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>>47883668
I'm sorry I couldn't respond sooner SDA, but I was banned all day yesterday and hand to work today:( Anyway, it's sweet to hear your happiness at taking your relationship with your gf to the next step of seriousness and closeness. Don't let jealous people keep you down!
Working on Familiar now. Dunno how long the changes will take.
>>47883694
Don't start this up again, faggot.
>>47883826
Wrong one.
>>47883689
Well, I might as well use this as a chance to upload the latest version of page 6.
Changed the pen pal drawback into the transfer student, just made more sense to me.
>>47883857
Social Butterfly would be better if it gave you the girls in the picture as sex slaves.
>>47883855
now the rest.
Ren? You there?
>>47883904
>>47883822
I'm not starting anything! I saw in thread people were harassing SDA basically just for having a gf cuz they're jealous! I couldn't give friendly support to SDA though cuz I was bannedAPPARENTLY warhammer lizardmen are OFF TOPIC for /tg/! >:(.So I been wanting to say something nice to SDA all day, but had to work.
>>47883944
>>47883977
>>47883893
HaHaHa
That's true. But if we want slaves then we can just visit the Basilisk Den
>>47883914
>>47883815
Yo.
I'm thinking about how I want to implement this "Hard Mode" that other anon wants.
>Captcha "Select images with Waffles"
Well I know what I'm having for breakfast tomorrow.
>>47883904
psychometry is actually a really cool power. i know it's a "real' thing, but still, it's a neat addition to a cyoa.
>>47884116
Yup, gonna make a build for it later. I also may or may not embrace my inner munchkin.
>>47884112
This probably was already asked before, but is it possible to disguise Superhuman Body with Physical Restructuring?
>>47883954You know what would be the best possible support?More tits.
>>47883857
Thanks. I made a suggestion for that sort of thing about a week ago as the way it was written you can't really hang out or be with your companion besides the inter-school events. Cool change.
>>47884107
I have a proposal for a hard-mode difficulty setting. You are summoned to that world as an unbound familiar (e.g., you don't actually have a master), you lose your focus, and may only take 1 perk.
>>47884107
I am, in fact, that anon. Need suggestions?
>>47884179
Here's a suggestion, anything but this. Seriously, ew. The whole point of the CYOA is that you're a mage's familiar, you dummy.
>>47884163No SDA, you have a gf now. It wouldn't be right!
>>47884200
Lay em at me. I have plenty of ideas for the "events" of the hardmode stuff, I just don't know what to do for them, based off of the rest of the CYOA. Like should they have rewards? Should they replace Milestones? Should there be a dice roll to see if you survive the event?
>>47884321
>>47883590
Oh, and I have a build for this. Remember that Faun? That was me.
Ageaus "Lucky" the Faun.
>SCHOOL
St. Flares
>CLASSES
Ranged Combat II (focus on thrown weapons)
First Aid I
Unarmed Combat I (Goat kicks!)
Knowledge I (Astronomy/Geography)
Divine Arts III (Particularly focused on the god/ess of travel or stars)
Maneuvers I
Druidism I (He IS a fey, after all)
>CLASSMATES/COMPANIONS
Kit (She's exotic, like Lucky, but the relationship would be purely platonic)
Sorte (Like Kit, platonic relationship, she'd be more of a tutor and companion for romps through the forests)
3 more TBA (who wants to be friends with the Faun?)
>EVENTS
Great Tournament: Great Hunt (When fighting beasties it's imperative you bring a healer along!)
Harvest Fest.: Fundraising (he has a soft spot for them orphans, yo.)
Gathering of Life: Party Planner (He's a faun, he knows how to have a good time)
>CLUBS
Music (What? Don't look at me like that. He likes playing the pipes, sue me.)
Culture Club (He'd probably bounce around as the years passed, cooking one year, book club the next, etc.)
As far as fauns go, Lucky's a bit of an odd duck. He's not particularly capricious, doesn't seek ah... carnal pleasures, and is actually quite the gentleman when it comes to the lovely ladies. He doesn't mind wine and drinks responsibly, and is more than capable of sitting quietly in class, learning all he can, as opposed to being a social butterfly like you might expect out of a faun student.
He's stricken with an insatiable wanderlust, however, and joined St. Flares with the intent of learning everything he needs to travel the world at his own pace. He finds beauty in the stars, and peace from the sunsets. And if the academy can teach him what it takes to be a goodhearted person and hero, all the more better!
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>>47884259
Oh. Nah, I don't think they need rewards, unless you want to fluff out your build. Think of them like, say, the clubs and events from Hero Academy. No real effect on the build, just enough to make life interesting. I mean, you can go ahead and add effects if you want, but I don't personally see a need. All I want is a plot to drive my master/mistress as she goes about the world with me now.
>>47884362
Ah, well that's easy then.
>>47884359
If this was a Visual Novel I wonder how bad the bad endings would be, and how many there would be.
>>47884163
>>47884253
this is like hentai dialogue
>>47884112
Dr. Spark M.D.
Origin: The Watcher
Religion: Ubermench Society
Faction: Independent
Homedistrict: Free Traveler (+500 credits because i dont need TWO motorcycles)
Hubworld: Throne of Yisun, Break Jagganoth
Companion: Sans
Panic Button: The God
+2500 credit start
Drawbacks: Falling (+1500)
Knee Breaker (+1000)
That Guy (+500)
Warped (+500)
Forever Alone x4 (+2000)
NO GOVNAS DOLLA! x14 (-5600)
2,400 Credit end
Perks: Tech understanding Advanced (3)
Adaptability (4)
Martial Training (5)
Mathematical Genius (6)
Berserker (7)
Critical (8)
Steam Adept (9)
Traveler Adept (Free)
Magnetic Adept (14)
Nuclear Adept (13)
Mechanical Adept (12)
Scavenger (11)
Educated (10)
Survivor (9)
Tech-head (8)
Pariah (7)
Forge master (6)
Experimental (5)
Memory (4)
Self-Aware (3)
Alchemist (2)
Runemaster (1)
Clothing: Travellers leathers (Free)
Nemean Lion Hide (2,050)
Weapons: Yuta Brace (Mandatory)
Seven Shot Colt Revolver (2,000)
MAD.11 Hunting Shotgun (1,800)
Knick Knacks: Pegs (Free)
Survival Kit (Free)
Basic Bag (Free)
ID Card (Free)
Alchemy Set (1,500)
Runist Kit (1,200)
Munitions Worktable (1,000)
Hacking Module (900)
Ethereal Measuring Set (760)
Whale Skin Marks (660)
Chain (650)
CIY Brain Implant (250)
Limb Replacement x2, R/L arm (50)
Organ Replacement, Emergency Revivication Pancreas (ERP) (0)
>>47884386
Here's the box.
>>47884380
Well, yes, unless you want there to be something. I would suggest adding difficulty levels and limits, so you don't get a Waif trying to take on an entire magical typhoon all by herself. I mean, it might work, but it breaks immersion over one knee with a single swift stroke. Unless they can write well enough...
>>47884392
(Repostin!)
Dragged from the backwaters of time and space after creative steam inventions met ruthless, frenzied attacks against large corporations and theocratic seats of power, Doctor Spark was a vigilante of his place fighting for the wonders of his age to see new breakthroughs that where often kept under lock and key of the ruling class. After his floating city block was burned to the gro- er...air, taking his life's work, his lab, and his fortune, he fled the country on his final living contacts word. Little did he understand what he was stepping into...Now a new man forged on the anvil of war tempered with progress, the quite solitary 'Doctor Spark' looks to further the mystical arts of SCIENCE and field test them on the monsters of the world.
Now, about those vile aether warp- err... 'mages'?
>>47883944
>So many drawbacks.
>So many points for evil acts.
I think this cyoa will give me the opportunity for the most overpowered build in all of /cyoag/ history. Will post it soon.
>>47883590
Name
>Bjorn Ursus
School
>St. Flares
Classes
>Martial Combat 2
>Physical Training 2
>Maneuvers 1
>Blue Magic 3
>Monster Hunting 2
>Beast Taming 2
Companions
>Sorte
>Kaerulaus
>Kit
Events
>The Great Hunt every year
>Security year 4
>Bodyguard year 5
Clubs
>Cultural club (woodworking)
>Educational club (zoology)
Drawbacks
>Exchange Program x 2
Blue mage Frontiersman / lumberjack build based around fighting monsters for profit and increasing my blue magics potency. Fight along side my trusty Bear companion whom I'll name Ben.
>>47883590
>Name: Alex Sharpe
Born a mere peasant, Alex showed a remarkable magical talent along with a ruthlessness and drive for success which drew him to Lunestier.
>School: Lunestier
The student body here is sometimes atrocious, but no one can argue with the school itself. For up and coming mages and diplomats, there is no superior choice. The idea of a place so removed from the daily struggles of poverty such as Lunestier is mind blowing to Alex. Having seen the classism and air of superiority surrounding most students, Alex takes care to keep knowledge of his origins under wraps away from the school harpies.
>Classes:
Arcane Magic (3) Can never go wrong with the classics. This is the field which made Alex fall in love with magic.
Elemental Magic (3) with specialization in fire and water/ice magic. This will be the back up magic, used only when Arcane isn't enough to get the job done.
Diplomacy (3) Words are powerful, best to keep them in your arsenal.
Magic Refinement (2) Running out of mana during a battle is humiliating, as well as dangerous.
Dueling (1) Even a mage needs to know how to handle themselves in a physical confrontation.
In combat Alex uses his magic mix to keep his opponents guessing. He greatly prefers one on one confrontations, because it's much easier to keep track of a single foe. Outside of fighting Alex tries to use his words as his best weapon, ending fights before they have a chance to begin.
>Companions:
Mecherath. Having information and connections on your side is invaluable for keeping ahead of the Lunestier sharks. Making friends with the school informant is going to be a great boon.
Bathsheba. The tank of the group, brings resilience and strength. Also creates a long term ally by helping to protect her from the AI nerds.
Chandara. Every party needs a good rogue, and Chandara fits the bill perfectly.
>>47884534
Farhat. Without a good support, even the strongest of teams will crumble. Besides, its always a good thing to have friends with friends.
>Events:
>Year 1: Party Planner, Fund Raising
This will be a year for Alex to establish an understanding of the various schools through Party Planner, along with building some capital reserves with Fund Raising. This money will support Alex and his adventures in the coming years.
>Year 2: Research Proposal (Condensed Crystallized Arcane bombs)
Portable magic grenades, usable by anyone and everyone. Who doesn't want to see crystal fragmentation grenades? Or the equivalent of a magical flashbang?
>Year 3: The Great Hunt, Bodyguard
Building connections is half the reason people go to Lunestier. Developing a relationship with Cynthia Highking could create a very valuable ally later on. The Great Hunt is an opportunity not just to enjoy some good old fashioned adventuring but also to test the skills and relationships Alex has been developing for the past few years.
>Year 4: Party Planner, Battle Royal (4v4)
Building relationships along with some good old fashioned team fighting.
>Year 5: Battle Royal (1v1),
The final hurrah. Alex doesn't expect to win (though that would be fantastic). This event is entirely about personal satisfaction.
>Clubs
Student Government: Sounds fun, plus having a bit of extra influence is never a bad thing.
Drawbacks: Hated Prodigy x1
Alex has sought only one thing in his life: escape. Growing up poor has imbued him with a inferiority complex, one which Lunestier only worsens. But throughout it all, he is determined to rise above his origins and make something of himself. He hopes that Lunestier can be the launching pad for a successful future. But distinguishing himself among the elite of society is no easy task, and Alex still has a long way to go before his aspirations can be realized.
Parents of room-mate came over, didn't have a chance nearly all day to work on the cyoa. or play any video games. le sigh. How is everyone else's progress fairing?
>>47884579
I just work on the writing for my CYOA on the skytrain/bus ride on the way to and from school. It's about an hour and a half each way. Then I do a little bit of image searching in the small time I spend at home before going to bed (unless I play some video games)
I've almost finished writing out all the descriptions for the planets/races, and then I need to start writing profiles for the girls.
So ya know. Slow but steady. I probably could get it done faster if I didn't listen to podcasts at the same time, but whatever. I'm in no rush.
>>47884321
Goat Tier: Frigg, Isis, Nut, Shub-Niggurath
God Tier: Bastet, Freyja, Hestia, Sjofn, Chantico, Xochiquetzal
Good Tier: Athena, Demeter, Hathor, Inari, Izanami, Minerva, Nike, Amaterasu, Cybele, Nephthys
Okay Tier: Artemis, Astraea, Ba'laat Gebal, Epona, Eris, Mors, Nctos and Nctolhu, Nyx, The Triple Goddess, Tiamat, Yidrah, Chalchiuhtilcue, Itzpapalotl,
Yan Tier: Hera, Nyarlathotep, Ishtar
Rapes You Tier: Hastur, Nyalathotep, Selena
Mystery Box Tier: Yaweh
We can all agree on this listing?
>>47884399
This is so heretical.
>>47884687
you forgot the meme
>>47884200
I was being facetious. I just think that it may be something along the lines of unnecessary to cater to a difficulty setting in an otherwise well done cyoa.
>>47884687
>Implying its heretical
>Implying just because it might be heretical you still wouldn't choose Yaweh
>Tfw Italics didn't add Jesus.
>>47884389
Well anyway, I just wanted to say that to you SDA since you seemed upset. People were just jealous though. Have fun growing relationship with gf. And remember to be good bf too!
>>47884799
>Jesus loli
now this is something I can get behind!
>leave for a month and come back
>check the pasta and lurk a bit
>nothing new and decent except that gifted CYOA
What happened?
>>47884922
I mean, I feel very similar to you, but... people made what they wanted to make? That's what happened? What do you want me to say, everyone suddenly developed shit taste? You could have said that yourself, Anon.
>>47884922
Is Hero Academy really a month old now?
>>47883826
Identity: Andrew Mcman, 16
Power Source: Genetic, learned how to use most of my power, but hormones are making shit difficult, and the suits that showed up are a pain in the ass too. Changes; Emotional: Strengthened+7/hormones got agitated from powers, Physical: Deformed+10 got a bunch of burns on most of my body along with wide scar on my check and neck otherwise no change, shaving will be a bitch so I'll just burn my beard off as it get too thick, Mental: Enhanced-6, Life: while I have enough for Prime I will get Reset-5, Memory: Knowledge-5 I want to keep my personality, Spiritual: Magnet+5 someone is hunting me, don't know who but it will be a bitch to find out.
>>47883855
Now 36Pts for fun shit. Lets get started.
Telekinesis-4(Precision-2, Power-3), Pyrokinesis-3(Control-3, Catalyst-2, Source-5), Psychometry-1(Muscle Memory-3), Athleticism-4(Peak Human-3), and Vitality-3(Immunity-3, Painless+5, the burns damaged my senses), will be back here after curses are picked. 43 points from curses now, Charm-3(Adored-5) want to keep any ally I can gain later that I might not get to have otherwise, Friend of Nature-3(Animal Friends-3) I want to ask the neighbors dog why other animals don't like me, Mechanics-3(Inner Focus-4) I have shit aim so I want to fix that before it becomes a problem, Interference-2(Uncontrollable+5), Tongues-2(Non-verbal-1), Healing-2(Self Service-5, Miracle-3), Teleportation-4(Quick Step-4) picture it like Infamous Second Son, Barrier-3(Permanent-3, Wide-2) if I get in close I don't want the enemy to escape bubble shield and firestorm combo, Mediumship-1 because I had 1 point left and thought I would grab it for flavor.
>>47883944
Unsettling+5, Phobia three times for +21 and in order claustrophobia, fear of pigeons(don't know the specific name, its a big city thing), and fear of flying, Insomnia because I already got that irl so fuck it for +9P, and finally Animal foes+8, total 43P from curses. Back to power list.
>>47884162
I think the reason why superhuman bodies are so strong is in part because of their ×bawks huge size.
>>47877777
>contact
Don't get me wrong, that's, uh, flattering and all, but, why would you want to?
You can post a temporary email and I'll get at you.
>>47885021
That's reasonable, but I find the idea of a little schoolgirl with the ability to bend steel beams really fun.
>>47884922
there was actually a lot. branching heart, hero academy, hibiki's, 2 gifted cyoa's, kit made some extra, short and sweet succbus and become a waifu cyoa, short monster girl cyoa, and we have crossworlds is nearly finished.
not to mention we've had a burst of new cyoa creator's, like me and I made colors (really, really shitty quicky) and frame's (emulated quiet's mystery for that one, not half bad*)
* = citation needed
working on a monster boy, a new creator cyoa is being made, half of the other's are working and finishing their work, etc etc.
its been good actually, just quick.
>>47885097
I showed up, made some software and a gun cyoa
I've made my mark at least a little.
Oh my fucking god fuck me.
I accidentally hit "Do Not Save" in Photoshop. Jesus fuck there goes a few days of work. Is there any way I can recover this shit fuck?
>>47884922
SDA and Angelanon drama happened.
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/47847600/#q47847670
>>47885196
Oh fuck I had three cities done fuck.
>>47885196
It might keep a backup copy just in case like Word does
>>47885196
No way, you are joking... o.o
>>47885196
I came here to laugh at you.
>>47885223
No you fuckcunt i am not fuck.
>>47885216
I don't fucking know how to access that does anyone know to to fix that?
>>47885196
>going literally multiple days without saving
>>47885196
data recovery program?
>>47884799
>>47884718
There is only one thing to do with unashamed heretics who violate the Lords name.
>>47884987
Ran out of space so here is the rest of it.
>>47883977
Guardian: Ally, might as well get adopted.
Home: Yarrow Falls, Gravity Falls with G-men coming soon, may also include drinking with Sasquatch.
Allies: can someone clear up whether or not the adopting parent or student family takes up an ally slot? No one cleared that up for me so I don't know, I went with not but I will change the build if necessary.
Allies(Students): Kate Fox is self explanatory and she caught me practicing my Pyrokinesis and Telekinesis in the woods, Peter Blake because he found me while out hunting and we started hanging out(May or may not think I am crazy because I was yelling at a Squirrel), Danny Glass because he seems like a bro and could get some off the grid help, possibly.
>>47885249
wouldn't matter if he never saved any changes to disk.
>>47885241
Fuck i get it's on me ok.
>>47885249
What where when who howmuch?
>>47885240
well, this is how you do it on office
https://support.microsoft.com/en-us/kb/316951
>>47885196
This is one of the benefits of using google drive to write text before using Photoshop.
But to answer your question, I have no idea.
>>47885275
what program you using?
>>47885300
Photoshop CS6. Pls help.
>>47885275
now that you've been properly admonished, here's something from google:
http://designpotato.com/how-to-recover-unsaved-files-in-adobe-photoshop-cs6/
>>47885311
https://www.google.com/#q=photoshop+cs6+recover+unsaved+file
>>47883855
>>47883904
>>47883944
>>47883977
>>47884020
Male
16
Experimental
Dulled (35)
Sickly (42)
Enhanced (36)
Leech (36)
No change (36)
Magnet (41)
Drawbacks
Unsettling (46)
Empathy (53)
Inhuman (58)
Asexual (63)
Animal Foes (71)
Insomnia (80)
Sadism (88)
Powers
Telekinesis (84)
Power (81)
Precision (79)
Pyrokinesis (76)
Control (73)
Source (68)
Mind reading (64)
Deep Dive (61)
Healing (59)
Self Service (54)
Miracle (51)
Levitation (49)
Teleportation (45)
Quick Step (41)
Indirect Sight (39)
Vitality (36)
Painless (39)
Athleticism (35)
Peak Human (32)
Raw Power (26)
Barrier (23)
Permanent (20)
Wide (18)
Tongues (16)
Nonverbal (15)
Blessing (12)
Weather Control (9)
Pain (4)
Mechanics (1)
Dowsing (0)
Guardian
Nobody
Home
Riverfront East
Allies
Students
Derek Wright
Adam Wiley
Anna Ramstead
Adults
Henry Morris
Charlie Hedden
Perks
Overcome x2 (+21)
Extra Powers
Levitation (already purchased)
Flight (16)
Efficient (12)
Mechanics (already purchased)
Inner Focus (8)
Charm (5)
Adored (0)
Story and plan in next comment.
>>47885318
With these new powers of mine, I have become something more than human. In fact, I’m practically a god. So here is a fun little question for you:
Why shouldn’t I rule like one? Who would stop me?
Taking the throne of the world with my power is fairly simple; first, I will have to cause a couple of droughts over farm land to occur and cause many great “accidents” on others. After that I will have to lay low for a while, draining the dregs of society of their life and causing great pain to them. In addition, I will begin the research on strengthening my powers.
Once I felt enough time has passed, I will emerge from hiding and reveal myself as a god among men. And I come with a simple deal to the mortals of this city;
Worship me, obey my every command, and I bring salvation.
Should they agree (and with my powers, only an idiot would not), I will end the droughts, heal the sick, and begin my rule as the new god king. All this time, I am using my advanced mind to try and understand the origins of my powers. With Insomnia and asexual, I should have plenty of time.
Within time, I will be able to demolish entire armies, men will tremble in my presence, and I will finally find a way to strengthen my powers. When all's said and done, I will rule a kingdom of devout worshipers, with enough willing to give years of their lives to me. After that, I will begin to expand my sights to beyond Earth; to other planets, galaxies, and possibly beyond that.
Thoughts?
>>47885312
OH SWEET ALLAH THANKS.
Imma post a teaser page for you this worked thank you so much you are the real hero boy anon salam.
>>47885275
calm down quiet, we'll help you.
http://blogs.adobe.com/jkost/2012/04/background-save-and-auto-save-features-in-photoshop-cs6.html
also, I'm gonna post my WIP, i need to know if its blinding to the eyes, if it sears your vision and make you vomit. haven't added the monster's or words yet, font/color suggestion's?
>>47885337
Take the lesson to heart, man. Save obsessively.
>>47885364
>blinding to the eyes, if it sears your vision and make you vomit
Yes.
>>47885370
doesn't need to. there's an autosave program in photoshop 6.
Wow I've developed much more respect for you CYOA makers. I just spent 2 hours looking for a handful of character pictures just for builds. It's really fucking hard to find to find pictures that match what your character looks like in your head.
>>47885364
Desaturate. I need a darker purple.
>>47885364
It's not soooo bad. I mean, I've seen worse but yeah the purple should be something else...
>>47885376
Seconded. Don't listen to that guy. Never save until you're finished.
>>47885364
Personally, the only colors worse to look at than a general purple are pink, bright yellow, and stark white. Dial it back.
>>47885374
>>47885384
>>47885386
damn it. Knew it, but the darker purple makes the entire cyoa lose its burst of colorfulness. its make it look more grim when its suppose to be fun, little bubbly and sexy. I need a better background color. Help?
>>47885196
I'm sorry that happened Quiet. I hope those links help you out!
>>47885337
Yay!
>>47885420
Did you work as an animator on The Problem Solverz perhaps?
>>47885420
Go with a light pink then.
>>47885067
We can't be friends
>>47885420
Desaturate to a lighter color. Think pastels.
>>47885420
wait wait i got it. I'll just make the text more "popping". Genius. Not bright purple of course but this way i can convey seriousness and fun. Yes.
But of course, tell me if its good on the eyes. If not I'll test out different shades of blue.
>my favorite CYOAs are Pokemon Personified and Familiar
>both are currently being reprocessed
so this is what agony feels like
>>47885469
>flesh
>blood
>bones
>>47885469
Everything about it is hurting/straining my eyes.
>>47885466
That's okay. I never liked you :^)
Here you are people, Page 11 of Urban Fantasy, you've already seen Page 10, which details all of the cities you can choose from.
>>47885214
What!? Angel's A GIRL!? But that's so controversial, so SCANDALOUS! How will /tg/ EVER recover!?!?!?!?
SDA's a REAL human being with a REAL life?! Not a soulless machine that makes us cyoas 24/7!? What EVER will we DO!?!?!?
>>47885469
I think it's better, but text could become an issue if you're not going to stick to one outside of these options. If you're really stuck on purple you should try for something more in the middle of the two settings you've used.
I'm partial to light blues and greenish-blues such as aquamarine and teal, myself. As long as you don't make them pop too much they're quite nice to look at, though white/yellow text doesn't work well. Plus blue is a typical "lel boy" color so it fits.
>>47885266
My dumbass hit send before I finished, my bad.
Adult Allies: Adopted by Louise Webb, Became friends with Henry Morris when I was walking by the shop and helped him move some antiques inside the shop, and Issac Bowman, met him through Katty Fox and seems a bit more likely to send out a big broadcast incase some big monster shows up.
Perks: True Original: Aliens for my extra origin, So my healing power, barrier, and teleportation came from ET go figure, and Inheritance, weird thing is one of the suits I saw came by Louis's house and she told him I was home, I thought it was an attack but got told my parents are dead and his superiors wanted to give their condolences, life sucks when you get 50,000 and bad news at the same time. Plus side they aren't trying to hunt me, downside I still feel something coming after me. Still got date money so silver linings.
>>47884579
Doing fine. Pokemon Personified is my main focus right now. Working on it for tomorrow's release. (Hopefully)
After that I got a lot of stuff on my plate. I like to start a total of 3 cyoas, and work on them in a rotation. The main three active projects after Pokemon Personified:
-(OC)0rder, a fantasy adventure cyoa I always wanted to do with its own branching class/skill system for the player to use to make themselves several different builds.
-(Spin-Off OC)Spire, a cyoa set in the same world as Dusk City. Got 4 main factions/routes for the player to go down in the urban fantasy world.
-(OC)Time & Ages: Interstellar, a sci-fi cyoa set in space. I want to make it feel comfy, but adventurous have some non-human waifus and bros in it.
>>47885363
Deep blue hole, yellow hole, green hole.
Anon who is reworking the Seven Sins cyoa. Just wanted to let you know that progress is going smoothly; Just about done with Lust, and Gluttony is two or three sentences away from being done.
With that said, the original cyoa had some, for lack of a better word, quests (Pictured here). I was thinking of adding some more. I already have one or two added, but otherwise I am coming up blank. Do you guys have any Ideas or general questions on my progress?
>>47885518
I'm having a hard time not shouting stupid memes about that city.
>>47885363
Stick it in purple, pink and white holes. Pick up my dick and stick it in blood red hole to get a new one
Please, which one of these do you guys think would look best/do any of them look good to you? I can't tell what is good on the eyes. its my fatal flaw.
also, to make it a real cyoa, after you tell me what color to pick, pick what color you want your skin to be.
>>47885721
Take the pale blue one.
I'd like my skin to be orange, thank you.
>>47885735
>>47885721
nipping this in the bud, 5 each row, 4 rows, left to to right 1-20, which one is the pale blue?
>>47885569
Just post the Pokemon Personified CYOA as soon as you possibly can. How close are you to finished?
>>47885743
13
>>47885620
You mean L O N D O N?
Denizens of /cyoag/. I hunger for cyoas where I can obtain large sums of power. If you would be so kind as to give me a few, feel free to do so.
>>47885518
>London
>not overrun by child raping Pakis and muslims
Truly magical
>>47885807
Try not to minmax too much
>>47885855
kek
>>47885865
Not really much of a choice if I don't know what I am getting myself into, is it. In any case, I'll take the doughnut.
>>47885855
Truly 12.4% is a horrifying number.
>>47883815
ALRIGHT! Finished editing the first 3 pages, so Familiar is presentable now. Milestones are gone. Aspiring has his Focus back. A few text edits, and made it clear in the Species section that you have to be small enough that your master (who is certainly no bodybuilder) can easily lift you over his or her head with 1 arm, unassisted.
I kept the bars for masters because honestly, they don't detract from the CYOA, and I worked too hard on them to just delete them.
Prodigy now requires that you take 2 Jobs. What are Jobs? Working on them now with Page 4, in addition to Events. But since your build will need one, here's a quick, short list with short descriptions.
>Free Spirit: Your master doesn't ask much of you, leaving you free to do whatever you want, really.
>Layabout: You're there to be a magic battery and petting object and that's about it, you lazy bum.
>Lure: Time to get dangerous! You distract and attack enemies with hit and run tactics.
>Mascot: You're there to be as cute as fucking possible, and cheer for and support your master and his or her friends. Good for therapy.
>Protector: You defend your master from threats, let him or her know about potential threats, and make sure he or she is always safe, to the best of your ability, at least.
>Sage: Two heads are better than one, and you can help your master study, read books and share what you learn.
>Scout: Familiars are small and innocuous, and often speedy, so you spend your time looking ahead the road and around the area to make reports for your master.
>Spy: As above, Familiars are small and, most of the time, innocuous. You sneak around and steal shit for your master.
>Valet: You live to serve. Delivering letters, fetching things, cleaning around, and more or less being a small, personal butler or maid.
With that, posting pages 1-3.
>>47885763
it doesn't look good at all.
>>47885922
2/3.
Also, forgot to mention. Prodigy's 2 job requirement can't be Free Spirit or Layabout. For obvious reasons.
>>47885927
Well then, I must have shit tastes. Sorry about that.
>>47885946
And 3/3. Alright, back to work on Page 4 for me.
>>47885903
Correct.
>>47885973
>>47885903
>>47885855
Play nice, you guys. This is /cyoag/, not /pol/.
>>47885903
It's a lot more now, plus their current mayor is Muslim and he's completely wacked. He spends all his time bitching about american politics, whites, and seeing skinny girls in bikinis and how bad that is.
>>47886027
>seeing skinny girls in bikinis and how bad that is.
I legit kek'd at this. Could I get a link?
>>47886041
First result, don't blame me if it's a shitty site:
http://dailycaller.com/2016/06/13/londons-muslim-mayor-bans-sexy-women-in-advertisements/
He's bananas.
>>47886065
Holy fuck I'm muslim and that's fucking retarded. What the fuck white people? Why would you elect him?
>>47885518
>can't bro it up with the queen
Why you do this?
>>47886077
Self-loathing is the Western way. They see a Muslim guy running for office and they vote for him just so they can say they're not 'prejudiced', completely ignoring what the guy's personality and platform is. That's how you get clowns like this.
>>47885922
How easy is it to access poisons here? Do wizards often work with them?
>>47886085
Ofc you can.
>>47886099
Why do you guys do this? Why not just wait for a good muslim guy to come along and wait for him? This shit is only going to make you white people hate us more...
>>47886122
I just told you man, it's a race to 'virtue signal', basically to make yourself seem the most morally upright and progressive person around, else people will gang up on you and potentially ruin your life if you speak out. Everyone's gone crazy these last few years.
Painter, my recommendation to you is to pick a very neutral background color (something soft) and only use 1 color for your text. Having different colored backgrounds for different powers/abilities/drawbacks is fine, but I think making those two elements neutral will provide a nice balance and make it easy on the eyes.
Just a recommendation.
>>47885949
i don't want to clog up this thread with my WIP 100+ times, 2% done, all in different colors but trust me, that color when applied with the pictures and crystals, do not look good together.
>>47885922
Sooooooooooo, ren, this feels horrifically blasphemous to ask but since I'm what people would call, "the most horrible background artist that has ever lived" and "have shitty eyes" could you make a color in your photoshop that looks good? I can't seem to create one.
Witch
Wandering mistress
perks 4
Species: Mammal- shetland sheep dog.
The yvkvoov (the stars)- aberrant anatomy.
breath weapon- acid
Venemous
Warper
>>47883590
Coming out of hiding to do this one because I've always wanted to make a character that peddles magic cards
Jack Kansit
>School
Odesium
>Classes
Arcane Magic II
Elemental Magic II
Illusion Magic II
Knowledge III (Focus on selling stuff)
Enhancement III (I -need- this to enchant cards)
>Friends
Malyvin
Luvyna (Not picking to for waifu)
Valerie (The three person package, despite how generic sounding it is these three resemble my closest friends so it just works anyway)
Evergreen (Heard about the emotion magic business, you can bet Jack is gonna try and bottle and sell that as a card)
(Blank for Drawback)
>Events
Fund Raising x 5 (Jack actually has -no- financial support, and seeing as he'll be hopefully making bank in the market anyway this could be the best opportunity to pay for the rest of his classes)
Battle Royal (Jack won't make it far, but any chance to refine his knowledge of how magic should be employed in battle will help sales)
Security (Despite Jack's serious greed, he has ethics in that he HATES thieves. He can't turn this offer down and intends to lace the event with magic traps. He -will- beg his friends for help too)
Not taking clubs, there is important work to do!
Taking Hated Prodigy for one less companion and two more classes
Jack has always had a fascination with magic, and at a young age thought it would be great if anyone without access to magic could get quick access to such spells. As he grew older his pure desire to give magic to the world gave way to greed, but the core idea still remains.
He intends to put himself through school, paying for his tuition each year during the Festival, and if he makes it through Pocket Mage(C) will be hitting the markets all over the world.
>>47886166
I think I've just been hit by inspiration. I still need to find good colors but i think i know how to make a good background now. It will take some work though.
>>47886122
She's not a companion. Then again I guess broing it up with her sister enough will give you an opportunity.
Also holly shit that "Don't be a pussy man. Just take it all." was hard to read. Maybe I need a new set of glasses or something.
>>47886119
Witches find/make poisons more often than wizards do. But if you Spy or Scout, you can probably find some relatively easily.
Barring that, just be a Reptile or Insect, and/or get the Venomous perk.
>>47886122
Some of it is 'virtue signal' as >>47886147 said, and some of it is the idea of 'maximizing diversity' is inherently good and worth pursing over other values.
Not knowing the local politics, he might've just been the most electable of the bunch, or frustrated minorities voted for a fringe candidate while more reasonable candidates split up their demographic's vote.
Communities will also sometimes vote for a terrible challenger to 'punish' an incumbent that has incurred their wrath. And sometimes sub-communities will elect a terrible candidate to punish a normally dominant voting block. It's not unusual to see suburbs vote for a candidate that promises spending to the 'burbs despite it being fiscally irresponsible because dammit why is 'none' of the money ever spent on the 'burbs? (Because businesses pay more taxes than the fucking burbs which keep the taxes in the burbs down, you morons.)
Municipal politics are the worst.
>>47885336
Nice mad dictator, I made this>>47884987
>>47885266
>>47885542
Haven't thought of a good story yet though.
>>47886175
Well, I mean, I'm no artist supreme myself, but you can take my CYOA and use the eyedrop tool literally every image editor has.
>>47886175
You fucker i did this yesterday and used a Shetland Sheepdog you're fucking copying me
YESTERDAY, this is not a coincidence, i'm the only one who can be the qt witch's shetland sheepdog damn youGood taste in dog breeds you bastard
>>47886247
Are there any supernatural ones or is it all mundane equivalents?
>>47886323
Imps are venomous.
And far from mundane so... yeah. I mean I won't make some up right now, but that should answer your question.
>>47885394
>fifth mouth
waiiiiit...
>>47885363
Purple,Lavender,and Silver.
Or alternatively Gray, Purple again, and blood red so I can get a clone to do my work for me.
>>47886009
Why not both?
>>47885922
Master: Waifish Orphan
Species: Mammal (Monkey)
Focus: The Alley - Face in the Crowd
Perks: Freedom, Pickpocket, Speedy, Telepathic
Alright, shit, I died. And… I'm a monkey now? Could be worse, I s'pose.
My master is a promising young witch, she's kind and has her heart in the right place.
I'll have to be wary, to keep others from running a blade through it.
This new body serves that purpose well – quick, slick, and deft of lift, I'm perfectly suited to 'acquiring' rare, expensive things – or thrusting a monkey-sized shiv in a man's eye. You know. If I have to.
I think we'll get along quite nicely.
Just got back from the ER. What'd I miss?
>>47886496
A - waifu
B - waifu
C - magic
>>47885922
Hmm, my crow build was already prepped to be protector, scout, spy, and valet (messenger bird), and I still figured I would have enough free time to consider myself a "free spirit".
Perch on a tree or fly ahead, watch for any suspicious activity and report via telepathy, infiltrate places I'm not supposed to be with ghostwalk and steal stuff or eavesdrop, deliver written messages (flight+speedy), or even attack someone threatening my witch by crashing into them with my speedy, sturdy body (and sharp beak).
And with the way Waifish Orphan and Wandering Mistress are both written, with the exception of simply being "on guard" all of these tasks wouldn't be likely eat more than an hour of time per day put together. Delivering a message to another city would take longer (not MUCH longer, given my speed), but that would be a rare occurrence.
I was looking forward to some less mundane jobs for the both of us, but it looks like a pretty easy life really.
>>47886496
Trench coat
Waifu
Book
So is that author cyoa that one anon working on a waifu one or not?
I just got home and got plenty of symbiote pics.
>>47885518
how come did i miss the other page fuck
>>47886801
I'm not even sure, they can't decide.
>>47883855
>>47883904
>>47883944
>>47883977
>>47884020
13 YO
Old God power source
Changes:
Fixed+10
Deformed+10
Enhanced-6
Prime-15
Fresh Start+10
Magnet+5
Powers:
Healing (Self Service, Miracle)-10
Barrier (Permanent)-6
Vitality (Immunity, Painless)-3
Pain (AOE)-10
Mechanics (Inner Focus)-7
Tongues (Non-verbal)-3
Remote Viewing (Presence)-9
Telekinesis (Precision, Power)-9
Teleportation (Quick Step, Indirect Sight)-10
Mind Reading (Deep Dive)-7
Empathy-2
Dowsing (Specific)-2
Interference (Targeted, Destructive)-6
Invisibility (Invisibility Field)-8
Future Sight (Relevant, Clarity)-6
Apportation (Pocket Dimension)-4
Curses:
Empathy+7
Inhuman+5
Asexual (Neutered)+7
Animal Foes+8
Sadism+8
Unsettling+5
Perks:
Overcome x2
Guardian: Nobody
Home: Westwood Heights
Allies:
Children: Derek Wright, Anna Ramstead, Peter Blake
Adults: Joseph Harrison, Jane Farley
It needed a champion. A vassal through which to spread It's glory to the world, and the child was perfect. Oh so perfect. It was generous to the child, ensuring that they would always be happy. That they would be brilliant. That they would never age beyond their prime. And the other boons that came with It's blessing! It's champion could seek out relics It deemed important, manipulate through guile and force to prepare the world for It's return. The boons were not without drawbacks, but It accounted for the risks. Previous memories clearly had to go, they would interfere with the child's loyalty. The ghoulish appearance and air of unease were unfortunate side effects, but the vassal could hide beautifully with their power, and was of a strong will even before the change. The powers that be knew of the vassal though, such was unavoidable. Nature shunned them while both foe and friend of It would seek the child, knowingly or otherwise. It deemed them well enough equipped to deal with hardship, however, especially as they sought out and even gained the companionship of others that would spread It's glory.
>>47883826
>>47883855
>>47883904
>>47883944
Name = Farrel Dharma
Age = 11
Gender = Male
General Appearance = Noctis from final fantasy xv (Pic related)
Power source = Genetic
Emotional = Fixed
Physical = Perfect
Mental = No Change
Life = Prime (Body will age until 24 and then stay there)
Memory = No change
Spiritual = Repellent
Vitality, Painless, Immunity
Healing, Self Service, Miracle
Athleticism , Raw power
Barrier, Permanent Barrier
Pyrokinesis, Pyro Control, Pyro Source, Pyro Catalyst
Levitation, Efficient Levitation
Mechanics, Inner Focus (Extreme Agility)
Dowsing, Specific Dowsing (To detect anything that will feasibly burn)
Drawbacks : Taphophobia, Tokophobia, Dipsophobia, Inhuman
Guardian : Ally - Joseph Harrison
Home : Yarrow Falls
Students : Leah Dawson, Adam Wiley, Peter Blake
Adults : Jane Farley, Julie Stater
Perks : Overcome 2X = 12 points
i'll be a vigilante type hero, it'll be awesome, Hunting paranormal beings with Blake and Jane. it'll be fun
>>47883590
School: St. Flares
Classes: Survival 1
Maneuvers 1
Stealth 1
Blue Magic 2
Monster Hunting 2
Ranged Combat 2
Traps 1
Friends: Kaerulaus, Malyvin, Crale Edwards
Events: The Great Hunt 1 - 3, Security Year 4 and 5, Body Guard Year 3 - 5
Clubs: Cooking Club, Disciplinary Squad
Drawbacks: Exchange Program - 1: Aerial Combat 1
Transfer Student - 1: Mecherath
He is planning to become a great monster chef! But he keeps getting involved with non-monster chef events, sometimes even being sent elsewhere.
>>47885922
>>Mascot: You're there to be as cute as fucking possible, and cheer for and support your master and his or her friends. Good for therapy.
>>Valet: You live to serve. Delivering letters, fetching things, cleaning around, and more or less being a small, personal butler or maid.
I want this.
>>47885903
0.00000000000000000 is the only acceptable number. Britain is white. Period.
>>47886892
It wasn't that important, just the names of all the cities.
>>47886496
List A : Waifu
List B : Honorary Seat on the board of control
List C : A copy of "Sepher raziel for Dummies: invoking astral powers for fun & profit"
Master: Waifish Orphan
Species: Mammal (Fox)
Focus: The Unknown - Aberrant Anatomy
Perks: Sturdy, Telepathic, Warper, Breath Weapon
Job: Sage
I'll be a most studious little fox, making sure that my little mistress is as well-armed with knowledge as any wizard. After all, the two of us have seen the things that are out there. It's a very scary world. If it becomes necessary, my perks and focus would let me be a very persistent little thorn in an enemy's side with the potential for lethality if ignored for too long. But we shouldn't make any enemies, right?
What? No, of course I'm not 'literally a writhing mass of tentacles and fangs crudely forced into an adorable mammalian form'. That would be ridiculous. I'm just a normal fox!
>>47886527
I think the two of us would get along pretty well! With all the telepathy going around, we could be quite the silent peanut gallery for the sorts of shenanigans that young witches are sure to get up to.
>>47887174
Why wouldn't you post child Noctis if you're 11 years old?
>>47884173
Thanks man I got the idea from you.
>>47887478
Going to make me repost my build again.
>>47885922
>Waifish Orphan
>Avian: Crow
>The Spirit: Ghostwalk
>Speedy
>Sturdy
>Telepathic
>Pickpocket
Job: Protector, probably/mainly
I basically sit in a tree nearby and watch, 99% of the time. Maybe I steal a shiny, maybe I use myself as a living bullet to defend my master, but usually I'm just "around".
>>47885963
Bit of an error in Freedom
>You can easily slip out of the hands of people who try to grab to grab you.
>>47887734
Thanks! Fixed, it'll be clean next time I post it!
>>47885903
Yeah. They're probably Allah forsaken manlets too.
>>47886496
Post the most up to date edition
>>47887543
made this for your avatar.
>>47887995
Why the dental stuff?
>>47883590
>Name
Gen Dokari
>School
Ej Har
>Classes
Tactics (3)
Knowledge (3)
Divine Arts (1)
Mage Armor (2) (Exchange Program x2)
Necromancy (2)
Unholy Arts (1)
>Companions
Cassiopeia
Malyvin
Luvyna
>Events
Escort
Research Proposal
Party Planner
>Clubs and activities
Student Government
Paranormal Research
>Drawbacks
Exchange Program x2
Gen was never a particularly nice guy before his first year at Ej Har. After the thing at the festival of life, he withdrew even further into his shell. The people that could still be considered close to him were extremely worried about his behavior, as he seemed obsessed with seeing the apparition again. If they didn't know him better they'd think he was willing to end the whole world if it meant seeing her again. But no one's that crazy, right?
"Mal, get in the fucking Mage armor." -Gen
>>47888003
because you said you were a hygene enthusiast, pennny whistle blowing, theater going person. and an aspiring lawyer. Made it yesterday but i don't know if you saw it.
>>47888032
>>47888003
*damn it. i thought your name was "box wine" not "quiet". damn it. i look a fool now.
just replace you with he.
>>47885922
Really looking forward to the last page of this! Here's what I'm planning so far:
Witch-Wandering Mistress
I'm a bit confused why her Solitude score is so high. You're part of a traveling caravan of merchants I'd think it'd be fairly low. Unless that score was worked out before Familiars could speak by default. Really though a traveling caravan filled with all kinds of folk and seeing strange new lands sounds like a very cushy way to build up Karma. Plus since she's a witch she thinks of me more like a companion than a tool.
Improved Familiar-Carbuncle
I'm the most adorable thing since chinchillas. I'll probably do well with the rest of the caravan, especially if there are any children around. Plus I might be able to help draw in a few customers whenever my Mistress sets up shop in town.
The Body-Cleanse
Being a Witch of the body is probably reliable work at least. Especially for an aspiring alchemist. People are always looking for healing tonics, diet potions and witch protein powder. Cleanse lets me be a real help around camp able to cure any illnesses or injuries on the road, even when supplies are scarce. Of course I'm sure my Mistress could do it just as easily but this way she can conserve her mana.
Perks
Charming - Simply the best. I'm going to have to do something about my ego.
Ray - Not too useful in a fight but I can offer a distraction before darting away if things ever get rough.
Speedy - I'm blue and move fast. Time to step it up.
Freedom - Lets me move through the forest easier, reduces chance of toddlers pulling on my tail
Job-Free Spirit/Valet
Not that I'll be lazy, more that I'll just probably be dabbling in a bit of anything the camp or my Mistress needs at the moment. Need a scout? I can weave through the treetops with speed and grace. Bring in a few hares for dinner? I could probably manage a hunt with my ray ability. Watch the caravan's kids? I can sacrifice my dignity for a few hours to keep them under control.
>>47888056
Compare the others. The young options are both in a school for mages, so they have a ton of other magic users, familiars, and probably mundanes around as well. The Elder Master is similar with his council of archmages, and probably has to deal with lesser mages as well one way or the other.
Compared to that, one or two other witches and a small group of regular people out in the wilds is pretty solitary. Not as solitary as a lone adventurer or the only wizard of the small party of murderhobos, but you won't be meeting many other magical people.
>>47883857
So how does the Exchange Program work?
Does it completely open a new class for me, or does it give me one extra course only to take in another class?
>>47884480
>Bjorn Ursus
Damn it Bear Bear
>>47888293
>>47888325
>full tang not included
>>47888349
I've looked into it, but I haven't gotten a clear answer. What part is the tang?
>>47888391
The bit that runs into the handle.
>>47888400
Labeled diagram please?
>>47888416
>>47888479
I see why it's a jew move to make you pay for that.
>>47885963
DONE!
I didn't want to get rid of the Milestone background art, so...
But yeah. Get a Job. The general idea is that most familiars can do basically all of the jobs here at any given time, but the one YOU choose is the one you're best at.
Whew. This was a lot of fun, though. To make and to see the thread have fun with. I'm not sure if I'll make any additions in the near future, considering my oncoming vacation, but I'm pretty happy with how it turned out now.
>>47885394
I'd probly have to go with Erica the Racoon, casual relationship with an agressive nympho is nice and seems safer than the rest, Manticore was a close second but those claws could probly take a chunk out of me on accident. Squidgirls a close third.
>>47888497
>Free Spirit
>Your master undestands
>undestands
God-fucking-damnit.
>>47888524
I undestand thought. I undestand compleatly.
>>47888497
>>47888524
looks great, don't sweat the minor grammatical issues. you're probably a little tired from working on it so take a breather. besides, we all make misteaks.
>>47888543
>>47888560
Spotted another one under Sage too. Missed the "m" in contemplation.
I am a failure to you all, and have brought great dishonor to this family.
>>47888497
>>47887570
Officially, protector. Unofficially, there are many ways I can protect and Spy covers several of them.
Actually officially might still be Free Spirit. But keeping my witch safe is in my own best interest.
>>47885196
Protip: Don't go longer than an hour without saving, not days.
>>47888615
>Not habitually saving every few minutes.
It's so ingrained that I try to ctrl+s away from my keyboard.
>>47888479
How do you have a sword without a tang? Wouldn't it just fall off the hilt?
>>47887931
I don't have it. Post it if you do.
>>47884020
Male, 11
Dark Magic
Emotional - Dulled - +5
Life - Prime - -15, age 11 forever
Physical - Perfect - -4
Memory - Fresh Start - +10
Mental - No Change - 0
Spiritual - No Change - 0
Net points = 26
Empathy - +7
Barrier - -3, plus permanent, -3
Athleticism - -4
Tongues - -2
Levitation - -2, flight, -5
Apportation - -2
Pyrokinesis - -3, with source, -5
Telekinesis - -4
0 points
Guardian - Ally
Home - Withermouth
Students: Danny Glass, Leah Dawson, Carl Knight
Adults: Julie Slater and Louise Webb, adopted by Julie Slater
Perks: Inheritance and Boarding School
Good CYOA, enjoyed reading it. Basically, make me an 11 year old boy forever, but with the strength of an adult and a handful of powers. I'll hang out with my strange combo of friends and solve mysteries senpai.
>>47888497
>>47885963
>>47885946
>>47885922
I don't know why I like this CYOA so much. Usually I want something that causes me to end up at least marginally better off than I am now, and I don't really see how being a bird-slave could possibly be better. But I've enjoyed it enough to update my build throughout all the updates so far.
>>47888838
It's not that they lack a tang, it's that they remove part of it making them (swords/knives) near worthless. It's fine for decorative pieces but complete shit for functional use.
>>47888950
Except a half tang costs 1, so if you spend 0 what do you get?
>>47885196
Try spending a little less time reading thousand year old novels and a little more time picking up proper computing practices.
>>47888950
To emphasize the point about a half tang (or less) being completely useless, here's a bit of how the forces work on a sword.
>>47885196
Get into a habit of ctrl+s. I honestly don't know how someone can go days without saving.
I instinctively hit ctrl+s every chance I get now, with anything. Works with most programs.
>>47885053
Ok guess options section doesn't work for e-mail and I don't see an e-mail field so here, [email protected]
>>47889357
It used to be an email field, but now the field is Options, under the Name field, i do believe.
Considering it was used for sage as well as dice rolling, it may be a bit confusing now.
>>47885376
If you don't save often, even with a backup save, then you're an idiot, I'm sorry to say. That backup feature isn't 100% guaranteed and that file can become corrupt.
Jesus Saves and so should you and very often at that.
>>47888910
Aw, thanks. I made it because I figured it was a unique idea and it wasn't just another wish-fulfilling, superpower grab-bag. Not that there's anything wrong with those, they're all mostly great. But I wanted to make a legitimate "Choose your own Adventure" with emphasis on Adventure.
You're becoming a familiar because you want a better shot at the afterlife, an opportunity arose where you could live a second life, not exactly in ideal conditions, but one that still has its own rewards. You get cool powers, but you're no superhero. You could live a life of luxury, but it's not one you control.
I'm glad /tg/'s enjoyed it so far. I really am. It's nice to make something people enjoy. I won't stick around forever, but doing this has helped me get back into the swing of writing again. So you all have my thanks for the feedback, ideas, and encouragement to make it better!
>>47883855
>Select a gender and an agre between 11 and 16
My name is Harry Mason, I'm in town on vacation.
>Psychic energy
I KNEW YOU WOULD SAY THAAAT
>Emotional
No change. No xanax for me, please.
Although I would argue that dulled is pretty much my day-to-day.
>Physical
I think I'll take sickly, it kind of fits with the whole psyker thing I'm trying to build up.
>Mental
Sharpened. Need to be able to not turn into a daemonic bowl of fuck, after all.
>Reset
I'm like an old shaman.
>Dissonance
Shaman.
>Spiritual
Repellent. With the emperor's light as your torch, go and vanquish the darkness.
Or, y'know, you can always shoot them.
>Clairvoyance
>Telekinesis + Power
At 19 points already.
>Psychometry
>Remote viewing + Scrying
17 points.
>Future sight + clarity
12 points. Gonna need to be more careful.
>Levitation + efficient
Nah fuck that. 6 points.
>Friend of nature
>Healing
And that's all she wrote.
>Migraine
>Insomnia
Nevermind, I'm heading back for round 2. Ding ding! 18 points.
>Blessing
>Empathy
12 points.
>Pyrokinesis + control + catalyst
4 points.
>Mediumship
>Barrier
Ok, that's really all she wrote this time. I think that's almost all the powers a psyker can have, barring a certain red-skinned cyclops, his chapter master/son, or the guy who's been sitting on a golden throne for a long time.
>Nobody
I didn't move out of my mother's house just so I could have another.
>Yarrow falls
I could probably find some work there. But more importantly, it seems like there's supernatural shit there that needs put down.
Oooh. allies, huh? I thought this was going to be more like silent hill than goosebumps. Alright, cool, more people means less chances of dying horribly.
>Danny Glass*
*Him.
>Mia cross
Bow chicka bow-wow.
>Peter blake
The remington 870 is the most powerful handgun in the world.
>Nicholas
>Jane
Perks:
>Emancipation
>Inheritance
I got friends with guns. It's no biggie to get armed.
This was a fucking great cyoa.
>>47888325
Warhammer (-1)
Keterite X5
Dowel (-1)
Leafmetal X5
Damascus Forge (-1)
A warhammer doesn't actually use a tang at all, that's just nonsense.
Otherwise it's a very simple construction. No magic, just a strong head and a tough handle. Maximum willpower and high durabilty without overdoing the weight
Tower Shield (-4)
Outer: Vutrionite 2, Moranyx 1, ashkalt 1, starbrine 1
Inner: Moranyx 3, Ashkalt 1, starbine x1
Outer
Plasma Breaker (-1)
Spirit Flayer (-1)
Arcane Folder (-1)
Inner
Guardian (-1)
Fortitude (-1)
Warriors Might (-1)
Time rend (-1)
Mend and spark (-1)
The outer layer of the shield is designed for stopping attacks, it's reasonably tough, but it's specialized in stopping magical attacks.
The inner layer provides multiple utility spells, though it doesn't add much to the shields immediate defense.
>Spending 4 times as much on your shield as your weapon
>>47887174
>aphophobia, Tokophobia, Dipsophobia
fucking smart
>>47885518
>less than 1200 pixels
My hero! <3
>>47889247
Someone's trying very hard to get your attention SDA. Are you just going to ignore her like that?
>>47886027
You missed out bitching about how Britain should recognise Palestine and hand over sovereignty to the Republic of Europe.
>>47883904
Only change is I am the champion of a Old God. Chaos, Whee!
Source of Powers: Old God
Emotional: Dulled +5
Physical Perfect -4
Mental: No change
Life: No change
Memory: Knowledge -5
Spirtual: No change
No Empathy +7
Night Person +5
Anxiety +6
Lust +8
Inhuman +5
Insominia +9
Addiction: Sex +7
Phobia: POZbros +7
70
62
Future Sight, Relevant, Clarity -6
Claravoyance, Direct -2
Mind Reading, Deep Dive -7
Mind Control, Functional, Flawless -25
Psychometry -4
Healing, Self-Service -7
Tongues, Siren, Non-Verbal -4
Curse -4
Vitality, Immunity, Painless -3
Charm, Adored -6
Empathy -2
A total shit who does't care about anybody or anything and is brooding all the time. Despite this women want nothing more than tot hop on his prick, and he's more than willing to let them. Can learn anything, can convince any woman to loose her panties and hop on him. He can curse people who he dislikes and cause inconvience.
>>47885721
All those colors are pretty intense, the medium blues are probably the least harsh out of all your "bright" colors. The dark ones are so dark that your text would have to be white against them.
Perhaps this grid will help you out. The attached are very desaturated but can have the saturation levels (how much pure color) is put in them.
>>47889431
Wait, let me change my allies a bit here.
>Scarlet Manning
>Mia cross
>Adam wiley
>Henry morris
>Jospeph harrison
I've decided that instead of hunting the supernatural beasties, I will learn from them, and try to acquire more power in any way I can, with the end goal being everyone in the town converting to my cult, studying magic and rituals to increase my power and strength, and ascending my spirit to be unkillable and all-powerful.
With enough time and effort, I can become a great old one, or at least an okay-ish young one. Then I will rule all of Massachusetts as a generous god, with millions of devoted followers.
It will be great.
>>47885922
Anyway, time to stop beating around the bush and make a build for my own fucking CYOA.
>Witch
Waifish Orphan: Ophelia
I mean, it really is the best option, not gonna lie.
>Species
Pooka
NEXT LEVEL.
>Name
Ren (duh)
>Focus
The Sky: Tease the Wind
There's a lot you can do with the ability to control the wind. Make a burst downward to jump really high or really far. Outrun ANYTHING by going with the wind, and if we eventually set sail, we'll always sail with the wind in our favor. Also Wind Waker was like my favorite Zelda game.
>Perks
The Prodigy
Guide
Pickpocket
Speedy
Just the three Pooka perks I'm locked into. I know the city alleyways like the back of my hand, can swipe what we need to be happy and eat well, and GTFO on the off chance I get caught.
>Jobs
Scout
Valet
I'm gonna be busy. Not that I mind though, since I have excellent work ethic (kek). I won't have mage hand for Valet, but Pooka have regular hands anyway, and Wands are for chumps. With Pooka's natural agility, speed, and resourcefulness, I'll be bounding through and over the city streets with ease, nabbing food, trinkets, and whatever Ophelia wants me to get as she's being pushed by the Madame to be the best witch ever.
Also fuck Charming. I got rabbit ears, they're adorable.
>Event
Secrets Below
Best match for the event, honestly. I'm too fast for anything in the sewers to catch me and with Guide I can get Ophelia out of there as quickly as possible. We lack any real killing power (we might be able to smear a Dire Rat against the wall with the strongest gale we can muster) so out best bet is to just get out as fast as possible.
>>47885922
There should be a job for familiars that master uses for "stress relief". Or does mascot cover that?
>>47889692
Mascot or, to a lesser extent, Layabout, yeah.
>>47889720
>tfw you can canonically be master's girlfriend
>>47886077
>What the fuck white people? Why would you elect him?
Leftism.
>>47886122
>Why not just wait for a good muslim guy to come along and wait for him?
There are already many better ones, like Maajid Nawaz and Syed Kamall. But they don't get the left-wing vote like the ones in Labour do.
>>47883590
Didn't see a build using bardic arts so here goes:
Fredrick quicksilver
School: odesium
Classes :
bardic arts 3
Illusion magic 2 Lights shows for on the stage
Physical training 1 To stay on stage longer
Explosives 2 What's a good concert without pyrotechnics
Airship training I'll tour the continent on a massive airship
Companions:
Malyvin, the manager
Yung, every band need at least one rebellious team member to bring in even more fans
Farhat, the only member of our band that doesn't need much training
Trap catcher, our roadie
Jiel, our chauffeur
Events :
Battle of the arts x5 gotta get our name out there
Fund raising x2 airship ain't free
Basilisk's den x1 gotta let loose sometimes
Clubs :
Music club obviously
So in conclusion I'm gonna make this world's first rock band and travel everywhere preforming for massive crowds
>>47888950
>>47888993
>>47889012
>>47888838
>>47888479
>>47888349
I had it that way because there are socketed knives, and I didn't want to exclude that option.
So, to address this, I'm gonna just embedthe cost of half-tang into the sword hilts while also adding in a "knife handle/hilt" as a lower tier that will only cost 1.
In other news relating to this CYOA, I'm rehauling it a bit (namely the stats) so it can align to Battlemage.
>>47889604
Fine.
>>47884881
Thanks, AA.
And good luck to you, too. Those concubines won't feed themselves.Or, will they?
>>47888497
>>47885963
>>47885946
>>47885922
The guild wars images trigger me. I hate how witches are tied to compassion when it feels like it should be the opposite. I don't like this CYOA much.
But I do like one thing. I think it's great that the third page is titled "penis".
>>47889785
>concubines
Since when did AA have concubines? Did I miss something?
>>47889831
You get obligatory concubines when you become an author, here.
>>47889381
Ah that makes sense. Sadly I didn't see any sort of mouseover for the e-mail so I just added it to the post. Oh well.
>>47889639
If you are getting Mind Control, why would you waste points on the functional when upgrade when perfect lets you have that and more? You don't have to get all the upgrades to the power you know.
>>47888293
Wealth: 10
Influence: 21
Risk: 5
Specialty: Narcotics
Products: Dragan, Opium Poppies, Cayote Pepper, Bloodbeer
Shipping: Airfleet
Hand: Vilmar Allon
Captain: Viviana Nora
Job: Arctic Mixology
Favour: Dominator's Maul, Deal with the Nightwitch [300 years of youth, sex can replace eating and sleeping]
Branding myself shouldn't be so bad with opium poppies and bloodbeer to ease the pain and memory. With Dominator's Maul, the Nightwitch's desire for sex will be her undoing. For when she appears one night I will brand her body and demand she return my soul. That'll teach her to offer minor boons in exchange for a soul. Enslaving a proud succubus sounds amusing as well.
Honestly I would have been content with 3 wealth. If 2 lets a family of three subsist, 3 would let one person have a decent quality of life. I'll probably just invest my money in legitimate businesses and security.
If influence is anything like wealth (with 11 being a typical royal), holy shit at 21 influence. A typical king is probably, what, 15? I am almost to a king as the king is to a low-class noble. This isn't even considering the power of the Dominator's Maul.
Using my long lifespan, influence, and Dominator's Maul, I think I can make a real impact on the world. Maybe brand some aspiring Badlands orc warlords and unite the orcs. Without infighting, they could turn their attentions elsewhere...
SDA, just don't sperg out like MCCYOA Author or talk shit about your gf from the bathroom while logged in.
(To be fair; I would be pissed with cross-racial Disney Princess' Cosplay too. Esp. if it's all she does.)
Dear MCCYOA Author,
Just tell the gf she's partaking in Dieney's Neoimperalstic Cultural Appropiation. (The non-white princess' mere existance is appropiation.)
Her wearing those costumes not belionging to white princess is cultural appropiation; you cannot appropiate White Culture.
>>47889983
>>47890019
who are you
>>47888488
If you don't have a full Tang the sword gets Fucked up easily and is weak
>>47889687
>Wind Waker
Mah nigga. Objectively the best Zelda game since Ocarina. Skyward Sword has a similar enough mechanic to make it interesting, but it's not as well done.
Ane
