RWBYgt Trash General #99.9: Next Thread Still Loading Edition
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CYOA Archive:
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Biggirlquest: http://pastebin.com/ATJbuuUm
Biggirlquest pictures: http://imgur.com/a/JoF8e
Carrolquest: http://pastebin.com/5PCSqu1p
Grimmquest: http://pastebin.com/NJ2NYxXZ
AnonDarcQuest: http://pastebin.com/p3ccTPJp
AeroQuest: http://pastebin.com/u/Chinote
Current Ocho-CYOAs (8ch DOT net/rwby/)
Jasperquest: res/18947.html
Aeroquest: res/17216.html
Wendellquest: res/17090.html
RASSquest: res/16033.html
Rules of RWBYgt threads:
>1. Be comfy!
>2. Read the pastebin: http://pastebin.com/UmEaBVGW
>3. Arguing about the thread isn't discussion.
>4. Don't believe their lies
first for all cyoa writers.
thank you for your work.
>>3914789
Love you too anon.
>>3914789
Second for its okay I do it for you guys
Also I like to practice my writing so I would be on qst or tg if I wasnt liked here
Which is weird cause I want ro learn Drawing but writing is the thing I do the most
let's make a story /RWBYg/
Once upon a time in Vale...
>Reply and continue the story
>>3915091
A little girl carried her pupper in a pail
>>3915098
unknown to her the pupper had dog cancer.
>>3915112
Then a Grimm spitting dragon attacked the city
>>3915138
Everyone agreed, this day was quite shitty.
>>3915193
thankfully, it was a tuesday sale at dust till dawn
>>3915253
Better get there quick before those great deals are gone.
>>3915278
Sadly, the Grimm spitting Dragon got there already
>>3915305
he bought up everything. even the candy bars.
>>3915323
He doesn't even like candy bars
>>3915340
Does anyone else hear that wet slapping?
>>3915404
that's just todd playing meat beater 5, ignore that
Bookkeeping: +3jp
Your CYOA waifu comes to existence and appears in front of you
sadly her first impression of you is how you are roght now
How do you fare?
>>3915861
"When do you shower?"
>>3915861
I'm at work and I'm dressed pretty well; outside of cool athletic shit this is probably the best impression I could manage
>>3915861
{please be one of the smart ones}
>>3915861
Poorly, because I don't have a magic dick, killer abs, or Grimm-Form. I'm comfy as hell, though.
>>3915861
>In socks and underwear
I fare poorly
>>3915861
>just got home from work
>sprawled out in my chair in just my underwear
>plate of mozzarella sticks and 1/4 of a cheeseburger on my lap
>barbecue sauce on my cheek from the burger
>sweaty because it's 70 degrees with 100% humidity
I can't imagine she's seen worse.
>>3915861
I'm setting up a slow-cook meal for breakfast for tomorrow morning, so I can eat something decent before work.
So okay I guess?
I'm trolling through the archives and I can't for the life of me find the original fourth wall bar greentext stuff
>>3916192
What is the fourth wall bar?
>>3916317
Where the CYOA MCs go to hang with each other and complain about the voters.
>>3916192
>Wendell meets the other CYOA protagonists during happy hour
>Team RASS sitting away from the bar stall
>Jefe was banned for being a Grimm
>Aero is not old enough to drink
>Alison can't find the pub
>Mari tries to hit on Aero
>HNTR drinking milk
>>3916354
>Nickel drinking Everclear, claiming it to be fuel
>>3916354
Nah, it was before that one, had dialogue and everything
>>3916354
>Jefe was banned for being a Grimm
that is racist! Jefe did nothing wrong!
also anyone up for some GQ?
>>3916376
I'll do some GQ, sure.
>>3916376
Rape is a crime
>>3916354
>Jaune is complaining openly to the voices about what to drink
>>3916404
There are no such laws in the jungle my friend. hes clean.
>>3916439
That jungle is part of the sovereign territory of the Kingdom of Vale and subject to it's laws and jurisdictions.
Ignorance of the law does not give you a free pass, Grimm.
>>3916425
>Much like Aero, RASS, and HNTR he only gets milk because 17.
>>3916461
I hear he hasn't paid his Grimm-Tax either.
>>3916354
>Jasper
>"So what really is a waifu?"
What if this faunus who is a distant relative of Neon Katt wanted your help to make a Marxist utopia?
>>3916484
Hey, now! You can skip paying taxes if you're doing it out of civil disobedience. Those Grimm dollars go straight towards the Atlesian military-industrial complex.
>>3916513
No /RWBYg/
Your memes wont work on us
We have our on memes
last time on GQ
>we are bird. we go to scout out those hunters.
>one sees us. we fly away she follows with rocket boots
>we cross counter each other and fall down and land on each other.
You both lay there, the breath knocked out of both of you. For just a moment there is a mutual understanding between huntress and Grimm.
Falling really hurts.
But time must march forward and fights must be won.
You recover first and fly to a nearby pillar. The huntress gets up soon after, hides behind another pillar.
Stalemate
Artia:
Aura: 20 (bleed -2 every turn)
HP: 20
Harvey:
Hp: 16
Ap: 11
What do?
>Claw strike: basic move 4 (STR)
>Feather storm: launches feathers in a large radius damaging all enemies nearby by 1 (DEX Modifier added) (4AP)
>Dive Bomb: From the sky launches a strong attack that bypasses Aura and strikes HP directly. Hurts evermore by 1HP (Causes 2DMG) (SPD Modifier) (5AP)
Bird song: heals either yourself or another ally by 4HP (4AP)
>something else? (Depending how crazy it is. It might take AP)
Activate: PHOENIX MODE? Used once per session. All attacks use 0 AP and all physical attacks give +2 damage (lasts 3 turns)
> y/n
>>3916461
i dont see any cops out here. are you one? come to my lair and we will discuss these crimes.
>>3916548
[x] Claw strike
No phoenix mode yet.
>>3916548
Start flying once again
Sky is our element
Then bird song ourself
closing in 3.
(also rolling 1d3 if tie)
>>3914655
snails singing papi dance in karaoke night
>>3916548
The sky is your home, no huntress can take it from you. You flap your wings and ascend, the biting wind soothe your wounds and the warmth of the sun gives you strength.
You close your eyes and whistle a tune your mother would sing to you when you were feeling down.
+4HP
-4AP
You feel much better now.
Good enough to take down your enemy.
You spot her in the open. Steam flows from her arms and legs. Spikes and chains from her back and legs anchor her to the floor.
She raises both arms upwards to your position, and they open up and fuse together making a large gun.
It charges going from blue to yellow to red, in the span of 3 seconds.
Maybe you shouldn’t be hovering in one place.
>dodge (take ½ Dmg)
>evade (dodges completely 6AP)
>counter attack (WARNING)
>WRITE IN
(sorry this took so long had something to do.)
>>3917016
[x] Evade
closing in 3
>>3916542
>>3916591
Shit I didn't pay much attention to the title an thought this was RT, sorry my bad.
>>3917016
Wait until the moment she fires, then Dive Bomb.
>>3917096
Not a problem, fly home little meme
>>3917139
This
Unless we can't
if so then
>Evade
>>3917416
Do not worry
his memes will not taint us
he has his own home, were filth very similar like us exists
did you know that in /RWBYg/ they have waifus that aren't OC? It's quite perplexing
I heard they actually discuss RWBY!
>>3917468
Do not try to alienate the other thread is all I am trying to say.
>>3917139
>>3917040
flipped a coin
She stops charging.
And fires,
Almost as on instinct you stop flying and just fall. The wind screams past you, but you do not hear it. You focus only on the laser.
The size is gigantic, you don’t even know if you are going to make it. So you dive.
You feel the heat from here but you flap even harder.
It’s close. It’s so close, it hurts your eyes!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh!!
You skim JUST under the laser and correct yourself before falling flat on your face.
The laser subsides, you hop to the nearest pillar and hide behind it.
You peak at the huntress from your hiding spot.
Her arms glow a burning orange and she is breathing very hard.
Ap depleted!
Aura -5! (-2 from bleed)
You hear static and another voice comes from within the hunters pocket.
[COME IN! ALTIA COME IN!]
“altia here what’s wrong leroy?’
[YOU KNOW DAMN WELL WHATS WRONG! YOU CANT GO SHOOTING LASERS AT EVERY GRIMM IT LEAVES YOU OPEN AND EVERYONE CAN SEE IT!]
Yeah well I got one of those special grimm. So it’s all good.
[did it leave any clues to where the others are at least?]
“nope fried it”
[…… Hurry and come back]
“Got it boss. Will return when I get feeling back in my body.”
What do?
>Edge lord: your wings become razor sharp and deal 6 DMG (causes bleed 2Dmg every turn.) (4AP)
>Claw strike
>Feather storm
>Dive Bomb:
>write in
5ap remains!
Activate pheonix mode? (y/n)
What if Dryden never returns?
>>3917522
[x] Claw strike
>>3917558
then thatch will replace him
>>3917522
Edge lord her ass
then unleash phoneix mode
closing in 3
>>3917558
Good riddance.
>>3917522
Activate Phoenix.
Edge Lord our wings then Dive Bomb for double damage!
>>3917614
I prefer Dry to Thatch IMO
Thatch works just looks unpolished
Is not like I can complain since there aren't many drawfags and the more the merrier
I say we keep doing #99.99 threads until someone finishes the meta bar
>>3917673
I agree
>>3917673
>Thatch works just looks unpolished
I didn't want to say anything about that but its true.
>>3917673
Maybe I'm crazy but I don't see it at all.
This is your chance. Shes at her weakest.
She will learn what happens when you mess with Harvey Birdmun Fall!
The orb inside you activates, fire runs through your veins and out your feathers. It doesn’t hurt it feels so good.
You are launched into the sky by your powerful wings. You fly so fast the huntress doesn’t even see you.
You stop beating your wings and let gravity do its work.
You fall like a meteor, the huntress finally sees and begins to move out of the way.
There is no escape.
Your feather flatten and your wings sharpen becoming a blade of fire, and dive bomb into her.
-19Hp
With how fast you were going and how sharp you wing was. It instantly bypassed her aura and straight into her.
You cut deep into her torso nearly cutting her in half.
Blood gushes from her mask and her eye become wide in fear and shock and she falls. Her guts spill out into the open. She weakly grabs them and tries to put them back in.
*shhk*
[artia where are you?]
She coughs up blood trying to respond only heavy gurgling comes out.
[arita? ARTIA! DON’T MOVE WE ARE COMING!]
Another voice comes out
{artia? friend? I don’t know where you went. Could you tell me?}
……
{Oh am I bothering you again? Don’t worry I will find you. We were supposed to be partners looking weren’t we? Penny out!}
The huntress has gone pale.
1hp remains
>finish her. (chance for partners to show)
>DESTROY HER. (chance for partners to show. Much more grusome)
>leave (chance for her to survive.)
>>3918221
[x] Finish her
closing in 5
>>3918221
A single peck to the neck should be enough.
Then GTFO.
>>3918221
>Leave
RIVALRY GO
>>3918221
[X] Put it in
>>3918363
no anon Harvey gay.
>>3918221
>leave
Survival is always first priority
Thatch? You here? It's Newt; I was just wondering how that Suzume drawing was coming along, no rush or anything
>>3918396
sorry you were too late.
You hop to where she lays. A pool of blood surrounding her body, the grass turns crimson and your feet grow sticky.
Her eyes begins losing their color and her tears turn red.
How pathetic, at least die proudly you scum. You thrust your beak into her chest and tear out her heart.
She release a gurgle and weakly pulls her arm forward as if trying to reach her heart.
She falls limp and all life fades from her eyes. You swallow the heart, not because you needed it. Because you can.
You take flight. You hope that her team doesn’t find you before you leave.
>rolling 1d20…….
>15 ESCAPED!
You with phenomenal speed, and you are out of sight before they even arrive.
Before you left you made sure to snag a trophy.
>gained huntress rebreather: breath through dust, gas and even water!
>hunter party pushed back 2days!
Well scouting was a success (you guess). Maybe it’s time to go home.
HARVEY SIDEQUEST #1 END.
>ALTIA OF TEAM LANE (deceased)
FOR NEXT TIME.
>Return to base.
>do Harvey side quest #2
.
.
what did you guys think? any suggestions for next time?
>>3918620
Thatch is in ocho running JQ m8
>>3918641
Tell me more about Altia.
>>3918669
Maybe she's wondering why you'd peck the heart out of a woman who's already bleeding to death.
>>3918711
At least she could fly. Who was she?
>>3918669
Altia is a freshly graduated hunter.
She was the huge risk taker of the team, and enjoyed being at the front lines at all times. Her team hated leaving her alone since she would always run to the danger. It didn't help that she was the team engineer.
She love machinery and big guns so she always has some new weapon that has never been tested out before.
After her many encounters, one by one she would lose parts of her body, and she would build new parts for them.
The only thing left of her original body is her torso and head. (her lungs were critically injured so she always wears a re-breather.)
anything else?
>>3918780
Di-did she have robot titties?
>>3918798
no they were real.
>>3918780
I wanted you to make me feel bad about killing her, but she died as she lived so I'm pretty content.
>>3918824
well there is something else, but that will come up later.
(also didn't you notice something strange about Harvey?)
>>3918824
I mean let's not mention that she was also the first to rush to others defense. Or that she would often tinker with local childrens' toys to their great amusement.
Or how she grew to bond with a young boy who lost his leg in a grimm attack whom only had a metal peg to stand on. Or how he beamed with pride over it after the other kids who once mocked him made the connection between the huntress and his own artificial limb.
Or how she promised to make him one just like hers once he got taller.
Or his immense joy every day, notching the side of his bedroom door with his height.
...Or the sheer broken feeling he'll have when he sees her team return to town, carrying with them her lifeless bloodless form, eyes shut but face still slightly distorted in terror.
>>3918886
Did I make you feel bad, anon?
>>3918857
I noticed Harvey has become more brutal. Is that because of his brain damage?
>>3918926
It's because he isn't getting the knot and he is growing increasingly agitated by that fact.
>>3918886
>first to rush to others defense. Or that she would often tinker with local childrens' toys to their great amusement.
GET OUT OF MY HEAD CHARLES!
this is actually true anon well fucking done.
>>3918926
nah hes a grimm he hates humans with a passion.
let me give you a hint
(he can understand people)
>>3918976
Harvey has evolved! Will he be able to mimic human speech in a parrot way soon?
>>3918997
(soon i was thinking of him using Altias voice to mock team LANE, or something like that.)
>>3918886
>>3918780
>>3918976
You can't really feel bad for someone you met just seconds ago
that's why you gotta make bosses No More Heroes style, take their personality and kick it up 5 notches, make everything about them be readable in the first few paragraphs, sometimes 2 extra minutes with someone makes you know a shit ton more about them
Sometimes just by showing something without saying it you can do a lot
>>3918976
>Anon
More like... cyoAnon.
...It's me...
I just like writing hurtful things...
>>3918976
Oh, right.
Jefe was the only one who could understand people. Good job, Harvey.
>>3918997
>MockinGrimmxPhoenix
>>3919022
I'd rather Harvey have his own voice and taunt LANE with couplets
>Harvey is evolving
>Soon enough he will grow more owl-like in appearance and garner a finishing-move tier piercing attack that can fire from his body
>Evolved Nevermore are Lyregrimm
>>3919070
>Harvey grows more owl-like
>Becomes a master of the forest
>One day, a small child somehow slips beyond the walls and enters the forest
>Harvey meets the child and proceeds to give a long-winded speech about their adventure and destiny
>The kid gets so bored that he accidentally mentions he needs to hear it again
>>3919161
Hoot hoot hoot.
>Going through what I have of my old computer files
>Remember I have this
Kill past me.
Kill current me.
>>3919088
Well neither you do for No More Heroes bosses but my point still stands
I mean, killing her for me right now would have been useless not because I feel bad for her, but because I wouldn't know anything else about her apart from the fact the she got some robot arms
She didn't felt like an actual boss fight and more like fighting a mook
Like imagine if you will
>She was the huge risk taker of the team, and enjoyed being at the front lines at all times. Her team hated leaving her alone since she would always run to the danger. It didn't help that she was the team engineer.
Have her just go pure berserker instead of just cocky
>She love machinery and big guns so she always has some new weapon that has never been tested out before.
Give her one of those soul eater guns that are about as big as a person
>The only thing left of her original body is her torso and head. (her lungs were critically injured so she always wears a re-breather.)
Have her start losing some body parts during the fight, making her more angry
A lot of people seem to think that exaggerating characteristics is bad but it works extremely well when you need to tell a story in as few words as possible
>Introduction to Dante (And Bayonetta for that matter)
>All bosses in Madworld (Showing instead of telling)
some I can name right now
Establishing character shot is what they call it in writing class
so from what i understand.
Jefe is a brutal power hungry evolving grimm (that has a soft side).
Harvey is bird friend who is silly but still a grimm that hates humans.
And David is in it for the waifus and to please his vore fetish.
I like this group. but when do we have a 4th Grimm?
>>3919253
When they find Peng on Todd's corpse and realize it's basically a super pokeball.
>>3919253
>Harambe the Gorilla Grimm
>Hates humans with a passion
>soft spot for children
>wants to have his own
>>3919240
holy shit, thanks for the input. Yeah i will keep this in mind, to help make the fights better.
The reason why she was so easy, was because you took her out so fast.
I didn't expect you guys to come up with a sure fire death shot. she had a back pack on her and would change out her arms for different weapons, and steady get angrier and angrier.
I will make sure to rectify these fights and put more character in it.
Thanks alot!
>>3919322
>Lolicon gorilla grimm
These fetishes are getting very specific and slightly more alarming.
>Too tired to write
>Not too tired to shitpost
Someone convince me to either go to bed or be productive and work on Mayo's progression chart.
Also
Should I make Mayo's progression chart public or just her status page?
>>3919466
work on that chart. and just make her status public.
>>3919503
Yeah you say that.
Until the oppai loli happens.
>>3919625
Then go to bed if that's what you want.
>>3919644
>>3919435
You ever watch Stardust Crusaders, anon? That's literally one of the villains.
New JQ thread.
/rwby/res/22638.html
>>3914655
Reminder (again x3) to next OP to update the Ocho links.
Wendell: /rwby/res/20449.html
Aero: /rwby/res/22210.html
Oh and I guess no one really cares but hey, here's the updated link to the MQ pastebin I posted but no one gave a shit about.
Did I mention how much no one cares?
http://pastebin.com/99ZVwJxF
http://pastebin.com/99ZVwJxF
>>3920242
I care, Dry.
>>3920242
I too, care.
>>3920242
Dry I don't even follow your quest and I know people care
stuff happening? I would offer my shoulder but I'm terrible at doing it
Give a CYOA character a weapon type from Dark Souls.
>Sword, and Shield
>Curved Sword
>Katana
>Dagger
>Halberd
>Spear
>Axe
>Hammer
>Greatsword
>Ultra Greatsword
>Sorcery
>Miracles
>Pyromancy
Hullo lads and ladettes, anyone for tennis? By which I mean adventures and the sort.
As before:
[ ] CQ (requires determining Alison's semblancefirst)
[ ] NQ (requires determining whether to rollback the last choice(s) of #4)
[ ] BQ (requires nothing! It's nonsense anyway)
[ ] KQ (requires...determining Cinder's personality? Maybe?)
[ ] Other
I'm having lunch now but I'll be good to go in a bit. Might have interruptions today, but hopefully not...
>>3923036
CQ>NQ
>>3923036
>[ ] CQ
Are we choosing from a given set of Semblances or coming up with ideas
>>3923111
Either way it's probably going to be 4-5 posts worth of implied/explicit yuri.
>>3923036
Personally I'm in the mood for Ali; though if others feel like we've gotten a lot of her lately I can't blame them
>>3923147
I seem to be the only person that prefers NQ so you could be wrong.
>>3923067
>>3923111
>>3923147
Looks like it's CQ then. Need a bit to write something for the semblance choice...
>>3923045
>KQ
I honestly didn't expect anyone to be interested in continuing it. Might I ask why?
>>3923129
>Either way it's probably going to be 4-5 posts worth of implied/explicit yuri.
You say that like it's a bad thing...but I suppose I have been overdoing it lately. I wasn't going to go overboard for this session, if only because Jackie doesn't canonically feel anything other than contempt for Alison...at the moment anyway.
>>3923154
I think the last session may have legitimately put people off. Whoops...
>>3923208
Also, for fairness' sake: Should I make the semblance options cryptic, or should I just state what they do?
>>3923111
>Are we choosing from a given set of Semblances or coming up with ideas
I was going to suggest options based on the brainstorming session from last time.
Although, if you guys fancy making one up between yourselves, please feel free. Alison is your character to play, so you should get the final say on her ability.
>>3923255
state what they do
>>3923255
State what they do.
>>3923267
I had this one idea about a Semblance of "sharing the madness" which would function as her sending thought at other people; either to confuse enemies by mixing them up with contradictory alien thought in the heat of battle, or by coordinating teammates by serving as a one-way communication nexus.
I will admit, this was based on the idea of Alison accidently broadcasting the nth dream to all her friends in her sleep, and general antics of her sending private thoughts unintentionally. Any and all actual combat capabilities of this ability were secondary the my main lewd intent
>>3923208
Dunno, I thought it would be interesting to see a Canon character quest.
So the options are as follows:
[ ] Dreamwalk:
Enables Alison to enter the dreams of others, revealing their innermost thoughts that even they might not fully understand. Alison can also use her presence in the dream to alter it, which may have varying-length term effects on the one effected.
Whilst powerful, it might be difficult for Alison to make sense of the dream, and even harder for her to make changes to get the results she wants.
Can be used on someone even if they're awake, but the effect will cause both Alison and her target to lose practical consciousness throughout the effect.
>>3923379
[ ] Improbable Revisionism:
Enables Alison to effectively cancel out an action or event (scale heavily restricted) and replace it with an entire arbitrary alternative.
For example, if Alison were to receive a deadly attack, she could cancel it out and substitute the event with another. However, Alison herself has absolutely no control over what the alternative event may be, and it could very well be an even more undesirable result.
It's worth emphasising that the end result is ENTIRELY arbitrary, and Alison herself may not remain in the same place (or possibly time...) she was when she activates it.
Length of even is restricted to five seconds; range with space is restricted to approximately one meter around Alison's person. (maybe be changed depending on growth)
(Might be too OP)
>>3923379
(also, I'm aware that this one is a bit close to Mari's semblance, which is why I wasn't originally going to suggest it)
>>3923440
[ ] Density
Alison can change her own density at will - the most immediate effect being to make herself larger or smaller - however she will retain the same mass regardless. If used correctly, Alison can easily make herself a much smaller target in the middle of combat, or increase her size for intimidation or distraction purposes.
Her proportions will remain consistent regardless (may be possible to adjust this depending on growth)
>>3923440
(also, the improbably event may actually summon something or call it into existence - I kind of fused the 'random summon' suggestion into the causality one. I hope whoever suggested it doesn't mind)
>>3923495
[ ] Skill Tracer
Once Alison has made contact with another person, she can (for a certain length of time), anticipate the actions of others through their aura transmission. She can only effectively focus on one person at a time - trying to use it on two people at once could incapacitate Alison, and rapidly switching back and forth between more than one person could cause her to loose all functional focus.
Initially restricted to reading one second in advance. With growth, Alison can potentially mimic the movements herself, so long as they are purely auric or skill-based (i.e. not semblance or weapon based) and that she herself is physically capable of performing the action.
(again, might be kind of OP)
>>3923532
[ ] Mental Projection:
Within a certain sphere of effect, Alison is able to project her thoughts into the minds of those around her. In combat, this enables her to potentially distract or confuse her opponent; however, Alison must choose her projected thoughts carefully, as this method requires significant concentration - it's possible that Alison may herself be too involved in using the technique, only for it to not distract her opponent, leaving her vulnerable.
Alison can control the range of the effective sphere (within reason), but cannot control who she broadcasts to - anyone within the sphere will be affected unconditionally.
Sphere size range is one millimeter from Alison (minimum) to fifty meters (maximum). Can be changed with growth.
(modification of >>3923324)
>>3923570
[ ] Suggestion
Simply put, mind control on the subconscious level. Within a certain degree, Alison is able to alter the subconscious thoughts of her target. Similar to Dreamwalk, but does not require manipulation of the dream or losing consciousness - but unlike the Dreamwalk, Alison cannot completely adjust the thought process immediately - the Suggestion must be applied regularly over a certain period of time in order to take full effect.
Cannot affect the persons conscious (active) thoughts. Can still be used as a distraction technique in battle, but effective control on the first attempt is impossible (can be altered with growth)
Current requirement - for Suggestion on one person, at least five times over the course of a single day.
(Might be too OP or renders Dreamwalk pointless...might need to consider that...)
>>3923608
Give her Sao's waking nightmare
>>3923342
Yeah, I thought it'd be fun to write for a canon character, but I actually found it really tough making sure I was keeping Cinder relatively in-character. It's the main reason I don't try to write serious fanfiction. I suppose it'd be easier if it went the way of something like 4Q and Cinder's personality became more subject to the voters...might be something to consider...
>>3923616
Did I end up ripping off another CYOA semblance? Man, I really suck at this stuff sometimes.
>>3923608
Dreamwalk >Revisionism > Density > Tracer > Projection > Suggestion
If you think it's too OP, just increase aura drain so it has to be used with great care
>>3923629
Pretty sure you didn't. Sao's semblance is mindfuckery to the point of catatonia.
>>3923651
>thatch gave her one of the most OP semblances
>dies early on
>>3923651
Well, I didn't want to give Alison anything too broken...mindfuckery is doable though. Projection, Dreamwalk or Suggestion could probably reach that kind of level at some point.
>>3923632
>Post order
Coincidence? Also, I don't think Dreamwalk is particularly OP, it's only viable in combat where there's only one opponent, or if Alison has at least one ally on hand to keep an eye on her unconscious body.
>>3923695
I'd keep an eye on her unconscious body :^)
>>3923821
>squish
>>3923821
Cheeky.
Also, anyone else feeling like voting? I can keep it open for a while, if people have gone to sleep...or I can just continue the fight as it was, but the semblance will have to be omitted until it's concluded.
>>3923608
I'm gonna vote for density with mental projection as second place. A lot of those seem irresponsibly dangerous in the wrong hands, so I'd prefer to avoid some of the crazier ones.
>>3923924
Well, in the last session, I got the gist that people preferred a more fluffy approach to the serious stuff (combat, etc.), and honestly, I don't think I'd do a good job of managing rolls, stats, etc. I've never actually GM'd properly, I've only been a proper role-playing session maybe three or four times...and I was drunk.
That's not to say I'd make the decisions made have no real consequences (it'd probably be too boring that way), but I wouldn't want them to be too dire either. I know I made it look like Nickel got a bad end before, but I wanted NQ to be a bit different from CQ. Plus, Nickel didn't actually get a bad end, it's just an abrupt change of events.
Basically, regardless of what you pick, Alison should get through just fine. You'd have to actively make a terrible decision for something bad to happen to her, I wouldn't let it happen by RNG. Worst case scenario is that she gets put in an even more embarrassing situation than ever before. If I can think of something...
So yeah, don't worry about the more dangerous ones. I'm not going to have Alison implode or get sent to a Lovecraftian dimension. Maybe a Lovecraftian dimension where the Dark Gods can only be sated by girls holding hands, or something.
Sure has gotten quiet...might just post something for NQ in the meantime...
Volume 4 is starting October 22nd
>>3924154
[UrJounal.exe /run]
[Executing…]
[Notification: Signed audio file detected in main memory – Signature decrypted: ‘Data Log: Scouting Unit B-349Y’ Please select from the following:]
[ ] [Playback
[ ] [Delete]
>>3924310
>maybe we share the same taste and you ordered it according to your own taste?
Nah, I just wrote it in the order of appearance in the previous session.
>Playback
Righto...
>>3924229
[UrJounal: Initiating data playback]
[UrJournal: ‘Data Log: Scouting Unit B-349Y’ /run]
[Log #1]
“Is this thing even on? There’s no indicator…dammit, why does Atlas app support have to be so fuc[DATA EXPUNGED]
[Log #2]
“…Finally. Okay. This is Log #2 of Scouting Unit B-349Y, currently dispatched on reconnaissance operation Delta-5 by order of the Atlesian Defensive Intelligence Computer. The date is [DATA EXPUNGED] and I have…a number of things to report. Firstly, that the immediate environment surrounding the Facility is not strictly accurate to what is depicted in the Central Computer Database. It seems that the database is…outdated. To put it mildly. The statistics in the database indicate rainfall of within normal pH levels, whereas the rainfall I have observed seems to be heavily caustic in nature. The pH levels I’ve tested indicate nothing greater than 2; the rain seems to be contaminated with hydrofluoric acid and has an unusually high dustpeter content…anti-oxidising sheetoil coating would be my best recommendation for any units dispatched beyond the confines of the facility.
>>3924370
Secondly…the flora of the environment, while consistent with that stated in the database is…wrong. Ah, for fuck’s sake…*sigh*…as a scouting unit specified for multi-purpose scientific fieldwork, this is nothing if not humiliating to say, but…it doesn’t make any sense. The trees, grass, all the fungi and plant-life…they shouldn’t be able to survive in this caustic environment. But they have. I thought the damn things might have been constructs…they’re not. There’s no indication from what I’ve been able to analyse them with that they have changed at all since the previous database update…which is also strange, since there should have been growth, if nothing else. It’s like they’re…suspended, somehow. This is a minimum priority case study that will have to wait until primary objectives have been met, but I’ll be damned if I don’t get to the bottom of this somehow.
I have established a base of operations at the attached co-ordinates. The hill provides a passable vantage point for surveying the immediate landscape…and, as indicated by the database records, the facility site does indeed seem to be distanced from human civilisation. It may be some time before I make human contact…assuming that I ever do. Submitting all of the above to the A-DIC database. End Log.”
>>3924385
[Log #3]
“Okay…lots to report today. The date is [DATA EXPUNGED] and I’ve made quite the discovery. To summarise, this is largely a case study on Grimm behaviour. Upon reaching the attached co-ordinates at 0900 hours yesterday, I came upon a pack of ursi. Five of the specimens were adult males and one was an infant female. The adult behaviour is typical of a post-Eridu, non-Abomination Grimm…they are entirely dormant. The infant female, however, is not. It’s behaviour…doesn’t match anything on record, not even alluded to in all semi-expunged files. It’s not dormant, it’s entirely active, but…it’s non-aggressive. On the contrary. It’s…doting. Not just to its own kind, but even to me. If I had to make an assessment at this stage, it’s almost as if…no, no. It’s just not professional to make that kind of assumption at this stage. The infant Grimm is entirely mobile and seems capable of following me throughout the mission…whether I want it to or not. Barring any orders from HQ to dispatch it, I intend to allow it to accompany me for observation purposes. Naturally, I have taken the precaution of ingesting anti-Corruption nanomachines, as is standard for all scouting units. Please advise further if necessary. Submitting all of the above to the A-DIC database. End Log.”
>>3924404
[Log #4]
*rustling sounds*
“Um…the date is-”
{YAY, YAY!}
*rustling sounds*
“Keep still! Good grief…Um, yes. The report…following on from the previous Log, as I’m sure you can hear-“
{Yay, yay! Bertha love Bertha!}
“-the female specimen, I have, er, affectionately named ‘Bertha’, has begun to demonstrate further unconventional behaviour-“
{This Bertha soft! That Bertha hard! Bertha love Bertha!}
“…while it is not unusual for Grimm to demonstrate near-human intelligence in Abomination cases, this particular instance…is capable of human speech. Having apparently developed it after a mere five days of travelling with me…”
{Bertha want upsies! Bertha want upsies!}
“-Furthermore…alright, alright, just…come here…good girl. Again, from piecing together existing records, I believe it is possible that cases of Abomination-class Grimm having developed human speech were originally documented…but likely expunged. But for one to have developed it in such a short space of time, and one with such disposition…it seems unprecedented. I am updating the specimen to a high-priority asset, and I am requesting a further investigation into the remaining pack. My reasoning…it is possible that I may never encounter a living human. In such an event…I would propose that this particular specimen…and possibly the others…be studied and assessed for human nurturing protocols. It may be the closest thing we have left. I eagerly await confirmation from HQ for further instruction-“
{Bertha love Bertha! Bertha love Mummy!}
“…er…Submitting all of the above to the A-DIC database. End Log.”
>>3924433
[Error: Logs #5 through #8 cannot be found. Proceeding to next extant Log.]
[Notification: The following Logs have not been registered in the A-DIC database. Transferring to database…transfer complete.]
[Log #9]
“Haaa…Okay…okay…everything is going to be…just fine…”
{Mummy, Bertha scared!}
“It’s okay sweety, it’ll be okay…The date is…I’m not sure, actually. Calendar app failed. Useless thing…not that it matters. My comm-link with HQ has been damaged and I’m in no condition to send a signal regardless…so I’m not sure who I’m even talking to. Myself, I suppose? Heheh…So…if anyone else is listening…hello. The anomaly has been tracking us for some time now…I’m trying not to scare Bertha, but I’m not sure we’ll be able to make it. On the more positive side…I successfully finished constructing the program. It…could save everything. In theory. I tried running it on myself, but…I simply don’t have the capacity to run it correctly…in the end, I was only able to put a crude backup of myself as the supporting AI. I’ve embedded the code and installer into my nanomachines…but the anti-Corruption will likely keep it suppressed…I suspect some sort of Corruption is the only thing that will get it to run correctly…pretty big design problem. If nothing else, I must get back to HQ and deliver all the findings and especially the program…and Bertha. End Lo-”
*Distant rumbling*
“…Oh no…”
{MUMMY!}
*Guttural roar*
*loud rustling*
*static*
>>3924456
[Log #10]
*static*
{…haaa…haaa…}
*fumbling noises*
{…To whoever finds this…this is, I fear…the last will and testament of Scouting Unit B-349Y. I may have made…a slight lapse in judgement. We managed to escape our pursuer, finally making it back to base camp…it shouldn’t be able to follow us here…but I sustained critical damage…could barely move…and Bertha was on the brink of death. I made a rather snap decision, I’m afraid, and I’m not sure if my consciousness will function much longer…never did figure out those stupid trees…managed to get the ursi to move a bit though…It should be rather obvious, I’m sure. I…rejected my anti-Corruption nanomachines. Hehe…I’m sure A-DIC would have me court-martialled and decommissioned if he found out…fucking asshole. But…I won’t apologize for my actions. It was the right thing to do. I’m sure A-DIC would drag up all the old Corruption cases, curse me and call me a hypocrite. But I’m not wrong. The program should work now, given a suitable user. And it’s possible that Bertha isn’t all there is left. It’s possible. But even if she isn’t, she’s still the one hope I’m willing to gamble on. Sorry. So for whoever finds this final Log, as a last request from me…please take care of her for me. She’s a good girl…she’s just easily scared now…BERTHA WILL SAVE MUMMY FROM BULLIES!...shh, be a good girl now…she just needs a someone to look after her now...and so, I leave everything to you. Sorry to be such a burden…this is Scouting Unit B-349Y…End Final Log…farewell…I’m sorry, Bertha…MUMMY DON’T GO! PLEASE DON’T GO! BERTHA WILL BE A GOOD GIRL SO PLEASE DON’T GO!...don’t leave me…I’m sorry…mummy…}
*Incoherent sobbing*
…
*static*
[End of final Log]
>>3924506
Can we just have NQ now?
Also while I might not be able to write right now, what do you want?
>Honest to goodness 4Q (With the same style as the spinoffs were I drop it unceremoneously and do it whenever it's possible instead of everything in one go)
>Finish up that MiMi spinoff
I'm sorry to the guys that want Nora, It's just that the only day I will have enough time for a reasonably sized 4Q is on thursday in the afternoon
>>3924600
>finish MiMi (sexual connotations intended)
>>3924600
>Can we just have NQ now?
Well, it looks like everyone who wanted CQ is out at the moment, and Alison's semblance is still kind of up in the air, so I don't see why not.
Need a bit of time to prepare...I'll quickly give one last option for people to rollback, and run with it.
[ ] Rollback last NQ choice
[ ] Continue from end of NQ #4
Hopefully the logs will get what I was trying to do with the gynoid across better than what I did before...
Also:
>Finish up that MiMi spinoff
But really, do what you'd prefer.
>>3924769
>Continue from end of NQ #4
Really not going to make any difference at all
so just go for it
>>3924769
>[ ] Continue from end of NQ #4
>>3924769
<NickelQuest: #5 Transaction – Corpus Machina>
Sunlight…
Your eyes creak open in tandem with the breaking of the clouds, and the rays of heaven shine down upon the silent world…
Only…it’s not that silent…
{Come on! You can do it!}
{…too tired…bugger off…}
{That’s no way to behave! You’ve got to stay positive!}
{…what’s the point?...whazza point of anyfink…zzz…}
{…Haa…I guess he kind of has a point…}
In the break between the voices, you hear some strange whirring noise…it’s not entirely unfamiliar…
{…Bertha’s journal…The date is…I don’t know how to read this thing…Never mind! It’s a bright sunny day and everything is wonderful! Bertha isn’t sad at all! Not even being shot by bullies can ruin Bertha’s day! Hahahaha! Ha…ha…}
The overly enthusiastic voice dies seems to deflate, now only sighing in despondency. It’s definitely that gynoid that bit you…you glance over at your arm…
Yep. That wasn’t a dream…your arm is…what’s even wrong with it? It doesn’t look like it’s been turned into a Grimm arm, exactly…it’s just turned black with tasteless markings placed on it…and the panel is still there…’Grimm Summoning Program: Welcome, Nickel! Press anywhere to continue.’
What the hell is that thing? You’re not sure you even want to know…
You glance around. The ursi are still dormant, and Shizune is still nowhere to be found.
But lying here isn’t going to get you anywhere. No one seems to have noticed that you’re awake yet…
[ ] Try to sneak up on the gynoid and restrain it.
[ ] See if you can sneak away and find Shizune
[ ] Quietly try to get a signal out to A-DIC or Shizune (specify)
[ ] …Maybe the Grimm Summoning thing can help you somehow?
[ ] Other
Quietly try to get a signal out to A-DIC or Shizune (specify)
>Ask for Shizune's coordinates
>Inform A-DIC of the arm
>Calm yourself
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OD3F7J2PeYU
>>3925095
>[ ] Quietly try to get a signal out to Shizune
>>3925361
Oh, it did. It's just that I don't want to annoy people by using the extras people add if no one else votes for them, i.e.:
>Ask for Shizune's coordinates
>Inform A-DIC of the arm
>Calm yourself
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OD3F7J2PeYU [Embed]
If everyone's happy with it, then I'll go for it. It's just that last time it annoyed people.
>>3925402
ye, don't worry
Alright, so, someone in the last thread requested my madness.
here it is.
>Peng weighs about a pound. If it moved from Todd's waist about a foot in front of his upper torso in a planck instant and then physics occurred as normal from there, how large would the explosion be?
Once again I put all of it into a pastebin http://pastebin.com/wqN2H44k
Posting the shortened version:
First of all, it's not yet clear whether or not Planck units bear any kind of meaning. The hypothesis is that the laws of physics just simply don't count beyond Planck units, not necessarily that a Black Hole is created.
Anyways:
Peng moves at about 18.8 Decillion times lightspeed.
Fast enough to fly around the observable universe 2 Quadrillion times in one second.
Using the formula from the last time we get a heating of:
T = 1.54*10^60 K (102*10^51 or 102 Sexdecillion times hotter than the core of the sun)
For the following we'll use the Little Boy atomic bomb
If we say Peng is a black body (so it radiates basically like a star) ONE SINGLE PHOTON is as powerful as 1.5 SEPTILLION LITTLE BOYS (that is my kind of shotacon)
Peng's overall energy (mainly kinetic) is about 7.2*10^84 J.
So how big is the real bang?
It's as strong as 1.14*10^71 Little Boys.
11.4 Billion Vigintillion or 0.114 Sextillion Sexdecillion.
i.e. "too much shota even for Valentine"
If we turned the mass of all ordinary matter in the observable universe into Little Boy we would still have only 0.00000000000000000002% of that destructive power.
But of course nuclear bombs are horrible inefficient.
We need a real, real Big Bang.
We calculate the total energy of the big to about 1.7*10^71 J.
Yes, our Peng carries more energy than the Big Bang.
Todd drawing Peng in an instant creates 42*10^12 times more energy than the Big Bang.
42 TRILLION BIG BANGS in one little, lewd sword.
And Jesus, it's even a "42". It really is the answer to anything.
That's a conclusion if I ever saw one.
>>3925095
Sorry for the delay. Posting in a sec.
>>3925639
>42 trillion big bangs
that's the kind of number a little kid would make for his superpower
>"Well I can fly and my eyes shoot lasers 30 million times hotter than the sun!"
>Yeah? well I'm so strong I'm as powerful as 42 trillion bigbangs!
>That's cheating
>Nuh uh!
>Yuh uh!
>>3925095
You quietly try to activate your comm-link and attempt to patch through on Shizune’s signal, making sure your comms are set to internal only…
*static*
“Shizune!” you hiss as quietly as you dare. “Please come in! Are you there? Do you copy?”
The static breaks up…
“…Who are you?”
What?
“It’s me, remember? Your escort unit? P-3371? Did you hit your head?”
“I have no such recollection of an escort. You must be mistaking me for someone else. Goodbye.”
The static resumes. What the hell, Shizune?!
You try again…
“Shizune! Sir! Sarge! Seargent-Major Shikinami! Shii-cha-“
“I told you, don’t call me Shii-chan! For fuck’s sake, Unit…”
…Is she fucking playing with you? At a time like this?
“…What’s the big deal? Why were you acting like you didn’t know me?!”
“…Because, Unit, I had to make sure you hadn’t succumbed to the Corruption. I’m still not sure that you haven’t, Corrupted units have been known to retain almost all their original memories and part of their personalities intact…”
You hear a shifting noise ahead of you. You glance around…phew. The gynoid is just tinkering with…something…?
“…Well gee, Shizune, I don’t know what to tell you. I’ve known you for all of a few hours and for almost the whole time you’ve done nothing but insult me, order me around, play hard-to-get and then apparently abandon me the instant I get attacked. So excuse me if I don’t know how to convince you that I’m perfectly fine, apart from the fact that I’m pissed that you ran off on me!”
…That might have been a little louder than you intended. Fortunately, the gynoid’s tinkering drowned it out…
“…I’m sorry…”
You sigh.
“…Look. I fucked up and took a hit. But I need your help right now. So please just send me your co-ordinates and patch me directly to A-DIC, okay? There’s something I need to ask him. Please, sir?”
>>3925738
“…Permission granted, unit. I just sent the co-ordinates through your comm-link network. Patching you through to A-DIC now…”
You glance at Shizune’s co-ordinates…they don’t look to far from here…
You sigh, trying to calm yourself. You run through your playlist and put something on internal speakers to keep yourself at ease:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OD3F7J2PeYU
<You’re through to A-DIC. Copy, Unit.>
“Sir, P-3371 reporting. Our party encountered an…unusual obstacle. I may have been infected with something. My arm has been…warped.”
<…>
There follows a series of whirrs and hisses down the line…
“Sir? Do you copy, sir?”
<…Yes, Unit, I copy you. Pardon the momentary delay…I had to ensure that the line was secure. Depending on the ‘infection’ in question, it could have spread down the line.>
“…I’m sorry sir. I didn’t realise.”
<…It was lapse in judgement on my part. I didn’t take proper precautions to confirm that you were fully updated on Corruption and corresponding protocols. Well…the damage is done now. What is the status of the target? And the ‘obstacle’, as you called it…is it still active?>
…
[ ] Tell A-DIC that they’re one and the same, and that it’s still active
[ ] Tell A-DIC that the obstacle is dealt with, and that you are approaching the target
[ ] Tell A-DIC that you are uncertain about either
[ ] Other
> Tell A-DIC that they’re one and the same, and that it’s still active
>>3925775
[ ] Tell A-DIC that they’re one and the same, and that it’s still active
>>3925730
>baby BTCH arguing who's most OP
>>3925881
But everyone knows the answer.
>>3925818
I'm Back: a dinosaur story.
Sorry about all that. Writing...
Grimm here.
I have a question for you guys. I felt like the last battle was kinda of lackluster.
Would you guys like a better rematch with altia later down the line? or would you rather keep her dead?
>>3925775
“Sir…the obstacle and the target…are the same entity. I’m sorry, sir.”
Silence follows down the faint crackling line…
A-DIC sighs. Why does a computer even need to sigh?
<…I was afraid as much. I suspected that B-349Y had grown too attached to her…pet project. Though if her reports are to be trusted, it may yet be worth our while to retrieve her unmolested, if possible. What is her current location? And how is your functionality? Has the infection impaired your abilities?>
“…Right in front of me, sir. She isn’t aware that I’m awake yet. And…”
You give yourself a quick full-system assessment…databanks intact…armour is functional…your legs are okay…only your bitten arm is indicating ambiguous data…but you can move it just fine.
“…I believe I am functional within reasonable parameters, sir.”
<I see…that is very good news. So she left you unrestrained and undamaged after the initial assault…how peculiar. This could prove advantageous. Even though she is Corrupted, she may yet be docile enough to retrieve…Your orders…remain unchanged, P-3371. Retrieve B-349Y by any means necessary…fully functional, preferably. Also, I am sending you essential Corruption and Abomination details. Be sure to read them well…when you have the opportunity. That is all. A-DIC out.>
You hear a series a pips and beeps…your protocols and references have been updated…and then the radio goes silent...
The gynoid is still tinkering with...whatever it is.
You could probably subdue her whilst she’s unawares…but remembering her rapid movement from before…maybe you should’ve invested more in your dexterity…ah well.
[ ] Sneak up on the gynoid and subdue her
[ ] Request support from Shizune
[ ] …Attempt to talk to the gynoid. As erratic as her behaviour was…it’s possible she could be reasoned with…
[ ] Other
>>3926443
Your choice really
At the very least don't do a hard reset since it feels kinda cheap
4Q got away with it since its whole premise is meta enough for it to be explained un the lore
>>3926662
>[ ] …Attempt to talk to the gynoid. As erratic as her behaviour was…it’s possible she could be reasoned with…
She only attacked us because we attacked first
>>3926662
Sneak up on the gynoid while informing shizune that youre going to do just that
Uh... you know how I said I'd make the Meta Bar drawing? And that other one with futanari Marigold?
I lied.
>>3926804
That's okay, Dry. The madness of the meta-bar was clearly never meant to be.
>>3926723
this
>>3926840
Well I mean it's not that I don't want to make it, it's just that it's turning out much worse than I expected.
I'd rather disappoint by not delivering than disapoint by delivering, if that makes any sense.
>>3927237
give us what you have right now and let us see if it's pure shit
>>3926662
You don’t want to take the chance…there’s no telling what she’ll do if you draw her attention to you. Best to take her down quietly…
Over the noisy tinkering, you can just about hear her…singing?
{…Today’s the day the teddy-bears have their picnic! Yeah!}
You draw yourself up to your feet, slowly…you can see some kind of wire fibre lying near the bench she seems to be working at…you reach down and take it…
As a final precaution, you silently call in to Shizune, whilst carefully removing and prepping your shotgun…lucky that it’s still there…
“Shizune, sir? Do you read me?”
“Copy that, unit. Talk ta me. A-DIC filled me in…I take it ya going to try and take it down?”
“Yes. I have the jump on her. If I don’t radio back within one minute…well, it’s your call…”
“Got it…be really careful, Unit. I don’t think you realise how dangerous those things can be…I know I panicked before…but it wasn’t without reason. Good luck.”
“Thanks…sir.”
You creep up on the gynoid…and, with one swift movement, loop the wire fibre around her arms and legs, and, kicking her in the back of the knees, force her to the ground!
{OWEEE?!}, she cries out, startled.
…you hold her down with one hand, whilst carefully keeping your shotgun pressed against her back.
“Don’t move. Unit B-349Y, I’m here to retrieve you. You will accompany me back to A-DIC for debriefing. Do you understand?”
Her head…twists all the way around, a full 180 degrees…and looks at you. She’s pouting.
{...Oh, it’s the bully. You’re with the big green guy?...I was supposed to go see him…it was really important. But I need to look after these little guys. Can they come too?}
{Fuck orf…I ain’t movin’}
Great. She’s not completely unreasonable, but the ursi are…why the hell do you have to worry about those things anyway…And…actually…you can hear them?!
You turn to the ursa that just spoke.
>>3927372
“Hey! How come I can understand you? How come you can speak?”
{…fuggin doll-humans…why can YOU speak, eh?...not an emotion among you worth ‘avin, I swear…}
…
This isn’t getting you anywhere.
[ ] Interrogate B-349Y
[ ] Disregard B-349Y’s request, attempt to take her back by force
[ ] Try to convince B-349Y to come with you
[ ] Try to convince the ursi to cooperate
[ ] Other
>>3927388
Also, feel free to write in specifics for the interrogation and/or convincing options.
>>3927388
>[ ] Try to convince B-349Y to come with you
"See, the little guys don't want to come."
>>3927388
>[ ] Try to convince B-349Y to come with you
>>3927640
I'm never happy.
>>3927769
I'm sorry.
>>3927807
You better be.
You are an Aibike XL3001
And you are FUCKING PISSED.
Every other robot gets some amount of control in what they do, but you? You display the speed and altitude.
Now some barely hundred pounds soaking wet is sitting on you and you're just waiting for her to fall off mid flight.
What do?
[] Over-accelerate
[] Under compensate for weight
[] Shut off mid jump
>>3927388
Well, the ursi clearly don’t want to move…there’s probably not much point in trying to convince them.
You hold out your arm to the one who spoke to you, emphasising for the gynoid.
“See? The little guys don’t want to come. Why don’t we just take you back for debriefing, then you can come back and take care of them again. How about it?”
She remains pouting, slightly…but her expression softens a bit.
{…You’re not so bad, for a bully. And you’re not wrong…they never want to move…}
She sighs. There’s something slightly off about her behaviour…her tone…but maybe you shouldn’t be surprised about something like that from a Corrupted unit.
“…Then you’ll come along quietly?”
{…Use your arm. They won’t have to move, and they can still come along. Everyone wins.}
…What? Your arm?
You briefly glance at the weird display…she wants you to use it? How? And even if you did…is it even a good idea?
“What do you mean, ‘use my arm’? You gave me this thing, I don’t even know what it does!”
She gives you a withering look. It ticks you off.
{…It’s a Grimm Summoning Program, it says it right there. Just access it and you can store them as data. It’s not rocket science, you know. It’s grimm science.}
…that sounds both implausible and really suspicious…should you actually do it?
[ ] …Try and run the program
[ ] Refuse, try to convince her another way (specify?)
[ ] Refuse, try to take her by force
[ ] Call in to A-DIC/Shizune and ask them about it (specify)
[ ] Other
>>3928004
>[] Over-accelerate
suck it, Mayo
>>3928015
>[ ] Call in to Shizune and ask her about it
>>3928047
>Life and everyone else has gotta bully Mayo.
It sure is tough.
>>3928127
>Mayo is more TQ Velvet than actual Velvet
Oh, and if space becomes available, I can resume MQ. Just say the word.
Y'know what'd be fun?
Yang getting the God Hand.
>>3928235
>Giving a retard that power
Yeah how about no.
>>3928015
Posting in a sec.
>>3928015
You really don’t want to run suspicious Corrupted software…you haven’t even had a chance to check your updated protocols on it yet. You’d best call in to Shizune and ask her about it…and also to give her an update on the situation.
“Shizune, come in. Do you copy?”
[…I’m right here, dumbass.]
The unimpressed voice comes from your left hand side. You look down.
“When did you get here?”
[You said ‘if I don’t radio back in one minute…’, right? Well, I’m here. And you’re doing just fucking fine, so why didn’t you radio in?]
“…Whoops.”
[Whoops?]
{Whoops!}
[Shut up! No one asked you!]
{…you’re no fun.}
[…Just keep that thing away from me, Unit, it freaks me the fuck out. Now what did you want?]
You shift your afflicted left arm slightly, not enough to allow the gynoid to move, but just enough to show Shizune the affected area.
“Any ideas of what this is? She says I should use it to take in the ursi.”
Shizune flinches in shock, and actually falls back over, backing away from it .
[Fucking hell, Unit! Don’t just show that thing to me without warning!]
Right…you forgot that she’s terrified of Corruption. Whoops…
“Sorry, sir. But seriously, I need to know what it is. She says it’s a Grimm Summoning Program.”
Even as you say the words, a look of utter incredulity come across her face.
She turns to the gynoid.
[…You made this?! How?!]
{I didn’t make it. Mummy did.}
[Who the fuck is ‘Mummy’?!]
{Me….the previous me, anyway.}
[You…fuck it. I need to report this in. Keep her in place.]
“Sir, yes sir!”
After a moment of heated whispers over the radio, Shizune turns back to you.
[…We need to get that thing analysed ASAP. In the meantime, we need to get her back to base.]
{I’m not going without them!} says the gynoid, stubbornly.
[Oh yeah? I beg to differ. Unit.]
“Sir?”
[…Try using it on her.]
{EH?!}
“…Are you sure, sir? Is it even safe-“
>>3928497
[I’ve analysed it. It does exactly what it says on the tin…er, panel. You should be able to use, no problem!]
Shizune is grinning fiercely. You haven’t seen her with that expression since you first came across her…the gynoid by comparison looks a little uneasy.
What should you do?
[ ] Obey orders, use the DSP on the gynoid.
[ ] …Ask her if it’s okay first?
[ ] Use it on the ursi and the gynoid
[ ] Refuse, suggest alternative (write-in)
[ ] Other
>>3928506
>DSP
GSP, even. Not the Demon Summoning Program or Darksyde Phil.
So as an attempt at compensation, I'm trying to draw Aero. Does this look about right? Is there any change I should make before moving on to lineart?
>>3928506
>[ ] …Ask her if it’s okay first?
>>3928506
>[ ] …Ask her if it’s okay first
>>3928563
>touch fluffy tail
I like it
>>3928506
>Use the GSP
>"Sorry if this hurts"
Good news everybody! I decided to fuck off and skip one class
because fuck me I don't care about sound design
anyone wants me to Finish that MiMi spinoff?
>>3928651
JESUS YES
>>3928563
I want to cuddle up.with that tail.
>>3928506
Bugged Nickel Mechanics.
>>3928776
You use the DSP on the gynoid.
In an instant, the image of a fat bearded human materialises in front of you!
[What the actual fuck?!]
He jumps out of the air and starts grabbing at the gynoid.
{AHHHH!} she shrieks.
"WHAT THE FUCK, I DIDN'T EVEN DO ANYTHING YET?! I I DIDN'T EVEN TOUCH IT!", roars the insane human, as he flails around, grabbing the poor girl all over.
She manages to struggle free, and begins to make a break for it!
"AH, COME AHN! THIS IS BULLSHIT, MAN!" he bellows, and chases her down the hill, to her almost certain doom.
"Eh. Could've been worse."
[How?]
"Could've been Pat."
[True.]
THE END
>>3928953
10/10
Actually fuck it, who wants honest to god 4Q
I have enough time to pull something over
>>3928995
Of course if the guy making NQ lets me
>>3928995
Sure...I mean...
I'd prefer MiMi...but yeah...sure.
Up for anything, I guess.
>>3928995
Sure thing
>>3929025
You had 2 days in a row of your waifu
Let the Norafags have some fun
and you know
actually continue the story
>>3929051
2 days aren't enoooouuuugh...
But as I said, sure.
I don't enjoy 4Q solely because MiMi.
>>3928506
She looks rather uncomfortable about it…Maybe it hurts?
You look her in the eye. She looks back, somewhat timidly.
“I’m sorry. Is it okay if I do this?”
Shizune scoffs at you.
[Don’t ask it, Unit, it’s fucking Corrupted! It probably doesn’t even know what it wants!]
{…You are the worst kind of Barbie doll and I don’t like you.}
[Get fucked.]
You look at the gynoid sincerely.
{…Promise me we’ll come back for them.}
You look to Shizune. She throws up her arms in the air and turns, washing her hands of the matter.
“…I promise.”
{Okay then…}
You glance down at the panel. Any key to enter?
You tap the screen. It shimmers slightly, sending out ripples as though it were liquid…
You hear a voice inside your head…
“Hello. Thank you for activating the Grimm Summoning Program. Please place your summoning hand on the Grimm to be incorporated.”
A friendly-looking and informative animation consisting of stick-people and stick-Grimm begins to play on the panel.
“-Once placed, please confirm the incorporation on the panel to complete the transaction. You can then summon your Grimm at any time! Have a nice day. And thank you for using the Grimm Summoning Program!”
Some tasteless jingle fanfare plays as the animation concludes. Why.
[Wow. That was a really inane tutorial.]
{Don’t badmouth Mummy!}
Well…there’s nothing else for it…
You reach out with your left hand towards the gynoid…she braces for impact…the panel begins to flash as you close in…and…
A horrific roar cries out across the wasteland!
[…What the fuck was that?!]
{…Oh no…No, no, no, NO!}
The gynoid panics. What the hell is going on?
It came from the other side of the hill…you move to the top, and look down.
The hill appears to end in a cliff, with a steep drop falling almost 50 feet down…
But that’s not what worries you.
>>3929133
{…Ah…the Residuals…I have found them…I have found the Sanctuary! Gahaha! We will feast well tonight!}
…It’s a Grimm…you think. Not one of any kind you’ve seen before…like some kind of giant alligator…and it’s actually climbing up the side of the cliff. Fuck.
What the hell should you do?
[ ] Grab the gynoid and Shizune and run
[ ] Try and use the GSP on the gynoid, grab Shizune and run…maybe use it on the ursi too…
[ ] Get orders from Shizune
[ ] …Fight the bastard (plan of action?)
[ ] Other
