Roughly edited chapter 62: http://pastebin.com/tk2Hb436
Please help me improve the edit.
Chapter 63 is also available. All hail tlanon.
64 soon?
Oh, it's quite late and it may have been adressed already, but a テレホンパンチ is most probably a "Phoned punch", which means a highly prevedible, easily dodgeable punch.
Also, please tell TLAnon to pay attention at when he should use "it's" and when "its".
Besides that, awesome work, i owe TLAnon a lot.
>>114149906
terebi punchi?
I guess "telegraphed punch"? Like a haymaker punch you can see coming a mile away.
>>114149974
Telephone, not television. How do you get "bi" out of ホン?
>>114149974
Right, i guess that in English it's a "telegraphed punch".
In my native language we call it a "phoned punch"
>>114149701
>Aren't the religion of trash-king country a perfect description of brainwasher?
Isn't
If you're taking a few liberties:
"Doesn't the religion of trash-king country fit the description of brainwashing perfectly?"
>>114149701
Sorry on my phone right now mind to post ch63 pastebin
>>114150012
I don't read speak, I just guessed.
>>114150140
http://pastebin.com/8c8vKrni
>>114149701
>suspicion was conceived by church from a month ago
conceived by the church a month ago
>The current situation undeniably support
supports
bleh, I only end up finding more grammar errors than actual changes. Maybe after I get some sleep.
obligatory whining about no masterbin in opi don't give a shit btw, it just amuses me when people whine about it
>>114150448
http://pastebin.com/u/Bakahou
People can use this
>>114150472
doesn't contain other related info though.
i kind of wonder why the masterbin hasn't just grouped the anons' tl'd chapters to that link
>>114150106
Thanks, anon. Keep the revision coming.
>>114149701
Morning /a/ tl anon here. I read the edit and wow it looks pretty great, good job. I'll start working on 64 and hopefully have it up within the next two hours.
Do I have your permission to copy/paste your edited version over mine? Just for the sake of more people being able to read it.
>>114149974
>haymaker punch
I like it so i'll go edit chapter 46
>>114153083
Good morning based anon.
>>114149906
>1th anniversary
Fucking nips.
