Name an actress to play the Warden.
>>67308087
>>67308123
interesting her name is?
>>67308137
Michelle Hurd
>>67308123
She looks like she's stitched together with tanned leather.
I've never seen anyone fit the description of "hide" better.
too type cast?
>>67308185
maybe younger looking.. early 30's
took 15 pages to get to Norway Prison, not too long?
>>67308225
Maybe. She just looks like she's been used right the fuck up these days.
Mummified would be a fair description.
>>67308365
yup true.
OP, why are you asking /tv/ for opinions on this shit... I saw your thread yesterday and the thread when you first posted the outline looking for feedback. Are you seriously listening to /tv/?
this is a real person... so that's not gonna work.
>>67308432
Of course I am... why wouldn't I. The entire outline came from someone here who told me to read a book called Story.
>>67308087
What about an intro summary so we know what the fuck is going on? What kind of movie is this? Some background plot information? It just some people talking about general shit atm.
>>67308463
As in anon recommended the book which got me to write the outline.
>>67308473
the plot is here:
>>67272703
>>67308463
>>67308479
The Robert McKee book? That's probably the only screenwriting book I haven't read. I think Dan Harmon's Story Circle approach is the easiest to understand, if you haven't checked it out yet.
>>67308516
Oh wow. That is the ONLY screen writing book we need to read. Rest is technicalities like format.
>>67308516
I want to do this without too much format, to get a raw version, then later edit into good format. Not saying as outlandish as Pulp fiction.
>>67308501
nigga this is the second time you've sent me to another thread. I hope it never gets picked up
>>67308516
another really nice one is this.
>>67308535
Is Story really that good? From what I've seen of McKee, he kind of comes off as a blowhard. And he doesn't have much of a portfolio, himself.
>>67308602
Yea, that good. Gives you a reason to write your idea.
>>67308588
I like that it helped with format. So after a first draft i'll fix issues using this.
>>67308577
also you have free will, right?
wow.
>>67308952
>490 pages
Now family, I don't mind long reads but why the fuck is a book on screenwriting structure this long...
>>67309032
I mean it's got everything you need. The title is what its all about: Story. There are movies with no story but huge budgets and movie stars and fx. so if thats what you want to do, then avoid this book.
>>67308952
google a pdf version before committing to buying it.
this sums it up...i think.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oR38zuKwl1w
just cuz.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-qcZ9M-QoOc
>>67309110
I've been reading it since you suggested it. It's fucking great. No bullshit, makes me feel like I've been writing blind all of this time. Thanks, anon.
>>67310242
np!
>>67310242
just pass it on to anyone that needs it.
