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Okay /a/, you just been put in charge of Battle Harem No. 1828534286

What twist do you add to it to make it good?

I'll start. The main girl is also the main antagonist
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>>140363014
I am the protagonist
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Multiple male characters, each with their own harem
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>>140363014
the battles are all over muh dick.
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generic self-insert MC becomes a qt fuccboi that gets bullied into crossdressing in every episode
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First scene is the MC falling over and grabbing her own breasts, then going 'kyaaa' and slapping herself
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A boy falls in love with a girl, he is unable to confess to her because every girl around him tries to get him.
MC-kun fights the girl to acquire his crush.
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>>140363014
Only the MC directly interacts with or acknowledges the haremettes and it's ambiguous whether it's magic or the MC is a schizophrenic.
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Losers of battle actually die via a curse/law similar to AGK's Teigu VS Teigu must result in a death.

Thus, pacifist beta MC looks for creative ways to suspend, draw, stalemate, annul deathmatches.
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The battle harem are all shotas and the main protagonist is a shota loving high school girl.
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>>140363014
Mc has 7 sisters.
Each based on the 7 sins.
His mother is also his sister and wife.
One of his sisters is his cousin, one of his sisters is a lesbian, one of his sisters is a slut, one of his sisters is a kleptomaniac, one of his sisters is the manager of the idol group that all of his sisters are in, and one of his sisters is retarded.
One day a meteor hits the earth bringing with it a strange virus that sometimes gives people super powers.
So that happens and then mc has to fight his sisters and shit, and his school, and his dad who was also his brother.
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>>140363205
Wasn't that more of a correspondence? Like "yeah, usually when two face off it was a fight to the death anyway, teigu or not"
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Best girl win, for once.
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>>140363014
>The main girl is also the main antagonist

This actually hasn't been done before?
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>>140363350
How the fuck can both of his parents also be his siblings. I get one but the insane family tree entanglement is confusing me here
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>>140363014
>battle harem
>good
Impossible.
I go full edge and have MC kill the redheaded fire/sword using tsundere in the duel they have after he sees her naked.
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>>140363414
Surprisingly, I don't think so. Weird, considering it seems like such an obvious one
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>>140363416
step parents maybe?
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>>140363451

Yeah, and it's not that bad of a twist
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>>140363416
Because his mom also gave birth to his dad and the dad of the moms mom was the dads dad.

>>140363483
Nope they're all blood related.
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>>140363014
It actually ends with a harem, and the MC has an actual character and good chemistry with all the haremettes.
I'm bringing Tenchi back
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The MC and his harem aren't together because they want to, they actually can't stand each other at first but as the circumstances force them to collaborate they slowly open up to each other. A few people die.
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>>140363205
That is like a thing that Battle Harem MCs already do since they don't kill.
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>>140363414
Didn't Kampfer came close to that?
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>>140363723
Yeah, except she wasn't really the main girl.
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>>140363014
Female MC
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>>140363014
The battle system is set up so that the losers are all sold into slavery, and MC's harem is formed because he buys every loli who's being sold and adopts them to save them from becoming old men's fucktoys.
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>>140363761
That's already been done though hasn't it?
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girls get naked all the time. maybe one of them has to get naked to fight for some contrived reason.
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>>140363014
Each harem member dies.
A harem doesn't have to be physical, therefore it can be spiritual or even mental.
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Every member of the harem has equal development. There is no main or key girl.
Who is going to win the MC is a complete mystery.
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>>140363831
>What is Nisekoi?
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>>140363853
I think he wants one that's actually good though.
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>>140363853
Is this what non-Chitogefags told themselves to stay sane?
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>>140363827
What.
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The main girl is a cake.

AOTS.
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>valkyrie mermaid but with a competent MC
>has an enemy rival that also has a harem
>final battle is just a massive orgy
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>>140363014
>MC is a cool guy
>Harem are a bunch of chill girls who aren't one-note moe characters
>Go on some exciting fantasy adventure, part wacky, part serious. End up being a key part of saving a kingdom
>the girls fall for the protag at one point, but never at the same time as some fall out of their crushes for various reasons.
>MC only romance 1-2 of them and wasn't a virgin
>Not all of them are virgins
>None of them end with the MC as he married to someone else who is not an official member of the harem but there is an arc that show some potential in her and she is not either the first or last girl or the princess of the kingdom, known or secret.
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>>140363793
Lesbian battle harem, wut? I only remember that one edgy manga, but even then I haven't read it yet, so I'm not sure if it's a harem.
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>>140363831
You mean TWOGK?
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>>140363896
Isn't that Onegai Teacher?
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>>140363014
>The main girl is also the main antagonist
This sounds like something that's already been done before. If not an anime, I'm sure there's an untranslated manga/LN/VN with this.
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>>140363919
If you mean shitsurakuen that was shit.
I meant mikagura gakuen.
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>>140363957
Everything sounds like it's been done, until you realize you have no example of it and it feels bad to bring it up.
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>>140363909
This isn't even a harem, anon, this is just MC having sequential romances and also a bunch of shitty cliche-defying twists that serve no purpose but defying cliches just because.
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>>140363014
>reverse harem
>MC is a slutty loli
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The MC dies at the end of every episode. Every new episode has a new MC. The world resets and everything stays the same except the MC. How the new MC plays out events is different each time. Each MC is not aware of the past MC. Each on is not connected. No one in the world knows there is a new MC or old MC. Eventually, one of the MC either defeats or woos the antagonist main girl in one episode. Maybe the first episode or last. Whatever.
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>>140363014
Girls are all delinquent-types and they bully the mc. MC is strong and keeps winning in the battle setting, resulting in intensified bullying outside of battle as the girls get pissed.
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>>140363014
In his last year of Senior High School, MC meets 7 girls.

With each of them he spends some time, taking them on a date, and getting a single kiss on the lips. Then they reveal a dark secret about their past and MC and the girl travel into a dream world to confront someone who hurt the girl in their past.

In each fight, when the last blow is struck, the girl is fatally wounded and their bodies turn to dust and fall away in the MC's hands as he is ripped out of the dream.

After MC loses each girl, he gains a power from them corresponding to a body part: a healing hand, a flash-stepping leg, an indomitable heart.

After the 7th girl (who is obviously also the indisputable best girl) is lost, MC travels into his own dreams to find what hurt him in the past. He finds himself rushing to save his younger self as well as- astonishingly- the 7 girls from a fatal traffic collision and failing repeatedly. He finally manages it by using each of the girls' powers in tandem, but sacrifices himself in order to do so.

As he begins to fade away, each girl comes to him and reinforces their bond by giving him a piece of them again.

The twist is that they all died in that accident at the end of senior year and had their body parts transplanted to save MC. Like Psycho Pass 2 or 7 years from now.

Last scene after credits is MC's hand twitching on the hosptital bed, him waking up with the sun through the window, and smiling.

I'm sure it would piss a lot of people off.
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>>140363014
The harem are his weapons.
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>>140363994
>regular harem
>MC is a slutty loli
>no boys allow
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>>140363982
Better than the typical shit. Still a harem if multiple girls are in love with the guy. Just not all of them because that shit is always annoying.
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>>140364030
T-that's unique.
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>>140364042
>they don't even turn into girls, they're just inanimate objects that he prescribes names and personalities to each of his wepons
>axe-chan a best
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>>140364043
I like you anon
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>>140364030
Shit like this is the reason authors default to generic plots instead of trying to be original.
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>>140363084
Underrated post
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>>140363014
It's like Yugioh but with harems.
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>>140364058
But if they're never in love at the same time then he never has a harem.
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>>140364030
So does he look like a trap now or something?
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>>140364129
Of course.
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>>140363932
This
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>>140364129
>tfw combination of all the girls makes him best girl
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>>140364129
That's exactly what I thought after reading that post.
>tfw you'll never have cute soft girly hands and legs transplanted onto you
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>>140364042

>what is seirei tsukai no blade dance restia?
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>>140364123
Then Love Hina was never a harem then?
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>>140364016
PLOT TWiST:
Past MCs appear as backgroundcharacters.
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>>140363014
The monsters they have to fight are actually girls who have lost.
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>>140364182
I like.
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>>140364016
Nah, they have to have battle royale with the winner being voted on a poll by the Japanese otakus.
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>>140363014
The childhood memories between the protagonist and the heroines are all falsified by the main antagonist and the childhood friend they have been trying to save the entire time never existed in the first place.
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>harem with a non dense harem MC
>he's already in a relationship with all of them
>the twist is that they don't know each other, so he has to keep them happy and go on dates with them while at the same time trying to hide his secret from the girls that he's cheating on each of the girls
>Hijinks ensues

This would never happen, Japs are too beta to make that kind of anime.
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>>140364169
He still has multiple people in love with him even at the very end, what are you talking about?
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>>140363014
Male MC with a bisexual harem and all of them have an actual chance.

Endgame is the gap moe male gym teacher
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>>140364218
>>140364226
Are you guys purposely listing the plots of actual eroge?
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>>140364226
>After they all find out they plot to kill mc and bury his body in the woods
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>>140364226
NICE BOAT
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>>140364226
>>140364259
So School Days?
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>>140364252
We need more sleazy scumbags but with a heart of gold MCs in regular non-hentai anime.
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>>140363014
The MC is a mental institution patient

Or the classic "it's all a dream"
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All-girls battle academy. Group of 5 girls live in a dorm together with their pet dog. One day the dog magically transforms into a cute boy and the girls all fall for him. Then it goes into standard battle LN subplot as the girls teach him how to fight. Although the MC is kind of able to fight, all he does throughout the series is nonstop barking and has no clue what's going on or that he's even human
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>>140363853
Not a battle harem, to start with
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>>140363932
thats not a battle harem you fucking retard
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>>140364288
Yes, but mc is better because he knocks them all up. All of them. And then they all abort the babies in the woods together before they bury him and bury them with him.
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>>140364226
Pretty sure there's an eroge that does exactly this and the story starts by the heroines finding out.
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>>140364304
I USED TO READ WORD UP MAGAZINE
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The MC is a former child soldier that wants to try living a normal life, so he goes to a small school where the only other students are all girls and have fucked up pasts. There's a slutty onee-chan, blonde twintailed tsundere, a loli, a kuudere, and secret childhood friend.
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Just do what Konosuba did, and make the MC hate his harem.
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>>140364324
>my twist is that it's school days except more than one person gets pregnant
Rejected.
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>>140364353
>fucked up pasts
that implies they're all impure. Sounds good but it won't sell.
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>>140364240
But not all of them, anon (Kaolla Su, Mitsune arguably Mutsumi were not in love with Keitarou at the end). Negima and Ai Kora did the same shit (even though a true harem end would really benefit from it) and included the girls within the harem even if they never really develop substantial romantic feelings for the MC. It's really only recently that all harems have all the girls fall for the MC at the same time at the end.
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>>140363014
split personality, one side is innocent, naive and was happy living in her village, the other side is orchestrating literally everything bad going on, just there are major factions causing mass destruction for different reasons and its all cause of the antagonistic MC.
both sides look entirely different, such as hair color and eye color. there are hints all over the series like the first time you see the MC's room you see some slightly jarring things in shelves in the background like skulls and the like, or the fact that at times it will be lightly brought up that from time to time the MC can't remember months at a time, but don't make it obvious. like certain episodes seem like there was month long time skip training arcs but the MC can't remember how she got stronger at all.
the reveal would be a last 5 minutes of the last episode thing where the MC flips in her party right at what should be the final boss fight and they get backstabbed and murdered brutally.

also the big bad is eloquent as shit always breaking out into soliloquy when it comes to it.
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>>140364353
>he's dense from being a child soldier so mistakes their affection as something dangerous and tries to kill the girls on more than one occasion
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>>140364377
Not him, but then why did Grisaia sell?
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>>140364377
Oh don't worry, they're still pure. One was surrounded by cannibals, another mom issues, another dad issues, another split personalities, and the other saw her oarents get hit by a Japanese truck
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MC gets kidnapped and forced into a harem of sheltered rich girls who have never seen a penis before
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>>140364226
School Days did this. Shit like this never ends well.
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>>140364376
Ok, his harem is also his mom and sisters.
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>>140364353

Are you trying to spot newfags with this?
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>>140364310
>Although the MC is kind of able to fight, all he does throughout the series is nonstop barking and has no clue what's going on or that he's even human
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>MC is actually gay
>it isn't revealed until the final episode
>no one wins
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>>140364452
I want to see this happen so bad.
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>>140364376
There is literally an ending in School Days VN with this premise.
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>>140364423
Truck san strikes again
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>>140364469
FUCK IT, they're all aliens
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Japanese Truck-kun is the MC.
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>>140364310
Aquarion
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>>140364442
Maybe
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>>140364480
Have we ever had one where they're all ayys except for the MC?
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>>140363014
MC is a truck and each girl's arc ends when he does a hit and run on them.
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>MC is a literal robot that doesn't understand human affection
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>all the harem girls are traps
>MC is a reverse trap
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>>140363014
Just make a adaptation of Kimi to Boku to no Kishi no Hibi -Rakuen no Chevalier-
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>>140364511
UFO Ultramaiden Valkyrie?
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>>140364353
Something tells me the kuudere is best girl.
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>>140364511
There was this one hentai ova from the early 2000's about that situation.
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>>140364525
>They all turn out to be gay at the end
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>>140363014
All the girls actually doesn't love him and only uses him for their own political purpose, because MC is supposedly a reincarnation of Ancient King, or something like that. It will be tragic for MC, upon knowing it, as he sincerely loves them. The downfall of MC's empire will happen because the harem become greedy and fights each other, devastating the realm, and it causes the suffering of the common people. A revolution happens, and they ban polygamy forever. Afterwards the new monogamous republic prospers forever.
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>>140364560
I'd only greenlight this if this takes place in ancient Rome.
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>>140364560
the problem is all this will do is cause everyone watching to break out into sheer frothing rage the whole damn time.
this will be popular, but popular in the same way nisekoi, completely irredeemably shit because all the girls suck and you just want to watch it all burn.
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>>140363014

What the fuck is with all these terrible ideas. It's just more bad battle harem plots.

Heres a real challenge:
>No Fanservice.
>Every relationship is platonic.
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>>140363014
MC has multiple personalities and the main girl is famous prodigy fifteen-year-old psychiatrist, etc. who decides because of some bullshit that the proper counseling method involves her talking to his different personalities and then acting out their roles for the MC himself so that he can communicate with them and heal the rift in his mind or whatever the fuck. The problem is that some of those personalities develop crushes on the MC, and some develop crushes on the main girl, and hijinks ensue, including but not limited to hostile body take-overs and suspicions about how truthful main girl is in communicating the other personalities' messages, etc.
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>>140364695
Boring
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>>140363350
>>140364695

He doesn't sexualize his sisters.
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>>140364708
fairly certain theres a mango about this exact thing.
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>>140364695
>complains about bad ideas
>his idea is just shit that makes it harder to do without any actual suggestions for improving quality
You're a retard.
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>>140364588
Late antiquity or I quit, boss.
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>>140364695
are you gay?
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>>140364731
You better not be lying, because I'm going to waste an hour or so looking for it before I give up if you are.
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>>140364734
You drive a hard bargain but it's a deal.
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>>140363512
Can you Ms paint this shit? My mind is blown apart at this point
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One shota and his harem. Versus 6 other harems. The MC's girls don't actually love him, he just has a brainwashing power.

Though I guess that would make him a villain. Hmm
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>>140363512
This is some RahXephon-tier shit.
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>>140364763
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The MC has an ability to travel to other dimensions. However, these dimensions are like alternate realities that only slightly differ from the main one that the mc is from. But in order to return to his dimension, he has to destroy the one he by fulfilling certain conditions. It turns out the existence of these dimensions is threatening all of existence, so the MC has to destroy them. Before the events of story, the mc's harem and loved ones passed away, so he keeps finding himself in dimensions where these people didn't die, and they help him accomplish his tasks in that dimension, not knowing he isn't the mc they know, or of their dimension's impending destruction. In the final dimension he finds a key that allows to bring matter back from a dimension, so long as he is in contact with it. It also happens to be one that takes place in the relative past, the night before the main girls death. Not sure whether to end it with him successfully saving her and bring her back, or with the condition being she must die.
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The main character crossdresses the entire series and everyone thinks that he's a girl.
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>>140364731
>>140364755
Actually, it turns out there are very few manga with multiple personality tags, and none of them seem to be that. You aren't talking about Gun x Clover, are you? Because that's totally different, that's the love interest having multiple personalities, and she's not even the main focus for a while now because the magazine probably told the author that wasn't working as a draw.
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>MC has the power to reverse time
>prevents shitty harem cliches one step at a time
>the universe still finds absurd ways to try to make his life cliche as possible because he is cured
>breaks down the meta to the point where the MC has a conversation with both his mangaka/anime studio director, at the end of the series
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All of the harem members are actually from the future. They're sent back to kill MC because he eventually becomes a tyrant or the next Hitler or some shit. Catch is, only the girl who kills MC is allowed to return to the time they came from. Hijinks ensue as each girl tries to assassinate MC while simultaneously stopping the other girls from killing him themselves. Meanwhile oblivious MC thinks they're all falling for him.
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MC is secretly gay but is extremely insecure over and hates himself for it, viewing it as a letdown to his prestigeous lineage. The series starts with his childhood friend, who is secretly in love with him, finding out.

Shortly after his (rich) father comes down with a severe illness, and starts pushing HARD for MC to marry before he dies to secure the family legacy. MC agrees because he's terrified of being disinherited, and the childhood friend agrees to help him out.

The girls in the harem suitors picked out by the rest of his family, not a single one of them actually has feelings for him until at least halfway through the series - but they're all fairly likeable, and are at least courteous with him beforehand.

Hijinks ensue as he tries to indefinitely delay marrying them. A rival guy is introduced, who is interested in acquiring the MC's family fortune by buying out the company - and once he discovers his homosexuality, he becomes a constant thorn in his side who tries to drag him out of the closet so his father will sell to him. Even if it means having to seduce the MC himself.

Ending has him proposing to CF, but when he visits his old man for the last time he breaks down and confesses the truth right as he dies.

He wakes right up and it turns out he was never sick. The CF told him about MC right away and browbeat him for making his son think he'd not love him if he was gay, and everything since then has just been an attempt to get the MC to come out and admit to everyone and himself that he's gay.

His father loves and will support him, his childhood friend is over her crush, and the other girls were all actors. The rival dude was the only one not in the know.

The ending has a whole new all-male harem of suitors introduced, with everyone trying to get the MC to hook up with them now. The rival is part of the new group, and is revealed to actually be bisexual and a gap moe tsundere for MC now.
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>>140364868
This post was so gay I have second hand gay poisoning now
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>>140363014
Final boss is Marche
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>>140364863
isn't this bludgeoning dokuro-chan, basically?
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>>140364894
I can give you an injection with my dick to help with that.
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>cutest harem girl is actually a crossdressing boy
>the trap wins the harembowl
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>>140363451
>>140363485
>>140363723
>>140363957
>>140363978

you all are fucking casuals holy shit
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>>140364949
I could've sworn I saw this plot somewhere.
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>>140364766
Yes, I also forgot to mention his sisters are also all his daughters.
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>>140364974
Are you implying that was a harem?
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>>140364974
>DW
>battle harem
>Shiro
>main antagonist
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>>140363966
I don't remember Mikagura Gakuen being a harem. I liked that show though.
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>>140364974
No, you're just a retard.
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>>140365054
Holy shit, Replacing 'academy' or 'video game world' with prison doesn't change the fact that he had multiple women and a men after his dick

They even had fucking powers you retards. Clever as it was, it was still a battle harem.
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>>140364766
Sorry, anon.
Forgot to show how mc was his sister wife mother.
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>>140364310
Unsurprisingly in terms of character device, it's not all that different than the usual generic MC.
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>>140363350
based off greek mythology?
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MC understands all the girls want his dick and only not picks one girl because he tries to get every girl to be his GF
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>>140364452
The shitstorm would be as amusing as Haganai.
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Every girl died in the end but the protag is actually happy about it because he is sick of his harem situation. He then goes to defeat the final boss and the series ended with the protag sitting on the bench with a very big smile on his face, knowing that he can finally live a happy quiet life.
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>>140365155
Also forgot the picture.
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>>140365137
>clever as it was
What?

> he had multiple women and a men after his dick
What, Shiro, hedgehog girl's three panels of romantic hints right before she was turned, and a comic relief crossdresser that you're counting as a love interest?

And once again,
>Shiro
>main antagonist
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Full Penetration.
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>>140364452
Could you imagine if this was how Oregairu ended? It'd be fucking hilarious
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>>140365253
How would that improve the series?
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>>140365137
>>140364974
>five years later and DWfags are still cancerous idiots who can't type properly
It's like they literally don't mature at all.
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>>140363014
>plot of deadman wonderland
>twist
the longer you try and make it a surprise the more obvious it is that the main person the MC wants to kill is the one we perceive as main girl.

>>140365016
are you implying more than 3 people didn't want him to inseminate them? They even had the typical harem hijinks with tongue girl.

>>140365025
>implying

>>140365244

egg was always painted as the endboss

thats what OP is talking about

"main girl/ childhood friend/ love interest! We have to beat X that killed my friends/family/important people" but main girl was that person
>>140365301
fak off m8
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>>140365367
Egg was not the big bad, and that much was apparent well before the end.

>fak off m8
Kill yourself.
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Sword wielding MC attends battle academy where everyone thinks he's super weak because the schools ranking system is flawed. Twist is MC is super bad ass and OP and everyone is surprised by how fast he is.
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>>140365367
>fak off m8
Have you ever actually read or watched full smut harems? They don't magically get better because there's sex. At best it's an irrelevancy that gets celebrated by idiots literally just because it's different, and at worst it gets used for even more retarded drama.
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>>140363014
>Historical
>Realistic art style
>Gore ala Shigurui
>MC is a Ninja, so are the haremettes and they fight and kill each other for the amusement of the Shogun
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>>140363014
>MC is transported to alternate dimension 16th or 17th century Protestant England
>because of REASONS he is adopted by the main girl, who is the reigning monarch (who, predictably, is a young girl)
>she actually begins to call him onii-chan
>other girls include the duchess of York who is the best friend to the queen, the queen of Scotland, the Catholic queen of Spain, and so forth
The twist is that, aside from the fact that these important figures are all girls, they actually take the situation they live in very seriously.

>"Wait, you're going to raise taxes on the Church? Won't that anger them?"
>"I WAS APPOINTED BY GOD, NOT THE CHURCH, ONII-CHAN. MY POWER IS DIVINE."
>(MC is taken aback by this unquestionably confident assertion of divine right)
>"Besides, the funds will used towards fighting those perfidious French Catholics."
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>>140363014
In this particular universe, high school is for retired senior citizens and they have tournaments for disabled people.

The main character sees the wheelchair-bound red-haired tsundere main heroine naked while taking a bath, and ends up getting forced to join their team for the... whatever team battle competition they'll be joining.
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>>140365446
>>140365391
You just don't get it.

We show it. We show all of it. Because what’s the one major thing missing from all battle harems these days guys?Full penetration.

Guys, we’re gonna show full penetration, and we’re gonna show a lot of it! I mean, we’re talking, you know, graphic scenes of MC really going to town on his hot young lab partner. From behind, 69, anal, vaginal, cowgirl, reverse cowgirl, all the hits, all the big ones, all the good ones.

Then he smells crime again. He’s out busting heads. Then he’s back to the lab for some more full penetration. Smells crime, back to the lab, full penetration. Crime, penetration, crime, full penetration, crime, penetration. And this goes on and on, and back and forth, for 12 or so episodes until the series just, sort of, ends.
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>>140365687
So you've made a hentai. What a stroke of genius.
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>>140363057
index
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Isn't this Air Gear?
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>>140365742
No, Ringo wasn't the main antagonist. She was just a shitty person.
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>>140365742
was supposed to be a reply to
>>140365687
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>>140365404
Literally Rakudai.
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>>140364486
>everyone he falls in love with somehow end up under his wheels
>vows to never fall in love again to prevent his heart broken
>pushes away all the girls who magically want his dick
>new girl comes in school
>he falls in love
>whole story is about him trying to save her
>he allows the other harem girls to come close just so they might be able to catch the bullet and buy more time for his true love
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>>140363014
Promoting the project from anime to pachinko.
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>>140365820
the problem isn't that he's super OP in Rakudai, everyones simply retarded and can't hold out a minute because hurr durr frontal attacks.
the invisibility guy literally wrecked his shit completely and utterly and the MC only won that fight because of the guy being retarded and asspulls.
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They're all yandere. In addition to fighting their common enemies, they're also killing each other.
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>>140363014
It's a psychological horror which takes place in a universe where cute girls with different supernatural abilities have to constantly battle and eat each other's souls to survive. Souls of the dead girls look like glass marbles and there is a trade market for them, and the more powerful the girl gets, the more she has to consume. The girls are born from weird tree-like constructs and usually live and travel the world in groups, to fend themselves from predators (grotesque monsters who are also after their souls) and other girls. The world they live in is deserted and filled with thev remains of old civilisation which is clearly not their own; it's always nighttime, and there is a giant eyeball in the sky, referred to as "God". The story follows the MC after she is born, joins a group who becomes her harem, fights for her life, learns how to kill and how to eat others, uncovers some truths about the world they all live in and slowly succumbs to insanity every girl faces as they implant more and more foreign souls into their bodies.
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>all girls school
>harem is all girls
>MC is girl
>it's a yuri anime
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>>140365760
Can confirm
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>>140363014
>Set in POST APOCALYPTIC NIPPON
>MC-KUN is granted a special power, however the only way to draw out this power is by making a blood sacrifice to the Blood god of japan.
>He can only sacrafice his closest friends, which are all female.
>Every episode he gains more power with each sacrafice while his harem grows smaller.
> Finally he sacrafices his main love interest in the last episode and goes to confront the blood god.
>The blood god was his step sister that died in a car accident.
>s2 when?
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The harem girls are his weapons.
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>>140369358
Sekirei or alternatively Valkyrie Drive.
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>>140364766
>>140363416
>>140363350
so, Predestination?
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>MC
>harem of 10 girls
>all the girls are highly trained special ops solders.
>survival manga
>set on Isla Nublar
>main antagonist is one of Hammond's dark secrets.
>velociraptor Girl.
>smarter and stronger than "The Big One" the alpha raptor from the first Movie.
>MC falls for the Raptor Girl.
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>What twist do you add to it to make it good?
Fantasy piece with unusual character designs and taboo themes: Traps, incest, interracial, etc. No normal waifus at all.

I guess the twist is that I'm conservative and would do anti-progressive characters and storylines. Mighty Whitey, basically.

The mad would fill the skies. The comic would be so triggering to the leftists that many would die of their own mad. (Un-?)Fortunately, I'm no good at comics.
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>battle harem
>cake wins
>their sons will marry the other girls in the future
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It's a LN told in first person. Characters keep mysteriously dying over the course of the series, and the plot twist is that the MC was the murderer all along, and has been purposefully lying in his narrations

Has that been done before?
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>>140363014
>reverse harem
>mc is a trap
>harem finds out
>they leave him for actual girls
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>>140370276
it's shit
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The main character is some random normal guy in the same class as the chosen hero and the plot revolves around his daily life with all the huge battles and shit going on in the background.
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>MC is actually gay
>wants to fuck his best friend who is jealous of him for having so many girls want him
>most girls in his harem do not realize this
>one or two think they can turn him straight
>they ruin his attempts at getting close to his friends
>drama ensues as MC begins to question the nature of faggotry
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>>140363350
>7 sins
Trinity Seven
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>>140370364
But of course.
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>>140363014
Make it a bottle harem instead of a battle harem
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>MC was originally a girl who got turned into a guy for some mysterious reason
>sent into a place/world where no one knows her so she cant prove that she was a girl
>thanks to being a girl originally, knows exactly how to treat girls properly, which causes them to fall for her
>there are periods of time where she turns back into a girl which leads to her getting some guys in her harem
>isnt particularly interested in guys/sees them as just bros
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Almost all of these fucking suck and are just contrarian. It's a wonder how most of you can do worse than the people you compain about.
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>>140363014
Make it a battle reverse-harem.
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>>140364425
Shomin sample.
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The Mc is actually an Arabian prince so they all become his wives and then fight for the position of first wife.
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>>140370276
Not actually a reverse harem if MC is a guy.
>>140363994
Lolifag, please.
>>140371330
And then what?

>MC is a girl going to an all-boys school that's allowing girls in starting this year.
>It's a battle school.
>Battle uniform is like those in sports anime like Basugay, Haikyuu, or All Out!! where guys are in shorts and showing off their thighs.
>She tries to organize her harem into a team so they can rule the school. Her harem consists of:
>Childhood friend who grew really tall and rowdy
>Intense and stoic delinquent that has a soft spot for MC
>Lazy blond pervert
>Her main enemy is a guy that looks like Sephiroth in glasses who has his own battle team made up of girls.
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The MC is a normal and boring guy whose family runs a fishmonger's. Girls don't like him, because he alsways smells like fish. One day the comes across a stumbles over a cat on his way to school. He apologizes to the cat an gives it sime fish. The cat starts to follow him everywhere. Over the couse of the story more and more cats come to live at his house. They fight for the best fish, who gets to sleep on MC's bed etc.
Suddenly a girl shows up who actually interested in MC. When she visits his home her whole face swells up, because of her cat hair allergy. She never talks to MC again, because he never mentioned any cats.
The epilogue shows MC 20 years later. He has taken over his family's business and lives happily with his cat harem and has become the male version of a crazy cat lady.
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>>140372220
>plot twist: her harem and his harem fall in love with each other
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>>140371400
I like it
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>>140372220
You should add a girl to her harem that has Yuri feelings for MC.
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>>140363014
MC knows that the girls like him but it's hard for him to choose because all girls are best girl.
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>>140363014
Played straight in every way except for genderbent.
Meaning obligatory
>kyaa ecchi
>boy falling from the sky to give super powers to mc
>girls all have "cool" edgy armor with no fanservice, meanwhile onsen scenes ahoy
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>>140372220
Sephiroth's harem is all made up of damaged goods.
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>>140363014
Every girl wants MC's dick but all his bros want the girls that have fallen for MC. So he spends 10 episodes being the best wingman. Humor and battle ensues. At the end of the season he's still single becomes the most hated yet missed person.
we'll call it a biography of moot
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>>140373084
>bros
Now anon, you know that a battle harem MC doesn't have any friends that are guys unless they want his D.
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>>140373119
The bros were gay for MC but he sets them straight and hooks them up. The power of cuck is strong.
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The anime starts with the end of a Harem series, MC finally picks the girl he likes the most and they are living a fulfilling high school life dating.
Transfer student is a slutty trap who is trying to steal the MC from the girl.
Trap wins.
Cucking ensues.
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>>140363014
Niseharem
It's all a fake harem when the winner was decided from the beginning.
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>>140365573
>Queen of Scotland ends up being best girl,
>the Catholic queen of Spain is a huge Tsundere.
>King of France is a huge bro to the MC and pushes him towards the girls in the harem.

This is golden.
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>>140365573
Would watch
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>>140374274
Is that a shot at Nisekoi or Nisemonogatari? I am legitimately curious.
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Mc is gay but a trillion girl want his dick
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>>140374767
Don't know about trillion girls but there actually was a oneshot about that.
Didn't get serialized
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A young MC-kun gets a letter in the mail telling him his grandmother has died and he has inheritred ownership of an all girls private highschool AND he has to start working as the headmaster immediately following his grandmas wishes.

It turns out the academy was actually a secret magical academy and MC was part of a line of wizards. (except he hasnt developed his powers yet) and that his oba san was one of the most powerful witches of all.

Sometjing Something competition for his hand in marriage, ultra high breed magic semen, families riches, headmaster role, etc.

Harem includes senseis and grandma is still alive but used reincarnation magic to turn herself into a highschool girl because she has been in love with her own grandson! but it turns out her magical prowress didnt follow her after reincarnation...

plot twist the manga is actually about the grandma building a yuri harem by accident as she pursues shota incest
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>>140375678
This almost seems good.
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>>140363014
Everyone Including the reverse trapping MC is a futanari.
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>>140370196
That wouldn't give the reader a fair chance to figure it out though, unless the writing is exceptional, which let's be honest, most LN writers are hacks
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>>140363014
Make it about how hard it is to manage a harem.
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Every girl has a unique and disgusting fetish
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>>140377158
Already done
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