The pastebin: Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu (embed)
last thread: >>48213630
>>48225726
Well, there's Conduit. That more or less counts.
Hero
>>48225752
>>48225747
Conduit is like Traveller, it can be anything. I'm looking specifically for a Fantasy setting where you can be a mage, or where the point is you're a mage
Like Bleu, if it was bigger and had more focus on what you can do beyond the class you picked
>>48225714
>get chosen for the Martian colonization mission
>only male surrounded by females
>my job is to impregnate all of them
>accept this honour
>hundreds of billions are spend to get us to mars
>refuse to mate with the girls
>reveal I am gay
>spread pee pee and poo poo all over mars
>sabotage the mission
>kill myself
Who else /mischievous/ here?
Still very much a WIP, but about doubled the content since the last one posted, so I figure I will share for the curious.
>>48225781
if you are gay why not just take the trap
>>48225781
>retrieve body
>recover sperm
>>48225806
And the latest of the main CYOA; this one is unchanged since last posting.
Let me emphasize so there is no more confusion: you do NOT have to pay the cost of a level 1 ability to be able to buy the level 2. The cost of the level 2 includes the previous levels.
>>48225781
Your not mischievous, your just a piece of shit.
>>48225698
I agree that a lot of people would consider it a terrible drawback. The problem is that a lot wouldn't. It would be like having a drawback that says that you can't use your powers to help normal people. Yeah, for a lot of players that would be an awful drawback, but for those who are planning on being evil gods anyway, it's no problem at all.
The last thing I want is a bunch of drawbacks that are really only penalties for "good guys/gals".
>>48225832
>Getting this triggered
>>48225752
>draw the summoning circle
>make the sacrifice
>utter the Incantation of the Winged Naga
Profit?
>>48225806
It's starting to get a bit confusing but I'm liking it a lot. Some questions.
1. Why do vampires lose out so many types of magic? I could see firedancer being impossible for them but the others being impossible kind of implies they're naturally evil which doesn't seem to be the case.
2. Could there be an urban fantasy option or quest? Something to make the world more interesting but keep most of those things hidden from humanity. I like urban fantasy as a genre so I am biased but hey.
3. Not a question but I suspect Blessing of the People will be used to munchkin the world a whole lot more dangerous. 10x regeneration speed gives +4 points which allows you to add Unseelie flitters. 10x regeneration is not all that much.
>>48225861
You already have a bunch of drawbacks that only apply to good guys/gals though. Plenty of the drawbacks can be overcome through planned genocide, wiping out species or other despicable acts.
Cleaver Guy!
Human Male, Familiar Face:(-10points), 17
Beacon Academy, Vale
Semblance: Fast Mover this time.
Gifts/Talents: Memory(-20), Strength(-20), Agility(-20), Intelligence(-10), Energy(-20), Will(-10).
Weapons: Melee will be a two handed meat cleaver with Collapsible, and the second will be a variable Sniper rifle and Assault rifle combo that can use dust charges (Total cost for both 500)
Items & Gear: Scroll(free), Parachute and Grappling Hook(-150) cant be too paranoid and will use the Hook in my fighting, Targeting Glasses(-150) I can only see so far to make a good shot + cool glasses, Wilderness Gear(-50), Dust Charges(-50) for some extra ammo till I get some steady supply.
Waiting on the Amazon and the other two people I may or may not be part of a team with. May the Shenanigans start soon.
>>48225948
Yes, but "overcome" is the key word. They still have to at least *do* something to get over the drawback.
A drawback that makes you not able to connect with mortals emotionally, for some people, they do not even need to overcome it. It literally will not affect how they "play" in any way. That is the key issue.
>>48225781
So you are the gay farmer guy from After the Dark?
>tfw want to write a story
>tfw no cyoa that gives you inspiration
Rapture is a possibility, but there's so much text about the houses, and I don't like rape. I just need a lot of choices available, so I can make the exact character I like, you know? And there must be a fleshed-out setting
>>48225923
1. Vampires lose their connection to the natural world, hence the loss of spirit singer. And to my awareness vampires are pretty much universally regarded as incompatible with "holy" magics, even if they aren't inherently evil, per say. I could be persuaded otherwise, though?
2. Probably not. I need to carefully balance so that this thing doesn't get out of hand; I don't want a 30 page document. More modern day stuff like "urban fantasy" is outside of the focus. However, I could probably throw in an option that makes the supernatural easier to hide in general.
3. Yeah, that's a point. Right now I'm trying to just get everything down on paper, then I'm going to have to go through again from the beginning to carefully consider balance issues.
>>48225954
>oh look another generic tolkien cyoa
>>48226015
I guess the question relates to what kind of metaphysics you want. Are vampires the result of soul corruption? Is vampirism inherently demonic, or just a regular sort of curse, or something else? Is it just biological?
Is there such thing as "holy" in this setting? Is goodness an inherent property of some magic? Does this goodness inherently oppose "unholy" things? What qualifies as holy? What doesn't?
>>48226046
To be fair, it's old as fuck and still not fixed.
>>48225974
I am stupid and just noticed I still had a hundred Lien left so I'll spend it on some Armor. Pic related.
>>48226046
>I have never read a page of tolkien in my life
>I am also completely new to /cyoa/ and thing this CYOA in particular is just as new as I am
>>48226051
Maybe I'll make it optional. I'm just leery of adding in TOO much, but I'll consider it.
>>48225974
I'll do a build for this one when someone unfucks the balance.
>>48226056
It is fixed, that's the second version.
>>48225988
Literally one of the worst movies ever. That stupid professor was pulling rules and scenarios out of his ass just to punish the female student and her boyfriend who had cucked him. Pathetic really.
>>48226090
Speaking as >>48226051 I don't particularly care how you answer those questions. I just hope to see consistent worldbuilding one way or the other.
>>48225974
History: New Arrival
Age&Gender: 18 Human Male
Location: Beacon
Semblance: Force of Nature - Gravity.
Gifts:Ferocity(90), Will(80), Energy(60), Fear(50), Intelligence(40), Agility (20)
Talents:Tactics (0)
Weapons: Variable Halberd/Shotgun(600), Collapsible(550), Dust Mod(500), Additonal Weapon Form - Short Sword (400)
Gear: Armor (300), Targeting Glasses (150), Rebreather (100), Dust Charges x2 (0)
I chose Beacon Academy because the location seems pretty nice, forests are way better than arctic and deserts.
Warm person to teammates, rude to strangers, only cares about opinions from people he values. Despite this, wears targeting glasses and armored clothes mostly for looks.
Combat- utilizing gravity I would try to speed up allies, slow and stop enemies. When I would get more proficient with the power I would use it for transportation and aggressively.
My goal is mostly an easy going everyday life while improving my abilities.
Gravity anon,here.
>>48226001
this maybe?
>>48226096
This is the updated version.
>>48226131
Yeah, and? Point costs are still fucked to hell.
>>48226096
>someone
I think I know just the guy for the job!
>>48226085
>le elves and orcs DUDE
I wish authors would try to do original shit
>>48226149
for equipment or abilities?
>>48226164
Then why not make something yourself? Anyone can be an author.
>>48226164
It's up to you, you're no different than anyone else here.
>>48225714
Medical Skill 1: 10%
The Bubble: 4 35%
Madison: 1 5% (food/cultivation)
Felissa: 0 0% (Discount administrative responsibilities)
Ming: 2 10% (communications)
Keira: 2 10% (Mechanical)
Carese: 3 20% (Oxygen)
Catalina: 0 (She's going to learn to cook and clean whether she likes it or not)
6 Crew Members
Medical
Biological
Mechanical (Robotics)
Administrative (Discount)
Communications
Oxygen Levels
Cooking/Cleaning
90% survival
>>48226175
I want to but I haven't finished building my pc yet and only have a macbook, so don't have gimp or paint
>>48226157
Sorry, I'm an incompetent and lazy leech.
>>48226172
Abilities for sure. Probably equipment too.
>>48225824
I don't get the Sustainability quest.
Why would goods need to flow freely for an economy to be ecologically sustainable?
The reverse would be more likely to be true since international commerce uses non-renewable resources and pollutes.
>>48226103
The second version was never fixed. Gender selection mentions boons that aren't there.
>>48226204
Just take the Intelligence and Memory abilities to learn what you need, and then take something you want to improve your specialization. Its pretty easy.
![1468253466157[1].png](https://i.imgur.com/WRo1qiC.jpg "1468253466157[1].png")
>>48225714
>>48226226
I don't think you understand. My problem with the CYOA is exactly what you're suggesting. The talents are fucking overpriced trash, and the stat buffs are obviously more desirable in every way.
>>48226264
>>48226204
so.... make a build that doesn't take talents?
Like, what's the problem here? That there are options you don't like?
>>48226124
Think I'm going to give Beastmaster "back" to vampires while sticking with removing Blessed One. It occurred to me there are plenty of mythologies in which vampires have power over animals.
Are there good tutorials on making quality looking cyoa's?
Please comeback author and post the last page.
>>48226125
Welcome now we just need Amazon and one more.
>>48226316
How often have you done this now? The faggot aint coming back.
>>48226316
(2/5)
>>48226195
This is the dumbest excuse I've ever heard desu. It literally doesn't say why you can't do it.
>>48226316
No, don't.
>>48225752
>>48225769
Planar Lord - 9
Shadow Warrior
Elder Lore - 8
Arcane Insight - 6
Guardian - 9
Raiser of the Dead - 9
Lord of the Inferno - 9
Angelic Pinions -7
Avatar of Ice - 11
Wolf's Run -2
Companion: Rhiannon (Need a bodyguard)
Quests:
Boss Monster (Spam his minions with my minions, support Rhiannon and get in close)
The Kyphian Mines (Deactivate traps with minions. Get them to recover everything)
Devil without a Cause (Seal him with Guardian Magic, or bind him if I'm capable enough. Failing that, water elemental spam)
A Divine Affair (Rolled 1d10, got Achaton... Err. Not sure how I'll deal with that)
Whales in the Sky (Summon minions to scout)
Always Read the Manual (Arcane Insight and minions should help)
A Peaceful Village (Arcane Insight and Minions. Maybe a bit of necromancy too)
The Fire Witch (Minions plus physically stalk her)
Incredible Vegetable (Spam the giant angry insects with minions)
Door to Door (Send minions inside to explore, then summon them back)
Why bother doing heroics when you can get minions to do it for you, I ask? Much safer in general. I'd be living the easy life if I could just stop Achaton from trying to jump my bones.
>>48226316
>>48226343
(3/5)
>>48226344
Because I can't install gimp or paint on a macbook, retard.
My PC will be working in a week, so there's no point starting one now.
>>48226316
>>48226359
(4/5)
>>48226372
Actually there is, most of the work is in coming up with an idea which you'd do in plain text anyway.
>>48226316
>>48226383
Please come back
>>48225714
I'm pathetic. I want to make a demonspawn cyoa but I can't think of any other option besides "YOU HAVE HORNS + TAILS + FIRE FROM YOUR MOUTH NOAW". Should I kill myself?
>>48226372
Actually there is retardo, most of the work is in coming up with an idea which you'd do in plain text anyway.
>>48226283
How can I possibly explain this in an even simpler fashion? Let's try this. You have a bunch of games you can play. Some of them are clearly very polished and well-designed. Some of them have some interesting ideas, but those ideas are poorly implemented and the games have noticeable bugs. Some games are completely broken, worthless garbage.
You might start up some games in the second category to see what they've got going on, but you're not going to 100% them. You won't bother touching category three. Mostly, you'll stick to category one or do something other than playing games.
The RWBY CYOA is in category two.
>>48226418
Just think it through more indepth. Why do you want to make this? What's the setting like? How do demonic powers work, and why did the MC inherit them? What do demons want? What's their mission?
When you can answer all those, you'll have way more ideas.
>>48226354
Should have specified. Mother is Vaneis, Olympic Parentage.
>>48226418
1. Start researching. Use wiki and google to learn about demons.
2. Start brainstorming. What sort of categories do you want? What kind of choice system do you want? What kind of different builds do you want people to make?
3. Make the thing.
>>48226316
>Please comeback author and post the last page.
>>48226409
>Please come back
N E V E R
E
V
E
R
>>48225752
Sir Bryce Demarco
Child of Heroes
Gifts
Titan's Might: 12
Unyielding Flesh: 14
Commander: 8
Bulwark: 9
Hungry Flame: 8
The Oliphaunt: 9
Saorna
Eyra
Ayme
Boss Monster, The Kyphian Mines
>>48226295
acheldanon pls answer this:
>>48226215
>>48226576
>>48226354
Don't suppose you want a job as a minion? Could always use more meatshields. I'll pay you in minions.
>>48226215
>>48226594
It's more than there are no barriers to trade than that they have to be actively trading. I'll add something to clarify that.
>>48226394
>>48226446
I prefer to make shit up as I go along by making the cyoa over a few days
>>48226001
I know this is a strange request, but I really do want to writefag something, but I need that spark.
Would someone be so kind as to post a cyoa that I'll make a build for and write about>inb4 Alice
no
>>48225714
After losing everything I was working on along with basically all my files of the last 4 years I fell into a shitty mood.
Any lighthearted CYOAs to help cheer up?
>inb4 personal blog
I know
>>48226619
Thanks for answering! Why shouldn't there be any barriers to trade tho? I guess I still don't understand the idea.
Also if I limit the moving of goods to only non-polluting modes of transportation such as wind-powered boats. Boats whose wood must come from sustainable timbering. Would that constitute a barrier to trade?
>>48226316
Friend, you have to let it go. The author's either not here, here but unwilling, or here and laughing his ass off at your groveling.
If he's going to post the final page, it won't be from you spamming the same shit every thread.
>>48226670
Have a this.
>>48226670
There's the Cuddle CYOA
>>48226639
>>48226655
I'm not indulging in your fetish. I read less than half of the cyoa when I made my build.
I still have no idea what the setting even is, I skipped to the "you get a level 1, 2 and 3 power"
>>48226708
Alright, this works wonderfully!
Thank you, anon.
>>48226674
I suppose the name is confusing; I suppose I should rename it to something like "Open & Sustainable", or "Prosperous & Sustainable" or something like that.
As for your question, no, that would not be a barrier to trade. Barriers to trade would be more like embargoes against other countries.
>>48226770
>>48225988
Fuck that movie! It was interesting until it suddenly took a 180° into shit
>>48226692
This is indeed comfy, thanks Anon.
>Midnight
>Clear
>Couch
>Windows
>Fireplace
>Human
>Hot Chocolate
>Candles
>Radio
>Carpets
>>48226692
I kind of don't like the fact that I cant be alone.
>>48226839
I think you can? It says any amount of companions and I'm pretty sure 0 is an amount.
>>48226770
>>48226785
Gonna post the cyoa I am gonna use to make a character build for this one.
>>48226867
fair enough.
>>48226877
>>48226897
>>48226906
>>48226001
Many have said that this would make a good story.
>>48225714
What kind of job does Angel have again? I need to know for my cyoa.
>>48226959
Shitposter
>>48226959
Butt pirate
>>48226959
She makes drugs.
>>48226959
bio-assay analysis
>>48226959
Prostitute
Any tips for handling a point system in a cyoa?
>>48226999
Keep it simple, stupid.
>>48226987
I think it was something Bio related like you say. Would it be fine if I called her a Biologist?
>>48227033
She's a biochemist.
>>48226999
Don't start with it. Get a rough set of the options you want available first. Then start figuring numbers. You notice a lot of CYOAs use a pool of points in tens (usually between 20 and 100) and costs that usually increment in twos or fives? That's probably a good plan.
>>48227033
>calling a biochemist a biologist
REEEEEEEEEEEE
>>48227040
>>48227047
Thanks, guys!
>>48225714
I'm done with the female submissives. I need 2 male ones now. Could a submissive anon describe himself?
>>48226787watching it now:Is it that the techer is dying?It seems obvious given he takes matters into his own hand within twenty minutesAlso Ginny talks way too much. She was given the "talk all the time and be a bit of a cunt" role. I'd guess the director hasn't tried directing before
>>48227296
No, it's thatthe teacher had a relationship with one of his female students, got dumped, and is now organizing that whole class to punish her and her new bf in stupid scenarios. Note how he wanted everyone to have sex together but made her bf a gay farmer in an attempt to cuck him back in his imagination.
>>48226877
Origin: Mutagen, Natural Weapon 2
Appearance: Athletic
Faction: Cult, Self Improvement 2.
Perks: Prime Subject, Expert, Training, Armor(Bio armor under my skin pic related), Charisma, Signing Bonus.
Drawbacks: Hated, Valuable, Traitor(Jim Boyce), Memory Loss(what be around for this to matter so fuck it more points), Weakness(same thing as memory loss, but no one will know I even have one). Total points gained 15.
Enemies: Fiona Dawley, John York, Derek Hall(I don't want to leave any major enemies that are a threat to normal people, hence the annoyance brigade).
Allies: Max(dog bro that's going to come with me), Hannah Caldwell(My student that I am leaving my stuff with sense I finished raising her), Samuel Mason(mentor that sees me off and gets my bonus for his retirement fund and to watch over Hannah if she needs it).
Abilities: Strength 3, Agility 3, Endurance 2, Durability 3, Enhanced Senses 2, Stealth 1, Reflexes 3, Natural Weapon 3, Immunity 3, Social Enhancer 1, Self Healing 3, Unarmed Mastery 3, Mental 2, Flight 2, Adaptability 3, Inheritable 1, Focus 2, Infection 2.
I am a retired Super Soldier that finished my fight against the BBGS, I am still in my prime and want more adventure so I called in my favor from the cult so send me to another world we Max the Dog bro.
>>48225714
Complications
Do you copy?
You’re here forever.
Eww, cooties!
Skills: Medical, Sexual (10) 14
The Station (40) 11
Felissa (50) 11 (8yo)
Brooks (50) 10 (32yo)
Anastasie (60) 9 (16yo)
Mizuko (75) 6 (8yo)
Caresse (95) 3 (40yo)
Madison (100) 2 (8yo)
Nadja (110) (24yo)
Well, this got creepier than I expected
>>48227350
huh
That's fucking retarded. Like, retarded beyond words
I'm only 25 minutes in, guess I'll be disappointed now.
I take it thecoughing after dishing out the first two cardshad something to do with your spoilered comment, then? Rather than actually mattering?
>Not including the astronaut
Idiots. Or, at least I'd include that job
>>48227385
You'll soon start noticing how he's guiding the discussion towards his own fetishes and desires, and specifically fucking over certain people. The reveal comes way too fucking late and by that time you'll be really dissapointed.
But the whole premise was retarded to begin with so it's not like anyone was expecting a good movie.
>>48227543
36 minutes in and "oh look, of course I, the Great Teacher of Absolute Awesomeness, is the Single Most Important guy, and you killed me, hahahahha now you all die lol!!!!!"
This is dumb. I get what he's trying, but it's unprofessional as hell to get this emotional.
And the whole "lol he died because brain aneurism lol you can't know this hehehe". Bitch please.
>>48226692
> midnight
> rain
> bed
> fireplace
> bookshelf
> waifu
> hot chocolate
> fan
> soft carpets
> sleepwear
Now if you'll excuse me, I'm off to feel sad about not having all that right now.
>>48227590
>>48225714
Part 1/3:
Training:
Sexual: 1 point, 0 survival
Social: 2 points, 10% survival
Site:
The Ship : 1 point, 10% survival. The pilot and the sexbot will be a great help, and communicating with Earth will probably let us request supplies if necessary.
Colonists:
Catalina: 0 points, 0% survival. Good for just pure fucking (possibly hate-fucking) and maybe for some limited domestic stuff. My sexual and social training will help keep her calm instead of constantly bitching about the conditions.
Felissa: 0 points, 0% survival. We have similar interests, and my training will also help with her.
Meimei: 1 point, 5% survival. Mostly because I like the picture and older women. Her chemistry skills will probably come in handy somehow. My training will make seducing her easy, and then we can try out all kinds of stuff (possibly involving the other girls)
Brooks: 1 point, 10% survival. Her physical strength and sense of duty will help us build up the colony, and her combat skills and firepower will defend us. Also, I love sexually aggressive, muscular women. My training will make me ready for her animalistic sexuality. She can also help keep Catalina in line if my charms aren't enough.
Madison: 1 point, 5% survival: She'll help us grow food, and will probably also help to keep spirits up.
Nadja: 2 points, 10% survival: Keeping us protected from the environment will be very important with our limited initial accommodations. Her sensitivity to touching or flirting will be greater with my training, which will motivate her to work harder.
Keira: 2 points, 10% survival: Together with Nadja, her mechanical skills will make better shelters, and more quickly. Her laid-back attitude will be helpful for the initial stresses of
setting things up. Possibility of threesomes with Meimei.
>>48227590
THE WALL
Weight Class: -40 Ultra Heavy (10', 2500 lbs)
Caste: -0 Worker
-10 Arm Extra Strength x2
-20 Progenitor Worm
-30 Extra Armor 3
-20 Shield x2
-30 Chitin Upgrade 3
-15 Regeneration
-20 Organ Redundancy
-40 Purifier
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oXp8Th41rBs
>>48227574
He's emotional because he's getting wrecked at his own game and cucked once more in his own wish fulfillment scenarios. It's really funny if you think about it like that.
>setting for CYOA is a future where cybernetic enhancements are a thing, but are pretty rare
>need character art for companions page
>every fucking sci-fi portrait has robot eyes or chips in their heads
My life is suffering.
>>48227681
It seems to me like in that situation you can just use a bunch of pictures of normal people.
>>48226877
SSA
Origin:Magical
Build:Average
Faction:The Law
Abilities: Mind Reading 2, Endurance 3, Agility 3, Reflexes 3, Self Healing 3, Mental 3, Power Burst 2, Elementalism 3(Earth), Self Improvement 2, Familiar 3, Focus 3, Directed Energy 3, Predator 2
Perks: Armor(free), Expert, Unique Weapon, Prime Subject, Training, Authority, Defector
Allies: Max, Hannah, Defected:Clone
Drawbacks: Neutered, Traitor, Hated, Valuable
Foes: Unknown, Fiona, Isabelle, Traitor:Olivia Blake
I am Wizard Cop. Endowed with great magical powers, and assisted by my own clone, a magic superdog, and the little girl, I fight supercrime.
Yes, the public hates me. Yes, a shapeshifting assassin is trying to kill me. Yes, my balls don't work. And yes, a posthuman machine bitch is trying to recruit me. But I'm a total fucking badass who's almost impossible to kill, and I've got this set of magic gauntlets that empower my Earth magic. I can even give one to my clone for synergy! We can even link hands to become a temporary hivemind, thanks to our mental powers.
We'll be fine, probably.
>>48227670
>he's getting wrecked at his own game and cucked once more in his own wish fulfillment scenarios.
That is funny. I was thinking he's acting like Quiet
>OOOOH, you picked THAT!!! WELL, that means you get RAPED AND DIE HAHAHAHAHA even if nothing in the cyoa says this that's totally what happens hahahha I can only win hahahhaa
>>48227668
Part 2/3:
Colonists continued:
Naomi: 3 points, 10% survival: Another hot older woman. She and Madison can work together on food. They'll probably be able to increase food production so we always have more than we'll need, which will prevent Catalina from being too much of a dead weight. Her disabilities will be less of an issue with my improved social skills. She and Felissa will probably get along well and help each other out.
Complication:
"Did you see that?" for 1 more point. Keira can build sensors to detect whatever it is and drones to fight it. Brooks will also have the firepower to fight it. Nadja might be able to make a radiation weapon to kill it, or Naomi could make a poison to kill it. The sexbot is probably pretty tough, too, and I imagine the pilot has some military training.
Overall, that brings us to 70% survival chance.
>>48227697
Yeah I've already started that for some like businessmen and diplomats, but I still want spacesoldiers to look spacesoldiery with spacearmour and spaceguns, or for space engineers to have spacespanners and spaceoveralls.
There's some stuff around, but it's a pain in the ass having to open like 15 thumbnails to find one usable image.
>>48227743
That's the price you pay for relying on other people's work.
>>48227730
Part 3/3:
I went for numbers, because if I'm going to be on a distant colony for an indeterminate period of time, I want a wide variety of women there with me. I've got an Amazon, some MILFs, girls
who are more or less my equals, and one "trophy fuck" girl (Catalina), plus the pilot, and even a sexbot. Some are dominant, while others are more submissive, and I'm a switch, so I'll be able to indulge both my submissive and dominant parts. I have the sexual and social training to make sure they're all satisfied and more willing to listen to me. I also imagine a larger number of women being more productive for our breeding mission. If I ever really need to relieve some stress and be completely selfish in bed, the sexbot will be good for that. They also have a variety of skills, which will be good for building and expanding the colony and compensating for the missing 30% survival chance. I'm sure Catalina will bitch a lot at first, but I should be able to calm her down, and we should be able to build things up quick enough that we won't have to put up with her complaining for long. Then maybe we can make an arrangement where in exchange for not having to work, she agrees to be naked all the time and let me fuck her whenever I want, wherever I want, without question. My sexual training will make her agreeable to that. I'll talk her into not trying to dominate the other girls, with the threat of Brooks as my last resort.
While I'm sure I'll still have to work, my role will probably be more passive, and mostly about maintaining morale. And, of course, breeding. I'm sure Naomi and Meimei will come up with
some interesting concoctions to enhance that part, and my training will ensure that they're all happy, eager, and enthusiastic.
I can't really see any reason not to take Catalina and Felissa. It's two more girls for free.
>>48227760
They're just inconsiderate.
Did they not consider how much they would inconvenience me when they drew this art?
Don't know what the world's coming to.
>>48225714
>finally finished writing down my cyoa in photoshop
>only need to put the picures in their place
>can't find any
I need realistic pictures of hot women, and a few men. Mostly doctors, business women, etc. Google isn't helping. Where do I find that?
>>48227789
The internet is literally full of sexy doctors and business suits and you're having trouble?
>>48227789
>I need realistic pictures of hot women
Softcore tumblr blogs.
No, seriously.
>>48225824
Could you make change BeastMaster Major so that the intelligence bonus is permamen if one so chooses?
By the way how intelligent can BM-M make a create?
Lastly, can spirits possess things/people? Could I order a spirit into the corpse of an animal and would it reside there until the corpse degraded into nothing?
>>48225714
Skills (+20%): Sexual, Medical, Social
Site (+45%): the Seed
Colonists (+25%): Felissa [child], Kanae [mother], Brooks [warrior], Madison [maker]
Complication (+10%): Do you copy?
Total: 100% Survival Rate
Even if we'll fail for whatever reason, our terraformed place will be valuable for the future colonists.
> making a cyoa inspired by survival horror and slasher films
> ergo using american movies cliche high-school cliques as "classes" (kinda)
What weapons could a stoner reasonably have? What about protection?
>>48227855
>What about protection?
A big dog.
A furious Scooby Doo.
>>48227855
A bong.
>>48225781
RAPERAPERAPERAPERAPERAPERAPE
>>48227823
are you a furry?
>>48227855
Weapon: Dog Friend
Protection: Unrelenting Paranoia
>>48227881
Go away.
>>48227890
so that's a "yes"
>>48225781
>get restrained by large number of women
>proceed to be industrially raped by women
>>48227920
Should I engage with this person? I know he's just a bored asshole but still. Bait is a powerful force.
>>48227883
>>48227867
Genius.
>>48227871
That's literally what I had written
>>48227823
Are you trying to fuck a dog, anon?
>>48227807
>>48227813
Problem is I'm looking for dominant women which makes the search a whole lot more harder. I need some specific pics and it seems the women into femdom are butt ugly.
It seems I might need an extra day to finish this, sadly.
>>48227823
You already have the ability written in there to make individual animals permanently intelligent through focus, though it takes a bit of time. I don't think I will add the ability to do so in mass, though that is an interesting idea for an environmental change in World of Myth and Wonder.
>>48227823
Sorry, didn't answer your other question.
As intelligent as a human for most mammals, birds, or other reasonably smart animals.
No, spirits won't animate the dead.
>>48227961
Ah because I was considering taking Artistic, catching a monkey, teaching it everything I knew of music and then...yeah.
>>48227987
But the spirits could take possession of the body and do whatever they liked, right? Or is that limited to older spirits? What counts as an 'ancestor spirit'? 2-3 generations directly descended from one's bloodline?
>>48228003
Should I engage with this person? I know he's just a bored asshole but still. Bait is a powerful force.
>>48227955
To add, I basically need a 3D version of gelbooru/danbooru. Does it exist?
>>48226692
This made me feel comfy just reading it.
>Sunrise
>Clear
>Couch
>Bookshelf
>Windows
>Animal
>Bedding
>Radio
>Fruits and Pastries
>Workout Equipment
>>48228005
I think you're conflating spirits with ghosts or something. Nature spirits can be of the possessive kind in mythologies, but not always. In this case, they are not.
And the monkey thing is certainly doable. However, the monkey isn't going to receive the benefit of Artistic. That is, unless you buy artistic for all companions using the rules to do so, and make the monkey your companion. Otherwise, it's going to learn music as well as a normal human can. Won't be able to sing, though, lacking the correct vocal chords.
>>48228009
What you *should* do is stop reposting the same question.
>>48228144
Eh, that's the first time I responded
>>48228131
>Nature spirits can be of the possessive kind in mythologies, but not always. In this case, they are not.
So when people die they become nature spirits?
>>48227728
oh, this keeps getting worse and worse
>If I don't get to have sex with the girls, everyone has to die!
Since there's obviously no real choice between a gun and being extremely rich, let's just say that picking the gun, the knives, the vehicles, etc, gives you more than just the item. It gives you access to reliable black market contacts that can get you that item along with everything that item needs to function.
>>48228206
Still not worth it. You'd be better off treating "perks" like wealth and influence as a different thing from "gear" like guns, armor, and upgrades.
>>48228131
>>48227987
>>48227961
In the DLC you mentioned that the Empire Quest only works for a human empire. Would you consider adding another quest/changing it so that Empire would count also/only the conquering of the entire world and/or the unification of peoples of every single race, tribe, kingdom etc into one(my) empire whether or not the PC is still human by the end?
>>48225824
There should be a power to allow for making magic items/transmuting stuff. Like ALchemy of some kind.
>>48228245
Not the author btw. Putting the wealth and influence perks in a 'what makes you relevant' section might be a good idea. I'd still make the single items work less like a single purchase and more reliable contacts that can get you the chosen item and the necessary periphery.
>>48225824
December 17, 1620, Plymouth Harbor, aboard the Mayflower
Working Man
Mental Upgrades:
Genius 2 [6/100]
Memory of the Ages 2 [13/100]
Polyglot [18/100]
Gift of Gab [23/100]
Economist [28/100]
SEP Field [33/100]
Physical Upgrades:
Strength & Speed 1 [35/100]
Regeneration 3 [43/100]
Pain Control [45/100]
Non-Reactor [47/100]
Diet 2 [52/100]
Iron Gut [53/100]
Sanitary Convenience 2 [57/100]
Impervious 3 [66/100]
Endurance 2 [73/100]
Super Senses 1 [75/100]
Temperature Tolerance 3 [84/100]
Supernatural Gifts:
Shapeshifting, Minor [89/100]
Company:
A Companion [91/100] (Floating Slot)
A Shared Gift
-SEP Field [92/100]
-Shapeshifting, Minor [93/100]
-Memory of the Ages 2 [95/100]
Items:
Book of Knowledge [100/100]
As terrible as it might sound, I think I'll be saving my companion slot for someone from a time where bathing wasn't considered sinful or whatever. If not, I'd feel obligated to spend more points on upgrades like Sanitary Convenience or Diet, which aren't really necessary for people in modern times. No, I'll just deal with having a few short term wives with dubious hygiene, and then take my time finding the perfect companion in the post-WW2 era.
Waifus aside, the plan is to use the influence I'll have gained as an original settler to shape the foundations of this country. America will look very different by the time we reach the 2000's again.
>>48228503
>America will look very different
how?
>>48225714
PICK A CYOA. EVERY ANON WHO EVER POSTED ON CYOAG GETS TRANSPORTED TO THAT CYOA. ONLY YOU GET TO MAKE A BUILD. THEY ALL KNOW WHO YOU ARE. WHICH CYOA DO YOU PICK?
Rolled 3 (1d4)
>>48225954
>>48228541
This one.
>>48228541
Do I know who they are
>>48228545
I'm going to roll for this, then make my choices in the post I am going to link.
>>48228541Girly Curse.
Basically nothing changes for anyone else ('cept they suddenly know who I am), and Iget to be a cute girl with a magic-using waifu.
>>48228592
YES AND NO. TECHNICALLY YOU DONT BUT THE SMELL OF DESPERATION IS A PRETTY BIG GIVEAWAY.
>>48228616
Ok, that's pretty lame. If I knew who they were I would just pick Rapture.
I guess I would just pick magical academy so others don't murder me out of spite one day.
>>48228603
>[6]: Music
I like it. I can play music 24/7 in my home and get a few charges a day for free. I can also hum throughout the day for some bonus charges. Easy stuff.
>00-04
>03: Memory Gap
Damm, pretty useless shit.
>Magic Missile
>Tilt
>Staff
I wish I had more useful magic spells. Shit.
>>48228688
>Rapture
You'd be the only person who made a build, ergo the only one who actually goes to the school.
So no, you sadly don't get to rape completely defenseless people.
>>48228525
With all my mental gifts as well as the Book of Knowledge, I'm prescient as fuck. I can shape future events and/or laws years before they take place or are relevant.
For instance, how hard would anyone fight against laws that are blatantly against the development of car culture, centuries before anyone has even dreamed of the invention of the automobile?
Additions since last posting: Sky Skimmers, Giants, Dragons, Global Alterations section, Intelligent creatures of the deep, Isles in the Sky, Werecreatures, Veil of Ignorance, Reality is Perception
>>48228165
I don't know. Do they?
>>48228259
Yeah, that's been changed (latest version attached). It's now an empire of whatever your starting race is, and can include incorporated empires.
There is also a related quest, to be fleshed out, which involves many races throughout the world are living in peace.
>>48228431
Yeah, not a bad idea. I'll put it on the ideas to consider, thanks.
>>48228503
I like it! It's nice to see takes that don't involve going WAY back in time. As >>48228525, I'm also interested to see how you plan to influence "American Principles".
>>48228809
Do I have to repost my misunderstood monster build?
>>48227352
Now to apply this to Fairy.
>>48226770
Total points 3
Companion: Old Friend(Max the Super Dog) Free.
Adventure companions(-1):Elralinde the Elven Necromancer, she is interested in my Mutagens and wants to see how well we work together, and Theema the Fire Warrior because she challenged me to a fight when I showed up and I trounced her, has taken to following me around when we met Elranlinde.
Nation: Skylands.
Location: Wizard Tower.
Contact: Young mage.
Artifact: Nullblade(-1), with mind and focus 2 from my build this will cut through just about everything short of a god, and the Scanner Device(-1) for scanning now magic loot.
Explorables: Necropalis is for Elralinde, and then we go to the Sun Temple so Theema can get a few new fire spells and a good fight, probably.
Drawbacks Hostile Hostiles: I will take three for three more points and in order. The Behemoth(I always wanted a good monster hunt and this thing is coming to me, gonna try out the new sword to get inside and kill it that way, should be easy to survive sense I don't need to breath and I am immune to poison and other shit like that), Cult of the Void(I am a freak wherever I go apparently), The Ardent Flyer(if I can have a few good fights from them then so be it, I will probably crush them at some point and I can cash in on the obvious bounty, plus no one steals from my homeland). Pints available 3. Going to spend 2 points on getting another location by taking the Pirate Ship with the free contact being the first mate. Then I will spend the last point on Upgrading the ship to a Swift Flyer, I need my pimp ship to keep the other pirates in line. Don't need a elemental Lance sense I am on the ship with my companions.
>>48227352
Forgot to add the body guard drawback and I want to change infection 2 to mind reading 2, and with the last 3 points from bodyguard I will take Predator 3 so I can eat as I fight.
>>48228809
They get transported to that CYOA though, so I would assume they are normal students without any powers.
>>48228832
Oops, didn't post latest.
>>48228581
>>48228608
>>48228630
>>48228661
If I can one day become as high as the author of this cyoa, I will consider my life complete.
>>48228821
Why do you hate cars?
>>48228541
>>48227780
You sir are a god among man. Breed them thoroughly.
>>48228851
>They get transported to that CYOA though
They get transported to the setting, yes. Rapture academy is a part of the setting
>I would assume they are normal students without any powers.
I say no. They don't make a build, they have no reason to believe they go to the school.
They can't make a build, therefore they can't join any house.
Try again.
>>48228930
But people from all universes go to the Academy not only me that made a build for the CYOA.
>>48225769
I don't frequent cyoas often, but your stuff seem pretty solid. I'm tempted to steal some for my next campaign
>>48228821
I meant in which direction are you going to nudge America?
>>48228876
I don't hate cars, I hate how car culture has shaped our cities and communities to the point where there are no other (realistic) options for getting from Point A to Point B.
But that's just an example from the dumb, pre-one-in-a-million intelligence version of myself. Who knows what I'll be thinking once I'm a fucking genius?
>>48228955
>>48228962
Well anon, America is way too spread out for public transportation to meet our needs.
>>48228986
NO BULLYING! JUST LET ME BE A DRAGON!!!
>>48228998
That's some ignorant shit. Sad lack of imagination bro.
>>48228942
>can't make a build
ergo they can't join a house. They can't live anywhere.
Try again.
>>48229040
Are you going to have buses stop at every rural home, anon?
>>48229053
>only people who read the CYOA can join a house
Where is that written? If I made a CYOA where you get 100$ and no one gets to make a build for that does that mean they can never get 100$?
>>48226108
wow, you were not kidding.
The movie ends with ten minutes dedicated to how the girl is cucking her boyfriend with her teacher, which breaks at least one law.
And that's after he tried to blackmail her into participating in his "game", AND after lowering her grade repeatedly.
The teacher really is a fucking fuccboi
>>48228952
>your stuff seem pretty solid
I don't think the author would post their CYOA with a downloaded-from-4chan filename.
>>48228955
Well, I'll only say two things.
First, did you look at the Quests section of the latest version?
Second, I plan to be adding a unique reward to each individual quest.
>>48229067
Dude. Don't be obtuse, dude.
>>48229093
It's probably the director's fetish.
>>48228840
How'd I do?
>>48229093
I warned you. They polluted a semi-interesting premise with a cucking story involving a butthurt professor and a "genius" slut.
>>48229070
>Where is that written?
I presume that guy is going by the logic that "if it's something that you get from making a build, it doesn't apply to anyone other than me". In other words, since only they get to make a build for it, none of the things they can choose are available to the others that get dragged along.
>>48229070
>where is that written
>only you can make a build
The first part of the cyoa is picking a house, so since anon can't make a build, he can't pick a house.
If you made a cyoa where there's a genie, and no one but you gets to make a build for it, that means they don't get the genie.
anon it's okay that you want to rape defenseless people (it really isn't, but that's a discussion for another time), but at least try to have some logic to it.
>>48228986
Not what I was expecting, this is going it in the funny folder.
>>48229153
It could be argued that "only you get to make a build" implies that everyone else is just inserted into the setting with no control over their fate, meaning they'd just be forced into random student positions in the Academy.
That said, if you want this rape enthusiast to stop posting about rape, you need to stop giving him attention. Since attention is obviously what he wants.
>>48228998
I'm not trying to get rid of cars, what I want to do is prevent the car industry from being able to influence the infrastructure of cities to the point where it's impossible to live without owning a car.
I'm fine with highways, but I also want high-speed railways criss-crossing this nation, too.
>>48229130
I saw the director is the writer, so definitely. A smart director would have removed the cuckolding.
>>48229142
I would've enjoyed it if they removed the cucking, yes.
I did like that the guy noticed the coughing.
>I'mma shoot this guy because I somehow know where the gun is in the bunker and no one would overpower me or anything
>Everyone will totally be okay with me murdering a guy
>>48229153
>The first part of the cyoa is picking a house, so since anon can't make a build, he can't pick a house.
This implies that if I pick a CYOA where I get money they never get money.
>anon it's okay that you want to rape defenseless people
But I never mentioned anything about that.
>>48229179
Well... good things come to those who wait. And it'll probably only be a few thousand years. Dragons are patient creatures, didn't you know?
>>48229130
Which is why the ones that like it need to be shot in mass and cremated. SCOURGE AND PURGE!
>>48229201
I disagree with your first paragraph, but I understand your second one. I'll stop now, and leave him to masturbate in peace.
>>48225714
SKILLS:
Sexual (0P) (+0%)
SITE:
The Seed (6P) (+45% + Madison = +50%)
COLONISTS:
Jin-Hee (1P) (+5%)
Caresse (3P) (+20%)
Madison (1P) (+5%)
Nadja (2P) (+10%)
Felissa (0P) (+0%)
Kanae (1P) (+5%)
Meimei (1P) (+5%)
Anastasie (1P) (+5%)
Keira (2P) (+5%)
COMPLICATIONS:
"You're here forever" +1P
"I do" +1P
"Do you copy?" +1P
"This feels wrong..." +1P
"Did you see that?" +1P
Total:
110% SURVIVAL CHANCE
Science:
Keira for mechanics
Madison for agriculture
Caresse for oxygen systems
Nadja for radiation systems
Meimei for chemistry
Posterity:
Kanae for childrearing
Felissa for husband
Logistics:
Jin-Hee for maintaining order
Anastasie for medical services
KamaBot for curbing sexual urges / scrap when broken
>>48229232
FINE BUT I BETTER BECOME THE BESTEST DRAGON!!! ALSO IM ALLOWED TO BE IMPATIENT BECAUSE IM NOT A DRAGON YET!!! AAAAAAAAH STOP REMINDING ME!!!!!!!
>>48229299
if you kill yourself it will happen faster.
>>48229367
Shitposting is an art
>>48229367
We can do that. They are called nukes.
>>48229367
Correction: AI, cybernetics and technology are superior to dragons in every way.
>>48229377I'm just really passionate about dragons.
>>48229367
>WHEN IS THAT DRAGONBORN CYOA GOING TO BE FINISHED
Probably never.
>>48229392There's arleady like 50 cyoas about dragons and millions of games, animes
>>48229367
>>48229394
We have Ferrean's cyoa to fix that though.
Is he still working on that update?
>>48229392
>>48229386
Correction: a "lowly human" is better than both
>>48229407
Ferrean confirmed that he's still working on the dragonborn cyoa update, but that was a week ago.
Dragonanon needs to calm his tits and be more fucking patient.
>>48229386
Your hair is an abomination.
>>48229436
I thought Ferrean's was the half-dragon one, with the purplish background? Dragonborn is the one with just the one WIP page, where you choose your family and stuff.
>>48229432
Addendum: To strive and be more then human is the most human quality we possess.
>>48229452
First you want to be more, then you want to be human? Wouldn't that be a downgrade based on what you've previously said?
>>48229452
To become "more than human" is impossible. In your quest for power, you do not become more than human; you lose all of your humanity.
>>48228541
Oh fuck that would be a bitchen idea for a cyoa.
>>48229468
Clarification: the human condition is one of dynamic change, when one of us succeeds and becomes so much greater, that accomplishment redefines what is humanly possible for no matter how much that individual may have changed he or she is still fundamentally human.
>>48229525
Humanity lies not in the body, nor the mind. Humanity lies in the soul, that spark of life that you so long ago extinguished in your attempt to become more
>>48229525
I was actually just pointing at your misuse of "then" instead of "than".
>>48228541
Worm.
Welcome to suffering.
>>48229386
Go away s-s-Shodan.
>>48229557
REBUTTAL: SOULS AREN'T A REAL THING, YOU STUPID NERD.
>>48229575
>CYOA gives money
>CYOA gives a home
>anons will never have that
Nice
>>48229406Not enough. My hunger knows no end.
>>48229624
Only a being with no soul would think that
>>48229649Eat this *unzips dick*
>>48229652
YES. IN OTHER WORDS, ANY GIVEN BEING. BECAUSE SOULS ARE NOT REAL. SO NO ONE HAS ONE.
DO YOU SEE WHAT I DID THERE?
Hey Strife, did you ever finish Dark City?
>>48229517
Well someone who's more than human wouldn't be human anymore, so that's not a contradiction.
>>48229452
>then
Strive to perfect your English first.
>>48229768
That depends on how you define humanity. Actually, a lot of this boils down to semantics and definitions, which is why the entire conversation is fucking stupid and you should all fucking kill yourselves immediately.
>>48229557
Inquisitive: By what archaic standards does one measure the degeneration and decay of the soul?
Ancient philosopher believe that writing eroded the mind and corrupted the soul, as all proceeding scholars no longer needed to commit every word and every sentence to memory on the fly as required by oral traditions of learning and apprenticeship.
Confucius scholars and Taoist monks thought mirrors were gateways to the spirit world and its alignment within one's home dictated the flow of positive and negative energy, misalignment invited evil, which slowly siphoned your lifeforce and devoured your soul.
Conservatives from the turn of the century thought that photography stole your soul and prevented you from ascending to heaven upon death.
And even today, the internet and the widespread use of mobile devices have slowly destroyed the attention span of its dedicated users. Many Christians still view these communication technologies as examples of the devil's dark magic.
