Hard mode: Make a twist ending.
uh
slice of life comedy romance honest light on cliches happy ending
I can watch those forever.
Story about the three kingdoms of China, except in a sci-fi setting.
Director: Kawamori
Writers: Okada, Urobochi
Character Design/Storyboard: Huke
guy falls in love with a girl he meets through the internet
he's schizophrenic and imagined the entire thing, but he realizes that who he really loved was himself in the end
Bullied moe character in a horror survival genre kind of deal. Ergo, about the killings of teen campers at a summer camp.She's actually a he and he's the killer.
People wage war with mobile suits.
They turn into Tang in the end of it all.
I am saucer.
Keyser Soze goes to Japan.He's not Keyser Soze, it's just Kevin Spacey high on drugs and shit thinking he's Keyser Soze.
A neet who spent 10 years of his life playing vidya on his computer finally leaves his room. Reason is cause he computer that he played the games on died. Suddenly he begins to see a weird apparition of a little girl who follows him around. He and the ghost-loli get along and become best friends. They spend the summer playing games together and shit. He becomes friends with computer store clerk. She's a big breasted older lady type. As the summer goes on, the loli starts fading away. The heart wrenching truth comes out at the end, just as she disappears.....She was the ghost of his old computer all along and as he grew more attached to his new computer, she ceased to exist
>>116846536
An anime about a typical 14 year old Japanese girl.
One day she becomes a magical girl, holy shit!
Nah, just kidding. She's actually delusional, believing to have been chosen by aliens to be a hero of justice. Personality is like a combination of the Twelfth from Mirai Nikki + Tsugiha Yojirou of Medaka Box
Fights using common items and claiming it's magic. For example, throwing dirt into an enemies eyes would be blinding magic, using an aerosol can with a lighter would be immolation magic.
At the same time there's a police detective searching for a vigilante whose extremely violent crimes have triggered a nation-wide media frenzy.
Near the end it's revealed her insanity wasn't caused by a generic rape backstory, but something actually tragic.
>>116846536
That is so fucking gay
A boy falls in love with a girl.
Unable to confess, he is gifted by a deus ex machina with the girl's phone number. Never minding the strange area code, he immediately calls her, and is overjoyed to find out that she has a crush on him as well.
But, the next day, when he recounts the previous day's confessions to the girl, she only looks at him with a perplexed expression. After some investigation, he finds out that the girl he called is not the same girl he fell in love with. In fact, she doesn't exist in this universe at all. She is the girl's alternate universe counterpart, who has fallen in love with the MC's own AU self, who too is blissfully unaware of her crush.
Hijinks ensue as the two strike up a deal to give each other their darkest, most private secrets in order to equip the other with the weapons they need to conquer the heart of their other selves. While the two chase their respective loved ones, DRAMA ensues as they begin to fall in love with each other instead and question the NATURE of LOVE.Twist ending: They never meet. Their love ultimately ends up the ultimate long-distance relationship. They die alone.
>>116846777
stop
>MC is an aspiring serial killer
>He stalks his first victim
>After months of stalking, it's finally the day
>He sees the girl getting attacked by a bunch of thugs
>They're trying to kill her
>He impulsively saves her since she is supposed to be his first victim
>Turns out the girl is wanted by a mysterious organization who's hunting her down because her father(a scientist) fucked up
>MC gets hired as her bodyguard whilst trying to fight his murderous lust`The ending involves him having to kill the girl yet facing the moral dilemma of being good or being evil and the girl knowing he's a psycho at heart and sacrificing herself for him due to Stockholm Syndrome.
Traumatized by what he's done, he ends up continuing to kill murderers and white-knight victims while viewing every girl he rescues as the girl he stalked, rescued, and eventually murdered once upon a time.
>>116845937
Imagine punching somebody so hard that they turned into a door. Then you found outthat’s where ALL doors come from.
>>116846777
All right, now this thread is official. Trips for good luck.
LN
>mc acquires harem
>best girl wins
the twist
>it isn't told until the very end that MC and his harem are all in first grade
>best girl is actually a boy
>>116845937
>Pure Wizard Warrior.
An anon is ousted as a virgin by a co-worker at work one day, close to his 30th birthday. One night while mulling over his situation in a depressed state and wondering whether it's worth returning to work the next day suddenly an earthquake happens, followed by more quieter rumbling tremors. What follows next comes as a shock as a ball of light crashes through the MC's room. The ball turns out to be a fairy from another dimension who asks the MC to immediately form a contract with as there is going to be major peril soon. The contract has rules however: if the recipient so much as receives a kiss from a woman then the powers dissolve completely from the user and the contract along with the faery die. Feeling sorry for what he did toward the MC, the co-worker who ousted him to his colleagues decides to make it up to him and get him laid much to our protagonists protests.
>Contrast.
A 4 koma style comedy about an innocent looking boy who is lewd as fuck and a delinquent looking girl who actually has a heart of gold.
>>116846320One of the best twist endings in a slasher film I've ever seen.
>>116846777
So basically an anime version of "a midsummer nights dream"?
>>116846320
Sleepaway Camp? Sleepaway Camp.
>>116845937
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H6YLiUCwjoA
I think the time has finally come for golf to participate in the magical world of sports manga.
It will of course be like all sports manga, with hulking behemoths with blatantly supernatural abilities. There will be city courses that go through people's houses. There will be fistfights with other golfers in active volcanoes. People will level forests and buildings with their supersonic golf swings.
At the end, aliens will invade and challenge the Earth's mightiest golfers for the fate of the world into an impossible golf challenge. In the final chapter, the protagonist receives a psychic message from beyond the grave from his father, the golf legend, and finally becomes one with golf and activates the fabled Multiball ability to make three hole-in-ones with one ball.
>>116845937
There are these four girls.
They're in elementary school.
They form a club.
They do club activities & other cute things related to their club.
This is the story of the Tierquälerei Club!
>>116847070
I would totally watch this.
>>116846777Threadly reminder that you should stop posting that because it's a thing.
https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3206139/1/
>>116845937
MC has a harem.
Ends up with his bro.
>>116847070
How high were you when you made this post?
>>116846896
I forgot the plot twist of >Pure Wizard Warrior.
It turns outthe co-worker who wants to get the MC laid is in fact teamed up with the faery responsible for casting the other faeries outside of their dimension into the human world
A show about people trying to become Seiyuus.All of them have famous VAs.
An entire alien planet dies and as the final alien lets loose its last breath, the collective spirits of the aliens merge together and transport to earth. The MC wakes up one day with the collective conciousness of a billion aliens. He goes through highschool trying to act as normal as possible but everyone thinks that he's just being a chuuni cause he acts so weird. The dominant personas inside his mind start to take over and they come together to end the threat to earth that ended their own planet. The first 10 episodes are slice of life shit and the last 15 are over the top action as he tries to use his aliens personas to stop the destruction of own species.
A lost girl meets a man digging a cave into hole into Mt. Fuji in preparation for the apocalypse. She decides to stay and help him but he warns her of the ghosts of the forest around the mountain. As time passes, she realizes the mental toll that both the cave and forest are taking on him. She usually finds him skulking around the forest at night and writing random things on the walls of the cave while digging. As she starts to try and figure out what he is doing, he starts to believe that she is trying to sabotage his shelter. He spends the the final episodes trying to kill her, which leads to him destroying his cave and leaving him to rebuild it after she escapes.The twist is that the apocalypse has already happened and the ghosts of the forest are other survivors.
>>116845937
Shounen anime where the heroine actually saves the day in the last minute with a power or weapon which was forshadowed in the first third of the series.
Story starts out like a complete Shonen/Slice of Life Ripoff in a School Setting.
A bullied MC tries to become strong both physically and mentally to become someone everyone respects. Along the years to his quest he meets friends and rivals along the way, eventually culminating into becoming the Student Council President and Honor Student.
The Twist is: No one ever liked him and got his life ruined by sabotage of reputation and of grades. The story ends with everyone moving on with their lives.
>>116847211
I'm by no means done! Now it's time to brainstorm characters.
For the sake of world-building, there should definitely be some kind of super awesome historical figure who lived long ago and shook the world with his golfing prowess. I don't have a character design nailed down, but I've got a name: Gol F. Tiger.
There should also be a present day character who never ends up fighting directly because he's a virtuous hermit who merely functions as a mentor and guide to young aspiring golfers. He wears red so he'll always remember the terrible price of using his golf techniques from his wild violent youth, and he has a big white beard because he's very old. His name is Jack Nicklaus, although everyone calls him "the Golf Saint".
the daughter of a hair products corporation mysteriously loses all her hair. Now she's completely 100% bald. She wears different wigs all the time and each wig magically gives her a completely different persona. In the meantime a detective is called in to solve the case of why her hair vanished. Turns out it wasebola
>>116846777
Every thread.
>>116847464
No, seriously, what are you on right now?
I need to get my hands on some of it.
Dicks Oak was just your ordinary half-American delinquent until his chance encounter with a mysterious girl changes his life, and the fate of the world. She reveals an secret power within Dicks; The Ability of Kings, which allows him to turn anyone into a paper bag by glaring at them. Will Dicks use this power to stop the Prophecy of Death, or fulfill it? Find out next time on Cosmos Glare!
>>116847599
did you use a generator for that?
A group of otakus forms a club and tries to make their perfect 2d waifu. Alls been shitty since no female members join their club. Until some generic mob character like joins the club and asks them to give her character or identity.
Ending. Some fujoshi club tries to copy them by making the perfect bishonen. Generic girl turned waifu left the otakus club and falls in love with the bishonen. While the otaku gets paired with fujoshi club in the end.
>>116847156
>Chapter 1: The amazon queen and the cherry boy
Yeah nah
The MC is a High Schooler who has the power to create different worlds. Everyday, after coming back from school, when he is bored, he creates a new world and goes inside it to hang out. Those worlds don't have any living beings but has any object he desires. For example, a keiki world will be completely made of keiki.
He does this everyday and everynight after coming back to the real world, he ends the world he created.
He is living a happy life,little does he he know what awaits him. Turns out, the worlds he killed never died. They manifested themselves into monsters. Now they want revenge from the MC.
MC has to fight and defeat these monster worlds one by one.
Few world monsters have also formed a group.
Their leader calls himself"Out of the world'
Girl loves guy
Guy loves girl
Girl turns out to be guy
Guy turns out to be girl
They fall in love again
The world has become sick and perverted, ruled by nothing but sexual desire. Very few virgins exist in the world, and the ones that are discovered are quickly destroyed. One man stands up to fight for the rights of virgins everywhere, he has trained his body with his legendary hand and chooses to fight against injustice.Near the end of his journey, he loses to the hypnotic power of Heart Pupil-chan, and ends up having to take responsibility.
Performing the first manned flight of the new prototype FTL drive, the all-female crew find themselves crashed on a strange medieval tech world. In order to get home, the crew needs to use their vast scientific knowledge to advance this small village as quickly through the tech tree as possible, using accurate science and manufacturing techniques up to the point where they actually start fixing the FTL device.
Cute girls doing engineering things.the twist is that it was earth in the past all along, and by showing the villagers the tech they needed to make their ship they have changed history and no longer have a home to go back to.
Zombie outbreak with high school students.
They dont go fucking out and explore.
No one died. The End
Takashi is an animator who works at Eito Productions, one of the largest anime studios in the world.
However, he has gotten into a slump. While he entered Eito intending to work on amazing animation projects, he's stuck animating a few long-running series that exchange quality for quantity.
He goes to a bar that other Eito Productions employees frequent, and finds three other people who share his opinion:
>Aiko, a voice actress who despises the fact that the only characters she voices are either poorly-written love interests or characters in ecchi programs.
>Kuro, a financial supervisor for Eito, who dislikes the fact that they are only selling $60 BDs to one incredibly specific audience of otakus when they could attract a wider fanbase
>Haruka, a small-time manga writer who had her first series animated by Eito. However, the changes they made to her story and the already shitty animation caused the series to bomb on arrival.
Takashi suddenly gets an idea - what if the four of them break off and make their own anime studio? But all of them have loyalty contracts to Eito, so the only way for them to do so would be if, say, the entire studio became bankrupt.
And so, these four heroes make it their mission to not only plan the creation of their own studio, but subtly sabotage Eito's anime in any way possible.
>>116847708
Picked up.
Boy cant confess his feelings to his childhood sweetheart.
Turns out hes the son of satan while his childhood friend is an angel.
Ending: god destroys everything to restore balance. Everybody dies. The end.
>>116847742
>Eito
>Toei
Why the hate anon?
MC is a genius scientist and goes back in time before he dies to watch over his greatest regret from youth, a girl in his class being hit by a train. While watching from the top of a building he is spotted by his younger self causing the events to change, by his younger self thinking he is some sort of omen attempts to save the girl. Younger self dies in the process in front of the girl.
To prevent a paradox he uses his futuristic technology to enter his younger body after he puts it back together. However, this process is not perfect with lots of memory being lost so he uploads lots of information into a computer AI.
Story then goes on follow the MC's attempt to prevent a paradox while dealing with his lapsing memory and the girl he saved who went slightly insane after the event.
After a few episodes developing the plot and characters people who use similar methods as the MC did appear due to the alternated timeline and he tries to deal with them destroying the present.
>>116847856
First off, you replied to the wrong post.
Second off, pic related.
The MC is dumb and out of shape, but his time is permanently accelerated by 30%, letting him out think and overpower even smarter and stronger people.
Magical girl anime. The girl goes on all these fun adventures with a different friend magical girl every episode. Super cute, then you find out the MC's big ability is that she never ages, so she goes on all these adventures with people as time goes by, and slowly watches them die. It's not revealed until the last few episodes, when she goes insane and starts digging up their graves to try to reunite with all her friends.
Taro has the high paying job of delivering magic to the rich
The poor can also buy magic, but with lower power and fewer uses
Taro's delivery partner decides to start a revolution by secretly delivering high class and powerful magic to the poor
Taro agrees at first, but then realizes it causes a lot of shit
Taro tries to save the city
I have one!
Three sassy girls lives in a rural province. Since its mainly adults live there, Radio stations there always play old people music. Since the internet there is crappy and they can't use their Ipods. The 3 girls came up with a crazy idea... To make their own radio station! Join them as they try to explore radio brodcasting!
You otakus buy everything anyways.
>Saturn's Regicide.
In a far away place, of an isolated castle lives a large royal family, however the current patriarch is growing old, decrepit and ever paranoid. During his youth, the king was told that one of his offspring would murder him in cold blood when his hairs are gray. That time is now and he must work out which of his children want him killed for the throne.
Harem anime about a shota emperor and princesses from other kingdoms competing to getthe empire under personal unionso they must avoid having sex.
>>116848064
I should mention the king has nine children and they all have super powers including the king himself.
>>116847941
At the same time he suffers extremely, e.g. when having a conversation and every reply from people seems to take forever.
>>116848064
It's his son Jupiter, the shapeshifting philanderer.
Oh wait, spoilers.
VN
Takes place in a world where a war is taking place between mankind and demons, but the demons victory is near secured, forcing the remaining survivors to search for the rumored land that is protected by angels. The protagonist is an orphaned child who witnessed his parents get murdered by demons, and his childhood friend get taken away. From this harsh childhood he grows up with enough strength to fight some demons on his own. Common route features him and his journey to the safe land and his encounters with various females that have routes, but also his encounters with the high ranked subjects of the demon lord. In these encounters the protagonist's group is saved by what looks like the childhood friend who was taken away. The routes are average and just end with reaching the safe haven with your preferred girl
as you're waifu.After clearing all the routes of the girls that are first presented, you unlock a route where you are given the power to defeat the larger demons without the help of the 'outside force'. In doing so, the war takes a turn, favoring humans, and you are at the center of it. Instead of searching for the safe land, the route directs you to the demon lord's castle, where you find out that the previous demon lord died, leaving the childhood friend to take over and be the current demon lord. With this you also discover that she and the previous demon lord were doing this because human sacrifices were required to preserve the human world's existence; at the end of this route the human world ceases to exist, and the protagonist has a happy(?) ending with the new demon lord in the underworld.
>>116846320
One of the best twist endings ever.
MC is an aspiring bounty hunter girl. She's small but feisty- even a little eccentric. She sails in her talking boat, "Jeremy", short for Jeremiah. She has a key necklace. In the beginning she is hanging out in a boat, fishing for a shark or something. She gets a bounty update on a pirate magician and heads over to the island where he is seen.
She heads over to the pub where the magician is drinking. When she shows up, people at the pub start talking about how she's unbeatable even though she's so young and relatively new to the bounty hunter society. However, the magician is a big guy.
They get in a fight. Even though it's a medieval setting, the magician takes out his modern handgun. The crowd gets amazed by his "dark magic", which is just him shooting his gun. The pirate girl is severely wounded. She curses to herself, takes out the key from her bosom and pushes it deep in her head before turning it a few times. As she turns the key time reverses. Her wound is now gone, and since she now knows what will happen, she dodges the bullets and stabs the magician.
People praise her strength and say that she will never be beaten.
MC takes the gun and leaves- concerned about her overuse of the key. Jeremy says that, according to quantum mechanics, by relocating time and place, world can become really funky or even end at any moment.
MC tells him to shut up his smart ass mouth and keeps sailing.
my vn idea
it's pretty late and i can't even tell if it's good or not
>>116846320
Angela...
A boy pilots a robot. However, instead of saving the world, he discovers he's been used by aliens to instead destroy it.
Some of this ideas looks great, but I wonder what will happen if I try to adapt it to novel or something and shits got surprisingly real popular.
Do I have to pay royalties to moot or smth
>>116849680
Why moot?
A High School student discovers he doesn't exist.
But he cannot do anything about it since he does not exist
>>116850299
He is actually his waifu's husbando.
>>116845937
MC was a member of the armed forces, injured in a conflict that left him blind and deaf on the left side of face. Show is about his struggles to re adjust to civilian life and PTSD following the discharge. MC is constantly haunted by memories of the war, watching members of his regiment dying in front of his eyes, having been put through an array of experiences, torture and mock executions at the hands of his enemies when he was captured. MC entered the war with four of his closest mates to escape from the streets and prison following a botched robbery that left several innocents killed over a petty amount of cash. MC's trails throughout the war left him scarred and broken, leaving him unable to sleep at night because of the traumatic experiences that haunt him, the screams, the gunfire and shelling plaguing him at his most vulnerable of moments. Fast forward to his life in the city he works as a postal worker, sorting the massive amounts of unchecked letters and forwarding them. MCs life hits a turning point in where he meets up with his best friend and brother in arms while delivering an unchecked letter, the brother who he thought had died all those years ago. Turns out he did survive and has been living as a shut in hikkimori living off a government payout.
>>116851472
Time passes by as he the two catch up and find out that many members of the regiment did actually survive and have been living in the same city as him for as long as he has. Fast forward to the anniversary of the botched robbery and MC has gathered members of his former gang alongside a few of the surviving members of the regiment for a toast of celebration. Surrounded by his brothers in arms, their wives and children alongside his pregnant wife and young child, MC smiles and looks towards the viewer in saying "For the longest time my world felt like a dream, a never ending slumber that I longed to wake from. I am here now and I realize that my life has now reached its pinnacle and for that I am truly grateful" "And now to us, to our fallen brothers and to us may this days get ever brighter from here on out." As they all raise their glasses into the air and take a swig MC pulls in close his family with a snapshot being taken at this moment, his youngest son looking up at his father, his wife laying a sweet kiss on his check and his brothers in the background with handles held.The series nears the end when his wife whispers into his ear “Wake up”. MC awakes to find himself in a straight jacked and locked in away in a padded cell in an asylum for the criminally insane. Turns out that everything was a lie, he never went to war, he never rolled in a gang with his closest friends and he never worked in a postal office or had a wife and child. The only thing that did remain true was the botched robbery which turned out to be a murder of an innocent family of four. The crime he committed was that of torture of the father, rape of the mother and children before consuming them in a cannibalistic fit of passion. He was diagnosed with paranoid schizophrenia and dissociative personality disorder with delusions of grandeur. The series truly ends with MC looking into eyes of viewer, before shutting his eyes his rocking himself back to sleep.
>>116845937
A fighting robot show like Argevollen. And the stakes keep ramping up and new mechs come out that start making it harder and harder for Argevollen to fight.
And then as the twist ending, someone introduces airplanes and missiles, and the war is over instantly because these shitty mechs would just be immediate fodder for both these inventions.
>>116851472
>hmm this seems kinda nic-
>>116851684
>spoiler
;-;
>>116851684
Killer spoiler, m8
>>116849996
Well the text itself technically is hosted in 4chin, so he might wanna capitalize some contents in it.
>>116853334
Doesn't he have a disclaimer wherein nothing on 4chan is owned by him? Or else he could've sued Ihascheezeburger for stealing "his" epic maymays.
>The Me From Yesterday.
Our MC learns he has the ability to rewind time but only 24 hours. What kind of consequences will result from their actions?
>>116853369
Forgot to include.
After tampering with space and time so much our MC decides that he'll kill his past self and see what type of effect it would have on his present self. The results of course are disastrous and seeks out the only one who can help him. An old quantum physics professor who is now homeless.
About magical girls, except they're highschool teachers in their late 20s.The story ends with a cliffhanger of them facing off against tokusatsu highschool girlsThe tokusatsu girls gets their own series later
Yaoi boys versus Yuri girls.
It's going to sell millions. Not yen, units. Millions of BDs.
>>116846320
That fucking ending.
>>116847156I like this one better: https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3185673/
Reminds me of Steins;Gate
>The Mangaka and the Bishonen
How about a bishie MC that is really the OC of some fujoshit, and she is constantly trying to write him into horrific scenarios that he has to deal with/get out of. He'll break the fourth wall and have conversations with her and such, and mainly be a gag reel.
She keeps trying to come up with different love interests for him, and he doesn't want any, wanting to live the life of a free-spirited manga bachelor that can't be fucked to be tied down to one woman.
I don't know how it'd pan out, but it'd be fun if the fujoshit and the MC wound up together or something, somehow. Either she draws him into the story or some weird Take On Me shit goes down.
>>116847156
Oh please. If you want a decent English web novel/fictionpress work with a healthy dose of wish-fulfillment (starts slow until the time looping though, but I can see it being a decent young adult novel once the rough parts are edited), just short of moving on to real books, then this is a must-read.https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/1/Mother-of-Learning
>>116853815
Fuck yeah, Mother of Learning.
I think Mother of Learning is the only good one (good enough that someone put it in Baka-Tsuki even if it's an english novel by a Croatian author) since you can probably imagine that 99% of the shit there will be shit worse than LNs (if only because we're not as repulsed by Japan's cringey shit in most LNs, i.e. Arifureta is absolutely disgusting shit but it's still guilty-enjoyable to read until after the first dungeon).
>>116845937
MC visits a park every Sunday to look at the stars. He does this every Sunday for a period of 9 months until he stumbles across a girl sitting on his bench looking up at the stars. MC goes up and talks to her and asks her why she is sitting in his seat, she says that coming from the country she enjoys looking at the stars because they remind her of home in the country side. Interactions start off stiff at first but they eventually warm to each other and begin enjoying each others company during these times. With both looking forward to seeing each other each Sunday, almost like a date. MC arrives one night to find that she has not been shown up for the past few meetings. It does not worry him at first but he eventually grows concerned that something bad has happened to her. So he reports a missing persons report into the police and hands a picture into the police. The police say they can't help him because that person does not exist in the database but they have been receiving some concerning reports of a man wandering around in the parks talking to himself. MC gives up and returns to the park bench and waits for her to show up.Turns out that MC had been suffering from severe depression and anxiety following the death of his wife and what he was seeing was a manifestation of her. His unwillingness to let her go and accept her death led his mind to continue regressing back to the days of when he first meet her in that park all those nights ago.
>>116846320
>yfw you won't ever be beheaded by a psychotic yandere transexual trap who kills all of her bullies in the most creative of ways
>>116853620
Nichibros is better than Nichijou by miles and miles except the animation department.
Nichibros would be god tier if it had Kyo Ani animating it.
>>116846777
Dem trips.
>Expectations versus Reality
A boy falls in love with a girl.
Unable to confess, they graduate and never see each other again until they're already working.
One day, at a reunion, he sees this shota little kid wave at him. He reminds him of his crush he never confesses to and they hang out without him asking his name, thinking he's the little brother (or worse, son) of his old crush.
He meets the guy's girlfriend, they hang out, have drinks, do Karaoke, and when all is said and done, when they're alone,the guy reveals himself to be the butch version of his flat-chested crush who discovered she was a lesbian.
It opens up with someone telling the story of king arthur.
The legend of the sword in the stone is a famous one. He who can pull the sword form the stone is the one to become king.
The ones who are truly capable of pulling swords from stones are weapon smiths who extract metal from ore. The sword in the stone is a metaphor for kingdoms who had early access to steel technology. Superior weapons allowed them to dominate and expand their reign.
The actual story is set in a slightly futuristic society called Camelot. The main protagonists are a team composed of maybe an engineer, a historian, and an archaeologist. They seek to rebel against the current oppressive government in a journey to discover a new "sword in the stone".
>you will never fund an anime
>you will never be a mangaka because you're shit at drawing
>you will never write a LN because anything you write is automatically not a LN because you're a filthy gaijin
>you will never make a VN because you don't have the patience + are shit at drawing + don't know how to code
Why even live
>>116854107
The main character is a high school boy with the ability to read minds. He's had the ability since birth and has never revealed it to anyone. It's completely automatic...if he's near someone he automatically knows everything that they are thinking.
Because of this, he comes off as a seemingly perfect person. He knows the answers to anything someone asks of him. Perfect grades and he's the most popular guy in school simply because he always knows what to say.
However, he's become depressed. He begins to resent the rest of the world because of his ability. He knows every sick, horrible thought that enters anyone else's mind. Because he knows exactly how someone will react to anything he says, human interaction feels empty. He lacks the courage to be honest with most people because he automatically latches on to what he knows they want him to do.
Eventually, however, he meets a girl. The girl is insane. She suffers from every mental condition imaginable. She's a bipolar, schizophrenic, obsessive-compulsive, paranoid-delusional nutcase. However, because of the bizarre way her brain works, he finds that he's completely unable to decipher her thoughts.
He is faced with the first person he actually feels that he can honestly interact with and eventually falls in love.
The theme of the anime will revolve around the importance of trust in relationships and being able to appreciate the difficulties that come with it.Animated by Shaft.
>>116854140
>feels on /a/
So the rumors are true huh.
>>116854107
One thing I love about these threads is giving me the ability to pen down stories. If there is one thing I still find a sense of enjoyment out of his creating stories, especially ones that touch on a multitude of feelings.
>>116854167
How does this work if he's in a room full of people?
How the hell does he not go insane?
>>116845937
The MC was the BBG all along.
>>116853909for you
>>116854107
>you will never write a LN because anything you write is automatically not a LN because you're a filthy gaijin
>Assuming your writing and Japanese is decent
Couldn't you just partner up and "co-author" with a native and branch off once reputation is solid?
>>116854231
Perfect.
>>116854172
https://archive.moe/a/search/image/H2CMC_Z4K4jYEDIcE585Gw/
https://archive.moe/a/search/image/H2CMC%2FZ4K4jYEDIcE585Gw%3D%3D/page/18/
https://archive.moe/a/thread/47470559/#q47471481
>Sun 27 Mar 2011 07:41:20
Go fuck yourself with your "/a/ never uses feels" claims, newfag.
>BBEG has bullshit broken power
>gets BTFO by a really simple power
>>116854225
>BBGBig black gay?
>>116854207
The same way a room full of people creates a droning buzz.
He'd be no more insane than a public speaker or teacher who has to handle the buzz of a multitude of students.
You concentrate on the closest ones and focus.
You know /a/, the thing that bothers me the most about these threads is that none of the shit I post will ever mean anything to anyone.
All those great ideas... Forgotten, completely.
And it pains me because I am a writer at heart
But you know what anon? You shouldn't give up yet.
Think about it.
All those bright ideas in history... What would have happened if they were not shared?
Certainly today would be a much different day.
Every time you lose motivation, think about what I just said, it may give you the strength to go on.
>>116854107
Well, Keitai has been written and Katawa Shoujo has been made. Sure, we're not original content central like /tg/ but we're doing far more better than, say, /co/.
>>116854432
>All those bright ideas in history... What would have happened if they were not shared?
beautiful
>>116854367
Meant BBEG, but I guess big black gay is good too.
>>116854498
My favorite twist ending, then.
>>116846320
Underrated Eighties classic slasher. The Crying Game of the horror genre. I still remember those immortal words by Ricky."Eat shit and LIVE."
>Nature versus Nurture
Romance Comedy with some philosophical debate on nature versus nurture. Two pairs of identical twins, one male and one female, are separated from their twins at birth. One of the boys and one of the girls grow up knowning each other in Kyoto, the other pair grow up knowing each other in Osaka. They all end up in University in Tokyo. By then they are all in this state of being really good childhood friends and they might have romantic feelings for each other. While in University they end up all meeting each other in separate events. Bulk of the book then takes place through the 4 years of them attending University together. Getting to know their twin and the other twin. They have crisis about which twin they love. If the other twin is really the same person as the one they grew up with. Wondering about what happened to their twin that makes them different.
>>116845937
MC is a delinquent of a motorcycle youth gang. Spends his days with his crew modifying their bikes, getting into fights, marking turf with tags and running from the cops on their high speed cycles. MC and the crew have a run in with a rival gang and decide to raid their turf and start some shit. En route to their destination they encounter a sting operation with the local police force to counter the rising rate of troublesome youths on the road. MC and his crew test their skills on the asphalt and race ahead of the force, easily leaving them in the dust. Taunting them them with heads turned before realizing they are own the path of an oncoming truck, MC is thrown from his bike and lands in a ditch supposedly unharmed but knocked out cold while his crew is either been killed in the impact or from being thrown many meters from their rides. MC wakes up bloodied and bruised to find whats left of his mates, paving the road with their blood, internals, limbs and trashed motorcycles. MC drops to his knees on the ground sobbing before he is blinded by high beam headlights from a truck.Turns out that what MC had seen was not real as he has been in a coma for the past 5 years and the lights that blinded him were the lights on the ceiling. MC lies bedridden in a full body cast with his legs being amputated from the thigh down and the loss of his arms from the elbows down. MC stares at the viewer and lets out a muffled scream as he realized how he destroyed his life in an instant over such a silly mistake on the road.
>>116854324
>tripfags were the ones who introduced this filth into /a/
Why am I not surprised?
A picture is worth a thousand words.
It was once tradition for people to create sky lanterns, sending their prayers along up towards the heavens and hoping their messages would be answered. An app available for augmented reality devices renovates this ancient tradition: personal handwritten requests are now contained in virtual sky lanterns, publicly released into the night sky.
People carrying AR devices, such as contact lenses, smartphones or glasses, can see these messages under the viewing options. The plot follows two individuals encountering each other in a city, competing to answer these sky lanterns.
One of the individuals is a young woman volunteering for the recognition. She desires to improve her karma profile, a popular online trend designed to record altruistic actions. The second character is a heartbroken young man answering the sky lanterns to cope with separation.
Discovering these motives fosters concern. The young woman sees the young man answering the sky lanterns as an excuse to neglect the losses he suffered. The young man sees the young woman as a lonely person using the sky lanterns in hopes of find meaning in her vacant life.
As the two characters work together for certain requests, they begin to understand each other, eventually leading them to answer one another’s sky lantern request: helping the young man accept separation and finding a purpose in life for the young woman.
>>116855278
He's a big guy
>>116855278
>Porta-Waifu
Tired of having to lug your waifu around and not having someplace to hide her when she begins breaking down and nagging you? Get the new Porta-Waifu from Galoob, the Mobile Waifu with a Twist!™
It was a dream all along.
>>116854897
>Turns out that what MC had seen was not real as he has been in a coma for the past 5 years and the lights that blinded him were the lights on the ceiling.
If I had a nickel for every time that's used as a twist.
>>116855498
>>116855467
And this fucking twist.
>>116846479
Cawadootie 5: Tokyo Drift?
A documentary-style story set in the usual high school about real life application of anime/manga/LN cliches.
An example: Two guys would kidnap a girl, put her in a warehouse full of security cameras, rations, and other stuff, lure a guy inside the warehouse, lock them up, and see if they would fall for each other.
>>116855580
>>116855498
But what if...
It was a dream all along!
By someone ELSE!
>>116855636
>An example: Two guys would kidnap a girl, put her in a warehouse full of security cameras, rations, and other stuff, lure a guy inside the warehouse, lock them up, and see if they would fall for each other.
I call that one Stockholm Syndrome.
>>116855498
Meh it happens but its not like MC in my story could do much else in a coma but dream, next time it should be him staying awake throughout the whole ordeal. Been made to stay awake and and fully away through all the pain and waiting.
>>116855668
It's not Stockholm Syndrome if she doesn't fall for the kidnapper.
>>116846320
This fucking film.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rIDM6wqUiuM
In this world, every 50 years an angry god escapes from his prison and attempts to destroy the world. But another less angry god makes it so that every 50 years out of 13 chosen people one gains the power to capture the angry god in his cage again and in doing so becomes the ruler of the world for the next 50 years before having to pass down their powers.Twist is that after the MC gains all the power in the world he uses it to break the angry gods cage, so that it can't be trapped again and then flies off in to the space to find a world to become a god for
>>116855701
Jesus I need to fucking sleep my grammer is getting worse by the minute.
>>116855722
Then how about the Stockholm Experiment?
>>116855747another world, leaving his original home to be destroyed, ending the cycle and satisfying the god
>>116855747
>>116855819
Woah that's incredibly shitty anon please.
>>116855701
>next time it should be him staying awake throughout the whole ordeal. Been made to stay awake and and fully away through all the pain and waiting.
Russian Sleep Experiment creepypasta?
>>116855838
Yes it is, but nowhere says it has to be good or thought out
>>116855767
What do you mean by that? That prison experiment?
>>116855895
Just coming up with titles, anon.
>>116855664
Dallas, pls.
>>116846320
>>116855726
Fuck, I remember when I watched this in VHS. Spooky as hell, especially "her" guttural groan.
MC is dreaming so he does whatever he wants.He realizes he wasn't
>>116856042
Lucid dreaming? I'd love an anime about that.And tulpas.
>>116855926
Oh. Okay.
It's an interesting notion, my plot. How about another one:
Young noble visits town. Caravan accident. Two guys (the same guys who did that experiment) check the prince out at his ward. He gains consciousness, but something weird:His brain wiring has been changed from male to female due to physical trauma. What happens after writes itself.
>>116856064
>transqueergenderfluidbullshit
Nah
>>116855895
That's Stanford Prison Experiment.
>>116856085
You're missing out. Ranma 1/2 is one of the best selling mangas of all time. Of all time.
>>116856170
But he's a girl when transformed.
>>116856354
Only anatomically.
The reason behind this twist is that I'm tired of all that shit that goes "That guy was a girl all along?! And she's now part of his ever growing harem?!"
MC is a hobo living on the streets as the result of a gambling addiction that cost him his job, his wife and his kids. Sifting through the garbage looking for something to eat when he stumbles upon a tightly wrapped blanket. Turns out the bundle was a baby girl most likely one that was unwanted, MC not knowing of what to do with the child but unwilling to leave it alone takes it back to the shelter. Fellow hobos of the shelter see MC with a child and say to him that he was better to have left it in the garbage, MC unwilling to listen to them instead asks if they have any milk for the child. Shelter workers tell him that the shelter does not provide such luxuries, MC speaks up and says he is willing to give up his weeks worth of meals there so long as the child gets something. Shelter workers and fellow hobos moved by his compassion for child not of his own decide to pool whatever money they have into getting this child the things she requires. MC taken back from this amount of generosity uses the pooled money to get what she needs. Several weeks pass and MC is still caring for the child, with news of his deeds being heard from throughout the city. With donations coming in far and wide to help the shelter and the man that took in a abandoned child. Alongside this the mother of child hears of the good news that her child has been found and is well looked after demands that she have her back, MC unwilling to hand the child over to the legal guardian and mother resists and is to either charged with kidnapping or hand the child over. Abiding by the law he hands her back not without a heartfelt farewell. Ends with the mother and child being taken away, unsure of what will happen to her MC takes pride in the fact that he gave everything he had to help someone else in need, where as most of his life he cared for no one but himself. MC simply smiles and begins to walk back to the homeless shelter to start over again.MC died not long after this.
"Has Anyone Really Been Far Even as Decided to Use Even Go Want to do Look More Like?"
That's the title. I haven't come up with a plot yet, but I'm sure it's going to be interesting.
An Akagi/Kaiji-esque manga aboutJenga
An anime about the human centipede.
this neet off during college break, spends his time watching anime/manga and browsing the web, when, while on a board he sees this thread asking people to make up a plot for a type of series. After scratching his head for a while, and thinking about it he decides why the hell not? and writes something off the top of his head. Soon the thread is flooded with replies from other posters showing amusement and appreciation towards his idea, they encourage him to write more, and he goes along with it since he has nothing better to do. eventually he gains worldwide recognition for his talent, as he goes to receive an award (or something) he gets accused of murdering his childhood friend. He gets a call from somebody willing to help his case, he begins to have a positive outlook, at the day of his trial he awaits his friend, but no one appears for him, he tries to ask the judge to wait for his friend, the judge objects saying there is no guy that called him and accuses him of stalling, the MC pleads one last time,BUT THEN WHO WAS PHONE?
College student in Kyoto University undergoes an existential quarter-life crisis, and lives through various paths of idealized college lives as remediation for his perceived less-than-perfect lifestyle.
After reliving various aspects of his experiences in college in different forms, he becomes disillusioned with his struggle for an exemplary tangible happiness. He shuts himself out of the outside world in his room, becoming stagnant.
Little does he know true happiness comes from within the psyche, and not through any preconceived notion of a rose-colored campus life. His pedantic pessimistic thinking led him to a life of unhappiness, while his previous incarnations were all 'rose-colored' in their own personalized idiosyncrasies. He realizes this in the end, and in his own way finds happiness.
>>116856469
That is way too fucking sad fuck you fucking fuck
Daily Lives of High School Boys except all the characters are like Tomoko.
>>116857267
>>116857267And they're all voiced by Sugita.
>>116856469
Where's the twist?
>>116857350
Yes please.
>>116857217
Thats the point.
>>116857398His death.
He was never meant to have a happy ending after that. He had his redemption and he died knowing that he made a difference to someones life, the life of that child.
>>116855726
The fuck is that noise?
New girl starts in school, sits behind MC in class, and they become friends - with her gradually developing a crush on him. His childhood friend grows jealous since she has been crushing on him for years, as does his senpai in whatever club he's in.
SoL hijinks ensue as he helps them all with their personal problems and grows closer to them.
Twist:He's actually gay and lusting after all their brothers, and has been faking interest in the girls in order to get chances to converse with and/or seduce the guys
Every episode a different student sits in the obligatory by-the-window seat and all the characters try to figure out if they're the MC or not.
That's the show.
Tsugumi often dreamt and have a fixation with heroism she perceive Joan of Arc as the ideal hero; Tsugumi occasionally and periodically engage in fights in or outer school, she is labeled as a delinquent.
One evening she witness an event unfurl in front of her eyes she act as an intermediate, however, the altercation cascade into tragedy and Tsugumi is stabbed, she gazes at the sunset with a smile on her face knowing she did good.
Plot twist:
The story is told from the perspective of a stray cat who had followed Tsugumi throughout her journey to be seen as a hero in someone eyes. The cat was stabbed by a paranoid homeless man who thought the cat was an alien.
>>116847070
What about a golf SOL where it's just a group of friends playing golf, getting drunk, meeting odd individuals, doing shenanigans, and coming up with stupid/ crazy scenarios
Evangelion actually has a logical, conclusive ending.
That's the twist.
A series starts with everyone saying Congratulations to MC. He doesn't remember what he did to make everyone congratulate him.
The rest of the series is him trying to reminisce whatever happened with him in the last few months.
In the end he finds out he did nothing
Jibun Wo 2.0
>>116859488
But that's Cross Ange.
A depressed and overworked OL starts to have a recurring dream: in some indistinct and dimly-lit place, she meets a group of catwomen hanging out naked, smoking catnip, chatting, cuddling, and admiring and pleasuring each other.
The first night, they beg OL to strip and join them, promising to show her a good time. Though hesitant at first, she can't help appreciating their company. As the night goes on, she gradually becomes cat-OL, developing her own feline tics, eyes, fangs, ears, and tail; she is just beginning to notice these when she wakes up. While she wouldn't call that a nightmare, she's glad she doesn't have to go out in public like that.
Throughout the work day, OL notices a lady coworker whom she barely knows is looking at her regularly. Something about coworker interests OL too, but she can't put a finger on it. When they happen to leave work at the same time, they make some small talk and find themselves clicking already.
The second night, OL enters the dream room as cat-OL from the start, and one of the first to welcome her back is cat-coworker....
>>116845937
>MC receives a cellphone message telling him to kill someone or measures will be taken
>ignores the message, an hour later sister dies in a car accident
> finds ammo and a gun under his bed pillow, a name and a photo of the person, along with general information about them, including their weaknesses
> MC basically becomes a master assassin
> His final mission is to go to the super market buy groceries, he's free from there on
> It was his mother on the other side of the phone all along
> "Son, I hope you got a taste of how it feels as a mother to go to the grocery shop everyday to get you fresh hot pockets".
>>116860577
Sounds Stein;Gate-ish.
>seriously writing out a plot
These threads used to be one liners, what the fuck.
>>116861065
Never seen it though.
>>116861155
You should.
Last days of a generational starship expedition gone wrong.
Nobody knows what caused it, but the AI that was supposed to maintain the ship malfunctioned over the centuries of travel... life support is spotty in functionality, the ship is in disrepair, habitats have been torn up and scrapped for parts to maintain the still livable portions, food is fought over among survivors, entire generation blocks have been jettisoned from the main ship killing thousands and leading to strict eugenics practices to scrabble feebly toward a stable gene pool, and nobody even knows where the ship is going or when it was supposed to get there.
The story follows a young boy in love with a Black Caste girl (she has no proof of her parents, so she isn't allowed to conceive, to protect the eugenics programs, and is treated as an Untouchable) who flee their home Habitat Lock to be together as they explore the ship, find other pockets of survivors, flee bandits and cannibals and robotic servitors on the lookout for information about the location of the fabled First Bridge, which is said to hold the knowledge of their ancestors.
>>116857138
Tatami Galaxy...
>>116846777
A boy gets NTR'd by a girl.
Unable to move on, he and his cheating ex chance upon each other at a bar. Wanting to make bygones be bygones, the ex talks to the MC, but he moves away, which makes her grab for him and slip on her high-heeled shoes.
She wakes up in the hospital with no memories of the past up until before she cheats on him. She doesn't remember her current boyfriend at all and is in love with the MC.
Will the beta MC fall for his ex's past amnesiac self? Will the ex gain her memory? Will the MC get NTR'd again?
Opposite Day
The story takes place in a universe in which people and its later revealed in the story that it also happens outside of Earth obtain a superpower that reflects the opposite of their innermost desire, and manifests itself at a certain age. A theory suggests it happens when that desire is the strongest.
The nature of these powers became a source of mass discomfort in people, and eventually some rogue superpowered start to show up. Organizations were created in order to help the superpowered humans and try to keep them in check. Some of these organizations have their own agendas, however, such as one of the two giants, S.S., is experimenting with altering and creating their own superpowers.
The main characters all meet together due to cirumstances related to either the rogue superpowered or the security organizations.
>10 year old kid who wants to be noticed by others and has the power of becoming invisible. He was saved by a rogue superpowered when a tsunami struck his town and he was trapped under debris.
>16 years old highschooler who just wants to live a quiet and lazy life and has the power of absolute concentration. He was in love with a classmate who became a rogue superpowered, but was kidnapped by someone.
>14 years old athlete who wants to be the fastest runner and has the power of becoming completely still. Her coach is a reformed rogue superpowered and also her parental figure after both of her parents left to work for the security organizations.
>A 24 years old art student who has the power of erasing people's five senses. Her father was a sculptor who was wrongly labelled a rogue superpowered and taken into custody by a security organization.
Loli Make-up Artist!?of the dead
"Abandoned" as a child by a still unread letter her mother, Suzuko Toyoma always had trust issues. Her kind, scatterbrained father finds difficulty in holding a job, so helps makes ends meet with the skill of makeup, which she learned from her mother before she left a year before she was accepted into an unremarkable highschool. Unfortunately, there's little opportunity for a young, unproven makeup artist so she was forced to take a job gussying up the recently decreased at the local morgue.
There she discovers she has a special attachment with the dead laying there. Whether she is in direct contact while applying makeup or holding an important article of their's, she will without fail, hear those person's last words.
She is joined by
Dad-man, forcing a smile while still dealing with the depression from losing his wife and his inability to care for Toyoma
Not-Asuka, always pushy but Toyama's first and only true friend she's made since entering highschool.
Utility-man, saved from a fire by his colleague, the latter made the ultimate sacrifice while leaving behind his two kids.
Shinpachi, a young man who is friends with Not-Asuka and finds interest in Toyota after hearing a rumor about her power. His father has been listed MIA in the war for almost three years
Mom-lady, a subject only carefully brought up. When Shinpachi learns his dad is alive, due to MC's inability to hear his dying words, MC suddenly remembers that letter sent to her from her mom just a few days before her pronounced death.
MC is good in his studies in collegue, he liked a girl, but was rejected due to not being popular enough, bully girl who makes his life miserable tells him that instead of studying most of his time he could join a club and gain popularity within it, MC decides to join thekickboxing club, they train him and the rest of the manga focuses on the club members, who form part of the bully gang, MC starts to see that they aren't bad at all, they simply liked MC and wanted to hang around with them, MC ends with bully girl
"Martyrs"
In a dark and gritty ten-minutes into the future setting, a strange phenomena has begun to turn people into powerful psychic entities with superhuman abilities. They're capable of telekinesis, super-strength, the generation and manipulation of energy, matter and other fantastic abilities, with only one caveat: They are completely useless so long as they live. The only way to unleash the power of these 'Martyrs' is to drive them to the point of death where their souls escape their body to activate their latent powers. The plot follows a journalist attempting to uncover the criminal underground where these supermen have become a rich commodity as bodyguards, assassins, soldiers and spies. She enlists the help of one such Martyr and they together dive deep into a conspiracy as deep as it is unbelievable.
In this world of dead heroes and living villains, nothing can be assumed, everything is connected. Innocence is an illusion, but as the lines begin to blur between conspirators and liberators, it begs the question of whether uncovering a real war is worth sacrificing a false peace.
Equal measures Darker than Black and Jojo's Bizarre Adventure with an angle deeply political, rather than philosophical; the plot would try to focus on a mature perspective on conflicting causes, not ideals; the ultimate theme being not what is good or what is justice, but what is best.
>>116846320
The ending of Sleepaway Camp will haunt me forever.
>>116845937
What about like a multiplayer light novel?
You and your buds read different characters' stories in one big story and y'alls decisions impact the other stories and you're trying to compete to get the best end and give the others the bad end. Obs you don't do it in real time.
> You have this boy in high school.
> Surrounded by a shy childhood friend, a short-tempered redhead and a domineering black-haired rich bitch who controls the class.
> In the first episode there is a massive argument between the friend and the redhead.
> Rich bitch tells them she doesn't care and they should resolve it between them two.
> Friend conspires with boy to take her revenge.
> After school they track down redhead's younger brother and pull him to a deserted riverbank.
> Strip off his clothes and throw them in the river.
> The friend seems to want to go further, brief argument between the two.
> Interrupted when the rich bitch springs on them and kicks their asses.
> "I said it was between the two of you. Do not bring others in."
> She chases them off and helps the otouto.
> Since his clothes are ruined she gives him her trousers and walks him home in her dress shirt.
> He loves her heroism and relative maturity, she loves having someone look up to her unrelated to wealth or school politics.
> Rest of the show is the two of them coming to understand their odd and imbalanced relationship, and tensions with the rest of the class.
Any place to make a list of the VNs you've played like MAL for anime, manga and LNs?Yes I use MAL. "Private" lists + no forum activity nor any profile info.
>Godlike being gets bored one day
>Forces every human on earth to play a survival game
>Game is simple, every day God gives a mission
>Complete the mission within timelimit and you survive
>Fail the mission and you die
>Whole world is forced to participate
>At first no one believes it and shrug it off as joke
>First mission; kiss someone of the opposite sex within 24 hours
>Our protagonist is this crazy hikki that takes it seriously right away
>Of course being a shut-in for years he hasn't have any contact with females for years except his imouto
>Right before the mission ends he forces a kiss on his imouto
>Before she gets time to get mad they hear loud noises outside
>Car crashes, chaos and fire everywhere
>In the living room they see their mother dead on the floor
>Right after that God sends every survivor a message
>Congratulations you won the first game
>Survivors left: 3 Billion
Would you WATCH/10
Do we really have to go through all this again?
Main Character: basically rip off shinji. Can't pull the trigger with any girl because he's got too many feels, and Japan.
Main Girl: Blue haired stalker chick
Other Girl: red head tsundere chick
Done.
>>116863795
I'm guessing that you meant a visual novel. Anyways.
>multiplayer
>you and your buds
>your buds
>buds
>implying people that play VNs have friends
Typical harem MC's are introduced in typical ways. He's chill walking to school, she's finishing breakfast on the run. Everything looks to be going normally, until the glasses wearing bro calls the MC on the phone, and without any precedence commands him to stop in his tracks. MC goes all serious-faced and does so. Just in time, too, as transfer student-chan whizzes by where he'd have been had he not listened.
MC simply sighs as Glasses-kun emerges from within the bush, remarking something along the lines of "The ride never ends, does it? You saved my ass back there"
It turns out the gang is already a year or two into this shit, and as a result, Glassesbro is leading a coalition of most of the male student body to bail their nigga out of harem bullshit and shenanigans, ranging from simple ploys like the one above, or getting fucking tacticool and operating operationally, depending on the haremette and her cognizance to the forces at work around her. Their reasons vary, some just wanting him to stop hogging all the girls, but a surprising amount just had witnessed all the stupid shit the poor guy had been subject to in the first year and decided to help him out because he's a genuinely good dude.
Transfer-Student-chan ends up sitting between MC-kun and Glasses-kun, and becomes privy to the goings on of the coalition. Shrewdly, she realizes that it'd be to her benefit if she becomes their "inside man" while she tries to figure out whether or not she likes MC-kun.She eventually learns that she does, but only as a bro. She begins trying to set him up with his crush instead from within the Anti-Harem-Alliance.
Welcome to the Waifu Wars.
>>116863795
>multiplayer light novel
How do you play? With multiple books and CYOA stories?
ok guys, Is nice to see a story thread.
I have this:
A family of a young male, his fiancee and his fiance's little sister arrive at a town.
They made a new life there.
Stuff happens, life continues, they live happy there.
The guy gets a job at a restaurant as those bodyguards/watchmen.
The little girl one day learns magic and accidentally burns the bar while cooking, causing the guy to lose his job.
Meanwhile, there are rumors of monsters appearing at night, everyone is scared until one day a person is killed, then the church is contacted so a priest can exhorcise the town.
Meanwhile, the little girl has a fight with the young MC and escapes the house, reaching the priest in the middle of the forest.
The priest receive the little girl in his house, the MC goes and try to recover his little sister in law but she doesn't want to leave.
More attacks happens.
That night, the priest discover the little girl doing magic in her room.
Next day, she's denounced as a witch and the priest is set to kill her next day.
That night monsters attack the town, in the confusion the MC saves his little sister in law, but the priest attack him with several soldiers.
The MC loses his life protecting his fiancee and her little sister and helping them to scape.
>>116846777
I can imagine the LN now.
I Confessed to My Crush Over Phone, but Turns out She Actually Exists in Another Dimension and Now We're Accomplices in Love?!
Featuring main girl and other girl, who is just main girl in another dimension!
>>116864452
Featuring strangers from the Internet you invited to play a VN with. The first person who scores with a chick wins.
Uh... Ghost yandere girl following MC since childhood?
Or reverse trap yandere (like the girl in Koharu no Hibi) with heart problems and athletic tsundere gil with a crush on MC
What the fuck am I doing
>>116864871
>tfw I start wingmanning for the other three guys
>>116864818
I... don't see the point of the story.
Little sister is unlikable. Fiancee is practically invisible. 5/10, Another-tier "supernatural" story.
>>116864452
>multiplayer visual novel
You know, this sounds more interesting than you think. You could make millions if you were to make this happen.
>>116865044
Is just the idea.
Needs more development of course.
Needs more SoL shit.
don't worry.
>>116845937
three kids get randomly summoned to a new world, there they become able to use magic.
after a few months they learn that the country they are in is at war with another country, and decide to help out to beat the other guys.
Then they find out that the war started because the leaders of the country they are helping committed mass killings and kidnappings for fun or whatever. but since they alredy went to war with the other country there is no going back.
the three kids become magic neo nazis, and basically make things shitty for the people of that world.
END OF PART ONE
>>116846777
Here's another LN twist to that story.
True Self, True Love!!! My Reflection Is Really A Girl From Another World?!
After looking at the mirror late at night at a weird mansion, the MC gets frustrated over studying for his exams and hits the mirror, only to feel it himself! After closer inspection, his reflection isn't him, but herself!! In a parallel world of opposites, the MC meets his girl self from another world and must now communicate through mirrors in order to help each other through work, life, and love!
I think I hit the jackpot how do I get in touch with Japan so I can be a millionaire.
I think we could improve efficiency in these threads by coming up with a few madlibs templates
>>116865088
Well, you can remove the fiancee and you won't lose much from the story. The main driving forces are the protagonist and the sister as well as the priest.
>>116864991
I wonder if there'd be a karma system or something in place to provide incentive to do thisfor the fags who need a reason to be a bro
>>116865239
The wingmen can get their ending by getting their own routewith the Shujinko.
MC is a socially awkward nerd that has trouble talking to girls.. One day a transfer student is introduced to the class. She doesn't have strangely colored hair, she's not gorgeous, or moe as hell, she wears glasses, is a little chubby and has frumpy disheveled hair. They start hanging out and spending time together, but as time goes on the girl gets more and more attractive, she loses a little weight, gets contacts, and starts putting more and more effort into her appearance. Slowly the girl starts getting more attention from others in the class and the MC being a beta coward is afraid that she'll leave him so he preemptively stops hanging out with her. The MC thinks that because of the girls new found popularity she wouldn't notice that he was drifting away, but she did. She doesn't understand why the MC stopped hanging out with her, especially since she went through all the trouble to start looking nice for him. Along comes a rainy day and the MC has forgotten his umbrella, when the girl comes up and offers to walk with him home so that he can be under her umbrella. He accepts and while they are walking home she confronts him about not hanging out with her. Instead of being his normal cowardly self he man’s up and admits that he was afraid of getting hurt, afraid of making connections with her only to have them ripped away when she inevitably found someone better. Girl kisses him and they admit they love one another.
>>116865230
yes, you're right.
but I want also to put character development, is just that you can't put everything in one post.
The fiancee is there to give more emotional layers to the story
>>116863795
Doesn't having a multiplayer VN defeat the purpose of playing a VN?
Imagine a multiplayer Katawa Shoujo.
>>116865376
Why not make the sister the fiancee or have the oniichan fall for the sister?
>>116865339
Now the twistWhile all this has been going on there are brief little blips about people disappearing on the news and talk about disappearances at school. We also strange hints that the girl may not be what she appears, like her strange overnight weight reduction, a yandere expression when a girl gives MC chocolates on Valentine's Day, and the fact that her hair seems to change length every day.
A week after her confession of love the two are walking home from a date when they get mugged. The mugger stabs the MC when he rushes to protect the girl. The wound isn't fatal but the MC falls to the ground. In reaction to the MC's injury the girl releases an unearthly wail. Her body begins to morph as her skis rips and her bones break and realign. Her chest opens up to reveal a horrific set of jaws lines with hundreds of need like teeth. Before the mugger can escape he is pulled into the horrific mouth and consumed. The girl regains her composure and her normal form and rushes over the MC's side. He's freaking the fuck out. She apologies for not telling him sooner, but she's actually a shape-shifting mimic similar to the alien in "The Thing". She assures him that he doesn't have to worry though, because she'll always protect him.
>>116865457
More characters allow for details no possible otherwise.
also three characters is enough.
two seems too little.
and alsoI hate oniichan faggotry
>>116865572
>More characters allow for details no possible otherwise
Law of Conservation of Detail.
Three characters where only two of the characters are driving forces while the third character has little motivation other than playing the role of fiancee is bad writing.
Ghost Slide.
>>116865501
Sounds familiar.
A hero is chosen by a princess to slay her uncle who killed the king and stole the throne.the princess is evil, seeking the throne so she can destroy the kingdom, and backstabs the hero after her uncle is slain
>>116865795
Muh nigga.
>>116865777
like I said before, the fiancee serves the role of emotional anchor in the story.
Not all characters should be driving forces (which are called pivotal characters).
She doesn't being mentioned in the plot summary doesn't mean she doesn't have an effect in the story.
>>116865930
If you're insistent on the fiancee being there, let me ask you this. What's her motivation? Is there any other purpose to her than being a Damsel in Distress?
>>116865833
A princess is kidnapped so many times it hardens her and trains her to escape from cells on her own without the help of a white knight. This eventually leads to her learning the motivations and methods of the viziers and corrupt kings that kidnap her, turning her into an Iron Maiden Queen.
>>116866016
the story functions as a family story, the MC is fleeing from the violence in his native town, he is gonna marry her fiancee and they leave their town when the fiancee's parents die.
She serves as the traditional role of mother to her little sister, teaching her how to read, how to write, reading her about how the world works.
She also balance the role of the MC, and they even got into fights over their money management.
So, she serves a purpose, as a house keeping mother and wife.
>>116865828
I've posted a similar outline before, though last time it was more like a rom-com and wasn't as fleshed out.
On a related note that same image got posted in response to my Sensō Shōjo Apocalyptica outline in the last thread.
>>116866179
A walking prop, in other words.
MC is a biomechanic carnivorous monster who falls in love with a human girl , she falls with him too and accepts to give him parts of her flesh every month to calm his blood thirst and preventing him of going on a rampage on town , slowly the girl´s health begins to get worse as she is losing a great percentage of her body, at the same time , the MC instincts grow stronger and even he tries to eat her completely a couple of times but still manages to control himself enough to not kill her , when he realizes that the love of his life is dying because of him , he starts to wish he was human and he didn´t had his hunger so he could stay with his lover for eternity , without having to hurt her to survive
>>116866203
Are you a fan of Urobochi or something? Because many of your plots are taken wholesale from his body of work. I wonder if it's intentional.
A college girl falls in love with her straight roommate. The other girl plays along as a joke. Some drama happens, and the other girl falls in love for real. Yuri kisses.The first girl was a trap all along
>>116866179
Her main motivation is to assist and be the walking stick of the characters? Her motivation is to be the love interest?
Rather flat character. Reminds me of Mary Jane from the Spider-Man movies.
a girl, just into high school, is plain and simply a rich bitch. she makes her own fun by enjoying tormenting the other girls in her classes with absolutely no remorse.
one day, a couple of months into her freshman year of high school, she gets in a car accident caused by an arguement with her parents over no good reason. her parents both die and she is forced to live with her uncle living in america.
her uncle, who blames her for his sisters death (uncle on mothers side) abuses her and treats her like shit. and to make matters worse, she gets to school in america part of the way through the school year, unable to speak english well enough, left with no friends, and ridiculed by the same kind of people as herself.
I will continue if there's signs of people caring
A SoL comedy about a bunch of 20-something jackasses whose lives went nowhere. It's a combination of finding humor and shit in everyday situations and dealing with the harsh realities of life.
>>116866229
like I said, not all the characters need to move forward the story.
obviusly you can't make a story where every character is the main one.
Secondary characters are also important because they help to flesh out the story, giving details or new interactions.
Is also good to remember, that females are diferent than males in the sense that the female hero's journey is circular rather than the more male linear one.
Females that take the lead, take risk and are violent aren't necesarelly feminine.
>>116866486
>Is also good to remember, that females are diferent than males in the sense that the female hero's journey is circular rather than the more male linear one.
What fresh bullshit are you blabbering about?
>>116866318
her motivation is to be a good traditional wife, like all females used to behave in the middle ages.
>>116866370
Keep going.
>>116866527
http://fangirlblog.com/2012/04/the-heroines-journey-how-campbells-model-doesnt-fit/
>huh duh feminism
>>116866486
I really don't see the point in adding a fiancee that adds nothing to the story that a prop won't suffice.
She might as well not be there. She has no motivation, no character, and has the personality of a vacuum cleaner.
Just because a character is secondary doesn't mean he should be nothing more than a dull love interest whose main quality is being a love interest.
That's again, just bad writing.
>>116866484
Why would anyone want to watch that when they literally live it every day?
>>116866618
Yeah, it could have a good message and all, but it's too real.
>>116866546
Then she's as memorable as Princess Amidala, in that there's no notable thing about her.
This is George Lucas Prequel level of writing here.
>>116866275
>Are you a fan of Urobochi or something?
No, not really. The idea for Sensō Shōjo Apocalyptica was influenced a little by Madoka, which I did enjoy, but Madoka and Gargantia are the only Urobochi works that I've actually seen and I dropped Gargantia.
>>116866606
what do you mean by prop?
like I said, her archetype is the wife/mother type.
There's nothing wrong with that.
If we take her out then the story will be of alone father and his daughter, instead of being about a family.
>>116866661
There's nothing wrong with a traditional wife.
would you consider your mother to be not memorable?
>>116866618
You'd be surprised at what people watch without being self-aware that it's them being portrayed.
>>116866600
I don't see how this satisfies the flat characterization of your fiancee and the limiting role you have her play. This isn't circular, it's stagnant.
>>116866723
>like I said, her archetype is the wife/mother type
That's all there is to her? That's her whole personality? To be a mother and love interest?
>>116866764
well, I don't have though so much about the story beyond being a happy father who saves his wife and daughter.
>>116866723
>There's nothing wrong with a traditional wife.
If that's all she is, she's a badly written character interchangeable with many other traditional wife characters out there.
>>116866801
archetype != personality
character role != character traits
>>116866600
>Fangirl the blog
I'm going to regret this, aren't I?
>>116866808
I thought this was a fiancee and sister? The fiancee character is so unmemorable you're mixing her up with other concepts.
MC is his own little sister.
>>116866719
Because >>116865501 is reminiscent of Urobochi's Saya no Uta.
>>116866877
is a young male and his fiancee (future wife) and the little sister of her.
"Love can be Fun"
Reverse Harem, a girl enter in a "Full time Prank and shenanigans related activities" full of kids who's main objective it's play the best or funnier prank in the town and record it. The MC try to stop them most of the time but in the end she only makes it more hilarious
>>116866886
see >>116866801
If she's nothing but an archetype made to move chess pieces, it makes for a boring story.
Something Shyamalan would make, in fact.
