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>>48208606
>>48208604
Wow fucking retard over here already trying to start drama
"a bloo bloo bloo"
>>48208638
Will conduitanon ever come back?
>>48208667
>>48208509
Femdom cyoas are the worst.
>>48208671
You mean Thrallherd? Maybe someday.
>>48208692
You silly goose!
>>48208671
it's dead for good
>>48208692
Noice, is the new Ant CYOA I heard about?
It really lives up to it's name.
>>48208604
WISH DENIED, MOTHERFUCKER.
>>48208606
>Background: Behemoth
The Big Guyfor you
>Classes:
>Fireman
Ladies love a man in uniform – oh wait you mean that's not what it does?
>Fistfighter
Prizefighter, ladies love boxers too
>Evolutions:
>Plasma Cloak
I'm hot as hell!
>Hamfisted
Aw yeeeaaah, you know what they say about a guy with big hands, right?The say, 'Damn, you got some big hands.'
>Mutated Hide
Gettin' Nemean up in this bitch.
>Fury in Agony
You hit me, I'ma hit you back even harder.
>Greater Regeneration
Not a motherfucker alive who can put me down forever now. But goddamn am I hungry as hell.
>Companion: Adrianne Gonzales
Perfect Waifu, prove me wrong. Protip, ya can't.
>Armour: Mobius Crystals for me, Ozz Fluid for her.
Psychic faggots get btfo. Ya can't lift me and ya can't read me. And Adrianne's too quick for ya slack jawed jackanapes.
>Survival Items: Purifier, Radio
Don't wanna die from poison water, that's a bitch way to go. And the radio is good for when Adrianne and I split up to kick more ass.
>Faction: Plankford
Seems like the perfect place for a couple of power- and literally hungry Mutants.I'm a melee fighter with a waifu named Adrianne. Think about it.
>>48208788
AGAIN?
You're dropping the fucking ball, anon.
>>48208761
>Regimale
I hate women but I love power. Power wins.
>>48208788
WHY DO YOU KEEP DOING THIS?!
>>48208761
Fem-male
>>48208806
>>48208824
He's also posting low quality imgur images.
Intro blurb for my WIP:
Congratulations, you have been admitted to the premier school for magical and esteemed bloodlines in this and several adjacent worlds. Perhaps you are unaware of your lineage, but it matters little. The blood is resurgent in you, and you have access to the manifold arts of magic. So sayeth the letter that you received, hand written and without any post mark. You have journeyed to some godforsaken hole in Romania, descended deeper than any documented natural cave, and before you lies a great underground campus surrounded by a small dark city. The sun shines overhead, and trees lie at the boundary of the city, overgrowing the most distant buildings.
Scholomance is an esteemed school lasting seven years and admitting children at the age of thirteen. Those who graduate go on to do great things, but the school has a poor reputation for public safety. Students are almost entirely unsupervized outside of classes, and the houses have been squabbling somewhat violently of late. Worse, there are strange things in the cellars and foyers of the largely abandoned city, and odd beings occasionally wander in from the areas beyond it. Worse, many classes are graded on a curve so students who excel the most can be targets for their peers. Overall the school is significantly more dangerous than any first world mortal school, even those rape-loving colleges of the eastern United States.
Regardless of the flaws, Scholomance is the most prestigious school out there for the quality of its education, and you will be making connections with the best of humanity and many others.
Is there any other information you guys want? Anything that triggers y'all or seems just kind of off?
>>48208836
Spiritual V
Earth V
I just want to steal CHAD's body. ;)
>>48208885
Money, Sonic Speed, Persuasion, Force Clairvoyance.
>>48208885
Shapeshifting for immortality and /d/eviant reasons.
>>48208856
>documented natural cave, and before you lies a great underground campus surrounded by a small dark city
why do we study in a fucking cave?
>>48208941
Read literally the next sentence. It's a demiplane, I just detailed how you reach it for narrative reason.
>>48208606
>>48208638
>>48208667
>>48208684
Background: Psychic
Perks: Commando/Plasmoid
Powers:
Mental Deadzone
Electric Discharge
Blink
Essence Drain
Neural Restructure
Companion: Ian Black
Armour: Mindflayer Suit
Survival Items: Boost/Purifier
Faction: New Human Alliance
>>48208941
if a campus was surrounded by mountains so access was through cave it would be better than permanently sitting in darkness and batshit
>>48208941
>not studying in a cave
It's like you don't want to get lost running away from rapists
Pleb
>>48208856
>admitting children at the age of thirteen
A 13y old child has a barely developed mind and can in now way defend itself against a 16-20y old. Especially in a school like this, that seems to dangerous. I wouldn't be surprised if plenty of 13y old kids get raped to death by jealous older students trying to get rid of the competition before they come of age.
>even those rape-loving colleges of the eastern United States
That's a meme, a bad feminist meme, and will only increase the odds of your cyoa spawning a huge shitstorm about your premise instead of your content.
>>48208513
They don't have the fetish. What they're fetishising, among other things, are: a woman that has nothing better to do than slobber over their dicks, femdom, sometimes /ss/, often loli and typically other more niche things like vore and bloodplay. The point is that the whole "monster" thing is just a conceit; it would work just was well if all "monstergirls" were just mages of some sort.
Another issue I have with them is that the moment you introduce anything that isn't "green skinned woman #4321342456732 that we'll call an 'orc' ", they start screaming about furries ruining their fetish. Then there's the shitfits they throw when the existence of monstergirl lesbianism is even hinted at.
Last but not least: monsterboys. You needn't even need to add the part about how most monstergirls are primarily attracted to MBs of their own species, they throw shitfits regardless.
TL;DR if you only accept
>>48208763
you don't like monstergirls.
>>48208964
explain it better, rather than calling it "underground campus while sun shines overhead" it can be a natural cave with hole in ceiling, nothing says it's demiplane
>>48208885
Spiderman + Persuasion
BEST CHOICE
>>48208761
I don't want to be any of these.
>>48208989
Furry go home.
>>48208989
Nobody cares how you feel.
>>48208989
Shit son, no one is stupid enough to think that these fetishes are anything but fetishes.
The reason people like "monstergirls" is because they like women with interesting exotic and attractive traits, especially if said women lust over them.
No one besides you is pretending that a fetish is anything but a sexual desire that needs realism or thought put into it. Do you legitimately have some form of autism?
anyone have that 2 page alien waifu cyoa?
>>48208989
it's "assblasted furry gets anally devastated rectum" episode
>>48208982
I threw in the meme to emphasize that the extreme danger is from a normal perspective, not from a fantasy perspective. It's still less dangerous than Chicago or Johannesburg.
>>48208996
I don't want to explicitly call it out and catalog it, but I'll remove some of the language that could confirm the conception that it's mundane.
>>48208989
Stop. Monsterboys are not for monstergirls. Monsterboys are only for me while monstergirls can get their slutty vaginas shredded by centaurs for all I care.
>>48209064
This one? Faoru is objectively the best girl.
>>48209092
>>48209092
>There are """"men"""" who don't want to participate in orgies with dozens of futas
>>48209072
It's still a meme, a Tumblr meme. Don't do that.
The age is a bigger concern though. You're basically turning this into RAPE Hogwarts and it's extremely nasty to imagine all those 1st years could get raped at any point. No pedophilia please. At least make the school a 16-23 or 18-25 thing. 13 is way too young.
>>48209072
> less dangerous than Chicago or Johannesburg
Is it more dangerous thanCologne?
>>48209115
It's a rape school and you're whining about morality.
>>48209115
>16-23 or 18-25 thing
15-22 works better
>>48209119Are you a jew?
>>48209072
Say something correct like "living in the middle east as a Yazidi girl"
>>48209092
yes thank you anon :)
>>48209130
Even /tg/ has its standards. RAPE schools are fine but don't let a 20y old rape a defenseless 13y old. Fuck, that 13y old could be you for all you know and you could resist someone with multiple years of education on you.
>>48209141
>Jews being against whites getting "culturally enriched"
>>48209147
Nah, I don't want it that dangerous.
>>48209115
I'll add a safety net for first years.
>>48209161
I've read many conversations where people here have condoned adults having sex with underage girls. They could also be Reddit & other 4chan board stowaways though.
![8422b56456be5f466c02d32035c7645e[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/J43bkpV.jpg "8422b56456be5f466c02d32035c7645e[1].jpg")
>>48209115
That's why you use a shapeshifting spell to make them look older, before you rape them.
>>48209161
>He's on 4chan and he thinks there aren't a fuck ton of lolicons here.
Delusional.
>>48209172
That's better I guess but upping the age would be better than making certain years untouchable. Cockteasing is no fun.
>>48209191
Indigenous fa/tg/uys generally wants to protect daughterus, but using large quantities of underage girls for some deranged social engineering project would probably fit in just fine here.
>>48209217
>muh morals
>>48208761
>naturally submissive
stopped reading
>high sex drive
stopped reading
>no breasts
you fucking cunt
>Physically largest
>has to deal with multi-childbirth
>somehow at the top of politics and businesses
absolutely retarded
going Ovumale, and wasting all the intelligence being a waitress or secretary while the sex that needs to eat all the time and take leave when they give birth somehow take all the top positions in society.
>>48209161
what are you talking about ? Lolicon is very accepted on 4chan
>>48209217
>"Okay, I'll protect the thirteen year olds from inevitable rape"
>"Cockteasing is no fun."
Fuck's sake, there's no pleasing you cunts.
>>48209172
>I'll add a safety net for first years.
So, does that mean that no raping or raiding for first year boys?
>>48209239
The annoying part is I don't see who are the engineers and scientists in society. I see worker drones, artists, service and clerical workers, and businessmen/politicians, but nobody that actually advances their species.
>>48209255
In the end all you should do is make what you want, it'll probably be hated by someone, so just learn to have thicker skin.
>>48209268
Science is a jewish meme.
>>48209255
Do NOT, I repeat DO NOT try to bargain with reddit, you give them one finger and they will bite your hand off, trying to remove rape from that school, because reasons
>>48208618
For bottom-right, which jurisdiction is the account in? Can it be any of my choice, even if I have no connection with the place? Can I change it? How often? Can I convert the currency while still in the always safe account?
This is obviously relevant for the automatic taxation.
>>48209277
Mendel looks at you disapprovingly.
>>48209115
> On 4chan complaining about lolis
kek
>>48209207
>>48209248
Lolicon is absolutely disgusting and the agreed upon rule is that those cyoas should be masked as "daughterfu" cyoas to not make the rest of us vomit.
>>48209306
>Rule
>Agreed upon
>>48209257
I'm giving first years access to protected dorms, so not unless they make themselves available to be raped too. They will be advised to not do that. Fourteen year olds are still on their own, but hopefully they'll have gotten their shit together at that point and will be members of a house and thus have that protection available to them.
>>48209306
nice b8 m8
>>48208761
So if I pick fem-male I basically get to be a girl but become creative too? I'll pick that.
>>48209306
>agreed upon rule
BY WHOM? YOU FAG?
>>48208885
>>48209005
this desu
>>48209341
And you get to have as much sex as you want with no significant pregnancy.
>>48209324
In what way are they protected? Can they still rape other first years inside the dorms?
>>48209324
Honestly, aside from the creepiness of letting minors run about getting harassed, I think this cyoa has potential. I'm really interested in the idea of there being an abandoned and mysterious city surrounding the already mysterious academy. I hope you do something with it.
>>48209341
You're basically a trap.
>>48209341
>get to be a girl
>The "male" of the species for reproductive purposes
>>48209361
>Whining about creepiness in rape school
And now for a CYOA!
>>48209384
Can you please kill yourself, pedophile-kun?
>>48209355
>Can they still rape other first years inside the dorms?
Well, they are protected from 14+ y/o, but 13 vs 13 have equal footing so should learn to fend for themself
>>48208761
Take your feminazi supremacy horseshit and burn in hell where they can make sure you suffer.
Anyone have that one CYOA where you're some kind of overlord with most or all of the companions being different daughters of yours, there being multiple kingdoms you're meant to conquer, and one of the potential enemies was essentially Anon come to make your daughterus his waifus?
I think it may have been implied you were one of the previous Evil Overlords in a cycle of those fuckers rising into prominence then being defeated, you having your kids during retirement, people finding out you're still alive being the catalyst for your new conquest, and at least one of your daughters trying to emulate you and become the perfect conqueror.
>>48209355
A couple teachers are assigned to keep that shit on lockdown. No rape, no murder, no stealing.
>>48209361
The house dorms are all in the city rather than campus proper. Other than that it's mostly just going to be a source of fodder for the mysteries and enemies page, unless someone gives me a better idea. I'll add dosh as one of the items you can have, I guess, and people can buy stuff in town.
>Minors
That's kind of a subjective term. If it makes a difference, we can say that 14 is age of consent in this place. But it shouldn't, and this is supposed to have horror aspects anyway.
>>48209411
Updated version.
>>48209411
>>48209442
Geez, I wonder whether I should become a beautiful (10) Noble (20) with great intelligence (10)... or I should learn First Aid (40)? How am I supposed to make this impossible decision?
>>48209414
thought police go away and take furries with you
>>48209414
>Posting Madoka
>Whining about lolicon
You're a dumb one, mate.
>>48209421
idk, but you can check pastebin, it might be there
>>48209354
Better and better.
>>48209367
Hawt.
>>48209377
Read further.
>>48209268
I THINK the scientists would be the Ovumales, but it's really fucking retarded that they aren't leaders.
>best practical and technical intelligence
yet at the same time
>Fill most administrative and service roles in society
So the genius works as a waitress.
>>48209430
>I'll add dosh as one of the items you can have, I guess, and people can buy stuff in town.
What kind of shops would be implemented in the mostly ruinous city? General stores? Coffee shops? An old McDonald's from the 90's with a play place and birthday party room? Worldbuildingfag here.
>>48209455
>implying furries are not superior to lolicons
At least furries are fapping to animals instead of underage girls.
>>48209442
Is this like anime for people who are too autistic for anime?
>>48209454
BUT ANON, YOU LEARN WHOLE FIRST-AID FOR MERE 40 POINTS, IT'S THE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BESTTHE BEST OPTION TO PICK
>>48209421
Yes, it's another CYOA by Italics.
>>48209473
My problem with 'ovumales' is how they get the eggs into the regimales. 'cause if they have dicks I want to burn the planet to the ground.
>>48209473
Just like in real life. Networking > Genius.
>>48209470
>Read further.
Implies something like trap or shota. In other words, not girl.
>>48209483
Now we are only missing fucking necrophiles
>>48209505
The problem with 'networking' is you don't have time for that when you're spending all of it eating or giving birth.
>>48209504
oh fucking hell I hadn't thought of that
Fuck that
Change of plans
Burn everything
>>48209505
ain't it a bitch
>>48209516
>pedos
>zoos
>necros
The complete package right here!
>>48209523
What a great life. I'll enjoy the best of the best because I was born a STACY and your brilliant self will be making my burgers. Love it!
>>48209483
Furfag revealed.
>>48209503
I keep feeling this CYOA could have been better.
>>48209545
>Great life
>Giant hambeast constantly shitting out babies you're expected to teach too
>>48209072
I say describe it like >>48208968, or if not mountains then impenetrable forests. Maybe with some implication that it's not Earth any more.
>>48209549
It's very simplistic.
Italics does his best work when he's bullied into rebuilding his workgod bless his soul
>>48209549
Every CYOA could be better, but I feel the same about a lot of Italics' CYOAs.
>>48209575
>does his best work when he's bullied into rebuilding his work
In other words, when he doesn't just shit out a first draft and leave it at that?
>>48209565
Giant hambeast wielding incredible power. Don't try to insult me, pepe. I'll hire some thugs to bring me your family and sit on them until they die... unless you clean my big fleshy body with your tongue that is.
>>48209598
Xhirst, all day every day
>>48209115
>>48209136
If it's 14-21 then you graduate at the age of adulthood.
>>48209598
>the Null can all of a sudden betray you and decide to eat you and there's nothing you can do to stop it
Fuck that. Someone edit it out please.
>>48209610
I'd honestly probably go 'fem-male' if someone held a gun to my head, not ovumale, because they're probably futas and those make me sick. So I'd be a lazy artistic neet who everyone pampers because I'm rare but not expected to hold any power. Then I'd just refuse to ever breed.
>>48209645
>Literally being eaten by your own complacency
Don't be sad, Anon. It's just like your real life.
>>48209477
I was just thinking something like Diagon Alley, if it was a shady street in the bad part of town instead of a hot destination for the whole country.
>>48209571
I don't want to get too explicit with that kind of thing.
>>48209636
>21
>onset of adulthood
America plz
>>48209683
>>48209665
I thought that fem-males are futa, and ovumales are cuntboys.
>>48209598
I fixed it.
>>48209697
Oh, I forget you're not an adult until your 34 and your parents have finally died in a terroist bombing in europoor
>>48209510
But socially/mentally.
>>48209735
What change did you make?
>>48209726
Fem-males are the reproductive males, but they're small and weak. They're basically traps/twinks. Meanwhile the ovumales look like women without tits, and they need vaginas so they'd be fertilized by the fem-males, and they need some kind of organ to insert the eggs into regimales. Which could be a penis or close enough, so they're the ones most likely to be futa.
>>48209736
Onset of adulthood is more like 16 or 18 for most of the world, mate.
>>48209759
You can't get surprise eaten by your Null anymore. Now it's implied they will serve you until you die a natural death.
>>48209442
What was changed?
>>48209759
He just removed the part where they'll eat you alive if you stop following your ambitions, even though it's a great motivator.
>>48209773
I like that change. Xhrist is still best choice though.
>>48209454
Its almost like you could take intelligence and memory, too bad your inbred.
>>48209781
New weapon type and some mods to go with it. Anything more than that, I have no idea.
>>48209802
Problem was that you had no idea how to control your ambitions because it's something deep within you that only the Null can see. You might think you're still being ambitious as fuck but if the Null disagrees you die. No questions asked.
>>48209802
>>48209697
>Diagon Alley
I like to think that in the various parts of the city there are travelling merchants and scavengers just chilling and setting up tent shops for the few locals that still live there.
>>48209758
Should've specified that, then.
>>48209850
>bullying a weak little fem-male
>>48209630
Same as Dark Souls only STR and DEX can show your skills, while range and magic is cheesing
>Race
Human +1 STR
>Calss
Knight
Con: 8+12=20
Int: 1
End: 7+13=20
Str: 6+40=46
Dex: 2+44=46
Fth: 2
Equipment:
Cursed Sword 2000/20 000
Leveling:
welp, Light traces left for 109 levels
>Magic
Magic for crubs
>Fragment
Tyril The first Knight
What's that we have to fight?
>>48209802
>Quest: A Dragon's Roar CRITICAL MODE
>Quest: Vampire's Reign CRITICAL MODE
>Quest: A Witch's Nightmare CRITICAL MODE
How am I supposed to do this? Idk.
>>48209846
Good point, added.
>>48208836
physical 5, spirit 5, affliction 3
Necromancy is obviously the best.
>>48209598
Is it bad I want to be the antithesis to each of them?
>>48209931
>turns out you're just a human and there is no actual way for you to complete most of Hard/Critical modes
>>48209822
I will always make fun of someone who refuses the option to become Rich in a cyoa. I can't imagine how fucking privileged and naive you have to be to not acknowledge that money is the most powerful force in the universe.
>>48210028
I think gravity would be more powerful than money in the universe.
>>48209958
I also noticed that the last point made in the "houseless" faction implied forming your own. Would you consider base/faction building to be apart of your cyoa?
>>48209768
>Onset of adulthood is more like 16 or 18 for most of the world, mate.
Its 18 in the US as well. Drinking is the only thing that's based on being 21.
>>48210001
The Witch's Nightmare is actually really easy to complete in CRITICAL MODE if you're not a little girl and you end up a literal King of the World of Dreams. That power should be enough to defeat both humans and vampires with the help of Dorothy and rule over them. You can then use your power and your combined armies + Dorothy to defeat the Dragon God and ascend to Godhood. It's pretty easy. Hopefully.
>>48210077
It's not designed to be as of now. I'll consider expanding scope after completing what's planned, but I'm not sure it really fits for this CYOA.
>>48210055
Nope. Enough money means even gravity is your bitch in that anti-grav room you bought.
>>48210096
So the school should start at 11?
Please comeback and post the last page author-san.
>>48210154
>post yfw you're one of the anons that bullied away the Rapture author
>>48210141
That's not what I said.
>>48210154
are you going to post this shit every fucking thread
>>48210154
>>48210192
>>48210154
Don't get me wrong I wish he would man up and pist, but the background was pretty bad senpai,
>I can't create a good setting so I'll just use all of them
Bloodline powers: Anything that seems unbalanced? Any cool ideas to add?
http://pastebin.com/83TnCZBT
I'm also starting on items, suggestions are welcome. Here's what I have so far:
Minions: You have a servant, perhaps an imp, spirit, or skeleton, magically bound to your service. It is basically human in capabilities, but somewhat stupid.
Dosh: You have an allowance of spending money. You can spend it in town. The place is run down, but there are some nice bars which don't care how old you are, a small grocery store, and a handful of strange and esoteric specialty shops tucked away in obscure corners. An occasional traveling merchant may stop by from beyond the walls as well.
Magic sword: It was passed down from your ancient ancestors so it must be great, right? It's definitely a nice blade but whatever magic is in it isn't particularly flashy. Or maybe you just don't know how to unlock it yet.
>>48210154
>>48210214
>>48210212
I'm hoping if I post it enough the author will return and post the secrets page.
>>48210154
You don't deserve a last page.
>>48210154
>>48210245
>>48210240
Hmm, make the beyond life boon remove the need for sleep as well, and we're golden.
>>48209931
You might just be an average / below average person in your world, but people not from Eden who end up there are temporarily immortal and apparently have a long history of performing great bullshit whenever they show up. So you're clearly a few power levels above the average person in Eden, and all the difficulties are actually lower than they seem. I mean, it's only "easy" to ignore a one-sided love story or abandon a bunch of orphans? Easy implies you have to actually do something, those are trivial. And besides, why else would a may-as-well-be-literal god of dragons be afraid of Frank McGee climbing his mountain if the prophecy ending his reign wasn't about to come true? Just do it, Anon. Everyone else thinks you'll do it, so you might as well try.
>>48210245
So the answer is "Yes, I will post this in every thread". You could've just said so.
>>48210154
>>48210305
He didn't post it two threads ago.
>>48210187
Same. His desperation fuels me.
>>48210028
being a woman > being rich
if you're a woman you don't need to be rich.
>>48210316
He probably wants it though
>>48210240
I'm super happy with Third Eye + Physical Primacy + Ubermensch so I think they're great, but objectively I do notice a lack in mental bloodline powers or some more outright magical ones, a rare magical mutation perchance like eyes that automatically cast a minor charm on people or maybe eyes that can paralyze people when focused. The Fateverse is great for that kind of stuff.
>>48210305
>>48210320
He isn't doing his job very well then, it seems.
>>48210240
Well, probably magic eye, that lets one of your eyes see magic
Dungeon meister build
dungeon master
consequences tablet.
Everyone will upon “death” lose all memories of the interior of the dungeon and enemy specifics, even those memories that predate their time inside the dungeon (hearsay and whatnot). They will also lose any physical maps they own of the dungeon. They will lose all their Armor, weapons, money and whatever amount of mana they will still have left. Afterwards they will be thrown out of the
dungeon.
Dmlq x3 [47]
library [41]
forge [39]
reincarnation crystal [34]
Barrack, kitchen, rec room x3 [25]
Witches, drakes [13]
Healing, electricity , mind warping [0]
>>48210368
Can I dick Tulia?
Yeah, I said I was going to finish the DLC before updating this, but I lied. Several additions below. Still working on the DLC.
Altering History Changelog 1.1
PHYSICAL ABILITIES
Temperature Tolerance reduced in cost, and higher levels less extreme.
Impervious reduced in cost and function
Strength & Speed boosted a bit; adjusted to match Impervious in progression S&S 2 <=> Impervious 1, S&S 3 <=> Impervious 2
Regeneration reduced in cost
Added 'I Get Knocked Down, But I Get Up Again'
Non-Reactor & Iron Gut reduced to 2 points base
MENTAL ABILITIES
P=NP limitation clarified
Artistic Prodigy elaborated slightly
"SEP Field" added to let you blend in.
COMPANIONS
Companions made notably cheaper, including granting them powers.
Unpowered fictional characters lumped in with real people.
Clarified the availability of unused slots.
Placed some limitations on imported powerhouses.
*Added options to make power inheritable
SUPERNATURAL
Shapeshift others in some ways with Major Shapeshifting
Major Beastmaster boosted a bit.
DRAWBACKS
Nemesis point spending clarified.
Cursed by the Spirits increased to +20
Stormbringer drawback added.
Beastfoe drawback added.
QUESTS
Myth Maker, An Empire Eternal and Sorcerer Supreme requirements clarified
Sorcerer Supreme changed to require only two supernatural powers at "Major"
Made "benevolent" AIs optional in the Singularity quest.
"Sustainability" quest added
Removed explicit drawback incompatibilities for quests, though note that some will still make quests impossible to complete.
>>48210355
and under magic I mean seeing when someone casts magic, "after burn" of it and enhancements, what wont overlap with third eye
>>48210340
I honestly hate it when authors specify a spouse's gender, seemingly implying that there will be male spouses too except there aren't.
>>48210399
> Sustainability quest
I'm happier now. Will post build soon.
>>48210302
Okay, did that and boosted the cost by a point.
>>48210337
>mental
Like what?
>outright magical
What kind of thing are you thinking of?
>charm and paralyze eyes
I feel like Imposing Mein already covers that aspect of things.
>>48210355
It was supposed to be in Third Eye as part of the auras. I'll make that more explicit.
>>48210408
Wait, I'm not seeing the distinction.
>>48210387
are you sure you can overlap kitchen and barracks and all?
>>48210413
>>48210392
I doubt her mother would appreciate it if she found out, given the already rough history she's had with humans.
>>48210414
I do think Italics was looking to add more to this CYOA (since it specifies which daughters you can get from each spouse) but he probably got sidetracked by a different CYOA and figured this one was finished enough to release, as he so often does.
>>48210447
What you define as Aura? Because I thought it was simply human aura you can see
>>48210399
I dislike this new change. You kind of ruined Impervious and made "I Get Knocked Down, But I Get Up Again" an almost mandatory choice to boot. I'm glad you're still working on it but this was a bad update imo.
>>48210459
Overlap? both kitchen and barracks are in completely separated rooms.
>>48210399
>higher levels less extreme
>Impervious reduced in function
So you nerfed it. Boo.
Why bother updating if you're only nerfing shit?
>>48210479
Spells and magic items also have auras. Here's the new text:
Third Eye -2: You can naturally see spirits and auras. Both the auras of the living and those caused by spells and enchantments are visible to you. It is possible for these things to be hidden from you, but not easy.
And here's a companion power:
Analyst's Eye -4: You can see the connections and details of mechanics, rituals, and runes. Any device, contraption, or spell that you can see, you can mentally deconstruct into its composite pieces to understand the workings. This greatly expedites learning in certain subjects, but you must still understand composite parts, and especially complicated things are beyond you.
>>48210481
Noted, and I'm not dismissing the criticism. The change was because I was dissatisfied with the degree to which Impervious outpaced Strength & Speed by several orders of magnitude, but I didn't want to give 10000x mortal strength, or something like that.
I'll wait and see what the reaction is from others, but I certainly won't rule out rolling back the change.
As for "I Get Knocked Down..." I don't at all feel it is mandatory; the higher levels of impervious are still more than enough for anything short of modern warfare, and by the time modern warfare comes around, you should not be in a position to be hit directly by bombs.
>>48210245
From what I recall reading, the author never finished said page, and has abandoned the version of Rapture you keep posting in favor of a better one (or abandoned the whole thing entirely, if they were indeed bullied away).
In other words, the secrets page for Rapture getting posted seems less likely than SDA and Angel collaborating on a good CYOA.
>>48208836
Flora V
Water V
>grow silk, wrap myself in many robes
>grow a forest garden in backyard for family
>leave behind old life and begin a trek across the wilds of the USA, leaving in my wake dense forests plants, herbs, fruit trees, all according to their proper ecological balance
>cast rainfall on drought afflicted lands and to support the grand overgrowth
>visit deforestation grounds
>utterly destroy and dismantle all lumber yards and their machines
>eventually rumors of a vine haired figure in billowing robes heralding impossibly verdant wilds
>have nature utterly reclaim some areas because am a vengeful avatar of the earth
>restore the water table where it has been depleted
>go to Emerald Triangle in California
>turn it into an absolute riot of unbidden marijuana growth, eventually have it spread across the entire state
>look up all fracking operations and dismantle them completely, making an effigy of the dead worker corpses, strung up in vines.
>visit Detroit late in the hour, disguised as if I was homeless and turn it into a grand orchard of fruit-bearing trees, vegetables, legumes, etc.
>Plants ripping through the concrete, giant apple trees dotting the city like streetlights once did
>observe the pandemonium with pleasure
I continue these general affairs as I make my way to my eventual throne room: the Amazon. There I restore the flora to their natural splendor, meet with the natives, earn their favor, learn their ways, and generally fuck with any groups that try to get to me. The military and government of many nations are actively seeking me out by now, the internet explodes with stories of the robed druid. Cults spring up. Societies are shaken up. CIA, KGB and the like would have probably already caught up with me before I reached my destination. Meh. I'd give them a hell of a fight though. Treants and Water Serpents guard me. Why?
Because I am the fucking Lifewarden, and my justice is absolute. Fear the wilds, for they do seek retribution.
>>48210536
You already have another person booing you.
>>48210506
? I hardly only "nerfed shit" with the update.
Nonetheless, as said >>48210536, I am not dismissing your opinion.
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>>48210335
If I had Photoshop and the enough time I would make my own version of Rapture Academy to spite all of you.
>>48210536
>by the time modern warfare comes around, you should not be having any fun and should be stuck in a goddamn bunker 24/7
Fixed to reveal the huge fuck you that it is.
>>48210447
>What kind of thing are you thinking of?
Something not too powerful but clearly a magical mutation that would run in your bloodline. I was mostly thinking about the Mystic Eyes from Fate thought but you're right that Imposing Mein covers a small subset of those.
>>48210560
You didn't add anything that matters and nerfed everything that does.
>>48210572
I appreciate your opinion; thank you for the feedback.
>>48210569
>Giving me more reason to bitch
>Spiting me
Well meme'd kiddo
>>48210512
nice. How about since your blood conveys magic, have ability to burn it for greater magical potency (of course overuse it kills you). Unless primary magic casting already burns your blood
>>48210536
Being Reincarnated even in a day gives a whole different feeling than being Impervious to most damage. I can't imagine a greater feeling than walking through a battlefield, ignoring everything as you walk unharmed towards the enemy commander and bitch slap them just to show of the fact that you cannot be slain. I'm sad we lost that.
>>48210569
Then go do it? At least it will be a new CYOA instead of the same shit reposted every time
>>48210634
Oh, I added a couple classes in a "ritual" line including one that does blood magic. That makes it a bit redundant.
>>48210569
Does anyone have some non-fantasy world cyoa's? Like that spy and super soldier one.
>>48210642
Thank you for expressing your opinion reasonably. I'm working on an adjustment; I did not anticipate the emotional attachment to Impervious, but will try to accommodate.
>>48210676
Technically it's sci-fi.
>>48210569
>photoshop
MS Paint master race
>>48210676
This is basically set in our current world.
>>48210703
>>48209442
>Familiar Face (90)
No expectations, unlike with Guardian. I'm undecided if I want to join the qt3.14 Cinder
>Age 17
>GenderFemale
>Faun: Fox
>Ears + Tail
Just a friendly, nice Faun trying to stay out of trouble and asking people not to >touch fluffy tail
That's way too lewd for strangers to do!
>Force of Nature - Air
Honestly none of these are very cool
>Hope (80)
That's great, especially since we'll be working on a team.
>Ferocity (70)
The whole "no PTSD is a great bonus, too"
>Beauaty (60)
I'm vain, okay? I want to be hot. Don't look at me like that...
>Intelligence (50)
>Memory (30)
>Strength (10)
I really wanted the Energy talent, but I need something for offense.
I really, desperately wanted Tactics... but I guess I can handle someone else being the Leader of our team. That Intelligence + Memory boon is so darn nice.
wow, Fear is the only thing I can still buy. So instead I upgrade Familiar Face to
>Noble (0)
for the added social boon (combined with Beauty), and the money and training
>Variable (600)
Riot shotgun or whatever a fully-auto, magazine loaded shotgun is called, with an old-fashioned sword appropriate for someone with Strength
>Extra form (500)
Let's go with an assault rifle that can be full-auto or burst-fire, for anything out of my range
>Scroll (500)
>Targeting glasses (350 Lien)
For the auto-aim.
Also last time I shot a gun was possibly a decade ago.
So, I have 350 Lien leftover. Might as well go
>Collapsible (300)
Even if the law of conservation of mass still applies, it's still nice. I'll need a powerful belt.
>Armor (200)
>Dust mod (150)
To the Variable weapon. I'm honestly just burning money at this point
>Dust charges (100)
>Weight reduction (0)
On the Variable weapon. I feel like it will be heavier when it can switch
>>48210667
the bloodline lacks any upgrades for brain, like in case of danger to think much faster
>>48210676
This one takes place in our world.
>>48210399
>>48210442
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>>48210642
How does this taste? It's an experiment. I don't know if I like the "free" element to one part, but I'm curious. (Only adjustments are to Impervious, Temperature Tolerance, and the removal of "I Get back Down")
>>48210793
Brains are weird things though. I don't see a lot of good upgrades that aren't just "you think more goodly". I already added one where you get ancestor dreams, but adding super adrenaline to the mix seems a bit boring.
>>48210838
fair enough
>>48210833
I like this version a lot more. On an unrelated note: is Iron Gut the only way to become immune to poisons? What would happen if you somehow got stung by a deadly Scorpion but had Regeneration III? Could we maybe use Divine Child to cure poisons or the Spirits somehow?
>>48210399
I think the intelligence upgrades (at least the first two) could do with some manner of clarification.
Also, and I may be mistaken here, doesn't economics deal with non-existent (i.e. these goods have not yet been manifactured, but when they are...) resources fairly often?
>>48210703
>Venom
Because best gril
>Resistant :Both
>Regeneration
>Enhanced Shape-shifting
>Separate Form
So I can have venom shape-shift into girls and fuck
>Invisible
>Villain
>Scientist
>Menace
>Hunted
>>48210028
No I am insulting your desire to not take a perfect mind combo(or as relatively close to it) and learn everything you need in a few hours. Also still doesn't change the fact your inbred and beholden to the family with the money.
>>48210647
I really don't feel like spending $80 on Photoshop to make a CYOA. I mean if I was super confident in my abilities and being able to find pictures I would spend the money but as of right now I don't think its worth it.
I might try to make it a no image one first like Slutlife or Traveler did.
You know what I'm going to try making it without pics first. It'll take at least month but I'm going to do it. Until then I'll keep posting Rapture Academy in hopes the author comes back.
>>48210028
You can make money, but you can't make a better brain
>>48211001
>there are people who still don't know about piracy
>>48211001
Anon, cmon, you don't need to buy Photoshop.You could pirate itor just use free software.
You are just making excuses because you are lazy and it's easy to find pictures.
>>48210703
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>>48210764
>>48210805
You guys are really cool. I'll post a series of cyoas myself soon. Are NSFW CYOA's okay? I'm new
>>48211038
What good free options are there? I really don't know.
>>48209442
Guardian
Why does Outlaw even cost points? It should be giving them, it's only added pressure. (10)
Human
Why do all these locations suck so I guess I'll pick Beacon Academy.
Semblance
Fast Mover
Gifts
Ferocity, Agility, Precision, Energy (70)
Talents: Tactics (20)
Weapon
Variable (Automatic Pistol/Katana)
I feel the katana actually helps with precision, agility and energy. The Pistols handle will remain the same while the rest transforms in a blade, I guess. If animu's ever taught me one thing is that katanas are OP. (400)
Dust mod (50)
Weight Reduction (100)
Dust mods seems good for variation, while weight reduction is an all round imrprovement.
Items
Scroll
Dust Charges (50)
Targeting Glasses (150)
Combat Drone (250)
Bullets, autoaim and a drone. They probably work well in unison.
I feel like this is a decent build meant for speed, evasion and critical striking.
>>48211157
Do they NSFW pics? If yes then no you can't post them here.
>>48211157
If they have NSFW pictures in them, you might end up getting reported. And even if they don't, people will bitch, so be prepared for that.I'm not usually one of those people bitching, at least.
>>48211157
>Are NSFW CYOA's okay?
Only if they don't contain NSFW imagery. If they do contain such a thing, upload them elsewhere and post a link instead.
>>48211166
gimp, paint.net
>>48211168
You didn't specify gender, but I assume male?
It's important for reasons.
So you're all about speed and flexibility?
You do have tactics, so it's not too bad of a build for a leader? How would you feel about teaming up with >>48210787, build for brains and dishing out damage? We need two more, but honestly, we already have brains + damage, and tactics + speed. All we need is a tank and a utility character.I'll make you test out that "extreme stamina" gift of yours...
I have Strength anyway, you're not getting away~
>>48208676
For Eldritch Wife do you have to pay for her points?
>>48211355
I'm pretty sure the 90 points' worth of stuff comes from her being eldritch in nature, not from your pointpool.
In other words, don't think so.
>>48210334
what if you're fat or old?
>>48211313
Yeah, Male. I'm too attached to my dick.
I guess I'm all about speed, precision and flanking. Fast mover is all about evasion too. Tactics just seems too good to pass up, since it's both for finding weaknesses and working with others. I do make a good leader as a Guardian, but it's good you're damage heavy since I tend to lack it.lewdFast mover and energy makes for being extra good in the sack.
I'm just average looking though since I didn't take beauty.
>>48210545
Going back to the archive it sounded like the page was done but decided not to post it because of how people were acting.
>>48211440
what if you lose your money?
>>48209442
>History
New Arrival, while much harder than all other histories to start it has enough potential
>Race & Age & etc
Male Human 15 year old Beacon(because other don't really matter), more time to grow in touch with the world
>Semblance
Ghost, seems very good for more stealthy build
>Gift
none
>Talents
Tactics, always useful when dealing with anyone, especially if you have enough time watching them
Combat & Stealth, Imho too costly but great combination for choking people without anyone noticing and infiltration
>Shop
Ranged rifle to deal with enemies on range
Cybernetic arm to deal with anyone in hand to hand combat and pacifying
>Items and gear
Targeting glasses, don't like the fact that they look like stylish glasses, HUD over primary eye would fit better
Scroll, Wilderness gear, Dust Charges and Rebreather for 50 points very useful stuff
Direct fighting is overrated when you can sneak behind enemies and observe them long enough to evaluate weak points rather than jumping straight at enemies and getting killed
