I will start with Asanagi, his faces are kinda shit.
Took me few seconds to fix it in photoshop.
>>134434511
That's no improvement, they still have sameface.
This is how you do it:
Q really needs to ditch the early 00s aesthetics.
>>134434511
I don't get why people get hype over Asanagi's drawing.
Plenty of artists out there who draws better than Asanagi and makes your dick go hard for 24/7.
>>134435734
It's the eyes.
>>134434511
>>134435269
So he should draw more generic?
That's the improvement?
>>134435734
Eyes and tight thighs.
>>134435734
I'm not doubting you, but do you have examples?
>>134434511
Those puffy cheeks makes punching them more comfortable. Think of good guys like Desiree-san. You wouldn't want him to hurt his hands, would you?
>Asanagi
>unique character designs
>no quality or anatomyfails
>also not just the covers look good but the content.
Try harder.
>>134436423
Yes, the panels never look rushed or sketchy.
But stay consistent through the story.
>>134436034
It's just that he should make characters more distinctive.
Blonde shortie looks great with chubby cheeks and full lips, that's why we're keeping them and accentuating the lips.
The other one doesn't, she's tall and needs to be more slim in the face area, somewhat hime-like. slightly closed 'bedroom eyes' complete the look.
I have no problem with his style. It's neat.
>>134436568
Which of the two are supposed to be tall?
They are both short.
>>134436648
One is visibly shorter.
>>134434511
You made that look better
I never liked how the bottom sticks out, although i do like his stuff
>>134435734
No one draws better, more expressive eyes.
Well, at least Shindol and Oyster.
I like the puffy cheeks
>Oh no! Someone doesn't draw generic LN artworks!
>>134436745
They are both canon short.
Like watch Shirobako.
>>134436414
>Desiree-san lose to Erina in cooking
>violently rapes her until she loves the taste of sperm
>>134436568
Chubby cheeks is never a bad thing. Never.
AS109 had a phase where his non-lolis had a too large head.
Good that he fixed that.
>>134435656
And to understand that the anus is not that close to the fucking penis.
>>134436865
I would read the shit out of that chapter
>>134434511
Congratulations. You're changing someone's style to fit your subjective tastes.And making it worse while you're at it.
>>134434511
>take trademark deformed mouths designed to slosh cum around
>reduce them to a generic everyman's form
That's some improvement there, anon, good job.
>>134434511
Relevant blog post:
>have to make a "manga section" sign for work
>try to trace Komomo holding a sign from Memoria
>still comes out with Asanagi face
>decide fuck it, put the new sign up anyway
>everytime I look to the right I see that lovely twin-tailed face
>a fear for her hymen and sanity
>blood rushing to dick
>one time some 20's-something guy was staring at it for like two minutes but he didn't ask about it
I fear I may have made a mistake.
>>134438780
Who wrote this? Asanagi? Is he trying to hide his doujin identiy?
>>134438780
>have to make a "manga section" sign for work
Why the fuck? Do tell us why.
>>134438876
That would be funny.
>Be FatalPulse
>Want to hide identity for drawing sick fucks
>Some nerd found out
>Days later in 2ch
>"Guys I found Fatalpulse!"
>>134439012
Well, outside of that one story he is only doing doujinshi.
I don't think you can make a living with just making two doujinshi + some guest artworks every year.
It would be swell if raita stopped drawing skeletons with horse faces.
>>134439257
This holy fucking shit.
Worst thing is he actually can draw it normal but he just keep doing sick shit.
>>134435734
They say that only because he draws doujin and others don't.
>>134434511
They loose Semen Demon points with your "fix".
>>134441464
You like fapping to fat cheeks?
Then go outside and meet some real girls.
>>134434511
Just Fatal my Pulse
>>134441801
Chubby cheeks are cute as fuck.
>>134442002
Who the hell has a second toe where the pad of the toe is longer than the shaft?
>>134436414
Desiree is a female name. Fuck you, Japan.
If you're talking about terrible sameface art that people jizz all over, Kagami is the worst. His ahegaos are ugly but it seems to be one of the only things he can do. The shading has that shitty mid-00s feel that he never improved from (Tony Taka is an example of someone who did)
