>>318327395
Looks nice, I've seen one with a Yoshi in a /agdg/ thread I think. You got atumblror something? Any videos of this in action?
If you improve the models a bit a outline for everything an art style like that could work, but it think it will be better if you take them out make the models look like something straight of Super Mario 3D World. you have any more screenshots or concepts for your fangame? Have seen many of them attempt to go full 3D instead of 2D, so you can color me interested.
>>318327679
I was the one who made the yoshi also. Just search Super Luigi Coin Land in google and you should find some gameplay.
>>318327395
The post logs need more black outline to match the rest of the cell shaded look. Kudos for going full shade instead of the dumb character models only shit.
>>318327990
i've tried. the shader just fits best with the models atm. new models are being considered.
>>318327395
Just saw a YT of this, really impressive shit anon! How did you make this and how long did you spend working on it?
>>318328712
took about a full day to finish 1-1. about a week to finish world 1 entirely.
Cel shading looks disgusting. Please get rid of it unless you are going to make new assests or change current assests to match a cel-shaded style, desu.
>>318328220
Ok, good. Also, from the gameplay I'm seeing, you nearly have the Mario physics down pack in my opinion. The only thing I would consider changing is Luigi speed to be a bit slower and making Luigi a slippyer. Overall I'm impress though. I was expecting a basic Unity game with shit physics, but you are clearly are much better than I expected.
Change the color of the grass. I get it, Luigi = Green, but the green coin blocks blend in way too much with the grass. Make the grass a lighter green, or just go autumn colors.
>>318328951
Trust me on this. If i took it out, it would look MUCH worse.
I think you should make the coin block a different colour.
Maybe white with green ? symbol and bolts? Making it green blends in too much.
>>318329067
Can you post a pic? I doubt it looks worse than this.
>>318328972
Thanks! I will make luigi slide and skid more in the next build.
That would genuinely give me a headache if I played it. Even borderlands looks better.
>>318329283
yes. give me a min while i get the old version up
Please say it will be free when you release it.
It looks like a newgrounds game.
>>318329820
Unless OP want to get into a fuck ton of legal trouble, I doubt he/she would sell it.
>>318329283
here it is.
>>318329951
That genuinely looks better.
>>318329820
its free to play on gamejolt.
>>318329951
Not him but that looks a bit better.
>>318329951
That looks way better.
>>318329951
i liked the lines
stay true to your heart
>>318329951
It looks better.
are you on crack or something?
>>318329951
looks better without the shader on, if you want to make it look better, i'd suggest you to work on the terrain textures and models, they are way too plain even if we are talking about mario
>>318330259
i'm keeping them. I was showing a comment what it would like like that way. I'll most likely create an option to change from toon to standard.
terrible shader + textures. not impressed
would hack 'n slash based Mario game work /v/?
>>318330041
>>318330069
>>318330118
>>318330259
>>318330450
>>318330450
It's called Artistic Design
OP, do whatever you think is best for your game.
These people don't know what the overall design. Make your own choice.
>>318329951
If you improve the poly count a bit it and change it to an autumn setting so Luigi and everything else that's green don't blend in to much it could be better than the style you going for now. You can go for either of the styles though because both of them have the potential to look amazing with some polishing. Just go with what you personally like more. Don't let the graphic whores on /v/ discourage you too.
>>318330450
I just feel that the standard shader is dull. I want to give the game a bright and happy feel.
>>318329951
cel saded gives it character. Luigi looks dead in this one
>>318330837
He looks dead in both.
>>318330759
"artistic design" dont matter if it looks like shit
this shader actually looks good>>318330835
you're not helping the OP at all
>>318330709
y-yes
give him... a boomerang
>>318330836
you can but its not that good at its current state. if polish up the shader it could look really good
>>318330835
thanks for the feedback. There will be an autumn themed world later in the game actually.
>>318331056
see, the thing is... an entire company made that. mine is made entirely by one person.
>>318331236
i read autism themed world first
im disappointed desu
>>318331436
you see. if you dont have the resources to make it look good. then you go for something else instead
Is this made in gmod?
Looks like shit
I would love to make a 3D platformer, but I'm struggling enough trying to make a 2D platformer. I can only imagine how much more tedious 3D is
>>318327395
it looks awefull and cheap no wonder is a fan made game
>>318331807
it's unity... what were you expecting?
>>318329951
This is a million times better.
Jesus christ.
>>318331056
It's not all that bad though honestly. I like the outlining although it could be thicker at some places. The cel shading is also decent but flawed. It could be improve on sure, but it not as bad as you people make it out to be. The only thing I can really suggest to OP is to look at some cel shaded games like Wind Waker, Jet Set Radio, nearly every 3D Dragon Ball Z game, ect and see what he/she can improve on.
>>318332062
>unity is bad
I love this meme
>>318327395
I think adding some clouds in that absolutely empty background sky would make it look significantly better.
>>318332113
toriyama's style transitions so fucking well to 3D
even with dragon quest it looks amazing
>>318332423
I will add them in as later build.
>>318329951
this looks better.
>>318332580
or you can go for a space background like galaxy
>>318332113
The problem is that Jet Set Radio and Dragon Ball have a style that fits cel-shading.
They even use drawn lines on the textures to blend it all together.
This is just a mario game and mario games use a certain style which looks infinitely better without celshading.
I think Nintendo needs to be informed so they can hire you what is the project web page?
>>318327395
the thing that always bugs me in cell shaded games is when separated parts of the terrain dont have outlines (ie trees)
the fence posts do this and it bugs me
Please give it an actual skybox
>>318332982
you honestly hate it to the point where you don't want anyone else to play it... wow...
>>318332982
>I think Nintendo needs to be informed so they can hire you
Come the fuck on, not even Reddit is this retarded.
>>318327395
>>318329951
you need to update the models, other than that it's good
>>318327395
that level seems to difficult, can you make it a bit linear?
>>318333225
you're on /v/, man, half the people are assholes all the time and the other half are too shy to be assholes irl
honestly youd prob do better on a normie forum
>>318333276
its in alpha state. they will be updated.
>>318333225
>rip off someone elses work
>talks down to people
Get some creativity or go back to that shithole that is /vg/
>>318333524
i didn't talk down to anyone... but you just did...
>>318333225
what >>318333452 said
but just dont go to reddit
>>318333727
>... wow...
>not talking down to him
kek
>... but you just did...
>>>/reddit/
>>318333727
Just ignore that samefag.
>>318333727
seriously, man, i'm pretty sure you had a wrong impression of the people who come here
this is meme hell
plenty of mario fangame sites out there and youd get better responses there. idk if its still up but as a kid i dled tons of games from mario fangame galaxy
>>318329951
Try just having the outlines on the characters and collectables but not the environment. I have a feeling that would look the best
OP it'll be better if you ask some people from on Mario fans sites like MFGG than /v/. You're not going to get much help consider how much /v/ hate fangames even if they're good like Mother 4 and New Paper Mario.
>>318334414
>telling people not to ask opinions about nintendo fangames on nintendogaf
kek
>>318327994
Tbh, the outline seems to fit well as is.
>>318334414
Itoi just (laughs)TFO Mother 4 haters few days ago in a famitsu review
the autistic hate is literally dying
>>318331672
>then you go for something else
The game can look however the CREATOR wants it to look, cause it's their work of art.
If they have limited resources, then they make do with what they feel looks best. Not what shitheads who just like to shit on a guy for sharing his work say.
>>318334559
/v/ is the opposite of nintendogaf. Even if /v/ was "nintendogaf", Nintendrones hate fangames.
op, you should go to some other forums for this, but don't go to:
tumblr
neogaf
/vr/
>>318333476
after the alpha is going to be taken down? or you want it to be taken down now?
>>318335063
stfu u reddit scum
>>318335001
>/v/
>hates nintendo
Literally every 'best combo thread' is PC/Wii U/3DS
>>318335223
>can't fucking read
you're retarded and your game is garbage
>>318334828
>its ok for the creator to make something shitty because hes making it
this is what you sound like
>>318334804
source? searched for like 7 mins, found nothing
>>318335364
wheres your game them u kek
>>318335321
And most of the time when people say that they are baiting for retards like you. Also OP if
you plan on not having people impersonate you like >>318335223 you should probably get a tripcode.
>>318335423
Hes lying. The tone of the interview clearly suggests the makers of 4 haven't done shit and it certainly shouldn't be viewed as official.
>>318335423
did you try the page google u retarded kek
>>318335541
Thanks anon
By the way I would like to see everyone in this thread do better. If you cant then shut the hell up
>>318335420
>it's okay to hate on something solely for the reason of hating it
This is what you sound like.
I'd rather see more people making games the way they want for the reasons they want, than a select few making games to try to appeal to EVERYONE.
Also, >>318335364
>OP is posting without a trip
>anyone can just put Super Luigi Coin Land in their Name bar
>>318335541
cool tip bro
>>318335643
I got a trip code to stop the fakers..
>tfw no cell shaded 3D Mario
I'm a cu ck and a nigger lover. Heil Hitler
>>318335786
thank god
>>318335857
how u can love nigger and be a natzi at the same time?
rev up those C&D's!
>>318335738
You're a fucking retard, go look up how to Tripcode.
>>318335767
>keyword tripcode is real OP
>PC-bound tripcode is not real OP
Kay.
>>318335643
>>318335767
You know anyone can start impersonating you now, right?
>>318335767
Uh oh, I though throwing a random password on would just be fun, now it's becomingcrazy
>>318335969
>believing anything besides the !! is a good idea
>>318335524
for real... kek trying to make me look like a cunt
We should probably just get this thread deleted and have OP start fresh with a fresh in-game image with the trip already on.
I can't do this anymore... this board is shit... fuck off...
>>318336325
it better not have that bad shader
>>318336193
this
we are super luigi coin land
we do not forgive
we do not forget
>>318329951
That looks far better. You are legit artistically braindead man.
>>318336345
your game is shit
*oh shit*
i mean our game is shit
*grabs katana*
>mfw just notified nintendo about this
also told them you made thread on /v/ asking about ideas for funding
>>318336548
*teleports ferociously around you*
Which is the real dev
*laughs at your face*
who are you gonna stab?
>>318330656
>I'll most likely create an option to change from toon to standard.
I'm in the camp that likes the non-shaded one a lot more, and it seems like a lot of people agree with me, so yeah I think making the cell shading optional would be a good move.
Honestly if the project were up to me I'd put everything into gameplay and level design first and then later once it's finished focus on prettying it up with shaders, but whatever it's your game, do whatever makes you more inspired to keep going with it.. Making the shaders optional would be appreciated though.
>>318336345
Thank you. I hope you find a good place to cultivate interest and good ideas. Have a good day and sleep well.
>now people are trying to steal my identity with a tripcode
I'm the real OP, here's a new screenshot i just took
>>318336724
>>318336345
what the fuck did you expect? lmao
good luck with your game though
![maxresdefault[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/tsvTgX6.jpg "maxresdefault[1].jpg")
>>318336727
>implying implications
*picks up ak47 pistol with orange silencer*
don't trust anyone
*aims at self*
not even yourself
*pulls the trigger*
>>318336968
>It's the first screenshot flipped vertically with the UI removed
Nice try.
>>318336972
in all honesty, people using my name pisses me off. im the original poster, and im not going to reply any further, so any other posts in my name are fake.
>>318336968
Actually I'm the ##real guy, I removed the cel shading remember?
>>318337037
*grabs the pistol from your hands*
This game musn't be released
*placed head next to yours*
we can't take any chances
*aims gun at self to takes us both out*
... *fires*
>>318337285
I found you, you faker
>>318337423
Faker?! I think you're the fake Luigi around here.
HAH!
You're not even good enough to be my fake
>>318337631
IHLLAMKEYHUEATTHOSEWURDS
>>318337631
I'LL MAKE YOU EAT THOSE WORDS
>>318337682
>>318337696
We're synchronizing!
>>318337423
you really think im the fake? fine. heres an in editor image to prove im the original poster
>>318337880
>literally not getting the reference
>thinking he has an opinion of video games
>>318337880
Guys, help me. This anon hacker just hacked my computer.
>>318337880
Nice photoshop.
>>318327395
Needs a lot of work.
>>318337880
dude either post new screenshots each post or get a tripcode
i warned you about /v/, man
i told you....
bro
>>318337880
>Implying I have such a retarded resolution
Next time you take something from my tumblr I'll call the police.
>mfw this thread
>>318338106
how can i photoshop it from that angle? i dont even own photoshop.
>>318327395
If you're going to use the black outlines, you need to modify the player collision box so that the black outline of the bottom of the feet doesn't clip through the ground
>>318338164
Nice shit resolution
>>318337880
That is the most disgusting project I have ever seen.
>>318338206
>i dont even own photoshop
That's exactly what an owner of photoshop would say.
>>318337880
holy fuck clean up your hierarchy
>>318337880
>Transition to state does not exist in controller
YOU STUPID NIGGER!
>>318327395
Shitty level desing, but at least celshading fits better than that blurry shit Nintendo does these days.
>>318327395
What do I think...? I think if it weren't for that pandering Judas song, this play would be completely forgettable!
>fan game
>in the age of indie sellouts
?
>>318335423
>>318335547
>>318335626
かアメリカなど海外の人が、「ずっと『4』が作られつつある」と言っていますけど、ウソに決まってるじゃないですか、あんなもの(笑)。 ──(笑)。 糸井 (作るのが)どれだけたいへんなことか。端々だけで作れているように見せかけるのは、僕も『MOTHER2』でさんざんやりましたよ(笑)。 ──(爆笑)。 糸井 『3』でもやったし。ぜんぜんできていなくたって、あのくらいできているかのように発表できるわけですから。「何割くらいできていますか?」と訊かれて、「どうかな。4割、うーん3割」なんて言ってね(笑)。イベントで遊べるものを出すくらいはできる。スゴいできているかのようじゃないですか。それに比べて、ネット上で発表されている『4』は何もできていないわけですよね。 ──どなたかが発表しているんですね? 糸井 「勝手に作っている人がいる」という話を伝える人がすでに入れ込んでいて、「それについて糸井さんはどう思いますか? 認めますか?」と。できているなら止めるわけにいかないじゃないですか(笑)。
Some foreigners like Americans says that Mother4 is being made, but that's definitely a lie! (laugh)
laugh
Itoi: How hard that was! We also did pretend to be making progress by putting out those bit of information (laugh).
laugh
Itoi: We did that for 3 too. We could pretend even though there's no progress, like "how's it goin?" "maybe like 30, or 40%?" (laugh). It's possible to show some playable trailer kinda thing. It strangely looks legitimate. Compared to that, internet version does not show anything..., right?
So someone has announced?
Itoi: Someone enthusiastic who's telling me those news said to me, "how do you think? do you allow that?" Well if it's done I can't stop it! (laugh)
http://www.famitsu.com/news/201511/21093633.html#page02
TL; DR: Itoi jokes how Mother 4 devs are doing hypothetical progress like Itoi and his team did with Mother 3 and said he could care less if someone is doing a Mother 4.
>>318327395
Just played it
the level design is uninspired as hell
you have no focus, it feels like you slapped shit into it
>>318334414
I used to go to MFGG, does that count?
Looks fucking awful. Tone it down and add some contrast.
>>318327395
Looks like shit tbqh. Also why steal Nintendo ideas like a cûck instead of being creative and coming up with your own stuff?
for people saying the game looks "too green", there are other levels
>>318339018
Same reason chris-chan can't draw anything but sonic characters.
>>318339467
Can you show me that same level without celshading?
Just interested is all.
>>318327679
>agdg
awesome games done guick? what the fuck you smoking nigger
>>318339583
kek
>>318327395
Random question.
If you are going to spend all the time making this, why not make it a new IP or something you came up with? I mean why just throw in Luigi and some Mario elements and call it a fangame when you have the power to make something atleast kinda new?
>>318339565
here
>>318339871
This.
Spend the extra time to create original assets, slap it on a kickstarter and insta-sheckels.
>>318335547
(laughs)
>>318340024
Stop deluding yourself into thinking it looks better with cel-shading, because it doesn't.
I mean it's your fanwank so I can't really stop you but I guarantee other people are gonna keep bitching about it,
>>318340024
Dude your game looks like an actual game with a large budget when you turn off cel-shading.
>>318339871
making new models is difficult. plus the rigging process is a pain in the ass.
>>318340024
the game actually looks good now but you refuse to make it good
>>318330759
>Artistic Design
I didn't know adding a "Sketch & Toon" filter to your game is artistic design. Also ignoring a major opinion like this thread over "muh passion" is why people like Dobson don't have real careers
>>318340374
*sighs fine. screw it. ill change the shader.
>>318340518
>*sighs
(laughs)
>>318340518
thank god mate
but look at the bright side. you're making progress now
>>318327395
Nintendo's going to vacuum all your autismbux if they find out about this.
You are never going to rake in the Indie sheckles like this.
>>318340024
>>318339467
The game looks better without cell-shading but i don't think you should give up on that. Just try to change the outline width and the overall colors to fit the cell-shading because it really gives an original style. Without cell-shading it just looks like a normal mario game.
>>318340518
>*sighs
>>318338728
lmao fucking rekt
I can't believe everyone thought an indie mother 4 was real. Hope no one donated
They probably expected nintendo to onboard them and give them money to make the real thing
>>318340518
You shouldn't sigh. I just came into this thread and the cel-shading looks like shit. You can't slap it on to anything an expect it to look good, you need to make your models with it in mind otherwise it looks fucking tacky.
>>318341023
well apparently a "normal mario game" is what everyone wants
>>318341251
If you don't want to make it look like a mario game don't make it look like a mario game.
>>318339467
>>318339467
No, fuck that one single dude who thinks the cel shading has potential
Do not include a mistake just because you think it's better, when it is objectively worse.
Cel Shading in this looks fucking awful compared to how it looks without it. Don't let this one mistake haunt you unless there will be a way to toggle it on and off
>>318341251
Hey dude, if you want to rework the models and textures to actually play to the shaders then go ahead and do it, slapping outlines on Mario Galaxy models looks like shit, don't be a bitch.
>>318340024
you are a fucking idiot I hate devs I swear to god
>>318341251
no you dense fuck. the cell shading would be fine if you actually made it look better.
if you dont want to put in more effort and leave the shading as is. then it looks better without it
It needs a skybox. As is it looks like a tech demo. I don't like the black outline. Everything else looks spot on.
>>318341126
>I can't believe everyone thought an indie mother 4 was real.
say what? who the fuck thought it was a real game?
i thought most of them denied it and said an actual mother 4 was coming.
oh here's some recent interviews with Itoi saying him doing another Mother past 3 is impossible
http://nintendoeverything.com/shigesato-itoi-on-why-there-wont-be-a-mother-4/
http://nintendoeverything.com/shigesato-itoi-on-earthbounds-continued-popularity-mother-4-iwatas-passing-more/ (just came out today)
no Mother 4, folks.
>guys what do you think of my cel shading
>looks like shit
>STOP INSULTING MY WORK
>but it looks good without it
>LALALALA
great thread
>>318341251
True but i can't really blame them when you just imported the models from a real mario game, cell-shading just doesn't fit on a mario theme. Mario already looks cartoony, cell-shading just adds too much of that cartoony feeling
>>318338572
Best episode outside of season 3.
>>318341209
>That girl in the middle
Goddamn, it must be difficult living with pitchforks for hands.
>>318341251
Like, look.
On the left is a game where the entire graphical style is based around it's shaders and the texture work plays to it's strengths. The right is what you're doing.
Since Nintendo is so infamous for sending C&Ds to the creators of fan games, why not make an original game that mimics the style of Mario games?
>>318342195
man this shouldn't even need explaining to why it looks bad. we aren't even fucking devs but yet the OP can't see why it looks bad
>>318342195
What are the recommended requirements for me to play Super Mario Galaxy and Super Mario Galaxy on Dolphin?
>>318342456
Don't get me wrong, I think a cel-shaded 3D Mario game could work if you put the work in to make it look like the 2D artwork.
>>318327395
its nice but they green luigi, green grass and green tubes being almost the same colour hurts the eyes
>>318337880
The average Unity user's project everybody.
>>318342450
>why not make an original game that mimics the style of Mario games?
soon when TPP comes, if it does, it will be by law that games cannot have similarity to certain copyrighted material and you'll be fined over it.
>>318342697
I'll kill for a 3D Mario game set in the M&L universe and has visuals as the art of the M&L games.
>>318342569
Dolphin has had some pretty great improvements in optimization in recent years, it's still pretty CPU dependent so you'll need on clocked at atleast 3.40GHz, that's what my CPU is clocked at anyway and it runs at a constant 60fps. It's best to download dolphin and the iso and try it for yourself.
>>318342916
>it will be by law that games cannot have similarity to certain copyrighted material and you'll be fined over it.
w-what?
>>318343208
from the 2big deal text
Under Article QQ.C.8: {Classification of Goods and Services} it states that:
>"Each Party shall adopt or maintain a trademark classification system that is consistent with the Nice Agreement Concerning the International Classification of Goods and Services for the Purposes of the Registration of Marks"…"goods or services may not be considered as being similar to each other on the ground that, in any registration or publication, they are classified in the same class of the Nice Classification. Conversely, each Party shall provide that goods or services may not be considered as being dissimilar from each other on the ground that, in any registration or publication, they are classified in different classes of the Nice Classification."
Goods being similar means that indie demakes or remakes or anything like Freedom Planet get boned by SEGA for it's 'similarity' to Sonic games.
This is thus followed by:
>"that its judicial or other competent authorities shall have the authority to order the seizure of suspected counterfeit trademark goods or pirated copyright goods, any related materials and implements used in the commission of the alleged offense, documentary evidence relevant to the alleged offense and assets derived from, or obtained through the alleged infringing activity; Where a Party requires the identification of items subject to seizure as a prerequisite for issuing any such judicial order, that Party shall not require the items to be described in greater detail than necessary to identify them for the purpose of seizure;" In regards to applying criminal penalties.
It stifles innovation by hoarding intellectual and creative property to the fullest. Nothing goes without the copyright holder's say.
>>318341209
>this crook
>making his own models
kek
WARIO VERSION WHEN?
>>318338164
Stop imitating me online or I'll call the cyber police
>>318341595
yeah cant believe people fell for it when it was never implied that a game was being made at all
>>318343621
KEK
>>318343479
*sigh* I can't work with a wario model because i get boner when i look at man
>>318343887
Please do it.
Mario 64DS is like, the only 3D platformer where I can play as Wario, and the physics and shit graphics make me wanna cry.
And you know as well as I do that Wario is never getting out of that Micro game hell. You're his last hope.
>not having both standard shading and cel-shading in the same game for different situations and purposes
>>318343887
DO IT FOR WAAA
>>318327395
I think it looks rad as fuck at this stage
You definetly improved the outlines
>>318327395
This looks great.
>mfw been wanting to make my own games
>mfw imagining making expansive ROMhacks of all the good N64 games for the longest time, huge ambitious projects that completely overhaul the game and turn it into something completely different
>mfw I want people to be able to play completely new games built over Ocarina of Time, Majora's Mask, Banjo-Kazooie, Jet Force Gemini, Paper Mario, Perfect Dark, etc. etc.
>mfw can barely get an OoT map editor to work properly, let alone do anything in Unity like you have
Teach me your ways anon. Where do I start?
>>318333225
> no adventures in the Waffle Kingdom
Wtf guy tbqh family
>>318344081
This.
There's never ever going to be a Mario 64 II
Because it is only yourself, I would suggest to keep it simple and focus on gameplay, short and sweet rather than long and unfinished, you can continue later, if nintendo somehow forgets to send their assassins.
Good Luck.
>Okay, I'm making a Mario platformer where the main goal is to collect tons of coins
>Hmm.. What Mario character is known for his love of money?
>I know! LUIGI!
>>318346765
>>Okay, I'm making a Mario platformer where the main goal is to collect tons of coins
New Super Mario Bros 2?
