Thought it'd be okay to start my own thread for this comic I'm working on. I'll keep it all to this one thread, if you don't mind.
![tumblr_nphfgkDrlI1t95tbyo1_1280[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/OBdzkWD.jpg "tumblr_nphfgkDrlI1t95tbyo1_1280[1].jpg")
This is an erotic comic. It just takes about a dozen pages before the erotic part.
![tumblr_nuo8gylj281t95tbyo1_r1_1280[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/GAG4zQj.jpg "tumblr_nuo8gylj281t95tbyo1_r1_1280[1].jpg")
![tumblr_nve5pzdMWt1t95tbyo1_r2_1280[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/5nusYW2.jpg "tumblr_nve5pzdMWt1t95tbyo1_r2_1280[1].jpg")
And I'll just post all future updates in here.
Neat. Marcelline is best, too.
>>217941
Please have this end with him cumming in her.
Loving it so far.
>>217936
>Dat panel with the underboob
I demand for you to pick up the pace for I want MOAR
>>218000
t r i p s demand faster post speed
It is turning out beautifully. Have any concerns you want us to address?
Swain! I was just linking my friend this stuff. Just wanted to say that it's super cool of you to put your raw files out there for everyone to use, your Patreon deserves to be several orders of magnitude bigger than it is.
I just discovered this independent of /d/
This is fucking amazing and I can't wait for the whole thing. Marceline is the best AT girl and I like the idea of her and Finn together. Fantastic work.
>>217941
nigga damn thats good, don't hold back on us
kek
Please more, based Swain
How often do you think you'll update?
I saw this on /co/ a while back.
Can't wait to see more!
Man, this is really good
Does it have to be so melodramatic?
Is there another site it's hosted on?
Wot? Is this locally made? Like in /aco/? Top Notch content.
I love this comic more than this fatty loves little boys, and he loves little boys a lot (some would say too much).
>>219748
Originally posted at the tumblr swainart.tumblr.com
damn nigga you good
Wow, this is a lot of positive feedback. It feels great. Thank you everyone.
>>218180
Thanks for linking my stuff. Out of curiosity, have you done anything with my source files? I don't really know what anyone can do with them. I did open up some of my old files and it was surprisingly fun just to fiddle around with the layers.
>>219565
I don't know. Right now, I have to focus on commissions to get money. I really need it because I'll be moving to Tokyo in January, and need to save up a lot for school and rent. I'll be drawing this comic whenever I'm not doing commissions.
And in case anyone here is interested in ordering a piece, you can find info here: http://swainart.tumblr.com/commission
Currently, I'm open to most anything.
>>219748
I should've posted it earlier. swaintart.tumblr.com. This is currently the only other place I post it. Is there another site I should be trying to build a presence on?
>>218172
Well, I guess I would ask, any advice on incentivizing viewers to helping me out through Patreon? I did a poor job when I first started it, because I had to focus on my move to Japan. But if I could earn more through Patreon and not have to focus on commissions, it would help me create comics faster. I drew and colored pg 13-14 in a day and a half. I could do a complete page every two days, if I were well supported.
Image unrelated. Just a commission piece I did.
>>217905
Thanks for posting your comic OP, I love that straight-quasi-shota stuff.
>>219802
[spoiler]
Just to reassure the fucks of 4chan, that gif is of an old as fuck joke sketch from some tedious Dutch show. I just mention it since my idiot siblings got fuckin' mad when they found out the dude had adopted some kids in the early aughts, he's a fucking comedian/singer.[/spoiler]
Shit m8, you're awesome. Keep up the great work!
Great stuff OP, this seems right up my alley.
>>219876
I'm no expert on Patreon so you might want to take what I say with a grain of salt, but I'd recommend you put a light watermark with your patreon link on your images. Especially if you're giving out the sources files anyway, the people who are bothered by watermarks can just remove them. Your images are going to be shared anyway, might as well make it work for you. If you don't have a HentaiFoundry or Deviantart account, you should probably get one too.
Your art's pretty good and your patron tiers seem like a nice deal (except the $40 one, not sure who that would appeal to), you just got to make sure people know who you are. The more people who know you, the more potential patrons you have.
That's my advice as someone who supports several artists through Patreon. It might be a good idea to take some cues from other artists with successful Patreons too.
Pretty damn good anon. Really.
I don't know if you knew I'd open the first four images and then decide if I'd keep reading but it sure seems so.
>>219685
well it appealed to me. It's melodramatic but the deliverance has been good so far.
I don't say I'd read an entire book if it was all like that but it's just a few pages.
>>219876
>Out of curiosity, have you done anything with my source files?
Yeah, actually. A friend of mine's dnd tabletop character always used Marceline as a point of reference (he's a bard) so I used your source files to change it up for him.
Your layers are so organized! I love it!
>>217905
Go on
buuuuump
>>217905
Thats some good stuff mang, i remember seeing you show the cover and that first page in a HYW thread (or was it a batman thread?) some time ago (can't remember how long thought), very nice to such amount of progress.
Keep going!
buuumping, really enjoying this stuff (?
>>217905
>fluffy desperate monstergirl lewds
My dick is breaching containment. If this ends in a leglock creampie I might cum so hard I actually die.
>>223510
CONTAINMENT BREACH NOTED.
REMAIN CALM AS AN MTF IS SENT TO YOUR LOCATION
Keep up the good work, OP.
>>219876
Swain, been following you for almost a year - what happened to your schedule? Haven't seen much of note from you for months.
>>217985
This
got anything planned for Marceline's Mom in the future?
JFC this is amazing. Keep it up dude! I will be watching intently!
>>219876
oh oh
>>217905
god damn, man. this is some dope shit.
>>224472
Nope.
>>223942
I see what you mean. I hope my coloring improves as the comic progresses.
>>223571
I'm sorry for that. I've spent the past two months preparing for my move to Tokyo. I'm currently stressing out over selling my belongings and finding homes for my cats.
>>222421
Thank you! I'm sorry it's taking this long for me to get to this point.
>>221208
Yes, I'm the writer as well.
>>221202
That's really cool! Mind sharing?
>>221200
It's going to continue with the melodrama. But I hope it serves a purpose. They're not going to wallow in self-pity, they're going to grow from it. This first comic is called Lonely to reflect how Marceline sees herself. By the end of it, she won't feel that way.
Next page should be up by Sunday.
Your art is pretty awful to look at to be honest most of the time I just see man faces and the pursed lips are just awful.
Stop shilling your Patreon. No one cares, you're not making money don't come here and beg.
>>225778
According to my friend, she sounds like Nancy Sinatra.
>>217922
>we're practically the same age
>translate to 'it's cool right? I'm not /SS/ or anything'
>>217905
I'm listening
OP is a top bloke.
Looking up more of their stuff now.
>>219802
To be honest though, Paul de Leeuw probably has the downs.
>>228796
Love the lip bite in the last panel.
>>221172
>light watermark with your patreon link on your images
I would advise making it clear but in an out-of-the-way spot that doesn't interrupt the flow of the image. For example, on a sign where writing would be, or on a rough-textured background object. If it doesn't interfere with the enjoyment of the image, people won't have an incentive to look for unmarked versions.
>>225778
>I hope my coloring improves as the comic progresses.
Remember that colors and shadows change depending on the local light. You did a good job of this in the first color image's background scene, where the sky light tints the ruins and more enclosed areas have deeper shadows. The problem is that the coloration and lighting for the characters is full and semi-diffuse respectively in all scenes, suggesting that they're outside on a lightly cloudy day rather than on a moonlit street and then inside an abandoned house at night lit by a spot of moonlight shining through a hole.
I suggest making some new palettes for different lighting conditions. Night-sky-lit should be fairly diffuse with the strong tint you have in the first background (shadows should be deeper though - it is night after all). Inside the house should have a stronger contrast (very deep and large shadows) with more neutral and slightly faded colors (color vision fades as it gets darker).
>>221208
Forced drama was what killed AT
>>228796
Keep up the good work man.
Doing a good job op, keep it up
>>231164
I see. It died in season 1 then. Gotcha.
>>217985
This so much.
>>225778
I love you Swain. Never stop.
Really fun stuff swain. Glad I stumbled upon this thread. Well okay, the juicy OP image actually drew me in, sue me. Nice work regardless. I really admire how serious and work-mindedly you present yourself. You're a role model, mate!
>>228796
Anal please
Really good stuff. Marceline and Finn always works so fine.
I can't find the tumblr account! I want to see how this develops, it's gonna be good.
Good god please say there's more.
>>232177
Whomever created this gif is a moron.
>>232522
You're talking about Finn, aren't you?
Not that there's anything wrong with that.
>>217985
and don't ruin it with an ugly face please!!!
>>217905
This Is really cool man. I love it!
>>217905
Bump. Uber interested.
Don't die on me op
>>225778
>It's going to continue with the melodrama. But I hope it serves a purpose. They're not going to wallow in self-pity, they're going to grow from it
Just develop your story how you feel like man. As I said, it's been nice so far and the last thing I'd want is to clog up your plans and creative process.
>>217928
>that face
Not bad so far
>>217936
Fuck that's it so far? Keep it up man we need him to be the hero we need him to be
>>228796
>nice color
Kek
>>217932
"I've seen some shit"
>>217905
I do not mind
>>234168
Still a good gif though.
>>217985
End to with him Nutting in her and she bites him in climax and leave as a "oh shit" moment. She did say in her eyes they are the same age.
>>217932
That Finn looked like some JoJo shit, specially Jhonny from part 7.
>>238590
He looks like thorfinn gro Vinland saga
>>217905
I love how you draw her (them), seriously you're awesome and this comic is awesome.
More when and where?!
>>228796
That drool and lip biting hnnng
bamps
>>240036
The fuck is even going on in this image
What is wrong with you
>>241099
Why are you on 4chan if you don't know expand dong?
Bump for life
>>230397
Addendum to this: The spot lighting inside he house provides opportunities to add emphasis to parts of the scene. A basic idea of the room's layout for consistency is good, but composition is more important.
Haven't died. Just spent the past days to week packing up and selling belongings. Working out details when I'm going to move out. Finding a place to live for the last few weeks I'm here before I move. A lot of things.
I'm going to finish up one more commission and do another page.
Take your time bro, we'll be waiting. It looks amazing.
>>248690
Based
>>217985
Anything other would be an offense
>>217905
More?
bump for moar
I've been waiting for this for some time, looking really fucking good so far.
