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What would have been a LOGICAL, canonical prequel plot?
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What would have been a LOGICAL, canonical prequel plot?
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Anakin falls to the dark side only in order to save the life of someone he loves.
During this entire event he is clearly emotional torn and could even be shown crying.
At the end he could express that he did everything for the person he loves and shown that he's not truly evil.
Only then to believe that the love of his life betrays him.
But after all of this, the first question he could ask after becoming Vader wouldn't be concerning his own well being, but that of the person he still loves.

Oh wait.
That's exactly what happened.
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The general story of the prequels made sense. It was just horribly executed with shit dialogue, performances and effects.
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Anakin's portrayal and the portrayal of his fall to the dark side should have been handled a lot better.
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>>63898480
the PT
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>dont show so many jedi, keep them mysterious and cool, dont let yoda fight for fuck sake
>dont have them whip out the light sabers in every scene, save it for the climax
>have the politics make some fucking sense
>have anakin be a problem child from the first time we meet him, he should be already a street wise hardass at age 10, not a happy go lucky lil kid who just wants to fly ships

and have anakin joining sheev make a shred of sense, like say sheev constructs some situation where it would be believable for obi-wan to assassinate padame, and then he has her killed and frames obi-wan, so anakin joins his side to fight against him and the jedi, who have already been shown to be doing morally grey things by themselves, just anything other than some vauge you might have the power to save her from dying in childbirth and then she dies anyway from losing the will to live
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The Phantom Menace, Attack of the Clones, and Revenge of the Sith
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Anakin falling to the darkside by making a decision that's short term pragmatical and understandable but ends up having dire long term effects.

You can surround that with whatever galactic politics you want but having him be a functional retard who chokes padme/is an insufferable child/massacres children etc just ruins everything.
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Oh look, another prequel hater because it's so cool to hate them. You must've jacked off while watching TFA, right kiddo?
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Have them spend most of their time with Sheev and Yoda fucking with each other behind the scenes either unknowingly or somewhat knowingly like Varys/CIA in GOT.
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>>63899543

>lucasfags literally on suicide watch
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>jedi should be morally grey
>anakin should be morally grey
So you guys would rather dark side vs light side be about the color of their underwear?
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All they really had constraining them was:

>Jedi were guardians of the peace for a thousand generations
>Anakin was a good pilot who fought in the Clone Wars with Obi Wan
>Anakin turned to e-vil
>the Jedi went extinct for some reason after Vader appeared

Attack of the Clones is a dogshit movie, but that's kind of actually vaguely what I imagined a prequel movie would be like. The adventures of Obi Wan and Anakin investigating people wielding power behind the scenes and bringing about the Empire.

I would've taken about 25% of the plot of the Phantom Menace and combined that with Attack of the Clones and made that the first movie (so no bullshit with child Anakin).

Second movie is just actually the Clone Wars and what that was, who was involved, how the dark/good side of the force played into that. Then the third one would have been about how Anakin turned and Order 66 and shit.

Anakin doesn't turn because of Padme, he slowly turns because he's trying to become powerful enough to win the war, and it just slowly drives him mad. Padme runs away with their kids before he knows and lives a few years so Leia can remember her.
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>>63899397
Man it would've been so much better if Padme was more active in the Senate, distrusted the Jedi and was the one pushing to curtail the legality of their actions.

Sheev is one of her major advocates but doesn't take the center stage, meanwhile he manipulates a highly respected Jedi (Mace Windu maybe) on the council to be more hardline with their war tactics and to begin distrusting the Republic. Mace and Padme HATE each other.

Anakin finds his loyalty divided. Mace discovers Sheev's plot but Anakin sees him as a threat to both his bud Sheev and Padme. Sheev somehow actually orchestrates mace killing Padme somehow. Anakin loses his shit and kills Mace after a crazy ass duel. Battle lines are drawn, Sheev founds the Empire in Padme's name and invokes order 66. End movie duels between Yoda and Sideous and Obi-Wan vs. Vade happen as filmed.
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>>63898480
>Anakin's life reflects Luke's
>makes the wrong choices where Luke made the right choices
>Obi-Wan discovers him, finds promise in him
>takes him away off to adventure
>Anakin's brother (or his Padme's brother?) Owen isn't so keen on the matter
>together they fight in the Clone Wars
>The Clones are the villains
>serve under Bail Organa instead of him being only tangentially relevant to the plot
>Anakin grew up knowing the stories of the Jedi Knights
>like superheroes he idolized them
>wanted to be one
>wanted adventure
>became one
>found adventure
>but the craving became stronger
>wanted more
>Palpatine feeds into this craving
>easily seduced to the Dark Side
>begins to neglect his friend Obi-Wan and his girlfriend/wife
>doesn't even notice she's pregnant
>Empire rises
>blames the Clones on the Jedi Order
>Jedi are hunted down without remorse
>Anakin hunts down Obi-Wan
>they battle
>Obi-Wan still struggling to get through to Anakin, but he's lost
>has to cut him down
>Vader rises
>basically ROTS but Obi-Wan wants no part as the aggressor
>Anakin's wife joins the Rebellion
>their children are separated and hidden for their safety
>Luke and his aunt and uncle hide out on Tatooine, Leia is adopted by Organa as his own daughter
>Vader hunts down a rebel ship
>sees wife
>flash of recognition
>but he kills her as a traitor to the Empire
>Obi-Wan also goes into hiding
>decides to look after Luke, wondering if he might be a new hope

Also the Clone Wars should begin at the end of the first movie, not the second.

But that's the short-ish version.
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thre was nothing wrong with the prequels
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>>63898480

Exactly what they did. Nothing was bad about the plot. Everything was about about the execution.

Retard pleb.
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>>63898480
Obi-wan trains Anakin, but Anakin seeks more power because he feels the jedi have too much restrictions, and turns to the darkside.
Also, hire a good writter and scripter
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>>63901267
the love story fell flat big time
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>Join me Anakin, we can save Padme
>Ok
>Padme dies
>NOOOOOOOOOOOO
>Still follows the Emporer

idgi?
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>>63898633

Shut up faggot.
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>>63901564
At that point he just needed a gig.
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>>63900296
They had more constraining them though. There was a strong implication in the original movie that Owen didn't trust Obi-Wan.
>He feared you might follow old Obi-Wan on some damn fool idealistic crusade like your father did.
Owen strongly worried that Luke had "too much of his father in him."

I think that should have been a stronger plot point. Owen should have been there, like I said here:
>>63901249
There should have been much more clear implications that Owen was more involved in Anakin's life, that he was upset at what happened, and that he may have even blamed Obi-Wan himself, either for taking him away from a respectable, quiet life, or for playing into Anakin's ego and leading him down a path of self-destruction.

What we got out of the prequels was him being shoehorned in as a stepbrother, and Obi-Wan just dropped Luke off with him and Beru almost as an afterthought.

There was nothing to ever suggest that Obi-Wan could or should be a subject of ire for him, and that Owen should have been anxious to let Luke and Obi-Wan meet.

Shit, we barely even see Obi-Wan train Anakin, or even become his friend, he just barks orders and Anakin disobeys while bitching and moaning. We should have seen them properly act like brothers. The training should have been like a guy showing off some sweet moves to his friend, then teaching his friend how to do it.

I did like the whole investigation thing, but the bit with Anakin and Obi-Wan at the beginning chasing after the would-be assassin just wasn't enough. And it was also a shit mystery where Sidious just sort of Obi-Wan along, while Anakin kept out of the picture and did nothing but awkwardly woo Senator Moley.

Should have had more buddy cop trilogy behind it. Kept the trio more involved with one another's lives. Actually been friends. Actually had some kind of fucking CHEMISTRY on-screen!
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