Pokelewd thread 11
>Resurrection Edition?
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Gay or straight, anthro or feral, solo or clusterfuck, post it all.
Don't like what's in the thread? Post what you do like. We might post more of it.
NSFW and SFW both welcome.
New threads are made when we hit page 10 or image limit
So, I'm a bit of a writefag, and I've been wanting to go through with this set of stories. I have a premise set up, would anyone give enough of a fuck to want a look?
Fair warning for those who might whine about it, it involves anthros. Pic somewhat related.
>>2261304
i might take a skim of it potentially
>>2261377
http://pastebin.com/zrRgaVY6 Here it is. Bear in
mind some of it's mostly babble on how the
world I'm setting up works. Trying to mix together
the Pokemon mechanics in a realistic sense.
>>2261436
i havent slept yet so it may be a while until i can actually compose imagination enough to read
Ninja ninja~
>>2263745
I want to eat out frog ninja.
Looking for a higher res version of pic related.
The author has nuked his pixiv and I couldn't find it anywhere else.
>>2261304
>>2261436
Oh jesus m80. Learn how to structure a paragraph. I get you're trying to make it seem all rambly because your MC is an autist who doesn't know how to talk to people, but it's still no excuse for letting it run on this long. Typically when you tell a story from the perspective of a social outcast, try to keep their sperg levels to a moderate amount, impacting only about 1/3rd-3/5ths of the narration. You can have a character who is unable to interact in a normal fashion, but try to confine that a bit ok?
Shit thread so far, you guys are awful at this
>>2263987
Noted, thanks for the input, I suppose. As I said, it's more of both that, and describing how his world and the people in it work as well.
Wasn't shooting for the social outcast thing, though. Interesting insight.
>>2264160
Most people understand how pokemon works, transitioning that knowledge to an Anthropomorphic setting doesn't require around 3 paragraphs. As for the social outcast thing, in your very first paragraph you mention he's an irregularity with a different coloring who lacks the ability to go through what is essentially puberty. If we were to draw real world parallels, he'd be a "freak" that would be ostracized the moment he set foot in a classroom. Children and especially teenagers are awful to people who are different, and it's abundantly clear he has several defects that would make life hell in a society like his.
I did actually READ a fair bit of your fanfic, for the record. I also happen to have worked as an English TA for around 2 years. Your spelling, grammar, punctuation and capitalization are rather good, but your sentence and more importantly paragraph structure are wonky, to say it gently, and your MC gives off a vibe of both light snowflake and moderate outcast. Although to be fair, those are not mutually exclusive in some fictitious writings. While it's petty of me to point out those last flaws, as clearly liking those is subjective I will say this: Fix your paragraph structure. Out of everything, this is the only advice I can give that is entirely impartial. The flow of your characters narrative is consistently jumbled and rambling, and while that makes for an excellent structure when used in conjunction with a scene where an MC is disoriented and such, it's a rather poor feel to the reader when slathered across multiple paragraphs.
>>2260471
Almost dead thread
REVIVING FOR MORE
>>2271720
>Crossdressing
>Male Blaziken
Liking it.
>>2279651
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>>2279760
Friendly reminder that Auradog, Cabbagedress, and Playbunny should remain in their respective generals to allow pokelewd threads to keep from being overrun. If they do not have a general running, feel free to make one, as they should not go here, again lest they over run these threads. Thank you.
I need this thread to survive
>>2285916
I'll try to help you with that
>>2286240
That's a cute one
>The posting of loli or shota pornography is not permitted.
>Majority of my folder is arguably shota
fug
>>2286795
Does doneru count as shota
I feel like it kinda doesn't matter if they're stylized enough and you can't tell
>>2286795
It's not loli or shota if it's a pokemon.
Can I have a link to the discord?
>>2280475
I think it is only necessary when they things actually have a thread up, which Auradog doesn't.
Its not that bad if it is posted in moderation.
>>2286949
You could argue that anything but bara is/isn't loli/shota when it comes to drawings. The whole rule is pretty lame.
Reminder that Eevee is pure and should not be depicted as partaking in any sort of sexual conduct.
>>2289496
How can something so slutty be pure?
>>2289585
What are you talking about? There is nothing slutty about Eevee.
Now, Espeon, there's a real slut.
But not Eevee.
>>2289621
Espeon is a pure girlyboy, Glaceon is the slutty one.
CANON
ANON
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>>2260471
That turt
>>2293658
Happy to get an egg! Humans should be all group like ditto
>>2295305
>40cm turtle dong
Who is this artist and where to I throw my money?
>>2299110
artist is tush
>>2286985
I always do a double-take at how hot that pic is so I decided to color it to make it even better
>>2305457
geeze thats pretty good
>>2260471
Man, that picture is like my masturbatory childhood. Back when I used fucking WildCritters.
>>2306275
mikazuki karasu and doneru are like
my "childhood" heroes
but i was like, i forget, like 13-15 maybe when i got into furry and pokemon, i cant really remember, that's not really childhood is it
Time for a kek break
>>2308141
That trashy gardevoir makes me hnnng, I don't know why that's cute to me
>>2308141
Is there more pokébondage and public humiliation?
>>2313293
i wish there was more public use art
Here's a little something for you guys. Would love your thoughts on it.
All done on request, with the only denied one being Nosepass.
>>2316357
http://pastebin.com/JpaTGHcE
>>2316370
>No Lugia
>>2308499
One of my favorite pairings. Love to see these two heavyweight females going at it.
>>2318607
That dick is too big.
espeon is such a slut
>>2322351
Scans?
>>2322511
I dont have a scanner anon. My new purchased printer doesn't sync with my computer at all and I can only use it to print and copy but not scan
>>2322790
Fug, it was wortha shot
>>2328945
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>>2328966
Top tier material
>>2328966
>tfw you can't read moonrunes
Would someone that can mind working on a translation?
>>2331936
this is exactly why I spent two terms taking Japanese courses
now I can read 60% of what they saying, and I can type it into google translate without problem if I still have trouble
![X`]%ZFFFO4FV3ER@}$_]_FW.jpg](https://i.imgur.com/V0z7ptb.jpg "X`]%ZFFFO4FV3ER@}$_]_FW.jpg")
anyone has link for this? I can't seem to find it
Discord here:
https://discord.gg/0hKMKAQjIct9G4Wb
