Zootopia thread: Licking Bun edition.
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New thread, post lewd drawfag OCs. Pic unrelated.
Reposting for the new thread:
Police Saga, Chapter 3, by PseudoFox!
Jude (male Judy) is convinced by Nick (male Nick) to start a relationship and follow him into a Pred/Prey LGBT night club!
This chapter is very much related to the edition of this thread...
Full text here:
http://archiveofourown.org/works/7208780/chapters/16706035
Soundcloud of the blind readthrough here:
https://soundcloud.com/user-759005115/police-saga-ch3
>>3851299
Pic definitely related
Would /v/ fuck me?
Pic related its me.
who is the best fox to gay?
Well, its a new thread so I might as well repost it
>>3851358
>moped is still alive
>he has a tablet now
bwha?
>>3851327
Mrs. Wilde.
With Judy.
Repostin' for the new thread, as is my custom
>>3851327
Gideon, obviously. He wanted a cute pink bakery.
>>3851326
/v/ would fuck anything
Excellent edition!
>>3851326
source?
>>3851327
Red.
>Bunanon watches pred after pred sticking their thick cocks inside her fox, as she's held back by their muscular arms.
>Through the tears she can see Red's face, smiling as his cock spurts thick load after load of ropey cum onto her face.
... I am so, so sorry.
Jerboas are cute! CUTE!
Reminder that you should tenderly hug and snuggle Ozzy and let him know that he is cared for.
>>3851425
The same guy who did these.
>>3851431
why
why do you do this
>>3851396
What if the thing had a pseudo-penis?
>>3851436
Would spray cum all over their body for a cum bath /10
reposting stuff
>>3851457
they have a term for that
"feminine penis"
>>3851448
I can't help it. I write and horrible, awful things occur.
>>3851431
>He leaves with them to get more hard dickings from larger preds
>He never even says goodbye
>>3851327
Gideon, because he's already gay married to Travis.
>>3851391
He should be sitting next to Travis, relaxing after a long day at the bakery.
>>3851311
>over an hour and thirty minutes long
Oh, gosh... well... I'm going in and listening now!
Thanks for reading through the whole Saga. Probably going to revise several things, but I'm glad to have it done. Really glad. And thanks.
>>3851441
Would snuggle tenderly, Marty can't have ALL the fun.
>>3851358
They're all so cute!
Shilling again for new thread, hoping Thematic Thursday anon sees it. Since various anons asked me to finish it, here it is. Hope it doesn't suck too much.
>>3851472
>he's already gay married to Travis
these meme needs to end
>>3851327
Make them both bi and have them fuck each other, then Judy in a threesome.
I'm looking for a miracle man.
>>3851431
>>3851509
I'm here, friend. It looks miles better than the original pencil sketch - I'm so glad you finished it! Really dig the noir vibe you've captured.
>>3851519
>Gideon has Byron's hair
>Travis has Byron's voice
>Byron has been with his husband since he was a teenager
Their love is canon.
>>3851534
Which one do you want broken?
>>3851509
While a lot of details are crude, I actually really like this color design. And thanks for participating in the thing.
>>3851539
Why would Bunanon need advice for that? She's been through that whole deal, what with being corrupted by the Father of the Abyss and all.
Well Alpha and Omega 2 just wrapped, come WITNESS Alpha and Omega 3
http://www.ustream.tv/channel/VWcZ5ch2Qyv
http://www.ustream.tv/channel/VWcZ5ch2Qyv
http://www.ustream.tv/channel/VWcZ5ch2Qyv
>>3851534
>not posting all of it
>>3851458
>No jerboafu to eagerly hump your cock and bask in your cum
>>3851442
Thanks
>>3851579
Is there a writefag upon a fiery steed?
>>3851586
real struggles
>>3851539
...what?
>>3851592
And now I need to listen to Bonnie Tyler
I love Saine Grey's Honey.
>mfw when im trying to sort through my ENTIRE SAVED /TRASH/ IMAGES FOLDER in order to find just the lewds of /trash/ ocs
>>3851387
Study your bunny brain out Calvin! It will make the dadger bick all the sweeter.
>>3851358
loving it, moped/vaw (i actually can't tell)
keep doing you, whoever you are
>>3851280
Whoever reviewed this thing, this is for you.
I feel good about going with the Dragon Mouth.
>>3851387
No more forbidden love? The magic is gone.
Has Bunanon been posting?
You know, there had been at least a dozen of anons asking for drawing advice.
I wonder how they are getting on. Are they still drawing? Maybe some of them had drawn something already, but they've been too self-conscious to post? And what about those who stopped?
So many questions.
>>3851668
Shine had to wear off the apple sometime anon. It could be worse.
In fact, it can still get much worse
>>3851458
>>3851586
>>3851669
Author has confirmed she's still alive a few times.
Nothing from the character.
Has anyone here called the Ecto-1 on Lyft? I think the new Ghostbusters movie is an abomination, but that's a pretty cool thing.
>>3851675
It's going a bit slow for me.
Lots has been going on so it's not because I'm totally lazy.
Coworker came back and vacation is next week so I'm hoping to put a lot more time in!
If any did stop, I hope that they didn't give up.
>>3851757
I don't even know what's going on with those posts.
I don't want it to become a thing, but I know it probably will, especially now just to spite me.
>>3851534
>It was another one of their dates, Annalise still couldn't believe this strange hairless mammal was her boyfriend.
>"Where do you want to go honey?" He playfully spanked her butt.
>"I don't mind, somewhere which serves bugmeat would be nice."
>Anon seemed positively green, he'd still not gotten used to the idea of eating bug meat.
>"Well, sure, as long as I can get a nice sala-oh god no."
>Anon had frozen in place. But nothing seemed wrong. Just the ordinary evening crowds. He kept pointing, but for the life of her, Annalise couldn't see what was wrong, just a herd of horses out on a jog.
>"They've found me. I don't know how but they found me!"
>Anon started stripping off his coat as he grabbed a nearby stoat by the tail and started swinging it over his head.
>"I'm not going back you hear me! NEVER AGAIN!"
>Anon charged the poor horses, bludgeoning them with the stoat, and when the poor stoat was snapped in half by repeated impacts, rending the horse flesh with his bear hands.
>"I GOT OFF THE RIDE YOU FUCKERS!" Anon screamed at one of the horses who had survived his initial rampage; and then he tried to gouge out its eyes as he started singing.
>"THREE MONTHS OF WINTER COLDN-"
>Annalise just muzzlepawed. This was probably her second worst date.
>>3851783
>I don't want it to become a thing
saying things like these makes things become things on boards
>>3851802
>especially now just to spite me.
I'm more than self aware.
Fuckers better throw Pastor in there, too. Get the full complement of memery.
>>3851829
>mfw it just writes itself by this point
>>3851783
I wrote it, and I don't want it to become a thing either. Look, I'll make it better.
>The sensation of the cum hitting her face made Bunanon wake up to find her face indeed sticky.
>Red had been drooling in his sleep again, and her face was covered with it.
>She tried to forget the dream, things were weird enough with the hiatus, and she didn't want to tell Red about her dreaming he'd been turned by a gang of dickwolves.
Reminder: kkanga is a cum lover.
>>3851876
Gotta get that protein brah
>>3851852
Welp, now I want to see sleeping Red drooling on Bun, and she's not phased by it
So what does the body modification scene in zootopia look like? I assume that pattern fur shaving is akin to henna tattoos, but would real tattoos happen as well? What about horns? I can see antelopes and rams carving intricate shapes into their horns for traditional or personal reasons. Anything else I'm missing?
>>3851904
>tfw the bunny bukkake image was killed for two weeks by shitty Brazilian power grids
>>3851920
Piercings.
Bunnies with piercings.
So many piercings.
>>3851629
doing gods work anon
>>3851876
Who the fuck doesn't love cum? I wish I could eat someone else's for a change
>>3851920
Tattoos are probably still a thing, for pigs at the very least.
>>3851941
And sheared sheep.
>>3851911
Good idea. We'll need to suggest it to the next drawfag out for suggestions.
>>3851920
Horn carving could possibly be a thing
>>3851920
Horn carving sounds rad as all hell.
Maybe teeth sharpening? Or dulling for preds..
>>3851959
>horn carving
this is a really cool idea. also, sign everything, even if everyone knows it's you.
>>3851979
What, can't to see his signature in the horn carvings?
>>3851920
Longer ears=more space for earrings and piercings, even the possibility to make something like pointillist figures. Then there could be hoof-carving. And the tail, we should not forget about the tail.
>>3851979
That is his signature, it just happens to look like an antelope getting their horns carved.
>>3851959
>possibly
As far as I'm concerned it's canon; it's an easy, mostly painless artistic way to express oneself. It's probably more accessible than tattoos are. Probably cheaper than a tattoo as well, since horned mammals will shed their horns every so often.
>>3851920
>I assume that pattern fur shaving is akin to henna tattoos
Sounds about right.
>>3851959
This is one of those things I could see being integrated into the movie and it would a perfect fit.
>>3851998
Well, there is a difference between Horn Carving an Antler Carving. Horn carving is much more permanent
I have a strong desire for kkanga lewds now.
>>3850947
You flatter me anon, I'm not worth all that fuss.
>>3851509
Yeah, I missed the boat on Thursday too Anon. This is tight though! I really love the jacketed jag/cheetah in the center, the silhouette style suits a catlike form.
Shill Time!
Musk Be Love; Fix'd Edition with minor errors removed and the size difference better outlined. A lewd one-shot for the Nocturnal District prompt by Metals. M/F Scent-Play and a little size difference stuff. (Kinkajou/Musk Deer)
http://pastebin.com/tc6etCZ5
QT Musk Deer fact: Newborn young are very small, and essentially motionless for the first month of their lives, a feature that helps them remain hidden from predators.
>>3851920
Would getting pred or prey specific contact lenses count?
>>3852018
She did some herself.
>>3851932
sounds hot
>>3851796
Haha
>>3851929
Do jap programmers know nothing of autosave or do their puters only have 5 megs of disk space?
>>3852038
>>3852024
you mean like bunnies with sheep contacts? Wolves with reptile eyes?
>>3852049
>(you)
Shilling revised Thematic Thursdays schedule now - happy to hear everyone's thoughts!
>3 days to suggest themes
>3 days to vote
>6.5 days for artists to create
>ywn do your best to turn kkanga into a cum addict
>>3852043
No, she had just started it, and hadn't hit save yet.
>>3852007
So it is, you're right. Just had to look it up. Horns are permanent and don't shed, whereas antlers do.
>>3852050
Ya, or for wannabites who want some pred looking eyes. Or the opposite for, Wannagrazers? Do we have a term for that yet?
>>3852057
Ah yeah, I can imagine Judy coming home one time, having dinner with him and asking when he and Travis are tying the not.
"But Judy, I'm not gay."
"You were staring at his butt for half an hour yesterday!"
"Uh, I thought he was a pie?"
"Yeah, I bet you want to stick your thumb in that pie!"
"JUDY!"
>>3851920
>henna tattoos
Fun fact, Nangi's name means "naked" in Hindi.
That whole scene. Even Nick's smug wasn't quite a match for the sheer quantity of invisible elephant vagina that they could clearly see in-universe.
>>3852105
Oh, they'd be tying the knot pretty often.
>>3852102
Grassbiter, grinder.
>>3852122
Not only that but
>I have no memory of this beaver
There are plenty of animals that could be mistaken for an otter, but Nangi has to say beaver
that was fucking deliberate
>>3852023
Awww... but you're so kind-hearted. I'd love to buy dresses and stuff for you.
>>3852102
I believe the terms were wannabite and grazers
>>3851431
>>3851850
>Bunanon felt the edges of her vision began to darken as the absolute terror finally began to take its toll
>She managed one last glance at Red in the throes of pleasure before falling limp in the arms of her captors, vision going completely black
>She came to some time later, though not totally sure when.
>She awoke in a sort of storage room, no windows, lit harshly by a single bare lightbulb
>There were no bindings of any kind on her. Sitting by the only door in the room was a small vial of a blue liquid with a note. "Drink this"
>>3852150
I kind of feel like a moron for not catching that
>>3852150
>Looking for an Otter
>Nangi says Beaver
Byron confirms that Beavs goes to the naturalists club.
handle with care
So we've just passed the mid point of the Alpha and Omega stream, and for those of you who aren't interested in that but voted for the movies in the next standard stream, I wanted to poll if we should do that stream tonight, or just stream a good movie once the stream is done:
http://www.strawpoll.me/10650591
http://www.strawpoll.me/10650591
http://www.strawpoll.me/10650591
Remember, the next scheduled stream will be: My Little Pony: Equestria Girls, Chicken Little, and The Wild!
>>3852221
I like to think she still has that cap in her old room.
So somebody narrates Zistopia and it's actually pretty decent
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1fVya_JSetM&feature=youtu.be
>Also reminder that we will never see the animated The Late Stake
>>3852105
>It's a judy helps Gideon come out and get hitched with travis episode
>[spoiler]It ends with him getting rejected[/spoilersareded]
>>3852254
F
>>3852257
>mfw I realise having Zootopia 2.0 and original Zistopia leftovers got us semi-canon AU and Zistopia comics
>Had we gotten Zootopia 1.0, comics around 2.0 happy, bright and shiny universe would have never emerged because everyone would be laughing at naive attempts to fix an irreparably broken world
we really got the best of both worlds
>>3852254
What happened to it? I mean if they gave up, it'd be nice to know.
>>3852257
>McHorn appears to spray Gideon.
>Soon Judy's revenge against the foxes will be complete.
>>3852294
But we never got to see 90 minutes of scruffy nick.
>>3852157
I really don't know how to deal with this! I've never been personally admired, I really only have my sparing writing talents and minor critiques to offer here. But thanks I guess, and I am Greentexting Lame on the ZTG map that hasn't gotten anyone murdered or kidnapped yet. (I hope.)
>>3852085
This sounds very good to me, though it looks like there's four days to vote when you said three? Just want to be sure which way this is going.
>>3852295
I've seen that guy post once in these threads a long time ago claiming that it's not ded
But he never came back
>>3852342
ah, good point, no idea how I've missed that.
A shout out to the community and ocfriends - do we want an extra day of voting or an extra day for drawing?
>>3851458
>>3851586
>>3851698
>rodent bukake.jpg
We need art of this
>>3852158
Nah, grazer is just kind of a dick thing to call herbivores.
>>3852365
I think it's better to give the time to the artfags.
So, I've been lurking (sometimes posting) on this thread for months now, but I still don't know how to do the Green Text.
Halp?
>>3852406
just wish for the letters to turn green really hard
>>3852406
Type '>' before each line (w/o quotes).
Re-shilling for the early night crowd.
http://archiveofourown.org/works/6681982/chapters/16728388
Give critiques if you wish, I'm feeling pretty down about it.
>>3852406
>not knowing how to greentext
>>3852406
whenever I see a newfag all I can think of is how many years I've wasted on this site
>>3852406
Find something that inspires you, or an idea you have a vivid mental image of. Describe it line by line, truncating the sentences as needed.
And make it cute please, we are oversaturated with lewds.
>>3852449
>the most philosophical and actually correct answer
10/10, I applaud you your wit and acumen, anon.
>>3852216
wow, I don't even have the motivation to finish this.
That's how flimsy and god-awful an idea it.
>>3852057
>>3852105
Pretty sure that they both got outed to the whole after one of them got kicked out and moved in with the others family when they were teenagers.
>>3852392
OH FUCK YOU'RE RIGHT
there's still hope
>>3852392
>it ends up getting delayed to the next 15th
>>3852023
>Musk Deer
Aw hell yeah
>>3852023
Thank you! And I really like your work too; I love scentplay, that pastebin was fantastic!
>>3852431
Why do you feel down, it's pretty nice in my opinion
>>3852472
Yeah, there's a difference between writing terrible things happening to canon characters and to OCs.
I like to think Foxes have protective countermeasures such as protective eye contacts and insulative clothing as counterpart to how Bunnies have tasers and sprays
>>3852023
>Kinkajou
Also known in the animal world as "crazy tongue" and "weird bastard child of giraffe and lemur thing"
>>3852471
I've been writing greens for five years plus now anon, I'm glad I've learned something from it at the very least.
>>3852503
Those deer are fucking adorable man, even though their legs look kind of spooky stilt-like.
>>3852505
Hah, thanks! A lot of anons seem to like scent-play, and it's honestly really fun and hot to write about. Plus lewds are strangely cathartic for me to write.
>>3852550
Congratulations! Now make porn with it.
>>3852540
I think the blow job scene isn't very good, feels clumsy and not particularly erotic, (I've never had a good blow job or read anyone who wrote a really descriptive scene) and I'm just feeling down on my ability to write right now.
>>3852658
I want to pinch that lil dewlap SO MUCH
>>3852574
i mean
when you consider what Bunanon has written outside of the character, I'd almost be willing to bet she'd be down for it.
>>3852708
Careful, she might bite.
>>3852641
>even though their legs look kind of spooky stilt-like
Some of them. Others clearly are all about Legs for Preds.
>>3852576
Foxes literally don't have the money or the smarts for that.
>>3852710
That's a fair point, but it still doesn't feel right.
I want to live on Pack Street and be a no-good, poor, trashy failure like the rest of them
>>3852392
>>3852494
IT'S HAPPENING! Post yfw it happens
>>3852763
Well, you can get 50% of that no problem
>>3852719
would it be weird if I didn't mind if she did?
>>3852763
Sorry, you're just stuck here with us. And we won't be around long.
>>3851436
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=krv7DY1kazE
I want Bogo to hold me in a headlock with my face buried in his armpit just after he finishes using the ZPD weight room
>>3852658
I've been there anon, Collars ON got me down for a while on my writing ability myself. I guess I just came around to the two-cakes argument after all, where I can still try and create even though I personally may never feel that what I made is quite the best.
That said, oral is kind of weird. I'm big on tongues, animals have different enough tongues and jaws that crossing any kind of species barrier means you can have them describe the novelty of a new kind of anatomy. Long flat canid or rough cat licks, thin ropey anteater tongues; you have options. Further, you can expand on depth, how deep the partner can take that cock into her muzzle. Don't be afrait to do some ball-play either, nuzzling, sucking, teasing with a hoof, whatever. And most importantly; don't just focus on the mouth! Arms around legs, playful butt pinches, pulling Sharla's head by her wool, letting her pull back and trail drool onto his cockhead, you have room to play!
>>3852722
Damn, Vince has been going to the gym after all.
>>3852641
Part of it's really that first time, where she just gets so overwhelmed by the musk and finds herself humping the floor.
That kind of desperation's kind of hot.
>>3852220
where even is beaver? doesn't he usually show up with like a comic or make a post about taking requests each day? did he die?
>>3852877
I can't believe Beaver is fucking dead.
>>3852841
>COLLAR ON got me down for a while on my writing ability
What, why. That is the last thing I wanted it to do.
>>3852889
I can't believe the otters are fucking the dead.
>>3852852
holy shit the brown one has huge balls
Back from work, what did I miss today?
>>3852921
Ok, we were still missing necrophilia
>>3852926
Rodents have big balls because all rodents are fuck machines. Bunnies are prudes in comparison.
>>3852933
There's an Alpha and Omega stream going on right now.
Other than that, not much.
>>3852841
I'm a big proponent of two cakes and I haven't been beating myself up too much on comparing myself to others, lately. I just feel that this instance wasn't my best work, coupling that with how I've been struggling to finish prompts that I took nearly a month ago, that makes me feel like shit. I think after I finish this last prompt, I'm gonna limit myself to green text prompts and I'm going to start working on a long-term project.
I have the plan, I need to follow through. I, luckily, don't feel hopeless, just kind of shitty.
>>3852895
People compare themselves to others when they need to compare to their past selves. Not your fault, it's some good work by the way.
>>3852950
Oh we doin' this again?
Because we can fuckin' do this again, bitch.
>>3852895
Not him, but it did kinda stand a reminder that my own writing would never be anywhere near as popular. You deserve the reaction that story got, and seeing it made me realize my own didn't.
>>3852941
>gif of that otter using the decapitated fish as a fleshlight.
Can you see the otter's cock?
>>3852895
Just about everything anybody writes reminds me I'm not a good writer.
Which doesn't mean I'll stop writing, it's just sort of a kick to tell me that I'm not good just because I get praise sometimes. It's healthy.
I think Grizz's writing was the most recent to do that to me, if I'm honest. Really all it is is a compliment to the author, not something to feel bad about.
>>3852983
Ah, my bad, apparently it was a dolphin that did that.
>>3852992
What have you written?
>>3852972
Write shipping smut, and watch the fans flock in. Or, write some crossover bullshit with smut, and watch people like and fave it all over. Like every bullshit Naruto fic ever.
>>3852933
BernieLover awoke from her slumber and drew even more pseudopenis girl, and it was just as bad as we thought it would be
>>3852959
Shit thread day then.
>>3853012
Sins not Tragedies, West Coast Smoker, etc.
I should really come up with real titles for them but I'm a lazy bitch.
>>3853044
Oh right, um... sorry about earlier in the thread.
I should go now.
>>3852895
It was some top tier smut and people are already super critical of their own writing. You just made people feel like the bar was higher, which isn't a bad thing. Those revisions really helped, by the way- I'm happy that it's gotten as many views as it has.
>>3852841
>cardiofags
>>3852964
It's a basic biological fact that rodents fuck more than rabbits. Rabbits are also two pump chumps that can't satisfy their partners.
They're also superior in every other way.
>>3853035
It's only gonna get shittier.
>>3853044
There's your problem, you need to adjust your sin and tragedy level.
Up the tragedy to make the sin even more fun!
>>3852895
Hah! Don't pressure yourself on it or anything smug, it was just really good and I wound up comparing my style to it a lot. Rather than actually using it to improve though, I just wound up moping and being like 'oh boo hoo I suck' and dragging my heels on my own writing because I felt like it was shitty no matter what I did.
I usually don't do the comparison thing, I'm generally very capable of just writing my own work and enjoying others. I think I was just in a shit mood and clung to bitterness over not being able to execute my ideas the way they are in my head, which is honestly how smooth and straightforward your fic read to me. It was just a jelly thing; when I look at some of the drawfags that have been around in various fandoms or people capable of churning out 30k word fics or something with heart and awesome pacing like yours, it's hard not to feel like I'm just ineptly slamming on a keyboard and hoping for a miracle.
>>3852960
Yeah, overloading yourself with prompts has never been good to me. I always wind up feeling that guilt over leaving them in purgatory or dropping them altogether. I only did the thursday prompt because like I said, lewds are cathartic and because I like nocturnal animals. I'm glad you have hope anon, and keep moving forward!
>>3852864
Feeling desired or having something about you that someone finds irristable is a very sexy thing. Being lusted after or desired on levels both emotional and sexual is my actual fetish.
>>3852992
This is probably the most correct. It's just a kick to the face, keeping you from stagnation.
>>3853072
Kek what a twig.
>>3853060
>implying I'm not always in the thread anyways
>implying I care
Honestly there's been enough greentext bastardizations of Bunanon that I don't particularly care anymore.
It's just humor for me at this point.
>>3853079
"Martina" called Ted Daddy when?
>>3853106
>you need to eat ALL the carrot.
>...why are you doing this?
>>3853101
Ah that's good I guess.
Have you considered getting an ao3 account? Getting kudos can be fun.
>>3853098
Source?
>>3853107
Pretty sure she's under-aged anon.
>>3853099
Also, just to let you know, you helped convince me to go ahead and do some crossdressing.
I've been in a women's shirt and short shorts all day. Going to need to change soon, though.
>>3853134
>>3852960
>>3852972
>>3852992
I guess it's just kind of weird to experience being on any sort of...pedestal, I guess?
I dunno, I'm pretty flattered but I know it wouldn't be nearly as popular if it wasn't WildeHopps, or if Mead hadn't liked it enough to shill it with some custom artwork. I'm pretty sure I owe him a lot.
>>3853072
>Those revisions really helped
Oh, thank god. I mean, I felt a lot better about the story after I made them but this is the first bit of feedback about them I've gotten. No one's bitched though so I take that as a good sign.
>>3853099
>not being able to execute my ideas the way they are in my head
If it makes you feel any better at all I had the same experience while listening to Comicanon's critique. Some of the stuff I wrote made perfect sense to me but apparently came off way different than how I intended it to and I agonized over the changes for two weeks; I could've spent months on it, probably, but I felt that the time spent/improvement ratio was as good as it was gonna get by then. I mean shit I'm procrastinating my current story because working with an experimental format about a setting I barely remember is driving me up the fucking wall.
>>3853163
>Not getting your dick wet in jailbait
Ted's not as manly as I thought, how lame.
>>3853234
Honestly the ability to Subscribe to stories it worth the account by itself
I'm heading out everyone! Next on my reading list is Baby Steps. Once my voice is back to normal, expect more Reichstagsbrand and Stoutwell!
>>3853229
Nah, going after jailbait is apparently womanly behaviour.
>>3853171
>I've gone from writing stories for people to get boners from to causing other anons to wear women's clothes
What a time to be alive. Also, womens shorts are awesome actually in cut, they really show off leg well. These tiny fucking pockets though ruin everything, how the hell am I to fit my phone and wallet in these?
>>3853197
Honestly being more low key I feel is one of the perks of being a writefag, lol. I mean, I'm pretty sure all the writefags here like and know you/your work, but you can also just chill in the thread usually without a fracas, which is nice.
And yeah, I could spend forever in the editing process and I still miss stuff most times. I got an actual editor for my latest chapter of ZT Vice though, which I think helped a lot and taught me a bunch of new tricks to be less terrible.
>>3853099
I just took on two and I just got stuck; one was a continuation and the other was a fetish piece that I liked, so I thought it would be easier. But I think I learned how to put myself in a better position to write, so here's hoping.
>>3853197
Maybe, but you wrote it yourself and he just happened to like it. You and your work are integral to that, don't undersell that. I got some fan work too, it's a great feeling.
>>3853259
make sure you get better before you record anything, CA.
>>3853300
>These tiny fucking pockets though ruin everything, how the hell am I to fit my phone and wallet in these?
You don't, Metals
That's why we carry purses.
If we're still talking r.e. fanfic stuff, then I'm still wondering about something.
So, if I have Nick going to a skank place where illegal activity is regularly happening but he doesn't notice because he's focused on finding prey to sleep with... but then he gets caught up in the criminal stuff and sheepishly calls for help because he's off duty and can't arrest anyone...
Well, I'm not sure what would happen. What do you think would happen? If like the mammals getting arrested would be Nick's ex-fuckbuddies? Would he be suspended or something?
I'm thinking of this as a ComicAnon and Chunkbot based suggestions, as a sign for Nick to prove to Judy/Jude to that he can be responsible and take a deserved hit for not being as smart as he thinks he is.
>>3853259
Bye bye
>>3853284
>Ted isn't in touch with his feminine side
what an asshole.
>>3853259
You should probably wait until you feel better before reading like anything.
>>3853220
Are you hoping someone makes this into Judy or Nick or ...?
>>3853234
You should still do it, I mean, it takes 3 days or so for them to send you an invite, so you'll have time to mull it over.
And yeah you may not think your stories are good, but I enjoyed them. I think others would as well.
(Also, yeah, intimacy is awesome. Mindbreak is also awesome. Combining the two together is hot)
>>3853159
on e621
>cross dressing faggotry
Fucking kill yourselves.
>>3853300
Women's shorts, but what about the panties and leggings?
>>3853381
no, it's my "anticipating Mead to drop the heaviest feels of 2016" reaction pic
https://hydra-media.cursecdn.com/dota2.gamepedia.com/9/91/Lycan_ability_howl_03.mp3
warning: awoo
>>3853342
Cops can arrest people even if they're off-duty in most jurisdictions. But say, he's at a legal brothel and people start doing drugs or something else, and he called it in- maybe there would be an internal investigation? It would probably just come back clean though.
I'm not sure how being caught at a brothel/sex club would prove to Judy that Nick could be accountable/responsible, etc.
>>3852220
reminder that the beaver's obsession with the otters is unhealthy and disturbed.
>>3853412
>>3853197
>I could've spent months on it, probably, but I felt that the time spent/improvement ratio was as good as it was gonna get by then
Pretty sure that's all writers. Eventually you just have to say fuck it and let it go.
>No one's bitched though so I take that as a good sign.
Yeah, between the revisions and it being great smut, I doubt you'll get anyone tearing into it. I know I completely overlooked any issues my first time reading it because I was too focused on the fact that I was turned for the first time in 5 or 6 weeks.
>>3853300
>womens shorts are awesome
I'd seriously consider wearing them around in public if I wouldn't have to find a purse for my wallet and keys.
>>3853420
Reminder that Jacob is using pastor and dream suggestions to make Beaver have an otter fetish.
But on a serious note, unhealthy obsessions are great plot hooks for characters to work through, so chill.
>>3853300
usually, the pockets are sewn up to lay flat when fitting. you should be able to cut a thread that's holding them closed in some pairs.
>>3853462
>beaver's unhealthy obsession with fixing the otters
>calvin's unhealthy obsession with fucking the badger
If it works, it works.
>>3853412
>https://hydra-media.cursecdn.com/dota2.gamepedia.com/9/91/Lycan_ability_howl_03.mp3
triggered
>>3853390
>>3853417
>Cops can arrest when off-duty
How can we be safe
>>3853513
have you tried not committing crimes?
>>3853316
I believe in you Brooker!
>>3853338
>>3853477
>>3853447
I think they're just decorative actually, there's no thread to cut. It's so lame. I guess I just need a hoodie with a nice spacious pocket then as a workaround.
>>3853395
Still trying to find panties that are, uh, accommodating. Leggings are good to layer up in though, and I wear them to lounge around in at school because my friends there couldn't give less of a shit.
>>3853390
Where do you think we are?
>>3853462
All otters are evil and niggers
>>3853528
>accommodating
Boyshorts.
Try boyshorts.
They're like boxer-briefs except you can get them in cute girly designs.
>>3853566
kind of redundant there
What makes Judy such a qt?
>>3853447
>too focused on the fact that I was turned on for the first time in 5 or 6 weeks
I will consider this an achievement, then. It reminds me of this fucking weird disconnect I had while writing it though. I mean, it's my own work so naturally it didn't get me going, but I was also able to look at it more or less objectively and think to myself "Aw yeah, if someone else had written this it'd be hot as fuck."
