How do we fix this series?
Burn it.
>>143072407
Drop it and watch Carnival Phantasm.
By ending it.
>>143072407
Haven't read it, but I'm assuming the MC is a faggot, so fix him.
>>143072407
It's the only way anon.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=uvbaM-URygs
>>143072407
You don't. You just enjoy the ride.
Draw more tits?
Turn it into porn, that's literally the only way.
>>143072407
Make MC alpha and let him fuck the girls.
>>143073574
How are the betajaps going to self insert of MC is getting laid.
>>143073574
>have MC cheat on his GF
Get out
>>143073686
Can't wait for the "girlfriend" to get discovered and impregnated by one of the other four males.
Making the main character like #1 and turning it into hentai
>>143072548
How can you enjoy the ride when the MC is actively trying to slam his foot on the breaks?
>>143072407
Make it about a cute shota who they must cultivate and coax for reproduction. Think about the lengths people go for pandas.
Cue lots of hand holding, head pats, ear cleaning, skinship and foreskin/penis/general health care.
>>143072407
More or atleast one Preggo's.
These fuckers are supposed to be breeding, I demand they show a couple of the bred, because that is my fetish, pregnant chicks, chicks who have successfully bred, and are now pregnant, for that rustles my jimmies just right.
>>143072407
you can start by stop spamming this thread
Make it into a Prison School-esque comedy.
For example, say the MC is a klutz. A bunch of women want to jump his bones, but he constantly causes accidents that cause them to get knocked out without him even noticing they're there.
Alternatively, just do Y: The Last Man.
