I'm a tard guy who draws manga and I wanna make my own manga. But my character design is retarded. Or looks too much like an existing character.
Pic is the MC. Haze Nimowara.
It's a fighting manga. Think DBZ and Naruto combined. Except a lot cooler.
Yes, the character's mouth looks retarded.
Nah
"Nah" as in "OP, don't do this to yourself" or "Nah" as in "it's not that bad"?
You have my interest.
Where do I keep up with you?
>>>/deviantart/
keep practicing familia. you could try different styles, experiment with different techniques, develop a style that you're comfortable with.u can d0 it. the best of luck to you an0n.
>>137219526
Fuck off.
>>137219526
end yourself faggot
>>137219526
Kill yourself.
Not bad, desu. There's a lot of technique there, a lot of potential that I can see in your work. I'm not a bad artist myself, but I only draw hentai manga.
I'd really recommend you buy yourself a decent tablet, Cintiqs are a good brand, typically expensive but you can get one for the $20-$30 range on Craigslist.
Make sure you create a Deviantart and keep spreading the word. Work on your lineart and anatomy and make sure to bookmark a site like xnxx when practicing your hentaii.
Best of luck to you.
>>137221670
btw is this seinen or shonen?
>>137219526
I am intrigued, OP.
what are MC's genitals, and does he/she have any special genital based powers?
if not, you should strongly consider it.
>>137222207
>Cintiqs are a good brand, typically expensive but you can get one for the $20-$30 range on Craigslist.
Is this for real?
>>137222207
Holy fuck, I believe you. This post is art in the making. I can't even fathom how many layers of irony you're on right now. Take me as your disciple.
>>137219526
Oh fuck, here comes the new reaction image. Don't drown the thread OP. Keep samefagging.
>>137219526
Here OP, what do you think? I think he looks cool. Especially if you named him THE MIND JACK.
>This is /a/ in 2016
>>137219526
>>137226244
Fuck off m8. OP trying to create something productive, unlike you.
Anyway, here's OP. Another character.
>>137226244
Correction, neo-/a/.
>>137226244
Yeah, chill out man, this is seriously good stuff. Shit, this guy might be, like, the next Hirohiko Araki.
>>137219526
>>137226277
>>137226233
What do you think of this, guys? I improved Op's design
>>137227728
Coming from me who made
>>137226233
>>137226277
Yours is the best so far.
>>137227728
I like it.
>>137220221
"Nah" as in the answer to the question "Does OP have any reason not to kill himself immediately?"
>>137226233
>>137226277
I'm very disappointed that you didn't make adubsversion.
>>137227851
"check it"
What should be his catchphrase from now on, btw, kids love cool slogans
>>137228047
you better check these dubs before i wreck these scrubs
>>137228047
Saved senpai
>>137219526
Stop while you're ahead
>>137219526
>Nimowara.
That's not a name you retarded weeb.
Don't worry Op, I believe in you.
>>137229243
It probably can be if you combine kanji with the right readings, and considering there are Japanese people who literally make up their own readings for kanji in their child's name, fictional names should be pretty much unlimited...
>>137222884
Obviously not. Cintiqs are the most expensive shit in the market.
>>137231117
Maybe he meant drawing tab?
please accept my fanart
>>137231918
better than OP
>>137231918
Kinda nice.
>>137219526
>>137231918
I also did some fanart, Niwamori is a really cool character when you think about it.
>>137219526
Nimowara was better when he was still called Sonic and went really fast.
>>137231918
>>137233227
There needs to be more. Drawfags, please.
>>137222207
>>137220964
>>137222473
>>137235412
Sad thing is I'm not sure if you guys are serious because you regularly eat up total shit like it's fresh pussy.
>>137235412
I'm on to it,
>>137236090
>>137235412
I hope you like it, op
>>137219526
I wanna see this done. What's the premise?
>>137219526
Why don't you get a job? Your parents will be happy to have you doing something useful.
>>137236135
>>137237485
I love you guys!
>>137236135
Now draw him being fucked by a thousand of ninja fighter dicks.
>>137237655
Haze Nimowara is your typical cool go-lucky highschool teen, when suddenly one fateful day on a way to a date with his crush his phone rings- no ID.
He answers his phone and inexplicably he enters a bizarre dimension where humans are considered the most luxurious earrings.
Follow Haze as he fights for freedom in his coming-of-age adventure, raising questions such as what is a friend? What is an enemy? What is love? Can a man really be a hero in this world, and what about the next?
>>137240261
I need this in my life.
>>137240261
Call the fucking anime studios, this needs to happen.
>>137240261
we need a fucking name for this
>>137240261
>>137240793
Yeah, what's the name for it? I'm already sold on this premise.
>>137240261
>on a way to a date with his crush his phone rings
Kei-Ai?
OP, make Keit-Ai.
Do it.
>>137240261
>his crush his phone rings- no ID.
>>137240947Ai-Phone
>>137240261
I didn't know good anime could be this simple and charming, and yet somehow truly wicked on a different level
>>137219526
Who's his waifu?
rate my saitama
>>137241527
drew this during bible studies btw
>gaijin manga
>>137241527
>>137241580
No one cares, fuck off.
>>137241350Threadly reminder that you should stop posting that because it's a thing.https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3206139/1/
>>137228047
>>137228079
OP may be doing this on purpose, but still...he's better than me. At least it looks like a character.
>>137219526
>Think DBZ and Naruto combined. Except a lot cooler.
>>137241527
Are you ONE?
Thanks for the inspiration OP
>>137240261
I read this in the cadence of a south park style Rob Schneider trailer.
>>137240261
Literally sounds like zero no tsukaima and a lot of other shit that has been tried.
>>137242473
>Literally sounds like zero no tsukaima
How?
