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Overwatch /u/ comics gallery here! ---> http://yuriwatch.imgur.com/
I have good news and bad news.
Good news is, that I managed to find a way to browse weibo, despite it doing everything it could to stop me, and there, in fact is quite a bunch of Overwatch fanart there.
Bad news is, lots of it is comics and they are all in, surprise, surprise, Chinese.
This was the second time I've ever seen fanart for this ship
I know. And Wima even has that line where she implies Mercy likes her.
Okay, I won't be posting everything because I don't want the thread to die tomorrow.
Overall I have a feeling I only found the tip of an iceberg, but that site is a real bitch to browse...like Twitter but worse.
I'm not sure if this should be one comic, but it was in one tweet.
Now that I look at it, I guess it should..
It seems like I missed out on the last thread.
But I have a Google Doc made for /u/ for anyone that wants to add other gaymers to play Overwatch.
Especially with this Rocket Angel brawl going on this week!
Alright. It should be fixed now.
Feel free to leave comments on the document for any suggestions or whatever. Just in case I don't come back to the thread in a timely matter.
My ID is also the first one if ya'll prefer that method of communication through Battlenet.
Translations from last thread
M: Excuse me, Fareeha!
I think Pharah in a suit is very charming but...
Could you wear this for our date today..?
P: Ziegler.. I apologize but I will have to refuse...
Those clothes won't look right on me...
M: Hmm.. Is that so..
P: Give.. Give it here!
M: Pharah, don't you think you're too pretty today?
P: N-not at all..
W: Lena, move, I'm gonna go exercise
T: Let's have some time to relax in the mornings...
W: You're gonna be late
W: I told you not to walk around with the blanket
T: Ach, I look swollen
W: You look pretty
D: Doctor, where are you going? (To the lab?)
M: ...Hana, shouldn't you be in class?
D: I skipped!
"If you fight again
I'll hit you with the Caduceus"
M: Hana- I brought you a drink.. (CRASH)
D: Doctor, are you okay--?
W: What are you looking at? (click)
T: (haa-) I wasn't looking at you
W: How dare you not look at me?
T: What the...
M: Ahh, Winston! The bananas are in the cupboards! (woosh)
(glance) Reaper! Don't do that!
T: (Calm down, love!)
W: (I'm gonna shoot her)(slides)
D: (Hurry up and confess..!!! Everyone knows but the doctor!!!!!)
M: (Something feels ominous..?)
T: Doctor, Fareeha has something to sa--
P: No, it's nothing.
(For a 33-year-old's first love to be me, it's a little awkward...)
M: All done. Oh right, I love you Fareeha
P: N-no, sorry...
I, I love you too. (blushes)
P: Doctor Ziegler
M: Let go, I said let me go
(Two rocks that collide)
M: Fareeha, you're the one who avoided me..
Now you're here.. Say something, please
P: .. My apologies
I didn't know I harbored different feelings for you
I love you, Angela
(make a clacking sound
to create a spark between them)
P: I love you, doctor.. It must be surprising because I'm a woman.
M: No! I really love you too!
P: Today is an unlucky day
M: Huh? Why?
P: That.. That is.. (wet)
I haven't been with you in awhile... (Ahem) But now it's raining...
No, that's not it
I didn't mean it to be weird
No, wait it's not even weird in the first place
M: What a lovely person...
This is my Zarya~
W: My attitude is very rotten
I'll often act really rudely
So when I tell you to fuck off, don't actually fuck off; Just fuck off for a moment and come back, okay?
T: I'm really good at that sorta stuff~
There are some other ships that have something more going on in canon than nothing
namely the kind of: these characters had some kind of relations to each other before, which is not much but more than "they look good together", but they are all yaoi ships or het ships.
But yeah, WidowTracer is the only ship that canon supports with things like them actively flirting with each other and having that weird sexual tension in the air.
TL Anon, thanks!
>T: Ach, I look swollen
>W: You look pretty
Hnnn, it appears Widow being nice to Tracer is my fetish
It's pretty funny how the ships least backed up by canon material have some of the greatest fanart. Also, this thread needs more dominant Widowmaker bullying.
Added mine too
D: Heheh, I'm gonna surprise the doctor (sneaks)
Ah-! Doct-- (grab!)
W: Oh, right. Do you have time tomorrow?
T: Huh!? Tomorrow?! A lot! So much! I'm not doing anything!!!
Why, why?!! (blu-sh)
W: Ahh- Spend it carefully. (Thought it'd be like that)
(Pharah passing by)
P: Hm.. Hm
Uh, do you have time tomorrow? (badump badump)
M: Are you gonna tell me to spend it carefully? (To the point)
Ah ah~ Sorry Pharah~ Maybe I should've played along~
P: .. Not at all. I was going to ask you to go have dinner with me tomorrow!!!
M: Oh my, really~? (Cute)
Wow~ I heard the steak here was really delicious! Thank you, Pharah.
P: I'm glad you like it..
(Worked hard to reserve it the day before)
(Just like practice)
D: Lena, want a ride?
For my first drive
T: Whoa-- Okay!
(Hana got her driver's license)
T: You already got your license? It didn't seem like you weren't all that prepared.
D: It's because I played a lot of racing games~
If you drive like it's a game, it doesn't seem as hard as it actually is (I drove the MEKA the same way)
D: Get ready.
Booster ON!!!! (kuwwaahh)
(It's a biker..., oh a biker)
(Don't try this at home)
D: They really play like ****
If you're gonna play Gangplank like this and ruin the game, just say gg and leave! (clench, clench)
I used a smurf account, but if you find out who I am you're gonna be surprised. Troller. (Kuku..)
--H) If you're gonna play like this, please fuck off. Watch.
--m) Your words are harsh
--H) Seeing as you're playing Gangplank, say hello to your mother and father for me
--m) You're really pushing it...!
--H) So what? You're gonna kill me? Meet me tomorrow at the clock tower in A-Town at 6 lol
--m) Fine. I'll be in front of the clock tower, wearing a shirt with an 'M' on the chest.
--H) Oh my, how scary. OK
D: Hoho. I'll humiliate him a bit, give him my autograph then leave. (turns)
Now, let's see if he's...
It was my love, Mercy!?
M: He's not coming...
(Got severely disciplined afterwards.)
M: Hoho.. Hana
D: Hiiiee! Mercy? What are you doing at this hour.. On my bed..!!
M: Stay still. I'll make you feel good.
It's all your fault! You kept seducing me, I couldn't hold back. Hoho.. (slips-)
D: Wait... We're not even on d.. dating terms yet...
M: You say that but your body says otherwise. Hoho..
D: Unn.. That's..
P... Please... Go slower.. You're being... Too strong...! (hng)
(My head is dizzy from this dream-like event!)
(I should request for a room change... This is getting a bit dangerous.)
D: Mer--cy.. Ahh, that's..
(Was a real dream.)
"Who are you calling a chil--"
"I thought I told you this wasn't a place for children." (pulls)
"I'm.. I'm sorry..."
(Tracer X Song-Bunny)
T: (Kiddo, time for your bath~!)
D: whuhehuwhwwhat???? I showered 2 days ago!!! I-I'm still clean1!!!!! (shock)(No!)
T: No~ You have to be clean everyday! If you keep being like this, I'll bring you to our neighbors cat!
T: Whatcha looking at?
W: An annoyance
T: Whatcha looking at?
W: (Can't speak because she's actually shy)
While meeting 2
T: Whatcha looking at?
W: At my girlfriend
T: Boss! Get me a glass of warm milk
T: Does this beauty want to go for a spin with me?
T: Don't leave! I chose this outfit specifically for today!
T: The weather's perfect to go for a spin today
W: fucking idiot
T: What's the matter? Why aren't you saying anything?
T: So hot, I'm going to die
And it just so happens that the AC broke
T: Let's see what's in the fridge
W: Get lost
T: Listen to me...
W: Okay I'll listen, if you can't say anything... I'll kill you.
T: Ah. Actually... I'm here for the AC
T: so cold...
W: So hot...
D: Hey hey, hi everyone, welcome to D.VA's livestream show!
Today's objective is one everyone's familiar with: to defend the capture point!
(If D.Va's here, there's no surprise in the victory)
D: So, just wait and see DVA's APM!
(When the match starts...)
[I'm not familiar with the slang used here, but the basic gist is that Pharmercy paired together can defeat noobs easily]
Reaper: Do you love me or not?
D: Cameraman, get over here!
(From start to finish, I was out of focus)
W: That stupid girl, Tracer... Someday I'm going to kill her
T: Who are you going to kill?
W: Merde! Why does she keep annoying me... It really makes me angry
T: Even if you're angry, you shouldn't do anything evil~!
T: HI~ What are you doing?
T: Hope you're a good person in your dreams
Z: Embrace tranquility
W: Master, recently there's been someone who keeps dashing around me
Is it because I'm too stressed, and therefore hallucinating?
Z: It is not, because I can see her too...
sfx: bang bang
T: The same trap won't catch me twice!
T: Hey love, do you know how fast I can run?
T: I just slightly increase my speed, like this
T: And absolutely nobody can catch-
M: Hey! Pharah!
P: So sudden... I really don't know what to do!!
M: When kissing, you just have to close your eyes, and enjoy one another...
P: I don't need to know that!!!
(M: *gulp* <3)
P: What is it...?
M: Nothing! Really!
?: Face me!
Genji: Mom! we can't watch you any longer! Stop falling and quickly respawn!!
(P: Fly like an Egyptian!)
M: Ah... I miss you... my Pharah...
P: We're partnered together again, Ms Ziegler
M: That appears to be the case, Pharah
P: I will try my best in the battle! <3
M: I will do my best to assist you <3
M: Pharah, is there anybody you like?
P: I like everyone in Overwatch
M: Then, is there anyone you like in particular?
P: My mother and you.
(blurted it out)
Sorry for the two I didn't translate, I can'y fully understand them and dont want to mistranslate
Cheers to all the great translator and typesetter anons ITT!
That formatting of text is killing me
I'm gonna do the rest tomorrow
Is there some reason nobody on /u/ is talking about the prettiest girl in Overwatch?
>Robots can be lesbians too.
anon, i don't think Bastion even identifies as a woman, kek.
Ugh, excuse me, but Bastion's prefered pronouns are they they/them/themselves. It's harmful to refer to them any other way. Gender is a fluid concept, you can't just slap a "boy" or a "girl" on somebody.
it's a joke by the way, I know some people are retarded enough to believe me
>Hana mentions she wants kids
>Angela imagines coming home after a long day of saving lives to a pregnant Hana at home, probably cooking
>She finds herself six months later, pregnant, and cooking dinner for her pro gamer girl
The way Lena smiles at Amelie here should be illegal
God bless the animators at Blizzard
I have no idea why is she doing a Spider-man kiss while cosplaying Miraculous Ladybug but..
Kill yourself retard. Barely passed teens and thinks they know all about pregnancy and raising a child.
>gone for 2h
>some shitter posts futa
>some other shitter leaves ship war bait again
why are /u/ like this
Not that anon or the one who made the mistake of posting it.
I personally have an impregnation kink and girls being able to do it without any involvement of men, monsters or in some annoying cases animals all the better.
Although recently I've discovered some delightful all yuri doujin in the yuri pregnancy thread that are just as appealing, if not more so.
So I finished the second chapter of a D.VaMercy fic I'm writing (first one here http://archiveofourown.org/works/7340602), but this time I definitely want someone to proofread it first.
Are there any native English speakers here that would be willing to look over the chapter? (Mostly for typos, grammar odd choice of words/formulations and style)
>She looks cuter in the second one.
I actually find some of the faces she makes in the first trailer the cutest. Like that part at the end where she salutes the little boy she is the adorablest ever.
Then again in Alive the sheer desperation in her face when she straddles Widow is absolutely beautifully done as well.
All in all I stand by my opinion that Blizzard animators are great.
Hana singing "A Cruel Angel's Thesis" got me smiling, anon, I gotta admit. But I'm thinking you should save that for a different scene or another chapter and have her sing "Fly Me to the Moon" in the scene from this chapter. With her preparing dinner and all, I imagine the mood to be "soft", comfy, somewhat romantic even with Angela walking in on her etc. so I think it would work better with the lyrics and rhythm of "Fly Me to the Moon".
I can't reall help you with proof-reading since I'm not a native speaker but I have to say this reads better than the first chapter, somehow! Like, it flows more naturally. It definitely feels like a slow building fic though, is it still gonna be a bunch of shorts? You could easily make it into a one continuous story...
I can't wait until they get closer
anyway the one thing i noticed
>I know I can always count on me to be there and patch me up, right?
It should be "I can always count on you", right?
sometimes you also repeat the same word too many times too often, like
>the end result was quite tasty, and Angela was in fact quite hungry
but other than that I think it, it's pretty good.
Please write more !
IMO, they've meddled way too much with Widowmaker's visage in the second short. In some part she looks like she has severe case of ayylmao face. Adjusting her eyes to be bigger and nose to be overly perky as well as narrowing her lips was a mistake. They make her look like a mouth breather. She looked 10/10 in the first trailer.
It's a fact.
Oh I definitely think Amelie looked the prettiest in the first trailer too.
Let's just say it was all bad lightning though.
The second one makes her look more like her ingame model, upturned nose and all.
I think you are good to go Anon.
I'm still doing the Chinese ones but today life happened so I'm also gonna finish tomorrow.
She looks really weird in some of the shots, but I think her expressions in Alive are nothing short of fantastic.
I'm not a native English speaker but I've carefully read through it and overall, to me, it looks fine. I do have a few pointers to offer for your consideration.
Like this anon said >>2085974, you tend to repeat some words here and there, such as: >"This was exactly the [sort of] thing she'd say"
>"I don't think I'm going to have that [sort of] free time."
It stands out when they are only a few sentences apart. This "repetition issue" is no major problem though and can easily be fixed. Secondly,
>“Does that hurt?” “No... No... Yes, ow.” “Sorry.”
>“Hold still.” “It's cold.” “I'll give you a lollipop when we're done, okay?”
I think it'll be easier on the eyes to have each line per row rather than a succession. Also, you should probably make a chapter endnote with all the german words and phrases you use. And I second what this anon >>2085969 suggested.
That's about it. Thank you for your work, anon!
And like anon above said she looks closer to her in-game model
that was a baaaaad fanfic.
>Ana gets a checkup from Mercy
>Mercy: Ana.. I, I... like you like you
>Ana (thoughs): hmm, I can't get with her because we have to be professional
>Ana: You should date my daughter instead Mercy!
>Ana: Let me give her a call and then you guys can instantly get married!
That was really just... bad.
and so is Chapter 4. "Ana, I'm pregnant!" as the twist? Seriously? Overused tropes incarnate
Doctors are only humans too, anon. I can understand how it's likely for them to find it hard to shake off the habit of policing people about their health but they are also perfectly capable of separating the job from their personal life.
I cleaned pic related by the way and replaced it in the gallery. Also, I'm gonna make an album for Widowmaker/D.Va when I update next so tell me beforehand what "ship name" you want in the title otherwise I'll just go for D.vaMaker or something
I don't understand the mercyxhana pairing and i don't like it
Mercy is the generic go-to ship for everyone because she's the medic, whether it makes sense or not.
D.va has no known relationships with anyone else revealed so far besides enjoying Lucio's music, so she's a blank slate and probably the most popular character drawn out of the korean fan artists (no surprise there).
Aside from that the ship appeals to people who enjoy age play. Hope this helped.
Doesn't D.Va have at least some kind of relation to Mei? I think she likes Mei's blog, or something? More than nothing, anyway. I wonder why Korean artists haven't gone for Meiva much.
Actually, considering inter-Asia relations, maybe it's not much of a mystery
I wish Mercy's "blush" had been colored some other way, but damn I am so hot for any Pharmercy with their alt skins
Guess she should check to make sure.
And fall in love anyway. I mean she can't whine about Mei's boobs not being exactly the same size when not even her own outfit is perfectly symmetrical
Every ship will eventually abuse it, though I would think that it'd largely get abused by those that like doktor Frankenstein and her monster
Genji.considering half of it is done for those that are lazy/new to writing.