Two new Fluttershy greentexts were written
Hodgepodge shared the July 4 build of Crinkle Pony Adventure:
I opted to Pastebin one of the greens from hope the anon doesn't mind
What the hell is wrong with this guy's faces?
How can he fuck up this bad?
RD's looks passable, but Twilight's looks stoned as fuck.
Can't say I'm surprised that no one brought this up before to the artist on FA. It's just part of the culture there that it is taboo to say anything that could be seen as slightly negatives even if it's constructive.
The face looks a lot better anon, but personally I like the darker brown.
The mouth looks too squished and the cheek tumor is back. I know what you were trying to do with the mess and I agree that it should be lighter, but the color and shading you did with it looks worse honestly.
Alright, here is one last version without the text.
I actually pinged the artist that did this to fix Twilight's awkward face. English obviously isn't his first language so communication was difficult.
I don't know, anon. I prefer realistically sized diapers, myself.
Believable diapers are the best!
Sleepy Twi is back. What happened to the other thread, it didn't seem like it was up for too long?
I have no idea anon, if I had to guess we probably forgot to bump it. Amazing job on Twilight by the way
Well, more than just the shading (and darkness of the line). If the pyjamas really do just go over the diaper there, shouldn't these patterns continue onto the next part? The way they end suggests that they bend around and under the diaper.
That looks a lot better now. Only thing I could say is that you could mess around with the lines for the outline of the diaper to make them less pronounced. Use a lighter color, or maybe just make them part transparent so the patterns show through. It's really just supposed to represent a crease of something beneath it, not the edge of a visible diaper.
Last edit, but thanks for all the critique! ^^
I didn't know diapers could be that. Might be best not to give Skitterpone any awful ideas for his next TF pic.
So I had a thought... what would it be like to stick your hand/hoof down a pony's diaper, before they wet themselves?
>Ruler of Equestria is secretly into diapers
Why isn't there more of this?
I don't know anon, but there really should be!
>See Fluttershy shifting nervously between hooves, her back legs pressed together
>"Anon, I- Nggh - I really need to go..."
>You smile, her potty dance is always so adorable
>You walk over to her, and kneel down next to her
Okay, Shy... could you sit for me?
>"Um.. okay, I'll try"
>Shy carefully works herself down to a sitting position, still struggling to hold herself together
>You wrap your arms around her, pulling her into a hug
>Shy presses her legs together against you, trying desperately to not pee until you tell her it's okay
You haven't had any accidents yet, have you?
>"Nggh, n-no... nothing yet..."
>Her voice is barely audible, her legs now shaking against your body
Hm... well, I'll just see for myself
>You lead your hand down toward her diaper, pulling it back with your fingers and allowing your hand to enter
>Shy gasps as your hand runs down toward her privates
>"W-what are you doing?"
Just checking that you're still dry is all
>You're actually amazed, everything is still dry down there. She's really trying her best
>But you know she can't hold it forever
>"Um... how much longer?"
Just a few more minutes is all, you're doing great
>Her whole body is starting to shake against you, you know she won't last much longer.
>You run your finger teasingly around her privates, causing her to tense up
>"O-ohh... Anon... I don't think I can hold it much longer..."
>You feel a warm trickle run down along your fingers, quickly absorbing into her diaper.
Come on shy, I know you can do it
>"I'm sorry... I... I can't..."
>She's squeezing hard against you, pressing her diaper up against you and your hand as hard as she can. But it just isn't enough.
>You feel more pee trickle out and between your fingers, a wet spot forming on her diaper.
>You figure it's time to let her have her relief
Okay Shy, you can let it out now
>She doesn't think twice about your hand still being down her diaper, craving relief.
>She sighs and relaxes herself, and you begin to feel a strong stream of pee against your hand.
>You cup your hand, catching all of Shy's warm pee, before it runs down and soaks into her diaper below.
>You run your free hand through her mane, softly resting your head against hers as she relieves herself, a look of pure bliss on her face.
>You feel her stream start to weaken as she finishes up, her breathing heavy from the stress of it all.
>She says softly, laying her head against you.
>You kiss her softly on her head, your hand still deep in her diaper.
>You move your hand around, feeling how soaked her diaper has become. You take your other hand and reach down, squeezing the outside of her diaper against your hand inside, taking in the warmth and wetness that surrounds it.
>Shy giggles as she feels you playing with her diaper
>"You enjoying that?"
Uh, heh... maybe
>Shy wraps her hooves around you, holding you close
>"I always love when we do this"
Yeah, me too
I love the idea of getting changed by your wife at the same time your daughter is getting changed, too bad this is the only picture I've ever seen it happens in.
[spoiler]It also happens in one episode of Family Guy to Joe.
Open in google chrome for easy translation.
Go nuts friends.