Was it justified?
nah
no human deserves to go through what she went through
It was created by ShindoL why are you vanilla fags so surprised at how it ended?
>>142709019
Not like she disliked most of it. And a lot of other times she was too numb to feel anything.
>>142709145
Need more amputee vanilla.
>>142709145
Probably because despite the meme, ShindoL has had some good endings and some great vanilla works.
Personally I thought it would have a bad ending but I can see why others might think otherwise.
>>142709247
Guy's one of my favorite "newish" artists, but usually quite predictable, the moment the first needle hit her veins that's when people should've known it's over.
Hell ShindoL himself even said waaaay back at chapter 3 or 4 that shit was going to get darker.
No, Saki-chan... had a hard life.I feel bad that I got a chub seeing her getting beaten by her old classmates
>>142709471
They weren't her old classmates, just random teens out being edgy.
>>142709346
As long as it wasn't getting danker.
>>142708936
She was pretty stupid, but she didn't deserve being raped by her father and being kicked out of the house by her mother
>>142708936
>twin braids on cover
>immediately lets hair down
fucking why
>>142709471
She didn't deserve the fate she got
fuck marry kill fromright to left
>>142709689
I agree. I love twin braids. There's not enough douijins with twin braids.
Quite ironic that the homeless oldmen were the nicest people she ever met.
>>142709471
I like seeing women get beat as much as the next guy, but she was pregnant. That was a bit too much for me
>>142709521
No, they were. The girl that started stepping on her was the same one that pushed her into prostitution.
>>142709471
She should have stayed plain.
>>142709471
Is this from his patreon or twitter? Never seen it before.
i didn't quite understand the ending
the last panel made it look like she OD'd and died but it also showed her as a mother playing with her child so i wasn't sure if that actually ended up happening somehow or if it was just a dying dream of hers
>>142709972
It's an ambigous ending, just go with what you want to believe
>>142709972
Have you ever done heroin?
>>142709972
Hallucinating/daydreaming as she slips into a heroin overdose and dies.
I knew it's gonna be bad end, but that ending went over the line for me. Should end with that she became a hopeless drug whore and that should be enough, we don't need to see her actually getting killed.
>>142710042
i don't understand what point are you trying to make
>>142710221
It was a hallucination, she didn't actually have a daughter.
>>142710291
fuck, i assumed that actually happened. i never asked for these feels
>>142709145
Just read the ending. Oh man what trash. You can tell he rushed it.
So could all have this been prevent if she didn't just wear make up?
>>142710761
No.
She was too dumb and naive to go out with some random guy alone.
And her parents are garbage that would've eventually do the same things to her anyway.
I wanted to see some birth, but instead we got a brutal beating and sad hallucination before death.
Seriously why did he even make that final chapter?
Just to troll people?
>>142711295
To crush the spirit of the weak, so only the strong can endure.
>mfw seeing a new Shindol piece
So wait did she die?
She woke up on the bench, but why is their blood by the glasses?
>>142711944
It's meant to be an ambiguous ending just like Inception.
>>142711944
That shit was so a dream. Dude's not gonna pull punches at this point.
This is actually the worse ShindoL story yet
This is Oyster level shit
wait there's an ending?
>>142713434
Yes
>cant remember name so just google image search
>returns "vision care"
it's like they arent even trying any more
>>142709145
Occasionally ShindoL will throw out a vanilla piece.
But, to be fair, it quickly went edgy, but Saki was still endearing
>>142708936
Well, that's what happens when you try to be a whore.
>>142709471
fuck n marry the flat, kill the rest
>>142710662
Ok wtf kind of dream world ending is that shit
that baby should be born a heroin addict with hiv.
>>142708936
I remember starting this, began to dig it, but ended up feeling worse and worse the longer I pressed on. I don't think I want to read the ending.
>>142708936
stay toastie roastie
I don't understand how people get so fucking butthurt about hentai like this. It's not necessarily hot, but normal manga gets just as fucked up literally all the time. ShindoL is honestly pretty tame.
>>142708936
rip saki-chan. You will slut it up in the big soapland in the sky
>>142715637
Because Saki was actually an endearing character, and that makes it so much worse.
I love slut corruption, but not like this.
>>142716876
Yeah, if they aren't happy sluts what's the point. Fucking ShindoL ruining best fetish.
Just found out that he has a patreon
Pretty neat reading it and it sounds like he isn't a faggot about people pirating his work. Also, having a tier where you get the doujin is pretty neat too, though I would think most people wouldn't proudly display them
Anime isn't supposed tofeelthis real
>>142709019
What did she go through?
>>142719484
Lots of rape, forced prostitution, being made a drug addict and murder.
>>142717051
Luckily this isn't an anime faggot.
Man, I wouldn't want to run into kids like that in the street!
>>142710662
If you could step in at this point and save her, would you?
>>142714397
You really don't.
>>142709759
No, they raped her and took her to a commune.
>>142720344
I imagine if anyone tried, the Shindol universe would kill them off in a gruesome manner that would only make her suffer more.
>>142713536
Emergence
>>142710291
heroin doesn't make you hallucinate retard
t. pharmacist
>>142714365
Anime makes everything look pretty, they probably would have written it off as her getting a lot of Japanese colds in her youth.
>>142720517
What does shock and massive physical, mental, and emotional trauma cause, Mr. Pillcounter?
>>142720517
b-but... serotonin levels... dimethyltriptamine... pineal gland... sleep and death... dreams which can't be recalled...
>>142708936
>When she puts on her glasses and does her hair this way in chapter 7
I almost cried.
>>142720517
i believe you.
Then we can just chock that scene in the end as her fantasy dream right before she passes away due to the overdose.
Personally, I'd just cut out the last page with the glasses to leave it a bit more ambiguous.
>>142720609
I was more impressed by the fact that she could use each hand to wind a separate braid at the same time, With that kind of manual dexterity she should have tried magic tricks instead of turning tricks.
>>142720561
>>142720575
yeah I guess that works
I can handle Oyster and Quzilax but this is on a different level.
Makes my heart sink every time it's even mentioned.
>>142709203
http://exhentai.org/g/745934/bc5f9565fd/
true
>>142711944
It was a drug-induced hallucination comforting her before she died.
>>142708936
I think this work is pretty brilliant, that's what should be shown to kids in school for drug prevention.
>>142708936
No she brought it on herself.
>acted like a slut and just went with that dude alone and then did what he said
>let her dad rape her instead of screaming/fighting
>never went to the cops after she was kicked out
>>142721419
>>142721419
She was way too naive. It's one thing being sheltered, the other agreeing to go to karaoke box with a stranger and agree to get groped by an old man in his hotel room. Also, why the hell did she agree to that? She had a boyfriend and considering how much she loved him and that she didn't have much experience with sex, you would think she would care too much about staying faithful.
>>142709471
I think her original look was the best
When her mom disowned her bc she got raped by her dad was pretty fucked up. I kept going back and forth between that page and the ones where the mom was teaching her how to do make-up and having a genuine mother-daughter bonding. Shit ain't right yo.
>>142721868
She might have heard the rumors about her daughter being a prostitute (remember what the students wrote on her desk?) and came to the conclusion her daughter was now a sex-crazed whore.
Still fucked up that she didn't even ask for her side of the story.
>>142708936
>read the first chapter
>forget about it
>see this thread
>read the end
Literally what the fuck ShindoL? I was having such a good night until now.
>>142721950
Her husband had the adventage of being the first to tell his version and thus directing all the anger on daughter. I want to believe that after she calmed down mom wanted to find the daughter, but since she didn't even know about boyfriend she had no chance of that.
>>142722019
>Daughter is emotionally retarded and lacks reasoning skills
Comes from the mother I guess, no big surprise
>>142708936
What manga is th- oh..
>>142722178
I want to see you being calm when your kid and spouse fuck eachother every night
>>142722215
Not even that, but from the ending the mom had similar problems to her at first growing up from the sounds of the ending. But no, I would never tell my kid to "fuck off" even in fucked up shit like that, you don't blame the kid for that shit.
>>142722215
I cannot think of a single scenario where a reasonable parent or human being would blame his kid first and foremost instead of the spouse.
The only happy ending she could possibly have is to somehow raise her own daughter in the shanty town.
>>142722344
How terrible am I that the thing I'm most disappointed about is that happy ending not happeningso it could get a sequel where her old boyfriend randomly runs into the daughter 15 years later, mind breaks her and turns her into a prostitute before reeling Saki back in as well.
>>142722434
I'm with you it as long as it ends with daughter freeing from boyfriend's influenceAnd the last pages are 17 years timeskip to the granddaughter meeting boyfriend
>>142720517
you don't need to be on drugs to hallucinate either
and given the context where she "saw" how her life could have gone it makes perfect sense, jesus you people are autistic
>>142722434
He would be a homeless hobo or in prison by then.
>>142722668
Use punctation.
Capitalize your sentences.
>>142722723
i already called you autistic
>>142708936
No, only /pol/ would think that.
>>142722344
If the kid didn't die in the first two weeks from being a heroin addicted, STI infected, half starved FDS malformed mess I'd be very surprised.
>>142708936
Oh no. Another girl I want to rescue from Hentai and give a proper series. Why you gotta do this to me?
>>142722310
Because an angry but reasonable mother would allow to save her daughter. Instead the story wanted a dramatic end. So...
>>142709471
>>142708936
Why does there always have to be someone to rememebr me of this. Godamnit.
>Shindol
ABSOLUTELY DISGUSTING
>>142723029
>The regret in her eyes
Whelp
>>142723029
>When Saki started lamenting how she couldn't be a mom and then proceeds to take another hit
>be drug-addicted prostitute
>get beaten to death
guess she should've DAREd to say no to DRUG
>>142708936
It never will be.
>>142722310
>>142722920
happens irl and then some
dummer things have been "justified"
I fucking hate tokyo ghoul cunts fuck off already with your edgy shit
What was the message of the story?
>>142728210
Don't do drugs?Seriously good riddance to fucking heroin junkies I'm sick of seeing newspaper articles about narcan being kept in places like public schools and families crying over their good boys & girls OD'ing because they wanted to fuck around with Mexicans for drugs and money. In case you're wondering why hospitals keep getting fucked budget-wise it's also because opiod babies cost 60K to monitor/take care of PER KID
>>142723047
man, i want more of something like thishttp://exhentai.org/g/722000/469462215d/
>>142728153
Are you sure we are talking about the same content here?
>>142728210
Don't be a gullible antisocial and a sex addict at the same time?
>>142714397
It's not that bad. She is now free from pain.
The last chapter was pretty retarded
>dude LOL beating a pregnant woman XD
What? It's not a bad plot point but it's from normal teenagers passing by, that's fucking retarded. Could've just used gang members or something
How retarded are you to follow a random stranger. But yeah, muh feelings, feel so sorry for her, etc.
>>142730502
>he doesnt do hobo-hunting as teenagers
>>142730502
Nips are terrible at drama and tragedy anyway so a nip porn artist shouldn't be held to any kind of standard concerning it.
>>142720437
You would have immunity if you had a huge cock though.
Bonus points if it looks like a cucumber too.
>>142730502
>it's from normal teenagers passing by
That's what makes it so sad. All she wanted to be was a normal teenager.
>>142720575
>...
Don't do that.
>>142732103
>tbqh fampai
Fuck off.
Reminder that she had every opportunity to say no and clean up her act. And it's 100% her fault that she ended up like that.
Quzilax and Shiruka Bakaudon vs ShindoL and Asanagi, who wins?
>>142732241
Loneliness doesn't just make you desperate, it makes you self destructive.
>>142722434
should have avoided the dude with the drugs in the first chapter and stuck with the rich older guy.
>>142708936
poor girl she only wanted to know whats being loved feels like
fuck ShindoL I only gonna give him a mere $50 bucks @patreon for his shit
>>142734132
Speaking from experience? Lol
>>142737147
Fuck off retarded phoneposter.
>>142713280
As someone who has read Oyster, this is somehow worse because I actually cared about the girl involved.
What good is my anger if I can change nothing with it?
>>142738087
So I was right. Pathetic creature.
Was this some weird japanese anti-drug propaganda?
>>142720517
It doesn't make you hallucinate in the "photoshop filter" way that psilocybin does but opiates have a side effect of giving the user incredibly vivid dreams that seem to be real. That's what she had.
>>142728660
Nah. We should just get rid of the mexicans and bring back manufacturing jobs, and the heroin will go away on its own.
Build the Wall.
>>142739798
Fuck off to /pol/ retard
>>142708936
The saddest boner ever but it happens to women all the time in real life.
>>142709471
Fuck, wear a condom because it's obvious diseased and then fuck, fuck
>>142739187
It's just some sick torture porn that sadists get off to.
>>142728210
As one anon summed it up:
Life's never so shit it can't get any worse.
>>142739716
This is a good thread
>>142708936
Nope
...so they killed her then?
Maybe this is just me but liking a sort of conclusion to the story, but that feels pretty fucking dumb.
So how'd she die? I guess that will show if it was somehow tasteful,or just an edgefest. Though I'm 99% sure what it will end up being.
>>142709203
>>142744673
You can just read it yourself.
what kind of "normal" teenagers kicks a pregnant woman in the stomach.
seriously, they killed that kid.
even for shindoll that was just fucked up.
>>142721581
Don't start questioning the logic of porn. There would be no sex at all if she did things like a normal, not mentally retarded girl.
>>142744981
Japs
>>142711944
Are you that dense? Oh wait, you have a trip on.
>>142708936
>>142744981
Just a normal day in Japan.
>>142708936
>first time seeing this girl
>thought i would have a great fap since she looks gorgeous
>read the entire thing
god damnit
>>142744757
Yes, I could, and you could go out, get a job, work hard, find a lover (or at least a friend), save your funds well, relocate to an occupation you enjoy, buy a big fancy house, start a family, and then retire and one day die content and comforted by the family you founded and by the knowledge you didn't waste your life shitposting on the internet, but you're not gonna do that, and I'm not gonna read this probably shitty doujin.
>>142745297
>>142708936
None of it was justified but she did decide to cheat on her boyfriend for literally no reason at all. Years later when they got back together she decided to do the same exact thing all over again, and wanted to fatty to impregnate her this time. I won't say it's justified but you reap what you sow and from the boyfriend's point of view she fucked him over badly, many times. I don't blame him for not caring about her anymore.
>>142744981
Asians have no souls
>>142708936
>Was it justified?
Nothing is justified. Justified. What on earth does that even mean? Is justice a material and objective thing in this world? No, those words are nothing but moral posturings, all nothing but techniques used by the powerless to collectivize their energies to chain the powerful few, and to use the efforts of the productive minority of our society to fulfill their own sick hedonistic desires. The masses are ingrates, a race of born parasites who steal from the virtuous few who have made this miserable shit ball of a planet worth living on. They constructed inefficient socialist systems of oppression to further enslave the powerful, and further steal from their superior strengths of innovation and creativity. And now what do we see? The eventual collapse of these socialist pyramid schemes seem to soon be upon us, and governments across the west are importing unintelligent savages to continue this dysgenic process that has led our species spiraling towards oblivion. Why should the masses be allowed any sort of power over the state when those dishonorable rats will always do nothing but use the power of the state to extort wealth from the noble few? No, I say it is the masses who should rightfully be oppressed, and it is the powerful minority who should be uplifted, as they are the only ones who drive the progression of the human animal. Any dissenter can enjoy getting killed, while the rest of us can enjoy having yet more worthlessness being cleansed from our collective genepool. We should rid ourselves of this mind decease called Democracy, and strive towards are Fascistic line of governmental thought. Force. That is what we need to create a world of worthiness. Ruthless and unfeeling force.
>>142720344
Only way to save her in ShindoL verse is if you caused her undue suffering, example: push her onto the path of Truck-kun so she becomes an amputee, and then he'll pair her with someone than isn't shit. Maybe.
>>142721328
>this is getting out of hands
I laughed.
>>142746066
>>142733679
Oyster
>>142708936
I always feel mildly sad after finishing fapping to this.
>>142728153
>tokyo ghoul
what are you talking about anon?
I saw it coming when she did drugs for the first time.
Stupid whore.
>>142744981
>expecting nips to come up with realistic porn scenarios
>>142708936
Saddest boner I've had in a while.
If you faggots actually get affected by this shit you all need to fucking grow a pair
>>142737147
Yes. And?
>>142746066
Yeah sure but you know what op meant
>>142744981
Look to the Second World War they have an interesting history in Japan
>>142746679
He's the final boss, doesn't count
This and the recent series by Fan no Hitori are so depressing.
It's amazing how a hentai can provoke a relatively civil discussion on /a/.
>>142708936
Why did she get that disgusting tan? Why do jap sluts think that shit looks attractive?
>>142745745
You do realise the old guy raped her, right?
>>142737147
>Lol
Shut up nigger.
>>142709145
ShindoL is great at vanilla though.
>>142752747
Why don't you self destruct? Scum.
>>142747754
Nothing to be nonchalant about. Pathetic.
>>142754266
How is it possible for someone to have never felt lonely? Have you not gone through adolescence?
>>142754432
Lonely enough to commit self destructive acts? Go ask a school shooter or something for that.
>>142739798
We should do that and stop doing drugs
>>142750972
Not sure why you would do the work to transform yourself like that when it really just makes someone ugly, at least in our eyes.
Was everyone actually that badly effected by this?
Concrete girl was so much more degenerate than this
>>142709471
Guys, it's okay! It was all part of an act
>>142754266
Not involved in this, and you're obviously just a shitposter, but when things are in the past, there's no real reason to make a big deal out of it. Also, self-destructive doesn't explicitly mean suicidal or something to that degree.
>>142755430
What is this?
Near the end, I praying that she would die. No more, just end her suffering.
>>142709019
You know, no animal deserves to be the prey of an other carnivorous animal, but when you see a deer taking a crap instead of running away from a puma, you can't help but think about how stupid the deer was.
Natural selection also applies for humans. The last bit was just bad luck, but there are worse "bad luck victimes" IRL.
>>142755430
>Right below the wedding figures
Why would you do that, Anon?
>>142753937
this, the amputee boss one was cute as fuck too
>>142755429
you knew for a fact what was coming in concrete girl
we didn't know how far the rabbit hole would take us in emergence
>>142756175
Yeah but concrete girl was a real person she actually went through all that shit
>>142756379
Its a shame wikipedia scrubbed that article. People really need to know just how bad it was.
>>142756379
>>142756460
Do I even wanna know...?
>>142756682
You don't.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Murder_of_Junko_Furuta
>>142756866
Not seeing what was so bad about it, that kind of shit happens all the time, what sets it apart?
>>142757143
The details of the torture are gone, but she really got it bad. The guys were insane.
And they got off lightly and even bragged about it.
>>142757143
Hence why I mentioned the article was scrubbed.
It was extremely, horribly brutal what was there before.
>>142757143
Pliers. Nipples. Tear.
and that was some of the less sadistic stuff.
>>142757143
https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Murder_of_Junko_Furuta&oldid=717101570
Guys, I can't find the english translated version of this on sadpanda
what do I do?
>>142757417
You let it go.
Trust me.
>>142757458
I like watching good girls get broken, though
Is there drugs involved?
I like seeing good girls getting fucked up on coke and heroin
>>142757143
>happens all the time
>girl gets tortured
>her nipples ripped off
>raped
>iron rod into her vagina
>forced to drink her own urine
>fed cockroaches
>dropped dumbbells onto her stomach
>burned her with cigarettes
>after one of the guys lost at mahjong they beat her with a barbell, poured lighter fluid on her legs arms and stomach and set her on fire
>she dies
>the put her in a 55 gallon drum filled with cement
>happens all the time
Nigger what shithole part of the world do you live in?
>>142757497
The OP is by ShindoL.
Concrete Girl is by humanity.
>>142757497
Mad that girl in HS turned you down because you were a fatass, ICP loving, sweeper pants wearing, social retard?
>>142757603
>Concrete Girl is by humanity
Sometimes humanity disappoints me.
>>142757648
>Sometimes humanity disappoints me
You haven't seen anything yet.
This is why 2D>3D.
>>142708936
Why should i care, it's not like it's the first time i read some tragedy story.
Did you really expected some happy ending, after the 1st chapter showed that it's not that kind of doujin?
Most of the tragedy in that doujin feels asspulled since it's just porn.
>>142757645I'm a qt girl though. I like watching good girls get fucked up because I get turned on by cute things being depraved.
I'm an actual good girl, though. I live through my lewd chinese cartoons.
>>142757648
Adult gif has plenty to disappoint you with
>that gif of ISIS slamming a rock on that guys head, watching the indention on his skull and seeing blood start gushing out his nose, mouth and eyes.
>his chest rising and falling so he's still drawing breath
What the fuck man.
>>142757751
Watch that edge Anon. We'll all think you're too hard here. Prisoners would get out the way is you walked by.
>>142757759
>>142757783
ISIS in general is the absolute worst scum of humanity. Good thing that we're importing them to the west by the boatload.
>>142757538
Yeaaaah...
Almost none of that was in the current article.
>>142757759
>I like watching good girls get fucked up because I get turned on by cute things being depraved.
>I'm an actual good girl, though
This is a death flag.
>>142757759
>>142757867
Hence why the scrubbed version is such a shame. Readers think "what's the big deal?" rather than "this is something that really happened."
>>142757867
Therefore >>142757228's post.
>>142757919
Citidation needed
>>142757867
>Yeaaah....
Nigger what are you doing?
>>142708936
What exactly would be justified.
>>142757959
Intelligence needed
>>142720609
same...
>>142708936
I don't know what can be justified over a tragedy porn story.
>>142745666
>>142745297
got the Hiroyuki one?
>>142721404
Agreed, and you can be pretty sure they won't get bored and stop reading halfway through like they would with the standard pamphlets.
posting best ShindoL
>>142758299
>>142745481
then why even ask about the ending.
why are you even here?
>>142708936
Every fucking time...
>>142758299
The purest love is that one between a girl and her dog.
>>142758299
The way women sucumb to lust like dirty animals in most of his doujins makes me suprised people get sad over Emergence following the same path.
>I love natto
A simple phrase has never made me so hard before.
I saw this doujin years ago. I thought it ended, it's still ongoing?
>>142725355
It was an attempt to kill herself, by overdosing.
>>142758877
Emergence? It's done.
Like a month ago.
>>142758958
>attempt
>>142757538
México
>That cowgirl doujin
>>142755146
You just answered my question.
I want to kill her dad.
All the bad choices she made did not justify dad raping his daughter. Drunk and newly unemployed is no excuse. Shit is just wrong.
Shiraishi doujin by ShindoL when?
>>142759961
Nah. Not everyone is as self loathing as some of you. Honest.
>>142761155
I was thinking of this.
Thank you for ruining for me the best girl of the season by getting me to read this, /a/.
Shiraishi didn't do DRUG and fuck guys on the first day like a turboslut, so she gets to enjoy a comfy listlessness.
It was just a story showing how easily one person can fuck up their life. It just had some hot sex scenes mixed in. I don't know why some people are genuinely bothered by what happened to her.
I think Shindol just wanted you to jerk off to it, while also taking in the harsh lesson it was giving.
Reminder this was based on a true story and happens everyday in nippon.
>>142763200
It happens everyday in every country in the world.
Ok, maybe not in Muslim countries. They can control their girls. But any "sexually liberated" country will have this kind of girl.
Anons harp about sluts and say are disgusting trash.
Here we have a slut degrading herself in everyway possible. "B-but she didn't mean it" well faggot, her actions led to it all.
So stop being flip floppers and either hate sluts or love them.
>>142762815
Just relax and listen to >>142762875
>>142763503
>Anons are all the same anon
>No dissenting opinions
>>142763459
>not in Muslim countries
you would be surprised. They're exist but in different form and thats not because of the girls bad choice
>>142711944
she was in heaven with her unborn child ;_;
>>142709471
fuck, KILL, Marry.
>>142763955
fuck middle
kill right
marry left
i had to be drunk to read this
i hate this so much, she had a tight body id love to fuck the shit out of so i jerked off but i dont want her hurt or ostracized
i wanted to help her so bad but i knew there was no help for her at the end, i felt so bad
i wish shindol would create a happy ending for her
