensive "poem". Write another one or get lost! Ashhh... Jinja
>>16445553
just wrote it to her
we'll see how she reacts, then again, shes in love with me so no biggy
>>16445561
Yes but you are a guy so it's not of relevance for these matters anyways.
