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>>47858082
I choose bliss because that's an image of muh waifu.
>>47858097
One of my favorites.
I wanted to make a new thread myself, but thought I didn't deserve such a high honor and cancelled it at the last moment.
>>47857775
Ok sounds good, Kit. May want to consider that google drive idea and thanks for posting them.
Anyone got any good cyberpunk cyoa's?
>>47854928
When did Angelanon get so lewd?Did anyone save the picture of her nips before it got deleted?
>>47858169
>quoted wrong post
Shit.
>>47854939
>>47858082
Let's see, Berri is one of my favorite authors but really not a fan of slime girls, sorry. Similarly with Bliss. Love the CYOAs but as a choice in this one she's just too much.
Highlander, because I love Traveller for its size and that it menaces with spikes of lore. I want to give Highlander a smile for me to protect.
Imaginos, because she seems pretty and helpful and I seriously love bread.
No idea who Pallas is but she has great tits and seems like a fun addition to the harem.
>Captcha
>Choose all the bread
I love you too, reCAPTCHA
Is there anything better than technomagic?
>>47858169
Fireden, retard.
>>47858217
Imperative: No.
>>47858123
>google drive
how?
Assume I am figuratively retarded.
I'll post the ones I have on my other computer tomorrow/maybe the day after.
>>47858217
Flesh magic
>>47858240also pls don't use my name, it attracts mean people
>>47858217
Humanitarian Magic
>>47858149
Anyone else vastly prefer organic spaceships?
![LCctRt8[1].jpg](https://i.imgur.com/X8nlejk.jpg "LCctRt8[1].jpg")
So my CYOA has magic schools not unlike Titanlands, but with more general abilities.
I need some ideas that fit the Occult theme the Titanlands had. All I've got is Blood Magic, mutating defeated enemies into permanent slaves, and possessing you or your buddies with demons for a time to make you stronger.
>>47858260
shit, I don't have
>make an author
on this computer, either.I mean, "darn"
>>47858277
>organic spaceships
The hell, does Stardust have those? I'm suddenly much more interested in digging through all that.
>>47858284
Summon cthulhu
>>47858308
No it doesn't, SDA prefers more realistic and gritty settings in his cyoas.
>>47858284
Summon sexy cthulhu
>>47858308
>>47858341
Star Dust has "organic" ships and literal space magic, yes. Mana is also an energy source.
No idea about that grittyness though.
>>47858217
>cuteguy.jpg
Don't encourage Noise, he's a dick
>>47858308
Sadly, no. I was just expressing my eternal love for organic spaceships. Like this cute shrimp one.
>>47858427
He's a rebel and only I can change him!
>>47858284
Demon summoning.
Sacrificing
Some spell that causes madness in the target.
>>47858284
Well, "Open Portal to Tentacle Rape Dimension" is a fairly standard power.
>>47858235
>Happy Lizardman2.png
Why didn't she post Happy Lizardman1?
>>47858425SDA, how did your date go?
>>47858240
I believe you just go to https://www.google.com/drive/ and then sign up for an account. Then you can just upload stuff to different folders and share the whole drive with everyone. you can set it to not be modify-able by anyone but you. Create folders, click folder to enter it and drag/drop items into it, or use the upload button/link
>>47858169
Angelanon is probably in heat.
That's a thing lesbians have when they're deprived of hot dickings right
>>47857895
That line is taken directly from Morrowind. The Morrowind inspiration is really not hidden at all (sort of like the Dune inspiration for Morrowind is really not hidden at all).
Kill 6 Billion Demons is basically Morrowind meets Planescape.
Reposting since in the last thread it was flooded out by non-CYOA discussion.
>>47847755
>gender
Male.
>age
16. That's when I did the most raping, and would be a good time for my life to take another path if I hadn't stopped.
Dark Magic seems appropriate. Although old god power source is cool thematics too, being "chaos" is lame. Being evil is edgy and cool, and makes for good antihero stuff.
Strengthened emotions. The ones I have now are pretty dulled anyway, so this will make me more normal. +7
No physical change
Sharpened brain -3
Leech life is an acceptable form of immortality to me. It'll be tough to get sacrifices, but I'll only need to do it like once a decade.
Dissonance.
No spiritual change. I don't want to be disrupted all the time, but I do want some things to wander into my domain. I should like to enslave them. Plus I don't really want to pay the points.
>>47847783
Flawless mind control (20)
Mind reading with Deep Dive (7/27)
The best powers. I don't like how mind control is just converting humans to drones, but I'll take it. I'm sure I can employ some creativity. Anyway, I can now become the lord of my domain (which will start as my town) without substantial adverse effect on my people.
Vitality, Healing, and Self Service, to keep myself intact while also allowing me to care for my people. 10/37
Weather Control, to keep things pleasant and deal with drought.
>>47858660
Is that when their clits grow to gigantic proportions so they can penetrate eachother as a last resort?
>>47858671
Clairvoyance, Scrying, and Psychometry, so I can know everything. 7/44
That adds on to a spy network of drones that I'll get going too, of course. I considered going for a familiar with possession instead, which would be useful for away missions, but it's pretty redundant with flawless mind control. There's one serious downside to taking "scrying" instead of just Remote Viewing, which is that if I'm imprisoned, I can't use it to get myself out. But as long as I get a nice army of loyal minions before arousing ire (as long as I can get a few, getting more should be fairly easy and that's the first thing I'll be doing) there'll be forces in place if I need a rescue, which I don't intend to. It's a reasonable risk that I'm willing to take in exchange for another avenue of information gain.
>>47847825
Unsettling and Inhuman, since I already have those issues to begin with. That's +10, which balances the account.
>>47847851
Being the ward of an ally seems the most overtly normal option.
>>47858291
S'ok I'll look forward to them tomorrow.
>>47858690
Withermouth looks like the most pleasant place to live, but I'm not sure if my powers work on the monsters there. Riverfront East is a good base, because it has lots of initial targets available, and I can do a lot of good for the neighborhood. All I have to do is enthrall everyone, and I can eliminate the violence, then we can work together to drive out the hunters, if my powers don't work on them. I hope they do though. A lot of the critters that prey on humans are probably useful in other regards. And the denizens of a neighborhood like this are likely strong people too. Once I get a gang going, we can abduct and enslave people on a massive scale pretty quickly. Once I get enough, the time it takes me to make a convert is probably going to be the main limiting factor. It's also nice that this is a neighborhood in a city, rather than a small town. It makes expansion beyond my current borders a more natural and organic thing. Although I'm sure I'll meet bigger enemies then, and there's enough to deal with in my own back yard, so that's far enough in the future that I don't need to worry too much about it yet. Nonetheless, I plan to control the whole city some day.
Peter Blake and Liam Black seem like good gentlemen to work with. Leah Dawson is a good apprentice/waifu. Her magic can hopefully do stuff my human thralls can't.
>>47847874
Henry Morris seems like a good guardian. He's got access to some very useful things, and should be a great help in eliminating or trapping harmful supernatural beings. Joseph Harrington can help direct public efforts to work together with mine, and can come up with a certain amount of funds as needed.
Apprentice to the mayor seems useful. Ruling the city is my eventual goal, after all, and thereafter building it to be the greatest city in the world under my personal touch. I don't need any of the others, so I'll go with Synchronicity.
>>47858240
this is probably one of the hardest cyoas for me to try and decide. i just can't.
Looking forward to that new version of Traveller today, Highlander pls
>>47858240
Cute world please.
>>47858660
Angel has broken vagina syndrome and suffers severe pain from being touched down there. Being "in heat" must be torture for her. Like wearing a pain-inducing chastity belt.
>>47858621
I'm just gonna say that Quiet's muslim magic worked.A few pints revealed just how sexually frustrated she was. My case wasn't better.
It was kind of wild. I think she's the girl for me.
Can someone post slut life?
>>47858682
You mean the libium minora anon. Lrn2vaginas.
>>47858883
That's very quick.
>>47858240
Cute timeline.
>>47858883
This is annoying. If you were straight, I would've asked how big his dick was. What am I supposed to ask you? What kind of sex gossip are we supposed to have now?
>>47858235
I don't understand. It's not appearing in the recently deleted posts section for /tg/. I went as far back as the horse pussy guy.
>>47858883
fucking on the fourth day?
ew
>sexually frustrated
ew
I expected romance, not this porn crap. I expected more from you.
>>47859010
>>47858883
no really, what is this bullshit?
You say you haven't even held hands, and you go straight to fucking?
I am so disappointed. Here I was, ready to feel my heart pump again from how sickeningly sweet your date was, and I get fed some crap instead.
>tripfag blog general
>>47859042
That's probably because "Sandra" isn't your perfect anime waifu, but an actual 3D human being.
>>47859061
Just wait until Highlander posts new Traveller, gets like 25 responses, and someone bitches that people are focusing too much on a CYOA.
>>47859062
Dunno, I dated a girl who was this massive slut and we didn't fuck till the fifth date, but hey, I'm not gonna judge SDA because fuck this author gossip shit.
>>47858883
Can you please stop?
>>47859062
>talks about being a couple for three days, how they haven't even held hands yet, how they're taking things slow
>go straight to fucking on the fourth day
S H I T
>>47859108
People will bitch about other people bitching, bitch about how people aren't bitching enough about some trivial little problem and bitch because they're bored and they want to start a pointless drama session to sink some time before they have to do real life stuff and sleep just to come back to bitch about bitching.
>>47859042
>>47859010
>>47859005
This was after talking half-drunk about random deep stuff for hours until last call. Then we hung out on her balcony for another few hours and it kinda led from there.
She slowly went from a composed white collar woman to a forward, frisky girl. Can you blame me?
>>47859184
They are taking things slow, they went four whole days without sex.
>>47859198
Yes.
>>47859201
Just like one of my dating simulators.
>>47859167
>>47859061
It's either this or discussions on AA's vagina. Pick one of your double standards.
>>47859186
What a wonderful world.
Can anyone post Solar Inheritance though.
I know some of you slackers haven't voted in the Branching Heart poll yet. Hop to it!
http://poal.me/eceaw2
>>47810254
>>47859008
Welcome to Censorship Central. Enjoy your stay.
>>47859198
So was she good or are you buying her some oysters to practice on? Who ravished who?
>>47859108
>implying there even would be 25 people who would read a 150 page CYOA
>>47859108
The traveller update is the only reason I'm even browsing this cesspool right now
>>47859166
>I'm not gonna judge SDA because fuck this author gossip shit.
/cyoag/ stopped being about cyoas a long long time ago.
>>47859226
How about you both take pills and never wake up
>>47858082
Berri, Box Wine, and Italics; don't get me wrong, I would adopt every author (even those who didn't make the list), but it says I can only choose 3, so I chose the 3 that require the least amount of maintenance.
>>47859008
For you, pleb.
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/47847600/#47847670
>>47859226
What, were we talking about her vagina before? I thought it was mostly boobs and height and non-physical things. What's abnormal about her vagina?
>>47859008
Try suptg 4plebs or warousu
>>47859242
>the shorter the cyoa, the better
>the best possible cyoa consists of zero options
This is literally what you are saying and certainly not hyperbole.
More seriously, what's the optimal length?
>>47859250
What's even so good about Traveler CYOA in the first place?
>>47857377
>Is it still straight if I like boys but am a masculine girl with a feminine penis?
No that's lesbian you stupid dyke.
>>47859298
>masculine girl with feminine penis
>lesbian
>stupid dyke
Are you retarded or did you honestly not understand he means he's a guy with a dick that likes other guys?
i am a fan of comfortable things.
>>47859289
>what's the optimal length?
Probably 3-9 or so pages, 1000-1500x3000-6000.
>>47859274
Supposedly she has this, or something similar. Leading to theories that she's a lesbian because she literally can't have normal sex without excruciating pain.
http://www.lifescript.com/health/centers/pain/related_conditions/vaginismus.aspx
>>47859198
>Can you blame me?
yes, clearly. I don't think jumping straight from hugging-not-even-holding-hands and right to drunken sex the next day is okay progression.
>>47859298
>What's even so good about Treveler CYOA in the first place?
Highlander sacrificing his mortal soul to continue expanding it indefinitely, forging his loving descriptions with his blood, sweat, and tears, continuing down an arduous path that will one day leave behind his legacy and mythical CYOA-developing prowess for all to admire and respect.
>>47859334
Lovely dreams and likeable. I don't think I've had friends since my childhood.
>>47859198
>Can you blame me?
I can blame you for bothering us with your personal fucklife.
>>47859201
no, anon, they went three days with hugging being the most intimate thing, to fucking the next day.
That is not slow. That's insane progression.
I'm not even talking about fucking on day four, I'm talking about going from a hug to sex in a day.
>>47858240
Underdeveloped
>>47859298
Its hard to quantify. At first it was off putting because I didnt even know what it was supposed to be, but now I'm into it
>>47859441
Alright, I'm getting interested. Post it up or link it, please.
>>47858082
SDA is Ayn Rand.
>>47859289
Page number not in the triple digits, that's for sure.
>>47859455
https://www.mediafire.com/folder/43r0qdm4sm895/The_End_Approaches
Good luck, comrade.
>>47859414
I wonder who's going to achieve their immortalized magnum opus first, Tarn Adams or Highlander?Seriously I'm positive that the final version of Dwarf Fortress will be a perfect simulation of our universe down to the subatomic particle level but with dwarves.
>>47859480
I agree, four digits is better.
>>47859455
>>47859489
You can also check imigur or highlanders blog for versions with pictures (the blog is a mess in terms of navigation)but there's some descrepencies between editions
>>47859401
We've been seeing each other for months, so this actually felt pretty natural.
>>47859421
Oops, sorry anon. I posted without consciously knowing that I'd piss off a few autists.
>>47858425
Wait, you mean to tell me herald ships are actually, squishy, organic ships by default? Damn.
Or were the quotes meant to mean they're organic in design?
>>47859633
Does this mean if I take a wrong turn in my ship I might end up in the stomach? Do I need to feed it?
Haven't seen Beastmaster posted in awhile.
>>47859584
I imagine Highlander will eventually have everything copacetic for a finalized presentation, so I have been hesitant to save more of Traveler than I need to.
>>47859633
>>47859656
Organic in design, they're still made of metal. That's why I wrote organic in quotes.
If you mean ships made from flesh, no.
>>47858149
>>47858176
so freaking confusing. Did SDA make this?
>>47859609
>anyone that doesn't want to be hear me endlessly prattle on about my personal life thread after thread is autistic
Any of you guys have the time travel cyoa where you can pick historical companions? That was fun.
>>47859700
ah, thank you for the clarification.
>>47859609
you're a slut, SDA. It's not wrong to be a slut, just acknowledge it.
>jumping straight from hugging to banging
jesus christ...
>>47858251
Don't forget the dlcs
This thread is in need of some chaste loving.
>>47859609
She sounds like a slut. A few months from now you'll be blogging here about how she cheated on you.
>>47859334
Lovely Dreams and Magic Fridge.
A good nights rest and theoretically infinite food, whats not to like.
>>47859822
Okay, weird, I can't post the second half of the soldier dlc since it somehow magically expanded in download.
>>47858240
reversed roles why? because if you choose cute, you're gonna get cucked by your girl
>a girl who manages breakup is in the right
>some women will try VERY hard to break a couple to WIN a BOY over.
congrats for beiing cucked
>>47859334
>lovely dreams
>home teleport
>>47859844
you're only saying that because SDA never held your hand, hugged you or fucked you.
>>47859334
home teleport
lovely dreams
>>47859876
Pretty sure the situation you describe is a reverse-cucking (i.e. you are seduced into cucking your girl).
>>47859923
still cucked or NTR'ed
>>47859913
>tfw SDA will never fuck you
Don't remind me, anon. I come here for escapism, not to be hit in the face with the cold, hard truth while my guards are lowered
>>47859609
I am really, really sorry you are getting such shitty responses. It's really cringeworthy. You did nothing wrong, and not all of /tg/ is an autistic manchild who thinks sex is evil.
inb4 called a white knight
>>47859923
It's still just cucking. Cuckquean and Cuckold shorten the same way.
>>47859958
no, you are the cuck-er, not the cuck-ee.
>>47859976
Nice try SDA.
Is there a cyoa where you're the power behind the throne?I had a pretty cool dream last night. I was a highschooler with occult powers. I used them to create this entire maffia group that was led by a homunculus type servant I made, the Boss. Thus my homunculus expanded my influence over the city while I went to school. After I graduated I went to college and took a part time job as a coffee boy for my maffia "boss". So I pretty much ran the city while being a normal college student.It was really convoluted. I wish I could explain it better.
Ren, how's the familiar CYOA v2.0 going? Any idea when to expect it?
>>47859958
>>47859982
But the person being cucked isn't you, it's the girl you break up with.
>>47859861
Is there a page for the Male characters?
>>47860025
Yes. She's cucked.
>>47859976
I expected these responses, no worries.
>>47860034
Which is the opposite of what the original cuck-complainer (cuckplainer?) >>47859876 said.
I just wanna do cyoas
>>47859700
SDA, can you do a pastebin linking all versions of Star Dust (provided you still have them saved)? I've got bits and pieces of things that don't make any sense and need some clarity as to what's what. 2.0.4 is the most recent version, yes?
>>47859289
Branching heart is a pretty good size for me, but that's because each option is meaningful amd can be played by itself.
Flow and interest is probably a better thing to think of than size. I can't really get into things like Stardust because eventually I lose track of the numbers / bars / stats of things. So I just glance over those parts.
>>47860036
>Im shameless and really want attention
>>47860059
Yeah, that's the most recent version.
I'll make a mega folder or a google drive folder for my stuff including psd files. I dunno why I haven't thought of that earlier.
>>47860058
Are people like us the minority now?
>>47859976
>who thinks sex is evil
I don't. If you could read I said skipping straight to fucking isn't romantic, and that I looked forward to hearing about a romantic date, not him getting his dick wet and how horny she was.
>>47860058
Then why do you spam the thread rather than post cyoas/builds?
>>47859795
I feel like there's a way to get all, or at least the most useful effects in the fewest ingredients.
E.g. Transmute + Angelmint = Devilmint
>>47860034
The impetus is on you in this situation. If anything happens it's YOUR fault for giving into those evil whores trying to destroy your love.
>>47860003
Yes actually, somebody had a CYOA called... broken kingdom or something? Where you were one of the members of a dead king's court with his up and coming son too young to take the throne. So it was on you to support him until he grew up and solidify yourself as his most trusted ally, or to betray him and become king. It was pretty neat.
>>47860030
yeah, funny thing, that's another thing I can't seem to find. it seems implied there is but... Nope.
Shame, Elijah Horton and Conrad Byrant seemed like top-grade husbando material.
>>47859334
>no power for eating as much as I want without needing to watch my calories
>>47860166
I'd like to see what you define as a romantic date.
>>47860241
Was it never made or is it simply lost somewhere in the vagaries of time?
>>47860263
>romantic date
That is not what I refer to.
What disappoints me is how sweet and in love you sounded yesterday, how you said the two of you hadn't even held hands…
and then you fuck it all up by being horny teenagers.
The "talking for hours about everything" bit was great, then you ruined it all by explaining what a horny slut she is and how you skipped straight to home run.
I'm with Anon now, you can stop talking about your love life now. I have no interest anymore.
>>47860346
Stick with Angelanon. She's the true pure waifu cyoagen desires.
>>47860342
He decided writing romantic boys was 2hard
>>47859663
>Faction
-Charnite Loyalists
>Nemesis
-Captain Alistair (120)
-Masked Man (160)
>Special
-Monstrous Mount (140)
-Spirit Bond (125)
>Beasts
-1 Roc (85)
-3 Djinn (16)
-5 Asp (1)
>>47860346
Serious question; can you distinguish reality from anime?
SDA said he's been seeing her for months.
>>47859198
>This was after talking half-drunk about random deep stuff for hours until last call. Then we hung out on her balcony for another few hours and it kinda led from there.
>She slowly went from a composed white collar woman to a forward, frisky girl. Can you blame me?
Does she like anal?
>>47860059
By the way did you say you were doing another DLC for Stardust?
>>47860389
Yeah, right. Someone with puffy nipples like that is riding dicks every minute of the day. Or riding clits, I don't know.
>>47860346
You must be an expert at interpersonal relationships.
What LNs did you study?
cyoa thread needs cyoas. will deliver.
>>47855406
YESS,
Nice character. He'll bring allot of much needed firepower. I can see great things on the horizon. And not just because i have future sight.
>>47860425
>>47860452
>>47860390
Or maybe he isn't gay.
>>47860401
I am, actually. But not until after my next few CYOAs. I don't expect you'll see any new SD stuff till next year, and there's only two minor ideas that I've been playing with.
One is about "housing" (space stations, possibly planetary colonies) and aliums.
>>47858710
You sound allot like the evil monks i said id be fighting in my charsheet.
>>47854810
>>47860482
SDA is a woman, you delicious summer child. It was clever of you to assume she was a man as most authors are but alas, no such luck with SDA. Lurk a bit more.
I'll ask one last time because I'm a fag, anyone got the Time Travel CYOA with historical companion choices?
>>47860497
Evil? This neighborhood was so fucked I'm doing it a favor by taking over everyone's minds. I'm not even destroying their personalities or anything, they're way better off like this. My magic might be called evil, but it's truly the magic of royalty, it helps build the order that ensures stability and prosperity, and the fact that all of this benefits me doesn't change the fact that things are better because I'm here.
>>47860566
my upload speed is depressingly slow. the captcha expired twice before that went through.
>>47860417
But anon, she can't ride anythingbecause her vag is broke. She gets all her sexual satisfaction from pleasing her partnerwith her tongue. So like I said, pure.
>>47860575
I know of it
>>47860594
got that one on the first time. am hap-hap-happy as can be.
>>47860575
i'll see what i have for the next post.
>>47860482
>>47860567
This guy >>47860399 is actually right. I can't finish it because I suck at writing romance for guys. I just lack that perspective.
It's not cancelled, though. When I get the chance, I'll finish it.
>>47860629
>Angelanon gets all her satisfaction from pleasing partners
>thinks Angelanon is pure
Each time you kiss her, you kiss the asshole's and vaginas of every girl she serviced.
>>47859958
dude are you dumb? asking for a friend.
>>47860679
Anon was tactically admitting that he is a worthless slut who wouldn't remain true to his waifu. Truly a terrible person.
>>47860575
well, traveler was already posted so i assume you're talking about something else. you'll have to specify.
>>47858240
cute hands down, maybe reversed roles. Not have to work, and just focus on excercise, cleaning, and free to persue videogames and misc hobbies? I would take that in a heartbeat.
>>47860650
I wonder if that's why I suck at writing waifus.
>>47860722
>the Mask
Okay, so there's this one guy who always includes that Mask in his cyoas. I never understood it though: are we the King of Yellow or is the King in Yellow messing with us?
I wonder how highlander is doing.
here's another sda one.
>>47860722
Found it. this is the one i meant
>>47860650
Are you actually making something? You haven't been relevant for like a year or so, and with all the recent posting you're doing I expect you are going to release something soon? Or are you just here to blogpost? Everyone gets shit for doing it, that's normal.
Personally I don't mind if you do, but can you at least try to be relevant to cyoas?
>>47860762
Spadesy I think.
It's technically both. All aspects of reality are subdivided from higher powers in Lovecraft. Meaning that ultimately humans are part of the Outer Gods.
>>47860726
For me, I just lack the insight on what people look for in guys, whether it's from a female or male perspective.
I believe it's because I've never fantasized about guys. In contrast, I've always thought about women and what I look for in them, so I have a repository of ideas to use when writing them. When writing males for romance I draw blanks.
The only perspective I have of romance for males is mine, and I can't very well base off multiple characters off of that.
>>47860762
yeah, i know who you're talking about. i think this one is his too. i think it's a sort of running gag.
>>47860784
He's posted Weapon Maker WAY earlier than a year ago, nonce.
>>47860762
Read the book.
>>47860780
oh, that's awesome. i don't actually have that one either.
>>47860801
like araki once wrote: "realism is everything in writing." So I suggest you go and have a fling with some guys for inspiration.
>>47860784
Can't tell if you're angry or not.
I've mentioned a lot about my WIPs lately, but I will reiterate that you likely won't see my big projects for months from now. Progress is slow because of work, school, and now a relationship.
I might release something smaller sooner, though. I'm working on a CYOA based on being a guard where you have to manage the living expenses of your squad (your income versus buying equipment, rent upkeep, etc). It'll be a low fantasy setting.
>>47859757
Traveller kind of has that. The companion descriptions are amazing.
>>47860849
here's page 2
>>47860784
>You haven't been relevant for like a year or so
>>47859829 was made about half a year ago.
>>47860772
This Cyoa reminds me a lot of pdf related. Probably an earlier version.
>>47860849
>>47860886
page 3
>>47860882
This?
http://imgur.com/gallery/wJfsX
I'm sorry but that's so long.
>>47860801
>Tfw I'm actually passable at writing waifus.
Your waifus aren't so bad SDA. You just have a small text box under companions, so you don't get much time to explore them.
>tfw no chocolate waifus in cyoas
Why?
>>47860931
Creative writing is about qualitative writing in a given quantity. Writing a character description in 30 words takes a different approach than one in 300.
>>47860801
>I've always thought about women and what I look for in them,
Kek. I write waifus no problem and I have noninterest in, or experience with, girls.I don't want to fuck guys, either. It's very annoying.
>>47860934
Because Hershey insists on using wax and vomit as ingredients.
Oh wait, you meant "chocolate" waifus. Fuck if I know, delicious brown is delicious.
>>47860929
thanks! i'll have to make a build for it in a little while.
>>47860927
domain master is still one of my favorite cyoas to date. that was a cool collab among authors.
here's mage & man.
>>47860987
Do you want to be fucked by guys, anon?
>>47861015
Man who doesn't, am I right?
>>47860867
More annoyed than angry, honestly. You're currently really annoying. It would be forgivable if you had something to show for it, like OC or anything in the last (half) year, but you don't.
To me, you seem to have declined in maturity. What's the deal, dude? I get you're happy and all but holy shit you're acting like a complete e-celeb and it's just surreal how anons keep thinking highly of you. You are literally angelanon tier right now, except I like angelanon. And this is coming from another creator.
>>47861005
I just can't forget how good that cyoa used to be until they added page 2, made some changes to the original and fucked everything up. I can't explain it but it used to be so much better.
>>47861015
Not that anon, butyes.
>>47861032
I don't. I want to fuck guys but I have no interest in getting fucked by them.
>>47861005
took a few tries to get that one to upload.
Ya'll ain't ready.
PATCH NOTES.
>Rewrote most of the text of page one, made becoming the familiar feel more like a conscious decision rather than being blueballed from the afterlife.
>The age category you choose affects your Perk and Focus distribution, as opposed to being a flat number. Comments and concerns about "muh game balance" will be filed next to the incinerator.
>Age categories now come with 30% more bar graphs.
>Familiars can all talk now, for free. Also Empathic links.
>Universal Telekenisis got buffed.
>The Alley Home and Hearth replaced with Face in the Crowd.
>Removed Talkative perk
>Added Mage Hand perk.
>Changed how Prodigy works to be more in leui with Milestones.
>Also Milestones are a thing.
>Basically if you and another anon are in the same age category and choose the same event to buddy up in, you get a bonus. Jolly Cooperation! Have fun RPing that shit.
>Removed Slime Familiar.
>Sorry Beri.
>>47860867
> a relationship
Good for you bud
Anyone got that Femdom cyoa?
>>47861098
>>47861116
>These minute long waits between uploads, tho.
>>47861098
>All those nasty stats ruining everything.
>Young masters suck ass now and will always suck
>Multiplayer
>>47861015
No.
If I were a girl, sure, but I'm not.
>>47858260
6 pm dinner time, calzone for sure
>>47859334
home teleport and lovely dreams. you would think home teleport could save your life some day, like if your lost in the woods, kidnapped, being held hostage or robbed in an alley, in a crashing plane, etc.
>>47861129
>filename
>also missed a patch note, moved Improved Familiars to under Perks.
>>47861098
>>47861161
>Forcing me to RP with another anon or get fucked over.
Why the hell did you do this to me? What if I'm playing alone? Doing this standalone months later? What If I HATE you people with a passion? Why should I be screwed over?
>>47860801
For guys, there are two ends of the spectrum alpha males at one extreme and fat neckbeards/NEETs on the other.
Girls go for the alpha males for their confidence, assertiveness and their position of power. Alpha males from a woman's perspective generally know what they want, possess the ability, drive and compassion to achieve success, and can adequately provide for their special someone, materialistically (disposable income), sexually (big dicks) and socially (status symbol and to make all the other judgmental bitches in their circle of close and loose friends jealous and inadequate) and allows women to act with relative freedom and impunity as long as it doesn't interfere with the ambitions and goals of their alpha male partners. And there are many different variations from the asshole Daddy-Daughter like relationships to the dashing and mysterious Fabios who sweeps women off their feet with their bravado and charm.
Then there's the opposite of this, is the fat basement dwelling NEET, girls treat these guys more like personal projects then actual boyfriends. In these relationships the girls aims to be the loving and caring mother that nurtures and picks up the hopeless loser off its feet and turn them them into confident and successful alpha males or something close to an alpha male and aim to be the one wearing the proverbial pants in the relationship. They range from your actual fatfuck losers like boogie2988 to the incompetent dark and brooding villains/antiheroes that treat them like shit, but gradually warm up to the girl as her support and love make them better people or at least far more successful villains/assholes.
>>47858114
>ywn be a loving waifu
>>47861212
This is so hideously, sadly narrow and wrong it's embarassing. Did you get your knowledge on women from robot?
>>47859829
Ea is very sweet, shares one of my main kinks, and I don't necessarily want an exciting life. I think a cozy existence with a kind-hearted angel is just perfect.
Ea
Suburban House / Sky Condo
No maids
Gates of Heaven
>>47860722
>named Lost World CYOA
>dinosaurs only feature in a single choice
>>47861036
So you down-grade your credentials from a year to half a year after being proven wrong. Fantastic.
I'm a slow worker, mostly due to time constrains and work efforts geared more to other things than CYOAs. I've remained silent for awhile up until now because I'm starting to get back into CYOAs. It seems you've missed all discussions on them, but you're hell-bent on scolding me for some reason.
People asked about my personal life, so I answered. Autists blew it out of proportion, and that's not surprising. Welcome to /cyoag/.
That you need to announce yourself as a creator kind of flashes your insecurity. How is this supposed to make me chew your opinions any more or less?
If I ask for your alias, are you going to dismiss me and hide behind anonymity for your "reputation's" sake? If you know anything about me (which you apparently do), you'll know I don't really care about that shit.
Is there any way for me to work a child bride into a CYOA without it being someone's fetish?
It's setting appropriate and you're a bad person for picking it, but I just know people are going to get excited at "romanceable" lolis.
>>47861229
its narrow because I described the two most sterotypical extremes. actual guys that girls are into would be a convoluted mix of the two.
>>47861098
Do perks still not work in human form?
>>47861276
They're made up and imagined extremes. There's no spectrum you can fit humans into between these two imagine trait sets.
>>47861212
...I don't think this is accurate. I know a lot of guys who don't fall under either bucket.
>>47861098
Ren...
>>47861167
>>47861138
>Not realizing that literally every age except maybe Aspiring Student got buffed.
>Milestones, like Jolly Cooperation, is optional.
>Old version is still fine too, I tucked it away in case literally everyone riots, chill.
>>47861272
No, you just have to nut up and put it in there and let the choice explain why it's there.
>>47861254
Frankly I'm disappointed in you for turning into a worthless porn peddler.
You wrote the worst kind of useless, pathetic, and basest (in a bad way) form of literature. You didn't exercise anything, if anything this probably makes you a worse writer in regards to anything of value.
>>47861272
Make the girl a lesbian.
>>47861295
>Optional
Yeah, if I want to be fucked over and inferior to everyone else, and never have a focus with a young master.
>>47861290
So they're right dab smack in the middle, not too domineering to be a alpha male and not too pathetic and clingy like someone who is an utter failure at life.
>>47861316
>without it being someone's fetish
>>47861321
There are successful and dominating people who are clingy, dear anon. Stop learning about people from 4chan.
>>47861098
>stat bars
I hate it. Putting a "this doesn't matter lol" label doesn't make it not a gamey presentation.
I like the focus variations from age category, definitely better to be more fluid here.
Milestones well explained and, being inherently meta content, are kind of shit. I like the concept of having them, but not the mechanic of actualizing them.
>>47861316
She's like 8. She's a nothing yet.
It's winning you an alliance with her powerful scumbag father. She's a bargaining chip.
>>47861295
>Have to get with an old hag if I don't want to be shit
>>47861353
>definitely better to be more fluid here.
Not to fuck over young masters from an entire section of your CYOA and crippling them for life.
>>47861272
Broken homunculus or something. She can't be romanced and you can't have sex with her. She merely exists to look young and tend to your house, prepare meals, etc.
>>47861375
That's not what I was talking about, though. I agree that milestones aren't a good mechanic.
>>47861389
Milestones are obviously shit, but the issue is that removing them doesn't necessarily give younger masters back their focus, and having no foci is part of the problem with this update.
>>47861308
And... where are you getting this from? Because I wrote two CYOAs (in less than a week) about imaginary waifus?
Again, had you paid attention to my discussions on my WIPs, you probably wouldn't be saying that. Judging by your language, I'd be unsurprised if you're just letting out repressed anger at me for some reason. I literally got nothing from your post other than that you're just angry.
>>47861321
I guess, but I don't see any mention of genuine love. Your descriptions sounded very pessimistic.
>>47861354
Even 8y old kids can already show sign of their sexual preference. Have her be innocently sad because now she can't be [female childhood friend]'s bride. So you get that alliance out of it but you're in for a world of dissapointment if you're planning to actually waifu her.
>>47861272
>without it being someone's fetish?
What's the problem with that? Good CYOAs cater to fetishes.
>>47861409
Stop being so easily baited over your girlfriend, holy fuck. People can poke you about that and butthurt oyu the entire thread.
>>47861321
No, it's really not a spectrum of your entirely made up descriptions. You're just so wrong it's impossible to even begin approaching. Stick to 2d since that's clearly all you're capable of comprehending.
>>47861414
1. Her being a lesbian is obviously your fetish.
2. Nobility doesn't care. They fuck for heirs, not love.
>>47861108
I don't think people ever save those.
>>47860566
Eh, I'm in a mood, so why not.
>Succubus +2
>Chaste +2
>Compound Arousal +1
>Brings me to (20)
>Double Size, X2, X4, X8, X16 (15)
>Sex Change and Partial (13)
>Basic, Enhanced Shapeshifting, Animal Ears, Age Change (9)
>Lust Vision +, Pleasure Link (6)
>Immunity, Stamina, Mass Fluid, Alt. Fluid (2)
>Sexy Recharge (Free)
>Passive Recharge and Upgrade (0)
Party time.
>>47861424
What? Is English your first language?
I mentioned nothing about my girlfriend in that post. Are you literally that angry that you're imagining me saying things, now? I'm a little confounded now, man. Please help me understand what you're trying to say, I'm getting a little scared for you.
>>47861437
Look, anon, I'm a gay guy so I honestly don't give a rats ass about that loli bride unless you're including her brother in there too. Considering most anons here are straight, it seems logical to make her a lesbian if you want to fuck them over.
For the record, my fetish isdominating and humiliating large, muscular men. The more adorable and innocent they are, the better.
