There's a VFX seminar going on at my college. They are looking for a script to turn into a short.
I wrote this story a while back. While it seemed really shitty when I wrote it, I think it's a bit better than I thought.
Thoughts? Should I turn it into a script and submit it?
>>68739016
pls
Pretty alright, I guess. Gimme a second and I'll read more thoroughly.
>>68739129
INSIDE JOB
>>68740568
Thanks brethen,
>>68739016
Wait, so the cops knew that internal affairs was setting them up?
>>68740723
No the cops only were there cause the cyborg army burned down the castle.
Alright, took some time to read it through.
You're pretty good with imagery, and the whole concept of people being really bored with space could make for some good humor and a nice challenge for your VFX team.
I gotta warn you though, screenwriting's a whole different ball game. If they don't care about format though, that's cool.
>>68740819
Oh no, I took several scriptwriting classes, and I have written a couple of TV show pilots to pad up my drawer and use as coasters for various drinks.
I was worried that the story wasn't that good.
>>68740819
Also, thanks!
>>68741099
>>68741156
No problem fammo, good luck with that shit.
>>68739016
>>68740723
>being a statist pig
not bad but get rid of both uses of fuck space it's edgy retard shit. Think of something else
>>68742909
WIll do.
>>68739016
>The Accordion
Why the fuck am I laughing?
>>68743397
because you are a chucklefuck
t. chucklefuck
its shit
go die pls
>>68744210
Constructive, thanks
>>68739016
EDGE
>>68739016
Ok, tahnks everyone!
>>68739016
Decent, but following the trend here. Stop the fuck train.
>>68746887
Thanks man.
