Tell us how your WIP is going anon's.
>>47913321
First.
>>47913321
http://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
previous thread: >>47903661
thought it better to do it in the second post.
The cyoa creator CYOA so far for anyone who didn't see it last thread.
Is this the OFFICIAL /cyoag/??
I NEED to know.
>>47913359
>Industrial Spy CYOA.
When?
I feel like i could provide some critique.
Maybe weapons should come in two categories, concealable and not.
Crystal boys Is going well, got a slime, a better dragon, and an orc. The beginning is done, just need to set up the box's.
>>47913385
yea
JSUT
FUKC
MY
SHIT
UP
>>47913321
Mom your Aphrodite the godess of love, beauty, and sex. So greek mythology is true, does this mean I'm destined to be a slut.
>>47913341
I have rarely seen such pisspoor art as the literal shit you decided to use for Bliss.
I wouldn't fuck that abomination with Fetal Alcohol Syndrome if the future of the human race depended on it.
Also, change Box Wine. He isn't a cockwhore.
>>47913434
Yes, but you didn't need a cyoa to tell you that. You're already a shameless attention whore.
>>47913341
>thought it better to do it in the second post.
Why? Glad you did it at all though.
Also:
Is v1.1 the latest of the Dream Prince cyoa? Pic related.
In the middle of editing Familiar quest.
Also adding a just for fun option on page 4Where you roll randomly to determine your master, species, Focus, and Perks.. Finished version should be going up in a couple of hours.
>>47913430
Instructions unclear, which guardian least likely to molest?
>>47913455
Just letting you know, Anon. I didn't post that, someone else took the liberty of doing it for me.
And there was a poll 2 threads back deciding between black hair and white hair images for Bliss.
>>47913499
>Is v1.1 the latest of the Dream Prince cyoa?
AFAIK, yes. I do recall Imaginos saying that he's working on some additional content for it, though.
>>47913321
80 points. Lets get interesting.
Body: male, female, change gender, change shape, disease immunity. -45, right off the bat.
Everything else: heavenly voice, read desires, magical ID, perfume. -35.
Berrill and Niko. We will have some very interesting sexcapades.
>>47913341
I would like to suggest that Italics' avatar is a capital, italicized I.
>>47913430
Does the loss of vision in my right eye come with choosing abandoned? If so, I choose abused--I can recover from those injuries. I would also adopt the abused character you illustrated for this, too. Or at least make sure she gets a home with someone who isn't a cunt.
Oh, and Clara will be adopting me 10 out of 10 times.
>>47913455
I imagine you are the anon who suggested the dark-haired, glasses-donning variant that was offered up 2 threads ago. While it wasn't bad, whatshisface (who is making the cyoa) polled people for a little bit and the votes were in favor of what you now see representing Bliss. So sorry, but you'll have to settle for another author. Or don't settle at all. Get angry and storm out of the thread.
Also, anon said that Box Wine went "deeper", whatever that means. I doubt Box Wine is an archetypal meretricious, cock-craving harlot, so you can rest your head.
>>47913536
For reinforcement.
>>47913558
Thanks.
Posting a bit of Broquest, perhaps the greatest WIP of them all. Tragically cut short by human pettiness.
>>47913536
>poll
so anon has shit taste?
Anon, look at it. Look at it.
There is no amount of money in this world that would make me touch that freak.
>>47913572
>you are the anon who suggested the dark-haired, glasses-donning variant
nope. I have functional eyes, which apparently anon does not.
Well, I'm glad to know I can already cross multiple namefags off the potential list before any text is added.
>>47913578
>>47913572
I understand feedback, just commenting myself.
If you have other suggestions, I'm all ears as to pictures. And an Italics I works great, actually. And I just got a perfect twist for it. Lovely.
>>47913628
>>47913652
>>47913608
I don't care about the pictures. What you have is fine. If you want to change them at the request of others, that's also fine. I'm honestly more interested invested in what you have alluded to as "twists", more than anything else. I'll browse my CYOAs and see if I recall any other authors worth mentioning, since you said you didn't mind adding more.
>>47913499
Requesting that you post the rest of this. My version is out of date.
>>47913607
Now now, calm down. You are being hyper-critical.
>>47913676
Thanks mate.
Not inspired by real events. I swear.
The government is finally revamping auto laws and, by coincidence, chosen you as an everyman to choose what area out of several that they focus on to start. Of course, you'll be testing these out first.
Before that happens, everything across the board will get safety and feature upgrades across the board. Repairing tires, stronger frames, GPS, the works.
Choose two. Be aware that other people will have them eventually as well.
>Self Boot
If your car detects you weaving through traffic too much, it will lock your speed to a maximum of the road's speed limit.
This is a big enough drawback for the people who do this that it doesn't need any extra frills.
>Teslas for Everyone
Not really. Because of emission standards and oil something or other, cars will be electric going forward. Better yet, during testing, charging up your car will be completely paid for by... Elon Musk. When all the cars are electric it'll go on your taxes.
Not like, shitty electric, decent-or-better electric. Battery pack or fuel cell. They come with some of the silly Tesla tricks, too.
>Self Driving
Of course, the government has been working on self driving car software/algorithms, and amazing they don't get rear-ended every five minutes.
Self driving car technology gets boosted a couple of years. Think the terrible iRobot movie, but less murder.
Watch your cellphone bill, cars will need to be chipped for this one.
>Shitpost on the Go
Requires Self Driving.
While your car is driving itself, you can chat with everyone in a reasonable distance in a basic chatroom where you're only identified by body type and color.
Yell at people for driving poorly, ask for restaurant recommendations, or tell everyone you just got cut off by Adam Sandler in a powder blue VW Passat.
People without self driving cars can get the chat room read to them. Possibly in the poster's desired TTS.
>Peacemaker
You get to test a neat laser/electric gun that pops people's tires. The new safety features mean they'll be back on the road in a minute, but it's the thought that counts.
It's close range and doesn't work on people. But it does work on that asshole that just cut you off. Three times in the last half-hour.
Gets about 3 shots on a weekly charge.
>>47913341
>cancer.png
We discussing WIPs here?
I wanted to make a waifu parody CYOA, but I gauged it would probably cause too much of a shitstorm.
So now I'm going to try to make a rap battle CYOA. If I can motivate myself to start writing it.
>>47913672
I seem to have lost the 4 part so if someone could post it that would be great.
>>47913585
What was the artist's name again? I can only remember his porn handle
>>47913676
I think this is it: http://imgur.com/gallery/4ClKo
if not Imaginos posted it on /r/makeyourchoice here : https://www.reddit.com/r/makeyourchoice/comments/4dd2wm/dream_prince_cyoa_nsfw_in_a_few_images/
>>47913341
Painter is a little small compared to the others. If your scaled down your source image, I'd try it again at a larger size and just crop a smaller (%) of the image for the girl. That is, make a crop such that not much more than the girl, easel, and the rolly table are in the frame, but the image is still the same size as the others.
>>47913672
>>47913799
If this the one?
>>47913359
I will never forget you,
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-fzFHdT7xao
>>47913704
>hyper-critical.
Anon, the picture is objectively shit. Her face is fucked up.
Beyond that, you can barely see her facial features (not that you'd want to) which you can for all the other images you've used thus far.
Well, not including Painter.
Image Version (1.11): https://www.mediafire.com/folder/43r0qdm4sm895/The_End_Approaches
>>47913708
Somebody is revamping auto laws?
Anyway go for it, be a car otaku.
>>47913872
>>47913457
What?! How dare you, I'm completely pure and wholesome.
>>47913890
Thank you.
>>47913341
Pls
>>47913854
Link to our archives instead of to a community of thieves, thanks.
>>47913915
Still intend to add Soul-Allies to this page.
>>47913341
Needs more husbandos.
>>47913936
People keep submitting women.
>>47913872
This the update or still the old version?
>>47913341
>>47913926
Requesting Pallas goes in as an Egyptian catgirl.
>>47913872
>>47913915
The lack of Werepyres is really disheartening.
>>47913930
>>47913949
Just a new page, and a half-finished page. I've been lazy.
>>47913321
>>47913321
My WIP is going rather smoothly, though how quickly I can get the first rough draft out depends on whether you guys mind pdf or not.
In case you were wondering, I am doing a revision of pic related.
>>47913930
>>47913915
>Take Dragon and Baby Dragon
>Use both at once
I'm being a faggot and you can't stop me!
>>47913927
In this instance the creator posted it on imgur himself. I agree with you on principle though.
>>47913974
>>47913341
I can't help but be a little disappointed you picked one of the smaller breasted symbiotes, but whatever. I'm just happy to actually be on one of these.
>>47913978
>In case you were wondering, I am doing a revision of pic related.
Why do you announce this every time, as if it's going to be your magnum opus?
>>47914008
Sorry about that, didn't think about how it would annoy you guys. Will stop until it is complete.
>>47913960
Werepyres are in Adventure Quest, not Dragonfable
Same company, same universe, but different games
>>47913927
>>47913986
Regardless, thanks for posting it.
>>47914007
If you want a better one, feel free to submit one, I just picked what I felt fitted best.
>>47913949
Seconded
>>47913872
>Mage
>Soul Weaver + Ascendant + Technomancer + Necromancer + Paladin
>Soul Ally
>Twilly, Greedling, Dante
Nature + Bane to humans
>>47914114
Petting them.
>>47913341
Highlander as Ciri is cute, given both's dimension hopping escapades.
>>47914114
I.. what? I don't... Killing?
>>47914114
Kill.
>>47913321
>>47913341
Did Quietanon do any CYOA besides the eponymous Quiet one?
>>47914114
Who wouldn't want to pet this?
>>47914213
This one.
>>47913978
>>47914217
I would, because I'm not apussy.
>>47914091
Nah, it's fine. Finding good art of SFW symbiote girls is difficult enough. Especially when you want a look that doesn't look completely monstrous.
Pastebin has been updated.
Reminder that if you have a cloud folder or repository or other projects relating to your stuff, let me know.
>>47914114
Depends on the setting in the CYOA. If the werewolf's first instinct is to lunge at me, then you bet your ass I'm going Bloodborne on them.
If they more or less keep their faculties, though, petting ensues.
>>47914262
Nice work.
You're a credit to your species, anon.
>>47914207
Good man.
>>47914256
Good to hear, all that leaves now is Ren, Speddrefuge, and Imaginos and page 1 will be ready for release, actually.
>>47914284
Nothing beats the smell of burnt elves in the morning.
>>47914288
Make this Spessrefuge/Lurl.
>>47914278
Vicar Amelia is cute.
I have an idea for a hero build, don't mind me just use it while I work.
>>47914332
>>47914114
Killing. You some kinda furfag anon?
>>47914288
I found Quiet
>>47914368
>>47914395
It's really cold tonight and I want to cuddle with a big puppy werewolf. They look warm and snuggly.
>>47914400
>>47914395
My werewaifu can beat up your waifu.
>>47913872
did you draw this stuff?
otherwise i'm concerned why there is such a huge amount of whacky drawings
>>47914455
I don't think your waifu even does anything but try to kill the player.
>>47914432
>>47914114
Petting if cute girly werewolves who are actually girls. Killing if bara werewolves like in your pic.
>>47914475
That's because she is pure and faithful to her husband.
>>47914504
Yes, it's a term for the fetish.
And no, they are furry. Anthro animals are furry regardless.
>>47914514
>Anthro animals are furry regardless.
Then monstergirls are furry too. You can't have it both ways.
>>47913792
Succy sucky soul five dolla?
>>47914476
I don't know if I am missing anything from this but I will get too the build, if I am missing something please post. Also what the hell is with the influx of furry shitposting going on, is trash getting uppity or what?
>>47914504
I agree that werewolves aren't really furry, but those pictures you're posting are pretty furry.
>>47914504
yes, you're a furry
this guy >>47914498 has the right idea
>>47914550
>Equating furry with monstergirls
You're that guy who that other anon yells at, calling him a furry for liking monsterboys, right? I assure you I'm not the same guy and I don't think monsterboys are furry. It's just that werewolves are not monsterboys, girls, what have you. They're significantly less human and have animal heads.
>>47914114
Werewolves are cute! They are for snuggling!!
>>47914399
>>47914585
Sadly some people don't like werewolves to the extent that even cute wolfgirls don't get their daily headpatting needs. It's a tragedy.
>>47914114
>It's a /cyoag/ argues about furries episode again
>>47914671
>>47914693
>It's a /anon/ makes a shitpost episode again
>>47914696
>>47914721
>>47914671
I wonder how many Hunters learn Monster Within just so they can assume the shape of their -kin/fursona or at least gain such a soul?
>>47914262
>pastebin updated
>my pastebin of all my cyoas (IIRC) wasn't included
brb going back to my corner now, this timecryingmore than normal.http://pastebin.com/3UeyUzxhI'll make a google drive whenever I can figure that out.
>>47913341
Where's Pallas
>post yfw you realise there is no headpatting cyoaand you will never get to headpat a cute girl irl
>>47914332
>>47914368
>>47914395
>>47914400
>>47914432
>>47914476
Author please post the last page. I'm sorry some people were assholes but some of us really liked it.
>>47914879
I don't think that poster is the author anon.
>>47914879
>some of us really liked it
Who could possibly like such a huge piece of crap cyoa?
>>47914927
Fuck off. People like you is the reason it's not finished.
>>47914560
In retrospect, I should have remembered to mention it was a parody.
>>47914958
Yeah, that would have helped.
>>47914957
Good. I'm glad we managed to get that cyoa aborted. The author saw the light and is now hiding in shame probably.
>>47914957
>author decides to intentionally leave CYOA unfinished because people complain
That's a pretty dumb reason desu senpai.
>>47915044
cyoa authors are no longer creating cyoas because they enjoy making them anymore, it might be a secondary motivation still. They make them primary for the adulation and headpats.
>>47914823
Haven't added a new row yet for Pallas, Scientist, and the mystery guest, considering a page break. after the 3rd set and putting the next 4 rows on a continuation page.
>>47915074
>headpats
I'd suck a dick for headpats desu. Even virtual headpats feel so good. I can definitely understand headpats as a motivation for cyoa making.
>>47915107
>I'd suck a dick for headpats desu.
That can be arranged.
>>47914827
Make one.
>>47915107
Some of these days, I swear you authors act more like sluts then content creators. Have some self respect man.
>>47914827
Head pats, you say?
>>47915150
Oh boy it's that CYOA where liking headpats means you're literally brain damaged.
>>47915150
>>47915144
were anonymous content creator's, often involving fantasy, waifu's, etc. We have so much thought and time that we decided to put it down for other's to make choices in our creations.
its only natural our lust and desires are equally, creative and exploratory. Our minds are full of thoughts of worlds and creatures and choices.
>>47915150
melonymelonymelonymelonymelony
>>47915176
>anonymous content creator's
>majority of cyoa authors use names
>>47915107
I'd begenderbent and turned into anon's loving and dick-lusting waifufor a single headpat.
>>47915150
Before I look, Red Box.
>post reveal
I'm fine with this, saddened by the addition of a dick, but nothing too bad.
>>47915258
Dick ruined it.
>>47914799
Added. I was requesting people to give me links since last thread.
Speaking of, I finally made my own Mega cloud:
https://mega.nz/#F!9YMmVC5Y!CyuwmUx-K4ggK60LRVme3A
I think it works. Also, if anyone needs source files (psd) from me or just image dumps, I'd be glad to upload on request.
>>47914982
Yeah... I think I won't scrap it after all, but give it a massive rewrite to make the parody / deconstruction elements much more over-the-top and obvious.
>>47915258
The dick is the only one that turned that one into an absolute no-sell for me. Otherwise I would be perfectly happy with the freak.
Chose the blue box anyway, which turned out more or less exactly as I expected and I couldn't be happier. The whole "another world" thing is troubling but theoretically all of the other girls are FROM another world, so it's just a simple reversal.
>>47915288
It won't save you.
>>47915258
The arms bother me more than the penis. She looks too freaky.
>>47915168
>penis
go back to the box, please
>>47915288
I hope I can convert the maid to a waifu with the power of D.
>>47906539
>>47906551
>>47906581
>>47906614
>>47906631
>>47906658
>>47906729
>>47906770
I am surprised by your trickery, Dead King, yet it still annoys me. Alright. I'll play your game.
>Rewards [30]
Immortality 5
Strength 5
Mental Perfection 5
Time Manipulation 5
Luck 5
Peaceful Life 5
Fuck waifus and companions, I'll make my own.
>Jobs [60]
World Ender 30
Magic Destroyer 10
Sacrificial Lambs 20
>Perk Points [34]
Unlocked Potential 4
Magical Training 5
Unique Arts x5 25
>Unique Arts
World Substitution x3
Unleash Potential x3
>Items
Bloodletter
Unmeil
>Helpers
Siona
Muse
2 Random Scrubs
>Modifications
Early Reward [Immortality 2]
Focus Spell [-1 Helper, +4 Perk Points]
>World Danger
Holy Shit [150]
Pretty dangerous world, right? Well fuck Dead King and fuck everyone because it's about to end.
>>47915417
Ask the Dead King to start me off in Asia, activate World Substitution, fly through the Earth until I'm 100m underground. Then I slightly influence the laws of the universe to change matter into energy. 100 square meters of ground instantly converted.
Me and my helpers are immediately killed. Well, I don't care since I'll regenerate. Half the world's population lives in Asia - they're instantly wiped out, giving the Dead King his coveted energy. The enormous explosion would quickly kill all life on Earth, let alone sentient life.
Tell me, Jael Nathanial Aruass, do I get a title for completing my mission in under a minute?
>"But Anon," says the Dead King, "This is an interstellar or even galactic civilization! You haven't finished the job!"
Ok, fine. If true, I'm sending out a really big fuck you to Dead King as that is borderline impossible. Interstellar and galactic civilizations are widely regarded as immortal. But I'm no a quitter. I'll fly to the goddamn center of this shitty universe's galaxy and when I get there, I'll enter the super massive blackhole's event horizon. And when I get within 100m of the singularity? Nullify gravity. Instant release of all that energy. eventually blowing apart the entire galaxy.
Now I really better get a nice title from being at ground zero of a galaxy destroying explosion.
As for me, I might as well join up with the Eternal Watchers though. Not like there's much excitement going on around this boring planet. No point in really learning perk skills when I can spam Unleash Potential to get them all.
>>47913628
Origin: Mutagen' Natural Weapon 2 for free
Appearance: Athletic
Faction Cult: Self Improvement 2 for free
>>47913652
Other Abilities: Total 25, Strength level 3(-3), Agility level 3(-3), Endurance level 3(-3), Durability level 3(-3), Enhanced Senses level 3(-3), Natural Weapon level 3(-1), Stealth level 3(-3), Reflexes level 3(-3), Immunity level 3(-3). Will be back after drawbacks. Drawbacks will now let me get Self Healing 3(-3), Mental 3(-3), Focus level 3(-3), Shapeshifting level 3(-3), Self Improvement Level 3(-1), Social Enhancer level 1(-1), and Inheritable level 1(-1) I don't really need but I want kids with bad ass powers too and I don't have enough to be to overpowered too do my next plan.
>>47913672
Perks: Prime Subject so my Mutagens don't pop out and blow my cover, Charisma will be useful for my plan later, and finally Expert, I want total control of my abilities and this will be the best shot, with my enemies picked I will also Training, Safehouse and Identity. Drawbacks will be Valuable, Traitor, Hated, Bodyguard, Weakness as for what I have planned wont be too relevant (hopefully) . plus 15 points.
>>47913890
Allies will be Satan for reasons to be divulged later, and Alex Keller.
Foes: Prototype, Ghost, Fiona Dawley.
>>47914879
Also not the author I just had some of it on hand and don't know if I have it all. Gonna translate this build into the rape school cyoa.
>>47913890
>Shark O'Shannahan
>Mechanical
>Inhuman
Once a normal shark, he was fitted with mechanical legs and arms, bionic lungs, and a speech adapter by a mad scientist to be his servant. Little did the scientist know, that this shark... Had a mind of his own.
>Terrorists
After escaping from the scientists lab, Shark joined a group of freedom fighters that advocates for the rights of uplifted animals.
(ABILITIES)
>Strength 2 (free)
>Durability 3 (22)
>Agility 3 (19)
>Reflexes 3 (16)
>Endurance 2 (14)
>Stylish 3 (11)
>Weapon Mastery 2 (9)
-Shark is a master of two handed swords, and carries his signature blade, razortooth.
>Mental 3 (6)
-Shark is not only a master fighter, but little did human's know that sharks are the smartest race on the earth.
>Focus 3 (3)
-Because of his advanced shark brain, humans cannot read or control his mind.
>Familiar 3 (0)
-Shark's best friend from his time as an aquatic animal was given 4 spider like robotic legs and an extending scorpion tail, as well as a voice adapter.
-his best friend was a much less powerful trout named Timothy Trout.
> Immunity 3 (from neutered)
>Directed Energy attack 3 (from hated)
(PERKS)
>Unique weapon
-The zweihander known as Razortooth was made specifically for shark as a gift by a wise old master of sword fighting who became shark's great friend. He died of cancer at the age of 97. The sword is made of obsidian and has one jagged side.
>Reputation
-Shark O'Shannahan is known as one of the greatest fighters to have ever lived, and is also well respected, even by his enemies, for the great measures he goes to to never take an innocent life.
>Expert
(DRAWBACKS)
>Neutered (3)
>Hated (3)
(ALLIES)
>Max
-A founding member of the same group as Shark. In fact, he was the one who recruited him.
>Hannah Caldwell
-Her parents died while she was a baby. She was raised by the freedom fighters, with Shark acting as a father figure to her.
PART 1 DONE
>>47915457
Damn dude, I think you just outdid a god with balls to the wall annihilation.
>>47915504
(PART 2)
>Yuito
-One of the few humans with a mental capacity similar to his, Shark enjoys intellectual discussion with Yuito.
>Lindsey Caldwell
-Most of Shark's group sees her as an annoyance, but Shark is one of the few to treat her with kindness. They have seafood dinners together sometimes.
(FOES)
>Fiona Dawley
-Even though Shark is a kind soul who never kills innocents and tries to help people as much as he can, in her reports she portrays shark as a monstrous murderer. Main reason he is hated at large.
>>47915511
Kek. Thanks man, Shark O'Shannahan and his buddy Trout are pretty badass
I got tired of editing and decided to make the changes I wanted to make and upload it. Still have the edit notes from that anon 2 threads ago. But making all the changes got tedious. Anyway, what's new.
Perk/Focus distribution got redone. Again.
Added new content to page 4 where you can roll dice to make a build.
>>47915716
Still haven't adjusted focus powers, that's gonna be an "all day" project.
>>47915281
lel, you made the depression cyoa? I don't know what to say, really, other than:Why?don't mind me, just trying to upload my cyoas to a google drive.
It's hard because I have to sit in the corner while doing it. Also hard to look at a screen when my eyes are filled with tears, but I try!https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B0h6Ycwh1mNzS2dfbnYzN2FtNXcalso my name is with a small "k". So "kit", not "Kit".
Going back to corner until I can make of the cyoa now
>>47915736
Also I'm planning on rewriting Improved Familiars to make them a little more desirable.
Still on the fence about adding 3 more and what they should beno slime familiar.
Anyone else just siting here waiting for the revamped Pokemon Personified to be linked?
Italics said it'd be yesterday or today.
>>47915765
And added "Just for Fun" to the bottom here. No changes, otherwise.
>>47915765
I'd give them improved versions of the perks they are limited to. Also, general improvements to them all around - like bigger size and stuff.
>>47915740
>also my name is with a small "k". So "kit", not "Kit".
Lies. You are Kit, and Kit you are.
Did someone say WIP edition?It's a Box Wine is an easily distracted piece of shit and fails to meet self-set deadlines because of it episode.
>>47915740
It was a joke. I don't really know why.
Once I'm done all my big projects for this year, I'm probably just gonna retire from "big CYOAs" and make small shit like that. In a more serious sense though, not like Depression CYOA.
I'll update the pastebin again. Thanks for the link.
Also,we're gonna make it, comrade. Just hold in there.
>>47915457
hahahahahaha
i can't stop laughing.
>>47915736
I think most of the Focus perks are plenty powerful for a familiar. The biggest problem is that it implies the master only has access to that spell, or that that spell is the best they can do. This is especially true for witches.
I want to see the focuses as a sort of bleed off from the master. This is what they are really good at, so the familiar gets a tiny fraction of what the master can do in that area. That would imply that the master has access to both spells in the focus as well as far more powerful magic that a familiar couldn't even dream of using.
>>47915417
>>47915457
It's funny, but you have the exact same perks and Arts that I took on my first build. I reached the conclusion that World Substitution, when paired with Unlocked Potential and Unleash Potential, would essentially open all of the doors to the nearly infinite (number is so large it may as well be infinite) number of occurring and recurring timelines and allow you to transcend to something beyond godhood. Regardless, that is easily the most powerful build you can have.
>>47914474
www.dragonfable.com
>>47914671
I like this one because it fulfills my dreams of being a badass lancer.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MGL-u4aH1pM
Where is the Urban Fantasy CYOA? People keep talking about it like it's been posted.
>>47915946
Soon TM
>>47915806
That's the general idea, yeah.
>>47915849
This is good, and makes sense. The CYOA does fail to clearly mention that the masters have WAY MORE POWER than you think they do.
>>47915840
just gonna stay in corner for now.
Corner is safe, safe like cage. Outside world is scary place.Can't even do small, simple cyoa. can't write more than one sentence.
gonna go back in corner now, until I can make cyoa. can't make cyoa, can't make post
I'll post rest of cypoa on drive tomorrwo, yes.
Well, today. i'ts 3 am in four minutes.
>>47914172
I'd throw her a bone... if you know what I mean.
>>47915980
dude, you don't sound alright
>>47915980
You... may want to go see a doctor or therapist.
No, seriously kit.
I even just finished writing up your tile for the CYOA.
>>47915823
Spiceology and Arithmetician need different bonuses. Rather, it's the math specialist who should get low-key divination like the guy from numb3rs where the currymaster should probably get 'partially real' illusions as a sort of alternate sensory manipulation or overload. Maybe flavor the spice class as a subclass of bardism in that it takes a certain artistry to master?
>>47913902
>tfw you can't find a good picture, so you don't bother making a build
I just wanna make a legshark, senpai.
>>47915823
Holly crap, the vagueness aroundArithmeticis crazy. I absolutely love the concept, but it kind of just seems like it buffs everything non-physical slightly. I mean, if that's what you're going for, then cool, but I just thought it seemed a little "out-there" for a class, where most of the classes you've had so far have been pretty clean cut. Otherwise, great work!
>>47915977
Oh, yeah, also forgot to mention that you have good taste in taking icons from GW2, the tooltip and HUD art in that game is based
>>47913321
So whatever happened to Pokemon Personified? Wasn't that coming by today?
>>47915980
kit? A-are you okay?
...Don't be sad! You're my second favorite author here!
>>47915823
Are the Legem Dei students not allowed to take unholy arts in an exchange class? I think (from what I'm assuming lore-wise) that there should be something preventing them from doing so.
>>47915311
Well, the whole thing is basically written as an insult to people that want a perfect, faultless anime waifu.
>>47915823
Awesome work Box Wine, if I might make a slight suggestion Arithmetician seems slightly overpowered.
>>47915840
>wrote my name with small k
You're okay Freund, even if you're not from Europe. It's okay to have mistake. Makes you not boring.
>spoiler
we try yes? In time we do good? get good?we can make cyoa in future yes?
say "yes" please. I don't want to stay in the corner.
>>47916032
it's 3 am.
>>47916049dawg pls. Dawg. Nigga, this shit isn't how I actually think.
Shit, you actually think I mean this shit seriously? Oh god no. I'm taking the piss on ya.
>>47916117
>favourite
!
>second
...
>>47915823
Math Wizard seems a bit overpowered. Not by much, but they just seem to be able to do ALOT, very efficiently and with no implied drawback besides of course mana consumption since it is magic based partially.
>>47915980
Take care of yourself, friend. Burning yourself out won't do any good.
>>47915980
Enjoy your cage, Kit. I hope it's a comfy one.
>>47915977
I'd actually prefer to keep the general power levels down a bit. The elders are already implied to be pretty crazy strong, but otherwise I'd rather not be disintegrated by a mere thought regardless of perks/specialization.
>>47916187I have seen WAY too many fucked up people, but alright. Sleep well. And a preview just for you, cause I'm bored as shit atm.Feel free to say it's shit, I'm used to that stuff. :^)
>>47916187
>anon takes the shit I'm writing seriously
[WE DAMAGE CONTROL NOW]
but seriously though, I can't make a CYOA right now. It's like, I can write down a few options just fine, then my brain shuts off the imagination part.
So I *could* start on a CYOA, but I'd get stuck after a few options, so yeah. I'd rather take a complete break from all things related to making a CYOA for the rest or the month and July.
Now, can I go back to sounding like Aqua after using "Heal water" or whatever the spell is called (a very quick Google doesn't tell me the spell's name)?
>>47914671
>Class
-Sorcerer
>Stats
-2 STR
-6 DEF
-6 AGL
-8 INT
-4 SKL
>Blessing
-+3 stat points
>Skills
-Physical:
-None
-Magic:
-Catalysts (19)
-Fire (18)
-Arcane (17)
-Detect Magic (16)
-Barriers (13)
-Ethereal:
-Recall (12)
-Blessed (11)
-Premonitions (10)
-Telepathy (9)
-Healing (8)
-Wings (5)
-Ascension (2)
-Indomitable (1)
-Pocketing (0)
>Terrains
-Desert (45 TRIB, 3 THR)
-Glacial (45 TRIB, 3 THR)
>Persona (90 TRIB)
-Gender: Girl (85)
-Age: 13 (80)
-Beauty (75)
>Resources
-Upper class home (35)
-Library (25)
-Diner (20)
-Hot Springs (15)
>>47916187
I'm sorry!
But come on, second favorite is great! There are like, what, more than thirty different authors if we count them all?
>>47916187
sure, I don't mind. Just don't kill yourself or anything.
Have a song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=us2RC2LxnCc
>I'm taking the piss on ya.
>
>>47916094
Thanks. I hardly play the game anymore, but the plethora of skills in it were too good to not use for all the focus powers.
>>47915980
Are you okay man? If you wanna talk we'll listen.
>>47916243
Wait, Kitsunes are foxes, not cats.
>>47915823
No. Its a doing shitty sandpeople first instead of glorious DEUS VULT academy episode.
>>47915150
>cyoaforants.jpg
>>47916243
I'd recommend a different font, to be honest. All caps is kind of distracting.
>>47916299There's a reason it's short for kitty, not kitsune.
You will find out eventually, but not yet.
>>47916302
It's just enormously too huge for your monitor.
I'd say try again with a new tab, but that one was terrible.
>>47916326
I chose Bebas Neue Regular cause it's easy to work with actually. It's tight and easy to go back and edit. I'll think about some other options.
>>47916207
Cage is friend.
>>47916205yeah. It's why I won't do any work on any cyoas, even if I reeeeeeeally want to.
Seriously, I really need a break so I can make all those CYOAs I have plans for.
>>47916243that image is shit, dawg. i mean, dawg. Dawg.
I'm not reading it until you've finished the cyoa. I want to be surprised, hopefully positively so
>>47916276
can't be good if not best. Best is only place.
second best is first loser!
>>47916371
If it makes you feel any better, my favorite author hasn't posted anything recently, so you're my favorite for now.
>>47916371
i picked it
>>47916297god fucking damit.
Here I am, taking the piss, pulling your leg, trying to sound like Aqua-sama, and y'all think I'm broken in the head
>>47915823
As it is, Arithmancy seems to be just a stronger version of Magic Enhancement.
>>47915823
>teachings of bello
>Primogenitus
Something tells me you took some inspiration from that robochick/transhumanist tech priest build.
>>47916144
The problem is the people who do that don't know what realistic faults are either. They go too far in the other extreme.
>>47916380
>you're only my favourite while that other guy is out of town
So what you're saying is, I'm your side-ho, and I'm "good enough" for you for a few days?I guess it'll do....
>>47916243
okay I read it.it's shit. no seriously, am I supposed to be human, or a cat that looks like a human?
>>47916297I wouldn't say no to talking~~
>>47916187
Why is Aqua in a cage?
>>47916302
>5000x2000 pixels
>okay.jpeg
>>47915823
>math wizard
I'm definitely staying St. Flares, but I'm taking Exchange Student just so I can get that. How much power can I pump into it? Can I mutter F=(Gm1m2)/r^2 and send people flying as gravity reverses? Can I shout F=uN and send people's feet skidding out from under them as friction vanishes? Can I wave a hand and say Q=kAt(Th-Tc)/d and freeze their blood as the heat vanishes into the air? What shenanigans can I do with this?
>>47916385
there are soooooooo many better images.
Here's a kitsune with brown fur/ears/tailI liked the song
>>47916493
Yeah, with the vague wording math magic seems like the most op class in existence. Box wine pls nerf
>>47913628
>Magical
>Beyond Human
>Military
>Focus 2 (free because Magical)
0
>Endurance 3
3
>Durability 3
6
>Immunity 3
9
>Directed Energy Attack 3
12
>Self Healing 3
15
>Strength 1
16
>Passion 1
17
>Self Improvement 2
19
>Flight 1
20
>Agility 3
23
>Enhanced Senses 1
24
>Stealth 1
25
>Reflexes 3 (3 because Valuable)
>Training (free because Military)
>Unique Weapon (magical melee weapon like lightsaber, powered by my passion)
>Armour (stylish armour)
>Reputation (known for being kind but very emotional and passionate by coworkers)
>Prime Subject (free because Fiona)
>Samuel Mason
>Yuito Kataoka
>Fiona Dawley
>find book of magic in old library
>start learning simple magic only to discover it's owned by ancient magical being
>mysterious being offers to help make me super powerful sorceress in exchange for favors
>military notices me because magic has changed my appearance
>military decide I'm valuable and capture me
>they destroy book and owner (prime subject)
>forced to work for military instead of magical benefactor
>kick butt of evil terrorist groups with help from Samuel and Yuito
>do lots of good, but have trouble with public image because 9 feet tall with wings and have bitchy reporter trying to make me look bad
>will have to find a way to deal with annoying reporter, but unfortunately can't just kill her
>>47913121
Sorry anon, but no topless.
>>47916485
Because when expanded in line it doesn't expand all the way, 5000 doesn't fit anyone's display, so instead you get text for ants.
This is why you keep the horizontal size small, one of the reasons anyway.
>>47916472
Seriously, though, you make great CYOAs.
But nobody can top my waifu Beri.
>>47916484
because she had to Purify a lake with crocodiles. They put her in a cage to protect her.
IIRC it took her three hours, then two hours of spamming "purify water" while crocs tried to get to her, before she succeeded.Just in general, any kitsune that has eyes like that, where they kinda look yandere, and kinda look like hearts, is gold to me.
>>47916545<3
It's nice to hear, anon. Really. There's some guy who keeps saying everything I make is shit.
>>47916545
But Beri is a slut, a slut for headpats!
>>47915774
Yeah, looks like Italics just upped and vanished. C'mon, man, it's WIP edition - just post it already!
>>47916255
I guess I wouldn't mind giving Aqua some rough anal now that you mention it...
>>47915150
Bold predictions without looking at second page
>all are sluts
>Melony is trap
>Vivian is jewish golem
>blue mystery box turns YOU into waifu
>all other are too suspicious
Their secrets are probably crazy as hell, I ain't risking my life with them. picking blue mystery box because why not
>inb4 I was totaly wrong and paranoid
All of them look too suspicious, I aint
>>47916618
get in line
>>47916609
I can't help it. It's like a sickness, an addiction. At least it's a strong source of motivation.
>>47916646
Nah I'm not interested enough to stand in line for it. But I might go for it if she offered.
>>47916297
box wine pls.
>>47916646
>zero ass
fucking japs can't figure out how to do butts
>>47916618
>>47900433
Human
Winner is so good as to invalidate other choices.
Fast Learning is super great. Swift Shadow is very useful, since moving quickly is a boon to remaining undetected. Sneak attack synthesizes with it well.
I'l take a stealth suit with an anti-magic personal shield generator. (1650) making me very difficult to see or harm. I'll take a melee weapon, a simple but sturdy cut and thrust sword, and a pistol. Again, simple and durable, so something like a colt 1911. That brings me up to 1800. I'll take a portable energy generator for the shields, I guess fifty bullets at one credit each, and keep the change for future use.
Seraph seems like the surest route to establishing a local powerbase capable of asserting sovereignty later.
>>47915823
What are the main differences between potion mixing and spiceology?
Also is Jah'Kara Tel relaxed enough that it would teach some of the less ethical potions?
base class warrior
advanced class dragonlord
>>47916673
Just because it isn't not round or fat, doesn't mean it's a bad butt.
>>47913341
>That feel when you want to make OC so you'll get on here, but you're a hopeless incompetent and don't have any good ideas.
I'm trying to put together this mecha CYOA, but I'm having trouble balancing it and fleshing it out well enough. Mainly because I originally intended it to be dice rolling tables.
>>47916646
the booty game is weak in this one
>>47916545
Beri is top tier waifu author.
>>47916620
well, I've gambled, at least it's not trap, my paranoia bested me
I'm just gonna repeat: The shit I, kit, wrote was an attempt at being funny.
I realize that backfired heavily.
I am not suicidal, okay?But I am going back to not posting, not until I can make cyoas againor when anon makes that cyoa that includes a ghost waifu, or the guy who accused me of being a filthy cheater finishes his
>>47916829
I'm still working on my CYOA, don't worry. It was just my birthday so I've been drinking and playing videogames for a few days.
>>47916609
He makes what the people want!
>>47916749
You want Darkness then. She got the booty game. I hope you like extreme masochists though.Best girl is still Megumin but Darkness is right on her ass
>>47916925
[spoilers]What ass?[/spoilers]
>>47916948
today I learned that I can't even 4chan properly
>>47916948
Keep talking
>>47916673
>fucking japs can't figure out how to do butts
They know how, they just don't favor that kind of ass. It's fetish-level degeneracy over there to want that much rear mass.
>>47916972
I sure will cause you know what?your waifu doesn't exist
>>47916961
Don't worry the saint Ctrl+s is going to save you
>>47917030
>your waifu doesn't exist
First she's not mai waifu. Akemi Homura is. Second fuck you the noose will make her real.
>>47917037
Or you could just learn the tag once and be done with it.
>>47917085
ctrl+s is faster
>>47917085
But Ctrl+s is so much simpler
>>47917075
... well that got morbid quick.
>>47917075
Waifus only come to those that live a long, satisfied life. Work hard, senpai :^)
>>47917075
>he doesn't have a .45 ACP waifu maker
You'll only let her down when the rope snaps from your fat ass.
>>47916537
Dang, that angel dude means business. Wouldn't want to meet him in a dark alley.
>>47917075
>Wanting a Waifu who fucks up Everything Forever
>Repeatedly
>Wanting a Waifu who's a Lesbian
>>47914332
>>47914368
House Neptune for the only point going into Allure, I want to be as under the radar as possible for my "job" to be done and 3 points for Social perks.
Attributes: Allure: 1 "Forgettable" free from house, Elusive: 2 "Average" -3P, Force: 2 "Average" -3P, Threat: 2 "Average"-3, Study 1 "Slow" -1 I am in it for the long haul acting like an idiot is the least of my concerns.
>>47914400
I will take a bunch of flaws sense I am making a bullshit build for flavor and there is no limit on how many I can take to fix myself up behind the scenes. In order for what I got going on, Bane+1, Binding Vulnerability+5, Monster+1,Haunted+2,Pact+3,Possessed+5, Aversion+5 multiplied by 5,Dark secret+2 multiplied by 10 because I will step on a lot of toes and cant be bothered to write out how many secret plans I will set in motion, Responsibility+2, Slave+3, Ward+3 the enemy knows about the person, but not entirely about me, this will be fun no Wealth+1,Glasses+2, Nymphomania+2,Virgin+2 sense it is relevant at the moment but without the reservation to preserve it. That should be everything of note sense I included plans being a dark secret, total points gained 87 from drawbacks and the original given number. I will spend 60 points getting Elusive, Force and Study to rank 5, then pay 12 more points to raise Elusive and Strength to rank 6, I now have 18 points to use, but 3 are required for social perks sense I didn't ad them into the original total. I'll get 3 mandatory points of Social out of the way Guardian-3. Now for the rest Connections-3, Friendly-1, Martial Training-3, Magical Training-5, Authority-3 for a teaching position.
Favorite class magic.
>>47914432
Magic Spells I learned while here from the magical training is Counterspell 5 from my study score, Vow Difficulty 7 sense I am smart enough to be a rule layer jackass that it shouldn't be to much of a problem, Hypnosis Difficulty 6 and Modify Memory Difficulty 2.Hitting the character limit will continue
>>47916673
>fucking japs can't figure out how to do butts
Brother!
>>47917194
>.45 ACP
>not using 9mm exclusively
>>47917184
Its too late all is lost.
>>47917194
;_;
>>47917200
>Wanting a Waifu who's a Lesbian
Everyone on 4chan is a little girl or wants to be the little girl though. Having a waifu who is not a lesbian is wrong.
>>47917267
>9mm
>not using 9m
Get on my level, weakling.
>>47917274
Pic related. Me on the right.In my dreams ;_;
>>47917196
>him
